CrestRising wrote:

Hi there. From my queue.
* = A bit more stressed than others.

[Easy:]

• 
  * 00:26:938 (2,3) Imo, I think it would sound better if it was (circle-slider) instead of (slider-circle). Hmm yep, but I want to keep the symmetry also...
  00:32:149 (2,3,1,2) If you're following the above, I think you should merge 2,3 into one slider and 1,2 into one slider to keep a symmetrical rhythm.
  00:52:043 (3,4) Just a thought, in places like these, I think it might be better if you shorten these sliders by a 1/2 beat and add claps at the end. imo it'll be too hard for Easy o.o (it's 190 BPM though)
  01:27:096 (2,3) You could merge these into one slider to keep a symmetrical rhythm with the first part of this chorus. Hmm, changed into slider but not for symmetrical rhythm~

[Normal:]

• 
  Just in general, I think a 4.48 difficulty rating for a Normal is a bit too high. Maybe decrease the circle size by 1?
  00:57:096 (2) Maybe you could take the repeat off of this slider. It doesn't really seem too necessary. Oh great suggestion, fixed~
  Didn't find anything too wrong in this difficulty.

[Insane:]

• 
  01:04:438 (1) Seems like an odd spinner to me. You could continue the pattern from 2,3 and 4,5 instead. Umm actually I want to emphasize the 01:05:622 (1) here, that's why I aded spinner...

Sorry for the small mod. Good luck with mapping.

Xinely wrote:

Hi Niva~

udh terlalu bagus QAQ
all of my mod just suggestion

[Easy]
00:13:675 (2,3,4) - diganti reverse slider aja? kyk 00:12:254 (1) - XD Reverse slider itu supaya player kebiasa sama rhythm 3/4-nya sih ._.
00:32:149 (2,3,1,2) - di ganti gni aja? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/540609 Umm, bagian ini kan bukan 1/1 o.o
01:17:622 (3,4) - diganti slider aja? circle di tick merah agak susah buat newbie >_< ...ini juga karena bagian ini 3/4, uhm memang ini bukan lagu yang mudah di-map Easy-nya sih o.o
01:24:254 (1) - ksh finish di kepala slider nya? Nice catch~

[Normal]
keren <3
tp lbh menjurus ke Normal+ imo .__.

[Insane]
01:01:201 - bgian sini di isi note aja biar dpet vocalnya, saran sih note yang 01:01:438 - dipindah ke 01:01:201 - ...done, gw masih kurang puas sama patternnya btw
Awesome O.O
but maybe this is extra *slapped*

sorry for suck mod orz
star for you niv~

1. 00:52:043 (3)
2. 00:55:833 (3)
3. 00:59:622 (3)
4. 01:13:833 (2)

• 
  Clear! ♥

1. 01:06:254 (1) - Too far from spinner center! Beginners will probably start this slider from the end, so it's quite confusing for them. If it's possible make slider's start closer to slider start.
2. 01:15:728 (4) - Overlapped with HP-bar. Not a big problem, but I'd recommend you to fix it!
3. 01:35:622 (6) - I'd put NC here, so, we will point out start of new section!

1. 00:07:517 (1,1) - I understand why it's here, but I still think that regular stack or complete unstack could be better here! Also it's easier to understand for Normal players.
2. 00:52:833 (6,1) - a bit overlapped with HP-bar! So two grids down to make it perfect!
3. 01:09:570 - hm.. it sounds like there's missed circle with clap (whistle) hitsound!
4. 01:23:307 (1) - hm.. this spinner is too short, for [Normal] diff! BPM is quite fast :< so.. it can be a bit too soon after spinner!
5. 01:27:412 (4) - reverse arrow should be clearly visible, but this one is a bit overlapped with accuracy (4:3 screen)

1. Why not Hard? :V Niva wants to make E/N/H/I mapset.
2. 01:08:622 (4) - I'd try to separate it from (1,2,3) because they're different! So, i'd try to separate (4) >3</
   
   Cute antijumps!

• 
  looks good!

Wiinter wrote:

Hi!

[Easy]
00:11:307 (2) - mm this is really just a suggestion but imo this would look nicer if you placed it here instead Umm that's for pattern variation actually... Fixed the symmetry though
so.. there were a few sliders that I think would should better 1/2 shorter. here's a little list of them: This rhythm is carried over from the original Ververg xD

1. 00:52:043 (3)
2. 00:55:833 (3)
3. 00:59:622 (3)
4. 01:13:833 (2)

[Normal]
00:57:096 (2) - add a repeat here? Oh, this is from previous mod post

gahh, such a poor mod, sorry about this. ._.' I'll make sure to recheck this some other time (remind me if I forget to, please). For now, all I can say is that and mention the much I like both mapper's styles and the hitcircle used here. Have a star~

-Bakari- wrote:

hi-hi~

[General]

• 
  Clear! ♥

[Easy]

1. 01:06:254 (1) - Too far from spinner center! Beginners will probably start this slider from the end, so it's quite confusing for them. If it's possible make slider's start closer to slider start. I've placed note even further on this map actually :3
2. 01:15:728 (4) - Overlapped with HP-bar. Not a big problem, but I'd recommend you to fix it! Sharpened the curve, should be less overlapped now
3. 01:35:622 (6) - I'd put NC here, so, we will point out start of new section! Hmm why not, also removed the NC from the next spinner

[Normal]

1. 00:07:517 (1,1) - I understand why it's here, but I still think that regular stack or complete unstack could be better here! Also it's easier to understand for Normal players. Umm, because I personally like manual-stacking xD (made it closer though)
2. 00:52:833 (6,1) - a bit overlapped with HP-bar! So two grids down to make it perfect! Okay...
3. 01:09:570 - hm.. it sounds like there's missed circle with clap (whistle) hitsound! No, it's intentional~
4. 01:23:307 (1) - hm.. this spinner is too short, for [Normal] diff! BPM is quite fast :< so.. it can be a bit too soon after spinner! ...actually in the ranked Ververg I've done this spinner ._.
5. 01:27:412 (4) - reverse arrow should be clearly visible, but this one is a bit overlapped with accuracy (4:3 screen) Yep I know, I'm always using 4:3 for my osu! and it's still readable imo xD

[Insane]

• 
  looks good!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
orz

Good map! I'd star, but I reeeeeeeally don't like song, sorry! >3<

Philippines wrote:

omg, can i do Insane or Hard? <3

1. 01:07:675 (3) - two point (y:341) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IRQW (red point slip)
2. 01:28:043 (1) - move (x:189 y:188)? because 01:25:833 (3) - stacking o.o more beautiful.
3. 01:31:833 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - all select move (x:5 y:328)? so, perfect stacking. http://puu.sh/1IRVg
4. 01:41:307 (4) - Add NC ?
5. 01:40:359 (2) - two point (y:336) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IRYr (red point slip)

1. 00:07:517 (1,1) - you dislike perfect stack? or my suggesiton 1.20 DS better ._.
2. 00:14:149 (1) - two point (y:301) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IS3f (red point slip)
3. 00:16:043 (1) - (x:382 y:86) so, (2) y:162 -(38) = (4) y:124 -(38) =(1) y:86. Y-axis of the parallel beautiful.
4. 00:22:201 (2) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:157) better.
5. 00:57:728 (1) - spacing. (x224 y:110) good.
6. 01:16:675 (1) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:38) better.
7. 01:18:570 (1) - spacing little far. (x296 y260) is better. so, DS1.20 and beautiful looks.

1. 00:15:254 (8,1) - let's perfect stacking? example 00:34:201 (2,3)
2. 00:19:833 (1,3,5) - start place is perfect stacking better? so little slip.
3. 00:34:675 (4,1) - start place is perfect stacking? so little slip.
4. 00:36:412 (2) - (x:394 y:150) better.
5. 01:11:464 (2) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:166) better.
6. 01:18:096 (5) - slider head and tail add clap? i think fit ;.;
7. 01:28:517 (2) - tail point is (y:206) better. so straight.

1. 00:09:096 (3,4,5) - spacing is confused ._.
2. 00:10:991 (3,4,5) - ^

P o M u T a wrote:

hi ._.

[Easy] Fixed all, nice catches o.o

1. 01:07:675 (3) - two point (y:341) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IRQW (red point slip)
2. 01:28:043 (1) - move (x:189 y:188)? because 01:25:833 (3) - stacking o.o more beautiful.
3. 01:31:833 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - all select move (x:5 y:328)? so, perfect stacking. http://puu.sh/1IRVg
4. 01:41:307 (4) - Add NC ?
5. 01:40:359 (2) - two point (y:336) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IRYr (red point slip)

[Normal]

1. 00:07:517 (1,1) - you dislike perfect stack? or my suggesiton 1.20 DS better ._. Oh... Yes it's intentional
2. 00:14:149 (1) - two point (y:301) better. so straight line. http://puu.sh/1IS3f (red point slip)
3. 00:16:043 (1) - (x:382 y:86) so, (2) y:162 -(38) = (4) y:124 -(38) =(1) y:86. Y-axis of the parallel beautiful.
4. 00:22:201 (2) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:157) better. Fixed these three
5. 00:57:728 (1) - spacing. (x224 y:110) good. Oh... Yep again this small jump is intentional (:
6. 01:16:675 (1) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:38) better. Fixed
7. 01:18:570 (1) - spacing little far. (x296 y260) is better. so, DS1.20 and beautiful looks. Umm yep again this is intentional, it's not hard to catch + I prefer perfect blanket here xD

[Insane]

1. 00:15:254 (8,1) - let's perfect stacking? example 00:34:201 (2,3) Oh my bad, fixed~
2. 00:19:833 (1,3,5) - start place is perfect stacking better? so little slip. umm too lazy on this one, it's not easily noticeable anyway xD
3. 00:34:675 (4,1) - start place is perfect stacking? so little slip.
4. 00:36:412 (2) - (x:394 y:150) better.
5. 01:11:464 (2) - straight line plz.so little slip final point. final point is (y:166) better. Done these three
6. 01:18:096 (5) - slider head and tail add clap? i think fit ;.; Added but on repeat + end instead~
7. 01:28:517 (2) - tail point is (y:206) better. so straight. Fixed

Awoken wrote:

Need MP3 with better quality

P o M u T a wrote:

Awoken wrote:

Need MP3 with better quality

l think fine quality

jaehn215 wrote:

Hello

Easy

01:27:096 (2) - remove reverse slider and add note 01:27:728 Err can't find a good arrangement for this...

01:29:938 (3) - change slider (same to 01:30:886 (4) ) Umm, it's intentional o.o

Normal

00:57:570 (3) - add note Oh, fixed
ex)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/555212

Insane

00:36:570 (3,4) - look so bad.. Oh it is accelerated spacing~

I like Cytus~

star~~

1. Looks good to me.

• - 01:03:412 (1) - nazi* Put this note in x:257, y:357, looks nice
  - 01:29:938 (3) - This slider is touching a liitle the offscreen in my opinion, maybe move up?
  - 01:32:149 (2) - Same ^

• - 01:41:307 (3) - New combo here to keep your combo pattern

• -- Hmm in my opinion you should rename this difficulty to "Hard" to keep the consistency with the other difficulties (E,N,H,I)

• -- Circle Size 5? Nah, I would like to see if you reduce one tick
  - 00:36:728 (4) - The other notes (1,2,3) have the same spacing in my opinion, why you make this note with the same spacing too?

MoodyRPG wrote:

Oh hi there.

General

1. Looks good to me.

Easy

• - 01:03:412 (1) - nazi* Put this note in x:257, y:357, looks nice Oh I get your point, not really placed in ~x:257 y:357 but moved to the center xD
  - 01:29:938 (3) - This slider is touching a liitle the offscreen in my opinion, maybe move up?
  - 01:32:149 (2) - Same ^ Oh, tested both, not offscreen in play mode though~

Normal

• - 01:41:307 (3) - New combo here to keep your combo pattern Yep

Hyper

• -- Hmm in my opinion you should rename this difficulty to "Hard" to keep the consistency with the other difficulties (E,N,H,I) Umm it's a Hard diff, I let spboxer3 to let his own diff named by himself, and he named it Hyper :3

Insane

• -- Circle Size 5? Nah, I would like to see if you reduce one tick This CS is intentional :3
  - 00:36:728 (4) - The other notes (1,2,3) have the same spacing in my opinion, why you make this note with the same spacing too? It's accelerated spacing... Moved (3) more to the right though, I hope it's clearer now~

Lol nice map you got Niva, good luck ^_^

1. 01:11:461 (4) and other notes - move to right? cause 01:14:777 (3,4) - are really too close to corner, look bad while playing :<
2. 01:24:251 - unsnapped kiai
3. 01:35:619 - unsnapped kiai end
4. 01:37:514 - ^
5. 01:41:304 - ^ >:O
6. 01:27:093 (2) - unsnapped slider end
7. 01:40:356 (3) - ^

1. 00:08:461 (1) - I clicked 1/2 after 00:07:514 (1) - D: maybe move some grids right or me just baka (like manual stacking xD)
2. 00:34:988 (1,2) - agaaain, clicked 1/2. Okay, just my newbie-skill D:
3. 00:56:777 (1,2,3) - make 3 circles as 00:52:988 (1,2,3) - ? To follow rhythm. Or change 00:52:988 (1,2,3) -
4. 01:00:567 (1,2,3) - ^

1. Maybe rename to Hard? Cause the map has Insane, Easy and Normal (not Another etc.)
2. 00:07:514 (1,2,3) - add whistles?
3. 00:09:093 (3) - maybe move it so that 00:08:777 (2) - won't touch it?
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:14:146 (1) - I like how it looks, but don't like how 00:13:672 (4) - overlaps the the hitcircle of it :< Maybe rearrange?
5. 00:19:830 (1) - normal finish?
6. 00:24:093 (2) - as 00:14:146 (1) -
7. 00:25:041 (4) - oh, it's your style... but still
8. 00:49:198 (3,4,5) - I think that whistles in the end of this sliders are awful, maybe remove them? >_<
9. 00:57:251 (8) - you forgot normal hitsound on beginning
10. 00:49:514 (4) - unsnapped slider end
11. 00:49:830 (5) - ^

• Clear!

Reiji-RJ wrote:

VERVEEEERG <3
Hi, Niva! Hi Reiji~ Sorry for late reply :3

Easy

1. 01:11:461 (4) and other notes - move to right? cause 01:14:777 (3,4) - are really too close to corner, look bad while playing :< Moved from 01:12:883 (1) instead, done~
2. 01:24:251 - unsnapped kiai
3. 01:35:619 - unsnapped kiai end
4. 01:37:514 - ^
5. 01:41:304 - ^ >:O
6. 01:27:093 (2) - unsnapped slider end
7. 01:40:356 (3) - ^
   All fixed :3

Normal

1. 00:08:461 (1) - I clicked 1/2 after 00:07:514 (1) - D: maybe move some grids right or me just baka (like manual stacking xD) o.o? I learned manual stacking from you/IceBeam actually...
2. 00:34:988 (1,2) - agaaain, clicked 1/2. Okay, just my newbie-skill D: xD
3. 00:56:777 (1,2,3) - make 3 circles as 00:52:988 (1,2,3) - ? To follow rhythm. Or change 00:52:988 (1,2,3) -
4. 01:00:567 (1,2,3) - ^ Oh, this is an exception actually, I got this rhythm from previous mod posts

Hyper

1. Maybe rename to Hard? Cause the map has Insane, Easy and Normal (not Another etc.) spboxer3 sends his diff name with Hyper :3
   (spboxer3 send me his fixes via forum PM to me)

Insane

• Clear!

Awesome map! Hope, I was helpful
Good luck *^*

Leorda wrote:

Hey there

[Easy]
00:20:777 (1) - Shorten to red tick for following beats? Like 00:22:672 (1)?
00:21:725 (2) - ^ It's following the vocals though (:
00:36:883 (1,2,3) - For better flow, make a pattern like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593334 I can't rearrange without breaking the next (1,2,3,4,5)'s pattern orz...
01:15:725 (4) - Use normal sampleset for repeating slider. It just my feeling, though Hmm, I understand you meant to emphasize this part more, however I don't hear the normal beat landing here... Removed whistle on (1) instead, should be better now~
01:38:146 - Add note here? Oh nice suggestion, fixed


[Normal]
00:36:883 (1,2) - This note is almost offscreen, BTW. Can you move up a little a bit? I'm aware of this, and it's not offscreen in play mode though...
01:23:304 (1) - As my feeling, this spinner is bit short. So, can you extend it a bit or replace with a slider? This spinner is same as the ranked Ververg >_<
01:41:304 (1) - Remove whistle? Like on Easy diff? Oh nice catch, I added the whistle on Easy though (instead of removing this xD)


[Insane]
00:21:725 (5) - Add new combo for following your combo pattern? Sure
00:23:304 - Add note here and place at X:208 and Y:336 for better flow and better rhythm?
00:27:093 - Add note here and place at X:256 and Y:148 for better flow and better rhythm?
These two are intentional, it's copy-pasted jump...
01:10:672 (6) - Since the jump are acutally vertical, make a slider like this for better flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/593371 I don't really like that overlap, but moved (6) a bit upward~


Good luck~

1. offset might be better if it's 886.
2. 01:16:675 i think this part,you should make the volume getting higher.like this,and then the kiai part,let it go back to 75% because it's on the normal volume.
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:15:096 (5) - i think there's a beat at the middle of the slider,that quite easy to hear,why don't you make a repeating slider?
2. 00:22:675 (1) - Try to evade from making an overlap on the easiest diff,it's confusing for some new player.
3. 00:38:780 (1) - why don't you make it like this? blanket that far circle x3
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:728 (1) - same as 00:22:675 (1)
5. 01:10:043 (2) - ^
6. 01:25:201 (2) - ^

1. 00:08:461 (1) - so early for anti-spacing.make it as a normal spacing? for normal having this kind of spacing quite confusing,even for me.
2. 00:32:146 (3) - the third grid,go left by one,to make it flow better with the next slider.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:52:830 (6,1) - lower this down? really close to touching the hp bar.even the approach circle is blocked by the hp bar.
4. 01:01:514 (1) - ^
5. 01:34:198 - add a note here.feels empty and this part got a vocal.

1. 00:16:988 (3) - make this one as a kawaii blanket please spboxer3 :3
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:21:251 (4) - go left by one? don't get it collide with the slider.
3. 00:27:409 (2) - can be a good blanket!
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:49:198 (3,4,5) - this one i see that you're using the drums hitsounds but idk why i think this one can become a variation of hitsounds.like what I did is.
   1st slider = no hitsounds on the starting,put clap at the tail
   2nd slider = put clap at the starting,no hitsounds at the tail
   3rd slider = put clap on both starting and tail.
5. 01:39:883 (2) - be a kawaii blanket!
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:07:514 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure whether I've got an eye problem or what,I didn't think this is straight.
2. 00:12:251 (1) - try think of other shape? this one looks kinda ugly but it still cool :p

HeatKai wrote:

[General]

1. offset might be better if it's 886. Err idk surely, +3 will do I think o.o
2. 01:16:675 i think this part,you should make the volume getting higher.like this,and then the kiai part,let it go back to 75% because it's on the normal volume. Oh, great suggestion (I used different volume though~)
   
   SPOILER

   

[Easy]

AiBAT found this.
Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
00:07:835 - snap to 00:07:830
00:08:151 - snap to 00:08:146
00:08:309 - snap to 00:08:304
01:05:309 - snap to 01:05:304

Done all

1. 00:15:096 (5) - i think there's a beat at the middle of the slider,that quite easy to hear,why don't you make a repeating slider? Changed to slider + circle + circle instead~
2. 00:22:675 (1) - Try to evade from making an overlap on the easiest diff,it's confusing for some new player. o.o? I think this one was inspired by sp3's slider shape >_<
3. 00:38:780 (1) - why don't you make it like this? blanket that far circle x3 Umm my current shape feels more solid personally...
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:57:728 (1) - same as 00:22:675 (1)
5. 01:10:043 (2) - ^
6. 01:25:201 (2) - ^ Ah... Don't wanna change these three as well though (same reason :3)

I don't have anything to say about the hitsounds,because it's perfect!

[Normal]

1. 00:08:461 (1) - so early for anti-spacing.make it as a normal spacing? for normal having this kind of spacing quite confusing,even for me. aaaa I loved that one >_<
2. 00:32:146 (3) - the third grid,go left by one,to make it flow better with the next slider. Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:52:830 (6,1) - lower this down? really close to touching the hp bar.even the approach circle is blocked by the hp bar.
4. 01:01:514 (1) - ^ Done the first, but I want to keep the second as is personally...
5. 01:34:198 - add a note here.feels empty and this part got a vocal. Oh, I think 1/1 like this is better because previous 01:32:149 (2) was also 1/1...

[Insane]

1. 00:07:514 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure whether I've got an eye problem or what,I didn't think this is straight. Readjusted (1), should be good now~
2. 00:12:251 (1) - try think of other shape? this one looks kinda ugly but it still cool :p a... I liked that one personally >_<

Niva's mapping always leave a good impression ;w; with his star pattern and anti jump x3 great diff! love it.

Leorda bubble this! lol xD

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi hi moe Niva :3

[Insane]

00:49:988 - hm I think triple here sounds good~ Oh, idk, I don't really hear something there... I rearranged the square a bit though~
01:19:909 - add note here~ For me it's sound more rhythmically Oh this is brilliant orz, added xD
01:35:698 - add NC on spin Intentional (:

[Normal]


01:35:777 - add NC on spin Intentional :3
00:36:883 (1,2) - hm It's a little uncomfortable to play~ Maybe you up it a bit? Done, I can't move it too much though
01:17:146(2) - start slider will be touch score~ It's not good, put it down a bit
01:27:409(4) - ^ same Oh, idk where else to put it o.o

[Easy]

Unsnaped green sections:
00:07:835
00:08:151
00:08:309
01:05:309 Fixed through HeatKai's mod xD

01:34:356 - hm I think 5 notes for easy it a bit hard for beginners~ maybe remove note 1 and start spin here? http://puu.sh/2407A I think It wil be easy to play :3 I want the pentagon personally...
01:35:619 - add nc on spin Oh, it's intentional
01:38:146 (1,2) - I recommend unstack it, bcz stack note with slider on 1/1 with bpm 190 it's a bit fast and will confused beginners Sure~

It's all for me :3 Yeaaahh you know, I already want see it ranked <3 Good luck)

Frostmourne wrote:

hi

General
why does Hyper belong here ? It's suitable to be named "Hard" rather than Hyper because the whole map set , You didn't use the format "Beginner , Hyper , Another" like IIDX stuffs and your previous version uses normal format "Easy Normal Hard" Umm I know, when I asked sp3 to make Hard I let he choose his own diff name and he chose Hyper as his diff name~

Easy
00:48:728 (4) - clap here as you did at 00:41:149 (4) - Done
01:31:833 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1) - just my opinion but this is an Easy and is almost the end of the song. I would suggest you to remove some notes from this because they are quite crowded as are. I know it follows really well so maybe you will consider using some sliders instead of 1/2 constant notes here Changed the second one, about the first one I think 01:30:886 (4,1,2,3,4)'s arc is already good as is (adding slider will look weird imo ._.)

Normal
00:57:570 (3) - feel a bit empty , adding some hitsound here ? Done (clap)

Insane
01:19:833 (6,7,8) - this stream is unexpected , as you have mapped without 1/4 for the whole map and it starts on the white tick. I suggest you put (2) and (3) on the same position as (1) (perfect stacking) , at least , it reads easier that this (I thought it would be 1/2 with that spacing but no) Umm, I think you meant (7,8) here, not (2,3)... I liked the manual stack here personally (it keeps the symmetry in play mode though), I've given this bigger spacing - I think it should be more readable now (just tell me if it doesn't work though >_<)

Frostmourne wrote:

Hyper
00:19:833 (1) - finish head? as it starts new phrase , it fits rather than without this here k
00:26:780 (8,1) - this flow is quite bad , I would say because from this slider velocity and the direction of (8)
it looks like the (1) should be 1/2 back but it isn't
if I were you , I would stack (1) on 00:27:412 (2) - , at least , the cursor doesn't go perfect straight to the (1) from (8) -> under the 00:26:780 (8) - slider end, I want follow the hitsound and used slider at 00:27:412 (2) - , it can make pattern (thought it's a jump) easy to play.
00:31:043 (6,1) - quite the same but I can agree this plays better because I knew logic from the above before so this is more predictable
anyways, I still suggest you place (1) on 00:31:675 (2) - like the previous if you fixed the above because of consistency ->sorry, I keep this pattern
00:56:780 (7) - finish with drum sampleset on the first point only like this tail ? 00:53:307 (4) - k
01:12:411 (4) - unsnapped fixed

let me know once you applied

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Frostmourne wrote:

ok!

1. 00:18:886 (4) - i think the position of this reverse arrow is not good if players use 4:3 resolution for playing
   
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2. 00:45:096 (3) - also touch the boundary of frame
3. 00:57:728 (1) - ^

Garven wrote:

Um. You don't need to judge what you see when observing someone. Just what you see while playing.

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