1. has three mp3 files. you must remove two.
2. remove "hitcircleselect.png". its image does not need on beatmap.
3. You must add "approachcircle.png". "hitcircle.png", "hitcircleoverlay.png" and "approachcircle.png" should be set.

NewRulerNA wrote:

hi
found issues. you must fix those.

[General]

1. has three mp3 files. you must remove two. -_- No idea how this happenned, I was pretty sure I removed those from the folder before updating. Fixed
2. remove "hitcircleselect.png". its image does not need on beatmap.ok
3. You must add "approachcircle.png". "hitcircle.png", "hitcircleoverlay.png" and "approachcircle.png" should be set.ok

Natsu wrote:

From my Queue~ this maps is so good Thank you

Missing Skin Files
approachcircle.png ok
reversearrow.png Do I really have to or is this suggestion? I think the standard arrow is fine so if it's ok I dont want to override this

Try to reduce vol of hitsounds since sound bad so highly imo ok, I'm gonna change this

and slider tick sound ugly try to use this:
http://puu.sh/1QXYA thx for the suggestion and link, will consider when changing volume settings

Garven wrote:

Try this

1. Offset: 18,139ms BPM: 183.00
2. Offset: 22,581ms BPM: 168.00
3. Offset: 72,940ms BPM: 148.00
4. Offset: 76,767ms BPM: 204.00
5. Offset: 89,070ms BPM: 200.00
6. Offset: 90,870ms BPM: 210.00
7. Offset: 92,571ms BPM: 192.50
8. Offset: 94,647ms BPM: 183.00
10. Offset: 103,036ms BPM: 168.00

Really weird timing >_> Some of it I'm still not really sure on, but this got much better accuracy for the majority of the map.

Soaprman wrote:

You don't need a custom reversearrow. The reason the circle parts are insisted upon is that having some but not all would clash pretty badly with some skins. Same thing goes for HP bar elements if you ever use custom ones. Those things are in the rules because it's the most visible place to put things like this that are so easy to overlook. Ok, so I've got all the files I need ^^

Note: I started hitsound modding, but decided it'd take a while and isn't worth including unless it's asked for. If you want to talk hitsounds, PM me on forum or ingame and if I have time, I'll help out. What you have now is plenty serviceable though. Well I'm never against an advice but it's probably not the part that needs more improvement

Same goes for timing. It's late. I don't have the attention span to fine-tune timing. I could maybe help on a weekend when I'm well-rested though. This is a more important issue, what version have you been playing? Did you re-download today? I just changed timing after Garven's post who made the timing much more refined that it was (with three more offsets and BPMs). If you've been playing on the latest version and you think you can still help improve timing, I will be very grateful

[General]
The video offset is about a second too early. Change it to 2101ms. It'll make the video start a bit after the song but it also makes the dance coincide with the music like it does in the game. Watch Squall's leg at 01:16:767 to see what I mean. thx, fixed

Not a big fan of the combobursts. The art styles on the pics really clash with the bg pic and video. I actually think skinning out the combobursts looks pretty nice on here, because you still get the stars and light flash. If you want to try it, here's a transparent 1x1 png to use: http://puu.sh/1Rm6y I get what you mean that i clashes a bit but I don't understand the second part -_- mm I ll try to change maybe, but I don't think it's that bad

Think you could find an mp3 with a bit more fadeout? It sounds kind of abrupt here, when this is the kind of song/video pair that's asking for a good fadeout. If you want, maybe even quieten the part of the mp3 a little bit here since it's after the dance and they're standing outside. It would be a nice touch.I already changed the mp3, first one was really crappy xD, I have a hard time finding a better one and I'm not the best with audio editors but I'll keep searchin for a better one

[Easy]
01:16:767 (1) - Kiai section - I know it's Easy but this part needs more motion. This is the big dance. This is where Squall gets his shit together and tears up the dance floor. Try using sliders for this whole kiai section. I felt there was smth wrong but I couldnt put the finger on it, definitely feels better with more sliders here. Changed

[Normal]
01:16:767 (1) - Kiai section - same as in Easy. I'd even recommend increasing the slider velocity some in this difficulty, maybe to 1.25 or so. You can do this by placing inherited (green) sections with the slider speed change on the same offsets as the red ones that have kiai markers. This will give it more feeling without pushing the challenge too much. good idea, changed

01:43:036 (1) - Nothing wrong here, but it seems a bit emphasized for the outro. Maybe move some sliders closer to the edges of the screen. hmm I think it's ok, I've considered not mapping this at all, but the map is short that it would be a shame to not map this

[Hard]
01:09:009 (2,3,4) - Try making these into a short slider that bounces back on 3. Makes it feel a little "quieter". Just simple like this will do:

SPOILER

changed

01:16:767 (1) - Kiai section - same as in Normal (including slider speed boost). Maybe put a bit of a jump between some sliders (I can illustrate this in more detail if you'd like). changed too

01:28:825 (1,2,3) - Even though the spacing is "correct", this looks more ilke a spacing error while playing than a deliberate notice of a timing change. Change 1-2 to a slider to cover this up; this should also make it easier for the player to notice 3's approach circle. yeah spacing was wrong, fixed

[ok that's enough for now]
I've been typing this post off and on for like two hours. It doesn't help that I tend to write paragraphs in my mod posts... Maybe I should post what's here and let you sort it out. Let me know if anything doesn't make sense or if you need help doing anything I suggested!

grumd wrote:

Timing check.

Stuff like 00:33:295 (5,6,7) - sounds a bit off, but it's not the timing fault. Just the instruments sometimes don't follow the metronome well. Right timing later, for example, at 00:35:616 (1,2,3,4) - proofs it. Yeah, I had placed 00:37:223 (1,2,3,4,5) using 1/12 snap divisor when first mapping the song
This doesn't need to be changed since the timing is quite static here.

Doubles in kiai like 01:17:208 (2,3) - are a bit early placed. Well, that's again not a timing fault because stuff earlier and later sound fine. Look at 01:22:943 (1) - 01:20:296 (2) - 01:18:531 (4) - they all are fine. Still, all these doubles sound better if placed 1/6 later. I mean, 01:17:208 (2,3) - 01:18:972 (5,6) - 01:24:266 (2,3) - should be probably moved 1/6 forward. Still, the most precise fix for me is to move first note 1/6 later and second note 1/12 later, but that is kinda too much... 1/6 everywhere could be enough. Ask someone else about these doubles for a double-check. I had originally snapped these double using 1/3 snap divisor, so basically placing them 1/6 later as you suggest, because a lot of notes are placed on 1/3 beats during this moment, but the music sheet says they should be on 1/2 beats so I changed it. Gonna do more testing with this :/

Also, while I'm here, I have to say that 01:28:825 (1,2,3) - is too hard to read. Replace last two circles with a single slider.
You should add more sliders generally. As well as here: 01:30:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) -
Timing changes are unexpectable, so placing sliders to make it clear is a good idea. Ok

Also this one: 01:31:417 (3) - should probably be moved 1/12 earlier... Timing is fine again because next note is on-spot, but this one is a bit off.

Overall: timing is perfect, but some notes in the music do not follow the metronome good enough. It can be fixed by finding proper beat snapping, like moving 1/12 later or earlier, but that is sometimes not a good solution. 1/12 snapped notes are hard to play, so using a static beat snapping is always better. Still, there are some ways to make the timing good and not to hurt the gameplay. You may try it, for example here:
01:30:870 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Here, I did suggest to move first (3) note 1/12 earlier. Also I said that it's a good idea to add sliders. So, if you don't want to make gameplay harder and want to still follow the music perfectly, you can place tricky notes on slider ends. Player doesn't need to press anything on slider ends, so that doesn't hurt gameplay. Try this here:

grumd wrote:

Actually, placing few notes on a 1/12 and adding another red lines for the sake of 1/4 is the same.
As I already said, the best way for such tricky notes is to cover them by sliders, that makes it more readable. Extra timing sections are not needed, timing is perfect.

SuperMoutarde wrote:

01:31:417 (3) should definitely be smth like 1/12 earlier but I feel like 01:31:012 (2) as well as 01:31:870 (2) are a bit off too. Maybe this timing section is not perfect? Anyway I changed to what you suggested with the sliders

grumd wrote:

SuperMoutarde wrote:

01:31:417 (3) should definitely be smth like 1/12 earlier but I feel like 01:31:012 (2) as well as 01:31:870 (2) are a bit off too. Maybe this timing section is not perfect? Anyway I changed to what you suggested with the sliders

Timing is fine since 01:30:870 (1) - and 01:31:727 (1) - sound on-spot. It's just the song being untimeable and non-rhythmic... You can do nothing about it, in any way it would be poorly playable.

SuperMoutarde wrote:

01:16:767 (1) - Kiai section - I know it's Easy but this part needs more motion. This is the big dance. This is where Squall gets his shit together and tears up the dance floor. Try using sliders for this whole kiai section. I felt there was smth wrong but I couldnt put the finger on it, definitely feels better with more sliders here. Changed

Soaprman wrote:

Alright, quick recheck.

You still need to change the video offset to 2101ms. Remember to do this in all difficulties.

This, I actually forgot -_- my bad

SuperMoutarde wrote:

01:16:767 (1) - Kiai section - I know it's Easy but this part needs more motion. This is the big dance. This is where Squall gets his shit together and tears up the dance floor. Try using sliders for this whole kiai section. I felt there was smth wrong but I couldnt put the finger on it, definitely feels better with more sliders here. Changed
It doesn't look like you actually changed anything here... same goes for the other difficulties. Not sure if you forgot or decided not to after all, but I still think you should. This is such a great slider song... don't settle for circles!

I uploaded a new version with the kai times patterns unchanged but I still intend to remap as you recommended. Didn't have time to do it well enough yet, when I tried patterns were shitty so I need time to do this well especially since I intend to change it in all three diff as you suggested with more slider speed.

The actual song timing seems about spot-on to me. Even when I set it to OD10, I do pretty well. What you have now is probably about the best you're gonna get.

ok, thank you, I fail at streams too much myself so I never know if my bad accuracy is because of bad play or wrong timings so this kind of feedback is really helpful ^^

Other than this stuff, though, the mapset seems rock-solid to me. Good work!

Yay, thanks!

Betsuto wrote:

Sorry fot late > <"

here !
[Hard]
00:20:106 (8) - add Whistle added
00:20:761 (2) - ^^ ? hmm no
01:28:678 (1,2) - Please fix your beat what's wrong with it? Timing gets a bit funky in this part so I understand your confusion, but this is correctly placed
01:31:012 (2) - add Whistle I assume you meant on the end of it, sounds good, added
01:31:870 (2) - ^^^
01:33:194 (1) - ^^ hmm not this one
01:33:506 (1) - add Finish ? no the music is going all quiet, a fat loud finish would break the poetry xD

[Normal]
Perfect ! thanks

[Easy]
I think ...
It's too hard for Beginning ...
Please take it easy ! You really think so? 1,77 stars, tell me what particular combos/parts you think too hard cauz i don't see it

Your map is good !
<3 Standart

Go for rank !!!!! Good luck

pife1 wrote:

Hi I am not a expert, I am only begining, but here we go.

[Hard]
01:18:237 (1,2,3,4) I think they need to be closer

SuperMoutarde wrote:

pife1 wrote:

Hi I am not a expert, I am only begining, but here we go.

[Hard]
01:18:237 (1,2,3,4) I think they need to be closer

No they don't? this part uses consistent 1.0 dist snap, don't see why I would change these oO

Faust wrote:

Hello.

Timing:

SPOILER

183.00 BPM - 18,139
51.252 BPM - 21,417
168.00 BPM - 22,581
167.50 BPM - 71,866
148.00 BPM - 72,940
109.00 BPM - 76,183
124.00 BPM - 76,377
204,00 BPM - 77,363
204.25 BPM - 82,951
209.00 BPM - 87,357
203.00 BPM - 89,079
205.00 BPM - 90,852
202.00 BPM - 91,876
120.00 BPM - 92,321
192.50 BPM - 92,571
105.25 BPM - 93,506
183.00 BPM - 94,646
102.00 BPM - 101,859
168.00 BPM - 103,035

Yup.

1. OD-1 is better. this song is many BPM changes so difficulty.
   　
2. 00:45:884 - add note. i can hear sound here.
   
   
   　
   Hit sound
3. 00:22:581 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
   　
4. 00:23:652 (3) - ^
   　
5. 00:25:080 (2) - add whistle
   　
6. 00:26:152 (2) - ^
   　
7. 00:26:866 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
   　
8. 00:27:580 (3) - add whistle
   　
9. 00:27:938 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
   　
10. 00:29:366 (3,4) - add whistle
    　
11. 00:31:152 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
12. 00:31:688 (2) - add whistle of repeat point.
    　
13. 00:32:223 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
14. 00:33:652 (7) - add whistle of slider start.
    　
15. 00:34:545 (1,2,3) - add whistle of slider start.
    　
16. 00:40:080 (2) - ^
    　
17. 00:40:438 (3) - add whistle
    　
18. 00:41:509 (1) - ^
    　
19. 00:42:580 (2) - ^
    　
20. 00:43:652 (2) - ^
    　
21. 00:44:723 (2) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
22. 00:49:723 (4,6) - add whistle
    　
23. 00:50:438 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
24. 00:50:973 (2) - add whistle of repeat point.
    　
25. 00:51:509 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
26. 00:52:938 (7) - ^
    　
27. 00:55:438 (4) - add whistle
    　
28. 00:57:223 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
    　
29. 00:58:295 (6) - ^
    　
30. 00:58:652 (7) - add whistle
    　
31. 00:59:366 (2) - ^
    　
32. 00:59:723 (4) - add whistle of slider start.
    　
33. 01:00:795 (1) - ^
    　
34. 01:01:509 (3,4) - ^
    　
35. 01:02:938 (1) - add whistle
    　
36. 01:04:009 (4) - ^
    　
37. 01:05:080 (1) - ^
    　
38. 01:06:152 (4) - ^
    　
39. 01:27:357 (2,4) - ^
    　
40. 01:43:036 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
41. 01:44:107 (3) - ^
    　
42. 01:45:536 (2) - ^
    　
43. 01:47:321 (1) - ^
    　
44. 01:48:036 (3) - add whistle
    　
45. 01:48:393 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
46. 01:49:821 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
    　
47. 01:50:536 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
48. 01:51:607 (2) - ^
    　
49. 01:52:321 (4) - add whistle
    　
50. 01:52:678 (6) - add whistle of slider end.
    　
51. 01:54:107 (3) - add whistle of slider start.

1. Please refer to Mod of the hit sound that I wrote when Mod did Hard.
   　
2. 01:52:142 (3) - suggestion.
   

1. 00:39:723 (1) - slider 4th point move to x:224 y:120
   　
2. 00:45:438 - add something?
   　
3. 01:19:421 (4) - not fit song. 2/1 slider is better.

Guy wrote:

hi~ from my queue
m4m time!

[Hard]

• 
  
  　

1. OD-1 is better. this song is many BPM changes so difficulty.
   　
2. 00:45:884 - add note. i can hear sound here.
   
   
   　
3. [Hit sound]
   SPOILER

   1. 00:22:581 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   2. 00:23:652 (3) - ^
      　
   3. 00:25:080 (2) - add whistle
      　
   4. 00:26:152 (2) - ^
      　
   5. 00:26:866 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   6. 00:27:580 (3) - add whistle
      　
   7. 00:27:938 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   8. 00:29:366 (3,4) - add whistle
      　
   9. 00:31:152 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
      　
   10. 00:31:688 (2) - add whistle of repeat point.
       　
   11. 00:32:223 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   12. 00:33:652 (7) - add whistle of slider start.
       　
   13. 00:34:545 (1,2,3) - add whistle of slider start.
       　
   14. 00:40:080 (2) - ^
       　
   15. 00:40:438 (3) - add whistle
       　
   16. 00:41:509 (1) - ^
       　
   17. 00:42:580 (2) - ^
       　
   18. 00:43:652 (2) - ^
       　
   19. 00:44:723 (2) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   20. 00:49:723 (4,6) - add whistle
       　
   21. 00:50:438 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   22. 00:50:973 (2) - add whistle of repeat point.
       　
   23. 00:51:509 (3) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   24. 00:52:938 (7) - ^
       　
   25. 00:55:438 (4) - add whistle
       　
   26. 00:57:223 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
       　
   27. 00:58:295 (6) - ^
       　
   28. 00:58:652 (7) - add whistle
       　
   29. 00:59:366 (2) - ^
       　
   30. 00:59:723 (4) - add whistle of slider start.
       　
   31. 01:00:795 (1) - ^
       　
   32. 01:01:509 (3,4) - ^
       　
   33. 01:02:938 (1) - add whistle
       　
   34. 01:04:009 (4) - ^
       　
   35. 01:05:080 (1) - ^
       　
   36. 01:06:152 (4) - ^
       　
   37. 01:27:357 (2,4) - ^
       　
   38. 01:43:036 (1) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   39. 01:44:107 (3) - ^
       　
   40. 01:45:536 (2) - ^
       　
   41. 01:47:321 (1) - ^
       　
   42. 01:48:036 (3) - add whistle
       　
   43. 01:48:393 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   44. 01:49:821 (3) - add whistle of slider start.
       　
   45. 01:50:536 (5) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   46. 01:51:607 (2) - ^
       　
   47. 01:52:321 (4) - add whistle
       　
   48. 01:52:678 (6) - add whistle of slider end.
       　
   49. 01:54:107 (3) - add whistle of slider start.

[Normal]

• 
  
  　

1. Please refer to Mod of the hit sound that I wrote when Mod did Hard.
   　
2. 01:52:142 (3) - suggestion.
   

[Easy]

• 
  
  　

1. 00:39:723 (1) - slider 4th point move to x:224 y:120
   　
2. 00:45:438 - add something?
   　
3. 01:19:421 (4) - not fit song. 2/1 slider is better.

That's all~
good luck

[Easy]
00:45:438 - add something?

[Hard]
01:27:357 (2,4) - ^

piicrosi wrote:

Tu m'as tellement aidé pour ma map que j'aimerais vraiment faire de même mais bon.. Je peux pas. xD Mais GG, ta map est très belle!
Merci!

Sinon je peux te dire en normal si tu veux de rajouter un clap a 00:35:438 (1) , à la fin du slider, aussi à 00:37:580 (5), toujours à la fin, ainsi qu'à 00:45:438 (4) sur tout le slider.
Met en un aussi à 01:07:938 (2) à la fin et à 01:10:080 (2) - (Si tu trouves ça beau fait en easy et normal ^^)

Pour les hitsounds, t'es tombé à 5 minutes près avant que j'update en changeant énormément les hitsounds :/ Je trouve que les claps sonnent pas bien avec la musique, c'est pour ça que j'en ai pas mis, mais j'ai rajouté plus de whistle.


Et en général baisse le son des 3 derniers objets à 1:53:570 pour la musique Bon ça sert à rien mais bon.. bonne idée, je change

En easy enlève 01:10:080 (2) - et met un slider à 00:57:759 qui dure 2/4 à la place avec un whistle si tu le sens bien :

SPOILER

hmm ça suivrait mieux la musique je suis d'accod mais en Easy je préfère pas trop les brusquer, et avec les whistle ajoutés ça sonne bien comme c'est là je trouve pas ça choquant

Et à 01:06:955 pourquoi pas faire ça ? :

SPOILER

T'as raison il manque plein de notes là, en fait, j'ai changé, pour un stream 1/2

Et écarte un peu 01:12:940 (1,2,3) vu que c'est du hard :3 yep bonne idée, changé

Pour finir fait un peu monter 01:23:244 (2) non je trouve ça bien comme c'est

Voilàà c'est pas très utile mais bon ! xD N'hésites pas n'ajouter des claps à certains endroit comme je te l'ai dis, ça peut être qu'encore mieux ^^

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time from #modreqs /o/

[General]
Your hitbursts are too traslucent, it would be better if they were solid and opaque.
hmm I like them, though. Will change if more people mention it as an issue

Add "Square Enix" to tags. done
Edit: Remove "final fantasy VIII" from tags as you have it as the source. done

[Easy]
00:42:938 (3,1,2) - This could look better, curves always are nice, try this.

00:42:938 (3) - x:104 y:308
00:43:295 (1) - x:172 y:332
00:43:652 (2) - x:240 y:312

thanks, i does look better ^^ changed

00:47:580 (3,4) - I suggest something like this, looks nice, if you do, remember fix the placement of the objects after this.

changed

00:50:438 - 00:57:938 - The same circular flow can be a bit boring, try changing the direction of the flow here.
true, i did something new

[Normal]
00:20:106 (4) - 1 grid to the left (level 4) to be stacked with 00:18:138 (1)
fixed

00:39:723 - Try one of these rhythm, the one you have can be a bit difficult.


changed for the first one

01:11:866 -


changed for the first one too

01:31:012 - Must delete the uninherited point here.
no, there is bpm change here

[Hard]
Yay, all fun with those streams.
Decrease the AR to 7, following the pace of the song.
I had this before, I think 8 is fine

00:18:138 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It would be better if the flow were a bit curved.
Did something better, I think

00:45:438 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Let's improve a bit this along with the stream, make something similar to this.

changed

01:18:245 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing here should be less, it's a bit hard hit a stream like this, but it's up to you.
01:21:774 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:25:301 (1,2,3,4) - ^
yeah this is on purpose, it was easier before I think it's more fun now, and more dynamic

01:30:852 (1,2,1,2) - The timing here is messed up (also the song itself), I highly recommend replace them with a spinner from 01:30:852 until 01:32:571.
It is indeed, I've been considering this, or a small break because it's the fireworks time in the video so hiding it with a spinner would be a shame. Still, now this part is decently mapped so I'm keeping it for now

Well, that's all from my part, good luck /o/
Thanks a lot for the good advice

Faust wrote:

Here for a recheck.

Anyway, I find that you missed a timing section of 204 BPM at 77,216.
Please remember to do this for all difficulties.

Due to this, you might have to make certain changes etc.

Easy:

- 01:29:179 - Unsnapped inherited timing point.

Normal:

- 01:20:598 (2) - Doesn't seem to be snapping to anything. Resnap this.

- 01:27:061 - Unsnapped inherited timing section.

Hard:

- 01:30:998 (2) - Unsnapped slider. As a compromise, end it on the blue tick perhaps.

- 01:45:536 (2) - & - 01:48:036 (3) - Unsnapped notes.

- 01:50:536 (5) - Unsnapped slider as well.

Almost too many, in fact.

All fixed. New vers uploaded. Thanks again!

TMAstraf wrote:

Easy
01:07:580 Maybe Spinner should end here hmm no I like how it is now
01:12:940 A little bit more distance to sliders Why? You think too hard? It's 1,2 DS as the rest of the map

Normal:
01:20:598 Make Slider a little pixel shorter yup fixed

Hard:
01:32:571 - 01:33:506 maybe remove all new combos No, it's meant to announce the fireworks, will change if more people say it's bad

BTW: AWESOME Map! =D Thanks! I'm glad you like it! And thanks for modding too ^^

That's All! =)

1. 00:18:138 (1,2,3) - Since there was no music earlier, it's hard to predict the rhythm and bpm here. My suggestion is to replace these by a repeating slider, this will show the rhythm at once.
2. 00:37:223 (7) - Remove new combo here and add it to 00:37:759 (1) - , right as you did before at 00:34:545 (1) -
3. Also talked via irc about removing last section (to make the ending more natural) and reshaping some parts of the map to make it look prettier.

1. 01:29:079 (5) - Add a whistle, this part lacks of hitsounds.
2. 01:34:646 (1) - Place whistle at the start, remove it from end. The whistle sound in the music starts there.
3. 01:36:613 - Add a whistle here.
4. 01:37:268 - Remove it from here (just same as above)
5. 01:38:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - And add whistles at the heads of all these sliders.
6. Don't forget that you should remove ending section in every diff btw.

1. 01:16:733 (1) - This circle should be placed a bit farther to not confuse people. Now this spacing looks too similar to 1-2-3 before. My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/586871
2. 01:18:539 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part looks too monotonous. Replace one or two of these sliders by a pair of circles.
3. 01:43:035 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Here too pls. Oh wait, you was going to remove this last section anyway xD

1. 
2. 
3. Inconsistent kiai time, preview time, red timing sections.

grumd wrote:

Timing and note placement is pretty nice now, got this fine result with my first try :3
Upd: SS on my second try
SS on second try, gg I can't get one because of my bad play at streams xD and good news for timing

A bit of modding, since I'm here. Thanks!

Hard

1. 00:18:138 (1,2,3) - Since there was no music earlier, it's hard to predict the rhythm and bpm here. My suggestion is to replace these by a repeating slider, this will show the rhythm at once. changed
2. 00:37:223 (7) - Remove new combo here and add it to 00:37:759 (1) - , right as you did before at 00:34:545 (1) - ^
3. Also talked via irc about removing last section (to make the ending more natural) and reshaping some parts of the map to make it look prettier. Yep, reshaped all those short streams as you suggested

Normal

1. 01:29:079 (5) - Add a whistle, this part lacks of hitsounds. added, as well as a couple more in this part
2. 01:34:646 (1) - Place whistle at the start, remove it from end. The whistle sound in the music starts there. done
3. 01:36:613 - Add a whistle here.^
4. 01:37:268 - Remove it from here (just same as above)^
5. 01:38:580 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - And add whistles at the heads of all these sliders.^
6. Don't forget that you should remove ending section in every diff btw.yep, done, it's obviously better this way

Easy

1. 01:16:733 (1) - This circle should be placed a bit farther to not confuse people. Now this spacing looks too similar to 1-2-3 before. My suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/586871 fixed
2. 01:18:539 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - This part looks too monotonous. Replace one or two of these sliders by a pair of circles. done
3. 01:43:035 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Here too pls. Oh wait, you was going to remove this last section anyway xD ^^

Oh, and AIBat stuff:

1. 
   fixed
2. 
   fixed
3. Inconsistent kiai time, preview time, red timing sections.
   all fixed

[Ranger] wrote:

sorry for a late
very poor modding
because i can`t find anything

[Hard]
00:44:009 (4) - add finish here? hmm not really a note for finish imo
01:07:580 (6) - ^ added

this map is clear enough
good job

SuperMoutarde wrote:

Cancel wrote:

Sorry, but i don't want to mod this song :/

np, but why even bother posting here, then? meh, whatever