1. 03:29:520 - 04:05:265 - Considering the song becomes more energetic/louder here, use 95% volume?

1. ...This feels like an Easy diff, to be honest. It's most likely because of the BPM, but still... I recommend AR+1 and OD+1.
2. 00:32:073 - Emphasize the sound here by adding whistle? It's there on Hard, anyway.
3. 01:53:775 (3) - ^. (Head and tail)
4. 02:38:137 (4) - Clap to emphasize the vocal?
5. 02:58:563 (4) - ^
6. 03:41:967 (1) - ^
7. 04:02:392 (4) - ^

ShiroiYume wrote:

Thanks for requesting me for mod, but I think that your map is just perfect! And I couldn't mod it at all... Sorry!

Kaburagi Kotetsu wrote:

헉헉 조각나비다.

1. Actually , You can add a original title and artist on your song setup , this is the example
2. Different kiai time , make sure ues the same kiai time on the difficulties
3. Maybe you can read this thread I think this can help you very well ^_^

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. None!
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:21:541 (4,5,1) - Make the spacing the same~
   2. 00:32:073 (5,1,2,3,4) - Hmm... Bad flow I think... Maybe make something else like this ?
      
      Picture and Code

      
      

      280,292,32073,2,0,P|336:284|368:240,1,109.999990463257,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      464,244,33350,6,0,P|456:187|412:156,1,109.999990463257,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      316,172,34626,1,0,0:0:0
      264,88,35265,1,2,0:0:0
      168,124,35903,2,0,P|128:164|120:240,1,109.999990463257,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   3. 00:56:329 (4,5,6) - This "Right Angle Moving" is very bad for me , I really don't like this flow , especially on a Flow based difficulty.
      
      Bad flow

      
   4. 01:02:073 (4) - I would like to remove the repeat , but it's ok if you want to keep them for now
   5. 01:39:733 (1) - End this spinner here 01:43:563 - ? sounds better in my opinion
   6. 01:55:052 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue
   7. 02:09:733 (1,2,3) - Make this pattern prettier? current arrengement looks a bit ugly >~< ( if you change it , plz adjust the later part )
      
      Picture and Code

      
      

      224,240,129733,6,0,P|264:192|268:144,1,109.999990463257,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
      252,48,131009,1,8,0:0:0
      344,88,131648,2,0,P|406:82|442:51,1,109.999990463257,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:17:712 (6) - Use the same hitsound like hard

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Many circle is not snap on the correct place , they are not snap to 1/4 , they are 1/6 , For example , like 00:24:254 (4) - , it should move to 00:24:307 - ( 1/6 ) , not on 1/4 , please find all of them and change them
   2. 03:26:967 (1) - You miss a New Combo here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 02:16:435 (2,1) - The slider one is covered by previous slider completely , it may be confused for players , Highly recommend to change them
   2. 02:30:477 (1,3,4) - Looks so random , try to stack 02:30:477 (1,4) -
      
      Picture

      
   3. 03:43:563 (4,5) - Move 5 grids right to x:316 y:124 , stack with 03:41:648 (4) -
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 02:49:307 (2) - Remove finish end like Normal , or add a finish on normal difficulty

I am a bit weird about song's artist and title , try to find someone else check them first , and then...
You can call me back for recheck ! you know what will I do
Good Luck for now :3

-kevincela- wrote:

Oh wow,seems like I'm late xD
Oh well,good luck with ranking!

-kevincela- wrote:

good luck with ranking!

-kevincela- wrote:

My sentence being used for ranking \o/

bossandy wrote:

-kevincela- wrote:

My sentence being used for ranking \o/

No , Because of my bubbled!! baka!

Congratulations!

W h i t e wrote:

저를 넘으셨습니다.
어쨋든 추카드려요 ㅋ