ZUN - Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Rei Hakurei

Joined February 2011

Rei Hakurei 2012-12-27T09:11:19+00:00

well, request for post the new timing, (i thought gonna synced normally lol)

1. Offset: 84ms	BPM: 146.00
2. Offset: 9,946ms	BPM: 148.00
3. Offset: 11,567ms	BPM: 152.00
4. Offset: 13,145ms	BPM: 148.00
5. Offset: 22,874ms	BPM: 151.00
6. Offset: 26,052ms	BPM: 151.00
7. Offset: 35,588ms	BPM: 149.00
8. Offset: 37,198ms	BPM: 146.00
9. Offset: 39,663ms	BPM: 153.00
10. Offset: 67,897ms	BPM: 153.00
11. Offset: 91,426ms	BPM: 137.00
12. Offset: 93,177ms	BPM: 153.00
13. Offset: 121,412ms	BPM: 146.00
14. Offset: 131,275ms	BPM: 148.00
15. Offset: 132,896ms	BPM: 152.00

Aurele

osu! Alumni

7,408 posts

Joined January 2011

Aurele 2012-12-29T02:15:23+00:00

Hi there, from Me, Kevin & Chewin's Modding Queue!
I am going to start modding the two Taiko difficulties since that's the worst thing I can mod. (In other word, I suck in modding Taiko Difficulties. But that's alright..)
I don't know if some things were already said since I've started this mod some days ago..

General

My thought: Do you really need different background on every difficulties? I sincerely don't think you should do that. Well first, I've read on some thread that Taiko Background are going to be deleted. Here's the thread with peppy's post. So, I guess Taiko backgrounds should be deleted. If you decide to delete them, wouldn't it be better if you only keep one? Also, the filesize of the beatmap can get a bit big by keeping these backgrounds. That's your choose and I think you should only keep one..
For the name of both Taiko difficulties.. Can you make it more simple? For an example: "Rei's Futsuu"/"Rei's Oni".

Taiko Futsuu

Notes
Suggestions for better patterns, deletion of notes, etc;

01:01:018 - When play testing.. I kinda missed that note. Well first, it's placed on a red tick, which is not consistent with your previous/next notes, and I thought it was misplaced. Would you mind to move it to 01:01:214. Since there's a strong sound there, I don't think it would be bad if you move it there.
01:14:938 (138,139,140,141,142) - For these, that's just a thought, you can skip it if you want. Ok so, I felt it was missing a kat to 01:15:330, so, I thought you could make another pattern here like: d k k d k

Taiko Oni

Notes
Suggestions for better patterns, deletion of notes, etc;

I play tested it and it seems alright.

Easy

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:00:084 (1,3) - Seems like you wanted to make a stack with the circle and the end of the slider (3), but, it's not stacked. Can you try to move this slider a bit to make it stacked with the circle? Disable the Grid Snap and try it. If you do that, make sure the spacing after this slider is still consistent with the previous.
00:20:442 (1) - To make a better transition from the two previous objects, I thought this slider would have been at the left side instead of the right. Since the slider (3) of the previous combo is placed at the right, you could maybe move this slider at the left? To keep the same spacing consistency with your previous slider, just do Ctrl+H and make sure your next objects has the same spacing.
00:48:665 (1,2) - Stacking these two objects is a bad idea for an Easy difficulty.. You should try to make it more easier for beginners by unstacking these objects. for an example, you could move the circle (1) to x:136 y:216 and the next slider to x:172 y:142 (So close to where it was before) By doing this, it's going to be unstacked and of course, the spacing will still be consistent since the slider was where it was before. (anyways, hope you understand)
00:50:234 (3,4) - That's the same exact thing for the previous point, try to move these objects somewhere else to unstack these objects.
00:58:469 (1) - Would you mind to do Ctrl+G and moving this slider a bit? The transition for the previous slider to this one isn't pretty good since this slider has a reverse arrow that goes at the right and the transition should have been at the left. I hope you understand, but that's simple. So, also, if you do that, make sure the spacing of it is consistent and all that stuff. Here's an example of what you could do here. On the picture, I've tried to make blankets with the slider (1) and the circle (2) and another blanket with the reverse arrow of the slider (1) and the slider (3) and I think it looks good.
Example
01:47:277 (4,6) - We can perfectly see here that there's a sudden weird and a bit ugly, overlap there. Would you mind to avoid this overlap by maybe, reforming the slider or even moving the circle (6) somewhere else?

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
Most of your hitsounds are consistent, so there's no problem with that.

00:35:588 (3,4) - I would actually think that there's a bit too much finishes here and it could be better if you delete the finishes on both end of these sliders. That will sound more calm instead.
00:42:391 (1,2,3,4) - You tried to follow the song with these whistles but it's not sounding pretty well. So, my suggestion here is: Delete all these whistles and add whistles to these points: 00:42:783, 00:43:175, 00:43:959, 00:44:351.

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;

00:26:052 (7) - Since this object starts on a downbeat, it would be better if this object was on the next combo. So, basically, add a new combo and delete the new combo on the next object.
01:30:232 (6) - A new combo could be added here. The combo seems to be a bit long and this combo will be these two sliders, so that's alright.
01:49:238 (5) - Almost the same thing as the previous point, but yeah, this combo is a bit longer than it should and a new combo should be added here.

Normal

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:05:426 - At this point, it has no loud sounds and could sound better if there was no objects here. Since there's no obvious sounds.. why would we click on something? I am suggesting you to delete this circle since it's a bit useless to keep it there for the simple reason that there's obviously no sound here. For the spacing of the next object (which is a slider), do Ctrl+G, it will be reversed and after that, reform it a bit, so it won't have any spacing errors. Here's what I've done here:
Example
00:09:536 - That's exactly the same thing as I said on the previous point. I highly recommend you to delete this slider and then, you move the next slider to 00:09:947. It will sound better, just like I've said above. I am also suggesting you to add a slider that starts on 00:11:162 and end to 00:11:567. Make sure that there's no problem with the spacing.

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
In General, it looks good but, something I didn't liked here is, at 00:13:145 (1) - , you start adding claps to keep the consistency with your upbeats sounds but, on the Easy difficulty, you had whistles. Also, before this point, you also had whistles. So yeah, that's just a thought. Oh and, there's also these whistles, 00:09:125 (4,5) - it doesn't sound good with the song.. and the last thing, you seems to have forgot a clap here for the consistency: 01:42:179 -

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
Looked twice, everything is alright here.

Hard

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:15:374 (3) - I personally don't like this 1/4 slider for the reason that the reverse and the length of the slider doesn't sound pretty well with the song. It makes it more sound like if it was overmapped when it isn't. I'm suggesting you to replace it by the previous slider which is a 1/2 slider. So it may sound more calm and will follow more on the song.
01:18:076 (3,4,5,6,1) - I don't understand this.. The first and the last objects are not aligned with the circles between them. Wouldn't it be simple if they were all aligned? I don't see anything special to keep it like that o__o (That sounded rude, but don't worry, I am not D:) So actually, could you make them aligned please?
01:54:728 (3) - Since this slider is straight and the previous and the next slider are curved, wouldn't it makes a better flow if this one was also curved? To be honest, it would be better and the slider will be able to catch the next slider since it's curved.
Example

Or even, to make it more catchy, you could move it like that:

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;

01:51:003 (2) - Previously, you made a hitsound pattern that has claps on upbeats and a clap right after the first upbeat. Do you hear that you missed that one and after that, your claps doesn't make any sense? They seems to be very placed randomly after this slider. So basically, add a clap to 01:51:003 to keep the consistency and delete all the clap after that until 01:54:924 and try to keep your consistency again. After that, make sure to don't forget to add a clap to 01:55:709.

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;

00:01:727 (1) - Is this new combo necessary? To be honest, it is not since it fits perfectly with your previous objects and the sound/song. Also, you would have added a new combo to 00:04:193 (5) - if you wanted to keep some kind of consistency.
00:08:303 (1) - Same thing for the previous point but also, add a new combo to 00:09:741 (4) - and delete the combo for the next object. It will be better that way and it will follow the song. Well, in my opinion.

Lunatic

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;

00:31:614 (3) - This slider seems to be inconsistent with the spacing. Make it more closer to keep the same spacing consistency.
01:21:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - *Comment* What a nice star pattern! It's well formed even if they seems to be close.
01:42:179 (1) - I thought it would make a better flow if you reverse this slider (by doing Ctrl+G) and also, to be able to catch the next object, you could do the same thing. After that, it should be alright.
01:58:454 (1) - Would you mind to do like Bya and end this spinner to 01:59:826 and add a circle to 02:01:395?

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;

00:22:469 - I feel that the next whistle is a bit late and would sound better if you move it to this object. Since it's on an upbeat, it should be alright. But also, like said, It felt really late.
00:42:587 - At this place, you're using whistles to follow the sounds and to be honest, I think you should add one here too. It will make three whistles but still, it fits with the song and the piano. You should do the same for 00:55:136, 01:36:101 and 01:48:650 (1) -

New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;

00:37:198 (5) - Since there's a change with the instrument, would you mind to add a new combo here? Also, the combo was getting a bit long because of these streams.

Nice mapped difficulty. The objects are nicely placed on the timeline, so is on the playfield.

and.. good luck~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-12-30T04:26:52+00:00

Gabe wrote:
Hi there, from Me, Kevin & Chewin's Modding Queue!

Hard

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
00:15:374 (3) - I personally don't like this 1/4 slider for the reason that the reverse and the length of the slider doesn't sound pretty well with the song. It makes it more sound like if it was overmapped when it isn't. I'm suggesting you to replace it by the previous slider which is a 1/2 slider. So it may sound more calm and will follow more on the song. ahh fine~. fixed :3.
01:18:076 (3,4,5,6,1) - I don't understand this.. The first and the last objects are not aligned with the circles between them. Wouldn't it be simple if they were all aligned? I don't see anything special to keep it like that o__o (That sounded rude, but don't worry, I am not D:) So actually, could you make them aligned please? ahh didn't see that. fixed
01:54:728 (3) - Since this slider is straight and the previous and the next slider are curved, wouldn't it makes a better flow if this one was also curved? To be honest, it would be better and the slider will be able to catch the next slider since it's curved. no i'd rather not. i feel that if i do this, the flow would feel awkward. the straight slider makes it simple during gameplay IMO.
Example

Or even, to make it more catchy, you could move it like that:

Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
01:51:003 (2) - Previously, you made a hitsound pattern that has claps on upbeats and a clap right after the first upbeat. Do you hear that you missed that one and after that, your claps doesn't make any sense? They seems to be very placed randomly after this slider. So basically, add a clap to 01:51:003 to keep the consistency and delete all the clap after that until 01:54:924 and try to keep your consistency again. After that, make sure to don't forget to add a clap to 01:55:709. ahh fixed.
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
00:01:727 (1) - Is this new combo necessary? To be honest, it is not since it fits perfectly with your previous objects and the sound/song. Also, you would have added a new combo to 00:04:193 (5) - if you wanted to keep some kind of consistency. made (5) a NC since i wanna keep the NC on (1).
00:08:303 (1) - Same thing for the previous point but also, add a new combo to 00:09:741 (4) - and delete the combo for the next object. It will be better that way and it will follow the song. Well, in my opinion. i've been thinking about this, so fixed.

and.. good luck~

ty for the mod

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SPOILER

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Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2012-12-30T14:57:12+00:00

Hi there

[General]
* Using taiko BG are unrankable (proof)

[Easy]
01:49:238 (1) - Remove whistle at tail slider

[suko's Normal]
01:00:038 (4) - Add whistle at tail slider
01:03:959 (5) - Add finish at tail slider
01:04:842 - Add spinner here? To make a post spinner pattern?
01:20:429 (1) - Add finist at head slider
01:25:527 - Add note here?

[249's Hard]
* Capitalized to "Rei_Fan49" at tags for consistency on each diff

00:30:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pattern like this for following the rhythm of music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548736
01:26:311 (6,7) - Make a same spacing as 01:25:919 (3,4) for not making players feel confused?

[Lunatic]
00:11:567 (7) - Add finish?
00:39:646 (3) - Add finish at head slider?
01:33:160 (1) - ^

Satori's theme just like sleeping lullaby

Rei Hakurei

1,983 posts

Joined February 2011

Rei Hakurei 2012-12-30T20:35:42+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[General]
* Using taiko BG are unrankable (proof) how about diff specific bg? i'll do it btw

Satori's theme just like sleeping lullaby i see why you commenting this on twitter

Gabe wrote:
Hi there, from Me, Kevin & Chewin's Modding Queue!
I am going to start modding the two Taiko difficulties since that's the worst thing I can mod. (In other word, I suck in modding Taiko Difficulties. But that's alright..)
I don't know if some things were already said since I've started this mod some days ago..

General
My thought: Do you really need different background on every difficulties? I sincerely don't think you should do that. Well first, I've read on some thread that Taiko Background are going to be deleted. Here's the thread with peppy's post. So, I guess Taiko backgrounds should be deleted. If you decide to delete them, wouldn't it be better if you only keep one? Also, the filesize of the beatmap can get a bit big by keeping these backgrounds. That's your choose and I think you should only keep one.. look at my reply at leo's post, i know i know... welp
For the name of both Taiko difficulties.. Can you make it more simple? For an example: "Rei's Futsuu"/"Rei's Oni". nope i hate using that formal diff naming

Taiko Futsuu

Notes
Suggestions for better patterns, deletion of notes, etc;
01:01:018 - When play testing.. I kinda missed that note. Well first, it's placed on a red tick, which is not consistent with your previous/next notes, and I thought it was misplaced. Would you mind to move it to 01:01:214. Since there's a strong sound there, I don't think it would be bad if you move it there. it's already fixed.
01:14:938 (138,139,140,141,142) - For these, that's just a thought, you can skip it if you want. Ok so, I felt it was missing a kat to 01:15:330, so, I thought you could make another pattern here like: d k k d k it's better dkkkd

Taiko Oni

Notes
Suggestions for better patterns, deletion of notes, etc;

I play tested it and it seems alright.

and.. good luck~

http://puu.sh/1HBec
NO TAIKO BG, just diff specific diff..
also, thanks for *trying* to mod

Last edited by Rei Hakurei 2012-12-31T09:10:08+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Dai

1,632 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Dai 2012-12-31T05:37:47+00:00

Gabe wrote:
General
My thought: Do you really need different background on every difficulties? I sincerely don't think you should do that. Well first, I've read on some thread that Taiko Background are going to be deleted. Here's the thread with peppy's post. So, I guess Taiko backgrounds should be deleted. If you decide to delete them, wouldn't it be better if you only keep one? Also, the filesize of the beatmap can get a bit big by keeping these backgrounds. That's your choose and I think you should only keep one.. it's up to Rei_fan
For the name of both Taiko difficulties.. Can you make it more simple? For an example: "Rei's Futsuu"/"Rei's Oni". ^

Easy

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
00:00:084 (1,3) - Seems like you wanted to make a stack with the circle and the end of the slider (3), but, it's not stacked. Can you try to move this slider a bit to make it stacked with the circle? Disable the Grid Snap and try it. If you do that, make sure the spacing after this slider is still consistent with the previous. fixed
00:20:442 (1) - To make a better transition from the two previous objects, I thought this slider would have been at the left side instead of the right. Since the slider (3) of the previous combo is placed at the right, you could maybe move this slider at the left? To keep the same spacing consistency with your previous slider, just do Ctrl+H and make sure your next objects has the same spacing. ahh yeah
00:48:665 (1,2) - Stacking these two objects is a bad idea for an Easy difficulty.. You should try to make it more easier for beginners by unstacking these objects. for an example, you could move the circle (1) to x:136 y:216 and the next slider to x:172 y:142 (So close to where it was before) By doing this, it's going to be unstacked and of course, the spacing will still be consistent since the slider was where it was before. (anyways, hope you understand)
00:50:234 (3,4) - That's the same exact thing for the previous point, try to move these objects somewhere else to unstack these objects. ok
00:58:469 (1) - Would you mind to do Ctrl+G and moving this slider a bit? The transition for the previous slider to this one isn't pretty good since this slider has a reverse arrow that goes at the right and the transition should have been at the left. I hope you understand, but that's simple. So, also, if you do that, make sure the spacing of it is consistent and all that stuff. Here's an example of what you could do here. On the picture, I've tried to make blankets with the slider (1) and the circle (2) and another blanket with the reverse arrow of the slider (1) and the slider (3) and I think it looks good. AWESOME
Example
01:47:277 (4,6) - We can perfectly see here that there's a sudden weird and a bit ugly, overlap there. Would you mind to avoid this overlap by maybe, reforming the slider or even moving the circle (6) somewhere else? ok
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
Most of your hitsounds are consistent, so there's no problem with that.
00:35:588 (3,4) - I would actually think that there's a bit too much finishes here and it could be better if you delete the finishes on both end of these sliders. That will sound more calm instead. ok
00:42:391 (1,2,3,4) - You tried to follow the song with these whistles but it's not sounding pretty well. So, my suggestion here is: Delete all these whistles and add whistles to these points: 00:42:783, 00:43:175, 00:43:959, 00:44:351. ok
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
00:26:052 (7) - Since this object starts on a downbeat, it would be better if this object was on the next combo. So, basically, add a new combo and delete the new combo on the next object. ok
01:30:232 (6) - A new combo could be added here. The combo seems to be a bit long and this combo will be these two sliders, so that's alright. ok
01:49:238 (5) - Almost the same thing as the previous point, but yeah, this combo is a bit longer than it should and a new combo should be added here. ok

Lunatic

Flows/Emplacements of the objects
To make sure there's no random jumps, has great flows, do not have random objects placed on the timeline that doesn't fit with the song;
00:31:614 (3) - This slider seems to be inconsistent with the spacing. Make it more closer to keep the same spacing consistency. fixed
01:21:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - *Comment* What a nice star pattern! It's well formed even if they seems to be close.
01:42:179 (1) - I thought it would make a better flow if you reverse this slider (by doing Ctrl+G) and also, to be able to catch the next object, you could do the same thing. After that, it should be alright. ok
01:58:454 (1) - Would you mind to do like Bya and end this spinner to 01:59:826 and add a circle to 02:01:395? umm.... I make it like easy
Hitsounds
In case there's inconsistencies with your hitsounds, useless hitsounds. I may also suggest you some things to make your hitsounds better;
00:22:469 - I feel that the next whistle is a bit late and would sound better if you move it to this object. Since it's on an upbeat, it should be alright. But also, like said, It felt really late. ok
00:42:587 - At this place, you're using whistles to follow the sounds and to be honest, I think you should add one here too. It will make three whistles but still, it fits with the song and the piano. You should do the same for 00:55:136, 01:36:101 and 01:48:650 (1) - err... it's 1/2 whistle, even though it fits the song, it doesn't sounds good to me
New combos
New combos are one of the things I think it's important for a beatmap. Combos shouldn't be overused, have too much objects in a combo and should fit with the song;
00:37:198 (5) - Since there's a change with the instrument, would you mind to add a new combo here? Also, the combo was getting a bit long because of these streams. ahh ok
Nice mapped difficulty. The objects are nicely placed on the timeline, so is on the playfield.

and.. good luck~

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[General]
* Using taiko BG are unrankable (proof) ahh well, it's up to Rei_Fan

[Easy]
01:49:238 (1) - Remove whistle at tail slider umm... no, because there's a whistle on Lunatic at this timing. and yeah I want to make it like Lunatic

[Lunatic]
00:11:567 (7) - Add finish? ok
00:39:646 (3) - Add finish at head slider? ok
01:33:160 (1) - ^ ok

Satori's theme just like sleeping lullaby

thanks for mod everyone

Nichiyouki

1,579 posts

Joined August 2011

Nichiyouki 2012-12-31T10:36:35+00:00

Hi, lufi

My mod from your request in my modding queue

Red = Unrankable
Blue = You should modified
Black = My suggestion

General

Fine

Easy

00:54:940 - Add a circle here? I hear the rhythm of song, which I think should be add to it.
00:55:332 (3,4) - Add whistle in slider end of (3,4), but remove it in slider begin (4).
01:01:606 (4) - The sound is weird. You should remove whistle in slider end.

suko's Normal

00:09:536 (5) - The sound is weird. You should remove whistle in slider begin.
00:29:628 (1) - Add whistle in slider begin instead of slider end.
00:42:783 (1) - Perhaps, you may make it can play more smoothly by doing this.
SPOILER
00:58:697 (1,2,3) - I think this may be more beautiful.
SPOILER
01:03:959 (5) - I can observe the rhythm. Please add finish in slider end.
01:42:179 (5) - Add clap in slider begin.

249's Hard

00:12:751 - I felt it has sound of rhythm here. Maybe add a circle here.
01:22:585 (3,4) - Spacing is little close. Please increase spacing is about 1.00x
01:36:101 (3) - From slider end of 01:35:512 (2) to 01:36:297 (1), it's little distorted. So move to left and up 1 grid.

Lunatic

01:14:154 (1) - If I notice to listen the rhythm that you add it (hitsound), I think that remove finish be better.
01:18:860 (1) - ^
01:31:409 (8) - Add NC here be better?

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall nice map, give a star

Good luck~

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2012-12-31T16:00:13+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hi there

[General]
* Using taiko BG are unrankable (proof) ahh i needed that for something ><. ty~ <3.

[249's Hard]
* Capitalized to "Rei_Fan49" at tags for consistency on each diff Fixed by lufi.

00:30:820 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pattern like this for following the rhythm of music? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/548736 wouldn't this be hard? i'll give this a chance and see what people say about this.
01:26:311 (6,7) - Make a same spacing as 01:25:919 (3,4) for not making players feel confused? i think that this is ok since the spacing is close to the same.

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, lufi

My mod from your request in my modding queue

249's Hard
00:12:751 - I felt it has sound of rhythm here. Maybe add a circle here. no i did this intentionally. i want this part to act as a mini break, so that's why there's a space there.
01:22:585 (3,4) - Spacing is little close. Please increase spacing is about 1.00x ahh--fixed ><
01:36:101 (3) - From slider end of 01:35:512 (2) to 01:36:297 (1), it's little distorted. So move to left and up 1 grid.
usually i don't accept this, but for the sake of flow, fixed.

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall nice map, give a star

Good luck~

ty for the mods

.

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 39646
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye
TitleUnicode:少女さとり～3rd eye
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:lufi10
Version:249's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:Rei_Fan49 Byakugan249 Tsusuko Komeiji Satori Subterranean Animism chireiden th11 SA Team Shanghai Alice
BeatmapID:191203
BeatmapSetID:63867

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CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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Dai

1,632 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Dai 2012-12-31T18:52:01+00:00

Nichiyouki wrote:

Hi, lufi hi

Easy
00:54:940 - Add a circle here? I hear the rhythm of song, which I think should be add to it. added slider
00:55:332 (3,4) - Add whistle in slider end of (3,4), but remove it in slider begin (4). added whistle, and I keep whistler at the begin of (4)
01:01:606 (4) - The sound is weird. You should remove whistle in slider end. no need, there a whistle on lunatic at this timing, and it sounds fine to me

Lunatic
01:14:154 (1) - If I notice to listen the rhythm that you add it (hitsound), I think that remove finish be better. finish sounds good to me
01:18:860 (1) - ^ yes about this one
01:31:409 (8) - Add NC here be better? ok

That's all that I can find them, and hope that my mod will be useful for you.
Overall nice map, give a star

Good luck~

thanks for mod and star nich

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2013-01-02T04:38:34+00:00

Hi, from my queue
[General]
Fine~

[Easy]
00:10:351 (3) - 7 combo itu kayaknya kebanyakan deh, coba disini New Combo aja
01:00:038 (3,4) - coba blanket slidernya diganti, kayak gini
01:02:783 (5) - New Combo
01:30:232 (1) - Remove New Combo

[Normal]
00:38:014 (4) - New Combo
01:04:744 - Kiai has a break? @.@ add a spinner please

[Hard]
;w; Y U SO HATE KIAI
Circle size 3 for hard? o.o
00:06:042 (2) - add whistle in start
00:58:077 - add a note

[Lunatic]
00:31:614 (3) - ini 1/3 apa 1/4?

dari keseluruhan udah bagus kok.. star~ o/

Dai

1,632 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Dai 2013-01-02T04:50:44+00:00

Harez wrote:
Hi, from my queue
[General]
Fine~

[Easy]
00:10:351 (3) - 7 combo itu kayaknya kebanyakan deh, coba disini New Combo aja ok
01:00:038 (3,4) - coba blanket slidernya diganti, kayak gini aaa, gimana itu cara bikinnya... bantuin dong
01:02:783 (5) - New Combo umm.... aku rasa nggak perlu
01:30:232 (1) - Remove New Combo ^

[Lunatic]
00:31:614 (3) - ini 1/3 apa 1/4? 1/4

dari keseluruhan udah bagus kok.. star~ o/

thanks for mod & star

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2013-01-02T05:48:43+00:00

lufi10 wrote:
Harez wrote:
01:00:038 (3,4) - coba blanket slidernya diganti, kayak gini aaa, gimana itu cara bikinnya... bantuin dong

249,41,60038,2,0,P|212:80|216:144,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
290,110,61606,2,0,P|288:184|224:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

no kds

Dark Fang

1,981 posts

Joined February 2011

Dark Fang 2013-01-02T17:08:44+00:00

heyy <3

[General]

4th offset +6 (13151) ? current offset was early
02:11:258 - and 02:12:879 - I think there are unused / useless timing, why don't you remove them? just suggestion ~~nvm~~
01:58:258 (1) - about this note... to guest mappers. why don't you use decrescendo volume for this spinner?

[Easy]

00:42:391 (1) - last point of slider put on (396,268)
01:00:038 (3) - ~ Spinner - why don't you try Ctrl + H and adjust notes? flow more good. IMO
01:13:762 (4) - consider more pretty than now like this

141,367,73762,2,0,P|120:348|112:296,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

[suko's Normal]

00:09:536 (5) - remove Whistle at end of slider?
00:13:145 (1) - add Finish at start of slider
00:19:631 (1) - ^
00:24:463 (3) - ^
00:26:052 (1) - ^
00:38:830 (6) - move to (164,104)
00:44:351 (3) - add Finish at end of slider
00:52:195 (1) - same as 00:13:145 (1) -
00:56:900 (5) - same as 00:44:351 (3) -
01:03:959 (5) - ^
01:09:056 (4) - move down 1 grid for consistent and symmetry
01:14:154 (1) - add Finish at start of silder
01:14:154 (1,2,3,4) - why don't you symmetry for each circle and slider?
01:20:429 (1) - same as 01:14:154 (1) -
01:25:919 (4) - same as 00:44:351 (3) -
01:27:880 (2) - move left 1 grid. IMO
01:37:865 (4) - move to (156,92)
01:38:650 (5) - add Finish at end of slider
01:43:356 (2) - move up 1 grid for distance
01:50:022 (3) - move down 1 grid for good flow. IMO
01:51:983 (1) - same as 00:13:145 (1) -

[249's Hard]

AR -1? I think AR 8 is awkward / fast for this map's BPM and SV. IMO
00:01:522 (4) - move to (252,304) ?
00:30:820 - about this pattern.. why don't you use two note that 3 hit reverse slider? I think that's more good flow. IMO
00:35:588 (1) - adjust distance with stack circles for (3)
00:52:783 (2) - move up 1 grid?
01:15:723 (1) - adjust shape. 2nd point of slider move left 1 grid
01:36:885 (2) - move to (176,328)
I like your diff <3

[Lunatic]

can you use Finish like Easy diff?
HP Drain -1? so high Drain for player's mistake
00:29:131 (1,2) - stack this notes?
01:03:763 (5,2) - move up 1 grid
01:43:160 (3) - Ctrl + G ? and adjust next notes. or use only Ctrl +G for jump lol. but I think jump pattern was awkward for this map

[Futsuu]

00:37:810 (71) - k ?
00:45:136 (85) - d ?
00:56:508 (108,109) - k d ?

[Oni]

00:19:428 (99) - remove this note?

Dai

1,632 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Dai 2013-01-03T16:59:51+00:00

Dark Fang wrote:
heyy <3

[General]

4th offset +6 (13151) ? current offset was early
02:11:258 - and 02:12:879 - I think there are unused / useless timing, why don't you remove them? just suggestion ~~nvm~~
01:58:258 (1) - about this note... to guest mappers. why don't you use decrescendo volume for this spinner?

[Easy]

00:42:391 (1) - last point of slider put on (396,268) ok
01:00:038 (3) - ~ Spinner - why don't you try Ctrl + H and adjust notes? flow more good. IMO ok
01:13:762 (4) - consider more pretty than now like this ok
141,367,73762,2,0,P|120:348|112:296,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
[Lunatic]

can you use Finish like Easy diff? hm... I quite not sure, but I'm going to think about it
HP Drain -1? so high Drain for player's mistake I setted it to 10, but I think it's too hard, so 8 is fine for me
00:29:131 (1,2) - stack this notes? oh ok, (1) is actually 1/3
01:03:763 (5,2) - move up 1 grid OMG FIXED
01:43:160 (3) - Ctrl + G ? and adjust next notes. or use only Ctrl +G for jump lol. but I think jump pattern was awkward for this map I hope this patter is fine

thanks for mod

Raging Bull

2,785 posts

Joined June 2010

Raging Bull 2013-01-03T23:03:07+00:00

Hello! All these are suggestions, if you disagree please explain why instead of just saying no.

Easy:
00:00:084 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer it if you switched this combo up a bit. Instead of sliders starting on third tick and ending on downbeat, it sounds better if it were to start on downbeat and end on third tick. Downbeat sounds like something you should "click", not end. There's quite a few of these in Easy so I won't mention the rest.
00:10:351 (1) - Remove NC? It sounds like the same area of the song. Since you didn't NC here also 00:23:271 (3) -
00:12:356 (5) - Remove one repeat and replace the extra repeat with 2/1 slider plus NC? http://puu.sh/1IYY4
00:18:820 (4) - ^
00:39:646 (1) - I thought this part was cool since you started kiai with a clickable slider and not as the slider ends.
00:50:626 (4) - Then this part

I suggest removing the repeat and adding a 2/1 slider with NC like above. Basically kinda do what you did at 01:44:140 (4)
01:04:744 (7) - Perhaps changing the kiai to end here instead? Won't change much but you won't see kiai at spinner anyways.
01:29:056 (1,1,2) - Perhaps changing your combo to this? It would remove your one note combo and follows music more. http://puu.sh/1IZ6T
The 3 is snapped, it's just on a different BPM.
01:33:160 (1) - Add finish to start of slider? You've done it before on the last kiai
01:58:258 (1) - End kiai here instead?

Normal:
00:36:393 (3) - Move middle point to x:256 y:264, move end to x:344 y:320. Looks a lot more symmetrical

00:44:351 (3) - Add finish to slider end? I think I hear in music too
00:52:195 (1) - Add finish to slider start? Same I hear in music.
00:56:900 (5) - Finish to slider end?
01:18:468 (4) - Kinda feels weird to me. Slider doesn't really follow the more prominent sound. I think adding a note here and then a 2/1 slider at 01:18:860 would feel better.
01:31:409 (2) - Seems pretty empty. Perhaps a long slider here?
01:51:983 (1) - Finish at start?

Hard:
I know we all love big circles, but isn't the norm for hard CS4? :3 Maybe increase by 1 tick? I also feel like the AR for the music isn't fitting. Perhaps AR7? Seems like a big jump from normal to hard in terms of AR also.
00:30:820 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps change these into 2 1/3 repeat sliders? Seems like after your set of 1/4 rhythm mapping, the 1/3 might screw them up a bit.
00:50:234 (3,4,5) - I'm not really a fan of anti jump, perhaps changing it to the old triangle formation would be better?

http://puu.sh/1IZst or perhaps map to background music.
01:03:175 (1,2) - Perhaps you should convert these notes into a slider? Seems empty and yeah anti jumps D:
Well it's just me but I feel like jump from hard to normal is kinda big. Lots of triples and very minor jumps, but well perhaps removing just few triples?

Lunatic:
Lower AR by 1? I think it looks a lot better and seems too fast for this low BPM. And SV seems slow for AR9 :s
01:03:959 (1) - Perhaps something like this? To keep the flow going and it also won't look ugly by overlapping?

Sorry I don't like overlaps (depends) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/554974

YTYuyu

osu! Alumni

4,146 posts

Joined January 2011

YTYuyu 2013-01-04T00:34:43+00:00

Harez wrote:
[Hard]
;w; Y U SO HATE KIAI i don't hate it. i don't find it exciting.
Circle size 3 for hard? o.o yea someone mentioned it and i kind of regret following it. fixed.
00:06:042 (2) - add whistle in start no then the whistle pattern in this would be inconsistent.
00:58:077 - add a note why? give me a reason.

Dark Fang wrote:
heyy <3

[249's Hard]

AR -1? I think AR 8 is awkward / fast for this map's BPM and SV. IMO i'll do it, but that's "if" ~~lufi~~ Dai reduces his AR.
00:01:522 (4) - move to (252,304) ? no i don't see a difference during gameplay.
00:30:820 - about this pattern.. why don't you use two note that 3 hit reverse slider? I think that's more good flow. IMO uhh... :/
00:35:588 (1) - adjust distance with stack circles for (3) it's fine. it doesn't have to be exact.
00:52:783 (2) - move up 1 grid? i don't see that much of a difference, but fixed...
01:15:723 (1) - adjust shape. 2nd point of slider move left 1 grid again, don't see a difference during gameplay.
01:36:885 (2) - move to (176,328) ^
I like your diff <3

Raging Bull wrote:
Hello! All these are suggestions, if you disagree please explain why instead of just saying no.

Hard:
I know we all love big circles, but isn't the norm for hard CS4? :3 Maybe increase by 1 tick? I also feel like the AR for the music isn't fitting. Perhaps AR7? Seems like a big jump from normal to hard in terms of AR also. applied the CS, but for the AR, if Dai reduces his AR, i'll reduce mine.
00:30:820 (1,2,3,4) - Perhaps change these into 2 1/3 repeat sliders? Seems like after your set of 1/4 rhythm mapping, the 1/3 might screw them up a bit. i tried that, and the placement of that pattern looks bad during gameplay. it didn't flow to my expectations.
00:50:234 (3,4,5) - I'm not really a fan of anti jump, perhaps changing it to the old triangle formation would be better? http://puu.sh/1IZst or perhaps map to background music. followed the default DS.
01:03:175 (1,2) - Perhaps you should convert these notes into a slider? Seems empty and yeah anti jumps D: then it'll be inconsistent with 01:44:140 (1,2) - since it follows the same phrase in the BGM.
Well it's just me but I feel like jump from hard to normal is kinda big. Lots of triples and very minor jumps, but well perhaps removing just few triples? done. i removed a few to make it somewhat easier.

Ty for the mods

.

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104,252,107081,1,0,0:0:0
60,184,107277,6,0,P|28:104|60:28,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,36,107865,1,8,0:0:0
212,40,108061,1,0,0:0:0
288,68,108258,1,0,0:0:0
360,104,108454,2,0,P|372:144|360:200,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,252,108846,6,0,P|264:296|172:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,252,109434,1,8,0:0:0
60,196,109630,2,0,P|36:120|68:24,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,44,110218,1,0,0:0:0
216,60,110414,6,0,P|300:72|376:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,172,111003,2,0,P|416:216,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,268,111395,2,0,P|344:360,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,244,111983,6,0,P|188:212|116:248,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,228,112571,2,0,P|44:148|116:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,148,113160,1,8,0:0:0
244,80,113356,1,0,0:0:0
316,112,113552,6,0,P|360:172|352:264,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,292,114140,2,0,P|212:308|140:260,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,140,114728,2,0,P|72:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,80,115120,6,0,P|204:48|292:48,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,72,115709,2,0,P|404:152|364:304,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,236,116689,6,0,P|80:236|8:84,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,64,117669,1,0,0:0:0
152,100,117865,1,2,0:0:0
224,64,118061,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,118258,12,4,119826,0:0:0
256,192,121395,5,4,0:0:0

creampuff

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creampuff 2013-01-04T00:35:52+00:00

couldn't find problems

star

Niko-nyan

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Niko-nyan 2013-01-04T01:01:14+00:00

wups maap Dai (jgn kd)
ngomong" awal"nya bikin kaget ........

star ~

edit : Oni
01:04:842 - spinner di garis merah~
01:58:356 - ^

KokoroStudiox3

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Joined April 2011

KokoroStudiox3 2013-01-04T03:41:50+00:00

hi ^^ m4m

[Easy]

combo colors
01:02:783 (5) new combo ? or 01:04:744 - like this 01:58:258 (1) -
01:29:056 (1) remove new combo

[lunatica]
00:04:501 - wistle
00:28:634 - http://puu.sh/1Jfcx

Rei Hakurei

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Joined February 2011

Rei Hakurei 2013-01-04T08:02:20+00:00

Frans Niko wrote:
wups maap Dai (jgn kd)
ngomong" awal"nya bikin kaget ........
star ~

edit : Oni
01:04:842 - spinner di garis merah~
01:58:356 - ^

terus? kan spinner di taiko itu endnya kalo udah 0 counter...

Dark Fang wrote:
heyy <3

[General]

4th offset +6 (13151) ? current offset was early meh... if could break all timing...
02:11:258 - and 02:12:879 - I think there are unused / useless timing, why don't you remove them? just suggestion ~~nvm~~ i'll give timing to all part of the song that i can..
01:58:258 (1) - about this note... to guest mappers. why don't you use decrescendo volume for this spinner? not in taiko :v

[Futsuu]

00:37:810 (71) - k ? k
00:45:136 (85) - d ? next note have lower tone, but previous note have similar tone...
00:56:508 (108,109) - k d ? nope, it's inverse

[Oni]

00:19:428 (99) - remove this note? actually it should be a stream around this note, but well i think not removing it~

http://puu.sh/1Jk9V btw.... my rabu rettah

Dai

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Topic Starter

Dai 2013-01-05T15:39:00+00:00

Raging Bull wrote:
Hello! All these are suggestions, if you disagree please explain why instead of just saying no.

Easy:
00:00:084 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer it if you switched this combo up a bit. Instead of sliders starting on third tick and ending on downbeat, it sounds better if it were to start on downbeat and end on third tick. Downbeat sounds like something you should "click", not end. There's quite a few of these in Easy so I won't mention the rest. ok, but for the rest is uuhh....
00:10:351 (1) - Remove NC? It sounds like the same area of the song. Since you didn't NC here also 00:23:271 (3) - ok
00:12:356 (5) - Remove one repeat and replace the extra repeat with 2/1 slider plus NC? http://puu.sh/1IYY4 I'm quite cofused about this
00:18:820 (4) - ^ ^
00:39:646 (1) - I thought this part was cool since you started kiai with a clickable slider and not as the slider ends.
00:50:626 (4) - Then this part I suggest removing the repeat and adding a 2/1 slider with NC like above. Basically kinda do what you did at 01:44:140 (4)
01:04:744 (7) - Perhaps changing the kiai to end here instead? Won't change much but you won't see kiai at spinner anyways. I want to end the kiai like other diff
01:29:056 (1,1,2) - Perhaps changing your combo to this? It would remove your one note combo and follows music more. http://puu.sh/1IZ6T ok
The 3 is snapped, it's just on a different BPM.
01:33:160 (1) - Add finish to start of slider? You've done it before on the last kiai ok
01:58:258 (1) - End kiai here instead? 01:04:744

Lunatic:
Lower AR by 1? I think it looks a lot better and seems too fast for this low BPM. And SV seems slow for AR9 :s why? it's quite jumpy with average spacing 1.24x, so I think AR 9 is fine
01:03:959 (1) - Perhaps something like this? To keep the flow going and it also won't look ugly by overlapping? Sorry I don't like overlaps (depends) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/554974 b-but, I like this overlap

eLtigreXXx wrote:
hi ^^ m4m

[Easy]

combo colors
01:02:783 (5) new combo ? or 01:04:744 - like this 01:58:258 (1) - ok
01:29:056 (1) remove new combo ok

[lunatica] it's quite confusing, looks like it's a hard diff
00:04:501 - wistle
00:28:634 - http://puu.sh/1Jfcx

thanks for mod
also should I change the creator's name to Dai?

Rei Hakurei

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Rei Hakurei 2013-01-06T09:28:13+00:00

Dai wrote:
thanks for mod
also should I change the creator's name to Dai?

hmmm tergantung ... udah bisa upload as "another creator" soalnya... gw inget di modhelp pernah ada uploader "A" pake creator name dalam bahasa korea...

Doomsday

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Doomsday 2013-01-10T13:42:25+00:00

Dai wrote:
also should I change the creator's name to Dai?

Yeah. Just change the "Beatmap Creator" box to Dai for each diff, and reupload. That should change the name to your new one.

Anyways, timing check!

The timing here is pretty good. Some parts are a little off though. After messing around with the current timing, here is what I got:

BPM: 146.00 Offset: 82
BPM: 148.00 Offset: 9944
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 11565
BPM: 148.00 Offset: 13153
BPM: 151.00 Offset: 22882
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 24471
BPM: 151.00 Offset: 26049
BPM: 150.00 Offset: 35585
BPM: 145.00 Offset: 37185
BPM: 153.00 Offset: 39647
BPM: 134.00 Offset: 91411
BPM: 153.00 Offset: 93166

Also, very nice map! Lunatic is really fun to play. Good luck

Rei Hakurei

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Rei Hakurei 2013-01-11T04:24:14+00:00

Doomsday wrote:
Anyways, timing check!

The timing here is pretty good. Some parts are a little off though. After messing around with the current timing, here is what I got:

BPM: 146.00 Offset: 82
BPM: 148.00 Offset: 9944
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 11565
BPM: 148.00 Offset: 13153
BPM: 151.00 Offset: 22882 it's off by 10ms from here D:
BPM: 152.00 Offset: 24471
BPM: 151.00 Offset: 26049
BPM: 150.00 Offset: 35585
BPM: 145.00 Offset: 37185
BPM: 153.00 Offset: 39647
BPM: 134.00 Offset: 91411
BPM: 153.00 Offset: 93166

Also, very nice map! Lunatic is really fun to play. Good luck

-2ms only i think is enough~
from that unsnapped timing, i can't accept it.. sorry (get 0ms late ~30% mistime)
btw, new timing ?

1. Offset: 82ms	BPM: 146.00
2. Offset: 9,944ms	BPM: 148.00
3. Offset: 11,565ms	BPM: 152.00
4. Offset: 13,143ms	BPM: 148.00
5. Offset: 21,251ms	BPM: 146.00
6. Offset: 22,894ms	BPM: 152.00
7. Offset: 26,051ms	BPM: 151.00
8. Offset: 35,587ms	BPM: 149.00
9. Offset: 37,197ms	BPM: 146.00
10. Offset: 39,662ms	BPM: 153.00
11. Offset: 67,896ms	BPM: 153.00
12. Offset: 91,425ms	BPM: 137.00
13. Offset: 93,176ms	BPM: 153.00
14. Offset: 121,411ms	BPM: 146.00
15. Offset: 131,274ms	BPM: 148.00
16. Offset: 132,895ms	BPM: 152.00

@Noza, cara snap timing yang gampang itu

CTRL+A
geser sedikit objek yang paling depan, ke timing yang baru. (-2ms, geser dikit aja)
preview juga disnap sama bookmark

ntar gw kasih di rumah, males :v

shikyu

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shikyu 2013-01-11T09:35:36+00:00

disuruh mod taiko sama Dai, tapi kayaknya ga ada masalah... so give star~

Dai

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Topic Starter

Dai 2013-01-11T10:50:36+00:00

thanks for the timing Doomsday

shikyu wrote:
disuruh mod taiko sama Dai, tapi kayaknya ga ada masalah... so give star~

perasaan yang nyuruh si lufi deh, anyway thanks for the star

shikyu

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shikyu 2013-01-11T12:16:47+00:00

Dai wrote:
shikyu wrote:
disuruh mod taiko sama Dai, tapi kayaknya ga ada masalah... so give star~
perasaan yang nyuruh si lufi deh, anyway thanks for the star

wut the... 0_o

Rei Hakurei

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Rei Hakurei 2013-01-11T13:53:06+00:00

shikyu wrote:
disuruh mod taiko sama Dai, tapi kayaknya ga ada masalah... so give star~

oh well thanks ^^

JhowM

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JhowM 2013-01-13T00:17:18+00:00

I was going to give you a whole new timing, but I think it is OK this way and many would not agree with me.

So, just a star~

Dai

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Topic Starter

Dai 2013-01-13T03:57:59+00:00

Thank you :3

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-01-13T17:53:44+00:00

Hi from the Queue!

Easy

00:12:354 (7) - NC remove nxt NC
00:30:023 (4) - ^
00:33:202 (4) - ^

Normal

00:55:348 (1) - Remove NC add on next element
02:01:411 (1) - Delete this circle please ,beginners expect after the spinner to not incomm more of elements

Hard

General
No Kiai time parts?

Insane

Nothing

Nothing more, Pm me once its fixed

creampuff

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creampuff 2013-01-13T22:37:46+00:00

hi

update

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-01-13T22:39:11+00:00

@BB: there are kiai parts, but they're kiai fountains. they can be different if there's a GD in the map.

BounceBabe

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BounceBabe 2013-01-14T11:56:21+00:00

Recheck

Normal
01:58:274 (1,1) - Delete this circle and make the spinner longer orz

Hard

Fountains doesnt count as real Kiai time, and it should be similar to the other diffs

Pereira006

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Pereira006 2013-01-26T11:02:56+00:00

Hi !!!!!! mod request in ingame

EDIT:imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General]

The Preview Time is inconsistency only for [ReicollectiOni] : 39662 and another's diff's (easy,norma, etc...) is 39646 should be consistency
The Taiko BG are ugly when you test play the Face satori is hidden with taiko bar this http://puu.sh/1SPDF this makes me frustrated, not only me but for all player too, so better try edit this bg, The Face should bg without hidden taiko bar.
Also the SB for taiko is same not this http://puu.sh/1SPH4, should this http://puu.sh/1SPJQ

[Easy]

Hitsound:

00:39:662 (1) - add whistle in end slider because the melody is really strong here when I listen, so is really fit with melody like you did in Lunatic dif also should fit consistency IMO
00:42:407 (1) - add whistle in start slider because is fit with melody and you consistency
00:43:191 (2) - add whistle in end slider is same explain before like fit melody and consistency you did after and lunatic have it
00:44:367 (4) - add whislte in end slider is really fit melody and you consistency and consistency
00:45:936 (1) - add whistle in repeat slider ? the melody is strong here, is same happened before
00:47:505 (3) - add whistle in end slider is fit melody and you consistency
00:49:073 (2) - ^ same
01:00:054 (3) - add whistle in repeat slider
01:23:568 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider because would fix you consistency and fit melody IMO
01:25:136 (3) - ^
01:36:313 (2) - add whistle in start slider is really fit melody and fix you consistency
01:37:097 (3) - add whistle
01:53:568 (3) - add whislte in repeat slider
01:55:136 (1) - add whistle in end slider

this should be more work, i can see you missing fit melody like lunatic have it, Easy and lunatic is by you so should be consistency hitsound and fit melody, so IMO this more work

Gameplay:

00:05:013 (4) - This part the song start low i mean is change would fit if New combo IMO

pretty good

[suko's Normal]

Hitsound:

00:05:835 (5) - add whistle ? because you missing you consistency
00:24:472 (3,4) - the slider in end the clap don't sense here IMO remove clap in end slider and add clap in (4) because (4) the drums is strong than slider end (3) that fit lot IMO
00:29:626 (1) - the whistle is fit is start slider, you can listen the melody is strong than end slider imo, so add whistle in start slider and remove end slider is better lot IMO
00:32:010 (5) - (5) add whistle is fit with melody IMO
00:55:348 (1) - missing add whistle because you missing consistency and missing fit melody IMO
01:23:176 (6) - missing add clap should fix consistency
01:37:097 (2) - add whislte good fit melody and consistency like you did at 00:43:583 (3) - in start slider
01:40:626 (3) - add whistle in end slider, missing consistency

stuff cool, carefully, some missing consistency better recheck

Gameplay:

00:39:662 (1) - IMO this slider don't fit this melody long, you should try like this 00:52:211 (1) that really fit melody if you fix this you really need remap and spacing at 00:41:230 (2,3,4)
01:04:760 at 01:07:897 () - i dunno this is fine because the hp drain down so wouldn't good to newbie player IMO try add spinner or something IMO

pretty good, all symentric good.

[249's Hard]

Hitsound:

00:00:698 (2) - add whistle in end slider would fit with melody IMO and you consistency
00:33:798 (4) - I dunno why in start slider is normal sampleset ? don't fit with this part relax song, the sampleset need change to auto
00:52:799 (2,2,2) - i don't really like this clap because this don't really fit the drums and melody better remove clap IMO
00:59:073 (2,2,2) - the melody is really strong than drums that would fit with melody so remove clap in start slider and add whistle for all slider in start that would fit melody IMO
01:46:313 (2,2,2,2) - same happened 00:52:799 (2,2,2)
01:52:587 (2,2,2) - same happened 00:59:073 (2,2,2)

stuff cool , but some clap don't fit IMO like this 00:52:799 (2,2,2)
Gameplay:

00:20:440 (4,1) - should be more blanket like this http://puu.sh/1SQnY would be good to gameplay IMO
00:26:248 (1,2,3,4) - really hard to diff hard better unstack and fix spacing so would be good to play and fun IMO
00:28:036 (2) - why don't be symentric with 00:27:242 (7,1,3) like this http://puu.sh/1SQqO better symentric and better g ameplay IMO
00:31:480 (4,5) - move to x360 y:240 would good flow and easy catch here IMO
00:40:446 (4) - bad arc the end point need perfect align with first point so would be good arc slider IMO
00:44:367 (1) - this slider need same shape with 00:43:583 (3) that would be good gameplay IMO
00:52:799 (2,3) - move to x:78 y:168 because the (3) need perfect with 00:52:211 (1) also when test play would good flow here too IMO
01:35:136 (1) - remove new combo because the melody and drums feel like is continue IMO and why don't try same shape with 01:33:960 (1) ? would be good to gameplay IMO
01:41:019 (1) - need same shape with 01:40:038 (2) would be good gameplay IMO

stuff cool, just need improve gameplay

[Lunatic]

song setup:

the bpm is low would fit with AR -1 and HP-1 IMO IMO

Hitsound:

01:13:568 (2) - remove whistle in repeat slider don't good when listen and don't fit you consistency IMO

check many times, the hitsound is really fit here

gameplay:

00:26:348 (4,5) - need perfect align with 00:26:050 (1,2) (need grid 1 down)
00:33:997 (1,3) - move to x:400 y:324 would be good flow and good spacing IMO if you fix this you need fix spacing at 00:33:599 (10)
00:55:348 (3) - weird slider and bad blanket, try good blanket and nice curve like this http://puu.sh/1SQPP if you like my slider here code
```
124,208,55348,2,0,P|84:256|96:340|160:368,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
if you don't like, try nice curve and blanket you owm
00:56:524 (7) - same happened 00:55:348 (3) if you use my code try same shape or you owm same shape also carefully hitsound
01:29:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - pleasse try more symentric and perfect align

stuff cool
[]
really need fix General and the hitsound and gameplay need improve more IMO
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

YTYuyu

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YTYuyu 2013-01-26T18:40:45+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
Hi !!!!!! mod request in ingame

EDIT:imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if without " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[249's Hard]

Hitsound:

00:00:698 (2) - add whistle in end slider would fit with melody IMO and you consistency no because the whistles follow the loud parts in the piano. in other words, the whistle is used for emphasis, not for consistency in this part.
00:33:798 (4) - I dunno why in start slider is normal sampleset ? don't fit with this part relax song, the sampleset need change to auto no then what's the point of the drums? i added that sampleset for that purpose.
00:52:799 (2,2,2) - i don't really like this clap because this don't really fit the drums and melody better remove clap IMO no because it'd feel boring if i use the same clap pattern during gameplay.
00:59:073 (2,2,2) - the melody is really strong than drums that would fit with melody so remove clap in start slider and add whistle for all slider in start that would fit melody IMO no because i find the whistles either unfitting for it doesn't show that much emphasis to the BGM.
01:46:313 (2,2,2,2) - same happened 00:52:799 (2,2,2) same reply
01:52:587 (2,2,2) - same happened 00:59:073 (2,2,2) ^
stuff cool , but some clap don't fit IMO like this 00:52:799 (2,2,2)
Gameplay:

00:20:440 (4,1) - should be more blanket like this http://puu.sh/1SQnY would be good to gameplay IMO i didn't intend this to be a blanket o.o. i did this intentionally to keep the flow steady.
00:26:248 (1,2,3,4) - really hard to diff hard better unstack and fix spacing so would be good to play and fun IMO did something else.
00:28:036 (2) - why don't be symentric with 00:27:242 (7,1,3) like this http://puu.sh/1SQqO better symentric and better g ameplay IMO because doing linear patterns like that isn't that fun for me during gameplay. i made it like this to make the map more fun for players.
00:31:480 (4,5) - move to x360 y:240 would good flow and easy catch here IMO same as 00:26:248.
00:40:446 (4) - bad arc the end point need perfect align with first point so would be good arc slider IMO fixed.
00:44:367 (1) - this slider need same shape with 00:43:583 (3) that would be good gameplay IMO fixed it myself.
00:52:799 (2,3) - move to x:78 y:168 because the (3) need perfect with 00:52:211 (1) also when test play would good flow here too IMO ^
01:35:136 (1) - remove new combo because the melody and drums feel like is continue IMO and why don't try same shape with 01:33:960 (1) ? would be good to gameplay IMO removed the combo, but the flow would feel really awkward if i make this slider the same as the other one.
01:41:019 (1) - need same shape with 01:40:038 (2) would be good gameplay IMO i tried that, and it didn't look symmetrical at all, so i had to adjust it manually for that purpose.
stuff cool, just need improve gameplay ahh yea i agree. i'll see if i can change several patterns up.

really need fix General and the hitsound and gameplay need improve more IMO
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck so pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
Good luck ! and bye bye!

ty for the mod

.

SPOILER

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 39646
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Satori Maiden ~ 3rd eye
TitleUnicode:少女さとり～3rd eye
Artist:ZUN
ArtistUnicode:ZUN
Creator:Dai
Version:249's Hard
Source:Touhou
Tags:lufi10 Rei_Fan49 Byakugan249 Tsusuko Komeiji Satori Subterranean Animism chireiden th11 SA Team Shanghai Alice
BeatmapID:191203
BeatmapSetID:63867

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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328,252,108862,6,0,P|264:296|172:288,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
116,252,109450,1,8,0:0:0
60,196,109646,2,0,P|36:120|68:24,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,44,110234,1,0,0:0:0
216,60,110430,6,0,P|300:72|376:120,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,172,111019,2,0,P|416:216,2,40,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,268,111411,2,0,P|344:360,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,244,111999,6,0,P|188:212|116:248,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,228,112587,2,0,P|44:148|116:80,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,60,113176,1,8,0:0:0
248,68,113372,1,0,0:0:0
316,112,113568,6,0,P|360:172|352:264,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,292,114156,2,0,P|212:320|132:280,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
90,225,114744,2,0,P|90:145,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
136,80,115136,6,0,P|204:48|292:48,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,72,115725,2,0,P|404:152|364:304,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,236,116705,6,0,P|80:236|8:84,1,320,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
80,64,117685,1,0,0:0:0
152,100,117881,1,2,0:0:0
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256,192,118274,12,4,119842,0:0:0
256,192,121411,5,4,0:0:0

Rei Hakurei

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Joined February 2011

Rei Hakurei 2013-01-27T08:01:13+00:00

http://puu.sh/1Tk1C go there.

my preview point is snapped. so i won't change it.
SB shifted down 111px,

Dai

1,632 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Dai 2013-02-02T23:45:53+00:00

Pereira006 wrote:
Hi !!!!!! mod request in ingame

[Easy]

00:45:936 (1) - add whistle in repeat slider ? the melody is strong here, is same happened before I put whistle in the end of slider instead

Gameplay:

00:05:013 (4) - This part the song start low i mean is change would fit if New combo IMO right, but I don't change this one

[Lunatic]

song setup:

the bpm is low would fit with AR -1 and HP-1 IMO IMO why? this setting should make the map more fun to play

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2013-02-05T12:12:28+00:00

From my queue~
modding here~

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Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections. the timing sections(red lines) have different offsets.. they are easy to be checked up by aibat~. :3

　
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1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:45:936 (1) - (highly recommended) personally, i'd like to make this one to 3/2 repeat slider(repeat on red tick) and remove the following circle.. yea it is much more apropos for the music and also plays relaxing and comfortable for newbies.~ and try this position?
  SPOILER
2. 00:58:485 (1,2) - (highly recommended) same pattern as above.~
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3. 01:53:568 (3) - obviously, lengthen the repeat slider to make the repeat on red tick can fit the music much better also, since you used many 3/2 slider on the places where have the same melody, i think that it is also reasonable and suitable you use 3/2 rhythm here~ also the suggestions of positions~ (i adjusted the following slider's shape a bit to guarantee the artistic.~but if you change the next record you can ignore this. :3 oh btw the whistle on that head and repeat also fit the song~
  SPOILER
4. 01:55:136 (1,2) - as the ending part of the whole song.. i recommend that merging these notes to make one 2/1 slider as 01:56:705 (4) . also whistles on that head and tail~ and you can also make these notes (1,2,3) symmetrical shape such like?
  SPOILER
5. 01:58:274 - (emphasis) the empty between the circle and the next spinner looks wired whether in editor or during my test.. how about just convert the circle to a long slider and end at 01:59:842 - , after that delay and shorten the spinner 1/4(or 1/2) tick? yea about the shape of the long slider i think you can freely play to your imagination for the large place~~xp
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:10:754 (4) - the whistle you set here sounds needless and not fit the music very much.. also because it is the third beat of this bar and you used whistles on 2,4 beats as well, removing this one would be sounds much better imo~. :3
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2. 00:28:434 (3) - (emphasis) umm look this.. the whistle on that tail make me feel that is a bit weak.. why not just change the whistle to a finish as the previous pattern you did? oh on the other hand i think the other way to slove that is just removing the hitsound on that slider's tail. silence here also make a good effect.~ just my opinion and you can choose one of them.:p they are all better than present one i think..
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3. 00:38:840 (6) - removing the finish here and just make it silent here sounds better.. the loud hitsound not very suitable for the end of a chapter and there also has few volume we can heard from bgm..

　
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( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:32:407 (1) - looks wired.. i think you can increase the angle of the slider and make the shape like this?
  SPOILER
2. 00:37:813 (4) - (emphasis) firstly the space is so large between the slider (3) and (4), it makes the map not such fluent to play.. on the other hand you missed a downbeat from piano at the red tick 00:37:813. and the skewing note on rhythm which you put on the white tick (4) sounds really wired.. why not just bring forward 1/2 tick and then fix the spacing? the example of rhythm.
  SPOILER
3. 01:03:975 (5) - how about make the shape of the slider to a normal circular arc?.. just looks a bit wired and if you feel the present one is better you can keep it. :p
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4. 01:12:195 (2,3) - the rhythm here sounds a bit awkward since you missed the downbeat at 01:12:587.. i'd prefer to convert the slider (2) to a circle and 1/2 slider, after that, removing the circle (3) then just make a 1/1 slider start at 01:12:587 ~ also has my example~
  SPOILER
5. 01:18:470 (4) - same problem as above.. the downbeat which on the long white tick you missed make the rhythm sounds totally out of the song.. maybe you can try the rhythm here like this~
  SPOILER
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:16:386 (1) - highly recommended i'd perfer to set a extra clap on that repeat~. it is suitable and fit the red tick imo because stressing the segmentation beat here.~ oh, also sounds pretty with the clap on that slider's tail~

　
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Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:15:372 (3) - somehow i feel make a curve on this slider rightward can led a better flow.. yea it's also more comfortable at looking and testing.~
2. 00:35:387 (3,1) - seems not good for the artistic.. i think you can make the circular arc which made up by (2,3) and repeat slider (1) more perfect? orz.. my example~
  SPOILER
3. 00:36:895 - it's reasonalbe for common sence if you filled the rhythm by the way of set a circle here, however i can understand why you not do that because of the difficulty? maybe the 4-circle stream covered by the tail of the reapeat slider seems a bit hard of this diff.. but it is also confused for people. i think you 'd better moving them (2,3,4) to the other place for avoiding the overlap. :p
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4. 01:27:489 (4) - make the slider a bit dextrorotary? for symmetry of slider (1,4).
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 00:00:082 - (highly recommended) umm.. the manage of hitsounds (whistles) managed a bit optionally and so regular imo.. i think it is not good for a instrumental music like this song.. anyway, i am not against the way you used presently, but i still give my way if you don't abandon to try it~ :p
  firstly ignored all whistles you have set.
  00:00:698 (2) - whistle on that tail
  00:01:520 (4) - whistle
  00:01:725 (1) - whistle on that start~
  00:02:342 (2) - whistles on that head and tail.~
  00:03:369 (2) - on that head.
  00:04:191 (1) - on that start and repeat.
  00:05:629 (1) - that tail~
  00:06:040 (2) - and that head. :p
  00:07:273 (3) - also here.
  00:07:479 (5) - head and repeat. :3
  00:08:301 (1) - whistle on that start~
  00:09:123 (3) - here
2. 00:12:157 (1,3) - the hitsounds pattern you used here is so silent and not very suitable for piano imo.. how about trying to set whistles on circle (1) and repeat slider (3)'s start? sounds pretty for me. :3
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3. 00:17:197 (3) - i can understand that why you would like to skip the clap on this slider, but the clap on that repeat sounds really fine and also filling the empty so that it sounds much better for now..~ try it?
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4. 00:20:440 (4) - yea same as above~
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5. 00:23:683 (3) - the clap on that head sounds noisy for me.. since you used finish on the tail of slider 00:22:894 (1) instead of clap, the clap's effect you set at the head of slider (3) is not such good here.. how about removing it?

　
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Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:12:157 (1) - the repeat slider seems so closed with the following circle so that make me feel not balance during my test.. i recommend that moving the slider to x.136 y.60, after that it has a symmetry of slider (1) and the (1) of the next combo. :3
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2. 00:28:831 (6,1) - highly recommended i'd prefer to merge these notes to one 3/4 slider.~ since the piano sound from bgm is persistent, i think it's reasonable and flow better~ try this position?
  SPOILER
3. 00:30:619 (12) - move 2 grid down for a better curve which is made up by 00:29:626 (8,9,10,11,12) - ?
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4. 00:37:197 (1) - yea also for the perfect curve and better flow, move this slider to x.128 y.340 for realizing this.~ (btw don't forget to adjust the spacing on the following stream 00:38:532 (2,3,4,5) - ~
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5. 01:20:038 (6,7,8,9,1) - (emphasis) wrong and inconsistent spacing.
　
Hitsounds
( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
1. 01:41:019 (5) - how about adding a finish to stress the downbeat which on the long white tick~ sounds pretty for me, especially on the second kiai time. :3
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2. 01:53:176 (4) - same as above, try to set finish on that repeat~

d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap or Whistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )

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Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. (highly recommended) rename the diff's name to ReicollectiFutsuu or something else? the things like "/" break the feel of the diff spread imo..
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2. 00:00:082 (1) - comparing the K you used here, i'd prefer to use d as the first note of the whole diff.. you know it's more friendly for begginers of playing taiko, and sounds more reasonable also~.
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3. 00:09:944 (21,22,23,24,25) - maybe kdkkK is more competent on that pattern.?~
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4. 00:12:749 (27) - k? it can work in concert with the previous pattern you used and sounds better ~
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5. 01:36:705 (184,185,186,187,188) - kdk d k?
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6. 01:41:019 (194,195,196,197) - i'd prefer to use d kd d k to plying-up the music~
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7. 01:53:960 (226,227) - umm for the scale of the song i think the rhythm should be kd rather than dk here..

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Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
1. None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
1. 00:31:613 (162,163,164) - would be sounds much better if you use 1/6 here~ i'd prefer kdkk here~
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2. 01:20:248 (71,72,73) - dkd here~
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3. 01:51:019 (236,237,238) - use 1/6 here? kkkd
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4. 01:54:548 (254) - how about change the k to d? just the same pattern with the previous bar sounds not pretty and a bit bored..

　
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nice map anway~ good luck for ranking~

Last edited by Strawberry 2013-03-18T12:47:51+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Rei Hakurei

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Rei Hakurei 2013-02-06T11:45:26+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
From my queue~
modding here~
[ Futsuu]

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
(highly recommended) rename the diff's name to ReicollectiFutsuu or something else? the things like "/" break the feel of the diff spread imo.. no. it doesn't mixable. "Rei_Kan Rei_Tan49", "Muzuhashii Parsee", "ONIon", "Phantaikosm" etc. would be fit as mixes for me.
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00:00:082 (1) - comparing the K you used here, i'd prefer to use d as the first note of the whole diff.. you know it's more friendly for begginers of playing taiko, and sounds more reasonable also~.
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00:09:944 (21,22,23,24,25) - maybe kdkkK is more competent on that pattern.?~ umm nope. it's higher, lower, higher again.
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00:12:749 (27) - k? it can work in concert with the previous pattern you used and sounds better ~ K, following the song
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01:36:705 (184,185,186,187,188) - kdk d k? only applied 187, 185,186 denied
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01:41:019 (194,195,196,197) - i'd prefer to use d kd d k to plying-up the music~ good.
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01:53:960 (226,227) - umm for the scale of the song i think the rhythm should be kd rather than dk here.. umm nope.
[ Taiko Oni]

Unrankable stuff
( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
None!
　
Beatmap design/Suggestion
( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
00:31:613 (162,163,164) - would be sounds much better if you use 1/6 here~ i'd prefer kdkk here~ doesn't match the song btw
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01:20:248 (71,72,73) - dkd here~ dkD (but kinda not sure with the finish, keep it for now)
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01:51:019 (236,237,238) - use 1/6 here? kkkd dkdd
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01:54:548 (254) - how about change the k to d? just the same pattern with the previous bar sounds not pretty and a bit bored.. umm no?
　
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nice map anway~ good luck for ranking~

http://up.ppy.sh/files/zun-greatntrmaiden.zip
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