Red is unrankable, Blue is what I think you should change, Green is just some suggestion.
From AIBat:
[General]
From me:
[General]
From AIBat:
[General]
- The bitrate for Qrispy Joybox feat Sana - Twinkle Wonderland.mp3 is 320 kb/s, which is above the maximum of 192 kb/s. You'll have to change the offset after this.
- Inconsistency in Tags:
- [Futsuu] [Kantan] [Muzukashii] : "pop'n music"
- [Oni] : pop'n music
What's up with those " " ? - Preview point missing
- 00:15:156 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 00:21:060 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:15:638 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:16:117 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:16:436 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
From me:
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- Remove countdown and letterboxes
- HpDrain and OverallDifficulty should not be the same in every diff. How about something like 2, 3, 4, 5 or 3, 4, 5 , 6? (number for the Hp Drain and OD from Kantan to Oni)
- This diff doesn't really look easier than the Futsuu to me, maybe even harder because you follow the beat in a better way on the Futsuu.
- 00:38:296 (1) - should be at 00:38:136 - , it's the same pattern than 00:33:030 (6) - and you can easily ear that it doesn't fit this way.
- 00:38:934 (2) - Remove it? Doesn't fit for the Kantan, there's no big beat nor vocal there.
- 00:21:381 - to 00:30:158 - Why don't you follow the melody here? Would be easier to follow and less boring, something like this: http://puu.sh/1cggw
- 00:46:594 (1) - There's nothing here, the beat and vocal are at 00:46:434 -
- 00:56:487 (1,1) - Move them to 00:56:328 - and 00:56:647 - ?
- 00:38:296 (1) - should be at 00:38:136 - , it's the same pattern than 00:33:030 (6) - and you can easily ear that it doesn't fit this way.
- 00:22:817 - Add a D here to fit to the melody?
- 00:33:190 (3) - You should remove this one, it sounds overmaped to me
- 00:36:860 - Add a note here? Totally fits to the music and makes a better pattern, why not?
- 00:39:413 - Same here
- Well, you're following the beat of the vocal at some parts, it's not really recommended for a taiko, even more an Oni, but I can't find anything to say except this, the map is still pretty good.