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Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
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Sleep Powder
Re

[Normal]
It could be my setting but the hitsounds are a little too loud
01:17:72 (1) - Whistle maybe?

[Hard]
Raise Overall Difficulty o.o

[Insane]
00:26:50 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit confusing for me...
01:17:72 (3) - Whistle? lol I said the same thing for Normal...
01:49:91 (6) - Maybe put this between the spacing between the two sliders...?
02:00:87 (1) - New Combo?
Wojjan
806 posts
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Wojjan

animask wrote:

[Insane]
00:26:50 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit confusing for me...
For me too. Agent won't change it XD
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
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Azure_Kite
I'm not sure why I didn't star this before, as I couldn't finsd anything wrong with it the first time I checked.

Starr'd
minyeob
osu! Alumni
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minyeob
Modding falied...... Nice!

[Insane]
01:19:56 (1) - New combo

Star Combo.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Before anything else, I am biting myself here and saying that this song either requires multiple uninherited offsets or it does not have a constant BPM. I'm getting lates and earlies at different points of the map, even on Normal. With that aside...

[Insane]
00:18:88 (1) - sounds weird without something at 00:18:656
00:55:11 (2) - It's hiding itself imo
01:11:95 (6) - Seems to be covering 7's slider, making me think that 7 was actually just beside 6
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
I like it, star.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
haha really cool beatmap!! :D

Hard to find something wrong :/ but here are my suggestions ^^

[Normal]

00:53:95 (1) - New combo here?
01:04:80 (2) - ^

[Hard]

01:18:87 - (9) New combo?

[Insane]

01:26:95 (10) - New combo?

I think all the diffs are perfectly done =)

Why is this not ranked yet??!! :D

Star*
Film11
52 posts
Joined May 2009
Film11
Great map. Starred.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
Wow... Perfect!

[Normal]
I don't like finish spam in end.
01:25:10 (1) - Whistle only on end of slider.
01:26:49 (4) - Whistle?

[Hard]
All cool.

[Insane]
00:23:84 (7,8) - Nazi. Spacing.

Star!
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
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yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
This... is.. awesome ._.

Insane:
00:23:61 (5,6) - why not make these continue on the same path? I think it plays better to the player :(


Star, YA!
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
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Wojjan
806 posts
Joined August 2008
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Wojjan

Larto wrote:

- The images of the fighters look HORRIBLE. Can you really not get better ones?
Well, there's not much Yie Ar Kung Fu fanart flying around. You know, it being mostly fat men.

that said, fixed it all
GabrielRKF
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GabrielRKF
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Larto
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Joined June 2008
Larto
Bubbled!
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
a bit hard...kinda iffy imo. i told you my concern in IRC

[Hard]
looks fine...


[Insane]
looks fine

starred
Wojjan
806 posts
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Wojjan
yay, no pop. I'd thank you in the first post, but editing that would pop it. So thanks.
RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
I hate popping for things like this, but i have to.

score-x.png numbers and the HP indicator icons are too large. heres an example to show you what I mean.



During the credits, ASH should be spelled out as Agent_Spin_Here, so as to not confuse with another ASH we know.

As for the difficulty spread, I'd recommend tuning down the difficulty sliders in [Normal] by a good number.

Great map! I'd rank it, but there are other important issues you need to attend to.
Wojjan
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Wojjan

RemmyX25 wrote:

During the credits, ASH should be spelled out as Agent_Spin_Here, so as to not confuse with another ASH we know.
I'd rather it stays the same. I don't have that much room in the credits, I'm not the original creator of the text (Starrodkirby did a great deal of images and skinning) and I think the spinner icon that's about 30 pixels away should clear any misunderstandings.
RemmyX25
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Wojjan wrote:

RemmyX25 wrote:

During the credits, ASH should be spelled out as Agent_Spin_Here, so as to not confuse with another ASH we know.
I'd rather it stays the same. I don't have that much room in the credits, I'm not the original creator of the text (Starrodkirby did a great deal of images and skinning) and I think the spinner icon that's about 30 pixels away should clear any misunderstandings.
:|


also more skin comments in IRC blah.

Uh-Oh is still slightly cut off from top and that one digit overlaps the timer circle thing
Wojjan
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Wojjan
Play with bar instead of pie. Problem solved.
No really, I need to resize every number?
mrtn
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Starrodkirby86
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Gens
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Gens
Hey, is the skin finished yet? Cause some stuff still looks ugly.

- The fighter images are too big.
- Maybe force default skin? Some stuff is really screwed if you play this map with other skin, like the spinner-metre.
- Hitcircle needs rounding, you can actually see some empty squares in-game.

More stuff needs to be fixed than above, of course. I'm not a skinning expert, but I can help you if you wish.

Aside from the skin, WOAH THIS SONG IS AWESOME.
Wojjan
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Jinxy
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Jinxy
Finally able to be bothered to star this. Meh.
nooodl_old
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nooodl_old
You're getting a star! Rankable.
vytalibus
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vytalibus
The credits part is cut off by the bottom part. Please adjust it.
Wojjan
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Wojjan
You could've at least starred it. =(
vytalibus
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vytalibus

Wojjan wrote:

You could've at least starred it. =(
I only star maps that are exceptional to me.
Wizard Of Orz
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Wizard Of Orz
meanie ;_;
mtmcl
mtmcl
This is a really well made collab. It actually feels consistent enough in difficulty and technique not to seem disjointed in play. This has been around for a while, hasn't it?

Timing checks out.
Spacing checks out.
Background/storyboarding/skin/visuals look great.
Hitsound diversity checks out.
Preview point is decent.
Reasonable difficulty range.

I think I'm covering my ass enough to bubble this.
RemmyX25
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vytalibus wrote:

The credits part is cut off by the bottom part. Please adjust it.
Quoting for truth, 0_o is cut off.
Oh that's much better.

Other than that, still cringing about ASH but you won't change it so meh.

Will rebubble when fixed.

Rebubbled
CheeseWarlock
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CheeseWarlock
The mapping seems fine. But the skin and SB bug me.

BG images obviously ripped from video, and hence have terrible quality. And then saved as PNG for minimal efficiency. They could probably be vectorized or something?
The score numbers are spaced too close together; you probably need whitespace above or below.
default-1 is taller than the others- intentional?
The ending screen is messy. I'd like to see all five icons and names evenly spaced, with all the icons being the same size.
Some of the punctuation (, . x) could use thicker black borders.
Wojjan
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Wojjan

CheeseWarlock wrote:

BG images obviously ripped from video, and hence have terrible quality. And then saved as PNG for minimal efficiency. They could probably be vectorized or something? I have no idea what you just said.
The score numbers are spaced too close together; you probably need whitespace above or below. I have tried to resize them and everything, and adding whitespace, but this really couldn't be helped in any way.
default-1 is taller than the others- intentional? Fixing
The ending screen is messy. I'd like to see all five icons and names evenly spaced, with all the icons being the same size. I can't fix that anymore.I would have to delete everything, since the offset has changed, and I cant access anything anymore.
Some of the punctuation (, . x) could use thicker black borders. A fault on my part. Well SRK did the default numbers.
Would you please all stop nagging about such minor details? Just because of those nitpicky things I have often thought to just delete the entire skin and SB.
CheeseWarlock
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CheeseWarlock
Well, I'm not good with vectorization/image cleaning, but I opened up Paint.NET and wound up with this. 30kb vs. 900kb, and without any unpleasant JPG artifacts. With Photoshop or Illustrator (or someone better at image cleaning), the lines would be smoother and you could probably get some of the gradient effects the originals seem to have instead of the sharp lines I used. I think LH is good with this sort of thing. Or I could try to get better at it.

Wojjan wrote:

I can't fix that anymore.I would have to delete everything, since the offset has changed, and I cant access anything anymore.
I'm not quite sure what you mean by this. Did you do the storyboarding in Notepad or the SBE? And some of the images aren't being referenced properly... if you like, I could try and fix up the .osb for you.

Wojjan wrote:

Would you please all stop nagging about such minor details? Just because of those nitpicky things I have often thought to just delete the entire skin and SB.
We're just trying to make this map the best it can be. :(
Wojjan
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Wojjan
Well, I did the entire thing in the SBE, because I can't even write a simple hello world program in any language. Sad effect: I needed to change the offset, and now everything is minorly desynced, and I can't change anything anymore, unless I really need to use LOTS of doubles in my SB, like pasting a big white screen over the current credits and starting from scratch again using the same images twice.
On topic of those BG images, I'd like to see the outcome when done in Photoshop.
Shinde
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Shinde
Cleaned up those background images, hopefully to BAT acceptable standards. Resized the score numbers to 80% width/height. (Cept for 5, which was oddly taller, which I took down to 76%) They aren't side by side now, but they're still 1 or 2 pixels onto the pie timer. (If this still isn't good enough and you want me to resize the fonts, give/tell me the font name and I'll see what I can do.) Didn't include a default/hitcircle number 1, which someone said was taller? Sorry bout that, didn't feel like re-rar'ing then uploading again. Also added a black glow to the . x % so it has a thicker black border as CW requested.

SPOILER

That took about 3-4 hours total in Photoshop, lol. ._. Was an interesting learning experience so far as cleaning pixelated images go.

As far as the SB/credit screen goes, good luck.

Edit:
SPOILER
Oh, I almost forgot. Since you have most but not all things skinned, you should probably force Osu as default skin for all difficulties. For example, the spinner itself and the background were skinned, but not the metre. For people using anything but the osu default, this could look really wierd. (My spin metre is blue water atm, so it was like 'What?') I kind of feel you should skin the hitsplashes though since you skinned most everything else. Use that 8-bit font and some sort of simple design. I also attached a black hitcircle I had sitting around that you can use if you'd like. (The background's like white 70% of the time, so I think a black hitcursor's a good choice, besides the 'retro black 8-bit' effect.) If you want any help skinning, I'm always open, and Luigi and awp are also excellent choices, though probably a bit busy. Sorry for the walls of text.

Download: Skin Touchups.rar
Wojjan
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Wojjan
Thank you SO very very much! This saved me a lot of trial and error in Photoshop. Sadly, I can't make the PC this weekend due to ANOTHER unplanned road trip, but I will update this map completely the spit second I get access to my own PC.
I can give you kudosu for that, right?
m980
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Hi Mauris

Anyway

While I have no problem with the Mapset, I question the SB.

Try using the Size Transformation to shrink the images. They're huuuuuuuge, and it looks weird having half of some fat guy on the screen.
"0.PNG", "5.PNG", "1.PNG" aren't used. Delete them.
Why is there "white.png" and "white2.png"? They're the same thing, and there is no need to have both of them.
  1. Go into the osb file in the song folder.
  2. Ctrl+H, find "white2", replace with "white"
Delete "white2.png".

Don't use ASH for Agent Spin Here, some people might mistake him for "Ash".
Wojjan
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Wojjan

m980 wrote:

Hi Mauris
That's actually my brother. My real name is a secret to everyone.

m980 wrote:

While I have no problem with the Mapset (thank you), I question the SB. oh dear...

Try using the Size Transformation to shrink the images. They're huuuuuuuge, and it looks weird having half of some fat guy on the screen. Fixing as soon as I get a chance
"0.PNG", "5.PNG", "1.PNG" aren't used. Delete them. Consider it done
Why is there "white.png" and "white2.png"? They're the same thing, and there is no need to have both of them.
  1. Go into the osb file in the song folder.
  2. Ctrl+H, find "white2", replace with "white"
Delete "white2.png". Thanks for noticing

Don't use ASH for Agent Spin Here, some people might mistake him for "Ash". We've been over this. There's a spinner right next to his name. And the full name is listed in the first post in thread, and is in the tags section of the map. I see no possibility for confusion, except when it's taken out of context.
RemmyX25
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Wojjan wrote:

m980 wrote:

Don't use ASH for Agent Spin Here, some people might mistake him for "Ash". We've been over this. There's a spinner right next to his name. And the full name is listed in the first post in thread, and is in the tags section of the map. I see no possibility for confusion, except when it's taken out of context.
That's two BATs who think Agent Spin Here should be spelled out for the same reason.
Wojjan
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RemmyX25
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You're replacing one image, how does that screw up so much "sync"
Wojjan
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I need to rescale the image because otherwise Agent spin here will be written too tiny. I scaled it when I placed it so it'd fit with the rest, but now I changed offset and can't access my original SB points anymore. I'm sort of a technological dweeb, so notepad editing is out aswell. It would just take way too long for such a minor thing that can be fixed onse you even check the first post in the thread, the beatmap tags or the spinner icon next to it.
Nachy
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Nachy
Awesome map.

Starred.
DJPop
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Wojjan
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DJPop wrote:

Spinner is not centered D=
Intentional, else you couldn't see wether you were spinning or not ;P
RemmyX25
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After a bit of fixes via IRC, and compromises, i'm finally satisfied. :)

Have a strong Remmy Bubble.
Wojjan
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kd for the IRC stuff. I'd post the log if anyone has doubts.
Larto
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YIE AR KUNG FU!

YAI!
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