Static Noise Bird wrote:

I don't think so, nothing wrong here.

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SkyDevil wrote:

uguu I like dkun's part because of the awesome way of using finish hitsounds owo

1. Open each .osu file with notepad and set AudioLeadIn: 2500

1. 00:00:142 (1) - Whistle to emphasize that sound in the music
2. 00:02:337 (1) - Even if you are blanketting this slider with previous one I think it'd be better to make the spacing consistent using distance snap. I suggest you to move it further from 00:00:142 (1), then.
3. 00:05:995 (4) - Same of 00:00:142 (1)
4. 00:07:459 (1) - ^
5. 00:10:385 (4) - New combo
6. 00:26:849 (3) - This slider should be moved further from 00:25:751 (2). Use 0.86x spacing
7. 00:33:069 (x) - I can hear a sound here in the music. You need to add a circle, but it'd be better to add a slider that ends on 00:33:435 (4) removing that circle
8. 00:35:995 (4) - You have to move this slider on x:276 y:124 to improve the blanket with 00:35:629 (3) and symmetry with 00:34:532 (2)
9. 00:40:020 (1,2) - Switch new combo because the vocal sound is increasing in intensity when the slider (2) is starting. It also would be symmetric with 00:38:190 (2,3,4) / (circle-slider-slider-circle on the same combo)
10. 00:44:410 (1) - 0.89x spacing:
    
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    296,132,44410,6,0,P|244:148|200:128,1,100,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    252,56,45142,1,0,0:0:0
    168,36,45507,2,2,P|252:320|324:28,1,800,0|4,0:0|0:1,0:0:0

11. 00:45:507 (3) - New combo would fit better on this slider
12. 00:55:751 (3) - Why normal sampleset? You need to use soft sampleset removing that finish because it sounds really too loud
13. 01:24:288 (4,1) - Switch new combo
14. 01:30:873 (4) - What about to add finish on this slider head to emphasize that clash in the cymbals? But I would reduce its volume, it's too loud atm..maybe 50% would fit perfectly
15. 01:50:081 (1) - Listening the music with 25% playback this slider should be snapped 1/3 later. Mh.. Start this slider on the downbeat 01:49:898 keeping the end on 01:50:630 because we are talking about easy diff. 1/1 is the right is the right choice in these cases
16. 02:13:312 (4) - New combo to keep consistency with previous part
17. 02:39:288 (1) - This spinner end sounds too loud.. I would silence it (reduce till 5%)
18. 02:47:702 (3,4,5) - I don't know but I'd avoid to use this kind of patterns in the easiest diff. It's pretty confusing for beginners to play
19. 03:01:605 (5) - I would use new combo here because of normal sampleset and to warn beginners about that slider with many repeats
20. 03:21:361 (2,3,4) - This patter flows really bad. What about:
    
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    288,296,201361,2,0,P|368:280|392:176,1,200,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    308,208,202459,1,0,0:0:0
    284,124,202825,2,0,P|240:148|220:196,1,100

1. 00:13:678 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a normal
2. 00:44:410 (4) - Mh.. remove whistle from slider body, it sounds bad
3. 01:05:813 (1) - This spinner should start 1/4 later
4. 01:26:666 (1,2,3,4) - I don't understand this rhythm, honestly. Those blue ticks. It should be something like: puu.sh/1EWsK
5. 01:32:337 (1) - You don't need to use whistle on this slider body, remove it
6. 01:54:288 (4) - ^
7. 02:03:434 (1,2) - Stack them properly, this is only a Normal diff and this pattern confuse beginners
8. 02:19:166 - This break is too long. Map something in it please
9. 02:50:263 (4) - Same of 00:44:410 (4)
10. 02:50:995 (1) - It should start 1/2 later
11. 03:02:885 (1) - 1/4 later
12. 03:23:374 (1) - ^
13. 03:26:483 (1) - Forgot finish?
14. 03:29:044 (1,2) - switch new combo according to downbeat and symmetry

1. This is an hard diff, right? Well, you need to reduce AR by 1 or 2 tick and -1 on OD and HP
2. 00:11:849 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/2 removing that circle
3. 00:25:751 (3) - This slider touches HP bar. Move it some grid down
4. 01:20:263 (1,2) - Switch new combo. New vocal section is starting on the downbeat
5. 01:26:300 (4) - Same of 00:25:751 (3)
6. 01:48:800 (7) - ^
7. 02:19:166 - Start the break time on this downbeat

1. 00:23:739 (1) - I don't think using short spinner is the right choice.. I would use some slider and circle here
2. 01:30:873 (5) - Mh I would use new combo here
3. 01:35:263 (1) - why 1/8 snap here? o.o It doesn't fit good. Reduce by 1/8 pls
4. 01:48:434 (8) - New combo
5. 02:06:910 (1) - Remove this circle
6. 02:51:361 (4) - HP bar

Inamaru wrote:

YOLO.
Merry christmas. /super late

Ayu wrote:

I still wonder why nobody said something about the BG yet.

Andrea wrote:

Ayu wrote:

I still wonder why nobody said something about the BG yet.

That's because of the storyboard (: Anyway, time to go now.

Ranked~