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Angie L.C. - Don't Let Me Down (Nightcore Mix)

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hackSL
171 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
hackSL
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 декабря 2012 г. at 2:01:22

Artist: Angie L.C.
Title: Don't Let Me Down (Nightcore Mix)
Tags: remix trance EvilElvisV2 KattyPie
BPM: 170,12
Filesize: 3511kb
Play Time: 02:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2,39 stars, 152 notes)
  2. EvilElvisHard (4,97 stars, 295 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 448 notes)
  4. Normal (4,28 stars, 218 notes)
  5. Pie's Insane (5 stars, 373 notes)
Download: Angie L.C. - Don't Let Me Down (Nightcore Mix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
Insane - ready
Normal - ready
EvilElvisHard - ready
Easy - ready
Pie's Insane - ready

Need hardmod!~!
Last edited by hackSL , edited 14 times in total.
Lou-kun
116 posts
Joined March 2012
Lou-kun
Easy


00:02:732 to 00:16:144 , Leave distance between notes


Normal

00:03:323 Normal don't have streams, Remove one note

Remove streams (Double notes)


Hard

02:04:982 Remove note before spinner, Because the user may fail either the note or the spinner.

Also note after.




Insane


Slider velocity needs to get increased a bit.

02:05:242 Remove note before spinner, Because the user may fail either the note or the spinner.

Also note after.
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,422 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
  1. Offset: 2 412
  2. BPM: 170.125
pregnant_man
2,494 posts
Joined August 2012
pregnant_man
SPOILER
http://puu.sh/1pQJa
Тут 8 ар на случай если ты поставишь 9 в инсе
hackSL
171 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
hackSL

Lou-kun wrote:

Easy


00:02:732 to 00:16:144 , Leave distance between notes -


Normal

00:03:323 Normal don't have streams, Remove one note -

Remove streams (Double notes)


Hard

02:04:982 Remove note before spinner, Because the user may fail either the note or the spinner. -

Also note after.




Insane


Slider velocity needs to get increased a bit.

02:05:242 Remove note before spinner, Because the user may fail either the note or the spinner. -

Also note after.
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
привет~ м4м~

Insane

• Анснапнутые зелёные линии

00:23:925(2,4) - я думаю лучше удалить эти клапы, звучит немного не втему так как основная часть в музыке начинается со следующего большого белого тика
00:58:841 - 01:10:126 - на этом промежутке лучше довавить софт вистлы, звучит неплохо
01:31:287 - 01:32:522 - тут в принципе можно поставить спин, звучит неплохо
01:43:984 - поставь софт финиш
00:13:697 - ^
00:24:983 - ^
00:36:269 - ^
00:46:144(5,7,9) - ^
00:57:430 - ^ Ну и во второй части мапы так же~

Hard

00:24:983 - уффф на харде такое сложновато будет играть, либо замени первый слайдер на ноту на белом тике, либо поставь его в центр, чтобы было удобнее выбивать его после спина
00:27:628 -ремувни нк и поставь на слайдер 2
01:38:165 - ^
01:44:160 - удали эту нотку, после спина неудобно играть
02:16:960(1,3) - стакни чуть лучше

Normal

Единственное что могу сказать это то, что спейсинг 1.2 ну слишком большой для нормала тем более со слайдер велосити 1.4~ Я думаю 0.9-1.0 вполне достаточно~~~

Easy

всё ок~

удачи с ранком~
hackSL
171 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
hackSL

Katty Pie wrote:

привет~ м4м~

Insane

• Анснапнутые зелёные линии +

00:23:925(2,4) - я думаю лучше удалить эти клапы, звучит немного не втему так как основная часть в музыке начинается со следующего большого белого тика +
00:58:841 - 01:10:126 - на этом промежутке лучше довавить софт вистлы, звучит неплохо Над этим я еще подумаю
01:31:287 - 01:32:522 - тут в принципе можно поставить спин, звучит неплохо +
01:43:984 - поставь софт финиш +
00:13:697 - ^ -
00:24:983 - ^ -
00:36:269 - ^ -
00:46:144(5,7,9) - ^ -
00:57:430 - ^ Ну и во второй части мапы так же~ -

Hard

00:24:983 - уффф на харде такое сложновато будет играть, либо замени первый слайдер на ноту на белом тике, либо поставь его в центр, чтобы было удобнее выбивать его после спина +
00:27:628 -ремувни нк и поставь на слайдер 2 +
01:38:165 - ^ +
01:44:160 - удали эту нотку, после спина неудобно играть +
02:16:960(1,3) - стакни чуть лучше +

Normal

Единственное что могу сказать это то, что спейсинг 1.2 ну слишком большой для нормала тем более со слайдер велосити 1.4~ Я думаю 0.9-1.0 вполне достаточно~~~

Easy

всё ок~

удачи с ранком~
Thx.
Update
TicClick
Global Moderator
4,422 posts
Joined February 2011
TicClick
Найди фон 1024х768, заодно попробуй найти mp3-файл, который обрывается не так резко. Как сделаешь, зови на мод, сюда кд не давай.
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
http://puu.sh/1tExd

готово :oops: :oops: :oops:
Saturnalize
1,490 posts
Joined March 2011
Saturnalize
It's sad that you change the bg, the older one fits better, though.
For hackSL's diff, please but sampleset as normal on every addiition normal clap. Sounds better, seriously. Just like your Insane diff.
For EvilEvil's Hard, you have a different kiai times. Consider make it same like other diffs as the only diff that can have a different one is taiko. The other diffs should have the last kiai started at 02:06:556.
=Easy=
1. 00:02:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't think this is a good thing, as all the spacing are the same but actually different. Second, the shape. Why not creating a straight instead?
2. 00:14:403 (2,1) - If you're planning to make a blanket, this isn't a good one. Take a look at (2)'s shape, and (1)'s position. You absolutely want to make something like this, don't you?
SPOILER

136,296,14403,2,0,P|236:274|261:164,2,200,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,200,16166,1,2,0:0:0
68,211,16519,6,0,P|99:127|199:105,1,200
3. 00:33:800 (4) - Orz, make it better, I know this is copypasta slider, but at least make it neater so it blanket the next note nicely.
4. 00:34:858 (1) - Don't you think it's a better thing to make it bend downward instead? Try this! Along with no.3 suggestion.
SPOILER

[size="150"]If you do no.3, don't forget to change 00:30:979 (2,3) -
5. 00:47:555 (1) - I prefer addition normal finish instead of drum whistle at the start of the slider.
6.00:56:019 (1) - Make the start perfectly under 00:53:198 (1) - , please! Looks better.
7. 00:57:430 (3) - Add addition normal finish here, too!
8. 00:58:841 (1) - Add addition normal finish at the start of the slider.
9. 01:01:662 (5) - Make it blanket 01:00:251 (3) - 's end. Highly recommend because it looks neater.
10. 01:10:126 (1) - How about another addition normal finish here?
11. 01:14:359 (4,1,2,3,4) - Try to create a nice curve. Let me help you.We only need to move 3 circles to make neat curve.
SPOILER

152,120,76122,5,2,0:0:0
56,112,76475,1,0,0:0:0
40,208,76827,1,2,0:0:0
12. 01:38:694 (2,3,4) - Now it's your turn. Read number 4, but this time it should blanket 01:42:573 (1) - nicely!
13. 01:42:573 (1) - How about an addition soft finish at the very end of the slider?
14. 01:49:979 (3) - Change the addition to auto, it's your current pattern for this part!
15. 01:56:680 (4,5,6,1) - Why not a trapezium shape? I think you just broke the flow!
SPOILER

272,88,117386,1,0,0:0:0
192,24,117738,1,2,0:0:0

I will mod the rest later.
PLEASE REPLY WHAT YOU DON'T AGREE WITH YOUR EXPLANATION IN ORDER TO HELP ME IMPROVE MY MODDING QUALITY.

I have played your Insane diff and for quick mention, your hitsound at kiai is not catchy. We all know that kiai time is the climax, the part that should be the catchy one. Fear not! This is what I mean : http://puu.sh/1tPlS , check start from 00:47:555. This is an example, but I like the way you play the hitsound. This is extremely optional and up to you since I don't want to ruin your hitsound style.
Good luck.
Chyo-Kun
308 posts
Joined May 2012
Chyo-Kun
Mod request by Katty Pie

[Easy]
00:02:412 (1,2,3,4) - Try to space better those beats,even it this is a easy it doesen't mean that it don't need a good spacing
00:08:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:40:501(6) - Add NC here because 00:38:738 (6) - here it's the same pattern and you added a NC
00:38:738 - 00:38:738 - why this kiai-end kiai? This is the ending of the song,and it needs to be epic!
[Normal]
00:37:680 (6) - Why is this slider here? You're following the vocal,no?
00:49:142 - Add a beat here



00:51:963 - ^



00:57:606 - ^



[EvilElvisHard]

Wow,nothing to say here,i like this diff ;)

[Pie's Insane]

00:03:470 (2) - move 00:03:646 - here
00:06:467 (5) - move 00:06:203 - here
00:09:289 (5) - move 00:09:112 - here
00:12:110 (5) - move 00:11:836 - here
00:21:985 (5) - add NC here?
00:30:273 (5) - ^

[Insane]

This insane is way easier than Pie's Insane,why it is considered the hardest diff in the set? try to fix it (Maybe just my bug lol)
Noting to say expect:
02:03:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i don't really remember,but maybe compìbo that goes over 15 beats are unrankable (i'm not sure)


Beauty mapset ^^ i hope it can get ranked
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
Thank you for mod~ But for me no changes :( :( :(
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,061 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
Hi!

И так, пробегусь по карте. (yeah, not a mod post)

[General]
  1. тик рейт 2! Для всех диф, очевидно же, что там тикает на 1/2 D:
  2. re-snap kiais, because AiBat told me that they're unsnapped.
и традиционный пробег по самой КРИВОЙ дифы в мапсете.
[Pie's Insane]
  1. 00:14:226 (2) - традиционно проебаное нк. Ну нельзя же сделать дифф без анранкабельных ошибок, да? :)
  2. 00:48:966 - ПРОЕБЫВАЙ БИТЫ @ OPPAN УЩЕРБНЫЙ РИТМ (таи такой четкий бит :< даже я услышал)
  3. 02:03:734 (1) - 1/4 же, послушай блин внимательнее музыку.
  4. 02:05:850 - три серкла это эхо, а сильные вокалы мапать уже не нужно? Кому нужен ритм в рит игре, да?

    карта идет вообще отдельно от ритма. Нет ну правда, ОЧЕНЬ много работы предстоит с этой дифой.
no kd, i just mentioned unrankable things/terrible rhythm/obvious mistakes
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
да да, no changes~ thx
Flower
1,723 posts
Joined August 2011
Flower
Hi~ irc request from Katty~

[General]
Add "Katty Pie" to the tags

[Easy]
I think for the bpm, you better reduce SV to 0.8 or reduce DS to 0.8 to make the circles just "tangent to" each other.
use smaller grid for more precise placement.
00:02:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - unreasonable pattern. avoid "scattered" separate circle on non-downbeats. Making them all on white lines fits the music well.
00:17:577 (2) - avoid repeating sliders with more than one repeats cause beginners can't read, and does not fit the music well.
00:23:220 (1) - ^
00:24:983 - finish
00:25:336 (2) - strange. you should either add normal clap to all following patterns, or remove them.
00:29:215 (1) - same as 00:17:577 (2) -
00:34:858 (1) - ^
01:02:720 (5) - better avoid overlap in Easy.

[Normal]
bad difficulty spread. this is actually Hard level, due to relatively high SV and jumps.
Either remap, or recognize this as Hard and make a new Normal.

[EvilElvisHard]
The jump is Insane level. Just make jumps look better and easier to read.
In addition, you should check all notes that is stacked under sliders.
00:09:289 (6,7) - make them on the same line
00:10:876 (3) - move down 1 grid to keep it from overlapping with previous notes
00:21:456 (3,4,5,6) - a bit confusing jump. imo move 00:22:162 (5) - out of the slider is better.
00:48:084 (2,3) - move right 1 grid
01:00:780 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - not beautiful nor appropriate to read. make the notes flow in counterclockwise makes it play betters.
01:04:307 (5,1) - switch NC
01:32:698 (1,2,3,4) - confusing as well.
01:46:100 (4,5,6,1) - confusing.
01:58:973 (2,3) - exchange position
01:49:274 (1,3) - switch NC

[Pie's Insane]
00:20:398 - imo D finish is better?

[Insane]
00:36:093 (5) - N clap?
00:36:269 - N finish
01:03:778 - a bit boring. make sound effect: 01:03:778 - none; 01:03:954 - D whistle.
01:55:270 - N finish

Good luck~
hackSL
171 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
hackSL

Loli Cjj wrote:

It's sad that you change the bg, the older one fits better, though.
For hackSL's diff, please but sampleset as normal on every addiition normal clap. Sounds better, seriously. Just like your Insane diff.
For EvilEvil's Hard, you have a different kiai times. Consider make it same like other diffs as the only diff that can have a different one is taiko. The other diffs should have the last kiai started at 02:06:556.
=Easy=
1. 00:02:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - I don't think this is a good thing, as all the spacing are the same but actually different. Second, the shape. Why not creating a straight instead?
2. 00:14:403 (2,1) - If you're planning to make a blanket, this isn't a good one. Take a look at (2)'s shape, and (1)'s position. You absolutely want to make something like this, don't you?
SPOILER

136,296,14403,2,0,P|236:274|261:164,2,200,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,200,16166,1,2,0:0:0
68,211,16519,6,0,P|99:127|199:105,1,200
3. 00:33:800 (4) - Orz, make it better, I know this is copypasta slider, but at least make it neater so it blanket the next note nicely.
4. 00:34:858 (1) - Don't you think it's a better thing to make it bend downward instead? Try this! Along with no.3 suggestion.
SPOILER

[size="150"]If you do no.3, don't forget to change 00:30:979 (2,3) -
5. 00:47:555 (1) - I prefer addition normal finish instead of drum whistle at the start of the slider.
6.00:56:019 (1) - Make the start perfectly under 00:53:198 (1) - , please! Looks better.
7. 00:57:430 (3) - Add addition normal finish here, too!
8. 00:58:841 (1) - Add addition normal finish at the start of the slider.
9. 01:01:662 (5) - Make it blanket 01:00:251 (3) - 's end. Highly recommend because it looks neater.
10. 01:10:126 (1) - How about another addition normal finish here?
11. 01:14:359 (4,1,2,3,4) - Try to create a nice curve. Let me help you.We only need to move 3 circles to make neat curve.
SPOILER

152,120,76122,5,2,0:0:0
56,112,76475,1,0,0:0:0
40,208,76827,1,2,0:0:0
12. 01:38:694 (2,3,4) - Now it's your turn. Read number 4, but this time it should blanket 01:42:573 (1) - nicely!
13. 01:42:573 (1) - How about an addition soft finish at the very end of the slider?
14. 01:49:979 (3) - Change the addition to auto, it's your current pattern for this part!
15. 01:56:680 (4,5,6,1) - Why not a trapezium shape? I think you just broke the flow!
SPOILER

272,88,117386,1,0,0:0:0
192,24,117738,1,2,0:0:0

I will mod the rest later.
PLEASE REPLY WHAT YOU DON'T AGREE WITH YOUR EXPLANATION IN ORDER TO HELP ME IMPROVE MY MODDING QUALITY.

I have played your Insane diff and for quick mention, your hitsound at kiai is not catchy. We all know that kiai time is the climax, the part that should be the catchy one. Fear not! This is what I mean : http://puu.sh/1tPlS , check start from 00:47:555. This is an example, but I like the way you play the hitsound. This is extremely optional and up to you since I don't want to ruin your hitsound style.
Good luck.
Сhanged everything
hackSL
171 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
hackSL

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Mod request by Katty Pie

[Easy]
00:02:412 (1,2,3,4) - Try to space better those beats,even it this is a easy it doesen't mean that it don't need a good spacing +
00:08:054 (1,2,3,4) - ^ +
00:40:501(6) - Add NC here because 00:38:738 (6) - here it's the same pattern and you added a NC +
00:38:738 - 00:38:738 - why this kiai-end kiai? This is the ending of the song,and it needs to be epic! Can't understand what u want :S
[Normal]
00:37:680 (6) - Why is this slider here? You're following the vocal,no? +
00:49:142 - Add a beat here +



00:51:963 - ^ +



00:57:606 - ^ +



[EvilElvisHard]

Wow,nothing to say here,i like this diff ;)

[Pie's Insane]

00:03:470 (2) - move 00:03:646 - here -
00:06:467 (5) - move 00:06:203 - here -
00:09:289 (5) - move 00:09:112 - here -
00:12:110 (5) - move 00:11:836 - here -
00:21:985 (5) - add NC here? -
00:30:273 (5) - ^ -

[Insane]

This insane is way easier than Pie's Insane,why it is considered the hardest diff in the set? try to fix it (Maybe just my bug lol)
Noting to say expect:
02:03:734 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i don't really remember,but maybe compìbo that goes over 15 beats are unrankable (i'm not sure)


Beauty mapset ^^ i hope it can get ranked
pregnant_man
2,494 posts
Joined August 2012
pregnant_man
Thank you for mods guys C:
SPOILER
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Don't Let Me Down.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 47556
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 126604,137898
DistanceSpacing: 1.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Don't Let Me Down (Nightcore mix)
TitleUnicode:Don't Let Me Down (Nightcore mix)
Artist:Angie L.C.
ArtistUnicode:Angie L.C.
Creator:hackSL
Version:EvilElvisHard
Source:
Tags:remix trance EvilElvisV2 KattyPie
BeatmapID:191351
BeatmapSetID:64752

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"wallpaper-1781150.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,81612,91948
2,121288,122984
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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125113,-133.333333333333,4,3,0,75,0,0
126524,-100,4,3,0,75,0,1
137809,-100,4,3,0,75,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,148,40
Combo2 : 191,0,191
Combo3 : 240,0,120

[HitObjects]
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464,161,130435,1,2,0:0:0
465,256,130611,6,0,P|455:299|356:276,1,160
358,192,131140,2,0,P|356:150|364:79,2,80,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
453,194,131669,1,0,0:0:0
358,193,131846,1,2,0:0:0
453,194,132022,1,0,0:0:0
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2,182,132727,2,0,P|161:221,1,160
209,321,133256,2,0,P|105:289,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
314,271,133609,6,0,P|363:194,2,80,0|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
275,182,134138,2,0,P|267:129|276:21,1,160
190,68,134667,2,0,P|117:119,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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234,236,135549,2,0,P|389:170,1,160
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504,52,136431,1,0,0:0:0
335,92,136607,2,0,P|295:76|258:45,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,149,136960,6,0,P|266:319,1,160
176,272,137489,1,2,0:0:0
266,309,137665,1,0,0:0:0
176,272,137841,1,4,0:1:0
hackSL
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hackSL

Flower wrote:

Hi~ irc request from Katty~

[General]
Add "Katty Pie" to the tags

[Easy]
I think for the bpm, you better reduce SV to 0.8 or reduce DS to 0.8 to make the circles just "tangent to" each other.
use smaller grid for more precise placement.
00:02:412 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - unreasonable pattern. avoid "scattered" separate circle on non-downbeats. Making them all on white lines fits the music well. +
00:17:577 (2) - avoid repeating sliders with more than one repeats cause beginners can't read, and does not fit the music well. +
00:23:220 (1) - ^ +
00:24:983 - finish+
00:25:336 (2) - strange. you should either add normal clap to all following patterns, or remove them.+
00:29:215 (1) - same as 00:17:577 (2) - +
00:34:858 (1) - ^ +
01:02:720 (5) - better avoid overlap in Easy. +

[Normal]
bad difficulty spread. this is actually Hard level, due to relatively high SV and jumps.
Either remap, or recognize this as Hard and make a new Normal. -

[EvilElvisHard]
The jump is Insane level. Just make jumps look better and easier to read.
In addition, you should check all notes that is stacked under sliders.
00:09:289 (6,7) - make them on the same line
00:10:876 (3) - move down 1 grid to keep it from overlapping with previous notes
00:21:456 (3,4,5,6) - a bit confusing jump. imo move 00:22:162 (5) - out of the slider is better.
00:48:084 (2,3) - move right 1 grid
01:00:780 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - not beautiful nor appropriate to read. make the notes flow in counterclockwise makes it play betters.
01:04:307 (5,1) - switch NC
01:32:698 (1,2,3,4) - confusing as well.
01:46:100 (4,5,6,1) - confusing.
01:58:973 (2,3) - exchange position
01:49:274 (1,3) - switch NC

[Pie's Insane]
00:20:398 - imo D finish is better?

[Insane]
00:36:093 (5) - N clap? -
00:36:269 - N finish +
01:03:778 - a bit boring. make sound effect: 01:03:778 - none; 01:03:954 - D whistle. -
01:55:270 - N finish+

Good luck~
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Saturnalize
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Saturnalize
Before I continue, please don't kd this post as I already get kd.

=Normal=
I agree with Flower, this diff is too hard. Don't mess with the spacing as it's one of the most important thing in mapping. This is normal diff, and the music bpm is quite high. Spacing should be 1.0x. It's okay to have an overlap 1/2's, because 1/2 in normal are rarely used for triple circle. Also, consider still using simple beat here. Following e-piano is a bad thing for normal, I'm afraid.
1. 00:05:233 (1) - Move behind 00:04:704 (3) - 's end. Don't give such a big spacing at this time. This apply on 00:08:054 (1) - ; 00:10:876 (1) -
2. 00:17:930 (2,3,4,5) - I'm not sure if this is okay. Make something like this :
3. 00:23:572 (2,3,4,5) - ^
4. 00:35:916 (1,2) - Stack this with 00:36:269 (3) - , please.
5. 00:47:555 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - This is too hard! Consider make this simpler by following this beat :
Why did I recommend you to follow this so much? First, it's simple. Second, it still follows the vocal. If you're going to follow the e-piano, the beat is surely getting faster, in other words, harder. Please consider doing this or create such a simple, short pattern on every kiai times.
6. 00:59:722 (3,4,5,6) - By removing a note and move another one, you can still follow e-piano nicely, and absolutely not hard! You're also cutting the length of the slider stream. :
7. 01:43:631 (1,2) - Stack this with 01:43:984 (3) -
8. 01:45:218 (5,6,7) - You can make this follow vocals! : http://puu.sh/1uc6b

Trully need more, more attention. I'm serious. Please re-check this diff and make it easier. All of those suggestion are highly recommended.

=EvilElvisHard=
Like what I mention before, this diff MUST have the same kiai times like other diffs.
Second, I won't blame about beat, but now your spacing is trully Insane-wannabe. I like it if it was EvilElvisInsane instead. Seriously!
No, I can't resist those spacing, you must, must, do something about this! The choice is yours, EvilElvis. I don't want to say to remap this, but the situation says so. Your flow is great, though, but not for hard diff.

=Pie's Insane=
1. I beg you to remove all the triplet like 00:59:193 (6,7,8) - from the beatmap. It doesn't fit to the music!
2. 02:06:556 (1) - Where's the soft finish at the beginning?

=Insane=
1. 01:55:975 (3) - No finish pls.
2. 02:00:207 (1) - How about a symmetry by copypasta 01:59:502 (5) - ?

That's all for now.
PLEASE REPLY WHAT YOU DON'T AGREE WITH YOUR EXPLANATION IN ORDER TO HELP ME IMPROVE MY MODDING QUALITY.
Good luck.
Chyo-Kun
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Chyo-Kun

hackSL wrote:

00:38:738 - 00:38:738 - why this kiai-end kiai? This is the ending of the song,and it needs to be epic! Can't understand what u want :S
I mean,let the kiai start there and make it end ad the end of the song,you can't let the final part without kiai,because in others you added one xD
XinCrin
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(Nightcore mix) ------> (Nightcore Mix)

fix the tittle plz

No kd por this
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Aleks719
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^ prav
riffy
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бтв, АР на нормале до 5 повысить можно спокойно. даже лучше станет. Ну и все кроме размера нот +2 - тоже.
hackSL
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update~~~
pregnant_man
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Ok.
[Insane]
Приглуши хс , хотя бы в начале (уж слишком они громкие ) (на моей диффе тоже раз ты их сам делал )
00:47:202 (9) - серкл после на красный тик и финиш на него если поставишь
SPOILER
00:43:234 (2) - я бы делитнул
Нк :
SPOILER
00:15:108 (5) - поставить
00:21:633 (5) - поставить
00:33:448 (6) - ^
01:39:752 (1) - убрать ,а тут 01:40:457 (4) - поставить было бы логичнее
02:07:614 (5) - поставить
02:10:964 (5) - ^
02:13:256 (4) - ^
02:16:078 (4) - ^
[Pie's Insane]
00:24:278 (5) - слишком дохуя много финишей и вообще не нравятся эти слайдеры которые хуйня у тебя по карте разбросанны , если не делитнишь их хотя бы уменьши колличество финишей на них
00:38:914 (5) - приглуши финиши в подобных моментах
01:17:709 (2) - серкл после
01:19:120 (6) - ^
(я не стал отмечать некоторые места в которых ты пропускаешь белые тики , думаю ты сама догадаешся :DD где , надо их вставить ладно , я надеюсь на это
Но хотя бы ровно(с)
Да кстати в сб не нравятся эти моменты : 00:58:841 (4) - 01:01:662 (1) - 01:04:307 (2) - 01:07:129 (2) - не к месту иммо
Это все.
TicClick
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Открываю папку, вижу: http://puu.sh/1EGBG. Избавься от этого.
Открываю файл name.png, вижу какие-то непонятные артефакты: http://puu.sh/1EGEF. От них тоже хорошо бы избавиться.

На этом всё, перехожу к дифкам.

[Easy]
OD +1, HP +1, AR +1
  1. Первую секцию сделай 55%, хлопки слишком громкие для этого участка
  2. 00:14:403 (2,1) - можно сделать, чтобы поаккуратней оборачивались вокруг ноты, точно по аппроачу
  3. 00:20:046 (1,3) - аналогично, они кривовато вставлены, да ещё и с разным спейсингом
  4. 00:29:215 (1) - удали со среднего повтора хлопок, он не вписывается в музыку
  5. 00:58:841 — максимум, что тут можно сделать, — фонтан, киай не подходит (во всяком случае, я бы не ставил, эта часть не такая «сильная», как прошлая, и не подходит на роль припева). Обратно его можно включить на 01:10:126
  6. Новые комбо должны быть у 01:04:484 (2) и 01:01:662 (4); сними с 01:03:073 (1)
  7. 01:32:698 — сделай эту секцию тише, хлопки слишком громкие по отношению к музыке
  8. 01:36:930 (1) - убери средний хлопок?
  9. 01:42:573 (1) - ^
  10. 01:48:569 (2) - ^
  11. 02:06:556 — киай должен начинаться точно на слайдере и быть полноценным, как и первый припев, а не просто фонтаном
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:110 (2) - убери перерыв после неё (кликни правой кнопкой мыши по надписи "Break" на ленте времени
  2. 00:25:336 (1) - я бы посоветовал убрать, чтобы было легче крутить спиннер
  3. 00:35:740 (5,6,7,1) - нет. Ты ставишь половинные ноты после небольшой паузы, плюс они начинаются с красного тика, а не с белого. Либо удали первую из них, либо замени их все на слайдер с повтором (такой же по длине)
  4. 00:36:269 (1) - финиш
  5. 00:58:841 — максимум, что тут можно сделать, — фонтан, киай не подходит (см. мод к изи)
  6. 01:01:662 (1,2,3) - ноты после слайдера свалены в кучу, некрасиво
  7. 01:19:649 (2) - можно немного выгнуть: http://puu.sh/1EGUg
  8. 01:32:698 — опять слишком громкая секция
  9. 01:35:167 (2) - пропущен хлопок
  10. 01:43:984 (1) - пропущен финиш
  11. 01:49:274 (6,7,1) - мне кажется, они немного кривовато смотрятся рядом с прошлым слайдером
  12. 01:55:270 (1) - пропущен финиш
  13. 02:06:556 — киай должен начинаться точно на слайдере и быть полноценным, как и первый припев, а не просто фонтаном
  14. 02:08:672 (5,1,3) - это такая каша, что даже каша. Крмое топтания на одном и том же месте, слайдеры друг друга перекрывают и идут по примерно одной и той же области. Перемапай этот кусок, как будет время.
[EvilElvisHard]
Убавь громкость процентов на пятнадцать-двадцать.
  1. 00:08:231 (4) - новое комбо пропустил (по идее, оно должно быть там, где кончается прошлый слайдер)
  2. 00:09:289 (6,7) - нет. Таких джампов в начале, да ещё на спокойном куске, быть не должно.
Дифку, скорей всего, придётся переделать, так как она вся сделана в таком стиле. Как инс подошла бы, но тут их уже два, поэтому прыжки на твоей совести. Если время будет, перемапай обязательно, избавься от большинства прыжков. По паттернам особых вопросов, кажется, нет.

Где-то на этом моменте я нажал "Preview", а ещё через полчаса у меня ёбнул блок питания, и половина текста потерялась, поэтому напишу вкратце, что там было.

[Pie's Insane]
Дифка очень напоминает поделки осуплеера, та же копипаста и отзеркаливание. Ничего серьёзного, но до смерти скучно и иногда не подходит по движению мыши (мифический «флоу»): бывает, слайдеры выгнуты не туда, куда потом движется курсор. Яркий пример — 01:47:863 (1,2,3,4), где слайдеры просто втупую накопированы.

Где-то на киае идёт бессмысленный овермап триплами, плюс сами оффсеты, включающие/отключающие киай (и начало, и концы), надо приделать ровно на белые тики, не раньше и не позже. В некоторых местах пропущены финиши там, где они в музыке.

[Insane]
  1. Реверсни 00:15:813 (3) и 00:28:510 (3), чтобы игрались лучше.
  2. По киаю те же замечания, что и к изи и нормалу. Сюда же — то, что начало слишком громкое для музыки.
  3. 00:41:559 (5,6,7,8,9) - овермап, заглушенный стрим. Выкидывай
  4. 00:51:610 (6,7,8,9,1) - некрасиво. И вообще, весь киай у тебя тоже зачем-то усыпан триплами, когда их нет в музыке
  5. 01:18:943 (2,3) - третий неудобно играть, перемапай
  6. 01:50:861 (1,2,3,4,5) - не нравится вообще за счет трипла и слайдеров, которые длинней, чем надо по музыке
  7. 02:15:725 (3,1,3) - этот кусок тоже неприятно играть
Вообще, когда я говорю «неприятно/неудобно играть», то подразумеваю, что приходится делать движения либо неестественные, либо резко противоположные тому, как хотелось бы двигаться руке. Это можно исправлять ремапом, поворотом или (в особо простых случаях) реверсом или перегибом слайдеров.

Пост не особенно детальный (влом писать по второму разу, уж извините), много явных ошибок, нужна работа и моды.
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