Sorry that the recheck took so long, atm I have not that much time.
[Taiko recheck]
01:04:778~01:05:636 - Follow here the vocal to have some breaks for the players. Would also prevent the stream too look like the same the whole time.
01:08:207~01:09:064 - ^
00:17:636 (1) - You could use here a finisher and delete at 00:17:743 one note. Doing the same in similiar parts would be advisable.
00:28:028 (11) - Make this better to a d, because having a k as ending in 1/6 and begin with a k at 1/4 dosen't feel well when you play it.
00:31:136 (3,4) - This is good.
00:51:064 (1,2) - Also good.
00:54:493 (1,1,2) - This is 1/6, like the other patters you used before. But it would be probably better if you use a big don/kat again as you did before ^ and because you used at 01:01:350 - a 1/6 as transition to the next part.
01:35:636 - This not eshould be in the same SV like the whole stream.
01:36:493 (2,1,2,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1) - Au. I think using two plet pattern would be good. The dripplets are kind of akward? At least to me they are.
01:52:993 (2,3,4,1) - k kkd is hard to play because of alternaiting. Delete 01:53:153 (4) - note?
02:00:386 (2) - Mayve d, because of previous said reason. Obviously kat fit's better, but don't forget what feels better to play.
02:10:457 (1,1,2) - You used this pattern really rarely and it is hard to play. Consider this.
02:47:636 (1) - This is unrankable. You must change it because of the taiko rules. It's snapped to 1/2, but it's a 280 BPM song, so hard to play.
03:56:099 (3,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^
04:23:634 - the kiai should have at this place a break.
As you can see, I didn't said much about the patterns since I don't like to change them from someone. Those said things are more basic things.
Good luck with reapproval.