mrtn wrote:

[easy]
no problems

thx^@^

[normal]
00:15:06 (6,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
00:57:99 - reinsert break
01:20:56 (11,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap

fixed, thx. i just know spinner and note cannot be overlap:"b so sorry.

[hard]
00:54:57 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:06 (1) - ^
00:57:49 - reinsert break
01:26:90 (1) - spinner end point isn't snapped to a beat

fixed, thanks a lots^@^

starred

alvisto wrote:

Wow ! Finally doing a Map !

Star this first, mod later, need to rush CWU. T_T

Cya.

hunter_87 wrote:

i like this song.. hopefully u won't let me down..

thx a lots wish that this song will be ranked soon!!!
definitely won't let u down de^@^
thank u.

animask wrote:

[Easy]
00:06:06 (1,2,3,4) - Add Finish hitsounds
00:12:07 (1,2,3,4) - Add Hitsounds
00:25:23 (3) - Move 3 here
00:30:06 (2) - Add Finish hitsound
00:38:06 (6) - Add whistles?
00:39:23 (1) - Add Finish
00:49:56 (4) - Add a Finish at the end of the slider.
01:08:57 (1) - Add a Finish
01:19:40 (1) - ^
01:22:06 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Add Hitsounds

fixed. sound well^@^

[Normal]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (5) - Add Finish at the beginning of the slider

fixed. sound well^@^

[Hard]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:07:06 (1) - ^
00:08:73 (4) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:12:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (4) - ^

fixed. sound well^@^

[Insane]
00:06:06 (1) - Add a Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:06 (1) - ^ at the end of the slider
00:18:57 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of the notes are hard to follow starting here

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:

SPOILER

Combo mod:
00:44:73 (5) - new combo? (this combo seemed unnecessarily long)

fixed well^@^ thx a lots!!!

Normal:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
00:48:57 (4) - I don't hear anything snap to the quarter notes here. I would turn this into a half beat long slider to fit the song (I did not understand what the earlier quarter notes were snapped to in the song, but it could just be a problem on my side. As a result, I won't talk about this in the later difficulties)

Combo mod:
00:41:57 (1) - remove new combo for consistency

fixed well^@^ i think that part music i ok, isnt it? therefore i remain unfixed

Hard:

SPOILER

Normal mod:
00:08:73 (4) - spacing?

combo mod:
00:46:73 (4) - new combo

fixed well^@^

Insane:

SPOILER

combo mod:
00:48:40 (4) - new combo to show change in timing
00:48:73 (7) - ^

fixed well^@^

Nice map. Star.

x3ns0r wrote:

thanks for the pm

i'll check it right away and
will edit this post with my mods

[edit]{mods}

ALL difficulties:

BPM = 144 yea i know bpm analyzer says 90 but the speed isn't doubled when it increases at 6,000)
offset is 625 (spot on)
after changing this go over every beat cuz almost all fall on blue ticks (they must fall on red or white)
also check the spacing after fixing the timings

i had try the BPM144 and offset 625, but it did not sounds match to the point
i adjust the according red and white stick, but there is tempo problem. therefore i keep remain my own BPM and offset.
thanks a lots for your suggestion, however it is not work well.

gdeath wrote:

Hi!alvisto's friend is my friend~

OoO. how u know i am alvisto's friend that means you also are my friend now!!! hello friend! nice to meet u!!!

modding time!
try using grid level 3 to make map

yes sir initially i only use grid level 2. however finally i had change to use grid level 3. thanks for remind^@^


[EASY]
Care to make this as long as other diffs

i do it on purpose to show the different among diffs

[NORMAL]
00:56:73 (7) make it end on 00:57:43.it sounds better.if you do,plz fix the break time

i had tried for that, but i prefer original idea because is special and reasonable. thanks for your suggestion^@^!

[HARD]
00:54:56 (3) spacing(change the location of (1) and (2) is okay

fixed well^@^ thx a lots!!!

[INSANE]
00:20:31 (5) one level 3 grid to the down
00:28:81 (5) one level 3 grid to the left

fixed^@^ wao! you really have a supervision! 1mm also can pick up the mistake. lol

that's all i can find.great map.fight!
starry*

rust45 wrote:

[Hard]
Those 1/4 streams have got to go, just too much for a hard. The stacks are fine but the streams are a little too much. Also, drain rate down by at least one please.

i agree with you that the begin part is too tough for hard. so i had did the correction. therefore about the HP drain rate i maintain because i had reduce the difficulty of hard^@^ thanks for your suggestion.

[Insane]
It just fine, just saying I'm am dumbstruck by how hard it is.

even myself also cannot play this insane without fail^@^ however i had find some top player to test. the results is well and interest for them. try we our best to improve to become a insane player in the future, lol

Star for you.

ztrot wrote:

easy:
Fine~
normal: uggh
okay look you can't have that many hidden beats.(in a normal) you should try a few new patterns. It's too confusing.
The map seems good but I'm really tired. oh by the way Good job <3
offset could use about a -10ms to it.
I'll look at this again after a few mods get to it.

fixed and remade for new patterns and formation thank you very much!!!
wish this map can be ranked soon thanks

Ryuukun wrote:

[All]
-Add Source and Tags

fixed

-How about a different BG color?
White would be fitting since the BG picture is mostly white too.

fixed^@^

-There is a big diff gap between Easy and Normal.
Normal is Hard and a real Normal doesn't exists.

i already modify twice to reduce the difficulty of normal. some player claim that the normal is too easy. i think now the normal is quite standard. so nothing i can do upon it

[Easy]
No problems

thanks^@^

[Normal]
Too Hard for Normal but expect from that i couldn't find any unrankable things

thanks^@^

[Hard]
Many of the streams look forced.
Many of them doesn't even fit with the song.

fixed

[Insane]
00:00:73 (1,2,3) - i understand what you intended with those 3 but it just sounds awful

I don't like Insane at all.
It feels like you had to do something Insane, no matter what.
Most streams doesn't fit in (half the song basically) and it sounds like
the map is made for a different song.

insane i had totally modify it in a big project i think now should be better than before!

Dunno but i don't really want to star it as it is now.
This map has potential though.

please try to have a look again and if you think ok then you can vote this for a star
thank you very much!!!

naruti wrote:

POW

??? can i know what is this means

alan_629_6 wrote:

naruti wrote:

POW

??? can i know what is this means

naruti wrote:

alan_629_6 wrote:

naruti wrote:

POW

??? can i know what is this means

POW > Shoots a star XD
only thing i could think about overal hitsound volume + 1 on everything <_< nothing much

o ok! thank you very much!!!

1. Fine.

1. Lower Overall Difficulty plox :3.

1. 00:48:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Overstacking? lol.

1. Fine.

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my promised mod:

[Easy]
This small area here was a little confusing; since the beats landed nowhere near lyrics, which would make it hard for new players to follow it at all.

SPOILER

00:23:40 (2) - Move to 00:23:07.
00:24:07 (3) - Move to 00:23:57, then place a note here, preferably over the 00:24:73 Hit Circle.
00:25:40 (2) - Move back 1/2 Beat, then lengthen by 1/2 beat.

fixed. thanks

[Normal]
00:28:32 (4) - move to 00:28:40.
00:56:73 (7) - Reverse two more times, then resize the break.

fixed. i had try two more reverse, but the original one sounds better so i remain.

[Hard]
00:21:98 - Place a note here
00:22:07 - Place a note here
00:36:73 - I think this should be it's own combo (Suggestion)

fixed well the suggestion i had took!!!

[Insane]
No Problems Found

Overall, I love this beatmap; Added to my favourites because it's Abingdon Boys School ;p

thank you very much

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Easy]

1. Fine.

thanks

[Normal]

1. Lower Overall Difficulty plox :3.

erm...dont understand overall difficulty already level 3, very low and you want me to lower somemore???

[Hard]

1. 00:48:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Overstacking? lol.

i had no more idea to modify it is it cannot put it like this??? unrankable?

[Insane]

1. Fine.

thanks

Mystearica wrote:

Holy stacks 0.0

[Easy]

Fine.

[Normal]

Parts of the map had spacing that felt random to me, but I think it's your style of doing things so I would suggest that you go through your map and add some new combos to make playing a bit more intuitive. If you don't do anything it still should be fine after a couple plays though.

before this actually i had added more combo..because they comment that this normal map is too hard for ''normal'' player, therefore i cut down many part to make it easier. sorry for that random spacing. however i try my best to fix it for spacing to make it more fluent to play and interest thanks for your information!!!

[Hard]

Some of those stacks felt pretty...I don't know what to say. Nothing against them though, since it also appears to be your own style of mapping. I'm fine with that.

before that also there is a comment similar with this i had no idea to replace the stack...therefore i remain. or may be you can provide some idea upon it thank you!!!

[Insane]

I guess I won't go nazi here, it's ok.

Have a star.

thanks a lots

kingcobra52 wrote:

Offset: 6,066

i use 731 according to your offset because my insane start earlier than 6066 i am not sure for the timing, any professional idea from anyone???

-The mp3 ends kind of abruptly. Is there any way you can soften it up with audacity or a similar program?

fixed however dont know is ok or not???

Normal

00:48:56 (3) - Remove the clap at the end. Same with 00:56:73 (7)

fixed

Hard

00:37:48 (10) - Remove this. Adjust the spinner accordingly.
01:22:06 (1,2) - Start 2 on the white tick. End both on the white tick.

fixed

Insane

00:37:48 (10) - See hard.
01:22:07 (1,2) - ^

fixed

Still not too confident on timing, but it's a start. *star*

Alace wrote:

Overall
Hitsounds are too random you put claps on wrong place
they sound really bad to me
00:17:73 is the start of claps (adding clap per 2 divisors is better)
Also
your whistle pattens are kinda random


Hard and insane are really overmapped too many 1/4 divisors Orz
For example
<Hard>
00:36:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Orz
If you need help
PM me in game

thank you very much Alace after my exams i will discuss with about how to improve this map^@^ thanks!!!

bmin11 wrote:

[Easy]
No problems found

thanks

[Normal]
Please increase the overall

fixed^@^

[Hard]
00:21:39 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - delete claps
00:40:73 (4) - clap
00:56:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - delete claps and whistle
01:07:39 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^ I really don't like the claps, sorry...

fixed

[Insane]
00:41:06 (1) - minor spacing issue
00:54:06 (3) - new combo, so everybody can see that the spacing has changed
00:54:89 (7) - ^

fixed well^@^

Wonder why the BG is out-focused at the begining and ending
Starred~

kingcobra52 wrote:

Normal

00:56:73 (7) - Some weird sounds on this repeat. Just having something on the end would be good.

Fix that, consider bmin11's fixes, and you can have a bubble.

all fixed thank you very much!!! thank you!!!

kingcobra52 wrote:

Try 715 for the offset.

The slider I pointed out earlier still needs work. Make it like 00:48:54 (3)

all fixed but is it the offset is the correct one? because i had try it but i will get many 100 instead of 300...don't know what to do? helpT.T
thank you very much in helping me a lots

kingcobra52 wrote:

Have a bubble.

thank you very much thank you thank you thank you thank you

MittenMasterzz wrote:

Very very fun, been waiting for somone to map somthing D.GreyMan
<3 <3 <3 <3
Star

thank you^@^ waiting really needs very patient..still waiting for someone BAT to see my map

Sir Minelli wrote:

[Easy]

Seems ok.



[Normal]

00:58:04 - I feel that this could use a beat before the break begins.
01:27:71 (1) - How about finishing this one at the white tick?



[Hard]

Lowering the hp drain a bit for this difficulty wouldn't hurt. It has the same hp drain as [Insane]



[Insane]

01:10:88 (1) - Too close to previous (6)

thanks for your modding however while i had a bubble, therefore i can't make any correction on that. otherwise the bubble will pop so i keep your comment until BAT ask me to correct it ok? thanks!

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
not much of an ending, otherwise ok

[Normal]
k

[Hard]
k...

[Insane]
ah w/e ranked

Thank you very much really thanks a lots!!!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Timing is completely wrong. De-rank this map omg!

Mystearica wrote:

111 is right, your timing is very off.

I'd suggest trying +57, this played the best for me but meh. I'm not very good at this either but using at least +50 played much much better.

deepsea wrote:

Got +55 offset and confirmed by andre leimi and tear, set it atm.

I can't get BPM with my laptop so hold unrank atm. >_>

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mys is right too. 50+ timing for sure.

for the problem of offset, i think i can't do the correction now unless a BAT tell me to do it. if not the tragedy as before will happen again. i know that i can't do the correction but only the people who in charge can do the correction once the map had been ranked. so sorry to you all but be patience when waiting for the correction

MegaManEXE wrote:

Um

I guess I'm the only one who had no problems with the timing >_>

LOL this called variation. actually my offset was suggeseted by BAT and other modding players. therefore i think this is really passive issue to be discussed. anyway wish you all enjoy this map!!! thank you MegaManEXE

Cyclone wrote:

+40

Trust me on this.

i really confuse on that one +50 one +40...this is all up to BAT decision! i can't do anything. sorry

alan_629_6 wrote:

Cyclone wrote:

+40

Trust me on this.

i really confuse on that one +50 one +40...this is all up to BAT decision! i can't do anything. sorry

alvisto wrote:

alan_629_6 wrote:

Cyclone wrote:

+40

Trust me on this.

i really confuse on that one +50 one +40...this is all up to BAT decision! i can't do anything. sorry

FYI, deepsea and cyclone are BATS. XD

opps i just notice that! LOL..sorry. then how should i do? can i correct it myself? or wait for the osu! boss to correct it???

Cyclone wrote:

BATs take care of everything.

Cyclone wrote:

It's already taken care of.

ok thank you very much!!! thanks a lots!!!