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Topic Starter
thx u^@^ because u all are willing to help me so i can come out a nice beatmap. thx a lots!!!Symbolic wrote:
[Easy]
Pretty fast Slider Velocity for an [Easy], if you want, change it to 1,00 or 1,20. After that do Timing > Recalculate Slider Lengths and check if all liders are the correct length.
fixed well^@^ thx
00:46:73 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:23:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:24:73 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:26:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:27:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:28:73 (1) - Remove new combo.
some combo i reserve because it is more colourful, but some i did edited^@^ thx a lots!
[Normal]
00:34:56 (7) - Put this 1/4 later (on the red tick).
00:35:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:36:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:36:73 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:40 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:23 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:25:40 (1) - Extend this to 01:30:069.
fixed perfectly! excellent^@^ thx!!!
[Hard]
Set Overall Difficulty 1 harder.
Set HP Drain Rate 2 harder.
01:22:06 (1) - This is not allowed/rankable because the slider overlaps itself, change the shape a bit or storyboard an arrow which way the slider will go.
01:26:90 (1) - Extend this to 01:30:069.
fixed, thx u very much^o^
Very nice job for your first beatmap
Starred *
hope i can get this map in ranking list!
I dunno about offset... Probably it's wrong ...
[Easy]
[Easy]
SPOILER
[Normal]00:39:236 - Add a note.
00:49:903 - ^
00:49:569 (4) - 1/4 forward and expand 1/4.
00:55:403 (4) - New combo.
01:19:403 (6) - ^
01:29:903 - Add a note.
00:49:903 - ^
00:49:569 (4) - 1/4 forward and expand 1/4.
00:55:403 (4) - New combo.
01:19:403 (6) - ^
01:29:903 - Add a note.
SPOILER
[Hard]Raise Overall Difficulty a bit.
There's too much copy & paste here... It's just boring.
00:14:069 (5) - Expand 1/4.
00:14:903 (6) - 1/2 forward.
01:25:403 (1) - Start this spinner 01:24:903 and finish 01:27:403.
There's too much copy & paste here... It's just boring.
00:14:069 (5) - Expand 1/4.
00:14:903 (6) - 1/2 forward.
01:25:403 (1) - Start this spinner 01:24:903 and finish 01:27:403.
SPOILER
~StarryRAISE OVERALL DIFFICULTY.
00:25:716 (1,2) - Expand 1/4.
00:30:549 - Add a note.
00:30:716 (10) - Delete.
00:57:153 - (6,7,8) - Delete.
01:07:819 - (9,10,11) - ^
00:25:716 (1,2) - Expand 1/4.
00:30:549 - Add a note.
00:30:716 (10) - Delete.
00:57:153 - (6,7,8) - Delete.
01:07:819 - (9,10,11) - ^
Topic Starter
dont worry^@^ i think Mafiamaster get the more appropriate offset already, he is a expert!!! thx.fartownik wrote:
I dunno about offset... Probably it's wrong ...
[Easy]SPOILER[Normal]00:39:236 - Add a note.
00:49:903 - ^
00:49:569 (4) - 1/4 forward and expand 1/4.
00:55:403 (4) - New combo.
01:19:403 (6) - ^
01:29:903 - Add a note.SPOILER[Hard]Raise Overall Difficulty a bit.
There's too much copy & paste here... It's just boring.
00:14:069 (5) - Expand 1/4.
00:14:903 (6) - 1/2 forward.
01:25:403 (1) - Start this spinner 01:24:903 and finish 01:27:403.SPOILER~StarryRAISE OVERALL DIFFICULTY.
00:25:716 (1,2) - Expand 1/4.
00:30:549 - Add a note.
00:30:716 (10) - Delete.
00:57:153 - (6,7,8) - Delete.
01:07:819 - (9,10,11) - ^
Topic Starter
fixed well. thx a lots^@^fartownik wrote:
I dunno about offset... Probably it's wrong ...
[Easy]SPOILER00:39:236 - Add a note.
00:49:903 - ^
00:49:569 (4) - 1/4 forward and expand 1/4.
00:55:403 (4) - New combo.
01:19:403 (6) - ^
01:29:903 - Add a note.
fixed, thx^@^
[Normal]SPOILERRaise Overall Difficulty a bit.
There's too much copy & paste here... It's just boring.
00:14:069 (5) - Expand 1/4.
00:14:903 (6) - 1/2 forward.
01:25:403 (1) - Start this spinner 01:24:903 and finish 01:27:403.
fixed, thx. no choice, this is normal beatmap. therefore the formation i set is more easy to catch up. anyway, thx for ur suggestion.
[Hard]SPOILER~StarryRAISE OVERALL DIFFICULTY.
00:25:716 (1,2) - Expand 1/4.
00:30:549 - Add a note.
00:30:716 (10) - Delete.
00:57:153 - (6,7,8) - Delete.
01:07:819 - (9,10,11) - ^
hi alan_629_6
sorry for the late mod
中文应该也应该可以的吧...?
well,here's some suggestion:
[Easy]
looks fine
nice map
star!
sorry for the late mod
well,here's some suggestion:
[Easy]
- slider tick rate : 1
- slider velocity seem to be a little high to a easy diff. anyway, it's not a big problem
others looks fine
- 00:15:069 (6) - 1/4 tick farward, spinner too
00:19:069 (4,5,6) - looks confused, maybe just for me- 01:27:403 - add finish, delete clap
looks fine
nice map
star!
Topic Starter
thx u very much^@^ wish that my beatmap can be ranked soon!Breeze wrote:
hi alan_629_6
sorry for the late mod中文应该也应该可以的吧...?
我知道你你是alvisto的朋友。你好，我是他好朋友！
well,here's some suggestion:
[Easy]fixed, i think u got the older version^@^ because there are other people correct for this already. lol
- slider tick rate : 1
- slider velocity seem to be a little high to a easy diff. anyway, it's not a big problem
others looks fine
[Normal]fixed well, thx^@^
- 00:15:069 (6) - 1/4 tick farward, spinner too
00:19:069 (4,5,6) - looks confused, maybe just for me- 01:27:403 - add finish, delete clap
[Hard]
looks fine
nice map
star!
Nice D.G map~
Heres my mod~
Turn up the volume?
[easy]
Overall diff is a little bit low,turn 1 or 2 lv. high?
Use distance snap and change distance spacing to 0.5x?
00:38:07(6)-move it to 00:38:24,end here 00:38:90?
01:16:74(5)-put it right under 4?
01:22:07(1,1,1,1...)-remove some new combo?
[normal]
00:13:74(4)-align with 3?
00:15:40(1)-start here 00:15:07?
00:18:74(3)-move close to 2?(nazi)
00:42:90(1)-right place?
00:47:24(x)-add a note here?
00:48:57(6)-end here 00:49:40,and add a note 00:49:57?
00:56:74(7)-end here 00:57:40,and add a note 00:57:57,00:57:82?
01:14:07(5)-replace by a reavese slider start here 01:14:07,end here 01:14:74?
01:14:40(1)-remove spinner,add a slider start here01:15:07,end here 01:15:24?
01:16:74(2,3,4,5,6)-clap?
01:19:40(5,6,7,8,9)-^
[hard]
01:16:74(2,3,4,5,6)-clap?
01:19:40(5,6,7,8,9)-^
star~
Heres my mod~
Turn up the volume?
[easy]
Overall diff is a little bit low,turn 1 or 2 lv. high?
Use distance snap and change distance spacing to 0.5x?
00:38:07(6)-move it to 00:38:24,end here 00:38:90?
01:16:74(5)-put it right under 4?
01:22:07(1,1,1,1...)-remove some new combo?
[normal]
00:13:74(4)-align with 3?
00:15:40(1)-start here 00:15:07?
00:18:74(3)-move close to 2?(nazi)
00:42:90(1)-right place?
00:47:24(x)-add a note here?
00:48:57(6)-end here 00:49:40,and add a note 00:49:57?
00:56:74(7)-end here 00:57:40,and add a note 00:57:57,00:57:82?
01:14:07(5)-replace by a reavese slider start here 01:14:07,end here 01:14:74?
01:14:40(1)-remove spinner,add a slider start here01:15:07,end here 01:15:24?
01:16:74(2,3,4,5,6)-clap?
01:19:40(5,6,7,8,9)-^
[hard]
01:16:74(2,3,4,5,6)-clap?
01:19:40(5,6,7,8,9)-^
star~
Topic Starter
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[easy]
no problems
[normal]
00:15:06 (6,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
00:57:99 - reinsert break
01:20:56 (11,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
[hard]
00:54:57 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:06 (1) - ^
00:57:49 - reinsert break
01:26:90 (1) - spinner end point isn't snapped to a beat
starred
no problems
[normal]
00:15:06 (6,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
00:57:99 - reinsert break
01:20:56 (11,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
[hard]
00:54:57 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:06 (1) - ^
00:57:49 - reinsert break
01:26:90 (1) - spinner end point isn't snapped to a beat
starred
Topic Starter
thank u very much(^.^) finally i had completed the insane. if got time please have a look on it. thx!!!mrtn wrote:
[easy]
no problems
thx^@^
[normal]
00:15:06 (6,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
00:57:99 - reinsert break
01:20:56 (11,1) - slider and a note are not allowed to overlap
fixed, thx. i just know spinner and note cannot be overlap:"b so sorry.
[hard]
00:54:57 (1) - remove new combo
00:56:06 (1) - ^
00:57:49 - reinsert break
01:26:90 (1) - spinner end point isn't snapped to a beat
fixed, thanks a lots^@^
starred
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Topic Starter
thanks a lots^@^ wish u luck and quickly done ur CWU la!alvisto wrote:
Wow ! Finally doing a Map !
Star this first, mod later, need to rush CWU. T_T
Cya.
Topic Starter
thx a lotshunter_87 wrote:
i like this song.. hopefully u won't let me down..
wish that this song will be ranked soon!!!definitely won't let u down de^@^
thank u.
[Easy]
00:06:06 (1,2,3,4) - Add Finish hitsounds
00:12:07 (1,2,3,4) - Add Hitsounds
00:25:23 (3) - Move 3 here
00:30:06 (2) - Add Finish hitsound
00:38:06 (6) - Add whistles?
00:39:23 (1) - Add Finish
00:49:56 (4) - Add a Finish at the end of the slider.
01:08:57 (1) - Add a Finish
01:19:40 (1) - ^
01:22:06 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Add Hitsounds
[Normal]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (5) - Add Finish at the beginning of the slider
[Hard]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:07:06 (1) - ^
00:08:73 (4) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:12:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (4) - ^
[Insane]
00:06:06 (1) - Add a Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:06 (1) - ^ at the end of the slider
00:18:57 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of the notes are hard to follow starting here
00:06:06 (1,2,3,4) - Add Finish hitsounds
00:12:07 (1,2,3,4) - Add Hitsounds
00:25:23 (3) - Move 3 here
00:30:06 (2) - Add Finish hitsound
00:38:06 (6) - Add whistles?
00:39:23 (1) - Add Finish
00:49:56 (4) - Add a Finish at the end of the slider.
01:08:57 (1) - Add a Finish
01:19:40 (1) - ^
01:22:06 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Add Hitsounds
[Normal]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (5) - Add Finish at the beginning of the slider
[Hard]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:07:06 (1) - ^
00:08:73 (4) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:12:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (4) - ^
[Insane]
00:06:06 (1) - Add a Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:06 (1) - ^ at the end of the slider
00:18:57 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of the notes are hard to follow starting here
Easy:
Normal:
Hard:
Insane:
Nice map. Star.
SPOILER
Combo mod:
00:44:73 (5) - new combo? (this combo seemed unnecessarily long)
00:44:73 (5) - new combo? (this combo seemed unnecessarily long)
Normal:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:48:57 (4) - I don't hear anything snap to the quarter notes here. I would turn this into a half beat long slider to fit the song (I did not understand what the earlier quarter notes were snapped to in the song, but it could just be a problem on my side. As a result, I won't talk about this in the later difficulties)
Combo mod:
00:41:57 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
00:48:57 (4) - I don't hear anything snap to the quarter notes here. I would turn this into a half beat long slider to fit the song (I did not understand what the earlier quarter notes were snapped to in the song, but it could just be a problem on my side. As a result, I won't talk about this in the later difficulties)
Combo mod:
00:41:57 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
Hard:
SPOILER
Normal mod:
00:08:73 (4) - spacing?
combo mod:
00:46:73 (4) - new combo
00:08:73 (4) - spacing?
combo mod:
00:46:73 (4) - new combo
Insane:
SPOILER
combo mod:
00:48:40 (4) - new combo to show change in timing
00:48:73 (7) - ^
00:48:40 (4) - new combo to show change in timing
00:48:73 (7) - ^
Nice map. Star.
Topic Starter
fixed. insane i had modified already!animask wrote:
[Easy]
00:06:06 (1,2,3,4) - Add Finish hitsounds
00:12:07 (1,2,3,4) - Add Hitsounds
00:25:23 (3) - Move 3 here
00:30:06 (2) - Add Finish hitsound
00:38:06 (6) - Add whistles?
00:39:23 (1) - Add Finish
00:49:56 (4) - Add a Finish at the end of the slider.
01:08:57 (1) - Add a Finish
01:19:40 (1) - ^
01:22:06 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Add Hitsounds
fixed. sound well^@^
[Normal]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (5) - Add Finish at the beginning of the slider
fixed. sound well^@^
[Hard]
00:06:06 (1) - Add Finish
00:07:06 (1) - ^
00:08:73 (4) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:12:40 (1) - ^
00:14:07 (4) - ^
fixed. sound well^@^
[Insane]
00:06:06 (1) - Add a Finish
00:08:73 (5) - ^
00:11:40 (1) - ^
00:14:06 (1) - ^ at the end of the slider
00:18:57 (1,2,3) - The rhythm of the notes are hard to follow starting here
thx u very much:"D thx!!!
Topic Starter
thx u very much for your star^@^ thx a lots!!!blissfulyoshi wrote:
Easy:SPOILERCombo mod:
00:44:73 (5) - new combo? (this combo seemed unnecessarily long)
fixed well^@^ thx a lots!!!
Normal:SPOILERNormal mod:
00:48:57 (4) - I don't hear anything snap to the quarter notes here. I would turn this into a half beat long slider to fit the song (I did not understand what the earlier quarter notes were snapped to in the song, but it could just be a problem on my side. As a result, I won't talk about this in the later difficulties)
Combo mod:
00:41:57 (1) - remove new combo for consistency
fixed well^@^ i think that part music i ok, isnt it? therefore i remain unfixed
Hard:SPOILERNormal mod:
00:08:73 (4) - spacing?
combo mod:
00:46:73 (4) - new combo
fixed well^@^
Insane:SPOILERcombo mod:
00:48:40 (4) - new combo to show change in timing
00:48:73 (7) - ^
fixed well^@^
Nice map. Star.
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Topic Starter
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This map is good 
Although I don't know why you find me to mod this map. lol
but this is good and enjoy for me.
About spacing, I think it's no big problem when I play. XD
About hitsound... I am not good in hitsounds. Orz
but I think I can accept, that...... should be not big problem in this. 0.0
so I only have a problem:
It's start too early in [Insane]. 0.0
I think you should add Lead-in... 1 second to 2 seconds is fine. XD
That's all. XD
Stared. <3
And sorry for my poor English and mod. +_+
Although I don't know why you find me to mod this map. lol
but this is good and enjoy for me.
About spacing, I think it's no big problem when I play. XD
About hitsound... I am not good in hitsounds. Orz
but I think I can accept, that...... should be not big problem in this. 0.0
so I only have a problem:
It's start too early in [Insane]. 0.0
I think you should add Lead-in... 1 second to 2 seconds is fine. XD
That's all. XD
Stared. <3
And sorry for my poor English and mod. +_+
Topic Starter
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thanks for the pm 
i'll check it right away and
will edit this post with my mods
[edit]{mods}
ALL difficulties:
BPM = 144 yea i know bpm analyzer says 90 but the speed isn't doubled when it increases at 6,000)
offset is 625 (spot on)
after changing this go over every beat cuz almost all fall on blue ticks (they must fall on red or white)
also check the spacing after fixing the timings
i'll check it right away and
will edit this post with my mods
[edit]{mods}
ALL difficulties:
BPM = 144 yea i know bpm analyzer says 90 but the speed isn't doubled when it increases at 6,000)
offset is 625 (spot on)
after changing this go over every beat cuz almost all fall on blue ticks (they must fall on red or white)
also check the spacing after fixing the timings
Topic Starter
i had try the BPM144 and offset 625, but it did not sounds match to the pointx3ns0r wrote:
thanks for the pm
i'll check it right away and
will edit this post with my mods
[edit]{mods}
ALL difficulties:
BPM = 144 yea i know bpm analyzer says 90 but the speed isn't doubled when it increases at 6,000)
offset is 625 (spot on)
after changing this go over every beat cuz almost all fall on blue ticks (they must fall on red or white)
also check the spacing after fixing the timings
i adjust the according red and white stick, but there is tempo problem. therefore i keep remain my own BPM and offset.
thanks a lots for your suggestion, however it is not work well.
Hi!alvisto's friend is my friend~
modding time!
try using grid level 3 to make map
[EASY]
Care to make this as long as other diffs
[NORMAL]
00:56:73 (7) make it end on 00:57:43.it sounds better.if you do,plz fix the break time
[HARD]
00:54:56 (3) spacing(change the location of (1) and (2) is okay
[INSANE]
00:20:31 (5) one level 3 grid to the down
00:28:81 (5) one level 3 grid to the left
that's all i can find.great map.fight!
starry*
modding time!
try using grid level 3 to make map
[EASY]
Care to make this as long as other diffs
[NORMAL]
00:56:73 (7) make it end on 00:57:43.it sounds better.if you do,plz fix the break time
[HARD]
00:54:56 (3) spacing(change the location of (1) and (2) is okay
[INSANE]
00:20:31 (5) one level 3 grid to the down
00:28:81 (5) one level 3 grid to the left
that's all i can find.great map.fight!
starry*
Topic Starter
thanks^@^ really thx you very much! i will try my best to get this map get into rank as soon as possible!!!gdeath wrote:
Hi!alvisto's friend is my friend~
OoO. how u know i am alvisto's friendthat means you also are my friend now!!! hello friend! nice to meet u!!!
modding time!
try using grid level 3 to make map
yes sir
[EASY]
Care to make this as long as other diffs
i do it on purpose to show the different among diffs
[NORMAL]
00:56:73 (7) make it end on 00:57:43.it sounds better.if you do,plz fix the break time
i had tried for that, but i prefer original idea because is special and reasonable. thanks for your suggestion^@^!
[HARD]
00:54:56 (3) spacing(change the location of (1) and (2) is okay
fixed well^@^ thx a lots!!!
[INSANE]
00:20:31 (5) one level 3 grid to the down
00:28:81 (5) one level 3 grid to the left
fixed^@^ wao! you really have a supervision! 1mm also can pick up the mistake. lol
that's all i can find.great map.fight!
starry*
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Topic Starter
thanks a lot^@^rust45 wrote:
[Hard]
Those 1/4 streams have got to go, just too much for a hard. The stacks are fine but the streams are a little too much. Also, drain rate down by at least one please.
i agree with you that the begin part is too tough for hard. so i had did the correction. therefore about the HP drain rate i maintain because i had reduce the difficulty of hard^@^ thanks for your suggestion.
[Insane]
It just fine, just saying I'm am dumbstruck by how hard it is.
even myself also cannot play this insane without fail^@^ however i had find some top player to test. the results is well and interest for them. try we our best to improve to become a insane player in the future, lol
Star for you.
easy:
Fine~
normal: uggh
okay look you can't have that many hidden beats.(in a normal) you should try a few new patterns. It's too confusing.
The map seems good but I'm really tired. oh by the way Good job <3
offset could use about a -10ms to it.
I'll look at this again after a few mods get to it.
Fine~
normal: uggh
okay look you can't have that many hidden beats.(in a normal) you should try a few new patterns. It's too confusing.
The map seems good but I'm really tired. oh by the way Good job <3
offset could use about a -10ms to it.
I'll look at this again after a few mods get to it.
Topic Starter
fixed and remade for new patterns and formationztrot wrote:
easy:
Fine~
normal: uggh
okay look you can't have that many hidden beats.(in a normal) you should try a few new patterns. It's too confusing.
The map seems good but I'm really tired. oh by the way Good job <3
offset could use about a -10ms to it.
I'll look at this again after a few mods get to it.
thank you very much!!!wish this map can be ranked soon
thanks[All]
-Add Source and Tags
-How about a different BG color?
White would be fitting since the BG picture is mostly white too.
-There is a big diff gap between Easy and Normal.
Normal is Hard and a real Normal doesn't exists.
[Easy]
No problems
[Normal]
Too Hard for Normal but expect from that i couldn't find any unrankable things
[Hard]
Many of the streams look forced.
Many of them doesn't even fit with the song.
[Insane]
00:00:73 (1,2,3) - i understand what you intended with those 3 but it just sounds awful
I don't like Insane at all.
It feels like you had to do something Insane, no matter what.
Most streams doesn't fit in (half the song basically) and it sounds like
the map is made for a different song.
Dunno but i don't really want to star it as it is now.
This map has potential though.
-Add Source and Tags
-How about a different BG color?
White would be fitting since the BG picture is mostly white too.
-There is a big diff gap between Easy and Normal.
Normal is Hard and a real Normal doesn't exists.
[Easy]
No problems
[Normal]
Too Hard for Normal but expect from that i couldn't find any unrankable things
[Hard]
Many of the streams look forced.
Many of them doesn't even fit with the song.
[Insane]
00:00:73 (1,2,3) - i understand what you intended with those 3 but it just sounds awful
I don't like Insane at all.
It feels like you had to do something Insane, no matter what.
Most streams doesn't fit in (half the song basically) and it sounds like
the map is made for a different song.
Dunno but i don't really want to star it as it is now.
This map has potential though.
Topic Starter
please try to have a look again and if you think ok then you can vote this for a starRyuukun wrote:
[All]
-Add Source and Tags
fixed
-How about a different BG color?
White would be fitting since the BG picture is mostly white too.
fixed^@^
-There is a big diff gap between Easy and Normal.
Normal is Hard and a real Normal doesn't exists.
i already modify twice to reduce the difficulty of normal. some player claim that the normal is too easy. i think now the normal is quite standard. so nothing i can do upon it
[Easy]
No problems
thanks^@^
[Normal]
Too Hard for Normal but expect from that i couldn't find any unrankable things
thanks^@^
[Hard]
Many of the streams look forced.
Many of them doesn't even fit with the song.
fixed
[Insane]
00:00:73 (1,2,3) - i understand what you intended with those 3 but it just sounds awful
I don't like Insane at all.
It feels like you had to do something Insane, no matter what.
Most streams doesn't fit in (half the song basically) and it sounds like
the map is made for a different song.
insane i had totally modify it in a big projecti think now should be better than before!
Dunno but i don't really want to star it as it is now.
This map has potential though.
thank you very much!!!
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.
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Osz. File Check (Done)
[Easy] (Done)
[Normal] (Done)
[Hard] (Done)
[Insane] (Done)
Overall: Well, the map itself doesn't need a lot of work, but there are things to take a good look into. Make sure to check into the background issue as well. And for [Easy], you have a good idea of how to make it easy, but you want to avoid making it too simple. Try adding a few notes and sliders with 1/2 to see if it can be a bit better. For the harder difficulties, you want to make sure to have a "balance" between the difficulties as a huge jump from [Easy] to [Normal] can be unpleasent for new players. For [Insane], you're getting on the right track to make it hard, but make sure to avoid forcing notes where it can't fit with the map and the song. Make sure to take the time now to look over the map and see what you can add or change in them. Not trying to bash at your map, i'm just trying to be as helpful as possible. I'll drop my star in then.
Detailed Modding Go!
Osz. File Check (Done)
SPOILER
Video: Yes
SB (Story Board): Yes (Why is the background image set as a SB object? Did you try using"Insert Background" from "design"?
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes (Read about the SB comment above.)
[Current] Size: 6.26 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes (Could have some more Tags in than just the anime name.)
SB (Story Board): Yes (Why is the background image set as a SB object? Did you try using"Insert Background" from "design"?
Custom Skin: No
Background: Yes (Read about the SB comment above.)
[Current] Size: 6.26 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes (Could have some more Tags in than just the anime name.)
[Easy] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 180.000 / 6,072 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 (Might be a bit high for an "easy" difficulty. But, its up to you to change it to 1 or keep it as is.) / 1.00 (This looks a bit fast for an "easy" difficulty...)
Distance Snap Average: x0.5 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 59 ( 43 Circles / 15 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 134
[Current] Max Score: 96,244
[Current] Star Rating: 0.59
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6 This may be a bit high for [Easy]. Try lowering this to level 4 at least or 3.)
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.1
00:08:07 (?) - A note can be placed here.
00:08:73 (3) - A new combo can start here.
00:38:07 (6,1) - This can easily confuse a new player as with the fact they have to catch the note right after the slider. Try to figure out a way to make it more simple and easier to read.
00:46:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from here.
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:08:57 (1,2) - The spacing here is not proper. They are a bit too close and can cause a new player to hit the slider note too early.
01:22:07 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos where it is not really needed.
Notes: I like the idea that you're trying to make the map simple, but there are some parts that are not done right, like the HP Drain is quite high with a small amount of notes in the map with a gap of time between each one. And I can see that you mainly used 1/1 timing snap, which is okay, but you can try using 1/2 as well, but just don't make the patterns too complex.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 (Might be a bit high for an "easy" difficulty. But, its up to you to change it to 1 or keep it as is.) / 1.00 (This looks a bit fast for an "easy" difficulty...)
Distance Snap Average: x0.5 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 59 ( 43 Circles / 15 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 134
[Current] Max Score: 96,244
[Current] Star Rating: 0.59
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6 This may be a bit high for [Easy]. Try lowering this to level 4 at least or 3.)
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.1
00:08:07 (?) - A note can be placed here.
00:08:73 (3) - A new combo can start here.
00:38:07 (6,1) - This can easily confuse a new player as with the fact they have to catch the note right after the slider. Try to figure out a way to make it more simple and easier to read.
00:46:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from here.
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:08:57 (1,2) - The spacing here is not proper. They are a bit too close and can cause a new player to hit the slider note too early.
01:22:07 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos where it is not really needed.
Notes: I like the idea that you're trying to make the map simple, but there are some parts that are not done right, like the HP Drain is quite high with a small amount of notes in the map with a gap of time between each one. And I can see that you mainly used 1/1 timing snap, which is okay, but you can try using 1/2 as well, but just don't make the patterns too complex.
[Normal] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 180.000 / 6,072 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 160 ( 134 Circles / 19 Sliders / 7 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 254
[Current] Max Score: 908,150
[Current] Star Rating: 4.42 (The way the map is set up feels more like a [Hard]. Also, this is quite a difficulty jump from [Easy].)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:10:73 (6) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
00:35:40 (1) - Try removing the new combo from this note.
00:38:90 (1) - Kinda hidden behind the slider...
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:14:23 (6) - This conflics with the spinner starting point.
01:27:73 (1) - The song ends sudden right after this spinner. Might be better to remove it...
Notes: Well, this map isn't too bad, but might need some redoing. It kinda plays and looks more like a [Hard] thank a [Normal].
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 160 ( 134 Circles / 19 Sliders / 7 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 254
[Current] Max Score: 908,150
[Current] Star Rating: 4.42 (The way the map is set up feels more like a [Hard]. Also, this is quite a difficulty jump from [Easy].)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:10:73 (6) - Slightly uneven under the slider end.
00:35:40 (1) - Try removing the new combo from this note.
00:38:90 (1) - Kinda hidden behind the slider...
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:14:23 (6) - This conflics with the spinner starting point.
01:27:73 (1) - The song ends sudden right after this spinner. Might be better to remove it...
Notes: Well, this map isn't too bad, but might need some redoing. It kinda plays and looks more like a [Hard] thank a [Normal].
[Hard] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 180.000 / 6,072 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 270 ( 256 Circles / 11 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 305
[Current] Max Score: 2,033,380
[Current] Star Rating: 4.97
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:17:23 (1) - The delay with this slider can really throw of the flow of the map.
00:21:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not evenly lined up.
00:22:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section looks a bit uneven. Mostly the right side of it.
00:29:23 (6,7) - Not lined up with the (4,5) stack.
00:29:40 (7) - Not even under (6).
00:30:40 (9,10) - Linked or unlinked? (I see the other pairs were closer together...)
00:39:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this note.
00:49:57 (1,1,1) - Single note combos.... (Maybe making this a 3 note combo at least?). Also, the notes in the jump don't have the same timing either...
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:08:23 (1,1,1) - Avoid setting single note combos when you don't really need to.
01:13:73 (1) - Take out the new combo from this note.
01:18:23 (8) - Could be a new combo point.
01:22:07 (1) - Sounds like it ends 1/4 early. Try extending it by 1/4 to see that is sounds better.
01:23:65 (2) - Sounds like it starts 1/4 early. Just move it over 1/4 later and it should should better.
Notes: Just some not so major errors to look into. Make sure the shapes of the combos are set carefully. Also, make sure the notes are not forced in.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 270 ( 256 Circles / 11 Sliders / 3 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 305
[Current] Max Score: 2,033,380
[Current] Star Rating: 4.97
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7
00:17:23 (1) - The delay with this slider can really throw of the flow of the map.
00:21:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Not evenly lined up.
00:22:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This section looks a bit uneven. Mostly the right side of it.
00:29:23 (6,7) - Not lined up with the (4,5) stack.
00:29:40 (7) - Not even under (6).
00:30:40 (9,10) - Linked or unlinked? (I see the other pairs were closer together...)
00:39:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this note.
00:49:57 (1,1,1) - Single note combos.... (Maybe making this a 3 note combo at least?). Also, the notes in the jump don't have the same timing either...
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:08:23 (1,1,1) - Avoid setting single note combos when you don't really need to.
01:13:73 (1) - Take out the new combo from this note.
01:18:23 (8) - Could be a new combo point.
01:22:07 (1) - Sounds like it ends 1/4 early. Try extending it by 1/4 to see that is sounds better.
01:23:65 (2) - Sounds like it starts 1/4 early. Just move it over 1/4 later and it should should better.
Notes: Just some not so major errors to look into. Make sure the shapes of the combos are set carefully. Also, make sure the notes are not forced in.
[Insane] (Done)
SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 180.000 / 6,072 ms (Sounds good so far.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 362 ( 327 Circles / 31 Sliders / 4 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 417
[Current] Max Score: 3,754,708
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6 (Why lower?)
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
00:00:73 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - No hitnote should ever be before the first offset. Either add an extra offset at the first note or delete this section out.
00:11:07 (7,1) - Irregular spacing.
00:16:23 (1) - The claps are a bit overdone with this repeating slider.
00:26:73 (3) - ^
00:46:07 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The setup of this section sounds a bit odd. (Did you try testing this setup? - 00:46:07 (1) -> 00:46:15 (2) -> 00:46:23 (3) -> 00:46:40 (4) ).
00:53:57 (1,2) - Could try removing the new combo from (1) and switching it to (2). Then try removing the new combo from 00:54:07 (1) and 00:54:90 (1).
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:12:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this note.
01:22:07 (1) - Sounds like it ends 1/4 early. Try extending it by 1/4 to see that is sounds better.
01:23:65 (2) - Sounds like it starts 1/4 early. Just move it over 1/4 later and it should should better.
Notes: The combo order setup seems a bit odd to me as its hard to tell sometimes if it is going with the lyrics, the song, or both. Also, remember to look into that offset issue otherwise it would be a huge problem later.
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 362 ( 327 Circles / 31 Sliders / 4 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 417
[Current] Max Score: 3,754,708
[Current] Star Rating: 5.00
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6 (Why lower?)
[Current] Circle Size:Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.9
00:00:73 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - No hitnote should ever be before the first offset. Either add an extra offset at the first note or delete this section out.
00:11:07 (7,1) - Irregular spacing.
00:16:23 (1) - The claps are a bit overdone with this repeating slider.
00:26:73 (3) - ^
00:46:07 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - The setup of this section sounds a bit odd. (Did you try testing this setup? - 00:46:07 (1) -> 00:46:15 (2) -> 00:46:23 (3) -> 00:46:40 (4) ).
00:53:57 (1,2) - Could try removing the new combo from (1) and switching it to (2). Then try removing the new combo from 00:54:07 (1) and 00:54:90 (1).
00:57:65 (B) - This break "could" work, but then there would be plenty of places to put the beats in going to waste. Also, the map is not that long and its very simple that a break might not be needed.
01:12:73 (1) - Could remove the new combo from this note.
01:22:07 (1) - Sounds like it ends 1/4 early. Try extending it by 1/4 to see that is sounds better.
01:23:65 (2) - Sounds like it starts 1/4 early. Just move it over 1/4 later and it should should better.
Notes: The combo order setup seems a bit odd to me as its hard to tell sometimes if it is going with the lyrics, the song, or both. Also, remember to look into that offset issue otherwise it would be a huge problem later.
Overall: Well, the map itself doesn't need a lot of work, but there are things to take a good look into. Make sure to check into the background issue as well. And for [Easy], you have a good idea of how to make it easy, but you want to avoid making it too simple. Try adding a few notes and sliders with 1/2 to see if it can be a bit better. For the harder difficulties, you want to make sure to have a "balance" between the difficulties as a huge jump from [Easy] to [Normal] can be unpleasent for new players. For [Insane], you're getting on the right track to make it hard, but make sure to avoid forcing notes where it can't fit with the map and the song. Make sure to take the time now to look over the map and see what you can add or change in them. Not trying to bash at your map, i'm just trying to be as helpful as possible. I'll drop my star in then.
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
No worries, you're still learning and having errors in the map is part of the learning process ^_^ .
Topic Starter
yap really use up my time to do the correction!!! lol
really use up my time to do the correction!!! lol
Topic Starter
??? can i know what is this meansnaruti wrote:
POW
POW > Shoots a star XDalan_629_6 wrote:
??? can i know what is this meansnaruti wrote:
POW
only thing i could think about overal hitsound volume + 1 on everything <_< nothing much