To be honest... Not even in my music classes at school I've studied this composer as Frédéric François Chopin.

lol, why so many unused green lines in easier diffs? i guess you copipasted them from harderdiffs :/

tick rate 2 for all diffs to follow rhythm.

1. 00:12:772 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This doesn't play too well since it's the only time where you start your 1/4 sliders on the offbeat. Much better is if you take this slider sequence and start it at 00:13:392 - instead. Refer to your ending cuz you did it the better way there.
2. 00:40:703 (1) - Instead of simply a spacing change for the objects at 00:43:392 (1,2,3,4) - you can start from here; slowly increasing the slider velocity may give a better effect as well.

1. 00:25:806 (3) - Hitsound here stands out, different from all other diffs.

вообще нелогично использовать сорс как альбом оста и титл ему(альбому) несоответствующий. Или сорс бы убрать или хз. Нелогично же. А если убирать сорс, то и половину тагов с ним.

каундаун и леттербоксы не нужны. вообще

Prestississimo - 53.6% (Extra difficulty, out of ranking). <--- ну и выкинь из мапсета тогда?

топовую даже не модил, все равно не на ранк, твори чо хошь. аибат правда написал, что много анснэпнутых концов слайдеров. проверь, мб баг тоже.

00:23:737 (4) - хоть бы вистл чтоль добавил, теряется нота по звуку

AR-1 выглядит лучше, по ощущениям

лично мне софт финиши звучат куда приятнее,чем нормал финиши. дело ваше конечно, просто сказал

аибат пишет про один анснэпнутый конец слайдера, но тот вроде ок. скорее всего баг

00:25:289 (2) - вистл в конец, очевидно же

00:40:703 (1) - в музыке не так тихо. прибавь громкости на начале слайдера

1. First of all I wonder if you actually know what the difficulty names mean... For example, "presto" means either "soon" or "early".
   I don't follow the logic behind those names, so may I ask what... What were you aiming for?
2. Do you use AiBAT? In case you don't, here's the important stuff it points out and you should be aware of:
   
   AiBAT

   Allegro
   

   1. 00:22:392 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).

   Prestissimo
   

   1. 00:01:806 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   2. 00:02:220 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   3. 00:02:634 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   4. 00:03:047 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   5. 00:04:703 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   6. 00:05:116 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   7. 00:05:530 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   8. 00:05:944 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
3. Those are a LOT of tags! Are you sure all of them are necessary?

1. 01:00:565 (1) - This here... The end feels kinda empty, you know? The note there is very dominant and it has a very high pitch. I think this is better represented by a standard soft whistle.
   There is a similar sound in the music afterwards 01:03:875, so you could chose to keep this as it is or change both for consistency. Honestly, I don't really like that custom hitwhistle, I almost can't hear it.
   
   The same goes for the rest of the difficulties!

1. I wonder if it's just me, but I find the spacing to be a nightmare to read... Have you gotten some plays on this?
2. 00:25:289 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I found this acceleration in spacing very hard to understand, it was a too big of an acceleration to understand it as 1/4. Could you change this a bit, making it a bit more readable, and even making is "scale" into the next similar jumps? To give this some continuity, you know.
3. 00:33:254 (7,8,1,2) - The hitbursts around this pattern make it a bit hard to read. I suggest placing (8,1,2) as if they were a continuation of the previous stream, but rather "unstacking" them, moving them elsewhere, where they are visible.
4. 00:56:013 (2) - For similar reasons, this gets overlapped by some hitbursts. It gets tricky to read! Give it a test play, you'll see.
   Try to figure some other way to place this - you'll probably have to rework the following stream!

First of all I wonder if you actually know what the difficulty names mean... For example, "presto" means either "soon" or "early".
I don't follow the logic behind those names, so may I ask what... What were you aiming for?

Those are a LOT of tags! Are you sure all of them are necessary?

01:00:565 (1) - This here... The end feels kinda empty, you know? The note there is very dominant and it has a very high pitch. I think this is better represented by a standard soft whistle.

There is a similar sound in the music afterwards 01:03:875, so you could chose to keep this as it is or change both for consistency.

00:25:289 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I found this acceleration in spacing very hard to understand, it was a too big of an acceleration to understand it as 1/4. Could you change this a bit, making it a bit more readable, and even making is "scale" into the next similar jumps? To give this some continuity, you know.

1. booklet goes with 'ショパン' not 'フレデリック・フランソワ・ショパン', I'd say Chopin as artist and the full as tags. ya I 've read your former posts
2. sliderslide is really annoying when the overall volume is high. try this if you don't have one, http://puu.sh/1sZ4R
3. the 60% normal-hitnormal is kind of too much and dizzy, lower the volume.

1. 00:40:703 (1) - the ending part need some point to look softer.

1. 00:02:220 (3,4,5) - x0.33 spacing might be confusing in Normal like diff. stack them or use x0.5

Charles445 wrote:

Yknow I was hoping you'd take my advice on readability. I can't see people sightreading this very easily.

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