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Yasuo-P - Electric Angel [Taiko|Osu]

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lkx_Shore
1,453 posts
Joined January 2010
lkx_Shore
?结尾为可考虑
*结尾为强烈建议

[General]
标出collab哪部分是谁做的(例如xx:xx:xxx-xx:xx:xxx by xxx)
虽然我知道哪部分是谁做的,但其他人第一眼看下来可能会搞混

[Ts8zs'Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - 来回4次打起来不是很舒服...
01:02:995 (4) - ^
01:18:995 (2) - ^

[Flask's Normal]
OD4→3
00:35:395 (4) - 放左下好点
00:35:795 (1) - whistle
00:48:995 (2,3) - 间距问题,3拉远点
01:01:795 (2) - 尾巴漏了clap
01:35:795 (7) - 用soft的finish

[Hard]
HP6→5
00:18:595 (7) - 尾巴漏clap
00:29:395 (3) - ^
00:37:395 (4) - 尾巴的finish换成whistle
01:10:995 (1) - 间距?
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

[Collab]
音效听起来好乱@ @
统一一下2/4clap吧

00:20:195 (3) - 蓝线停，白线加个note?
00:38:195 (5) - whistle
01:22:995 (11) - ^
01:35:795 (3) - 用soft的finish

Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
;)
mintong89
3,698 posts
Joined July 2011
mintong89
Mod Request from my queue~ <3

d = don
k = kat
D = BIG DON
K = BIG KAT
re = remove

[bx1989's Taiko]

00:02:995 - k
00:05:995 - k

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k

sorry i just can found this...
Foreverends
992 posts
Joined July 2011
Foreverends
raririn大>.<
極短mod(?) go~~~
collab
這圖打起來很舒服,因為OD是6的緣故,所以1pc差点ss了...
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474578
00:10:595 (5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474580 試試這樣放?
00:20:195 (3) - 我總覺得這slider放得怪怪的...試試用1/2的代替 8-)
00:35:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - 放直一点 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474581
00:38:195 (5) - clap比whistle好一点...如果保留whistle,建議40%

給力好圖 :)
good luck :D
Cuvelia
282 posts
Joined November 2011
Cuvelia

mintong89 wrote:

[Lia's Taiko]

00:22:795 - k - done
thx for modding ~

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8L

and new BG ~ http://puu.sh/1kt8U
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^
Cuvelia
282 posts
Joined November 2011
Cuvelia

Stefan wrote:

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
If volume control had not considered for ranked,I would remove green line
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume. - no change
00:00:595 (1) - D - no change
00:36:695 - Circle with k - done
00:36:795 (1) - k - done
00:50:595 (1) - k - done
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume. - no change
01:22:595 (3) - k - done
thx for modding ~ >.<

update ~ http://puu.sh/1kJip
Sagisawa-Yukari
216 posts
Joined March 2009
Sagisawa-Yukari
Here's my mod request~only suggest

Ts8zs'Easy
最开头不放一个spinner么？
01:35:795 (5) - finish

Flask's Normal
同easy，前面空太多了，最好有个spinner
00:27:795 (3) - clap
01:12:595 (3) - clap

Hard
最前面同上两个难度，我就不多说了
00:32:595 (1) - remove NC
00:34:195 (4) - 如果你按照上面做了，这里加NC
00:41:595 (1) - remove
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab
00:50:195 (1) - remove NC
01:08:595 (5,6,7,8) - 这里感觉改成4个NOTE的JUMP更好点


恩，基本上没啥大问题了，打起来还是挺顺手的，Good map。
Mystica
798 posts
Joined January 2010
Mystica
先占坑补星我错了（跪
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Mystica wrote:

先占坑补星我错了（跪
跪了三个
其实不用星啊真的
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
Hi~ Hi~
Let's mod!

[General]

why don't you add "bx1989" in tags?
why don't you add some Finish follow music ? like Easy mod

[Ts8zs' Easy]

00:34:195 (2) - add Clap at both of slider ?
00:38:995 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ? and adjust DS
01:02:995 (4) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:17:395 (1) - same as 00:38:995 (1) -
01:18:995 (2) - same as 00:34:195 (2) -
01:23:795 (1) - add Finish at start of slider ?

[Flask's Normal]

unused inherited points
  1. 01:26:395 -
00:15:395 (4) - Ctrl + G and adjust next notes? just suggestion
00:24:595 (4) - ^
00:29:795 (2) - move to (136,156)
01:00:595 (4) - move to (136,356)
01:16:995 (7) - keep DS
01:26:595 (1) - ^
01:30:595 (2) - 1 grid right

[Hard]

Unsnapped inherited point:
SPOILER
01:25:404 -
00:21:195 (4) - 2 grid down?
00:22:995 (2) - I think ctrl + G is better good. consider pattern
01:23:395 (5) - remove this note ? consistent
01:25:395 (1) - NC
01:29:895 (5) - move to (352,304)

[Collab]

AR +1 ? I think AR 9 is more fit with this diff's pattern
00:19:895 (2) - use 2 hit circle instead slider
01:08:595 (1) - NC ? cuz notice for heterogeneous pattern



P.S : Taiko diff's sound is lower than music. That's so unplayable. Souond volume up pls. for example, KIAI Time's volume 95%

:OO sorry for poor mod.
bx1989
10 posts
Joined July 2010
bx1989

wmfchris wrote:

[bx1989]
- tag bx1989 in all diffs
00:16:195 - according to the clap like sound in the music use k here?
00:22:595 - ^
00:34:995 - there're only 1/2 vocal notes so the transition in the 3rd/4th notes doesn't sound very well, try kkddd
00:36:595 - kkddk?
00:54:195 - ^
00:56:595 - the first triplet should go up and the second one goes down as indicated by the music, ddk kkd fits better
01:26:195 - the stream should stop here like the vocal
01:32:995 - you don't need to stream this too much
- Is it really necessary to put so many finishes in the middle?

[Lia's Taiko]
- tag Lia in all diffs
well made, good job
thx for modding~> <
bx1989
10 posts
Joined July 2010
bx1989

Stefan wrote:

Hi

[General]
You must change the Artist. Since the Guideline got changed, the Maker (Yasuo-P) must be set as Artist (and add Hatsune Miku as Tags).

[bx1989's Taiko]
00:00:595 - Set the Volume of the red Line at 85%.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:02:995 (1) - k
00:29:795 - Remove this green Line.
00:30:158 - ^
00:53:595 (1) - k
01:15:595 (3) - d
01:15:155 - Remove the green Lines here.
01:17:195 - The Kiai comes very sudden, start it at 01:23:795.
01:23:795 (1) - D
01:23:895 (2) - Remove it.
01:26:295 (2) - Remove it, the long stream isn't neccessary and this d sounds too much.
01:28:595 - Remove the three green Lines here, they are unused (and the Kiai Flash is not rankable)
01:34:295 (3) - Same like 01:26:295 (2).
01:34:495 (2) - ^

[Lia's Taiko]
Please remove all the green Lines except the ones for the Kiai. (So keep 00:38:995 - 00:51:395 - 01:23:795 and 01:35:795)
00:00:595 - Change the Volume at 80% for the same Sound Volume.
00:00:595 (1) - D
00:36:695 - Circle with k
00:36:795 (1) - k
00:50:595 (1) - k
00:51:395 - Change the Volume at 80% for holding the same Sound Volume.
01:22:595 (3) - k

Nice Taiko Diffs :)
Good Luck ^^
thanks very much~
Steph De Chine
93 posts
Joined June 2012
Steph De Chine
[Ts8zs's Easy]
你这密度……你确定不要在白线上放多几个Circle之类的么？
00:18:195 (4) - 这个多加一个折返箭头？配合以相同频率发出来的“NaI”，并增加和下一个滑条的连接性
00:34:195 (2) - 这个为啥不做成和y轴平行的呢？或许让1和2的鼠标轨迹成一个椭圆？
以上建议同样适用于后半截……反正你的物件都是几乎一样的……好懒啊~

[Flask's Normal]
一看你这个星星数……无力吐槽……到底哪里出错了？
其实这个图还OK啦~只是或许注意下光标的轨迹会更好。
e.g. 00:23:795 (3) - 这个可以往右上方移动一下，让2在3头部的切线上，使光标轨迹成为一个完整的弧。
00:28:995 (1) - 这个也是，让4在它的切线上
etc.

[Hard]
00:41:595 (1) - 这个的话或许NC会好些？不然会习惯等下一句开始的时候才点的
01:02:595 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这个能不能像前面00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这样弄成4个短滑条？

[Collab]
这个真没啥问题……
-xNaCLx-
363 posts
Joined April 2012
-xNaCLx-
遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k
00:20:195 - k
01:34:995 - K

[bx1989's Taikoni]
無聊吐糟 : 那bx is so happy是什麼鬼;w;"
00:12:795 - remove...不然不要finish
00:25:995 - k
00:31:795 - k
00:42:395 - d
01:31:995 - k
...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭
Cuvelia
282 posts
Joined November 2011
Cuvelia

NewibornCLivee wrote:

遲來的mod></最近病了...抱歉

[Lia's Taiko]
00:18:595 - k　done
00:20:195 - k　done
01:34:995 - K　sorry , no change ...

...修改的時候別忘了把new combo做好啦...不然錯的colour比不做還討厭
thx for modding !! :3

update ~ http://puu.sh/1x2uU
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
MOD from PM

紧急
推荐
建议

[Easy]
全部用滑条略显单调，可以在空拍适当下几个Circle
01:02:995 (4) - 摆成水平吧

[Normal]
没问题

[Hard]
00:29:995 (4) - 往上摆一点：
SPOILER
00:18:195 (6,7,8,9) - 这种直弯的滑条我觉得不太好看..至少弯折的角度不要太厉害吧 120°左右最好
00:24:395 (5) - 摆在上面漂亮一点：
SPOILER
01:10:195 (8,9,1) - 排列不是很美观..建议把01:10:795 (9) 放到前后两个滑条中间，或者直接做成这样的对称滑条 挺漂亮的：
SPOILER
01:31:595 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 有点迷惑性..01:31:595 (4,1,2)这三个就别折返了，直接和后面统一，顺时针绕一圈吧。



[collab]

前半段的Flow做的有点别扭 我也提出了一些自己的建议（当然并不一定更好）
从01:10:595开始的后半段做的貌似比前半段好...
另外我觉得cRyo和DarknessAngel的图Flow做得很棒 不如去参考一下

00:12:995 (5,1,2,3) - 这段有点overmapping了 为了契合人声的话我的建议是改成这样：
去掉00:12:995 (5)和00:13:595 (1,2,3)，直接在00:12:995加一个Circle，再拉个滑条加个单点：
SPOILER
00:19:795 (1) - 去掉，把后面的滑条00:19:895 (2)延长到这个音
00:28:595 (5) - 这样改 节奏会好一点（滑条在前，单点在后 另外把滑条弄弯好看一点）
SPOILER
00:32:595 (2) - 和上面差不多 不过这里改不改不算很重要
00:36:995 (8) - 缩短一点，再在后面加一个Circle，好让重音落在Circle上。另外后面的两串连打最好别错开。
SPOILER
00:49:795 (4,5,1,2) - 从这儿开始的一串Flow我觉得这样摆能流畅一点
SPOILER
01:04:195 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 这两串连打安排成这样可以流畅一点：前三个遮挡 后四个移动
SPOILER
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4) - 略微鬼畜 安排成这样舒服一点（要是你采纳这条的话01:08:195 (4)和01:09:395 (1)也要转成竖直的使flow更流畅）
SPOILER
01:34:995 (1,2,3) - 如果感兴趣的话可以做成跳。
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn
这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn

raririn wrote:

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Autumn wrote:

raririn wrote:

这什么破bug 卡了一下给了4kd
我去..怎么Deny掉剩下的？ 我只要1 kd啊...
反正草莓给过10kd╮(╯▽╰)╭...
Zero__wind
osu! Alumni
3,314 posts
Joined August 2012
Zero__wind
General
建议把combo color 3和4的顺序互换 让两个相近的颜色分开

Easy 看不出什么了=。=

Normal also found nothin =。=

Hard
00:13:395 (1) - 或许把尾巴改成soft sampleset
00:41:595 (1) - 这种主要节拍以外的散点最好也改成soft hitsound音量不大的时候还好 像这样紧凑的打击声音让人觉得不太舒服
01:07:195 (9) - ^
01:32:795 (2) - ^
01:09:195 (4) - 或许和note2放在一起？
01:07:395 (10) - 把new combo加在这里 而不是它后面的滑条？
01:35:395 (2,3) - 最好给它们两个都加new combo 这样不容易误导玩家

[/color]
00:49:795 (4,5,1) - 这里感觉不太好看 或许把4和5的位置往左下调整一些让它们和滑条1的弧度保持一致？
01:13:395 (3) - 开头加whistle？尾巴上的whistle或者就去掉 或者就连01:13:995 (4) - 一起加whistle
01:25:595 (7) - 或许CTRL+G？ 这个随意吧

这么多mod了来找我……我个新人真是给你挑不出啥东西来诶
感觉也没什么unrankable的 估计可以找MAT了？
好运吧~
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
SPOILER
[General]
Artist要换成Yasuo-P (咦压缩p), tag里加上hatsune miku, Source改成Vocaloid。。不得不说这rule真蠢

[Collab]
挑不出什么 nazi一下
00:12:995 (5) - 去掉两个折返 在00:13:395加一个note, NC
00:22:795 (5) - 往上移1 grid
00:39:995 (3) - 总觉得位置不太好,虽然没什么问题
00:46:595 (5) - 左移一点 00:46:995 (1) - 可以和前面的00:46:395 (4) - 重合一下
01:06:995 (4) - 移到x368, y184 可以和01:06:395 (2,3,4) - 成三角形
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - 打起来总觉得别扭 变成4连带一个1/2滑条?
01:25:595 (7) - Ctri+G一下?

[Hard]
00:25:395 (8) - 换成一个1/1滑条?
00:39:595 (2) - x168, y136
00:41:595 (1) - 好想让你把它删掉
01:10:795 (9,1) - 这个间距..
01:27:595 (3) - 没叠好

[Flask's Normal]
01:02:595 (3,1) - 会不会有点难.. 我完全不记得我玩normal时候是个什么情况了orz
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^
01:16:995 (7,1) - ^
总觉得前半部分和后半部分难度都不一样了orzzz

[Ts8zs's Easy]
..我看不出啥 同normal没啥印象了

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4)


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795??


Good luck then~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Irie Miyuki wrote:

SPOILER
[General]
Artist要换成Yasuo-P (咦压缩p), tag里加上hatsune miku, Source改成Vocaloid。。不得不说这rule真蠢

[Collab]
挑不出什么 nazi一下
00:12:995 (5) - 去掉两个折返 在00:13:395加一个note, NC
00:22:795 (5) - 往上移1 grid
00:39:995 (3) - 总觉得位置不太好,虽然没什么问题
00:46:595 (5) - 左移一点 00:46:995 (1) - 可以和前面的00:46:395 (4) - 重合一下
01:06:995 (4) - 移到x368, y184 可以和01:06:395 (2,3,4) - 成三角形
01:07:395 (1,2,3) - 打起来总觉得别扭 变成4连带一个1/2滑条?
01:25:595 (7) - Ctri+G一下?

[Hard]
00:25:395 (8) - 换成一个1/1滑条?
00:39:595 (2) - x168, y136
00:41:595 (1) - 好想让你把它删掉
01:10:795 (9,1) - 这个间距..
01:27:595 (3) - 没叠好

[Flask's Normal]
01:02:595 (3,1) - 会不会有点难.. 我完全不记得我玩normal时候是个什么情况了orz
01:05:795 (4,5) - ^
01:16:995 (7,1) - ^
总觉得前半部分和后半部分难度都不一样了orzzz

[Ts8zs's Easy]
..我看不出啥 同normal没啥印象了

就这吧 我就一渣渣orz
yeah~

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* Add "bx1989" to Lia's Taiko and bx1989's Taiko for consistency on each diff done
* Inconsistent AudioLeadIn, you might want to make it consistent through the each diff done


[Ts8zs's Easy]
00:18:195 (4) - Having more than 1 repeating slider can confusing for beginners fixed~


[Flask's Normal]
00:15:395 (4) - For better flow, reverse this by Ctrl+G orz>_<
00:19:795 (1,2,3,4) - This linear pattern can be boring for beginners. Try something interesting? Like curve slider, unique pattern, or such?/_\


[Hard]
00:47:595 (4) - This note is overlapped by hitbursts. You should make this note visible :O
01:00:995 (1,2,3) - Fix this spacing, please k~
01:25:195 (4) - If this a jump for the next pattern, this should be new combo and remove new combo at next object done~
01:32:795 (2) - Same issue as 00:47:595 (4) ;_;


[Collab]
00:50:995 (1) - Add finish for emphasis done:
01:07:595 (3) - End at 01:07:795?? sry ;_;


Good luck then~
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,393 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
I would love to see this ranked. .-.
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Stefan wrote:

I would love to see this ranked. .-.
thanks >~<
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
  1. Red - Important or Issue
  2. Blue - You'd better fix them
  3. Black - Normal Suggestions

[General]
Offset:587


[Ts8zs' Easy]
00:13:395 (1) - Why clap here? / Consider removing that and add finish.
00:14:995 (2) - Also you should remove clap here.
00:16:595 (3) - ^ (at least remove clap，it sounds so bad..)
00:19:795 (1) - ^ , and consider moving this slider to left of 00:18:195 (4).
00:21:395 (2) - ^ (something likes this will not be mentioned after)
00:48:595 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 00:46:995 (2) not below that
01:20:595 (3) - Drag it upward a bit with Distance Snap on.
01:33:395 (3) - Consider moving this slider to left of 01:31:795 (2) not above that


[Flask's Normal]
00:14:195 (2,3) - If I were you, I maybe put 00:14:595 (3) before (2)
01:00:995 (1) - hmm? Consider using finish instead of clap?
01:10:995 - Obviously you should add finish here.
01:14:195 - ^
01:20:595 (1) - hmm?..Maybe I may choose to remove this clap.
01:32:595 (5,1) - You may use a slider instead of them.


[Hard]
00:17:195 (3,4) - Sounds not so good to me, what about this?

00:26:195 - Why not use finish instead of clap?
00:41:795 (2,3) - Transform them into a slider.
00:42:995 (6) - Such a big jump for a hard diff.. Try lower the spacing
01:07:195 (9) - Delete this and reset the place of (10), then newcombo it.
01:10:795 (9) - What about removing this?
01:29:795 (4,5,6,7,1) - Comparing with before, the spacing of this stream seems a bit large.
01:32:795 (2) - Remove this and un-newcombo to 01:32:595 (1)



[Collab]
00:19:787 (1,2) - Sounds strange. I would only choose this.

00:39:987 (3,4,5) - Little change.
00:50:187 (1) - Move it to x:132 y:124
01:07:787 - According to the vocal, something should be here.
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"Collab" diff is ok, but other diffs seem not so good imo.
Great mapset , Good Luck ;)
Last edited by Snowy Dream , edited 1 time in total.
Kokatsu
504 posts
Joined August 2011
Kokatsu
Random mod, because I'm bored. \:D/

General


Normal got a different source. I didn't find the post so fast, but if I remember right, vocaloid does not go into soruce, but tags.
The taiko-diff names are..stupid? Both are Oni's, so please name them "bx1989's Taiko Oni" and "Lia's Taiko Oni".
Please add the Collab-informations (mapper and times that they map) in the map's description.

Easy


The beat is a bit boring. :x Let's try to fix that.

00:18:195 (4) - you miss claps here. Add one on sldierstart and maybe one at sliderending.
00:18:195 (4,1) - (4) touches (1), which looks ugly. Please flip (1) to avoid that.
00:25:795 - add a note here.
00:28:995 - ^
00:34:195 (2) - add a clap on ending.
00:32:195 - add a note here.
00:40:595 (2) - delete and replace it with 3 single notes.
00:46:995 (2) - ^
00:51:795 - add a note here.
01:02:995 (4,1) - avoid overlap.
01:10:595 - add a note here.
01:16:995 - ^
01:28:595 (4) - delete and replace with 3 single notes.
01:35:395 - add a note here.

This will ensure an easy beatmap with a bit of variety to not be boring as hell.

Normal


00:19:595 - I really miss a note here. :/
00:28:995 (1,3) - I would do it vice versa: (1) should be a 1/2 repeat slider and (3) a 1/1 slider.
00:38:995 (1) - add a curve to lead to the next note?
SPOILER
00:41:395 (5) - The shape doesn't fit to the other normal curved sliders, so just use a simple curved slider. If you really want to keep it, please adjust the 2cnd sliderpoint to be in the exact middle of the slider.
00:48:995 (2,3) - you get the intention that (2) leads to (3), but there is still a 1/1 break inbetween. To avoid that, point (2) in a different direction.
01:34:595 (4,5) - move (5) a bit lower to match the flow of (4).

Hard


00:27:795 (1,2,3,4,5) - because of grindsnap, the spacing seems to be wrong. Turn off gridsnap and adjust all notes to have the same spacing.
00:29:395 (3) - clap on ending just sounds wrong.
00:36:595 (3) - remove the finish-sounds and add whistles on all 1/2 beats, sounds better and creats a better climax to the chorus.
00:38:595 - add a note?
00:38:795 - ^
00:38:995 (1) - add clap on start.
01:10:795 (9,1) - these notes are already snapped to the new distancesnap, but it should start after the (1), so please use the old snap here.
01:26:995 (2,3) - (3) is not stacked properly on (2)'s ending. turn off gridsnap and adjust the placement to be exact the same as the sliderending (it's easier to delete the note and place it new, so you can instantly stack it.)
01:32:195 (3) - remove clap
01:32:595 (1) - remove NC

Collab


OD +2, you get no 100's at all.

00:17:595 (7) - add clap?
00:39:395 (2,3) - avoid that overlap.
00:49:795 (4,1) - add NC on (4), remove NC from (1).

Taikoni


HP and OD +1
Use and overall vol. of 80%, you don't need vol.changes. 80% through the whole song is fine. Delete all timelines that were used to change vol. afterwards.

00:01:195 (1,2) - both don?
00:48:795 (1) - kat
01:04:195 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1) - i prefer the following pattern: kkkkd ddk
01:12:995 (1) - kat
01:23:795 (1) - big kat, since you started first chous with a big kat aswell.
01:24:595 (4,5,1) - kdd
01:25:395 (1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1) - ddkkddkkd fits better.
01:26:795 (2) - kat
01:27:595 (3) - kat
01:34:995 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3) - instead of these streams, I would prefer a calm ending with three bigs. If you want, you can remove these notes and add a big note on every white tick. I prefer K K D here.

Taiko


This is an Oni aswell, so raise OD and HP by 1 each.
Same for vol. as mentioned in other Taikomod.

00:12:595 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - use kdddd d instead.
00:32:195 (1,2,1) - kdk maybe?
00:36:895 - add a kat here.
00:56:595 (1,1,1) - add finish on all three.
01:00:995 (3,1,2) - kdk?
01:16:995 (1,1,2) - kkd?
01:34:195 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - what about kkddk d k?

Good luck~
Cuvelia
282 posts
Joined November 2011
Cuvelia

Kokatsu wrote:

Random mod, because I'm bored. \:D/

General


Normal got a different source. I didn't find the post so fast, but if I remember right, vocaloid does not go into soruce, but tags.
The taiko-diff names are..stupid? Both are Oni's, so please name them "bx1989's Taiko Oni" and "Lia's Taiko Oni".
Please add the Collab-informations (mapper and times that they map) in the map's description.
Lia's Taiko => Lia's Taiko Oni , change ._.

Taiko

This is an Oni aswell, so raise OD and HP by 1 each.
sorry , no change
Same for vol. as mentioned in other Taikomod.
Yeah, you might well say so. But these lines use for adjusting a tune and a volume.
And I like adjusting a volume, so I have no intention of deleting lines. Sorry.

00:12:595 (1,1,2,3,4,5) - use kdddd d instead. no
00:32:195 (1,2,1) - kdk maybe? ok
00:36:895 - add a kat here. ok
00:56:595 (1,1,1) - add finish on all three. ok
01:00:995 (3,1,2) - kdk? ok
01:16:995 (1,1,2) - kkd? ok
01:34:195 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - what about kkddk d k? use kkdddkkkd d K

Good luck~
thx for modding .

update ~
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256,192,45795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,45995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,46195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,46595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,46795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,46995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,47195,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,47395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,47595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,47795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,47895,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,48095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,48195,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,48395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,48595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,48795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,48995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,49195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,49395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,49495,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,49595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,49695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,49795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,49995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,50195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,50595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,50995,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,51395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,51595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,51795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,51995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,52195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,52395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,52595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,52795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,52995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,53195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,53395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,53595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,53795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,53995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,54195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,54395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,54495,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,54595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,54795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,54995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,55195,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,55395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,55595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,55795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,55995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,56195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,56395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,56595,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,56995,5,4,0:0:0
256,192,57395,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,57595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,57695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,57795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,57895,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,57995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,58195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,58395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,58595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,58795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,58995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,59195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,59395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,59595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,59695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,59795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,59995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,60195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,60395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,60595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,60795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,60995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,61095,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,61195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,61395,5,4,0:0:0
256,192,61795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,61995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,62195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,62595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,62795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,62995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,63195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,63395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,63595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,63795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,63895,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,63995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,64195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,64295,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,64395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,64595,1,12,0:0:0
256,192,64995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,65195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,65395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,65795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,65995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,66395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,66595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,66995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,67095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,67195,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,67295,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,67395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,67595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,67795,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,68195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,68395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,68595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,68795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,68895,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,68995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,69195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,69395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,69595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,69795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,69995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,70195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,70295,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70495,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,70795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,70995,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,71395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,71795,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,72195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,72395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,72595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,72795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,72995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,73395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,73495,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,73595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,73795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,73995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,74195,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,74595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,74995,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,75395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,75795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,75995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,76195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,76395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,76595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,76695,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,76795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,76995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,77095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,77195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,77395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,77595,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,77795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,77995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,78395,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,78595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,78695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,78995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,79195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,79395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,79595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,79795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,79995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,80195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,80395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,80595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,80695,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,80795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,80995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,81095,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,81195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,81395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,81495,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,81595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,81695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,81795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,81995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,82195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,82595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,82995,1,12,0:0:0
256,192,83395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,83595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,83795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,83995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,84195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,84395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,84595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,84795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,84895,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,84995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,85195,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,85395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,85495,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,85595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,85795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,85895,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,85995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,86195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,86295,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,86395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,86495,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,86595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,86795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,86995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,87195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,87395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,87595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,87795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,87995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,88095,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,88195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,88395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,88595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,88795,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,88995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,89195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,89395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,89495,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,89595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,89695,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,89795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,89995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,90195,5,12,0:0:0
256,192,90595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,90795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,90995,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,91195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,91395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,91595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,91795,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,91995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,92195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,92395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,92595,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,92695,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,92895,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,92995,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,93195,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,93395,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,93595,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,93795,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,93995,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,94195,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,94295,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94395,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,94495,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,94595,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,94695,5,8,0:0:0
256,192,94795,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94895,1,8,0:0:0
256,192,94995,5,0,0:0:0
256,192,95395,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,95795,5,12,0:0:0

New Taiko BG , I'm so sorry for changing a taiko BG again and again. ;_;
SPOILER
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ raririn ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistency in Source,pls check and fix.
  2. Rename 'Collab' diff to 'Insane' and add 'collab' in tags.
  3. 00:50:995 - #1 kiai time should end to here.
  4. Rename 'bx1989's Taikoni' to 'bx1989's Taiko Oni' pls.

[Collab]


  1. OD+1 is better.
  2. 00:19:795 (1,2) - Change a 1/2 slider is better to here.
  3. 00:38:995 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  4. 00:39:395 (2) - Make no touch stuff and blanket,here is code.

    204,168,39395,2,0,B|240:201|294:195,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  5. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - (1) stack on (4) start point and change spacing,like this,

    here is code.
    180,172,46395,1,0,0:0:0
    92,172,46595,2,0,B|92:116|148:88,1,90
    180,172,46995,6,0,B|184:228|124:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - Remove short spinner and Add a circle on 00:50:995 is better.
  7. 01:07:595 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this,vocal start on 01:07:795.

[Hard]


  1. 00:32:595 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 00:48:195 (1) - Make blanket with 00:47:395 (3) pls.
  4. 01:10:195 (8,9,1) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Flask's Normal]


  1. 01:20:595 (1) - Remove clap,sound better to me.

[Ts8zs's Easy]


  1. 00:18:195 (4) - You are missing Add clap to here.
  2. 00:26:195 (1,3) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
  3. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:35:395 - Add a circle to here,follow with vocal.

OK ~ Not bad for your second map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,460 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑

Flask wrote:

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
泥马
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry

Flask wrote:

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

蠢比要rank圖了大家快跑
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ raririn ~ :)

Mod time for my Random Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Inconsistency in Source,pls check and fix.
  2. Rename 'Collab' diff to 'Insane' and add 'collab' in tags. sorry >_< i think it's fine now
  3. 00:50:995 - #1 kiai time should end to here.
  4. Rename 'bx1989's Taikoni' to 'bx1989's Taiko Oni' pls.
[

[Collab]


  1. OD+1 is better.
  2. 00:19:795 (1,2) - Change a 1/2 slider is better to here. it fits the rythem here imo :?
  3. 00:38:995 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  4. 00:39:395 (2) - Make no touch stuff and blanket,here is code.

    204,168,39395,2,0,B|240:201|294:195,2,90,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  5. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - (1) stack on (4) start point and change spacing,like this,

    here is code.
    180,172,46395,1,0,0:0:0
    92,172,46595,2,0,B|92:116|148:88,1,90
    180,172,46995,6,0,B|184:228|124:264,1,90,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  6. 00:50:995 (1) - Remove short spinner and Add a circle on 00:50:995 is better.
  7. 01:07:595 (3,4) - Should change rhythm like this,vocal start on 01:07:795.

[Hard]


  1. 00:32:595 - Add finish,sound better to me.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - Remove this circle,sound much better.
  3. 00:48:195 (1) - Make blanket with 00:47:395 (3) pls.
  4. 01:10:195 (8,9,1) - Inconsistent spacing.

[Flask's Normal]


  1. 01:20:595 (1) - Remove clap,sound better to me.

[Ts8zs's Easy]


  1. 00:18:195 (4) - You are missing Add clap to here.
  2. 00:26:195 (1,3) - I guess you missing make symmetry to here.
  3. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^
  4. 01:35:395 - Add a circle to here,follow with vocal.

OK ~ Not bad for your second map ~

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
fixed the others ~ thanks ~
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Collab]


  1. 00:39:395 (2) - Why you didn't use code?
  2. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - ^

[Hard]


  1. 00:32:595 - Still no fixed.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - ^

[Easy]


  1. 00:26:195 (1,1) - Still no fixed.
  2. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^

再不好好改，就不要怪我不看了 ~
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
Topic Starter
raririn

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ no kds pls ~

[Collab]


  1. 00:39:395 (2) - Why you didn't use code?
  2. 00:46:395 (4,5,1) - ^

[Hard]


  1. 00:32:595 - Still no fixed.
  2. 00:41:595 (1) - ^

[Easy]


  1. 00:26:195 (1,1) - Still no fixed.
  2. 01:10:995 (1,3) - ^ 换了个不对称的滑条

再不好好改，就不要怪我不看了 ~
我记得肯定真的都改了啊不知道为啥Q.Q 传了几次怎么又改回来了 老板蠢比QAQ
重新查了一遍 All fixed
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
既然要泡了我就不看咯

拉日铃加油~ :D
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Rechecked in IRC ~ Looks fine now ~

Here you go :3

MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Hello!
RED = Needs to be changed.

[General]
Your timing if really off. During test-play I was getting around 24ms off. After tinkering with the offset a little I found 582 gave me 1-2ms off! So change the offset to 582. Don't forget to resnap all notes and run AIBat to check for unsnapped notes. If you don't have AIBat download it here: t/55305

[Collab]
00:03:395 (1) - Remove this new combo and apply it to 00:03:795 (3) - Since you seem to be following the downbeat you should stick to it, this just makes no sense really.
00:09:895 (1) - Remove this combo and apply it to 00:10:195 (4) - . Same reason as above.
00:24:595 (6) - Add a combo? This follows your combo pattern perfectly why didn't you use one?
00:36:995 (8) - I think it would be a better idea to make this a shorter slider. (so the tail is on the red tick) Then add a note where the tail used to end. This will make the stream play better and fit a combo issues because you are ending a slider on the beginning of a stanza. Here is an example. http://puu.sh/1I8vA
00:51:395 - I don't like how you go into the break here. If you just fill this litter part in until about 00:51:795, the entry into the break would be smoother. Here is an example: http://puu.sh/1I8yW There would be a finisher on 4 aswell.

[Easy]
Ok, I have a problem with this difficulty. IT'S THE SAME PATTERN THE WHOLE SONG. It's a 2 beat slider then a kick-back slider over and over. There are no single notes until the very end either. This needs some serious remapping with some new patterns and more single notes.[/b]

[Both Taiko Difficulties]
OD and HP Drain 6. You're basically handing out free SS with these settings.

Call me back when the things in red are changed.
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