1. AIBAT told me there were inconsistent tag. Please check it out and fix it.
2. Consider a soft-sliderslide (silent sliderslide) into S1?
3. The offset is wrong, also I don't see the point of setting a negative offset. I have tested a new offset for you. This offset makes the metronome fits the drum sound. Also I only get 2~ms late when I was using this offset. So here is it: 514. Please adjust your green line and resnap all notes after change.

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:59:226 (4,1) - I guess you can make a symmetrical pattern here because the slider shape of 00:59:661 (1) - is same as 00:57:922 (3) - , so a symmetrical pattern can make the entire flow runs better and more beautiful. You might need to adjust the spacing after change.
      
      suggestion

      
   2. 01:14:444 (2) - The rhythm sounds quite strange here in my opinion. Because the reverse of the slider is actually 'off-beat'. How about shortening it to 1.5 beat slider and then add a note at 01:16:183 - ?
      
      Rhythm

      
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:08:791 (2) - How about adding a note here to follow your hitclap pattern and also for consistency.
   2. 00:40:531 (3) - How about adding a clap at the end of the slider so that it can fit the drum sound much better. This can show a cool effect during gameplay.
   3. 00:54:878 (2) - I would change this to clap (S1) or normal hitsound instead of finish because finish doesn't fit the music very well, but you can hear that clap is much better. Also, this can fit the drum sound.
   4. 00:55:313 (3) - Add a clap at the end of the slider?
   5. 01:06:618 (1) - Could you remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider because it appears so suddenly and breaks your hitsound consistency. Note that this is the only whistle in this part.
   6. 01:13:139 (4) - Removing the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all.
   7. 01:30:096 (4) - How about adding a clap at the end of the slider?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 01:18:791 (1) - I would add a new combo here if I were you becuase there is a very strong accent with a strong emotion, a new combo can accentuate the emotion.
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:32:487 (2) - I found that a whistle at the beginning of the slider could fit the music quite well, probably try it?
   2. 01:05:965 (2) - A finish at the beginning of the slider?

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:54:661 (1,2) - My suggestion only, I think you can increase the spacing a bit so that it can be more fun because of the drum sound. The drum sounds produce a 'jump-like feeling ' there.
   2. 01:02:922 (1,2,3) - I think a simple 1/2 should be enough here, triplet sounds superfluous here, as you can hear, the background music doesn't provide any atmosphere there for triplet.
   3. 01:27:270 (1,2,3) - ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:487 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider with a lower volume to consistent with 00:00:531 (1) - ?
   2. 00:29:226 (3) - Could you add a whistle at the beginning and the reverse of the slider so it can fit the music (drum sound) much better.
   3. 00:32:487 (2) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider?
   4. 00:34:226 (7,8) - ^Something similar..ok, I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. OD-1?
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:06:835 (3,4) - This is just my personal feeling after testplay. I found that it would be much better if you could change the triplet to notes.
   2. 01:04:661 (1) - Probably a new combo here for the jump pattern?
   3. 01:09:661 (6,7,8,9,10) - I have made a better 'streamline' of the stream for you, probably try it? I will provide a code for you.
      
      suggestion

      
      

      238,79,69661,1,8,0:0:0
      260,107,69770,1,8,0:0:0
      294,116,69878,1,8,0:0:0
      329,107,69987,1,0,0:0:0
      352,79,70096,2,0,B|455:57|510:142,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

   4. 01:18:574 (5,6,7) - Actually, I am expecting a jump here because of the strong accents and emotion from the music. Could you make a jump here so it can be more fun? Here's my suggestion, you can use "Create polygon circle" function to make it to be perfect!
      
      
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:705 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - A bit weird that you change the whistle pattern abruptly. I know you were following the piano there. However the white tick is a high-pitch part, so a whistle at white tick is more appropriate than red.

kanpakyin wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. HP+1?
      ok
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:54:661 (1,2) - My suggestion only, I think you can increase the spacing a bit so that it can be more fun because of the drum sound. The drum sounds produce a 'jump-like feeling ' there.
      hmm,I think that the sound of the drum isnt fit here ><
   2. 01:02:922 (1,2,3) - I think a simple 1/2 should be enough here, triplet sounds superfluous here, as you can hear, the background music doesn't provide any atmosphere there for triplet.
      ok, delete (2)
   3. 01:27:270 (1,2,3) - ^
      ^
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:07:487 (1) - How about adding a finish at the beginning of the slider with a lower volume to consistent with 00:00:531 (1) - ?
      ah , ok >< add finish (40%)
   2. 00:29:226 (3) - Could you add a whistle at the beginning and the reverse of the slider so it can fit the music (drum sound) much better.
   3. 00:32:487 (2) - Add a whistle at the end of the slider?
   4. 00:34:226 (7,8) - ^Something similar..ok, I believe that you can check the remain part by yourself.
   hmm , I dont follow this whistle sound all...For example,00:37:052 - and00:37:922 - I cant put it >< so If you say that you should add, I would reconsider.

kanpakyin wrote:

[PainSinger's Easy]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:59:226 (4,1) - I guess you can make a symmetrical pattern here because the slider shape of 00:59:661 (1) - is same as 00:57:922 (3) - , so a symmetrical pattern can make the entire flow runs better and more beautiful. You might need to adjust the spacing after change. fixed
      
      suggestion

      
   2. 01:14:444 (2) - The rhythm sounds quite strange here in my opinion. Because the reverse of the slider is actually 'off-beat'. How about shortening it to 1.5 beat slider and then add a note at 01:16:183 - ? ^
      
      Rhythm

      
2. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:08:791 (2) - How about adding a note here to follow your hitclap pattern and also for consistency. but there already is a note there
   2. 00:40:531 (3) - How about adding a clap at the end of the slider so that it can fit the drum sound much better. This can show a cool effect during gameplay. fixed
   3. 00:54:878 (2) - I would change this to clap (S1) or normal hitsound instead of finish because finish doesn't fit the music very well, but you can hear that clap is much better. Also, this can fit the drum sound. ^
   4. 00:55:313 (3) - Add a clap at the end of the slider? ^
   5. 01:06:618 (1) - Could you remove the whistle at the beginning of the slider because it appears so suddenly and breaks your hitsound consistency. Note that this is the only whistle in this part. ^
   6. 01:13:139 (4) - Removing the finish at the end of the slider? It doesn't fit the music at all. ^
   7. 01:30:096 (4) - How about adding a clap at the end of the slider? ^

merchat7 wrote:

@PainSinger
Be sure to update before applying mods

1. 00:35:961 - I would say adding a note here to follow the vocal would be nice, I prefer don here.
2. 00:40:309 (1) - I personally prefer a small don here because the accent are not that strong.
3. 00:48:570 - Same as 00:35:961- a don here would be nice.
4. 00:57:048 (1,2,1,1) - Could you change this pattern to kdkd because the pitch of 00:57:266 - and 00:57:700 - is lower than 00:57:048 - and 00:57:483 - . Also it can follow the drum sound in this way.
5. 01:18:787 (1) - I prefer a big kat here because of the high pitch.

1. Please remove the Kiai fountain in this diff. Rekiai is unrankable in Taiko diff.
2. ..There are so many useless green line such as speed down and volume changes. Please remove all the green line without the kiai part.
3. 00:53:787 (2,1,2) - I think kkd fits the music better. Let you decide it.
4. 01:05:526 (2,1,2,3,1,1) - Probably try d kkddk here? I found that this can fitted the pitchs and the drum sounds much better. Also, this can make the entire flow to be more fluent.
5. 01:18:787 (1,2) - Change this to big kat to follow what you do in Muzukashii diff?

p3n wrote:

[alacat's Hard]
00:14:874 (1) up to 00:25:309 (3) - check the spacing here. If it is intended to have a smaller spacing compared to something like the following combos (00:26:179 (4,5,1)). I recommend using slightly higher spacing of 1,30x for this whole part to avoid the partial overlaps of the objects and have a much cleaner look. Also place this part without gridsnap to increase the consistency of the gaps. fixe all :3

01:27:266 (1,2) - the new combo should start on 01:27:483 - Nope.

p3n wrote:

[Easy]
00:05:527 (2,3) - very confusing beat placement for beginners. You have to change this to follow the melody with all the dominant notes. I suggest using a short 1/2 slider and a repeat slider as they fit nicely into the flow of the surrounding combos http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/533514 fixed