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Topic Starter
James
> changed bg
> changed few things
> changed artist to comply with the "law"

:)
riffy
Dear God, Hi

Slider Velocity on [Hard] is lower than on [Normal], lol. ok, you have reasons to do it

[General]
  1. did you forgot to put 164 in the tags at [Hard] diff? Do it now because it,s unrankable :V
  2. disable countdown? sounds unfitting with Miku's voice
  3. ~30% of the song isn't mapped. cut mp3 maybe? or finish mapping here 02:03:806 -it's reasonable, too.
  4. Try following colour instead of gray one. Gray colour can confuse some players in multi - if you fail map in multi - you get almost the same colour
    Combo2 : 175,240,248
[Easy]
  1. AR4 is a bit too high. Since Normal has AR 5 this AR change is unbalanced. Try AR 3 instead
  2. 01:25:681 (1) - overlapped with spinner hitburst and may confuse some beginners. It'll be great if you move it somewhere else to avoid overlap :V
[Normal]
  1. Same OD as [Easy]? o3o Feels awkward try OD: 3 or 4?
[Hard]
  1. 01:41:149 (1) - and some similar sliders - since (1) is much faster than 01:42:556 (5) - I'd suggest you to put new combo here. It will help us to read SV changes.
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Actually I'm here to star it. Great map!
Topic Starter
James
lazy ill change tomorrow

> changed most things.
> changed AR too, i forgot to change that. thanks!
> not going map the whole thing nor cut it because of the reason i gave few posts ago. come on guys!
> last part is dodgy so it might change sometime, but its as good as done
riffy
kd me, lol
i mean maybe you should try adding VOCALOID2 to tags.
I am not sure. But some people might use this tag to look for your map.
mintong89
it not accept taiko diff? ;w; i very like this song.

if yes. yes two taiko diff. ;w;
Topic Starter
James

mintong89 wrote:

it not accept taiko diff? ;w; i very like this song.
no sorry bro :P


updated:
> added tags
> remapped normal a bit
> added hitsound on easy
> changed BG too if i havent said it last night
> removed countdown
> might cut the mp3 if it really needs to be shortened, but im not adding anymore notes.
Spencers
:)
y u c a
lokoloko ww

ebibakawan
mosluv
JAMES, HAVE MY BABIES!
LKs
hi

yuca sent me pm reminding me this is ungraved

[general]

sadly the outra part seems way long
You must cut your mp3 if you're using less than 80% of it. This doesn't count intro time, and thus only applies if more than 20% of the outro is unmapped. If you only plan to map a portion of your song, then including the full mp3 is a waste of file space. Many mp3 editing tools like this exist which make fading and cutting a song simple. However, if you have a legitimate reason for keeping your full mp3 (e.g. a storyboard after the map ends), then that is fine.
Source: Vocaloid?

colour 3 and 4 are hard to distinguish. hmm could you vary them?

[hard]

most of things i wanna say are just trivia so i do the fix job for you(if you don't mind)

00:11:281 (4,5,6,7) - slight changes
00:40:656 (4) - stack
00:15:343 (2) - refined slider shape
00:18:624 (4,5) - enlarged spacing between the two to make it more easily to read
00:24:406 (7) - 1 grid left
00:26:906 (7,8) - made it looks like a wave(high-low-high-low) and adjusted spacing
00:46:124 (4) - 1 grid right
00:50:343 (2) - slight slider adjustment
00:55:031 (2) - ^
01:01:906 (7) - ^
01:34:743 (1,3) - ^
01:14:587 (6) - stack
01:25:368 (1,2,3,4) - made it a square

http://puu.sh/1xlT7

[normal]

i found slient sliderslide in the folder use S1 plz
00:27:062 (5) - stuff like this sounds bad
00:33:468 (3,4,5,6) - no better ways to place them? with such an low AR it(stack) looks/plays weird
01:05:993 (1,2,3) - sry i can't say this is nice. long slider strangly stretches and spacing.
01:35:368 (2) - maybe move a big right

[Easy]

01:12:868 (2) -
93,281,72868,2,0,B|189:313|269:265,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:15:368 (2) -
423,280,75368,2,0,B|327:312|248:252,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:25:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too long for one colour O_o it goes accross 6 music bars
Topic Starter
James

LKs wrote:

hi hello

yuca sent me pm reminding me this is ungraved i ungraved it myself

[general]

sadly the outra part seems way long already cropped the mp3 since majority of the modders mentioned it, thanks

Source: Vocaloid? okay

colour 3 and 4 are hard to distinguish. hmm could you vary them? changed color 4

[hard]

most of things i wanna say are just trivia so i do the fix job for you(if you don't mind)

00:11:281 (4,5,6,7) - slight changes
00:40:656 (4) - stack
00:15:343 (2) - refined slider shape
00:18:624 (4,5) - enlarged spacing between the two to make it more easily to read
00:24:406 (7) - 1 grid left
00:26:906 (7,8) - made it looks like a wave(high-low-high-low) and adjusted spacing
00:46:124 (4) - 1 grid right
00:50:343 (2) - slight slider adjustment
00:55:031 (2) - ^
01:01:906 (7) - ^
01:34:743 (1,3) - ^
01:14:587 (6) - stack
01:25:368 (1,2,3,4) - made it a square

http://puu.sh/1xlT7 no, useless and stupid mod. everyone please stop modding like this!

[normal]

i found slient sliderslide in the folder use S1 plz i forgot about that, thanks
00:27:062 (5) - stuff like this sounds bad no it doesnt since im following the background, if it sounds bad, go complain to the person arranged the song :)
00:33:468 (3,4,5,6) - no better ways to place them? with such an low AR it(stack) looks/plays weird no idea, looks fine to me. gimme a suggestion :P
01:05:993 (1,2,3) - sry i can't say this is nice. long slider strangly stretches and spacing. doesnt matter, not counted as a mod, but kind of an insult. so im keeping it.
01:35:368 (2) - maybe move a big right moved. dont blame me for the spacing of 2 and 3 becaue it will ruin the pattern, so its your fault if the spacing is too long.

[Easy]

01:12:868 (2) - no, yuca said
93,281,72868,2,0,B|189:313|269:265,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

01:15:368 (2) - no, yuca said
423,280,75368,2,0,B|327:312|248:252,1,180,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:25:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - too long for one colour O_o it goes accross 6 music bars changed
Breeze
[Easy]

  1. 01:11:818 (7) - Add a finish at slider end sounds nice imo, or maybe you can use both finish to head and end like you did in Normal diff
  2. 01:32:287 (3) - Slider end, you are missing a clap here?
[Normal]

  1. 00:40:700 (1) - I won't suggest use such a short spinner in normal diff. But there's nothing wrong with it, it's just, a little hard as a "Normal" diff.
  2. 01:22:600 (1,4) - No finish for them?
  3. 01:38:225 (1) - I don't think a spinner really fit here, if you want to use spinner, 01:36:506 - 01:37:756 is the place more proper. Or maybe you want to fit background sound, just put three 1/1 beats note instead of this spinner
[Hard]

  1. 00:21:168 (4) - No finish?
  2. 01:36:350 (4) - Slider end, add finish?
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Topic Starter
James
done!
Breeze
Alright
Cygnus
haba ng hair James! hahaha XD
kanpakyin
Ranked.

(ノ・ω・)ノ
Suimya
waaa o.o gratz James~
y u c a
dOv O
Topic Starter
James
O vOb
Pokie
Not able to reply without 100 pair of sunglasses 8-) Congratulations
B2IN
oA O...
Konei
congratz :3
wonders
james!!!
qlum
Much better then the usually stream spamming maps although I must admit I am kind of out of practice on the smaller notes and large spacing, still great map.
Nilsso
reminds me of a map from 2008-2009.
L_P
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