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Lami

Joined June 2011

Lami 2012-10-29T18:29:29+00:00

~~전 영어밖에 쓸줄 몰라요~~

[Normal]

fine to me

[Sonny's Hard]

00:13:655 (2,3) - a bit overlapped
00:45:591 (1,3,5) - hmm... same above. kinda look so bad...
00:28:655 (4,5) -

00:30:107 - add note
00:56:720 (1,2,3,4) - decrease spacing plz. too huge jump in hard diff.
01:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:58:171 (3) - delete note is better for me....
01:02:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .....make another partten......?

[Insane]

00:03:978 (2,1) - just imo, not stacking is better for looking.. (안겹치는게 좋을거같아요)
00:04:784 (4,5) -

00:15:914 (3,4) - ctrl+G, don't need jump partten in here....(imo) (컨트롤 + G, 여기에 점프 무의미 한듯해요..)
00:17:849 (3,4,5) -

00:25:913 (3) - x144 y192
01:04:139 (1,2) - increase spacing each other (거리 증가)
01:08:655 (3) - hmmm.......................................... (....... 딱히 할말이 없네요... 너무 긴거같음)
01:12:849 (1,2,1) -

[SinJiRu]

this diff missed some earlier mods, need to check them, first.
so i just say one thing.

01:28:091 (1) - remove plz.
1. too short
2. not need this spinner

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-10-30T11:21:35+00:00

intoon wrote:
~~전 영어밖에 쓸줄 몰라요~~

[Insane]

00:03:978 (2,1) - just imo, not stacking is better for looking.. (안겹치는게 좋을거같아요)
00:04:784 (4,5) -
00:15:914 (3,4) - ctrl+G, don't need jump partten in here....(imo) (컨트롤 + G, 여기에 점프 무의미 한듯해요..)
00:17:849 (3,4,5) -
00:25:913 (3) - x144 y192
01:04:139 (1,2) - increase spacing each other (거리 증가)
01:08:655 (3) - hmmm.......................................... (....... 딱히 할말이 없네요... 너무 긴거같음)
01:12:849 (1,2,1) -

음....뭐 음..... 뭐............음.............. 뭐 .................. 네......................... 만족................... 할껄요?

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-10-30T15:28:08+00:00

[Draka] wrote:
[Sonny's Hard]

00:30:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 배치 조금만 손봐주세요 너무 어려운 배치인 것 같은데요 글쎄요

01:27:688 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/1jE7b 이런 배치가 어떨까요 good

intoon wrote:
~~I know only how to use English~~

[Sonny's Hard]

00:13:655 (2,3) - a bit overlapped Then fix
00:45:591 (1,3,5) - hmm... same above. kinda look so bad... Consider fixing
00:28:655 (4,5) - Fix, also then fixed symmetry
00:30:107 - add note Dont see a point adding a note here
00:56:720 (1,2,3,4) - decrease spacing plz. too huge jump in hard diff. Consider~
01:26:881 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Maybe fix next time
00:58:171 (3) - delete note is better for me.... That will be better, but I want to keep it
01:02:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - .....make another partten......? Maybe this isn't fitting the trend of mapping these days? Will consider

Nagisawa wrote:
From my Moddinq Queue

Sonny's Hard
hm..nothing ._. fine diff
00:05:107 (5) - y:256 y:160 look better I aligned this to (6)

done..

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BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2012-10-30T17:00:37+00:00

Hello koreapenguin! Request from queue! Here's a quick mod!

[General]
-> You forgot to add video in Sonny's Hard and SinJiRu'KoiSitai. Also make sure the video offset is the same for all difficuties.

[Easy]
-> This map has bad polarity! See this video for some infomation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
00:05:429 (1,1) - For easier difficuties, avoid ending the spinner to close to the next note. Give novice players some time to recover.
01:19:139 (1) - End this spinner at 01:23:655 instead.

[K.R.T's Normal]
00:05:429 (1) - End this spinner at 00:06:559 (1) instead.
01:19:139 (1) - I suggest to end this spinner at 01:21:075 and add a circle at 01:21:720.

[Sonny's Hard]
-> You're mad bro? This looks like an Insane difficuty! It does not look like a Hard Difficuty at all!
-> Add Video.

[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
-> Add Video.

[Insane]
-> Looks pretty good!

Good Map!

Nitori

177 posts

Joined September 2011

Nitori 2012-10-31T05:31:41+00:00

[Sonny's Hard]
A lot of these jumps are pushing past the "Hard" range. I would remove some of them.
00:32:042 (10) - This sounds better repeating once, not twice.
00:58:171 (3) - Remove
01:06:075 - Add a note here

[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
01:17:042 (2) - Add a clap to the tail

The difficulties I didn't touch look good already. I don't have much, but I hope it helps!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-10-31T09:57:59+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello koreapenguin! Request from queue! Here's a quick mod!

[General]
-> You forgot to add video in Sonny's Hard and SinJiRu'KoiSitai. Also make sure the video offset is the same for all difficuties.

[Easy]
-> This map has bad polarity! See this video for some infomation: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=53PkFLrK8Ws
00:05:429 (1,1) - For easier difficuties, avoid ending the spinner to close to the next note. Give novice players some time to recover.
01:19:139 (1) - End this spinner at 01:23:655 instead.

[Insane]
-> Looks pretty good!

Good Map!

Very Thanks

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-10-31T15:00:53+00:00

Nitori-n wrote:
[Sonny's Hard]
A lot of these jumps are pushing past the "Hard" range. I would remove some of them.
00:32:042 (10) - This sounds better repeating once, not twice. fix
00:58:171 (3) - Remove ;; Second suggest makes me fix
01:06:075 - Add a note here ^

BeatofIke wrote:
Hello koreapenguin! Request from queue! Here's a quick mod!

[General]
-> You forgot to add video in Sonny's Hard and SinJiRu'KoiSitai. Also make sure the video offset is the same for all difficuties.

[Sonny's Hard]
-> You're mad bro? This looks like an Insane difficuty! It does not look like a Hard Difficuty at all! Mad ORZ
-> Add Video.

Tried fixing some jumps, but Idk if this is better..

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2007
PreviewTime: 57849
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

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DistanceSpacing: 1.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Sonny's Hard
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:184665
BeatmapSetID:60574

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
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wantuole

528 posts

Joined December 2010

wantuole 2012-11-03T05:36:47+00:00

from my queue
[General]
so many unsnaped kiai start . it‘s about for rank
[easy]
00:09:462 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - all move ← one white line seem butter for me.

SPOILER

01:07:204 (1) - end at 01:08:655
[K.R.T's Normal]
00:46:881 (3) - remove rep is butter,music stop at 00:47:204
00:59:462 (3) - remove whistle
01:15:752 (4) - start at 01:15:752 end is ok
[Sonny's Hard]
00:04:784 (4,5) - jump so far,in middle of 4→6
00:07:365 (2) - same hit sound like 00:06:881 (1)
[Insane]
I think you map it easy than Sonny's Hard
00:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+h, it will be more playable
01:19:139 (1) - end at 01:21:397, 01:21:720 +1 note
[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
00:04:300 (1) - why cover 3? make 5→6→1 same DS is butter ,00:04:784 (4,5) - this two jump is butter
some idea this place

SPOILER

01:08:655 (3,4,5,6) - DS to 0.8
01:09:462 (6,7) - too nearly make DS to 0.8
01:26:397 (4) - cover at 01:26:881 (1) end

that‘s all
good luck

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-11-03T15:56:06+00:00

wantuole wrote:
from my queue
[General]
so many unsnaped kiai start . it‘s about for rank
[Sonny's Hard]
00:04:784 (4,5) - jump so far,in middle of 4→6 Fix, havent noticed since this was a remapped part :3
00:07:365 (2) - same hit sound like 00:06:881 (1) Used (1) as a Finish, since it was the start
[Insane]
I think you map it easy than Sonny's Hard O.o

that‘s all
good luck

Thank you!

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koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-11-03T16:05:28+00:00

wantuole wrote:
from my queue
[General]
so many unsnaped kiai start . it‘s about for rank
[easy]
00:09:462 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - all move ← one white line seem butter for me. - No problem
SPOILER

[Insane]
I think you map it easy than Sonny's Hard - ??????
00:04:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - ctrl+h, it will be more playable - ....No problem Think
01:19:139 (1) - end at 01:21:397, 01:21:720 +1 note - fix

that‘s all
good luck

Mod Thanks :l

Deni

Deni 2012-11-03T23:19:44+00:00

General

Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 57861 
- [Insane] : 57861 
- [K.R.T's Normal] : 57861 
- [SinJiRu'KoiSitai] : 57861
- [Sonny's Hard] : 57849          <----- change this one.

Easy

00:46:236 (4,1) - Overlap

K.R.T's Normal

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:08:506 
01:09:393 
01:28:748

00:50:752 (6) - Add New Combo
00:52:365 (1) - Delete this circle, feels better to play.
00:52:688 (2) - New Combo if you followed ^

Sonny's Hard

00:31:559 (8) - Add New Combo

Insane

Fine!

SinJiRu'KoiSitai

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
01:08:506 
01:09:393

00:02:688 (3) - Move this slider a few grids up?

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-11-04T03:31:38+00:00

Deni wrote:

General
Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
- [Easy] : 57861 
- [Insane] : 57861 
- [K.R.T's Normal] : 57861 
- [SinJiRu'KoiSitai] : 57861
- [Sonny's Hard] : 57849          <----- change this one.
- Fix

Easy

00:46:236 (4,1) - Overlap - Fix

Insane

Fine! -

If you have any questions contact me ingame or via pm.

Mod Thanks!

Curisu

2,241 posts

Joined January 2010

Curisu 2012-11-17T08:51:14+00:00

From my q

[Easy]
00:07:365 (1,2) - weird spacing? 00:07:365 (1,2) / 00:07:849 (2,1) has different rhythm.
01:07:204 (1) - shorten to 01:08:655?
01:16:559 (1,2) - imo I prefer to make the slider reverse more and del the circle cuz the rhythm confuse to beginner
01:27:688 (4) - also confuse 2 read

[Normal]
imo hitsound vol+10~15
00:25:429 - +finish
00:41:236 (3) - ctrl+G?
00:48:010 (1) - ...hard to read. you can +circle at 00:47:688
00:56:236 - finish
00:57:204 - ^
01:13:978 - whistle ; 01:14:623 - <

[Hard]
00:05:430 (6) - x,y = 439,159
00:07:526 - -whistle awesome whistle except this.
00:22:204 - +clap
00:29:946 - +circle to fill a 3/2 gap? 00:30:268 (1) can be hit 1/2 earlier in 1st try.
00:56:720 (1,2,3,4) - put it in different order? imo 1432
01:27:365 (4) - +whis?

[Insane]
00:15:914 (3,4) - hmm...wtf
00:31:559 - -clap
00:54:300 (2) - x,y = 404,196

[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
00:27:203 (1,2,3,4,1) - +5vol between each circle? +10vol is too wide and hardly hear 00:27:203 (1)
00:57:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - 2,4,5 are useless? refer 2 bgm
01:11:881 (1) - spinner...? maybe is not fit

-Neipezi

2,257 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2012-11-18T14:24:31+00:00

Curisu wrote:
From my q

[Normal]
imo hitsound vol+10~15
00:25:429 - +finish Done~!
00:41:236 (3) - ctrl+G? Done~!
00:48:010 (1) - ...hard to read. you can +circle at 00:47:688 Done~!
00:56:236 - finish Done~!
00:57:204 - ^
01:13:978 - whistle ; 01:14:623 - < Done~!

Thank you for modding

give code

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2007
PreviewTime: 57861
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12054,27538,48022
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:K.R.T's Normal
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:182967
BeatmapSetID:60574

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
Video,80,"TV.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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68494,-100,4,1,0,65,0,1
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UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2012-11-23T05:44:28+00:00

Hello ~~
Modding via your request in #modreqs.

All suggestions, opinions, observations. Those kinds of things.

General
This is the same bg that most other people have used for this song on their maps. Can we change it to something unique to this mapset?

A lot of people are mapping this song, and a unique bg can make your mapset stand out.

Easy
OD +1 IMO

Absolutly no reason not to use 1.0 DS here.

00:03:655 (1,2,3) - DS should be 1. Why is it .8? Sticking with 1 will make the entire map flow better IMO.

00:05:429 (1) - This spinner is just trouble, you need to remove it. First of all you have it ending on00:06:881, which is when the beat starts moving. It feels awful not to be playing a circle or slider on this point. Try to avoid beginning a verse with the end of a spinner, it just feels like the song is starting without the player. Second, the 00:07:365 (1,2) appear long before the spinner is finished. When starting to play the game, players often have a lot of trouble with spinners, and having notes appear on screen with the spinner makes it way too confusing.
Just remove the spinner and replace it with a large slider. Try this rhythm out:

Honestly the majority of this difficulty feels like it was mapped to a different song... Most of these rhythms feel so separate from the beat. You're kind of mapping it to the offbeat of the song and it feels really confusing because it's not done right. It's like the player is trying to play an accompaniment that doesn't fit...

00:14:623 (1) - I don't like this rhythm. 00:14:623 to 00:17:849 - Simple like this:

00:17:204 (1) to 00:20:107 - Rhythm is better like this:

00:30:429 - The vocals make me feel like I should be hitting a slider, but I'm not. Instead I'm waiting to hit the slider that's on the screen but actually falls a beat later. 00:27:526 (1) to 00:32:688 (1) - Try this:

00:33:978 (2) - Doesn't fit the song... 00:32:688 (1) to 00:39:784 (3) - Try this:

00:37:688 - The verse begins but I'm not playing a note... I'm waiting to play. It feels awful. 00:37:688 (1) to 00:41:720 (5) - Try this:

00:41:881 (5) - I know it's mapped to the moving notes in the background, but it feels weird. It confusing because the previous 00:40:429 (4) ends on a white tick but the 00:41:881 (5) starts on a red tick. I just want to play it early. Easy difficulties should stick to simple 1/1 rhythms I think.
00:41:881 (5) - Move it to 00:41:720 and increase it's length by 1/2 of a beat.

00:47:526 - Add something here, maybe a slider leading to the 00:48:010 (1).

00:52:042 to 00:58:333 - Not matching song. Try this:

01:07:204 (1) - You need to remove this spinner. Avoid spinners like this in easy difficulty.
01:05:591 (3) to 01:09:462 (1) - Replace it with this rhythm:

01:23:010 - End the spinner here to give the player more time to recover.

01:24:623 (1) - Move to 01:24:300. Make it fit the vocals.

01:25:913 (2) - This doesn't work, lets redo this section. Avoid stacking circles in easy difficulty.
01:24:300 (1) to 01:27:688 (4) - Try this:

I think this difficulty needs a lot of work. It just doesn't fit very well.

I believe that the language barrier is going to be a large problem here, so I'll include an edited version of this difficulty with suggested changes so you can see for yourself. Keep in mind that this is just to show you these rhythm changes, I didn't worry about note placements. That's up to you:

SPOILER

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Please take a look at it.

-Kirito's Normal
AR - 1 Maybe? I think it might be a bit hard.

00:06:559 - End spinner here. Better IMO. It's good to give players time to recover in normal difficulty.

00:47:526 - Can we add something here? Maybe a slider. Something like this:

00:57:849 (4) - Remove NC. Can be confusing. I think having two 1's on the screen should only be in Hard or above difficulties.

00:56:397 - Add a circle here:

Fits, better polarity.

01:21:075 - End spinner here IMO. It gives time for player to recover.

01:26:881 (1,2) - Spacing?

That's it I think. Really good normal! It looks fantastic.

Sonny's Hard
00:19:784 (1) - This slider could look a lot better:

00:37:688 (1) - There are good ideas with these sliders, they just need a little more work. Try like this:

It's still not very good. I'm bad at sliders.

Do the same thing on the other side also.
Fix all the sliders like this.

00:30:268 (1) - Polarity is bad here, I want to be playing a note at 00:30:107. Just move the entire combo left 1/2 beat so it starts at 00:30:107, and try this rhythm for 00:30:107 to 00:32:365:

00:43:333 (2) - Again, improve this blanket to fit the previous curve.

00:49:300 (1) - Blanket could be much better.

01:02:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can we do something a little more fun here? Add a few sliders and make it more oval flow.

01:06:720 (2,3) - Spacing is weird between the two.

01:07:849 (3) - This plays bad IMO. Just do this from 01:07:526 to 01:08:333:

It's just nicer and more fluid to play.

Insane
It's very good. The flow is nicely done.

00:01:236 (4) - Move it to 00:01:397 and shorten it. Or increase SV for it.

00:13:171 (7) - Maybe make this slider more wacky like 00:01:236 (4).

00:15:914 (3,4,5,6) - I like the shape here but I think the jump from 4 to 5 is too big. 00:15:914 (3,4) - Switch the positions of these two circles so it plays in a line.

01:08:655 (3) - What's the reason to have this SV change and this slider here? Would be better as something more normal IMO.

00:58:333 (1,2) - This blanket could be better.

Very fun! Great job.

SinJiRu'KoiSitai
Change name to SinJiRu'KoiSitai's Insane?
Is that someone's name? I guess I'm not sure.

00:01:720 (1) - Make these sliders more funky, it will be more interesting. Something like this?:

00:04:300 (1,2,3,4) - Flows bad IMO. Make it a square or something more interesting.

00:13:010 (7) - Remove this note and stack 00:13:171 (1) on 00:12:849 (6).

00:27:203 (1) - Remove NC.

00:35:429 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try and place these streams in a way that flows better. Make them flow towards the next note.

00:46:236 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

00:43:817 (4,5) - Space is weird, move 5 closer.

00:46:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Totally overmapped IMO. Get rid of this stream and make some jump patterns with a rhythm like this:

00:57:849 (1,2,3,4,5) - This follows nothing in the music. Just make it 2 single circles, one at 00:57:849 and another at 00:58:010. They can be stacked or a cross-screen jump, both would feel better than this current stream.

01:01:075 (5) - This slider doesn't really look that great as a blanket. Try to improve it. This map has some great examples of how to make really interesting blankets: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32046
Try studying some of those. I think some of those ideas would work well in this map.

01:07:607 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - Overmapped IMO. I think something more simple like this is better:

01:21:720 (1,2,3,4,5) - This section is oddly straight forward compared to the rest of the map. The sliders are all flat on the x or y axis. I just think more work could be done here to make it more interesting like the rest of the map.

Really awesome job! I hope this mod was helpful. If you can't understand something then let me know.

Good luck with rank!!

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-11-24T17:51:23+00:00

Curisu wrote:
From my q

[Easy]
00:07:365 (1,2) - weird spacing? 00:07:365 (1,2) / 00:07:849 (2,1) has different rhythm.
01:07:204 (1) - shorten to 01:08:655?
01:16:559 (1,2) - imo I prefer to make the slider reverse more and del the circle cuz the rhythm confuse to beginner
01:27:688 (4) - also confuse 2 read

-all fix

[Insane]
00:15:914 (3,4) - hmm...wtf -
00:31:559 - -clap - fix
00:54:300 (2) - x,y = 404,196 - fix

Thanks

MOD

-Neipezi

2,257 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2012-11-24T18:14:29+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello ~~
Modding via your request in #modreqs.
All suggestions, opinions, observations. Those kinds of things.

General
This is the same bg that most other people have used for this song on their maps. Can we change it to something unique to this mapset? A lot of people are mapping this song, and a unique bg can make your mapset stand out.

-Kirito's Normal
AR - 1 Maybe? I think it might be a bit hard. okay down

00:06:559 - End spinner here. Better IMO. It's good to give players time to recover in normal difficulty. Done

00:47:526 - Can we add something here? Maybe a slider. Something like this: Put the circles on the slide instead of this place.

00:57:849 (4) - Remove NC. Can be confusing. I think having two 1's on the screen should only be in Hard or above difficulties. Done

00:56:397 - Add a circle here: was changed to the slide.

Fits, better polarity.

01:21:075 - End spinner here IMO. It gives time for player to recover. Done

01:26:881 (1,2) - Spacing? Done

That's it I think. Really good normal! It looks fantastic. / Thank you so much for the compliment.

Really awesome job! I hope this mod was helpful. If you can't understand something then let me know.

Good luck with rank!!

Normal difficulty name change~

-Kirito's Normal

here code~

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2007
PreviewTime: 57861
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12054,27538,48022
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:-Kirito's Normal
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:182967
BeatmapSetID:60574

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
Video,80,"TV.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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380,308,10107,2,0,B|356:244|356:188,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,156,10591,2,0,B|228:148|140:180,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,224,11397,5,4,0:0:0
40,224,11720,1,4,0:0:0
84,128,12042,6,0,B|76:96|84:64,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,192,12688,2,0,B|224:288|176:368,2,180
256,96,13978,2,0,B|256:32,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,120,14623,6,0,B|456:176|464:272,2,180
344,296,16075,2,0,P|272:336|176:336,1,180
120,320,16720,1,2,0:0:0
44,156,17204,6,0,B|100:124|164:116,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,76,17849,2,0,B|280:60|296:28,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,132,18333,2,0,B|256:204|288:252,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,268,18817,2,0,B|408:268|456:236,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
500,144,19462,1,10,0:0:0
416,64,19784,6,0,B|288:40,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,80,20429,2,0,B|200:48|184:8,2,60,0|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,120,20913,2,0,B|248:208|360:224,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,320,21720,1,2,0:0:0
432,320,22042,1,8,0:0:0
312,328,22365,6,0,B|256:368|200:328,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,216,23010,6,4,B|144:144|48:192|32:96,2,180,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,272,24300,1,2,0:0:0
256,272,24623,1,8,0:0:0
360,216,24946,6,4,B|368:144|464:192|480:96,2,180,6|4|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,328,26236,2,0,B|256:360|192:360,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,296,26881,2,0,B|64:240|64:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,64,27526,5,2,0:0:0
208,104,27849,1,8,0:0:0
328,104,28171,2,0,B|392:104|448:128,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,208,29139,2,0,B|228:208|172:184,2,120,8|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,304,30107,5,2,0:0:0
408,192,30429,2,0,B|344:176|304:128,1,120,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,132,31075,2,0,B|163:177|99:193,2,120,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,40,32042,1,2,0:0:0
364,56,32365,1,8,0:0:0
452,120,32688,6,0,B|452:184|436:240,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
352,308,33333,2,0,B|352:244|367:189,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,96,33978,1,2,0:0:0
200,96,34300,1,8,0:0:0
256,188,34623,2,0,B|256:308,2,120,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,192,35591,5,8,0:0:0
100,96,35913,1,0,0:0:0
176,20,36236,1,8,0:0:0
280,40,36559,2,0,B|344:40,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,144,37204,2,0,B|256:208,1,60,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
168,288,37688,6,0,B|256:320|256:320|344:288,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,224,38494,1,2,0:0:0
368,116,38817,2,0,B|304:116|256:76|256:76|208:116|144:116,1,240,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,192,39784,2,0,B|129:208|161:264,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,316,40429,5,4,0:0:0
300,216,40752,2,0,B|308:152,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,156,41236,2,0,B|212:216,1,60,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,192,42042,5,0,0:0:0
392,88,42365,2,0,B|416:60|416:28,1,60,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,44,42849,2,0,B|220:28|124:44,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,136,43655,2,0,B|112:192|72:248,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
152,320,44300,1,2,0:0:0
256,296,44623,2,0,B|256:360,2,60,8|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,320,45268,1,8,0:0:0
360,200,45591,6,0,B|416:160|472:160,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,144,46559,1,8,0:0:0
152,200,46881,2,0,B|96:240|40:240,1,120
48,56,47688,1,0,0:0:0
168,64,48010,6,0,B|256:96|344:64,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,152,48817,2,0,B|332:192|312:304,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
197,292,49623,2,0,B|180:192|96:152,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,64,50429,1,10,0:0:0
288,60,50752,5,4,0:0:0
384,108,51075,2,0,B|448:100,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
492,196,51559,2,0,B|428:204,1,60,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,352,52204,1,0,0:0:0
168,296,52688,6,0,B|132:240|132:180,1,120,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,100,53333,2,0,B|316:40|440:60,1,240,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,140,54300,2,0,B|236:200|112:180,2,240
256,64,55913,6,0,B|348:28|440:76,1,180,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
492,176,56720,2,0,B|396:192|384:308,1,180,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,100,57849,2,0,B|256:36,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
156,100,58333,6,0,B|100:164|100:268,1,180,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,344,59139,1,2,0:0:0
284,364,59462,1,10,0:0:0
384,328,59784,2,0,B|424:272|424:216,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
408,108,60429,1,2,0:0:0
408,108,60752,1,10,0:0:0
312,56,61075,6,0,B|256:40|192:56,2,120,2|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,148,62042,2,8,B|304:148|256:184|256:184|208:148|144:148,1,240,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
92,244,63010,6,0,B|160:248|200:288,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,288,63655,2,0,B|352:248|420:244,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,152,64300,1,2,0:0:0
476,152,64623,1,10,0:0:0
412,64,64946,2,0,B|356:40|284:56|260:120,2,180,2|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
360,160,66236,5,6,0:0:0
332,264,66559,1,8,0:0:0
240,320,66881,2,0,B|184:352|112:328|88:264,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,224,68171,2,0,B|216:200|232:176,1,60,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,84,68655,6,0,B|204:48|256:36|308:48|336:84,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,180,69462,2,0,B|344:236|360:300,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,324,69946,2,0,B|236:364|136:348,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
72,260,70752,2,0,B|40:212|40:140,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
96,56,71397,2,0,B|128:104|128:176,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,212,71881,6,0,B|256:212|336:156,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
436,136,72688,2,0,B|460:192|460:192|436:248,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,272,73333,1,2,0:0:0
256,352,73655,1,10,0:0:0
184,272,73978,6,0,B|184:128|184:128|184:72|232:48,1,240,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,48,74946,1,8,0:0:0
400,132,75268,2,0,B|400:252,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,316,75913,2,0,B|256:284|192:316,1,120,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,248,76559,6,0,B|108:168|108:168|100:144|100:144|100:64,2,180,12|0|12,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,192,77849,2,8,B|256:176|320:180,1,120
404,248,78494,2,8,B|436:188|404:128,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,192,79139,12,8,81075,0:0:0
168,192,81720,5,0,0:0:0
168,192,82042,2,0,B|272:192|272:192|352:192|400:144,2,240,8|10|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
76,248,83655,1,2,0:0:0
76,136,83978,1,8,0:0:0
128,48,84300,6,0,B|224:56|288:136,1,180,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
404,236,85268,2,0,B|300:244|276:348,2,180,10|2|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,136,86559,1,12,0:0:0
344,112,86881,6,0,B|256:88|256:88|168:112,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,228,87688,1,0,0:0:0
315,228,88010,1,4,0:0:0

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-11-24T18:35:13+00:00

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello ~~
Modding via your request in #modreqs.
All suggestions, opinions, observations. Those kinds of things.

General
This is the same bg that most other people have used for this song on their maps. Can we change it to something unique to this mapset? A lot of people are mapping this song, and a unique bg can make your mapset stand out.

Easy
OD +1 IMO

Absolutly no reason not to use 1.0 DS here.

00:03:655 (1,2,3) - DS should be 1. Why is it .8? Sticking with 1 will make the entire map flow better IMO.

00:05:429 (1) - This spinner is just trouble, you need to remove it. First of all you have it ending on00:06:881, which is when the beat starts moving. It feels awful not to be playing a circle or slider on this point. Try to avoid beginning a verse with the end of a spinner, it just feels like the song is starting without the player. Second, the 00:07:365 (1,2) appear long before the spinner is finished. When starting to play the game, players often have a lot of trouble with spinners, and having notes appear on screen with the spinner makes it way too confusing.
Just remove the spinner and replace it with a large slider. Try this rhythm out:

Honestly the majority of this difficulty feels like it was mapped to a different song... Most of these rhythms feel so separate from the beat. You're kind of mapping it to the offbeat of the song and it feels really confusing because it's not done right. It's like the player is trying to play an accompaniment that doesn't fit...

00:14:623 (1) - I don't like this rhythm. 00:14:623 to 00:17:849 - Simple like this:

00:17:204 (1) to 00:20:107 - Rhythm is better like this:

00:30:429 - The vocals make me feel like I should be hitting a slider, but I'm not. Instead I'm waiting to hit the slider that's on the screen but actually falls a beat later. 00:27:526 (1) to 00:32:688 (1) - Try this:

00:33:978 (2) - Doesn't fit the song... 00:32:688 (1) to 00:39:784 (3) - Try this:

00:37:688 - The verse begins but I'm not playing a note... I'm waiting to play. It feels awful. 00:37:688 (1) to 00:41:720 (5) - Try this:

00:41:881 (5) - I know it's mapped to the moving notes in the background, but it feels weird. It confusing because the previous 00:40:429 (4) ends on a white tick but the 00:41:881 (5) starts on a red tick. I just want to play it early. Easy difficulties should stick to simple 1/1 rhythms I think.
00:41:881 (5) - Move it to 00:41:720 and increase it's length by 1/2 of a beat.

00:47:526 - Add something here, maybe a slider leading to the 00:48:010 (1).

00:52:042 to 00:58:333 - Not matching song. Try this:

01:07:204 (1) - You need to remove this spinner. Avoid spinners like this in easy difficulty.
01:05:591 (3) to 01:09:462 (1) - Replace it with this rhythm:

01:23:010 - End the spinner here to give the player more time to recover.

01:24:623 (1) - Move to 01:24:300. Make it fit the vocals.

01:25:913 (2) - This doesn't work, lets redo this section. Avoid stacking circles in easy difficulty.
01:24:300 (1) to 01:27:688 (4) - Try this:

I think this difficulty needs a lot of work. It just doesn't fit very well.

I believe that the language barrier is going to be a large problem here, so I'll include an edited version of this difficulty with suggested changes so you can see for yourself. Keep in mind that this is just to show you these rhythm changes, I didn't worry about note placements. That's up to you:
SPOILER
[HitObjects]
336,64,430,6,8,B|176:64,1,160
108,172,1720,2,4,B|92:240|160:276,2,120
204,188,3171,1,0,0:0:0
300,188,3655,5,4,0:0:0
364,188,3978,1,0,0:0:0
428,188,4300,2,0,B|428:300|316:348,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
244,340,5429,2,0,B|139:299|135:186,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
296,180,6881,5,0,0:0:0
184,292,7526,2,8,B|264:324|344:292,2,160
64,188,9462,5,8,0:0:0
208,120,10107,2,8,B|304:120|352:56,2,160
84,220,12042,5,8,0:0:0
240,260,12688,2,8,B|320:260|384:324,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
420,168,13978,1,8,0:0:0
356,300,14623,6,0,B|276:344|180:316,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
84,212,15913,2,0,B|164:168|260:196,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,100,17204,6,0,B|176:64|288:88,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,116,18171,1,8,0:0:0
420,252,18817,1,0,0:0:0
268,300,19462,2,0,B|188:300,2,80,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
212,152,20752,5,8,0:0:0
100,268,21397,1,8,0:0:0
60,112,22042,1,8,0:0:0
136,84,22365,6,0,B|224:56|288:132,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
344,192,23333,1,0,0:0:0
436,324,23978,1,0,0:0:0
356,324,24300,2,0,B|260:324,1,80,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,312,24946,6,0,B|164:252|204:196,1,120
316,156,25913,2,0,B|382:163|420:96,2,120
284,36,27526,6,0,B|196:16|108:44|56:112,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,216,29139,1,8,0:0:0
248,216,29784,1,0,0:0:0
244,296,30107,6,0,B|332:316|420:288|472:220,1,240,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,132,31720,1,8,0:0:0
196,212,32365,1,0,0:0:0
204,296,32688,6,0,B|364:296,1,160
444,296,33655,2,0,B|472:200|376:168,2,160,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,300,35268,1,0,0:0:0
204,320,35913,2,0,B|104:292|144:184,1,160
300,188,37204,2,0,P|380:144,1,80
408,160,37688,6,0,P|404:40,1,120
324,56,38494,2,8,B|229:52|202:138,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,240,39784,2,0,B|248:312,1,60
324,332,40429,2,0,B|392:332|436:268,2,120
348,256,41720,2,0,B|396:140|356:44,1,200,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,64,42849,6,0,B|284:272,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,164,44300,1,0,0:0:0
112,316,44946,2,0,B|48:268|48:172,1,160
164,68,46236,2,0,B|235:32|321:62,1,160
356,216,47526,2,0,P|316:300,1,80
288,312,48010,6,0,B|288:104,1,200
132,80,49462,1,0,0:0:0
0,172,50107,2,0,B|0:252,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
48,316,50752,2,0,B|72:384|156:384,2,120
52,236,52042,5,0,0:0:0
144,104,52688,2,8,B|304:104,1,160
464,96,53978,6,8,B|464:272,1,160
316,256,55268,2,0,B|316:176,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,204,55913,6,0,B|224:124,2,80
156,244,56881,1,4,0:0:0
196,312,57204,2,0,P|392:344,1,160
336,248,58333,6,0,B|395:151|342:58,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,84,59784,1,0,0:0:0
124,172,60429,2,0,B|72:236,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,284,61075,6,0,B|112:312|196:284,1,160
256,172,62365,1,8,0:0:0
376,132,63010,6,0,B|376:212,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
272,56,64300,2,0,B|190:41|126:105,1,160
232,180,65591,2,0,B|272:252,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,304,66236,2,8,B|144:304,1,160
120,180,67526,1,0,0:0:0
260,104,68171,2,0,P|184:77,1,80
144,72,68655,2,0,P|144:204,1,120
148,272,69462,6,0,B|324:272,1,160
456,208,70752,2,0,B|456:288,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,136,72042,2,0,B|152:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,252,73333,6,0,B|40:332,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,280,74623,2,0,B|260:280,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
324,280,75268,2,0,B|416:264|452:184,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
444,64,76559,6,0,B|316:64,2,120,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,240,78494,1,4,0:0:0
256,192,79139,12,0,83010,0:0:0
152,112,84300,6,8,B|200:48|296:48,1,160
340,168,85591,2,8,B|292:232|196:232,1,160
212,104,86881,2,0,P|80:128,1,120
116,232,87688,2,0,B|116:324,1,80,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

Please take a look at it.

-Um..............................Think...

Insane
It's very good. The flow is nicely done.

00:01:236 (4) - Move it to 00:01:397 and shorten it. Or increase SV for it. - FIX

00:13:171 (7) - Maybe make this slider more wacky like 00:01:236 (4). - ???!?!?!?

00:15:914 (3,4,5,6) - I like the shape here but I think the jump from 4 to 5 is too big. 00:15:914 (3,4) - Switch the positions of these two circles so it plays in a line. - FIX

01:08:655 (3) - What's the reason to have this SV change and this slider here? Would be better as something more normal IMO. - I don't know

00:58:333 (1,2) - This blanket could be better. - ????

Very fun! Great job.

Really awesome job! I hope this mod was helpful. If you can't understand something then let me know.

Good luck with rank!!

MOD Thanks

Sylphi

osu! Alumni

3,304 posts

Joined February 2012

Sylphi 2012-12-01T15:40:55+00:00

Nyan~
I just look over this beatmap.

[K.R.T's Normal]
00:01:720 (1) - Add finish on slider end
00:05:429 (1) - Spinner end at 00:06:720
00:11:397 (1) - Remove new combo
00:23:010 (1) - Remove new combo
01:24:300 (1) - Add whistle on slider end

[Sonny's Hard]
00:05:430 (6) - Add clap or whistle on slider end
00:07:365 (2) - Remove whistle on slider arrow
00:26:881 (3) - How about move to 228, 180?

[Insane]
00:30:752 (3) - Apply reverse section
00:31:236 (4) - ^

Don't give kudosu to me.

MoodyRPG

2,754 posts

Joined August 2010

MoodyRPG 2012-12-03T17:59:39+00:00

WUBWUB

General

• Adjust the Lead-In to 2000
• Combo colours 1 and 2 are too similar, so I suggest to use this code
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255
```
• The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 and your video is from 854x600, you need to find other

Easy

-- I suggest to put one tick in AR and OD

-Kirito's Normal

- 01:03:010 (1,2) - Try something like this with these sliders?
- 01:11:397 (5) - Add a new combo here and remove to the next object

Sonny's Hard

- 01:18:494 (5) - This slider is a little off-screen in my opinion, why you don't move up?

Insane

-- Lol'd nice

SinJiRu'KoiSitai

- 00:18:333 (5) - Nice slider but I really don't like this white blanket, I suggest to remove

Good luck

kg2161012

275 posts

Joined August 2010

kg2161012 2012-12-06T15:24:34+00:00

Hello~

Can I make a diff for Taiko?

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-12-07T12:13:17+00:00

kg2161012 wrote:
Hello~

Can I make a diff for Taiko?

Sorry..T_T but happy

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-12-07T12:14:26+00:00

MoodyRPG wrote:
WUBWUB

General
• Adjust the Lead-In to 2000
• Combo colours 1 and 2 are too similar, so I suggest to use this code
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255
• The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 and your video is from 854x600, you need to find other
Easy
-- I suggest to put one tick in AR and OD
- Think...

SinJiRu'KoiSitai
- 00:18:333 (5) - Nice slider but I really don't like this white blanket, I suggest to remove
Good luck

All fix Thanks

kg2161012

275 posts

Joined August 2010

kg2161012 2012-12-07T12:24:45+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
kg2161012 wrote:
Hello~

Can I make a diff for Taiko?
Sorry..T_T but happy

All right...Thanks for your reply:3

And hope your map will be rank,GOOD LUCK!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-12-14T15:03:17+00:00

Curisu wrote:
From my q

[Hard]
00:05:430 (6) - x,y = 439,159 // I'll keep the original since changing breaks the symmetry.. a bit
00:07:526 - -whistle awesome whistle except this. // Well, I think this part deserves a whistle.. and also I can hear a beat quite up
00:22:204 - +clap // Well, I cant find other reason for a clap here, nor this follows my pattern
00:29:946 - +circle to fill a 3/2 gap? 00:30:268 (1) can be hit 1/2 earlier in 1st try. // Well, remapped with that idea
00:56:720 (1,2,3,4) - put it in different order? imo 1432 // fix
01:27:365 (4) - +whis? // not bad~

UnitedWeSin wrote:
Hello ~~
Modding via your request in #modreqs.
All suggestions, opinions, observations. Those kinds of things.

Sonny's Hard
00:19:784 (1) - This slider could look a lot better: // improved

00:37:688 (1) - There are good ideas with these sliders, they just need a little more work. Try like this: // done

It's still not very good. I'm bad at sliders.
Do the same thing on the other side also.
Fix all the sliders like this.

00:30:268 (1) - Polarity is bad here, I want to be playing a note at 00:30:107. Just move the entire combo left 1/2 beat so it starts at 00:30:107, and try this rhythm for 00:30:107 to 00:32:365: // well, remapped this part

00:43:333 (2) - Again, improve this blanket to fit the previous curve. // done

00:49:300 (1) - Blanket could be much better. // Tried

01:02:365 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Can we do something a little more fun here? Add a few sliders and make it more oval flow. // Will remap

01:06:720 (2,3) - Spacing is weird between the two. // Well, idk..

01:07:849 (3) - This plays bad IMO. Just do this from 01:07:526 to 01:08:333: // Fix

It's just nicer and more fluid to play.

Good luck with rank!!

Underflow wrote:
Nyan~
I just look over this beatmap.

[Sonny's Hard]
00:05:430 (6) - Add clap or whistle on slider end // I dont like placing sounds at this kind of part. Well, made this a drum instead..
00:07:365 (2) - Remove whistle on slider arrow // As I explained at the previous mod
00:26:881 (3) - How about move to 228, 180? // Seems not a bad idea

Don't give kudosu to me.

MoodyRPG wrote:
WUBWUB

General
• Adjust the Lead-In to 2000
• Combo colours 1 and 2 are too similar, so I suggest to use this code
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,192
Combo2 : 255,255,0
Combo3 : 255,128,0
Combo4 : 0,128,255
• The video's dimensions must not exceed 800x600 and your video is from 854x600, you need to find other
Sonny's Hard
- 01:18:494 (5) - This slider is a little off-screen in my opinion, why you don't move up? // Well, I don't think the slider is quite offscreen.. Though I havent used such a note too low like this, I think this will be fine
Good luck

SPOILER

osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 57849
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17216,88010
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Sonny's Hard
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:184665
BeatmapSetID:60574

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
430,322.58064516129,4,1,0,70,1,0
58333,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
79139,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0


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Combo4 : 0,128,255

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B2IN

B2IN 2012-12-17T02:30:48+00:00

Hi~ koreapenguin :3

늦어서 죄송해요 ~

[General]
배경이 살짝 눌렸어요. 괜찮으시면 이걸 사용해주세요. http://puu.sh/1q4XF
[Easy]
-> 히트 사운드를 좀 더 활용해 주셨으면 합니다.
00:22:688 (1) - 00:22:365 여기에 강박자 노트가 필요해보여요. 앞에 리듬패턴도 같아지게 00:22:365 여기로 옮겨주세요. 그리고나서 00:23:978 여기에 노트 추가해주시던지, 00:24:300 (3) - 이걸 반복슬라이더로 만들던지해서 앞에랑 같아지게 해주세요.
00:24:946 (1) - 슬라이더 시작에 피니시추가 해주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
00:25:913 (2) - 여기두 피시니. 제일 마지막부분에요.
00:33:978 (2) - 여기두 제일 마지막에 피니시
00:37:688 - 이 부분 박자가 필요 해 보입니다. 노트를 추가 해주시던지, 00:38:171 까지 오는 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요.
00:40:429 (4) - 세 군데 전부 피니시 넣어주세요.
00:50:752 (4) - ^
01:05:591 (3) - 이 부분은 별로 강조 되는 부분이라는 생각이 들지 않아요. 피니시 제거해주세요.
01:16:559 (1) - 양 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요. 화살표부분 빼고.

[K.R.T's Normal]
00:01:397 - 여기도 서클노트 넣어야 할 거같아요.강력추천
00:05:429 (1) - Underflow님은 00:06:720 에서 끝내라고하셨는데, 제 의견은 살짝 달라요.
모든 노래가 다 그런건 아니지만 완전 확실하게 들리지 않는이상, 이지랑 노말에서 만큼은 스핀을 1/1에서 끝내는게 좋을거같아요. 그래야 스핀 다음으로 오는 노트박자도 헷갈리지 않구요. 그런데, 00:06:559 로 끝내는건 00:06:881 여기에 강박이 들어가야하는데 없어서 이상하구, 00:06:881 로 끝내는게 제일 정확하긴 하지만, 다음 노트와 시간적으로 살짝 가까운 느낌이 드네요.orz..최종적으로 제 의견은 스핀을 슬라이더로 바꾸는거에요.00:05:429 여기서 시작해서 00:06:397 로 끝나는 슬라이더 넣고, 00:06:881 에 피니시넣어서 서클노트 추가.
00:26:881 (3) - 보컬에 맞추는게 더 어울릴 거같아요. 00:26:881 00:27:042 노트추가

01:18:494 (3) - 이 슬라이더는 지금 박자랑 안어울려요. 서클노트 하나로 01:18:494 여기에 넣어주시던지, 01:18:655 여기도 노트 추가해주시던지 해주세용.
[Sonny's Hard]
00:13:655 (2,3) - 서로 안 겹쳤으면 좋겠어요.
00:49:139 (4,1) - 4번과 1번 사이 공간을 일정하게 만들면 더 이쁠듯.
00:53:333 (1) - 앞에 패턴처럼 여기도 피니시. 슬라이더 시작부분.

[Insane]
-> 제 의견이지만, 앞부분에서 쓰셨던 휘슬들처럼 키아이타임에도 넣어주면 사운드적으로 더 재미요소가 생길 것 같아요.
00:04:784 (4,5) - 00:04:946 00:05:268 에는 전혀 박자소리가 들리지않아요. 지금 놓으신 슬라이더 위치에다가 서클노트를 넣는게 더 어울리다고 봐요.
00:15:268 (4) - 휘슬을 여기대신에 00:15:107 (3) 에 넣는게 더 좋아보여요.
00:42:849 (2) - 여기도 강조되는 부분이라 생각해요. 피니시추가.
[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
00:30:026 (10) - 이 노트 박자는 알아보기 좀 헷갈려요. 지워주시던가 앞에쓰던 박자들 처럼 00:29:865 로 옮겨주세요.
01:08:655 (3) - 슬라이더 시작부분에 피니시 넣으면 더 좋을거같아요.
01:09:462 (6,7) - 두개 슬라이더 거리를 다시 맞춰서 대칭해주세요. 너무 가까워요.
01:17:526 (1) - 여기도 슬라이더 시작부분에 피니시넣어주세요. 같이 강조되는 부분.
01:22:204 (2) - x360 y124로 옮기셔야 1번 3번 슬라이더의 가운데가 되요.
01:21:720 (1,3) - 1번 복사하셔서 3번슬라이더에 대칭써주세요. x위치가 안맞아요.

GL ~

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-12-17T10:01:13+00:00

SPOILER

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-Neipezi

2,257 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2012-12-17T18:17:13+00:00

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All fix

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-12-18T00:22:32+00:00

B2IN wrote:
Hi~ koreapenguin :3

늦어서 죄송해요 ~

[General]
배경이 살짝 눌렸어요. 괜찮으시면 이걸 사용해주세요. http://puu.sh/1q4XF
[Easy]
-> 히트 사운드를 좀 더 활용해 주셨으면 합니다.
00:22:688 (1) - 00:22:365 여기에 강박자 노트가 필요해보여요. 앞에 리듬패턴도 같아지게 00:22:365 여기로 옮겨주세요. 그리고나서 00:23:978 여기에 노트 추가해주시던지, 00:24:300 (3) - 이걸 반복슬라이더로 만들던지해서 앞에랑 같아지게 해주세요.
00:24:946 (1) - 슬라이더 시작에 피니시추가 해주는게 좋을 것 같아요.
00:25:913 (2) - 여기두 피시니. 제일 마지막부분에요.
00:33:978 (2) - 여기두 제일 마지막에 피니시
00:37:688 - 이 부분 박자가 필요 해 보입니다. 노트를 추가 해주시던지, 00:38:171 까지 오는 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요.
00:40:429 (4) - 세 군데 전부 피니시 넣어주세요.
00:50:752 (4) - ^
01:05:591 (3) - 이 부분은 별로 강조 되는 부분이라는 생각이 들지 않아요. 피니시 제거해주세요.
01:16:559 (1) - 양 끝에 피니시 넣어주세요. 화살표부분 빼고.

-All fix

[Insane]
-> 제 의견이지만, 앞부분에서 쓰셨던 휘슬들처럼 키아이타임에도 넣어주면 사운드적으로 더 재미요소가 생길 것 같아요.
00:04:784 (4,5) - 00:04:946 00:05:268 에는 전혀 박자소리가 들리지않아요. 지금 놓으신 슬라이더 위치에다가 서클노트를 넣는게 더 어울리다고 봐요. - 딱히 문제가없어보여서 수정안했습니다.
00:15:268 (4) - 휘슬을 여기대신에 00:15:107 (3) 에 넣는게 더 좋아보여요.
00:42:849 (2) - 여기도 강조되는 부분이라 생각해요. 피니시추가.

-FIX

[SinJiRu'KoiSitai]
00:30:026 (10) - 이 노트 박자는 알아보기 좀 헷갈려요. 지워주시던가 앞에쓰던 박자들 처럼 00:29:865 로 옮겨주세요. - Think
01:08:655 (3) - 슬라이더 시작부분에 피니시 넣으면 더 좋을거같아요.
01:09:462 (6,7) - 두개 슬라이더 거리를 다시 맞춰서 대칭해주세요. 너무 가까워요.
01:17:526 (1) - 여기도 슬라이더 시작부분에 피니시넣어주세요. 같이 강조되는 부분.
01:22:204 (2) - x360 y124로 옮기셔야 1번 3번 슬라이더의 가운데가 되요.
01:21:720 (1,3) - 1번 복사하셔서 3번슬라이더에 대칭써주세요. x위치가 안맞아요.

-FIX

GL ~

MOD Thanks

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-12-18T08:51:19+00:00

Where is MAT,BAT!!!!

riffy

osu! Alumni

8,060 posts

Joined December 2010

riffy 2012-12-21T13:33:18+00:00

koreapenguin wrote:
Where is MAT,BAT!!!!

How about my mod instead? :3

eye patches are cute, that's why i'm checking it!

[General]

Why don't you use same combo colours for all diffs?
Try Slider Tick Rate 2. It fits much better with music!
Add more tags: Kyoto Animation for example
AudioLeadIn: 1500 is enough here, imo! Don't make us wait too long!
Your BG seems to be low quality. Try to find better one, I'm sure you can do it!
Use same preview time for all diffs!
According to AiBat your kiais are unsnapped! Try to check them again, probably it's a bug!
You have two diffs with Approach Rate 9! What a plenty of choice! Try to use AR - 7 for hard. 8 - for Insane and 9 - for extra!

[Easy]

00:07:365 (1) - BPM is quite fast and I think this circle is appearing too soon after spinner. May be confusing for beginners. Try to re-do it if it's possible.
00:12:042 - It feels quite confusing when you're ignoring such a strong beat! Try to put circle (with finish hitsound) here!
00:12:365 (1,2,3,1) - try to keep it consistent with claps in music. I'd start them all 1/1 earlier to fit with clap hitsounds and rhythm. this way
00:32:042 (2) - this clap here feels TOTALLY wrong, imo. There's claps at 00:31:720 and at 00:32:365 - so.. try something like this. Note: Slider will have claps on the head and on the tail.
00:37:688 (1,3) - this pattern is ok. But looks kinda overlappy and can confuse some beginners. I'd recommend you to fix it. Also: end 00:39:784 (3) - at 00:40:107 - to follow music/vocals.
00:56:397 (1,2) - feels quite off vocals. I'd recommend you to try something different. For example you can follow vocals here - it will make rhythm easier and more understandable!
01:07:204 (1) - erm.. did you forget finish hitsound here? Or what? :V
01:27:688 (4) - I'd put here new combo because it feels like new line of vocals and it gives us more understandable pattern.

I'd recommend you to work on sliders' shapes if you want to make your map perfect!

[Normal]

Whistles here feels quite awkward, imo. How about finishes instead?
Song is quite fast! Try to use Approach Rate 5 it will fit with patterns/music better!
00:04:300 (1) - Slider velocity is quite fast and normal players probably won't notice second reverse arrow in time. How about replacing it with 1reversed slider and circle?
00:05:107 (2) - It feels like pattern ends here. So.. it would be good idea to use Finish hitsound here! It will also fit with the music!
00:06:881 (1,2) - It will be overlapped with spinner's hitburst! And since there's stack it could be a bit too hard to read for normal player.
00:47:688 (4) - how about finish hitsound here? I think it will hfit here!
01:21:720 (1,2) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst! May confuse some players!

Try to work a bit more on hitsounds. I don't like the wistle hitsound in start parts. It feels a bit awkward to me. But you have cute patterns, I like them.

[Hard]

00:05:429 (6) - I think, that you should try to end the slider at 00:06:559 - because it sounds better and there's loud beat. btw, why don't you use new sliders (with 3 points)?
00:21:236 (5) - How about placing new combo here? It feels like there's new pattern starts, so it would be a good idea if you've NC'd this circle.
00:29:462 (6) - If you're trying to follow guitar here, add reverse at this slider! It will fit here really well! and it feels quite empty without object at 00:30:107.
00:57:849 (1) - did you forget clap hitsound here? I think it follows pattern!
01:21:720 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for [Hard] diff. And also jump distance is too random! I'd recommend you to replace it with something consistent!

Good rhythm. But your sliders would be MUCH better if you used new way of making sliders! It's much easier and looks better!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I won't mod harder diffs. Just want to show you, that you should get a bit more mods before requesting a MAT. Anyway, good luck!

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2012-12-21T16:43:25+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
koreapenguin wrote:
Where is MAT,BAT!!!!

How about my mod instead? :3

eye patches are cute, that's why i'm checking it!

[General]
-- Hope penguin will fix these for me
Why don't you use same combo colours for all diffs?
Try Slider Tick Rate 2. It fits much better with music!
Add more tags: Kyoto Animation for example
AudioLeadIn: 1500 is enough here, imo! Don't make us wait too long!
Your BG seems to be low quality. Try to find better one, I'm sure you can do it!
Use same preview time for all diffs!
According to AiBat your kiais are unsnapped! Try to check them again, probably it's a bug!
You have two diffs with Approach Rate 9! What a plenty of choice! Try to use AR - 7 for hard. 8 - for Insane and 9 - for extra!
[Hard]
00:05:429 (6) - I think, that you should try to end the slider at 00:06:559 - because it sounds better and there's loud beat. btw, why don't you use new sliders (with 3 points)? // I think the current ending point is good enough. I will change the shape though
00:21:236 (5) - How about placing new combo here? It feels like there's new pattern starts, so it would be a good idea if you've NC'd this circle. // k
00:29:462 (6) - If you're trying to follow guitar here, add reverse at this slider! It will fit here really well! and it feels quite empty without object at 00:30:107. // ok
00:57:849 (1) - did you forget clap hitsound here? I think it follows pattern! // fix
01:21:720 (1,2,3,4) - too hard for [Hard] diff. And also jump distance is too random! I'd recommend you to replace it with something consistent! //
Changed some

Good rhythm. But your sliders would be MUCH better if you used new way of making sliders! It's much easier and looks better! // Orz this was mapped before the update
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I won't mod harder diffs. Just want to show you, that you should get a bit more mods before requesting a MAT. Anyway, good luck!

Thank you~~

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57849
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17216,88010
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Sonny's Hard
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:184665
BeatmapSetID:60574

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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176,324,31720,2,0,B|88:304,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,248,32042,2,0,B|-12:164,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,168,32688,5,0,0:0:0
184,168,32849,2,0,B|200:136|228:120|268:120|296:136|312:168,1,160
376,216,33333,2,0,B|360:248|332:264|292:264|264:248|248:216,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,168,33817,2,0,B|328:136|356:120|396:120|424:136|440:168,1,160
448,248,34300,2,0,B|428:296|400:316|368:336|320:336,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,48,35268,5,4,0:0:0
316,48,35429,2,0,B|256:48|216:76|196:136,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,148,35913,2,0,B|276:184|256:204|216:212,1,80
152,200,36236,2,0,B|121:182|114:155|123:132,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,68,36559,2,0,B|203:50|230:57|257:87,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
200,140,37042,5,0,0:0:0
256,240,37204,1,0,0:0:0
352,176,37365,1,0,0:0:0
352,176,37688,6,0,B|352:228|352:228|384:256|416:282|408:316,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,308,38171,2,8,B|256:248|256:172|256:172|256:248|172:320,1,320
103,314,38978,2,0,B|95:282|128:256|160:228|160:228|160:176,1,160
192,108,39462,2,0,B|208:76|236:60|276:60|304:76|320:108,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,156,40268,1,0,0:0:0
320,204,40430,6,0,B|308:276|224:236|204:332,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
192,204,40913,2,0,B|204:276|288:236|308:332,1,160
392,248,41397,2,0,B|429:253|408:295|456:305,2,80,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,168,41881,2,0,B|395:150|416:160|421:136,2,40,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,204,42204,5,0,0:0:0
232,284,42365,1,0,0:0:0
204,168,42526,1,0,0:0:0
104,44,42849,6,0,B|40:104|124:132|32:192,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
20,260,43333,2,0,B|64:264|96:248|120:212|120:212|164:212,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
44,184,44139,1,0,0:0:0
108,132,44300,2,0,B|132:100|176:92|176:92|220:100|244:132,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,184,44784,1,0,0:0:0
364,132,44946,2,0,B|406:132|406:132|430:168|462:184|506:180,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,288,45591,6,0,B|388:348|328:376|272:356,1,160,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,256,46075,1,0,0:0:0
228,344,46236,2,0,B|170:325|153:261|182:210,1,160,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,256,46720,1,0,0:0:0
200,172,46881,2,0,B|228:118|293:112|339:150,2,160,0|12|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,256,47688,1,4,0:0:0
428,168,48010,6,0,B|456:112|428:52|360:44,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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228,96,48817,2,0,B|237:66|269:54|295:76,1,80
220,176,49139,1,8,0:0:0
168,236,49300,6,0,B|128:184|156:132|156:132|144:84,1,160
72,124,49784,2,0,B|48:168|64:208,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
68,280,50107,2,0,B|68:332|32:356,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,276,50591,1,0,0:0:0
156,196,50752,6,0,B|156:132|184:88|232:64,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
260,140,51236,2,0,B|300:112|356:112|420:140,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,208,51720,2,0,B|420:244|440:288|420:352,1,160,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,316,52204,1,0,0:0:0
272,340,52365,1,8,0:0:0
288,260,52526,1,0,0:0:0
212,284,52688,2,0,B|112:256,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,53333,6,0,B|324:84|324:84|392:128,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,176,53817,1,0,0:0:0
328,256,53978,2,0,B|327:336|327:336|253:370,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
208,304,54462,2,0,B|161:324|117:312|97:268|117:212,1,160
32,240,54946,2,0,B|12:194|24:150|68:130|110:146,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,192,55913,5,0,0:0:0
256,120,56075,1,0,0:0:0
328,192,56236,1,8,0:0:0
256,264,56397,1,0,0:0:0
184,120,56720,5,0,0:0:0
328,120,56881,1,0,0:0:0
328,264,57042,1,8,0:0:0
184,264,57204,1,0,0:0:0
36,52,57849,5,8,0:0:0
52,132,58010,1,0,0:0:0
88,288,58333,2,0,B|112:344|168:368|236:324,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,268,58817,2,0,B|196:212|252:188|320:232,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
248,288,59623,2,0,B|299:320|359:307|389:232,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
304,224,60107,2,0,B|269:171|293:115|349:91,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,96,61075,6,0,B|180:40|124:16|56:60,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
40,140,61559,2,0,B|64:196|120:220|188:176,1,160
124,120,62042,1,8,0:0:0
372,208,62365,6,0,P|368:252|344:284,1,80
296,224,62688,2,0,P|275:252|271:296,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
320,356,63010,2,0,P|224:352|196:304,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
216,84,63655,6,0,B|276:28|304:112|364:64,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
440,92,64139,1,0,0:0:0
384,148,64300,2,0,B|324:204|296:120|236:168,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
176,224,64784,1,0,0:0:0
252,252,64946,2,0,B|312:196|340:280|400:232,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
472,268,65430,1,0,0:0:0
404,312,65591,1,0,0:0:0
108,304,65913,1,8,0:0:0
88,228,66075,1,0,0:0:0
112,152,66236,6,0,B|20:120,2,80,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,60,66720,2,0,B|268:20,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,176,67204,2,0,B|287:249,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
328,296,67526,5,0,0:0:0
376,232,67688,2,0,B|424:168,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
416,88,68010,1,0,0:0:0
340,112,68171,2,0,B|292:176,1,80
160,360,68655,6,0,B|104:336|80:280|124:212,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,276,69139,2,0,B|236:252|260:196|216:128,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,200,69946,2,0,B|128:149|141:89|216:59,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,144,70430,2,0,B|277:179|333:155|357:99,2,160,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,304,71397,6,0,B|200:360|144:384|76:340,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
60,260,71881,2,0,B|84:204|140:180|208:224,1,160
144,280,72365,1,8,0:0:0
316,112,72688,6,0,B|388:56,1,80
428,128,73010,2,0,B|477:191,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,240,73333,2,0,B|348:289,1,80
300,224,73655,1,8,0:0:0
168,136,73978,5,0,0:0:0
108,84,74139,1,0,0:0:0
88,160,74300,1,8,0:0:0
212,264,74623,2,0,B|252:312|308:312|348:264,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
396,200,75107,1,0,0:0:0
348,136,75268,2,0,B|308:88|252:88|212:136,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,196,75752,2,0,B|88:144,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
64,224,76075,2,0,B|128:270,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,248,76559,6,0,B|312:308|360:328|424:308,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
380,240,77042,2,0,B|440:216|460:168|440:104,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,148,77526,2,0,B|348:88|300:68|236:88,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
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256,56,83655,1,0,0:0:0
256,328,83978,1,8,0:0:0
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328,148,84784,2,0,B|292:180|288:216|300:248|300:248|248:280,1,160
220,204,85268,2,0,B|216:152|256:112|276:92|276:92|260:52,1,160,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
184,68,85752,2,0,B|156:12|84:12|56:76,1,160
124,120,86236,1,0,0:0:0
136,200,86397,1,0,0:0:0
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koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2012-12-22T17:35:17+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
koreapenguin wrote:
Where is MAT,BAT!!!!

How about my mod instead? :3

eye patches are cute, that's why i'm checking it!

[General]
Why don't you use same combo colours for all diffs?
Try Slider Tick Rate 2. It fits much better with music!
Add more tags: Kyoto Animation for example
AudioLeadIn: 1500 is enough here, imo! Don't make us wait too long!
Your BG seems to be low quality. Try to find better one, I'm sure you can do it!
Use same preview time for all diffs!
According to AiBat your kiais are unsnapped! Try to check them again, probably it's a bug!
You have two diffs with Approach Rate 9! What a plenty of choice! Try to use AR - 7 for hard. 8 - for Insane and 9 - for extra!
[Easy]
00:07:365 (1) - BPM is quite fast and I think this circle is appearing too soon after spinner. May be confusing for beginners. Try to re-do it if it's possible.
00:12:042 - It feels quite confusing when you're ignoring such a strong beat! Try to put circle (with finish hitsound) here!
00:12:365 (1,2,3,1) - try to keep it consistent with claps in music. I'd start them all 1/1 earlier to fit with clap hitsounds and rhythm. this way
00:32:042 (2) - this clap here feels TOTALLY wrong, imo. There's claps at 00:31:720 and at 00:32:365 - so.. try something like this. Note: Slider will have claps on the head and on the tail.
00:37:688 (1,3) - this pattern is ok. But looks kinda overlappy and can confuse some beginners. I'd recommend you to fix it. Also: end 00:39:784 (3) - at 00:40:107 - to follow music/vocals.
00:56:397 (1,2) - feels quite off vocals. I'd recommend you to try something different. For example you can follow vocals here - it will make rhythm easier and more understandable!
01:07:204 (1) - erm.. did you forget finish hitsound here? Or what? :V
01:27:688 (4) - I'd put here new combo because it feels like new line of vocals and it gives us more understandable pattern.

I'd recommend you to work on sliders' shapes if you want to make your map perfect!
I won't mod harder diffs. Just want to show you, that you should get a bit more mods before requesting a MAT. Anyway, good luck!

MOD Thanks

>< All Fix~

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2013-01-02T19:35:10+00:00

Hi hi! from my modding queue!

00:58:333 - preview point here? :3 why not?

Easy
01:06:236 (1) - remove new combo?
01:01:075 (2) - x:212 y:308
01:18:494 (2) - replace it with a slider
Easy looks nice

I skipped normal

Sonny's Hard
00:29:220 - more distance
00:45:591 (1) - distance 0,9x

Nothing else i can say!
Good luck! rank it now

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2013-01-02T19:57:14+00:00

-Cloudchaser wrote:
Hi hi! from my modding queue!

00:58:333 - preview point here? :3 why not? - NP

Easy
01:06:236 (1) - remove new combo? - FIX
01:01:075 (2) - x:212 y:308 - ????
01:18:494 (2) - replace it with a slider - Think..
Easy looks nice

Nothing else i can say!
Good luck! rank it now

787B

769 posts

Joined November 2010

787B 2013-01-03T18:25:52+00:00

Woof~
From my Modding Queue

General
Looks everything in order here.

Easy
00:32:688 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider?
00:50:752 (1) - Move the last point of slider to x:316 y:52 to make it symmetric? http://puu.sh/1IZNL
Nicely done with this one.

-Kirito's Normal
00:14:623 (1) - Suggest moving this to x:324 y:156 to make symmetric with 00:12:688 (2) -
00:34:623 (5) - Looks odd to me. Try making this into a straight slider or a better curved slider, it feels like you were in doubt when making this one.
00:50:429 (4,1) - Jump not recommended in a Normal diff imo, but that's up to you.

Sonny's Hard
Hi Sonny o3o
00:12:042 (1) - Overlap with 00:12:688 (3) - Looks a bit harsh to me, but it's alright if you think so. That's just me.
00:36:559 (5) - Could've been made like this. So the overlap with 00:35:429 (2) - will look a bit better.
00:54:946 (5) - Could have been aligned with 00:54:462 (4) - Something like this?
Very nice diff. Good job Sonny!

Insane
00:05:429 (1) - Finish spin at 00:06:559 - ? It sound better imo, and besides, it will have time for players to react.

SinJiRu's Insane
Couldn't find nothing wrong here, pretty solid diff.

This is bubble-ready imo!
Good luck in ranking!
Have a star :3

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2013-01-04T00:03:31+00:00

Wolf wrote:
Woof~
From my Modding Queue

General
Looks everything in order here.

Easy
00:32:688 (1) - Add finish at the end of slider? - FIX
00:50:752 (1) - Move the last point of slider to x:316 y:52 to make it symmetric? http://puu.sh/1IZNL
Nicely done with this one. - Good >< FIX

Insane
00:05:429 (1) - Finish spin at 00:06:559 - ? It sound better imo, and besides, it will have time for players to react. - FIX

This is bubble-ready imo!
Good luck in ranking!
Have a star :3

MOD for Thanks

and Star Thanks

[ Zzz ]

1,296 posts

Joined June 2011

[ Zzz ] 2013-01-04T09:26:29+00:00

이지

00:07:365 (1) - 00:07:204 (1) - 이쪽으로 땡겨주세요!

00:10:429 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JknN 이런건 어떨까요?

00:16:559 (4) - http://puu.sh/1JkoE ^

00:30:429 (1) - 제거

01:24:300 (3) - http://puu.sh/1JksT 대충 저런 박자 어떨까요 ? 슬라 서클 관계 x 그냥 박자만요 ';ㅅ; ㅣ

키리토 노말

00:09:462 (1) - 이 이후부터 http://puu.sh/1JkxW 이렇게 박자 해보시는건 어떨까요?

00:13:978 (3) - 슬라이더를 http://puu.sh/1Jkz0 이렇게 펴주는건 어떨까요?

00:26:236 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JkAU 이렇게 해보는건 어떨까요?

00:50:429 (4,1) - http://puu.sh/1JkBE 점프가 너무 심하지않을까요?

01:01:075 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/1JkD1 저런 박자 어떨까요?

01:21:397 (1) - 이지와 비슷하게 http://puu.sh/1JkIw , http://puu.sh/1JkIR 이런식으로 박자해보는건 어떨까요?

맘같아선 여기까지만 하고싶지만 ..

더해야겟지!

하드

00:26:881 (3) - 꼬리 2개 빼시거나 마지막 꼬리 하나만 빼주세요. http://puu.sh/1JkRl < 2개 뺀거에요 이게 'ㅅ' ;;

음..그런데 하드치고는 조금 어렵지않을까요?... 는 그냥 기분탓일지도 모르겟네요 'ㅅ' ;;

koreapenguin

1,747 posts

Joined March 2012

Topic Starter

koreapenguin 2013-01-04T14:08:15+00:00

[ Zzz ] wrote:
이지

00:07:365 (1) - 00:07:204 (1) - 이쪽으로 땡겨주세요!

00:10:429 (2) - http://puu.sh/1JknN 이런건 어떨까요?

00:16:559 (4) - http://puu.sh/1JkoE ^

00:30:429 (1) - 제거

01:24:300 (3) - http://puu.sh/1JksT 대충 저런 박자 어떨까요 ? 슬라 서클 관계 x 그냥 박자만요 ';ㅅ; ㅣ

MOD Thanks

and star Thanks

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2013-01-04T17:17:07+00:00

아.......... 노비디오로 받아서 그런지 자꾸 비디오가 없네요

일단 이번에도 비디오 배경에좀 부탁합니다~

osu file format v11

[General]
AudioFilename: INSIDE IDENTITY.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 57849
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.8
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 17216,88010
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:INSIDE IDENTITY (TV Size)
Artist:Black Raison d'etre
ArtistUnicode:Black Raison d'etre
Creator:koreapenguin
Version:Sonny's Hard
Source:Chu-2 byo demo KOI ga shitai
Tags:-Kirito SinJiRu Sonnyc ending
BeatmapID:184665
BeatmapSetID:60574

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
430,322.58064516129,4,1,0,70,1,0
58333,-100,4,1,0,80,0,1
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