1. Al2e's Hard (4.84 stars, 204 notes)
2. Breeze's Normal+ (4.64 stars, 188 notes)
3. CC's Hard (4.93 stars, 244 notes)
4. Crazy Jay's Hard (4.91 stars, 216 notes)
5. Easy (1.7 stars, 87 notes)
6. Normal (4.27 stars, 189 notes)

eee wrote:

hi alvisto, looks to me like you got the hang of mapping, good fer you :3 Thanks. My 3rd beatmap, and 2nd try on a vocal song.

eeemod GO!!!

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I'll say move your BPM to 152.00, unless some BAT tells you otherwise,( it is pretty rare to have a .02 there. ) 152 ? Are you sure ? I tried 152 already, and it sounds weird for me... XD And I previously use 135. The .02 is after someone nazi mod my BPM. So, I am going to keep 135.02 for a while until someone finds a better BPM. ^o^
also, move the ending kiai timing to 01:37:520 (offset = 97,520 ) I know your rationale and reason for moving this kiai time, but I designed it so that the fountains exactly show when you hit the note. Uhm... @.@ /me is bad at explaining.

that's all, no major problems with the map, it's quite good Thanks !

you can have a start* thanks

Crazy Jay wrote:

Could you wait for my difficulty?
I'll finish it on this Sunday evening(Because new term begins,so I'm not free until weekends T.T)

Crazy Jay wrote:

yeah,I'm a fan of them
"你最红" is a good song

Crazy Jay wrote:

fixed
and add some hitsounds(锣)

Crazy Jay wrote:

you're quite right
I felt uncomfortable when I test the part you said,fixed

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Can you please center the spinner? It sort of annoying to see the spinner move to the sides

alvisto's Normal:

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Combo mod:
00:23:30 (3,1) - the pattern fits the music better if you remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 3 (swap new combo) and continue on this pattern so 00:25:08 (3,1) - swap new combo
00:26:86 (3) - new combo to be consistent with the next occurence
00:30:41 (4,1) - like 00:23:30 (3,1) and continue the pattern for the rest of the section You're right about the combo yoshi. XD All fixed ! Include the later part too ! =D I always like your combo mod. =D

I am not sure how BATS would take the kiai fountain use, but they do fit.

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding v.5.0 Go~ wow version 5.0 =P

Osz. File Check (Done)

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Video: No
SB (Story Board): No
Custom Skin: Yes
Background: Yes
[Current] Size: 6.32 MB / 10.00 MB
Source: Yes
Tags: Yes

[alvisto's Normal] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.020 (Just 135 BPM flat sounds fine for me so far. But you can test to see if that is okay.) / 14,422 ms (Make sure to have the BPM check first before getting to the offset. This might be off as well.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 197 (173 Circles / 23 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 242
[Current] Max Score: 1,237,136
[Current] Star Rating: 4.30
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

00:14:42 (1,2,3) - The spacing looks a bit uneven inbetween these notes.
01:04:19 (6) - I was thinking if a new combo could start here?
01:35:29 (5) - ^
01:36:18 (3) - ^

Notes: Not bad. Just some minor stuff to look at but also, make sure to double check the spacing to see that the map is okay.

All BPM and mods suggested here are used. =P

[Breeze's Normal] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.020 (Just 135 BPM flat sounds fine for me so far. But you can test to see if that is okay.) / 14,422 ms (Make sure to have the BPM check first before getting to the offset. This might be off as well.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: 1.5 Seconds
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 2.00
Distance Snap Average: x0.6 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 208 (157 Circles / 50 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 371
[Current] Max Score: 2,190,630
[Current] Star Rating: 4.55 <- (I think it would be better to call it [Breeze's Normal+] or [Breeze's Hard] in this case.)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.6
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.6

00:00:31 (1) - No hitnote should ever be before the first offset. Either add/move the first offset to here or delete the notes before it.
00:00:31 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Be very careful when setting in these parts of a song. They are not evenly rhythematic to the map.

Notes: The rest of the map seems okay so far, but might have some questionable setups like the slider at 01:12:63 (1). But if it seems okay to everyone else, then its fine.

Lemme see what I can do about those early parts. (Need to consult the mapper... =P)

[Al2e's Hard] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.020 (Just 135 BPM flat sounds fine for me so far. But you can test to see if that is okay.) / 14,422 ms (Make sure to have the BPM check first before getting to the offset. This might be off as well.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: No
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.2 + Manual Spacing
[Current] Objects: 204 (130 Circles / 73 Sliders / 1 Spinner )
[Current] Max Combo: 326
[Current] Max Score: 1,755,006
[Current] Star Rating: 4.84
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7

00:28:64 (2) - I think the new combo should start here?
00:39:30 (1,2) - There's some extra spacing here...
00:49:97 (1,2) - ^
00:57:08 (1) - Not sure if having this as a single note combo at this point is reasonable...
01:05:74 (4) - Maybe the new combo can start here?
01:12:85 (5) - ^
01:14:85 (5) - ^

Notes: Just some minor/odd things to check into. The spacing at some parts of the song seems a bit odd or random. I know its supposed to be jumps but just double check to make sure it fits okay with the flow of the song.

The combo mods are obvious things that need to be fixed ! All done !

[Crazy Jay's Hard] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.020 (Just 135 BPM flat sounds fine for me so far. But you can test to see if that is okay.) / 14,422 ms (Make sure to have the BPM check first before getting to the offset. This might be off as well.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x1.0 (Semi-Solid)
[Current] Objects: 215 (161 Circles / 52 Sliders / 2 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 318
[Current] Max Score: 2,055,110
[Current] Star Rating: 4.91
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.8
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.8

00:42:64 (1) - This repeating slider sounds really off. Please check into it.

Notes: Seems okay so far but might want to check into the hitsounds and the notes. They can cause some confusion on "where" the beats are.

Changed the repeating slider into something else. =P

[CC's Difficulty] (Done)

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Timing (BPM / Offset): 135.020 (Just 135 BPM flat sounds fine for me so far. But you can test to see if that is okay.) / 14,422 ms (Make sure to have the BPM check first before getting to the offset. This might be off as well.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Currently] with Audio Lead-In: No
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: x0.8 (Solid)
[Current] Objects: 244 (193 Circles / 47 Sliders / 4 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 318
[Current] Max Score: 1,924,334
[Current] Star Rating: 4.94
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv.7
[Current] Circle Size: Lv.3
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv.7

00:18:19 (?) - Could add in a break here to fill in that gap.
00:24:42 (7,8,9) - The way this is set up makes it look really odd in playmode.
00:50:86 (1,2,3) - The spacing inbetween looks a bit odd.
00:52:63 (1,2,3) - ^

Notes: Seems okay besides the minor stuff. Just make sure to double check for anything that might seem odd.

I will let the mapper to fix it him/herself. =P

Overall: The map seems nice overall. Though there are two things that worries me. One is the timing it has currently. That extra .020 in the BPM could make the map play oddly around the end (and maybe the beginning as well). Make sure to have that checked. The second thing is the hitsounds. The use of the hitsounds is nice, but might be confusing if the map is not set properly to use it. Also, you could try using some custom combo colors to give the map a bit more "feel" to it and make it look a bit more neater. But still, good job and i'll be droping my star in then...

pete2528 wrote:

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gdeath wrote:

[alvisto's Normal]

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all fine!

[Breeze's Normal]

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01:25:52 (8) - new combo?
01:29:07 (9) - ^
is it really normal?>w< Changed to Normal + :3

[Al2e's Hard]

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[00:48:63 (5) - new combo?

[Crazy Jay's Hard]

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all fine!

[CC's Difficulty]

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00:48:41 (8) - new combo
01:16:41 (9) - ^

nice mappset
starry