Naryuga wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:27:958 (5,6,7) - clap? ok
2. 01:24:181 (3,4) - whistle? ok

Guy wrote:

alacatさんのリクからです～　　ありがとうございます～!
　

alacat's Hard

　●　00:42:181 (6) - このスライダーの終端が見えない感じのはいいんだったっけ・・・? ちょっと自分もよくわからないですが注意すべき点だと思います。
ちょっと怖いので見えるようにしました　

DarknessAngel wrote:

change your diff's name to "bakacat's Hard",please.
/me runs
fixed xD www
00:45:514 (6,7) - add whistles to those sliders' head ? I think it would sound abounding and nice. (:
also the whistles can emphasize the vocals well. =w=b ok >w<
00:48:847 (4) - I feel a bit empty here,how about add whistle to the slider's head and tail ?
it sounds good to me. sure ~ ok
01:27:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - the volume is a bit low to me.
since there are so many heavy drums and symbals,I suggest increase 10 % volume to your hitsounds. ok

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi Quilt&alacat~~~~ \:D/ frost \:3/

alacat's Hard
00:09:403 (4) - add a note here ? I think it fits with vocal and not too hard for hard diff fixed :3

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[alacat's Hard]

1. 00:59:403 (3) - Change a circle on 00:59:514,follow with lyrics. hmm , I think so too ~ but I follow lyrics here >_<00:59:403 - and 00:59:514 -
2. 01:23:736 (2,3) - Change a 1/1 slider,sound much better to me. ok ~

[alacat's Easy]

1. 00:56:181 (1) - Should extend to 00:58:181. ok!
2. 01:28:847 - Change default soft finish more fits to here. ^

Naryuga wrote:

via in-game req~

[Normal]

1. Tick 1 ok
2. HP +1? (Hardとのバランス調節で) ok
3. 00:59:736 (1) - finishhhh ok
4. 01:00:625 (3) - こんなふうに(1,2)を囲むようにするといいかも。以下のコードは例　 ok
   

   180,120,60625,2,0,B|116:124|80:180,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:06:403 (4) - 頭にclap

ok

[Insane]

1. 00:13:514 (1,2) - Ctrl+G? ok
2. 00:15:292 (7) - New combo ok
3. 00:18:181 (6) - 終点にclap ok
4. 01:02:403 (5) - , 01:03:625 (2) - きれいに重ねたほうが良いかも? ok
   個人的に、00:21:069 (1,2,3) - や00:37:958 (4,5,6) - みたいな白tickから始まる3連打があまり好きじゃないです._. たとえば 00:21:069 (1,2,3) - だとこの画像の上半分みたいな音取りのほうが合うかも? この通りではないですが変更しました～

Good luck .w.)/　ty

Guy wrote:

alacatさんのリクからです～

　

Normal

　●　00:10:403 (3) - (1)と同じスライダーを使用してみてはどうでしょう？ ok
　●　00:38:625 (4) - 次のスライダーへの流れを考えて、x:320 y:312くらいに移動してみては？ok
　●　00:43:736 (1) - 前のnoteとx軸を合わせるために、1grid左? ok
　●　00:57:292 (2) - スライダーの終端にスタックしているnoteはここだけなので、スタックさせない配置をしてみてはどうでしょうか？ok
　●　01:03:292 (1) - x軸を合わせるために2grid右? この提案を適用する場合は、後のnoteの配置も少し移動しましょう ok

　

Insane

　●　00:18:625 (7) - 左に5gridくらい移動して00:18:625 (7,1,2,3) - この4つで四角形を作る感じにしてみてはどうでしょうか？)(7)と(1)のスペーシングをこれ以上広げたくないのでno chnageで
　●　00:21:069 (1,2,3) - 音取りの提案です　3連打はボーカルに合わせて00:21:292 - の方が合っていると思うので ok

以上ですー短いModですみません；
頑張ってください ありがとう！

DarknessAngel wrote:

as your request via in-game PM ~

Red words = Unrankable stuff
Blue words = the thing I think it must be fixed
Black words = If I were you,I would do that.
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Insane

• 
  
  (almost suggestions are important for me,so are you.
  I hope you can focus on rhythm and map carefully ater you read what I wrote below.)

1. generally speaking,you use too many ramdom triplets. orz yes i think so too.. i'll fixe it
2. 00:02:625 (4) - move to (152,316) so that the spacing among 00:01:958 (3,4,1) can be consistent,and looks better.ok
3. 00:12:736 (4) - the triplet here is overmapped,you should remove this note because there is no beat you can follow.
   why I call it "overmapped" ? you should try to listen the music in Playback 25 %,and you'll know there is no beat. :p fixed
4. 01:10:514 (2) - ^ ^
5. 00:14:736 (2) - ^,the stream start at 00:14:847 (3),not 00:14:625 (1).that's right fixed
6. 00:21:181 (2) - this note is not only overmapped,but also plays awkward.you really need to remve it. ok
7. 00:30:958 (6) - yeah overmapped again,the note should be at 00:31:181,not 00:30:958.
   like 00:34:736 (6),it follows the vocal correctly. ^
8. 00:39:292 (9) - add new combo to emphasize the jumps,also it would look better if you did this. (: ^
9. 00:40:292 (2) - move the note to 00:40:514. ok
10. 00:43:847 (2) - remove this note. ^
11. 00:45:625 (2) - it should be at 00:45:847,and 00:46:514 (5) should be at 00:46:736. ok
12. 00:53:847 (7) - the note should be at 00:54:069. ok
13. 00:54:514 (2) - remove it.ok
14. 01:11:403 (6) - same,and this triplet is quite wired for sure. ok
15. 01:15:847 (2) - the note should be at 01:16:069,not 01:15:847.
    like 01:16:958 (7),it follows the vocal correctly.ok
16. 01:26:403 (1,2) - se do them,I can't hear any beat at 01:26:403,01:26:625 and 01:26:847.
    I guess you should make the rhythm empty here,or make a slider which is start at 01:26:181,end at 01:27:069.ok
17. 01:28:181 (1) - I feel a bit boring for this shape.how about this awesome end ? xD sorry no change
    I think the three notes should be emphasized so that they can match the heavy beats in the music well.
    but anyway,you can feel free to adjust the distence,just notice do not make the distance too short. (:

I took a look at Normal and Easy.it seems there are no big problems,so I don't write anything here ~

To love <3
star for the good map and the nice song ~
good luck,Quilt =w=b thank you DNA

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi Quilt&alacat~~~~ \:D/ hi frost~~:D/


Normal
01:20:625 (3) - this note should be on 01:20:514 slider like this might help you ok


[u]Insane
01:05:403 (2) - this slider should end at 01:05:625 , this is the best way to fit rhythm I guess ok
Good Luck thank you frost xDD

HelloSCV wrote:

Frome queue

just some suggestions

Normal
00:57:514 (1) - increase slider length by 00:59:292 - this? no chnage, i think current timing is better
01:03:069 (6) - delete note and 01:02:403 (5) - add 1 more repeat no change, i don't want to use twice returne slider
01:12:625 (3) - delete note no chnage , i want to follow vocal

Insane
00:19:514 (4) - how about delete repeat and 00:20:181 (5) - add 1/2 slider here with finish on slider end ok
00:22:625 (4) - delete note and 00:22:847 (5) - move this slider on 00:22:625 (4) - this time and add 00:23:292 (5) - note here
00:28:403 (1,2,3,4) - like this? this looks better imo http://puu.sh/1uSRE　sorry no change, bcz i think it cant play well
00:35:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about star pattern? ok
00:38:847 (8) - maybe NC ok
00:53:958 (8) - change to 1/4 slider with 1 repeat sorry no chnage , i think 3notes is better
00:53:958 (8) - NC no chnage
01:18:181 (3) - remove 1 repeat and 01:18:847 (4) - add 1/2 slider here with finish on slider end ok

good luck with my mod thank you useful modding

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Quilt ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. Don't use white line started triple combo circle,that's sound really unfits with song. fixed it
2. 00:19:514 (4) - Why you ignored multi rhythm? should change like this. fixed but 1/1 slider and 1/2 slider
   
3. 01:18:181 (3) - Same as above. ^
4. 00:27:625 (6) - This circle should move to 00:27:847,follow with drum. ok
5. 00:56:181 - Add finish,sound much better.

ok

[Normal]

1. OD+1 is better. ok
2. 00:59:736 - Remove clap and Add finish.^
3. 01:17:958 - Add a circle to here,follow with drum.^
4. 01:22:403 - ^

^

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~[color=#FF0000]thank you rika [/color]

Kitsuneko wrote:

[Normal]
01:08:181 (2) - 重ねるのか別の位置にするかどちらかの方が重ねました～


[Insane]
00:30:847 (5,6) - リズムは00:29:514 (1,2) と同じに　00:31:069の音が後のパターン見ても浮いてるok~
00:56:847 - Suggestion: 僕なら(終点の音量を20%くらいにした)00:57:069までのスライダーに変更個人的にやりにくい感じがするのでnochnageで～
00:58:181 (2) - 00:58:514まで延長ここは00:58:403でvocalの声が切れているのでno changeで～
00:59:181 - ここに音が足りない　http://puu.sh/1vz6S 一度このリズムにして聞いてみて　ok~
01:15:514 (1,2) - 削除の後01:15:514(1)のサークル, 01:15:736-01:15:958(2)のスライダーに 今の方が音的にはあってると思いますし、個人的にもこの音の方が好きなので保留で・・・　ほかにもここの部分に指摘がきたら考えます～
01:27:069 (7) - NCok~

hoLysoup wrote:

moe Quilt! moesoup!!

[Insane]
00:20:181 (5) - finish on slider end~ use 35%volume (default soft finish or SC:1)　ok
00:21:514 (3) - make this slider from 00:21:514~00:21:847 and add repeat? then you can add drum sound at 00:21:847 and slider end ^
00:43:069 (4,5) - ctrl + g. !! hmm no change
00:59:736 (1) - this finish on slider head, use default soft finish? makes the accent stronger ok
01:17:514 (8) - NC maybe? ^


[Normal]
00:50:847 (6,1) - switch NC~ok

hai 終了！
good job! !arigatou~~
btw my花嫁: http://puu.sh/1wvUN momo :>

Chewin wrote:

hi

~General~

1. Set AudioLeadIn: 1500, 2000 is not neededchnaged 1500~

~Normal~

1. AR-1? The BPM is slow and in my opinion AR 4 would fit much better for a normal diff fixed
2. 00:01:070 (1) - read above about the finish hitsound ^
3. 00:25:958 (3) - you need to use new combo here because of the downbeat but especially because you have overlapped this slider with the previous one (I also would suggest you to avoid this kind of overlaps in a Normal diff.. It could confuse novice players) added NC but i dont want to chnage this rhythm, bcz i think 1/2 only rhmthm is not fun
4. 00:52:625 (4) - new combo? fixed
5. 00:59:736 (1) - same of easy

^

~Insane~

1. 00:11:736 (7) - new combo fixed
2. 00:21:292 (x) - add circle? A triplet together with 00:21:403 (2,3) would be more enjoyable to play for an insane diff (especially with Double Time) ^
3. 00:43:069 (4) - you need to add new combo due to the antijump between 00:42:847 (3,4). If you want to keep the combo then you also need to make a jump between those 2 circles ^
4. 01:15:958 (x) - same of 00:21:292 (x) ^
5. 01:17:514 (1,3,4) - to match those clashes in the cymbals you should use default soft finishes on (1)'s head, (3)'s head and on (4)'s tail (not custom ones) ^
6. 01:23:181 (2,4) - I don't see a reason to make this overmapped stream: 01:22:847 (1,2,3,4,5). I feel that these 2 circles 01:23:181 (2,4) are useless because they follow nothing. What about to remove them making a jump between 01:22:847 (1,3,5)? It's much better.

^

That's it.
Call me back when you've looked over the mod

MMzz wrote:

[Hard]
00:58:181 (1) - Same issue as the Insane. If you just move this slider back to the blue tick then extend it a little it works just fine. http://puu.sh/1zyzA hmm , there is follow vocal , I want keep current pattern >_<
01:28:181 (5) - NC? Insane has it and it fits very well. fixed :3