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DJ Splash - Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver.)

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Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Tur00

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/ Hi o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[General]

Are you trying to use some silenced .mp3 custom hitsounds? If yes you should use some with at least 44 bytes large. Fixed
There are 2 .osb files in your folder, remove one and full submit your mapset Fixed
You are using a SB, it is recommended to remove letterbox during breaks Fixed
First kiai time should end on 01:23:935 Fixed

[Easy]

00:17:222 (2) - There should be a clap on 00:18:061 then I think that a rhythm like this would fit the music much better:

As I said before don't forget to add clap on the slider's end
00:18:900 (4) - Following the song's rhythm you should remove finish from here adding a clap instead
00:19:320 (5) - Clap on slider's end
00:20:159 (1) - Still to keep hitsounding pattern consistency remove clap from the start adding finish instead. Add clap on slider's end.
00:22:676 (4) - You should make this slider more curved so that you can blanket it with 00:21:837 (3) better to have a better flow:
SPOILER

332,204,22676,2,0,B|376:232|436:220,1,100,0|0
00:20:998 (2,3,4) - Claps on each sliders' end
00:25:613 (4) - Clap instead of finish
00:27:711 (2) - Clap on slider's reverse arrow
00:37:781 (2,3,4) - Same of 00:20:998 (2,3,4)
00:49:110 (3) - Why this whislte? D: Remove it
00:51:208 (3) - Clap on slider's end
00:52:466 (5) - Clap instead of finish
00:52:886 (6) - Same of 00:51:208 (3)
00:57:082 (1) - Add finish here
00:57:501 (2) - Clap on slider's head
00:58:341 (3) - ^
00:59:599 (5) - Clap on slider's end..
01:01:697 (3) - Clap
01:02:956 (5) - Same of 00:59:599 (5)
01:10:508 (1) - Finish
01:11:348 (3) - Same of 00:59:599 (5)
01:14:704 (2) - ^
01:44:075 (1) - Finish + clap sounds better imho here ;3
02:17:641 (1) - Finish on slider's head
02:24:355 (1) - ^
02:36:103 (3) - New combo for new rhythm
02:54:145 (6) - Clap
02:55:823 (2) - ^
02:57:501 (5) - ^
02:58:760 (2) - Make this slider more curved to blanket better with (1):
SPOILER

128,140,178760,2,0,B|176:120|176:60,1,100,0|0
264,36,179599,1,0
02:58:760 (2) - Still here, add clap on slider's end
03:00:858 (5) - Clap
03:02:536 (3) - ^ on head
03:03:795 (5) - Clap on slider's end
03:04:634 (1) - Finish on slider's head
03:05:893 (3) - Clap on the head
03:07:152 (5) - Clap on slider's end
03:08:830 (2) - ^
03:10:508 (4) - ^
03:12:187 (2) - ^
03:14:285 (5) - clap
03:15:543 (2) - ^
Meh, so much suggestions about hitsounds. You should follow them because it's to keep a hitsounding pattern consistency

I use the pattern of Claps in 2/1 only in the "kiai time" in the other parts i use a different pattern
Sorry but i think that is better :3

[Normal]
About hitsounding follow same suggestions I wrote above please
00:29:389 (5) - I'd use new combo here according new rhythm Fixed
00:40:299 (1) - It could be nazi but move the 2nd waypoint to x252 y:296 please to have a better blanket with (2) Fixed
00:57:082 (1) - Finish Fixed
01:01:278 (3) - To have a better blanket with 01:02:117 (4) move the last waypoint on x:240 y:220 Fixed
02:24:774 (2,3,4,5) - I'd add finishes on each elements here to emphasize the cymbals in the song. Sorry but no
02:37:781 (1) - Finish Fixed
02:51:208 (1) - This circle is enough confusing with to play for beginners for the spinner's approach circle , consider to move it further from center to make it more enjoyable to play Fixed
03:00:438 (5) - This slider with so much repeats is unexpected and it could give some problems during gameplay to beginners. I would remove a repeat adding a circle on 03:01:697 instead to fill the empty sound Fixed

I make the same pattern of Easy diff :3
Thank you for the mod *w*
oh i make changes to make the map a little better.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[Pereira's Hard]
00:34:215 (2) - This circle is confusing in my opinion.. remove it? keep it sorry, is not confusing, still fit music because is follow guitar like another
00:35:264 (8) - New combo also to avoid this long combo. If you don't like new combo with overlapped circle consider to make it no overlapped Tur00 do it for me only new combo pleasse
00:41:977 (5) - I think this rhythm fits better here o.o no sorry, because the Slider (7) still fit follow melody and the slider repeat is fit melody because melody is too much strong than guitar that why i use this also is not too much harder because just slider still easy, sorry keep it
Thank you mod :D

Tur00 do it fom me only new combo that i explained
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]

Chewin wrote:

Hi Tur00 o.o/
Mod request from my special queue here ;3

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
00:29:547 (5) - Try to listen the music with 25/50% playback rate and you can see that this circle should be snapped 1/8 earlier on the blue tick- Fixed
00:29:966 (8) - ^- Fixed
00:39:459 (1) - This spacing is confusing, you should move it furter from previous element- Fixed
01:37:047 (10) - Remove this circle, to fit the right rhythm you should end the stream on 01:36:942 (9)- Fixed
03:19:180 (4) - This circle should be snapped with 1/8 divisor- Fixed
03:19:459 (5,6,7) - Same here, use 1/4 snap divisor moving the stream on the previous blue tick- Fixed

That's all.
This map needs some more work to get a bubble restore here.
I wish you good luck -w-
Sorry for the late reply q-q Here is it and thanks for your time to mod the map :P

http://puu.sh/11A7F - UDPATED
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[Insane]
In general I don't understand your 1/2 rhythm. I mean, it's okay but this song is very catchy sometimes and just a simple 1/2 doesn't give the complexity that this rhythm have. Just to make an example, this part 01:02:327 (1,2,3,4) - could be mapped in another way, instead of simple 1/2 bsd slider and so on V:
01:11:557 (4,5) - claps in these and in the next parts are just too heavy and gives a bad effect..consider to decrease the voulme or to find another hitsound

00:29:389 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - these should be snapped on 1/3, also that's not a good distance spacing for a 1/3 section, it kills the flow
00:47:641 (2,3,4) - i'd follow doublets here V:
01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd change this whole part with 1/4 bsd long sliders or something like that (like you did at 01:23:515 (7) - )
01:41:452 (6,7) - readjust the spacing here
01:43:813 (1,2,3) - different position in the timeline with the same spacing. Please fix it
02:09:355 (2) - quite hidden

[Hard]

02:35:403 (2) - where is finished the clap patter? add it on the white tick please
00:43:655 (1) - I think that sliders like these should have their end on downbeat S: similar sliders are present at the beginning and they make the rhythm a bit hard to follow

[Normal]

01:22:257 (1,1) 02:20:998 (1,1)- 02:49:529 (1,1) - Ughhhh these short recovery time
03:18:900 (2,3) - 03:25:613 (2,3,4) - You know, I would not use a 1/4 rhythm on a 1/3 one.

suggestion for your next normals: only a 1/2 based partially on white ticks make the map REALLY boring to play.

[Easy]

Fine.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006

Armin wrote:

[Hard]

02:35:403 (2) - where is finished the clap patter? add it on the white tick please fix add clap in tick white
00:43:655 (1) - I think that sliders like these should have their end on downbeat S: similar sliders are present at the beginning and they make the rhythm a bit hard to follow no sorry, keep it because I did red point on downbeat that really fit with melody and i don't think is not hard to follow, in my opinion. this slider is really fit melody, sorry keep it
Thank you mod

http://puu.sh/139y4 here my diff
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]

Armin wrote:

[Insane]
In general I don't understand your 1/2 rhythm. I mean, it's okay but this song is very catchy sometimes and just a simple 1/2 doesn't give the complexity that this rhythm have. Just to make an example, this part 01:02:327 (1,2,3,4) - could be mapped in another way, instead of simple 1/2 bsd slider and so on V:
01:11:557 (4,5) - claps in these and in the next parts are just too heavy and gives a bad effect..consider to decrease the voulme or to find another hitsound- I'll fix the volume issues but the placing will stay same.

00:29:389 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - these should be snapped on 1/3, also that's not a good distance spacing for a 1/3 section, it kills the flow- It's not that fast to kill the flow, it's more than easy >.>
00:47:641 (2,3,4) - i'd follow doublets here V:- I didn't got this one :c
01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'd change this whole part with 1/4 bsd long sliders or something like that (like you did at 01:23:515 (7) - )- Nope, it's ok.
01:41:452 (6,7) - readjust the spacing here- It's more than ok for the most people who tried it, it's not hard to read e.e
01:43:813 (1,2,3) - different position in the timeline with the same spacing. Please fix it- Fixed.
02:09:355 (2) - quite hidden - Ok? :P
I appreciate your time to mod the map, thank you very much :P

http://puu.sh/13gym - Done.
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Tur00
i have this days other net and i cant open Puush if yous can change puush for mediafire...
Thanks >.<
[Luxord]
503 posts
Joined August 2011
[Luxord]

Tur00 wrote:

i have this days other net and i cant open Puush if yous can change puush for mediafire...
Thanks >.<
SPOILER
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320,208,61697,1,10
224,96,61907,1,2
272,96,62012,1,2
320,96,62117,1,2
112,104,62327,6,2,B|112:168|112:168|144:208,1,95,0|8
112,280,62746,2,2,B|112:216|112:216|144:176,1,95
224,96,63166,1,2
224,288,63376,1,10
304,192,63585,5,2
352,192,63690,1,2
400,192,63795,1,2
32,192,64215,1,10
480,192,64634,1,2
304,256,64844,2,6,B|304:320,1,47.5
208,128,65159,2,6,B|208:80,1,47.5
208,80,65473,5,2
304,303,65893,1,10
32,192,66313,1,2
208,192,66522,1,2
256,192,66627,1,2
304,192,66732,1,10
480,192,66942,1,2
304,112,67152,6,2,B|256:96|192:112,2,95,0|0|8
32,192,67781,1,2
208,272,67991,2,2,B|256:288|320:272,2,95,0|0|8
128,64,68620,1,2
128,320,68830,5,2
194,191,69040,2,2,B|314:191,1,95,0|8
289,95,69459,2,2,B|289:223,1,95
383,191,69879,2,2,B|271:191,1,95,0|8
288,192,70299,1,2
288,240,70403,1,2
288,288,70508,6,2,B|256:320|256:320|208:304|208:304|160:320|160:320|128:288,1,190,0|8
64,256,71138,1,2
64,80,71348,1,2
64,256,71557,2,6,B|64:320,1,47.5
64,80,71872,2,6,B|64:32,1,47.5
140,172,72187,2,2,B|228:116,1,95,0|8
220,120,72606,1,2
304,68,72816,1,2
352,176,73026,6,2,B|296:220,1,47.5
272,240,73236,1,2
224,272,73341,1,2
176,304,73445,1,10
176,304,73655,1,2
112,224,73865,6,2,B|64:224|64:224|32:192,1,95
32,32,74285,1,10
128,144,74494,1,2
128,144,74599,1,2
240,32,74809,1,2
240,80,74914,1,2
240,128,75019,1,2
240,176,75124,1,10
320,64,75334,5,2
320,128,75438,1,2
320,192,75543,2,2,B|304:256|304:256|224:256|224:256|192:288,1,190,0|8
192,287,76278,1,2
32,288,76487,1,2
112,160,76697,1,2
112,112,76802,1,10
212,136,77012,1,0
212,136,77117,1,0
212,136,77222,1,0
256,192,77327,12,2,80159
256,32,80578,5,2
144,32,80788,1,2
64,96,80998,1,2
64,208,81208,1,2
144,288,81417,1,2
256,288,81627,1,2
256,160,81837,1,2
256,160,82047,1,2
256,32,82257,5,2
296,24,82362,1,2
336,32,82466,1,2
376,48,82571,1,2
408,72,82676,1,2
432,104,82781,1,2
448,144,82886,5,2
432,184,82991,1,2
408,216,83096,1,2
376,240,83201,1,2
336,256,83306,1,2
296,256,83410,1,2
256,248,83515,2,2,B|256:208,8,23.75
256,192,90648,12,6,92327
448,80,92536,5,2
448,112,92641,1,2
448,304,92851,1,2
448,272,92956,1,2
384,192,93166,1,10
352,192,93271,1,2
320,192,93376,1,2
288,192,93480,1,2
256,192,93585,2,2,B|192:192|192:256,1,95
192,336,94005,5,6
80,336,94215,1,2
80,288,94320,1,2
80,64,94529,1,2
80,112,94634,1,2
80,160,94739,1,2
80,208,94844,2,2,B|128:208|128:208|192:192,1,95,10|2
224,192,95159,1,2
272,192,95264,1,2
320,192,95369,1,2
368,192,95473,1,2
464,192,95683,5,6
464,64,95893,1,2
416,64,95998,1,2
304,64,96208,2,2,B|256:64,1,47.5
256,64,96522,1,10
224,96,96627,1,2
192,128,96732,1,2
160,160,96837,1,2
128,192,96942,1,2
64,256,97152,2,2,B|64:304|64:304|112:304,1,95,2|6
224,304,97571,5,2
256,304,97676,1,2
384,304,97886,1,2
352,304,97991,1,2
320,304,98096,1,2
320,256,98201,2,2,B|320:160,1,95,10|2
320,120,98515,1,2
320,80,98620,1,2
320,40,98725,1,2
320,40,98830,2,2,B|368:40,2,47.5,2|2|6
128,32,99250,5,2
160,32,99355,1,2
208,192,99564,1,2
176,192,99669,2,2,B|128:192,1,47.5
96,192,99879,1,10
48,192,99984,1,2
16,224,100089,1,2
48,256,100194,1,2
96,256,100299,2,2,B|96:304|96:304|144:304,1,95
176,304,100613,1,2
224,304,100718,5,6
320,304,100928,1,2
368,304,101033,1,2
240,192,101243,1,2
304,192,101348,1,2
272,144,101452,1,2
208,120,101557,2,2,B|160:120,2,47.5,10|2|2
240,72,101872,1,2
272,24,101977,1,2
304,72,102082,1,2
336,120,102187,2,2,B|400:120,2,47.5,2|2|10
256,192,102501,12,2,103655
256,48,103813,5,2
256,128,103917,1,2
256,208,104075,1,10
256,304,104285,6,2,B|352:304,1,95
416,208,104704,1,2
416,208,104809,1,0
416,208,104914,1,10
256,208,105124,2,2,B|176:208,4,47.5
256,48,105753,5,10
160,128,105963,1,2
160,128,106068,1,2
352,128,106278,1,2
352,128,106382,1,2
256,208,106592,6,2,B|256:256,4,47.5,10|2|2|2|2
448,192,107222,2,2,B|352:192,1,95,2|10
400,272,107641,6,2,B|336:272,1,47.5
240,336,107956,2,2,B|288:336,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
368,336,108480,2,2,B|416:336,4,47.5
288,336,109110,6,2,B|224:336|224:336|192:304,1,95,10|2
288,336,109529,2,2,B|288:272|288:272|256:224,1,95
200,312,109949,2,2,B|136:312|136:312|104:280,1,95,10|2
272,248,110369,2,2,B|272:184|272:184|240:136,1,95
192,224,110788,5,10
256,160,110998,2,2,B|256:112,1,47.5
112,288,111313,2,2,B|64:288,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
112,128,111837,1,2
112,128,112047,1,2
112,128,112257,1,2
112,128,112466,5,10
256,32,112676,2,2,B|320:80,1,47.5
256,224,112991,2,2,B|320:176,1,47.5
336,128,113306,2,2,B|384:128,6,47.5,10|2|2|2|2|2|2
336,128,114145,5,10
112,128,114355,2,2,B|160:128,1,47.5
112,128,114669,2,2,B|112:176,3,47.5,2|2|2|10
160,176,115194,2,2,B|208:224,4,47.5
160,176,115823,5,10
480,176,116033,1,2
480,176,116138,1,2
480,176,116348,1,2
480,176,116452,2,2,B|432:112|432:112|400:112,1,95,2|10
480,176,116872,2,2,B|432:240|432:240|400:240,1,95
384,176,117292,1,2
328,176,117396,1,2
272,176,117501,6,0,B|128:16,1,190,10|2
240,232,117816,2,4,B|104:80,1,190
208,288,118131,2,0,B|56:120,1,190,2|10
4,232,118550,1,0
4,288,118655,1,0
60,288,118760,1,8
116,288,118865,1,0
116,344,118970,1,0
256,336,119180,6,0,B|448:336,1,190,10|2
352,272,119494,2,4,B|144:272,1,190
240,208,119809,2,0,B|448:208,1,190
480,208,120124,1,0
480,144,120229,1,0
480,88,120334,1,0
480,32,120438,2,0,B|288:32,1,190,10|2
32,64,120858,5,8
32,208,121068,2,0,B|32:304,2,95,2|2|10
32,152,121382,1,0
88,152,121487,1,0
144,152,121592,1,0
192,152,121697,2,0,B|224:104|224:104|256:84|256:84|288:104|288:104|336:184,1,190
368,152,122012,1,0
424,152,122117,1,8
480,152,122222,1,0
480,208,122327,1,0
256,192,122536,5,8
256,192,122746,2,4,B|256:304,1,95
256,352,123061,1,4
256,352,123166,1,4
160,336,123376,2,0,B|112:256,1,95,10|2
352,336,123585,2,0,B|416:256,1,95
256,284,123795,2,0,B|256:256|256:256|272:228|256:200|256:200|236:168|256:136|256:136|256:112|256:76,1,190
256,100,124110,1,0
256,100,124215,1,0
160,48,124424,5,0
160,48,124529,1,4
336,48,124739,1,4
336,48,124844,1,0
336,48,124949,1,0
336,48,125054,2,0,B|416:96|416:96|416:224,1,190,10|2
416,240,125369,1,0
416,288,125473,1,8
416,336,125578,1,0
416,336,125683,2,0,B|320:360|256:312|256:312|256:272,1,190
256,184,126103,5,0
304,152,126208,1,4
384,68,126417,1,4
332,68,126522,1,0
280,68,126627,1,0
228,68,126732,1,8
176,68,126837,1,0
124,68,126942,1,0
72,68,127047,1,0
20,72,127152,2,0,B|-12:120|36:120|0:160|0:160|36:200|-12:200|20:248,1,190
16,300,127466,1,0
16,352,127571,5,0
144,256,127781,1,0
144,192,127886,1,0
256,72,128096,1,4
256,128,128201,1,0
256,184,128306,1,0
256,240,128410,2,0,B|256:352,1,95
336,264,128620,2,0,B|416:344,2,95,2|2|10
176,264,128935,2,0,B|96:344,2,95
256,228,129250,5,8
256,160,129355,1,0
184,144,129459,6,0,B|104:64,1,95
320,144,129669,2,0,B|400:64,1,95
256,96,129879,2,0,B|256:0,2,95
256,160,130194,5,0
256,224,130299,1,0
256,280,130403,1,0
256,336,130508,1,8
256,32,130718,5,0
256,32,130823,1,0
256,32,130928,1,8
256,192,137641,12,2,143935
256,192,144355,5,4
288,32,157781,6,0,B|400:32|448:144,1,190
320,112,158410,2,0,B|272:80|208:128,1,95
272,240,158830,2,0,B|272:288,1,47.5
272,240,159145,2,0,B|272:176,1,47.5
144,144,159459,2,0,B|80:224|144:320,1,190
208,89,160299,1,0
208,208,160508,6,0,B|208:272,2,47.5
320,192,160928,2,0,B|352:144|320:80,1,95
256,80,161348,2,0,B|288:16|368:16,2,95
256,112,161872,5,0
256,192,162082,1,0
256,224,162187,1,0
256,256,162292,1,0
256,288,162396,1,0
352,240,162606,2,0,B|384:192,2,47.5
256,320,163236,5,0
256,320,163550,1,0
160,240,163760,2,0,B|128:192,3,47.5
256,144,164285,6,0,B|256:96,2,47.5
256,32,166173,5,4
448,320,167851,5,10
48,320,168271,1,10
256,288,168585,2,2,B|288:240|224:240|272:176,1,95
256,144,168900,1,2
272,96,169005,1,2
320,80,169110,1,10
384,192,169320,5,2
432,208,169424,1,2
432,256,169529,2,2,B|384:320|352:224|224:304,1,190,2|10
256,208,170054,2,2,B|256:176,20,23.75,2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|2|10|2|2|2|2|2|2
256,288,171208,6,2,B|256:336|256:336|336:384|400:288,1,190,2|10
256,48,172047,1,2
112,128,172257,2,6,B|80:176,1,47.5
416,128,172571,2,6,B|448:176,1,47.5
253,311,172886,1,2
256,128,173306,6,2,B|208:224|304:224|240:336,1,190,10|2
256,48,173935,1,2
304,64,174040,1,2
336,112,174145,2,2,B|304:192|320:224|352:192|336:320,2,190,10|2|10
336,112,175299,5,2
448,80,175508,1,2
480,192,175718,1,2
480,192,175823,1,10
416,320,176033,1,2
384,320,176138,1,2
352,320,176243,1,2
112,272,176662,2,2,B|16:288|16:384,2,142.5,10|2|2
160,272,177396,1,2
208,272,177501,1,10
272,176,177711,5,2
320,176,177816,1,2
368,176,177921,2,2,B|448:176|448:176|480:208|480:208|480:304,2,190,2|10|2
304,288,178970,2,6,B|256:336,1,47.5
304,64,179285,2,6,B|256:32,1,47.5
160,176,179599,2,2,B|96:192|96:192|64:224|64:224|64:304,1,190,2|10
64,304,180438,5,2
208,304,180648,1,2
208,240,180753,1,2
272,240,180858,1,10
352,304,181068,5,2
448,352,181278,2,2,B|480:304|448:256,1,95
352,304,181697,2,2,B|320:240|368:192,1,95,10|2
384,176,182012,1,2
432,144,182117,2,2,B|432:80|352:80,1,95
324,80,182431,1,2
276,80,182536,1,10
224,192,182746,5,2
192,240,182851,1,2
160,288,182956,2,2,B|144:336|80:336,1,95,10|2
400,80,183376,2,2,B|464:112|464:176,1,95,10|2
464,208,183690,1,2
464,256,183795,2,2,B|464:304|400:336,1,95
368,336,184110,1,2
320,336,184215,1,10
368,80,184424,1,2
320,80,184529,1,2
272,80,184634,6,2,B|224:80|224:128|224:128|96:128,1,190,2|10
328,192,185473,1,2
328,368,185683,2,6,B|328:320,1,47.5
328,32,185998,2,6,B|328:80,1,47.5
176,192,186313,2,2,B|80:191,2,95,2|2|10
328,192,186942,5,2
328,192,187152,1,2
496,192,187362,1,2
464,192,187466,1,2
432,192,187571,1,10
176,192,187781,1,2
404,116,187991,2,2,B|468:100|468:20,2,95,2|2|10
328,192,188620,5,2
256,272,188830,1,2
176,192,189040,1,2
92,256,189250,2,2,B|28:272|28:352,2,95,10|2|2
176,192,189879,5,2
256,112,190089,1,10
328,192,190299,1,2
412,256,190508,2,2,B|460:288|460:352,2,95,2|2|10
256,320,191138,1,2
256,272,191243,1,2
256,224,191348,6,2,B|208:224|208:224|160:272,1,95
256,224,191767,2,2,B|304:224|304:224|352:272,1,95,10|2
256,32,192187,1,2
384,144,192396,2,6,B|352:96,1,47.5
128,143,192711,2,6,B|160:96,1,47.5
256,352,193026,1,2
256,32,193445,1,10
256,304,193865,5,10
256,304,194075,1,2
208,304,194180,1,2
160,304,194285,1,10
256,192,194494,1,2
352,48,194704,6,2,B|432:48|432:128,2,95,2|2|10
256,240,195334,1,2
160,48,195543,2,2,B|80:48|80:128,2,95,10|2|2
208,48,196068,1,2
256,64,196173,1,2
272,112,196278,1,2
272,160,196382,6,2,B|272:272,1,95,10|2
336,128,196802,2,2,B|336:240,1,95
200,120,197222,6,0,B|200:160|200:160|184:176|200:192|200:192|184:208|200:224|200:224|184:240|200:256|200:256|200:304,1,190
448,192,198480,1,0
256,192,198900,1,0
352,64,199162,1,0
352,336,199424,1,0
304,336,199582,1,0
256,336,199739,1,0
96,336,200159,5,0
16,192,200578,1,0
176,192,200858,1,0
176,192,200998,1,0
96,64,201278,1,0
96,64,201417,1,0
256,64,201837,5,0
464,64,202117,1,0
256,64,202396,2,0,B|252:104|288:116,1,63.3333333333333
356,68,202676,2,0,B|392:132|356:188,1,126.666666666667
296,128,203096,2,0,B|260:192|296:248,1,126.666666666667
356,188,203515,2,0,B|396:268|332:340,1,142.5
232,340,204040,5,0
184,340,204197,1,0
136,340,204355,1,0
48,272,204634,2,0,B|48:208,1,63.3333333333333
48,96,205054,1,0
48,96,205194,2,0,B|96:64|144:64|192:64|240:112,1,190
348,144,205893,1,0
348,300,206173,2,0,B|308:348|232:348,1,126.666666666667
48,272,206872,5,0
48,96,207292,1,0
224,96,207571,1,0
224,96,207711,1,0
400,96,207991,1,0
400,96,208131,6,0,B|400:120,30,23.75
400,96,209809,6,0,B|352:96,30,47.5,0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0|0
256,192,211487,12,0,218201
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Tur00
thx kiyo
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Tur00
Updated~
Now can post other mods ><
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ Tur00 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'Nightcore Mix,Remix' in tags.
  2. 'normal-sliderslide' and 'normal-slidertick' both mute at the same time is unrankble.

[Kiyoshi's Insane]


  1. 00:35:683 (8) - Add new combo,long combo imo.

[Pereira's Hard]


  1. 00:56:872 (7) - Move to X:220 Y:144 looks better.
  2. 01:32:746 - Move break time to default.
  3. 01:41:452 - ^
  4. 02:11:348 - ^
  5. 02:16:697 - ^
  6. 03:19:739 (1) - Remove short new combo.
  7. 03:23:096 (1) - ^
  8. 03:26:452 (1) - ^

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
Tenzoku_old
5 posts
Joined September 2012
Tenzoku_old

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Tur00 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



[Kiyoshi's Insane]


  1. 00:35:683 (8) - Add new combo,long combo imo. [/color]

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
ILUUUUU <3 Thanks for the mod :P Fixed :P

http://puu.sh/16l5p - UPDATED.
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Kawayi Rika: Why its neccesary to add "nightcore" to the tags, this song isn´t even nightcore :/
Tur00
608 posts
Joined November 2011
Topic Starter
Tur00

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Kawayi Rika: Why its neccesary to add "nightcore" to the tags, this song isn´t even nightcore :/
i think the same :/
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techno seems lot more better than Nightcore Mix.
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Sound likes nightcore to me haha sorry ~

I guess techno ~ :P
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Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Tur00 ~ :)

[Pereira's Hard]


  1. 00:56:872 (7) - Move to X:220 Y:144 looks better. no sorry, i will keep it my place look good and original spacing
  2. 01:32:746 - Move break time to default.Why ?but ok fixed that
  3. 01:41:452 - ^^
  4. 02:11:348 - ^^
  5. 02:16:697 - ^^
  6. 03:19:739 (1) - Remove short new combo.No, because the (1) the melody and drums start change and strong much drums so o feel is like new, keep it sorry
  7. 03:23:096 (1) - ^^
  8. 03:26:452 (1) - ^^
thank you mod
also 02:51:208 the timing i change hitsound

http://puu.sh/16E7Q
Tur00
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Ok :3
Updated~
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Tenzoku wrote:

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Tur00 ~ :)

Mod time for my luck Queue ~



[Kiyoshi's Insane]


  1. 00:35:683 (8) - Add new combo,long combo imo. [/color]

Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~ ;)
ILUUUUU <3 Thanks for the mod :P Fixed :P

http://puu.sh/16l5p - UPDATED.
I confirm this is my update, I was at my cousins PC when I updated it and I forgot to change accounts e____e
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updated~
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[General]
Not picking on your song choice but the later parts are really repetitive. It seems you could've avoided some of the problems with Easy/Normal with a cutted version of the song.


[Easy]
Very repetitive but it is an easy so it can be ignored.
01:35:683 - move the break ending on the downbeat
Seems fine otherwise.


[Normal]
oh boy...3 minutes of 1/1 notes :o Technically there is nothing "wrong" with this map but it is really....boring? simple? repetitive? IDK.
02:24:355 - why do you leave out the pronounced downbeat here? shorten 02:20:998 (1) - to end on 02:23:515 - and map the downbeat @02:24:355


[Hard]
Why do you use Tickrate 2 instead of 1 here? I don't know if it is a huge problem but it would be better to keep it consistent throughout the set and use TR1.

You slide over too many downbeats that are pronounced. It makes some parts feel a bit off-beat even if the notes are perfectly fine:
01:47:222 (6) - 01:48:900 (6) - 01:51:627 (4) - 01:53:306 (4) - and many more. You don't have to change all of them but some could be changed to keep the downbeat pattern intact. Maybe you can find a good balance.

00:31:068 (3) - this slider feels really off. It fits the song much better if you make it end on the blue tick in the middle and add a repeat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458779
00:32:746 (6) - try splitting this slider in 2 1/1 sliders to match the song: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458783


[Insane]
I highly recommend AR-1 as AR9 doesn't fit the style or the SV of this map.
Some Beatplacements feel awkward but they still fit the song. This is the most solid map in the set imo. Good Job.




I don't know if it has been stated before, but the set itself is pretty solid technically. Most problems I have with some of the diffs are the approaches to beatplacement and song interpretation.
Overall the Easy and Normal maps are a bit too similar and especially Normal could use some changes in it's beat placement - you don't have to change it as it is not "wrong" - it is just too repetitive for my taste and would profit from some variation. A good approach would be a change in [Easy] to use less notes and make it a bit easier (< 2,5 stars) and more different from [Normal].
Pereira006
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p3n wrote:

[Hard]
Why do you use Tickrate 2 instead of 1 here? I don't know if it is a huge problem but it would be better to keep it consistent throughout the set and use TR1.
keep it, TR2 is complety fit because is too many drums,meldoy and guitar here is complety fit here

You slide over too many downbeats that are pronounced. It makes some parts feel a bit off-beat even if the notes are perfectly fine:
01:47:222 (6) - 01:48:900 (6) - 01:51:627 (4) - 01:53:306 (4) - and many more. You don't have to change all of them but some could be changed to keep the downbeat pattern intact. Maybe you can find a good balance.I don't follow always drums i always follow melody because is most better and enjoy, no need full mapping drums because can be more harder like insane, sorry i keep it is really enjoy play and easier

00:31:068 (3) - this slider feels really off. It fits the song much better if you make it end on the blue tick in the middle and add a repeat: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458779 i don't feel it is really off, and i did you explain is really more harder, i prefer keep it because is more easier and is fit more follow melody
00:32:746 (6) - try splitting this slider in 2 1/1 sliders to match the song: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/458783 no, ^ same
The hard just hard, no need full mapping drums or melody or guitar if i did that gonna be more harder like insane, sorry i prefer keep it and i most follow melody because is more easier and the newbie player can pass it, sorry my bad eng

thank you mod
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p3n wrote:

[Insane]
I highly recommend AR-1 as AR9 doesn't fit the style or the SV of this map.
Some Beatplacements feel awkward but they still fit the song. This is the most solid map in the set imo. Good Job.
Thanks for your mod :) AR is changed to AR8 now.

http://puu.sh/1dZQY
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FULL SUBMISSION

donwload again the map..
i cut the long of the map :<

AND
Updated~
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Tur00 wrote:

FULL SUBMISSION

donwload again the map..
i cut the long of the map :<

AND
Updated~
http://puu.sh/1eLXF

u_u update it :P
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updated~
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[General]
Change title to Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver) as it is not the official short version rather than a version cut by yourself.

Edit: If you can make the fadeout (of the music) at the end a bit longer it would be less harsh and sudden. I suggest to have the fadeout at least reach into the black-fade of the score screen.



[Easy]
00:27:791 (2) - missed clap on turning point
00:37:861 (2) - maybe missed clap on ending? if this pattern is intentional keep it
00:39:539 (4) - ^
00:51:288 (3) - ^
00:52:966 (6) - ^

01:30:728 - remove the delay from the break



[Normal]
similar hitsound inconsistencies in the beginning like 'Easy', if you didn't plan this please add the missing claps

01:35:763 - use the same early break ending like in easy (drag the break ending to this point)



[Pereira's Hard]
fine~



[Kiyoshi's Insane]
01:41:323 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - the spacing for streams in the calm part was 1,00x for everything before this. For the sake of consistency please use the same spacing for this combo aswell!



almost there...
Tur00
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p3n wrote:

[General]
Change title to Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver) as it is not the official short version rather than a version cut by yourself.

Edit: If you can make the fadeout (of the music) at the end a bit longer it would be less harsh and sudden. I suggest to have the fadeout at least reach into the black-fade of the score screen.



[Easy]
00:27:791 (2) - missed clap on turning point Fixed
00:37:861 (2) - maybe missed clap on ending? if this pattern is intentional keep it This is intentional
00:39:539 (4) - ^ ^
00:51:288 (3) - ^ ^
00:52:966 (6) - ^ ^

01:30:728 - remove the delay from the break Fixed



[Normal]
similar hitsound inconsistencies in the beginning like 'Easy', if you didn't plan this please add the missing claps Fixed a bit

01:35:763 - use the same early break ending like in easy (drag the break ending to this point) Fixed



[Pereira's Hard]
fine~



[Kiyoshi's Insane]
01:41:323 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - the spacing for streams in the calm part was 1,00x for everything before this. For the sake of consistency please use the same spacing for this combo aswell! Fixed



almost there...
Thanks :D
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- Having tickrate 2 only for pereia's diff is fine by me (it fits the slider/circle ratio).
- If you want to change the fade out at the end (making it a bit longer...into the score screen) please feel free to do so (or find someone to do it if you don't know how...I can't cut the file for you atm because I have no access to my normal PC right now). Just PM me if you change it and I'll rebubble.

(>°.°)>
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psst p3n... the icon :P
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mancusojuanmattos wrote:

psst... the icon :P
blame it on the netbook!!!! this thing is so small :cry:
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ty
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Pfft.
-kevincela-
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Mercurial wrote:

Pfft.
Mercurial,stop smoking!

/me runs
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p3n wrote:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

psst... the icon :P
blame it on the netbook!!!! this thing is so small :cry:
haha ok :P..
Btw, congratulations to the mapper.. and good luck with Rank
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Spammers -3-
Thanks :D
Andrea
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I seriously dislike Insane :/
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The insane has a pretty harsh difficulty curve at the end, it's going to catch a lot of people off guard.
Also, it's way too difficult to read the 1/3 objects. The difficulty could use more focus on having the map sight-readable first try.

I would post more but I have to go to classes really soon. We should talk about the Insane sometime.
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k ><
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[Insane]
00:29:469 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - I'm not sure if this trips up everyone or just me but I honestly thought those were 1/4 perhaps try a pattern like this?

SPOILER
mind you I tried to keep the mapper style in tact to my best abilities.

01:57:581 - 02:11:008 this whole speed section feels so forced imo I'm not saying the idea is bad at all but it is such a drastic change from the speed the map was going before this section.

02:24:644 map this break out it feels odd to have such a long break time right after a break even more so because the only thing between the breaks is a spinner.

I thought I would shed some light on the issues that I saw in the insane have a good one mate.

After the edits i have to say it is looking a lot better it is your choice to keep the speed up oh also move 02:35:483 (6) - to here

SPOILER
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DJ Splash - Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver.) //runs
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Elly-chan wrote:

DJ Splash - Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver.) //runs
._.'
ztrot
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she basically meant for you to change the title to reflect this DJ Splash - Bass is Kicking (Cut Ver.) sorry for the confusion.
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fixed~
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I think it is ok for me to fix your bubble (Elly-nyan will understand)
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[General]
Currently, The fade-out is REALLY odd imo. It's too sudden. Can you make it a bit better?
00:03:456 - I didn't see any reasons not to map this section. I would suggest filling in here because it's totally mappable and the song itself isn't that long.
There are 4 .osz files in the folder. Remove useless ones please.

[Insane]
00:41:847 (1,2,3) - The spacing is kinda large and unreasonable to me. And it's so common to avoid using larger spacing for streams. Consider spacing them at 1.0x instead.
00:42:476 (4,5,6) - ^ Same. I don't understand why is spacing like this because you've used 1.0x for others.
00:47:092 (1) - I find the angle of this slider very uncomfortable. Rotate it like this;
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/501946
00:47:092 (1,2) - Space these notes at 1.1x for consistency with (2,3,4). Apply this to 00:48:351 (5,4) - as well.
01:07:232 (1) - A bit nazi though, This slider is not symmetrical correctly. Try this code:
302,112,67232,6,2,B|256:95|210:112,2,95,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:08:071 (3) - ^
01:10:588 (1,2) - The spacing is too close, I thought it was 1/4 at first.
01:15:414 (1,2,3) - Use 1.0x spacing for these notes for consistency with 01:14:889 (5,6,7,8) - .
01:23:595 (7) - This kick slider is too late, It should start at 01:23:176 - .
01:43:893 (1,2) - These notes must be snapped by 1/3, Not 1/8. I mean (1) needs to be placed at 01:43:875 - and (2) at 01:44:015 - .
01:47:721 (1,3) - I don't think the partial overlapping looks that great. Try to move (3) downward.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502013
01:51:917 (4,5,6,1) - I found this quite boring. Better to space them out.
01:54:749 (3,4) - Make the spacing larger for better readability. Currently it looks like 1/4.
02:02:826 (2,3) - ^
02:07:546 (7,1) - 1grid left.
02:09:330 (1,2) - Why not stack them under previous notes? and the spacing of the stream is inconsistent.
02:26:532 (4) - 1grid down to stack it under the previous (2).
02:29:889 (4) - Add newcombo here to warn spacing change.

Not a full-mod. I didn't mention any detailed things and hitsounds. The diff still does need a lot of work. Also popped the bubble for the several issues.
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Melophobia wrote:

[General]
Currently, The fade-out is REALLY odd imo. It's too sudden. Can you make it a bit better? I known't How.. :c
00:03:456 - I didn't see any reasons not to map this section. I would suggest filling in here because it's totally mappable and the song itself isn't that long. i want keep the map so.
There are 4 .osz files in the folder. Remove useless ones please. fixed

[Insane]
00:41:847 (1,2,3) - The spacing is kinda large and unreasonable to me. And it's so common to avoid using larger spacing for streams. Consider spacing them at 1.0x instead.fixed
00:42:476 (4,5,6) - ^ Same. I don't understand why is spacing like this because you've used 1.0x for others.fixed
00:47:092 (1) - I find the angle of this slider very uncomfortable. Rotate it like this;fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/501946
00:47:092 (1,2) - Space these notes at 1.1x for consistency with (2,3,4). Apply this to 00:48:351 (5,4) - as well.fixed
01:07:232 (1) - A bit nazi though, This slider is not symmetrical correctly. Try this code:fixed
302,112,67232,6,2,B|256:95|210:112,2,95,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
01:08:071 (3) - ^fixed
01:10:588 (1,2) - The spacing is too close, I thought it was 1/4 at first.fixed
01:15:414 (1,2,3) - Use 1.0x spacing for these notes for consistency with 01:14:889 (5,6,7,8) - .fixed
01:23:595 (7) - This kick slider is too late, It should start at 01:23:176 - .fixed
01:43:893 (1,2) - These notes must be snapped by 1/3, Not 1/8. I mean (1) needs to be placed at 01:43:875 - and (2) at 01:44:015 - .fixed
01:47:721 (1,3) - I don't think the partial overlapping looks that great. Try to move (3) downward.fixed
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/502013
01:51:917 (4,5,6,1) - I found this quite boring. Better to space them out.fixed
01:54:749 (3,4) - Make the spacing larger for better readability. Currently it looks like 1/4.fixed
02:02:826 (2,3) - ^fixed
02:07:546 (7,1) - 1grid left.fixed
02:09:330 (1,2) - Why not stack them under previous notes? and the spacing of the stream is inconsistent.fixed
02:26:532 (4) - 1grid down to stack it under the previous (2).fixed
02:29:889 (4) - Add newcombo here to warn spacing change.fixed

Not a full-mod. I didn't mention any detailed things and hitsounds. The diff still does need a lot of work. Also popped the bubble for the several issues. Yes i know
This insane diff is very Crazy!
i don't like this but i don't want delete that because Kiyoshi did this with much work.
Thanks.
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I am sorry I don't realy like how is the insane now so I'll try to mod it, just take what you think is good I may be a (realy ?) bad modder ^^

[Insane]
00:28:001 (4) - Remove this note, if you listen here with 25% there is no sond that need a note.
00:33:246 (4) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:34:085 -
00:35:763 (1) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:36:288 -
00:37:022 (1) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:37:896 -
00:41:113 (4) - Remove this note and make the slider at 00:40:798 (3) - end here
00:41:218 (4) - Remove this slider and use a note at 00:41:323 -
00:42:791 (5) - Remove this note and make the slider at 00:42:476 (4) - end here
00:42:896 (5) - Remove and add a note at 00:43:001 -
00:46:043 (1) - Remove this note
00:46:253 (1) - If you do previous NC
00:47:721 (2) - move at 00:47:826 -
00:47:931 (3) - move at 00:48:036 -
00:48:141 (4) - move at 00:48:246 -
00:54:435 (2) - Remove the note
00:55:169 (3) - Remove the note too
00:57:372 (4) - Remove the note
00:59:469 (1) - Remove the note
00:59:679 (1) - It you do previous NC
01:01:148 (1) - Delete and add a slider at 01:01:253 - which ends at 01:01:462 -
01:13:316 (2) - Delete note and make 01:13:106 (1) - end here
01:14:994 (6) - Delete note
02:35:623 - Add note

I pretty like the song I hope it'll be ranked soon ;-)
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Arnold0 wrote:

I am sorry I don't realy like how is the insane now so I'll try to mod it, just take what you think is good I may be a (realy ?) bad modder ^^

[Insane]
00:28:001 (4) - Remove this note, if you listen here with 25% there is no sond that need a note.
00:33:246 (4) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:34:085 -
00:35:763 (1) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:36:288 -
00:37:022 (1) - No reverse arrow and add note at 00:37:896 -
00:41:113 (4) - Remove this note and make the slider at 00:40:798 (3) - end here
00:41:218 (4) - Remove this slider and use a note at 00:41:323 -
00:42:791 (5) - Remove this note and make the slider at 00:42:476 (4) - end here
00:42:896 (5) - Remove and add a note at 00:43:001 -
00:46:043 (1) - Remove this note
00:46:253 (1) - If you do previous NC
00:47:721 (2) - move at 00:47:826 -
00:47:931 (3) - move at 00:48:036 -
00:48:141 (4) - move at 00:48:246 -
00:54:435 (2) - Remove the note
00:55:169 (3) - Remove the note too
00:57:372 (4) - Remove the note
00:59:469 (1) - Remove the note
00:59:679 (1) - It you do previous NC
01:01:148 (1) - Delete and add a slider at 01:01:253 - which ends at 01:01:462 -
01:13:316 (2) - Delete note and make 01:13:106 (1) - end here
01:14:994 (6) - Delete note
02:35:623 - Add note

I pretty like the song I hope it'll be ranked soon ;-)
Thanks c:
Updated.
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The distortion makes my ears cry lava.
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Static Noise Bird wrote:

The distortion makes my ears cry lava.
LOL
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