Weez wrote:

General
- The mp3 file is waay too loud making the hitsounds really hard to catch, was able to lower it soo here : http://puu.sh/WvVD I don't hear a differance and you file is 128kbps when mine is 192 so no change but I may record the music agin with lower volme.

Insane
00:05:179 (3) - Remove this because the way you have the other combos set up you have a pause on the white tick. Might as well keep it consistent. Nope I think it follow the music better with this note and I aslo done thing like this later in the song.
00:48:929 (1,3) - Remove the finishes here, sounds better without it. Yes
01:48:020 (1,3) - Same as above. Yes

Hard
00:39:838 (5,6) - These you can blanket them better

Like so

Yes
01:38:645 (2,3) - Same this as above

Like so

Yes

Normal
looks ok

Good luck with getting this ranked ^_^ Thanks & thanks for mod

Jebok wrote:

[Normal]

00:40:122 (3) - Move it a bit down so that it does not overlap with the previous (1) slider. Done
01:01:429 (1) - Move it a bit down (like 2 grids) so its further from the prev. combo's (2). Done
01:08:247 (1) - x:288 and y:176 I can't do that, this broke completly the spacing, I have moved it so now it overlaps better with the previous (2)
01:09:100 (2) - x:180 and y:32 Nope this broke spacing.
01:38:929 (3) - Make it a nicer curl at the end, so that the shape is more of a curled corner. I don't realy understand what you want so I changed the slider but I don't know about the result.

[Hard]

00:11:429 (1,2,3) - Make (3) a straight shape going up then move all x:392 and y:256. So now you use whole grid instead of crowding the green and the fallowing blue combo in the middle. Also, fix the spacing of (4) and (5) by moving (4) to x:212 and y:76 and (5) to x:208 and y:168. Done Place (2) and (3) at 00:14:554 x:212 and y:76 also and move (4) x:120 and y:144. Now they don't overlap as well. Try out the whole thing to see how it looks~ Make the end part not like this because the spacing don't work
00:21:372 (4) - I think you shouldn't be putting (4) here because previous combo's (2) and (3) were here. Use the whole available place please. To fix this maybe turn the (3) at 00:20:804 vertically then move it x:188 and y:108 and then remove (4) and repeat the slider instead? Done
There are many spaces such as this I could point out. The rythm is fine but the spacing is like you crowd it sooo much. An incredibly good example is at 00:37:850. Those two notes are below the slider... why?? Before the curled slider you had notes in the same space so why don't use the space ABOVE the slider?? Putted thes notes above the slider.

[Insane]

00:22:225 (6) - x:140 and y:304 Yes
00:37:281 (4) - That's out of the grid. And? Having slider like this is okey since they are not off screen.
00:44:100 (2) - ^^
01:42:338 (1,2) - ^^
01:51:429 (1) - ^ The grid is there for a reason...^

Please link me to the SCOREBOARD next time, not the thread. Overall can be ranked, but the out grids need to be fixed and I would specially highlight the spacing. It should be more spread, don't wander somewhere with your combo and then wonder back like you doing a bunch of times. Wonder once and then choose another space to wonder, don't make the combo go back to where it came from!

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Gabe wrote:

Je vais t'aidé un peu...

[Overall]
•J'ai remarqué que le volume dans chaque difficultés est à 100%. Puisque le son de la musique est très forte, il est préférable de mettre le volume de chaque timings à environ 80%.
•En même temps, d'autre personne vont te demandé de supprimé le .osb dans le fichier de la beatmap. Fait-le maintenant et full-submit.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

[Hard]

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Voici une petite étoile pour toi~

Tout fait, merci pour le mod et l'étoile (For eng guys : All done, thanks for mod & star)

Stefan wrote:

'sup. You didn't wrote me at last friday, baka. :< Yey I know I'm baka D:

[General]
- About the Title.. does the Dragon Ball GT have to stand there, because for the correct title of the OST? Or did you set it in your own purpose? IDK if this is the real title I set it by myself and IDK if
- About the Volume: I would increase it to 85%.

[Normal]
I perfer x0.9 as Distance, the current one let look the Hitobjects really crumbled. I'm sorry but changing this is like a remap and I don't want to lose all other mods applyed by changing all the map sorry.
00:00:066 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:02:338 (1) - The Slider is fine, but in future, try to use this sliderpoints: http://puu.sh/12lfM
00:03:759 (3,1) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:06:031 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:12:850 (3,4) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:15:122 (3,1,2) - ^ Fix
00:18:247 (1) - Because of 00:16:827 (2) this looks really ugly and overlapped. It's my opinion, so it is up to you. Okey changed hope it's better
00:19:668 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:27:054 - Add a Circle, it fits good. Okey
00:29:327 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:31:600 - ^ Fix
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:36:429 (1,2,3) - The flow feels awkward.. Place (2) at 440;212 and (3) at 352;140. Okey
00:43:247 (2) - Remove Finish from the End. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Remove Finish from the Start.Done
00:48:929 (1,2) - Please let it look similar to this: http://puu.sh/12lGV Done
00:58:588 (1) - Remove Finish. Done
01:05:122 (3) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
01:30:690 - Add a Circle. Done
01:40:065 (1) - Rotate it for -29°. +29 right?
01:42:338 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:48:020 (1) - ^ Done

It looks okay, but there is a lot of work to do. About the Slider, I won't complain, since it is your first Map and some other people also made this kind of Sliders. The Flow is sometimes strange, but playable.

[Hard]
00:24:781 (1) - This fits absolutley not with the Music. Try this: http://puu.sh/12Tfy Done
00:29:327 (1) - ^ Done
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Please remove Finish at the End, it sounds awful. Done
00:54:043 (3) - Finish at the End. Done
00:58:588 (1) - It sounds much better when it ends at the red tick before. I prefer like now sorry no change
00:59:156 (1) - Remove NC, it is definitly not neccessary. Done
01:23:872 (1) - Same as 00:24:781 (1). Done
01:28:418 (1) - ^ Done
01:48:020 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:53:134 (3) - Finish at the End. Done

The Diff is very monotonous, the Triple Streams aren't really special and let make the Diff boring. You can do something like this (I took 00:06:884 (1,2,3) as example). Also, you should not overuse many 1/4 Slider in a Diff, (00:00:066 (1) or 00:01:344 (4)) and that). Same reason as the triple Streams. I'm sorry but changing this is like a compleate remap and after so many mods and time used on the map I prefer not but I'll try to do better with my other maps.

[Insane]
00:25:350 (4,1) - I don't get it why does (1) goes at left. The flow is awkward. Changed
00:36:429 (1) - Set Finish. Changed
01:08:247 (1,2) - Reverse the Position. It plays much better then. This broke distance and it plays okey like so no change sorry
01:30:690 - I really would set a Circle here.Done

Diff is actually good, I expected some more Jumps, but Insane Diffs don't need always Jumps.

Arnold0 wrote:

Hum... I'll probaly change when I'll get another mod.

pimpG wrote:

hi
from #modreqs Wohhh miracle x')

general

try this custom hitclap http://puu.sh/1jkPg Tried but I prefer mine (I think yours is less audible while playing, maybe it's just me?)

normal

00:06:884 (1,2) - i think you should use a long slider here, like 00:04:611, the slider tick sounds good for 00:07:168
01:23:872 (1) - try something like that for better flow http://puu.sh/1jkAu
01:48:020 (1) - http://puu.sh/1jkwN ?
Done for the 3

hard

00:50:065 (1,2) - this slider shapes looks random and a bit strange imo, try to use symmetry? I agree the patern is a bit strange I changed hope it's better
00:54:043 (3) - try ctrl+shit+R "selection centre" and rotate by -5? I moved that after changing the previous thing
01:40:918 (2) - make a simple blanket with previous note? I tryed but not sure about the result ^^
01:50:009 (2) - ^ ^

insane

00:22:793 (1,2,3) - not a good way to place this notes imo, try stack? Hum okey why not
00:24:213 (5,1,2,3,4) - check the spacing Fix
00:34:583 (4,5) - move this notes 1 grid left to fix shape Done
also, how about this http://puu.sh/1jlwy If I do that I'll have to move other notes after and like actual is ok so i keep mine

yeah its really good

it just needs more mods and you can get your bubble soon

good luck with ranking Thanks and thanks for mod

Arnold0 wrote:

PS : My last port in the thread is 9 days ago but the map was graved why ? :O

SPOILER

yours:

what I think:

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

Breeze wrote:

Rhythms are fine, the only thing I could say is some of your sliders can be proved, I mean in shape, it could have a better curve

such as 01:51:429 (1,2) in [Normal] diff.

SPOILER

yours:

what I think:

I changed but I'm not sure I got the exact same result as yours (PS : This is in hard diff and not normal )
So if you want, you can redo those sliders, other sliders I think can be proved:

[Normal]

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

I changed the 3 a little, hope it's better
I shouldn't be that picky in your 2nd map, send me a forum pm when you have reply then

Breeze wrote:

It's not bad as your 2nd map, maybe this kind of sliders fits the DB game more haha. Since the method to make slider changed not long ago, you can try make pretty sliders in your next map
Lemme bubble this map

UnderminE wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:940 (3) - This slider shape doesn't go well after 00:20:520 (1) - this since they are in same combo colour.
00:27:054 - soft whistle Okey why not
00:33:304 (3) - ugly slider
00:34:156 (1) - ^
00:35:577 (3) - ^
00:40:122 (3) - ^
You really need to use a bit longer sliders, or else this will be boring for Normal players. Because you don't have that much choices while shaping short-sliders and it makes them look ugly. Change Velocity imo. So that you can create more beautiful and fun patterns. I don't want to remap all so nope...
00:48:929 (1,2) - make them symmetrical Tried
00:51:486 (3,4) - stack these Okey
01:30:690 (4) - whistle Okey

needs better sliders, I didn't point out all of them. I changed the ones you sayd and a few other but i'm not realy good at finding bad sliders

[Hard]
AR+1 Nope I don't want it to be the same as insane
Don't use same rhythm over and over again. It really makes the map boring and boring. Anyone wouldn't want to play the same rhythm for minutes. I'll try with my next map but, I don't want to remap all and breeze sayed me the rythm is fine.
00:58:588 (1,2) - Not a nice jump actually Fixed
Try different patterns and rhythm styles. Same don't want to remap all
01:09:668 (5) - Ugly slider
01:11:940 (5) - ^
01:21:031 (5) - ^
It is like you just put different kinds of sliders randomly. Symmetrical patterns or delicious patterns always look better than randomized patterns. Try some.
Fixed bads sliders you sayd (I hope). But I'm sorry I don't want to broke all olds mods and lose much more time when it can be okey like this.

[Insane]
Finally good patterns. Try these kind of things in Hard too.
01:14:071 (7,8,9,10) - Ugly pattern especially this ruins 01:14:497 (10) - I don't understand whats the problem?
01:42:338 (1,2,3) - Instead of using huge and same sliders over and over again, why don't you try blankets or circle sliders? Since making sliders is easier than before. I did not know how to use and where the new fonction is
01:44:043 (3,2) - Stack these two perfectly Yes.

I will mod this again after few mods. Good luck

Kurai wrote:

Enjoy your first rank !