Currently it's on "Not bad" status but your map needs to be "Good" to be ranked.
maybe try adding some enjoyable jumps that makes sense according to the music?

But honestly, this music isn't kind of music that everyone might enjoy, so actually I would like to say "look for another music", because It's gonna be kinda hard to rank it(especially, when it's your first map) if your music isn't attractive enough..

haha5957 wrote:

from haha's random modding queue >~<

[Insane]

00:06:560 (4) - try to improve shape of "This kind of slider(which i wouldnt point out all of them) by
1. maybe try to use 2 curving slideers if they are long enough.
2. try to place "endpoint of slider" at the middle or endpoint circle. it makes better shape
example : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404212
currently every long slider in the map needs improvement and it won't take that long. btw you can add curving point by doing
ctrl+clicks Fixed
00:25:310 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - this part looks pretty bad.. maybe this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/404215 this? Tryed but not realy sure about the result...
01:01:532 (7,8,9,10) - if you see this, it looks like too many patterns are squeezed in a very tight space, overlapped by previous (1,2,3,4,5,6)s, and etc..
and I personally suggest not to use 00:59:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - this pattern, but I don't know how should i explain. Fixed pattern overlap but you don't say me what is the problem with 00:59:685 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) so I'll change if you say me what to do with it.
01:02:952 (4,5) - see this too, and see how it's overlapped to previous (10) or so.. Since other patern a little change no more problem here
if you are planning to place your patterns on where your pattern just came from - (my English sucks. maybe, in easy world - you are planning to do some overlaps to previous pattern)
make sure the overlap looks pretty nice and understandable.

01:35:623 (7,8,9,10) - move them few grids left so they can overlap nicely with previous patterns? Yes

REMOVED part which speak about ranking system and my song etc since it's not a part of the mod itself and don't need to be quoted.

It was just personal opinion because I think it would be hard to make rank maps with this kind of music. If you like this music very much, sure go ahead continue!

About the music thing, if you have played osu! for a while, you must have realized that most of osu! songs are kinda moemoeish song, or anime/eroge OP/ED, rarely rhythm game.

I didnt wanted to discourage you, I just wanted to see your map being ranking because I know you are very active these days. don't be depressed beecause of this please, and sorry again if I hurt your feelings.

zeroclover wrote:

mod mod mod ~~

General

Offset +15 Nope with offset +15 I get like avg early 10~20 ms ^^" (With actual like late 5 / early 5 because I'm not pro D:)

Insane

00:25:878 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about this look?
Done
00:39:231 (5) - move down a bit, when playing it s too close to score Fixed
00:49:174 (3) - move 1 grid to left You meen right I belive because 1 left looks bad and 1 right looks better
00:57:981 - drain a lot, give some notes or little break Little break added

Hard

00:57:981 - insert break time Done
01:47:981 (1) - flip Looks better okey


Normal

Fine~

overall is look fine, no problem

~~

SephWalker wrote:

Hi.

Normal

No problems whatsoever. Excellent beatmap. Thanks

Hard

Again, no problems. It's not a great beatmap. I dislike it because of the repetitiveness of the song, not because the actual beatmap is bad. If you want to improve it, you can try to mix up the pattern a bit. For instance, instead of 01:02:526 (1) you could do something like
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405188 -- hopefully this makes sense, if not, I can help you more. Keep in mind, this is just a suggestion and is not necessary, it would just make the beatmap more interesting to not have the exact same pattern everywhere. I'm sorry, I tried but I fear of making things worse and lose previous mods about some symetry etc (Making like this makes overlaps and I may do many bad ones and I prefer not sorry)

Insane

00:25:310 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Okay, I like the way this looks but I would like to make one recommendation. Extend the green slider (5) further to replace the blue (1). http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/405192 Obviously, make it look prettier, but this is the way I'd do it. I feel like the position that you ended the green slider at doesn't correspond properly with the beat and it's more intuitive as a player when done the way I've done it in that screenshot. Also, follow suit at the other parts of the song that do that type of slider. Again, just a suggestion, you don't HAVE to do it but I feel it would significantly improve the beatmap. You also may want to go through and look for other instances where the slider ends sooner than it should like that. Yes sound better, changed.

Storyboard

To be perfectly honest with you, the storyboard at the end where you say "Thanks for playing" is horrible. I personally would not play this beatmap again if this remained. If you want to put your name in a corner during the game, out of the way but visible, that's perfectly fine, but announcing it at the end like that seems really cocky. This was more a test of the SB feature but it's not usfull so deleted and full submit done.

Other

Offset is fine. All in all, these are great beatmaps. Insane is right around the difficulty level that I enjoy playing, so if my complaints with it were resolved I'd definitely play it. Also, I'd suggest that you stop complaining about the beatmap not having been ranked yet. It looks to me like you're pretty close to being ranked, and that it will likely be ranked very soon. I wish you the best.

P.S. To the player who was saying this song doesn't fit with osu, I disagree wholeheartedly. It's songs like this that we don't have enough of, because we're flooded with anime fanboy music that I, frankly, couldn't care for one bit. This is an awesome song.

Armin wrote:

[General]
*Tags like "videogames" or duplicates like "Dragonball" (when it's already in source) in tags are kinda useless in my opinion. feel free to remove them if you agree Removed
*am I or the mp3 isn't so-good? where did you download it? If it's taken from a GBA game there are a lot of ways to get a perfect audio mp3. It's a rip from the game using an emulator but i was reencoded two times. Re ripped from the emulator and encoded one time at 192kbps.
*I feel you could add some custom hitsounds, it would be awesome as hell. If you are wondering where you could take them... well take a look at : I don't realy know what to take, I've taked a normal-hitclap and the link for Cymbal Pack is dead. But I like the osu! original hitsoud too so not a big problem ^^
Clap Packs:

SPOILER

(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Snare Packs:

SPOILER

(Link 1) (Link 2)
(Link 3)

Cymbal Pack:

SPOILER

(Link)

Percussion Pack:

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(Link)

[Hard]

00:58:123 (x) - This break just makes no sense Removed

[Insane]

01:28:947 (8) - ending a slider on a blue tick is not so good when it doesn't fit any instrumenta hit. I suggest you to make it end on the next red tick Sound better, changed.
01:33:350 (7,8,9) - feels a bit weird to hit... if i were you I'd reverse the position of 8 and 9 Done

Weez wrote:

General
- The mp3 file is waay too loud making the hitsounds really hard to catch, was able to lower it soo here : http://puu.sh/WvVD I don't hear a differance and you file is 128kbps when mine is 192 so no change but I may record the music agin with lower volme.

Insane
00:05:179 (3) - Remove this because the way you have the other combos set up you have a pause on the white tick. Might as well keep it consistent. Nope I think it follow the music better with this note and I aslo done thing like this later in the song.
00:48:929 (1,3) - Remove the finishes here, sounds better without it. Yes
01:48:020 (1,3) - Same as above. Yes

Hard
00:39:838 (5,6) - These you can blanket them better

Like so

Yes
01:38:645 (2,3) - Same this as above

Like so

Yes

Normal
looks ok

Good luck with getting this ranked ^_^ Thanks & thanks for mod

Jebok wrote:

[Normal]

00:40:122 (3) - Move it a bit down so that it does not overlap with the previous (1) slider. Done
01:01:429 (1) - Move it a bit down (like 2 grids) so its further from the prev. combo's (2). Done
01:08:247 (1) - x:288 and y:176 I can't do that, this broke completly the spacing, I have moved it so now it overlaps better with the previous (2)
01:09:100 (2) - x:180 and y:32 Nope this broke spacing.
01:38:929 (3) - Make it a nicer curl at the end, so that the shape is more of a curled corner. I don't realy understand what you want so I changed the slider but I don't know about the result.

[Hard]

00:11:429 (1,2,3) - Make (3) a straight shape going up then move all x:392 and y:256. So now you use whole grid instead of crowding the green and the fallowing blue combo in the middle. Also, fix the spacing of (4) and (5) by moving (4) to x:212 and y:76 and (5) to x:208 and y:168. Done Place (2) and (3) at 00:14:554 x:212 and y:76 also and move (4) x:120 and y:144. Now they don't overlap as well. Try out the whole thing to see how it looks~ Make the end part not like this because the spacing don't work
00:21:372 (4) - I think you shouldn't be putting (4) here because previous combo's (2) and (3) were here. Use the whole available place please. To fix this maybe turn the (3) at 00:20:804 vertically then move it x:188 and y:108 and then remove (4) and repeat the slider instead? Done
There are many spaces such as this I could point out. The rythm is fine but the spacing is like you crowd it sooo much. An incredibly good example is at 00:37:850. Those two notes are below the slider... why?? Before the curled slider you had notes in the same space so why don't use the space ABOVE the slider?? Putted thes notes above the slider.

[Insane]

00:22:225 (6) - x:140 and y:304 Yes
00:37:281 (4) - That's out of the grid. And? Having slider like this is okey since they are not off screen.
00:44:100 (2) - ^^
01:42:338 (1,2) - ^^
01:51:429 (1) - ^ The grid is there for a reason...^

Please link me to the SCOREBOARD next time, not the thread. Overall can be ranked, but the out grids need to be fixed and I would specially highlight the spacing. It should be more spread, don't wander somewhere with your combo and then wonder back like you doing a bunch of times. Wonder once and then choose another space to wonder, don't make the combo go back to where it came from!

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Gabe wrote:

Je vais t'aidé un peu...

[Overall]
•J'ai remarqué que le volume dans chaque difficultés est à 100%. Puisque le son de la musique est très forte, il est préférable de mettre le volume de chaque timings à environ 80%.
•En même temps, d'autre personne vont te demandé de supprimé le .osb dans le fichier de la beatmap. Fait-le maintenant et full-submit.

[Normal]

1. 00:11:429 (1) - Pour ce slider, essaye de ne pas faire trop de forme avec les sliders de 1/2. C'est trop petit pour faire certaines formes. Tu pourrais au moins le courbé, ou le mettre bien droit.
2. 00:40:975 (1,2) - C'est vachement vide ici... Met un reverse arrow au slider 1. Pour ne pas avoir un gros spacing, déplace aussi le slider (2) plus près du (1).
   
   Comme cela

   
3. 01:51:429 (1) - La forme de ce slider me semble bizarre, on dirrais un "L" q.q' Bref, courbe-le comme ceci, ca fait plus symple;
   
   

[Hard]

1. 00:31:031 (3) - Ce slider me semble bizarre. Peux-tu essayé de reproduire ceci?; Regarde tes sliders , essaye de faire quelleque chose plus détendu.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:065 (1) - Ajoute un nouveau combo ici puisque le son de la musique reprend.
3. 01:49:156 (1) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:19:100 (4) - Je pourrais te dire que pour faire un "blancket" avec le cercle précédent, tu pourrais déplacé le slider une ou deux casse(s) vers la gauche.
2. 00:40:406 - Ajoute un clap ici puisque dans la musique il y a un genre de drum/basse aussi, tu en as ajouté dans la première partie.
3. 00:42:679 (3) - Same as above.
4. 00:49:213 (2,3,4) - C'est rien de grave, mais pour qu'ils soient parfaitement alignés avec 00:48:929 (1) -, bougent-les de une casse vers la gauche. Et ajoute un clap sur le cercle (4) pour la raison au 00:40:406
5. 00:07:736 (4) - Ça peut sembler bizarre parce que j'ai pointé un truc dans les 49 secondes et la je suis dans les 7 secondes, donc, comme dit plus haut, pour qu'il sois parfaitement aligné, déplace-le une case vers la droite (Si tu utilises le Size Grid 4, biensûr)
6. 00:51:770 (3) - Pareil pour 00:40:406
7. 01:14:071 (7) - Stack-le avec le (3) et bouge ceci 01:14:497 (10) - à x:496 y:132. La raison ai, le (7) va être aligné avec le slider (10) et je trouvais que le cercle (7) étais éloigné..
8. 01:25:861 - Tu pourrais ajouté un clap ici comme les raisons mentionnés plus haut.
9. 01:48:304 (2,3,4) - Comme dit un peu plus haut, déplace ces cercles deux cases vers la droite, ils vont êtes plus centré du (1)
10. 01:50:861 (3) - Ajoute un clap comme j'ai dit pour 00:40:406.

Voici une petite étoile pour toi~

Tout fait, merci pour le mod et l'étoile (For eng guys : All done, thanks for mod & star)

Stefan wrote:

'sup. You didn't wrote me at last friday, baka. :< Yey I know I'm baka D:

[General]
- About the Title.. does the Dragon Ball GT have to stand there, because for the correct title of the OST? Or did you set it in your own purpose? IDK if this is the real title I set it by myself and IDK if
- About the Volume: I would increase it to 85%.

[Normal]
I perfer x0.9 as Distance, the current one let look the Hitobjects really crumbled. I'm sorry but changing this is like a remap and I don't want to lose all other mods applyed by changing all the map sorry.
00:00:066 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:02:338 (1) - The Slider is fine, but in future, try to use this sliderpoints: http://puu.sh/12lfM
00:03:759 (3,1) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:06:031 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:12:850 (3,4) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:15:122 (3,1,2) - ^ Fix
00:18:247 (1) - Because of 00:16:827 (2) this looks really ugly and overlapped. It's my opinion, so it is up to you. Okey changed hope it's better
00:19:668 (2) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
00:27:054 - Add a Circle, it fits good. Okey
00:29:327 (1,2) - Spacing Error. Fix
00:31:600 - ^ Fix
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:36:429 (1,2,3) - The flow feels awkward.. Place (2) at 440;212 and (3) at 352;140. Okey
00:43:247 (2) - Remove Finish from the End. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Remove Finish from the Start.Done
00:48:929 (1,2) - Please let it look similar to this: http://puu.sh/12lGV Done
00:58:588 (1) - Remove Finish. Done
01:05:122 (3) - Use default Clap at the End. Done
01:30:690 - Add a Circle. Done
01:40:065 (1) - Rotate it for -29°. +29 right?
01:42:338 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:48:020 (1) - ^ Done

It looks okay, but there is a lot of work to do. About the Slider, I won't complain, since it is your first Map and some other people also made this kind of Sliders. The Flow is sometimes strange, but playable.

[Hard]
00:24:781 (1) - This fits absolutley not with the Music. Try this: http://puu.sh/12Tfy Done
00:29:327 (1) - ^ Done
00:36:429 (1) - Finish at the Start. Done
00:48:929 (1) - Please remove Finish at the End, it sounds awful. Done
00:54:043 (3) - Finish at the End. Done
00:58:588 (1) - It sounds much better when it ends at the red tick before. I prefer like now sorry no change
00:59:156 (1) - Remove NC, it is definitly not neccessary. Done
01:23:872 (1) - Same as 00:24:781 (1). Done
01:28:418 (1) - ^ Done
01:48:020 (1) - Remove Finish at the End. Done
01:53:134 (3) - Finish at the End. Done

The Diff is very monotonous, the Triple Streams aren't really special and let make the Diff boring. You can do something like this (I took 00:06:884 (1,2,3) as example). Also, you should not overuse many 1/4 Slider in a Diff, (00:00:066 (1) or 00:01:344 (4)) and that). Same reason as the triple Streams. I'm sorry but changing this is like a compleate remap and after so many mods and time used on the map I prefer not but I'll try to do better with my other maps.

[Insane]
00:25:350 (4,1) - I don't get it why does (1) goes at left. The flow is awkward. Changed
00:36:429 (1) - Set Finish. Changed
01:08:247 (1,2) - Reverse the Position. It plays much better then. This broke distance and it plays okey like so no change sorry
01:30:690 - I really would set a Circle here.Done

Diff is actually good, I expected some more Jumps, but Insane Diffs don't need always Jumps.

Arnold0 wrote:

Hum... I'll probaly change when I'll get another mod.

pimpG wrote:

hi
from #modreqs Wohhh miracle x')

general

try this custom hitclap http://puu.sh/1jkPg Tried but I prefer mine (I think yours is less audible while playing, maybe it's just me?)

normal

00:06:884 (1,2) - i think you should use a long slider here, like 00:04:611, the slider tick sounds good for 00:07:168
01:23:872 (1) - try something like that for better flow http://puu.sh/1jkAu
01:48:020 (1) - http://puu.sh/1jkwN ?
Done for the 3

hard

00:50:065 (1,2) - this slider shapes looks random and a bit strange imo, try to use symmetry? I agree the patern is a bit strange I changed hope it's better
00:54:043 (3) - try ctrl+shit+R "selection centre" and rotate by -5? I moved that after changing the previous thing
01:40:918 (2) - make a simple blanket with previous note? I tryed but not sure about the result ^^
01:50:009 (2) - ^ ^

insane

00:22:793 (1,2,3) - not a good way to place this notes imo, try stack? Hum okey why not
00:24:213 (5,1,2,3,4) - check the spacing Fix
00:34:583 (4,5) - move this notes 1 grid left to fix shape Done
also, how about this http://puu.sh/1jlwy If I do that I'll have to move other notes after and like actual is ok so i keep mine

yeah its really good

it just needs more mods and you can get your bubble soon

good luck with ranking Thanks and thanks for mod

Arnold0 wrote:

PS : My last port in the thread is 9 days ago but the map was graved why ? :O

SPOILER

yours:

what I think:

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

Breeze wrote:

Rhythms are fine, the only thing I could say is some of your sliders can be proved, I mean in shape, it could have a better curve

such as 01:51:429 (1,2) in [Normal] diff.

SPOILER

yours:

what I think:

I changed but I'm not sure I got the exact same result as yours (PS : This is in hard diff and not normal )
So if you want, you can redo those sliders, other sliders I think can be proved:

[Normal]

1. 00:34:156 (1) -
2. 00:35:577 (3) -
3. 01:01:429 (1) -

I changed the 3 a little, hope it's better
I shouldn't be that picky in your 2nd map, send me a forum pm when you have reply then

Breeze wrote:

It's not bad as your 2nd map, maybe this kind of sliders fits the DB game more haha. Since the method to make slider changed not long ago, you can try make pretty sliders in your next map
Lemme bubble this map

UnderminE wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:940 (3) - This slider shape doesn't go well after 00:20:520 (1) - this since they are in same combo colour.
00:27:054 - soft whistle Okey why not
00:33:304 (3) - ugly slider
00:34:156 (1) - ^
00:35:577 (3) - ^
00:40:122 (3) - ^
You really need to use a bit longer sliders, or else this will be boring for Normal players. Because you don't have that much choices while shaping short-sliders and it makes them look ugly. Change Velocity imo. So that you can create more beautiful and fun patterns. I don't want to remap all so nope...
00:48:929 (1,2) - make them symmetrical Tried
00:51:486 (3,4) - stack these Okey
01:30:690 (4) - whistle Okey

needs better sliders, I didn't point out all of them. I changed the ones you sayd and a few other but i'm not realy good at finding bad sliders

[Hard]
AR+1 Nope I don't want it to be the same as insane
Don't use same rhythm over and over again. It really makes the map boring and boring. Anyone wouldn't want to play the same rhythm for minutes. I'll try with my next map but, I don't want to remap all and breeze sayed me the rythm is fine.
00:58:588 (1,2) - Not a nice jump actually Fixed
Try different patterns and rhythm styles. Same don't want to remap all
01:09:668 (5) - Ugly slider
01:11:940 (5) - ^
01:21:031 (5) - ^
It is like you just put different kinds of sliders randomly. Symmetrical patterns or delicious patterns always look better than randomized patterns. Try some.
Fixed bads sliders you sayd (I hope). But I'm sorry I don't want to broke all olds mods and lose much more time when it can be okey like this.

[Insane]
Finally good patterns. Try these kind of things in Hard too.
01:14:071 (7,8,9,10) - Ugly pattern especially this ruins 01:14:497 (10) - I don't understand whats the problem?
01:42:338 (1,2,3) - Instead of using huge and same sliders over and over again, why don't you try blankets or circle sliders? Since making sliders is easier than before. I did not know how to use and where the new fonction is
01:44:043 (3,2) - Stack these two perfectly Yes.

I will mod this again after few mods. Good luck

Kurai wrote:

Enjoy your first rank !