I think this diff can ranked, if delet some overmapped stream.

1. 00:22:171 (1) - 2 grids down
2. 01:17:296 (2,4) - 2 grids up

1. 01:06:233 (6,7) - manual stack here.. ? looks bad here
2. 01:36:046 - add note..? it's in the music
3. 01:36:233 (4) - delete this..?
4. 01:47:296 (4) - move up a little
5. 01:54:608 (6,7) - right & down 1 grid cuz it's stacking in play mode
6. 02:41:483 (4,5) - ^
7. 03:59:858 (1,2) - move right 1 grid
8. 04:03:889 - add note here ? it can give more score

1. 00:27:983 (11) - whistle here ?
2. 01:06:046 (2) - this is not stacked at the right place ?
3. 01:40:171 (1) - remove the whistle at the beginning ?

L_P wrote:

General: what a waste of the star, vass_bass, use it to encourage new mappers imo

Regou wrote:

[Hard]
00:16:171 (1) Maybe make it like this?

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00:27:233 (7,8) Right 1 grid
00:28:546 (2,3) Right 1 grid
00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5) Make the scale bigger for a bit.
01:26:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Spacing...
03:17:483 (4) Down 1 grid
03:34:171 ~ the end: The spacing become a bit smaller than the previous part. Make it larger.

May you mind change the diff name into [Lunatic]? This diff is not too hard...
The maximum score is not too far to the limit for ranked map... (Below 19,000,000)
Suggesion:
Change 03:52:358 (2,3,4) and 03:52:733 (5,6,7) into sliders
and also 03:56:858 (2,3,4).
Therefore you will get a score below 19,000,000 and make this map for ranked but not approval.

18 million is the recommended maximum.

;-; Right when I started to map this I see this mapset today.. sigh
Good job on this, good luck to you guys and happy (belated) birthday Vass!

1. I know that taiko diff is a guest diff but what about to start the 2nd kiai time on 03:32:671 to keep consistency with standard diffs?

1. 00:07:171 remove green line just use the red one setting S:C1 on it.
2. 00:14:296 (3) - I'd reduce this slider by 1/2 so that you can also add whistle on the reverse arrow to keep hitsound consistency. Obviously, reducing this slider by 1/2 you also need to add a circle on the next empty white line with new combo (according to the new rhythm), on 00:15:421. To be clearer: http://puu.sh/1sMJ4
3. 00:31:921 (5) - I can hear a drum sound here. What about to add clap on it?
4. 00:44:671 (3,4) - To be honest, I don't like how these 2 sliders flow and how they are played. I mean, what about to make something like this? I think it's more enjoyable and flowable to play:
   
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   420,172,44671,2,0,B|424:108|364:84,1,100,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   288,44,45421,2,0,B|192:100,1,100,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

5. 01:03:796 (3) - Finish + clap, sounds better (on the slider end, obv)
6. 01:17:296 (2,4) - Since this is a Normal diff I would move these 2 circles some grid up so that they are perfectly centered with both sliders (I mean
7. 01:16:171 (1,3)). According to this, why don't you move them to x:168 y:168?
8. 01:25:171 (3) - (maybe it could be nazi) but improve the stack with 01:22:921 (1) because it looks bad during gameplay, really.
9. 01:28:171 (1) - You should remove finish from this slider's head to keep consistency with 01:19:171 (1). If you want to keep it you also will have to add a finish on 01:19:171 (1)
10. 01:31:171 (6) - I'd use New combo here, according to the new vocal sound/downbeat
11. 01:53:296 (2) - I think this slider doesn't fit the vocal as it should (maybe also becaus to miss a note on the downbeat in a normal diff looks really weird, IMO). What about to edit the rhythm here like this? I think it'd fit really much better: http://puu.sh/1sN2A
12. 02:02:671 (1) - Too soon after the spinner for a normal diff/easiest diff of the mapset. You must fix this, please.
13. 02:04:171 (3) - Maybe new combo? Like 02:10:171 (1)
14. 02:11:671 (3) - I'd remove this whistle from slider body, I don't like how it sounds, honestly D;
15. 02:40:171 (1) - Finish on the slider head
16. 02:43:171 (4) - Add new combo according to new rhythm
17. 02:45:421 (1) - I don't like this slider xD Yea, I'm just suggesting you my opinions. What about to curve it in this way so that it's also blanketted with
18. 02:44:296 (7)'s head? I mean: http://puu.sh/1sNdS
19. 02:51:421 (3) - Maybe remove finish? There aren't cymbals in the song, or, at least, I can't hear them.
20. 02:52:171 (1) - Add finish here instead, to match that clash in the cymbals
21. 03:11:671 (1) - You should remove new combo from this slider to keep consistency with previous parts
22. 03:44:671 (1) - Remove new combo
23. 03:46:171 (3) - Add new combo removing it from 03:47:671 (1) instead. Still to keep consistency, please.
24. 04:03:046 (6) - Move this slider to x:180 y:248 because of bad blanket with 04:02:671 (5)
25. 04:03:796 (x) - Add a circle because the next spinner without a first "finish" note looks too empty to me, and pretty weird, really.
26. 04:04:171 (1) - Since this spinner should be looonger, reduce it till 04:08:671, with 5% volume

1. 00:12:046 (2) - Are you missing a whistle on the slider's end here? I guess yes.
2. 00:28:921 (3) - What an ugly slider/blanket with previous slider ç_ç Just fix this moving the central sliderpoint to x:392 y:64
3. 00:39:796 (4) - Finish on this slider head because of clash in the cymbals
4. 00:45:046 (3) - ^
5. 00:51:796 (2) - ^
6. 00:58:171 (1) - ^
7. 01:03:421 (7) - Finish + clap? Or just clap if you don't want to use finish in this calmer part
8. 01:08:671 (5) - Finish
9. 01:20:671 (6) - I'd use new combo to start this slider rhythm/new spacing
10. 01:34:827 (4,5) and 01:36:140 (3,4) - I'd change these doublets with two 1/4 sliders ç.ç
11. 03:17:483 (4) - Move this circle to x:80 y:252 to keep spacing consistency between 03:17:296 (3,4) and 03:17:483 (4,5)
12. 03:32:671 (1,2,3,4) - Please no, this spacing is confusing and really awkward to play ._. Use a different and a more enjoyable pattern to play here.
13. 03:58:546 (3) till the end - I don't understand why you are not using custom clap hitsounds here to fill the drum sounds. I mean that you should add some custom claps on sound likes 03:58:546 (3), 03:59:296 (5)'s heads and so on.
14. 04:03:983 (x) - Add circle, same reason of normal diff

1. What about to use AR 9? This is an extra diff, and it looks better..
2. 00:30:608 (10,11,12) - It has always been awkward playing this kind of spacing/pattern. I suggest you something like this instead: http://puu.sh/1sNMS (just move the (11) like the screenshoot shows)
3. 00:56:671 (6) - New combo? According to spacing changes and also because of next square çwç
4. 01:00:421 (4) - Move to x:348 y:208 to make a symmetrical triangle (with 1.30x spacing)
5. 02:33:796 (5,6) - Just stack them. This sudden "weird" stack could confuse a lot.
6. 03:28:171 (5) - New combo on this slider removing it from the next one
7. 04:03:983 (x) - Add a circle, same reason of normal diff
8. Before to mod this map I was imagining something harder than this xD Well, pretty nice map for me, good job ;3

1. 00:22:171 (7) - kat? It sounds better in my opinion
2. Just this, rest is fine for me.

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Extra - Finished. This difficulties goes for approval, due to amount of score. Mapped by IceBeam, Reiji-RJ, Louis Cyphre
Hard - by Vass Bass
Normal - mapped by [Ryuu]
Taiko - mapped by OnosakiHito

Ranking Criteria wrote:

1. You must fully map at least one difficulty of a mapset if you are the person who is uploading it. For collaborated beatmap sets, the uploader must be a part of every difficulty. Also, no guest mapper should have more content in the mapset than the creator. It makes no sense to upload a map if you barely contributed to it.

So, this map can't be ranked in this state, unless Louis map another diff by himself. Sorry, but I had to comunicate this
Oh.. and btw, Extra can be Ranked now for this rule: t/84012
And that's about it.. GL with 'your' map Louis

Louis Cyphre wrote:

So, this map can't be ranked in this state, unless Louis map another diff by himself. Sorry, but I had to comunicate this
Oh.. and btw, Extra can be Ranked now for this rule: t/84012
And that's about it.. GL with 'your' map Louis

Discussed already this with Garven. This map was submitted before this rule was set. So i'm allowed to get this ranked out of that rule.
Also, Extra goes for usual rank, not approval

ztrot wrote:

I would really like to see more contribution from the mapper on this set before I could think about ranking it also extra can be ranked just so you know.
:edit till then popped.

1. I checked more carefully the timing and I got offset 7170, +6 from your current one. Then you also should change the 3rd redline to 148170. Change it only if you agree with it and don't forget to resnap all elements and green lines after timing changes.
2. You should use tick rate 2 if you want to keep slowdowns.

1. 00:30:039 (4) - new combo?
2. 01:03:789 (3) - forgot finish on the end
3. 01:13:164 (1) - this slider touches hp bar, move it some grid down please
4. 01:53:289 (2) - soft finish? it fits nice with that clash in the cymbals
5. 02:13:164 (4) - according to the new redline I would use new combo here
6. 03:44:664 (1) - remove new combo
7. 04:04:164 (1) - end with soft hitsounds settings, normal sounds too loud

1. 01:04:726 (2) - improve this stack
2. 01:13:539 (2) - ^
3. 01:36:132 (3) - soft finish on the slider end to match the cymbals
4. 02:44:851 (6) - new combo?
5. 02:47:476 (4,5) - this sudden spacing change could confuse players. The 02:48:039 (5) start should be closer from 02:47:476 (4) end
6. 03:32:945 (2,3) - you must use a different spacing between these 2 circles because 03:32:664 (1,2) are 3/4 while 03:32:945 (2,3) is 1/2. So you must differentiate them using a different spacing
7. 04:04:070 (1) - reduce by 1/4

1. 00:56:664 (6) - you mean you fixed it but you didn't xD new combo?
2. 04:04:070 (1) - reduce by 1/4

1. Center all settings

Chewin wrote:

~Taiko~

1. Center all settings

Just yesterday I was thinking about if any other map of this song actually exist while playing Mafiamaster's one. Noticing this today made me smile, gratz!

Louis Cyphre wrote:

Just yesterday I was thinking about if any other map of this song actually exist while playing Mafiamaster's one. Noticing this today made me smile, gratz!

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/28286 xD

Thanks everyone!