Jayel wrote:

Hi, thanks for modding my map!! your welcome :3//

M4M here!! \:D/

[General]
Try to add hitsound from the beginning till 00:20:194 i tried it

[Easy]
The SV (Slider Velocity) of this difficulty is TOO high.
SV 0.8 ~ 1.0 is recommended for Easy diff. but in this map, SV in Easy 1.30
Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. okay

00:20:674 (1) - Remove NC (New Combo). okay
00:36:514 (6) - NC. ^
00:46:114 (1) - This spinner looks so embarrassing for me. '^';; w-whyyy? ;A;
01:06:754 (1,2,3) - This pattern might be hard for Easy. so, i changed it
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? no, i just follow the vocal. sorry :'D
01:45:154 (3) - You are not actually supposed to put slider like this. Use Beat Snap Divisor as 1/2. fix
01:59:074 (1) - Lengthen or remove this "SUDDEN" spinner. (or is it just me who feels this spinner so sudden?) no, this sake for Kiai time ;w;
02:12:994 (2,3) - This pattern sounds a little odd. Try this one: http://puu.sh/1rqbM tried xD
02:22:594 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
02:27:394 (1,2,3) - A little hard pattern for easy. i think so, changed
02:30:754 (1) - Remove 02:29:794 (4) and make the spinner start from here and end at 02:31:714.
02:54:994 (5) - This slider pattern is not recommended for easy. Changed
02:59:074 (5) - NC and... fix
03:00:034 (1,1) - Remove those NC's. ^
03:02:914 (1) - Too short spinner. Removed
03:25:474 (1) - Make this spinner end at 03:27:394. fix

Overall, this diff has a little overdose of spinners. Try to reduce the number of those spinners.

[Hard]
00:40:834 (1) - Clap. Forgot, orz. thanks o//
01:26:434 - Why don't you add some notes from here? same reason here.
02:29:794 (5) - This slider sounds weird; try to substitute this with other pattern. okay
02:30:514 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 02:31:714. ^
03:25:234 (1) - Shorten this spinner so that this ends at 03:27:394. ^

Generally, you have mapped this song pretty well.
Just put some more efforts here and it'll be a great map.

Good luck!! thanks \:'D/

Banana wrote:

Hi Banana here from my mod queue thanks for coming to mod this maps :3//

General
you need to add the guest diff.'s creater's name to each diff., that is, you need to add Tsusuko into tag in Hard and Normal wait, i had done it D: and Tsusuko just make the normal one.

Hard
CS+1? normal use CS4 and it's strange to make hard a larger circle okay.
00:28:354 (7) - make this slider last to 00:28:834? a longer slider make it easier recognized here, should you changed it, NC the following note example changed
00:32:674 (1) - slider repeats twice plays bad to me .-., maybe repeat once and add a circle stacked instead? should you changed it, move the slider to keep the ds sorry no.
01:02:434 (9) - note pattern is not very nice here, how about make (9) left and the follwing (1) below? i mean this, try to avoid touching notes in a short time section this very helpful, thanks~
01:08:914 - start the spinner here? okay
01:42:754 (2) - curve to the other side, i mean left or below ^
02:29:794 (5) - keep the distance ^
02:30:274 - remove the repeat on the (5) and start the spinner here? ^
02:56:434 - add a circle here? ^
03:27:154 - spinner end at here sorry, no.

soku's Normal it'll fix soon by Tsusuko
00:39:634 - add a circle?
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal?
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it

Easy
00:22:594 (2) - curve to the other side okay, i tried it
00:56:194 (2) - use a 1/1 slider instead? these notes are hard in an easy ^
01:08:914 - start the spinner here ^
03:01:954 (4) - make it like this? ^
03:25:474 (1) - move this spinner 1/2 earlier ^

good luck thanks o///

inverness wrote:

From our queue \( ^_^)/

Red mods means must be fixed. Mods with question marks are only suggestion.

[General]

1. Try using muted normal-sliderslide, it'll fit the music .w. but, how to do it? :O tutor please?

[Easy]

1. 00:20:674 (5) - Move a little bit to the up for better flow done
2. 00:22:594 (2) - No, sliders with more than 1 reverses is not recommended especially on Easy and Normal. Change this into 2 sliders or whatever you want, but please no 2 reverses. okay
3. 00:28:834 - Add note here please ^
4. 00:29:314 (1) - Add clap ^
5. 00:30:754 (3) - ^ on end ^
6. 00:35:074 (4) - ^ ^
7. 00:36:994 (2) - ^ ^
8. 00:40:834 (1) - ^ on start ^
9. 00:46:114 (1) - Using spinner in the middle of the patterns is a totally no-no and looks uncreative. Remove this spinner and add some circles/sliders here instead yeah, i'm very poor at pattern ;w;
10. 00:48:034 (1) - No. fix
11. 00:51:394 (1) - Same here. ^
12. 00:55:714 (1,2,3) - >< this is Easy. Change these into a slider with one reverse. ^
13. 00:57:154 (4) - oh why D:
14. 01:03:394 (1) - whyyy ^
15. 01:06:754 (1) - Add clap on start? added
16. 01:07:714 (2) - Add clap? ^
17. 01:34:114 - Add note plz ^
18. 01:53:314 (1) - Change this into just one slider without any reverses okay :"
19. 01:56:434 (5) - NC o>
20. 02:08:674 (1) - why? fix
21. 02:18:514 (4) - . ^
22. 02:21:634 (3) - Why don't you just copy paste 02:19:714 (1) - and apply some flip or rotation on it? fix
23. 02:25:954 (3,4) - Combine into one slider with one reverse okay
24. 02:52:834 (2,3,4,5) - ......stream. Simplify please, this is Easy, remember okaaay ;w;
25. 03:02:914 (5) - Add clap on start added
26. 03:17:314 (8) - . ;__;
    
27. 03:19:714 (1,2) - .. ^
28. 03:23:074 (1,2,3) - oh another stream. whyy dunno, but i've fixed that.

Instead of that, your map is nice, actually. :3 nuoo, my maps not good enough. still needed mods thanks~

[Hard]

1. 00:13:474 - add note here please, feels awkward without it okay 'w'd
2. 00:26:914 (4,5,6,7) - Unstack please, confusing to read ^
3. 01:07:714 (3,4) - Unstack. ^

Well, this diff is nicer tho, good job thanks o//

Good luck blackabyss! thanks for your mods!

Banana wrote:

suko's Normal fix'd for you
00:39:634 - add a circle? Ok
03:06:274 (3) - use a 1/1 slider at 03:06:034 instead to go with the vocal? Nah.
03:20:914 (3) - this circle seems not needed here, and 03:24:274 is a better place for it Removed

cirno- wrote:

Normal 01:32:674 (5) - Shorten it by 4/4 and give it a 2nd reverse. It sounds better. Adjust positions as needed. I made a change, but it's different from what you asked

yurunneram wrote:

Easy
Decrease Slider V!!!! Your normal guest diff's V is 1.2!!! and also if ur free maybe lower the distance spacing to 0.6? sorry, no ;w;
Erm... no problem

Normal
02:09:154 (3) - Don't hide it

Hard
np thanks o//

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]

- I guess original artist is 'hope' instead of 'Hope'. according to this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=shlLMT4x8n8 fix
- Add in tags 'megpoid'. Megpoid, 2nd name of Gumi, should be in tags. ^
- I suggest to use such colour set: http://puu.sh/1vctO , imo looks better, anyway, it's up to you. i'll take it.

Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 121,191,79
Combo3 : 0,155,230
Combo4 : 196,108,210

- Kiai must start and end perfectly snapped on ticks. Your ones have +1 ms delay, please fix them all. how to do it? orz, sorry... still newbie here ;u;
- 03:12:034 useless green line. removed


[Easy]

OD -1. okay

Very, very cool for 1st map. Hm, but i've noticed, that there are no 'pauses' between notes. Map goes simply just 1|1|1|1|1|1|1. The only 2 pauses that i've found, despite breaks and spinners are: 01:02:914 - , 03:19:234 - . I'd recomend to place such pauses a bit more, to avoid robo 1|1 constant rhythm. yea. change it a bit, not much

00:40:834 (1) - too soon after spinner, take a note: this is an easiest difficulty, and it should be easy not only for you, but for newbie players too. fix
01:59:074 (1,1) - ^ ^
03:10:114 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:08:674 (1,2) - hard to read. According to song, logically, there should be one more repeat, because of song rhythm and because of your placement of notes. To fix this, just place it like this http://puu.sh/1vcAX , it looks and plays much better. yes, it much better, thanks :3//

[Suko's Normal]
HP-2, OD -1

02:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties.
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc.
03:20:674 (2) - http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks.
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish.

[Hard]

hur dur. Why you didn't use sexy 1/4 patterns?
00:10:954 - as you see vocal and main music beats arive on blue tick, ignore claps do like this:
http://puu.sh/1veby , if you like the pattern that used, use this code: thanks, really helpful o//

280,276,10594,5,0,0:0:0
156,296,10954,1,0,0:0:0
204,184,11314,1,0,0:0:0
284,196,11554,5,0,0:0:0
381,275,11914,1,0,0:0:0
395,154,12274,1,0,0:0:0
384,76,12514,5,0,0:0:0
309,106,12754,1,0,0:0:0

00:14:434 - ^ and so on. I'd even say, such parts are the main theme of this sexy song ^
00:27:634 (5,6) - hidden slider start/end, move '5' somewhere else. moved
00:28:354 (7) - no, 2 x no, 4 x no, ..., 2^n x no and NO. Instead, use something like this: http://puu.sh/1veeM
00:32:674 (1) - alone double repeat slider, appears everytime, when your fantasy says to you: "dude, i have no idea". Here i made for you something:
http://puu.sh/1vehA accepted thanks

288,312,32674,5,0,0:0:0
358,274,32914,1,0,0:0:0
320,204,33154,1,0,0:0:0
250,242,33394,2,0,P|216:184|196:92,1,160

i'm not gonna link every pattern that i dislike, just go throw whole map and decide what to needs to be adjusted. Use your own fantasy more wider ~

Starred, for 1st map, it's really good. Good luck ~ Thanks for your stars and pattern Suggestion too o// it' really-really-really useful. thanks a lot!

yurunneram wrote:

Normal
02:09:154 (3) - Don't hide it Why not? No change

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[Suko's Normal]
HP-2, OD -1 Ok, fixed

02:29:794 (1) - add finish, as it is on rest difficulties. Ok
02:47:074 (1) - ^ etc. Ok
03:20:674 (2) - http://puu.sh/1ve7e , let's avoid 1/1 useless stacks. Fixed
03:27:394 (6) - remove whistle, add finish. Ok

Curisu wrote:

GUMI~! yay \:D/
[Easy]
00:28:834 (7) - NC ; 00:29:314 (1) - remove NC removed

[Hard]
00:15:394 - +NC fix
00:48:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - (x,y) [1]368,72 [2]472,144 [3]496,216 [4,5]326,348 maybe better i'd changed it but, didn't same with your suggestion
01:07:474 (2,4) - overlapping nazi changed
01:36:274 (6) - ^ try 215,284 changed. but, didn't same with your suggestion

Curisu wrote:

[Normal]
00:40:354 - +finish Ok
02:00:994 (1) - ^ Ok
01:44:674 - slience? vol=5 Sure
01:59:794 - +NC to mark rhythm change No change
02:24:514 (2) - x,y = 320,292? if you do that you should also adjust the end of the slider to fit DS Not sure how that would change anything, so no.
02:56:674 - slience again? Ok

Lally wrote:

Hi from my mod Q
sorry for delay .w. had no internet for 2 weeks ;w; no prob xD uwouh, and you still a live ;u;

btw since you have a wip guest diff you should move your map to W.I.P. forgot :"

[Easy]

00:40:354 - empty - add a circle here because the vocal starts and feels epty without same thing here 02:00:994 and here: 03:12:034 added
00:45:634 (4) - stak this one better with end of this slider 00:47:074 (6)
00:55:714 (5) - ugly slider try something like this: a little bit better to see a slider like this :V lol, ic xDchanged



00:58:114 (9) - stack with 00:59:554 okay
01:42:274 - remove nc ^
01:43:234 - remove nc ^
01:44:674 - finish added
01:48:034 - clap ^
03:15:394 - new combo okay
03:18:274 (9) - stack better this circle with 03:16:834 (7) done lol

[Hard]

00:37:474 (5) - stack with 00:36:514 done
00:41:074 - add a circle ^
00:45:154 (4) - useless white point http://puu.sh/1x2hP removed
00:49:714 (5) - stack with 00:50:674 (7)
and the stack 00:51:394 (1) with 00:49:474 (4) done
00:56:914 and 00:57:034 - add a circle ^
01:03:154 and 01:03:274 - add a circle for following the rhythm done but the second note won't add
01:32:434 - add a circle done
01:37:714 and 01:37:834 - add a circle ^
01:45:154 - try something like this: sounds better okay

01:59:074 - finish sorry no
02:08:434 and 02:08:554 - add a circle done
02:17:554 - dont stop the rhythm because vocal and don't stop - add a circle here and 02:17:674 ^
02:23:794 and 02:23:914 - circle ^
02:59:794 and 02:59:914 - circle ^
03:05:554 - circle here ^

o3o/ good luck thanks o//

mintong89 wrote:

Mod from My Queue ♪

[Easy]

00:12:034 - i think you should add a clap at this. added
00:19:234 (4,5,1,2) - i think you better use same circular. you can try use CTRL+ > or CTRL + < . changed
00:24:034 (3,4,1) - polygon nazi. ^
00:28:354 (6) - you can put at under 00:26:434 (4) - slider's end. ^
00:48:034 (1,2,3) - polygon nazi #2. ^
00:55:714 (6) - where NC? 0.0 whoops, forgot :"
01:08:194 (3) - (end of slider) you can make it until 01:08:674 - changed
01:30:754 (2) - (start of slider) clap. added
01:32:194 (4) - (end of slider) ^ ^
03:24:034 (2) - ^ ^


[Hard]

nice imo ;w;/// thanks~ \:3/

poor mod as you wish//