spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

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  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. inconsistent Artist/TitleUnicode // Proof? Since I can't find something wrong here
2. inconsistency letterbox~ I support Easy diff, remove all letterbox when you have SB/Video // Fixed

Beren's Easy

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  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:37:339 (2) - (optional) make slider ball on turning point at 00:37:780 - ? // Nah, it fits to the rhythm
2. 00:54:986 (2) - move to x484,y280 to avoid overlaps? (00:53:221 (4,2) - too close) // Fixed
   
   
3. 00:58:074 (5) - add NC to distinguish sentence? // Fixed
   
   
4. 01:17:486 (3) - red node should move to x348,y272 make a parallel curve. // Fixed
   
   
5. 02:01:604 (3) - (optional) try to make 02:01:604 (3) - aim at 02:00:721 (2) - curve center, so move it to x208,y212? // No. It's hard to explain orz
   
   
6. 02:30:721 (2,3) - I'm not sure it's intentionally? But I recommend to make slider(2's slider tail and 3) on straight line

Hard

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  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:35:795 (2,3,4,1) - It's awkward angle for me. first of all, 00:35:795 (2,3) - it's neither a right angle nor a smooth curve. perhaps, you can make shape like this: // Fixed
   
   photo

   
2. 00:41:089 (2,1) - (minor) why don't you make those (slider) symmetrical to the center. // I don't what is "symmetrical to the center"?
   
   
3. 01:26:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's intentionally? It's nether regular nor increasing spacing. // Nah, it means it's going to spinner. And yes, it's intentional
   
   
4. 01:34:913 (4) - move to x336,y252 to make it avoid overlaps. (01:34:913 (4,2) - ) // Fixed
   
   
5. 03:08:663 (1,2,3,4) - (optional) It's a rigid pattern for player. maybe make staggered slider will be better. // Fixed
   
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Lunatic

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  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:54:104 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - (optional) for this part. I think 00:54:766 (1) - should be stack on the 00:54:104 (4) - slider tail, because 00:54:545 - to 00:56:089 - it's a sentence. so used stack like after part. // Fixed
   
   
2. 01:52:339 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^ // Fixed
   
   
3. 02:43:957 - (optional) used note at here, and spinner start at 02:44:177 - . for this downbeat. it should have a hitsound(hit point) for here. // I guess it's fine
   
   
4. 03:17:486 (1,2) - (optional) why don't you make it symmetrical to the midline? like this↓ // Fixed
   
   
   

   24,272,196604,1,0,0:0:0
   12,192,196824,1,2,0:0:0
   48,120,197045,1,8,0:0:0
   112,72,197266,1,0,0:0:0
   192,64,197486,6,0,B|240:56|296:104|296:168,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
   216,164,198148,2,0,B|215:105|271:57|319:65,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0

call me back when you fix my mod~ but it you must reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

then~ go

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Make the colors and kiai consistent between the difficulties.

~Lunatic~

HP Drain -1 would be much better to me.

02:42:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern kinda annoyed me on first sight, but I guess it's fine. // I follow the music, so no change

Andrea wrote:

Good enough now :3

Ranked~

thesorrow wrote:

grats leorda ^^

Quilt wrote:

omedetou~~

Breeze wrote:

Nice SB effect, simple but awesome
congratulations

sospk0011 wrote:

4개 모두 다 풀콤보로 깰 수 있었으면 좋겠어요^^(6월 1일까지)