forum

BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size) [Osu|Taiko]

posted
Total Posts
133
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 Agustus 2016 at 22:25:06

Artist: BACK-ON
Title: Chain (TV Size)
Source: Air Gear
Tags: teru21 mintong89 Arnold0 Kurosanyan
BPM: 184
Filesize: 13760kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Arnold0's Insane (3,06 stars, 273 notes)
  2. Easy (1,36 stars, 85 notes)
  3. Hard (2,89 stars, 178 notes)
  4. Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii (2,83 stars, 368 notes)
  5. Kurosanyan's Taiko Oni (4,4 stars, 581 notes)
  6. mint's Taiko Oni (3,73 stars, 484 notes)
  7. Teru's Normal (1,88 stars, 112 notes)
Download: BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size)
Download: BACK-ON - Chain (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
2nd Beatmap
TrigonometrY
Hi from #modreqs!
I hope this will be helpful for you:

Easy
1) Try to use the same distance snap on Easy
2) You use same pattern all time. Add variety to the map. Maybe, better make some sliders following the vocal (especially in the chorus)? For example:
00:33:325 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - delete this and try this:
416,256,33651,6,0,B|384:304|320:336|256:344|192:336|128:304|104:256,1,360.000003576278
104,136,36260,2,0,B|128:88|192:56|256:48|320:56|384:88|416:136,1,360.000003576278
00:39:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete and try:
488,232,38868,6,0,B|480:296|416:320,1,120.000001192093
296,344,40172,2,0,B|240:360|168:344,3,120.000001192093
96,264,42780,1,0
64,144,43432,1,0
and so on.
3) 00:54:190 (6,1,1) - too hard for beginner. Delete spinner
4) 01:29:726 - music ends here, so the last note I would put here

Normal
Too hard, a large pile of objects.
1) HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate, Overall Difficulty - ~4 (maximum 5)
2) The same as on Easy: try to stick to the same distance snap, add some variety.
3) 00:54:842 (1) - this spinner again
4) Combo: try not to exceed a value 8 for a combo

Hard
00:17:514 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
00:29:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) etc - maybe, better to avoid frequent use of such patterns?

Good luck with map!
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

TrigonometrY wrote:

Hi from #modreqs!
I hope this will be helpful for you:

Easy
1) Try to use the same distance snap on Easy
2) You use same pattern all time. Add variety to the map. Maybe, better make some sliders following the vocal (especially in the chorus)? For example:
00:33:325 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - delete this and try this:
416,256,33651,6,0,B|384:304|320:336|256:344|192:336|128:304|104:256,1,360.000003576278
104,136,36260,2,0,B|128:88|192:56|256:48|320:56|384:88|416:136,1,360.000003576278
00:39:194 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - delete and try:
488,232,38868,6,0,B|480:296|416:320,1,120.000001192093
296,344,40172,2,0,B|240:360|168:344,3,120.000001192093
96,264,42780,1,0
64,144,43432,1,0
and so on.
3) 00:54:190 (6,1,1) - too hard for beginner. Delete spinner
4) 01:29:726 - music ends here, so the last note I would put here

Normal
Too hard, a large pile of objects.
1) HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate, Overall Difficulty - ~4 (maximum 5)
2) The same as on Easy: try to stick to the same distance snap, add some variety.
3) 00:54:842 (1) - this spinner again
4) Combo: try not to exceed a value 8 for a combo

Hard
00:17:514 (3,4,5,6,7,8)
00:20:285 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
00:29:902 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) etc - maybe, better to avoid frequent use of such patterns?

Good luck with map!
I don't accept your Mod cause many problem :? :? :?
Ruta Kaguya
i think it should be "TV Size" not "Tv Size"

and, i will try to make the insane XD
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Ruta Kaguya wrote:

i think it should be "TV Size" not "Tv Size"

and, i will try to make the insane XD
okay,I will waiting
Sonnyc
Fast mod :P

General:

-- Considering the metronome, The offset should be 14090 (No time changes are made)

Easy:

-- Where are hitsounds?

00:58:429 (4) - 1 Grid Left and down
01:00:385 (6) - 1 Grid right
01:02:993 (2) - 1 Grid Left
01:07:557 (4) - Make a line with the end of (3) (Then you'll have to edit the distance of (5), maybe 2 Grid left)
01:08:861 (6,7) - 2 Grid down
01:14:729 (6) - 1 Grid Right
01:16:686 (1) - Anti Jump with the previous note doesn't look good, imo
01:21:902 (1) - ^

Normal:

00:44:084 (1) - Mini jump with (2) doesn't look good
00:59:081 (8) - 1 Grid down
00:59:733 (9) - Uhh,, Anti jump with the previous note looks bad. Or maybe you've forgot to put a note at 00:59:407
01:14:077 (10) - NC
01:29:074 (5) - Delete Clap at the end (or delete 1 reverse)

Hard:

00:22:241 (1) - Distance
00:24:523 (5) - NC
01:08:535 (2) - Stack on (6)
01:15:055 (1) - I don't think a spinner fits here

I think you'll need more work!!
Good luck with your map~
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
SUBMIT

STILL NEED FOR GD INSANE
Sonnyc
Wrong submit?
Where is your normal?
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Sonnyc wrote:

Wrong submit?
Where is your normal?
arrrggg,This have been 2 times I fail in upload
but now UPDATED
Nagisawa
From my moddinq que, hello~

  • General
  1. Rename your background. 'BG' or just 'background'

  • Easy
    00:20:937 (1) - remove whistle. it's no need, i think
    00:46:366 (3,5) - maybe it's look good, if be a symmetrically
    00:54:516 (1,1) - it's hard for easy. Either delete the spinner, or make it a long. For a novice spinner should be left after at least one tick. And here and spinner short, and after he has a right note! For a beginner it will be hell. =DDDD
    01:09:513 (7) - maybe add a cpal, i think)
    01:25:814 (3) - made exactly. http://puu.sh/1i92u

  • Normal
    00:18:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This all does not look very neat. Each note closes the previous and therefore for Normal - it's hard.
    00:22:567 (9) - slider is ugly. should fix it.
    00:45:388 (3,4) - fix distance
    00:54:842 (1) - it's hard for normal. see my recommendation in easy ^
    00:57:777 (5) - ugly slider
    In general, I bit hard modthis diff. Because it is not accurate, just as it did not worked hitsounds.

  • Hard
    00:18:655 (1) - remove nc;00:19:633 (11) - nc here; and remove nc from this 00:20:285 (1) -
    Too much of this: http://puu.sh/1i96Y And it's just hard.


I think that the map requires a lot of work!
Good luck to you!~~~
:3
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
SUBMIT
kurohana


General

  1. Remove 'Air Gear' from tags, it's already in the source
  2. Offset: 1046
  3. BPM: 184,000 (Resnap timing section and notes and make sure to change in all diffs)

Easy

  1. The rhythm is very monotonous... Why not add longer sliders and make some alternation?
  2. Add more hitsounds, really ._. I heard 3 whistles and 4 claps... This is definitely not enough! Read here point 4

Normal

  1. The pattern look very random. Why not form any triangles or stars?
  2. A lot of spacing mistakes. Please check your map and decide, which spacing you want to use in the whole diff ^^
  3. Hitsounds mostly are set on every second white tick. Look at this picture. I placed notes where the clap fits with the song. Just try it ^^
  4. Try to make new combo not so random. It will look better if you set new combo on every new vocal (like you did here 00:24:523 (1) but not here 00:33:977 (10)) or every long white tick
  5. A lot of overlaps that can prevented.
  6. 00:56:147 (1) - This note is too far away, place it more in the center, it's esaier for beginners o3o Or leave space after the spinner.

Hard

  1. Again, very random patterns.
  2. Spacing in Hard isn't important as Normal or Easy, but some spacing mistakes can be removed.
  3. 00:25:827 (3,4) - Spacing
  4. 00:27:783 (6) - With this pattern (5) looks like a slider with 2 repeats. Please move (6)
  5. 00:42:454 (8,9) - Spacing
  6. 01:02:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make perfect blankets (look here)
  7. 01:08:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think, this isn't a good idea to stack everything with the notes before... It's hard to read and you could form better things with it.

Okay, when you fix that, i re-check ;3
But I have to say, next friday to nxt friday (26.10.-2.11.) I am away. I will still re-check both of your maps after that ^^
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

kurohana wrote:



General

  1. Remove 'Air Gear' from tags, it's already in the source
  2. Offset: 1046
  3. BPM: 184,000 (Resnap timing section and notes and make sure to change in all diffs)

Easy

  1. The rhythm is very monotonous... Why not add longer sliders and make some alternation?
  2. Add more hitsounds, really ._. I heard 3 whistles and 4 claps... This is definitely not enough! Read here point 4

Normal

  1. The pattern look very random. Why not form any triangles or stars?
  2. A lot of spacing mistakes. Please check your map and decide, which spacing you want to use in the whole diff ^^
  3. Hitsounds mostly are set on every second white tick. Look at this picture. I placed notes where the clap fits with the song. Just try it ^^
  4. Try to make new combo not so random. It will look better if you set new combo on every new vocal (like you did here 00:24:523 (1) but not here 00:33:977 (10)) or every long white tick
  5. A lot of overlaps that can prevented.
  6. 00:56:147 (1) - This note is too far away, place it more in the center, it's esaier for beginners o3o Or leave space after the spinner.

Hard

  1. Again, very random patterns.
  2. Spacing in Hard isn't important as Normal or Easy, but some spacing mistakes can be removed.
  3. 00:25:827 (3,4) - Spacing
  4. 00:27:783 (6) - With this pattern (5) looks like a slider with 2 repeats. Please move (6)
  5. 00:42:454 (8,9) - Spacing
  6. 01:02:015 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) and 01:11:795 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Try to make perfect blankets (look here)
  7. 01:08:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think, this isn't a good idea to stack everything with the notes before... It's hard to read and you could form better things with it.

Okay, when you fix that, i re-check ;3
But I have to say, next friday to nxt friday (26.10.-2.11.) I am away. I will still re-check both of your maps after that ^^
thx but I think i won't change BPm and Offset
mintong89
finish: http://puu.sh/1jyNV :D

but..timing is weird: BPM:180 and Offset: 3,669
Teru21
As requested xD Done xD

http://puu.sh/1jAaV

don't forget to put in my name on tags in all diff xD

Ganbatte neh..? xD
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

mintong89 wrote:

finish: http://puu.sh/1jyNV :D

but..timing is weird: BPM:180 and Offset: 3,669

ah ya,u re right :D
Rotte
hey~

General

i recommand kiai time is 00:34:973 - to 00:55:842 -


Easy

HP+2 AR+2 OD+1

00:23:886 (5,1) - The 2 objects is unsnapped.
00:28:451 (4,5) - Don't stack this, it's too hard,and 4 is not beautiful.
00:33:669 (1) - spacing,it's too hard in easy diff.
00:53:886 (6) - 1 grid up.
01:07:582 (4,5) - 1 grid right.
01:07:582 (4,6) - 1 grid up.


01:03:668 (3) - remove clap.
01:04:973 - remove clap.
01:07:255 - remove clap.
01:07:908 - ^
01:08:886 (6) - remove clap.
01:17:038 (8) - NC.
01:29:755 - add finish,and add a green line to reduce volume to 5%.

13 clap sounds good,and plz check it.

Normal

00:11:495 (1,3) - Don't stack this, it's too hard.
01:06:929 (2) - ^
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:13:451 (2,3) - ^
01:29:429 - I recomand use a 1/8 slider.


Hard

00:15:082 (4) - unsnapped
00:17:527 (3) - move to 280|280 .
00:23:886 (4) - 1 grid right.
00:27:962 (6) - NC
00:28:451 (1) - 1 grid right.
00:30:897 (1) - spacing
00:31:875 (1) - spacing
00:41:169 (6) - remove clap
00:52:255 (7) - unsnapped

please use 1 3 clap in this slider circle.
01:02:038 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
01:11:821 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:16:712 (1,1) -
01:19:321 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) -
01:25:190 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
Teru21

-[NYAN]- wrote:

hey~

Normal

00:11:495 (1,3) - Don't stack this, it's too hard. its not stacked.. o3o you can see them clearly
01:06:929 (2) - ^ ^ and its a pattern
01:08:234 (2) - ^ ^
01:13:451 (2,3) - ^ Okayy XD
01:29:429 - I recomand use a 1/8 slider. Nice idea XD
here XD
http://puu.sh/1mIY8

thanks nyan XD
Xinely
i will mod this map tomorrow >w<
Xinely
i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video

Easy
00:33:668 Ctrl+G
00:42:473 give whistle sound
00:44:755 give finish hitsound
00:44:103 give clap sound on the head of slider
01:01:712 give clap sound
01:03:016 ^
01:03:668 and 01:04:321 give whistle sound on the head of slider and finish to the tail of slider
01:06:277 (2,3,4) same as 01:03:668

Teru's Normal
01:02:038 give clap sound
01:02:690 give whistle sound
01:18:016 (1,2,1) kalo bisa jangan dibuat numpuk
01:29:429 make this slider end in white line

Hard
make beat snap divisor become 1/4 .. need a little stream in this diff :3
00:24:538 (1) maybe make likethis
00:58:451 (9) try make this

i can't mod taiko diff sorry :(
good luck :D
Teru21

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video owob I dukung!! :3

Teru's Normal
01:02:038 give clap sound nope :D pattern nya yang part sana sih di garis ke 3 clap nya xD
01:02:690 give whistle sound nah... kalo pake disitu ajah kan aneh lol XD
01:18:016 (1,2,1) kalo bisa jangan dibuat numpuk okeee
01:29:429 make this slider end in white line ;A; nah.. situ ada nyobain ga? ntar ga pas sama musiknya ;-;

i can't mod taiko diff sorry :(
good luck :D
araa~ http://puu.sh/1o9tb
Xinely
udah nyobain sih ;w;
maaf saya masih agak newbie urusan hitsound
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video


good luck :D
wakakakakaka


btw,napa mod q inggris tp kalo mod na teru indonesia :?:
Teru21

JT123 wrote:

- M i K u - wrote:

i think because this is anime song and TV Size, you should give video


good luck :D
wakakakakaka


btw,napa mod q inggris tp kalo mod na teru indonesia :?:
because i'm special LOOOOOOOOOL!!
XD
BeatofIke
Hello JT123! Request from my queue! Here's a quick mod (mostly on combos)!

[Easy]
00:16:712 (4) - New Combo.
00:19:321 (6) - New Combo.
00:20:625 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:21:929 (3) - New Combo.
00:29:755 (5) - New Combo.
00:33:669 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:34:973 (2) - New Combo.
00:35:625 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:40:842 (5) - New Combo.
00:46:060 (10) - New Combo.
00:48:016 (12) - New Combo.
00:49:321 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:50:625 (3) - New Combo.
00:52:582 (5,6,1) - It would be better to replace slider 5 with a hit circle and start your spinner at 00:53:234 and ending at 00:52:582. Lastly, add a circle at 00:55:842.
00:56:495 (1) - If fixed above, add a new combo here.
01:01:060 (6,1) - Swap (Switch) these combos for consistiency.
01:04:973 (1) - Remove this combo.
01:06:277 (2,3,4) - This slider pattern is too hard for Easy difficulty. Just add hit circles. Remember, easy is for beginners.
01:08:886 (6) - New combo.
01:10:190 (1) - Remove combo.
01:11:495 (2) - New combo.
01:14:103 (5) - New combo.
01:29:103 (4) - End this slider at 01:29:592 instead.

[Teru's Normal]
-> Approach Rate 5?
00:03:669 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left.
00:32:364 (1) - Strange slider indeed.
01:18:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid right.
01:29:429 (4) - I lol'ed! Delete this slider and replace it with 1/2 mini slider. Also add a clap at the end of this slider.

[Hard]
00:34:973 (4) - New Combo.
00:37:582 (5) - New Combo.
00:40:190 (4) - New Combo.
00:45:408 (5) - New Combo.
00:48:016 (5) - New Combo.
00:50:951 (4) - New Combo.
00:52:908 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:53:234 (2) - New Combo.
01:03:669 (7) - New Combo.

I give up >_<
Teru21

BeatofIke wrote:

[Teru's Normal]
-> Approach Rate 5? okeii XD
00:03:669 (1,2,3) - 1 grid left.lol XD fix
00:32:364 (1) - Strange slider indeed. i love to make strange slider lol XD
01:18:016 (1,2,1,2,3) - 1 grid right. Okaayy XD
01:29:429 (4) - I lol'ed! Delete this slider and replace it with 1/2 mini slider. Also add a clap at the end of this slider. nah.. its nice but i want to keep mine XD add the clap sound btw XD

I give up >_<
thanks BeatofIke XDD ily /slap XD

Code kay..? my puush acting strange.. =w=
SPOILER
osu file format v10

[General]
AudioFilename: Back-On - Chain (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55821
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chain (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Chain (TV Size)
Artist:BACK-ON
ArtistUnicode:BACK-ON
Creator:JT123
Version:Teru's Normal
Source:Air Gear
Tags:
BeatmapID:186977
BeatmapSetID:60713

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
3669,326.086956521739,4,1,0,50,1,0
55842,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
76712,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
89429,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 224,188,175
Combo2 : 148,237,174
Combo3 : 145,145,255
Combo4 : 51,255,255

[HitObjects]
84,88,3669,2,0,B|124:96|164:88|164:88|144:152|188:204,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,128,4647,1,2,0:0:0
328,200,4973,2,0,B|369:151|349:87|349:87|389:95|429:87,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
424,288,6277,6,0,B|380:324|380:324|292:336|292:336|228:372,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
148,336,7255,1,2,0:0:0
216,264,7582,2,0,B|168:237|168:237|80:225|80:225|36:189,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
228,128,8886,6,0,B|272:184|364:180|408:124,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
412,28,9864,1,2,0:0:0
324,80,10190,2,0,B|291:143|334:225|403:241,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
224,340,11495,6,0,B|276:328|300:272|284:200|216:184,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,92,12473,1,2,0:0:0
176,188,12799,2,0,B|120:200|104:272|128:328|180:340,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,276,14103,6,0,B|436:216|436:216|448:92,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
372,40,15082,1,8,0:0:0
348,136,15408,2,0,B|268:208,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,64,16386,1,8,0:0:0
180,40,16712,6,0,B|112:40|56:88|48:172,1,200
96,252,17690,1,8,0:0:0
188,288,18016,2,0,B|265:278|311:220|315:155,1,200
404,108,18995,1,8,0:0:0
452,196,19321,6,0,B|452:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,340,19973,2,0,B|364:240,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,152,20625,2,0,B|12:152,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
36,252,21929,1,0,0:0:0
88,336,22255,5,8,0:0:0
184,368,22582,2,0,B|240:368,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,268,23234,2,0,B|200:188,2,75
188,312,23886,2,0,B|288:296,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,280,24538,6,0,B|392:276|392:276|392:284|392:284|400:276|400:276|400:284|400:284|408:276|408:276|408:284|408:284|416:276|416:276|416:284|416:284|424:276|424:276|424:284|424:284|432:276|432:276|432:284|432:284|440:276|440:276|440:284|440:284|448:276|448:276|448:284|448:284|456:276|456:276|456:284|456:284|464:276|464:276|464:284|464:284|488:276,1,200
504,184,25516,1,8,0:0:0
452,100,25842,2,0,B|392:100|392:100|376:124|344:124,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
312,36,26495,1,0,0:0:0
240,108,26821,1,8,0:0:0
292,192,27147,6,0,B|280:312,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,340,27799,1,0,0:0:0
196,340,28125,1,8,0:0:0
196,340,28451,6,0,B|132:352|96:312|96:312|136:272|128:224,1,200
88,140,29429,1,8,0:0:0
172,88,29755,6,0,B|196:36,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,164,30408,2,0,B|296:152,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,184,31060,6,0,B|80:196,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
204,260,31712,2,0,B|180:312,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,164,32364,6,0,B|292:184|304:248|304:248|312:216|328:212,2,150
276,72,33669,6,0,B|332:92|384:68,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,168,34321,2,0,B|404:148|456:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
400,256,34973,2,0,B|400:360,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
232,364,36277,6,0,B|176:344|124:368,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
160,268,36929,2,0,B|104:288|52:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
108,180,37582,2,0,B|108:76,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,96,38886,6,0,B|292:196,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
384,156,39538,2,0,B|384:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
476,96,40190,2,0,B|476:160|476:160|476:200|448:256|380:248,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
196,204,41495,2,0,B|196:141|196:141|196:101|232:48|292:56,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
292,252,42799,6,0,B|292:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
376,100,43451,1,8,0:0:0
376,100,44103,6,0,B|400:164|400:164|400:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
392,296,44755,1,0,0:0:0
316,360,45082,1,8,0:0:0
216,360,45408,2,0,B|112:360,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
140,264,46060,2,0,B|84:264,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
120,164,46712,6,0,B|188:164|188:164|233:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
316,152,47364,1,0,0:0:0
296,248,47690,1,8,0:0:0
316,152,48016,2,0,B|353:54,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
432,115,48668,2,0,B|452:62,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
452,212,49321,6,0,B|392:224|360:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,180,49973,2,0,B|234:221|174:209,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
240,132,50625,6,0,B|252:72|312:48|376:76|380:148,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
236,276,51929,2,0,B|248:336|308:360|372:332|376:260,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
188,204,53234,2,0,B|492:204,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
448,112,54538,6,0,B|296:112,2,150,4|0|4,0:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0
256,192,55842,12,4,58451,0:0:0
112,104,59103,6,0,B|68:148|88:220,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
180,176,59755,2,0,B|224:132|212:68|184:36,2,150
148,272,61060,6,0,B|192:192|192:192|204:168|244:120|296:76|368:80,1,300
444,132,62364,2,0,B|464:168|480:184|480:184|472:204|480:224,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,296,63668,5,0,0:0:0
332,296,63995,1,0,0:0:0
240,252,64321,1,8,0:0:0
240,252,64647,5,0,0:0:0
324,196,64973,2,0,B|396:60,2,150
264,116,66277,6,0,B|216:204,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
164,288,66929,2,0,B|192:240,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
264,300,67582,6,0,B|312:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,128,68234,2,0,B|336:176,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
268,92,68886,6,0,B|240:52|240:52|188:16,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
172,120,69538,2,0,B|201:162|201:162|241:190,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
336,160,70190,6,0,B|376:188|420:172|420:172|452:220|448:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
348,276,71168,1,8,0:0:0
348,376,71495,2,0,B|308:348|264:364|264:364|232:316|235:258,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
132,88,72799,6,0,B|240:88,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
332,104,73451,1,0,0:0:0
268,184,73777,2,0,B|160:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
368,184,74755,1,0,0:0:0
256,192,75408,12,4,76712,2:0:0
428,300,78016,5,0,0:0:0
428,100,78668,1,0,0:0:0
428,300,79321,6,0,B|388:292|348:300|348:300|368:236|324:184,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
256,260,80299,1,0,0:0:0
184,188,80625,2,0,B|143:237|163:301|163:301|123:293|83:301,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
88,100,81929,6,0,B|132:64|132:64|220:52|220:52|284:16,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
364,52,82908,1,0,0:0:0
296,124,83234,2,0,B|344:151|344:151|432:163|432:163|476:199,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
284,260,84538,6,0,B|240:204|148:208|104:264,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
100,360,85516,1,0,0:0:0
188,308,85842,2,0,B|221:245|178:163|109:147,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
288,48,87147,6,0,B|236:60|212:116|228:188|296:204,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
308,296,88125,1,0,0:0:0
336,200,88451,2,0,B|392:188|408:116|384:60|332:48,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
276,128,89429,2,0,B|232:128,2,25,4|4|12,2:0|2:0|2:0,0:0:0
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
Yessss,i Add The Video

ANd

I still need GD insane :/
HelloSCV
From queue :D

just some suggestions

SPOILER
Geneal
may be Offset -10?

Easy
i think change SV in Easy is not good choice :p

01:06:929 (3) - remove this slider and increase slder's lenth by 1/1 01:08:234 (4) - and delete this
01:17:038 (1) - move slider 01:16:712 (1) - here

Teru's Normal
00:12:473 (2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/1vyy8
00:23:886 (4) - remove slider and 00:24:049 (4) - add note here
00:36:277 (1) - add finish on start
00:38:886 (1) - ^
00:45:408 (4) - ^
00:48:016 (4) - ^
01:06:929 (2) - slider arrow is hidden imo try other location
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:28:125 (2,3) - you may know this
01:29:429 (4) - delete this and 01:29:267 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat here

Hard
00:37:571 (1) - add finish
00:41:158 (3) - delete clap on end and add clap on start
00:45:398 (1) - finish
00:48:006 (1) - ^
00:50:289 (3) - add finish on end
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you purposed to make pentagon how about make it perfectly?
01:14:103 (8,9,10) - delete these sliders and 01:14:103 (8) - add 1/1 slider , 01:14:592 (9) - add note move spinner 01:14:755 (1) - here
this rhythm is better imo
01:22:582 (2) - i think this slider's repeat arrow is hidden , try other location

Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

HelloSCV wrote:

From queue :D

just some suggestions

SPOILER
Geneal
may be Offset -10?

Easy
i think change SV in Easy is not good choice :p

01:06:929 (3) - remove this slider and increase slder's lenth by 1/1 01:08:234 (4) - and delete this
01:17:038 (1) - move slider 01:16:712 (1) - here

Teru's Normal
00:12:473 (2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/1vyy8
00:23:886 (4) - remove slider and 00:24:049 (4) - add note here
00:36:277 (1) - add finish on start
00:38:886 (1) - ^
00:45:408 (4) - ^
00:48:016 (4) - ^
01:06:929 (2) - slider arrow is hidden imo try other location
01:08:234 (2) - ^
01:28:125 (2,3) - you may know this
01:29:429 (4) - delete this and 01:29:267 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat here

Hard
00:37:571 (1) - add finish
00:41:158 (3) - delete clap on end and add clap on start
00:45:398 (1) - finish
00:48:006 (1) - ^
00:50:289 (3) - add finish on end
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - if you purposed to make pentagon how about make it perfectly?
01:14:103 (8,9,10) - delete these sliders and 01:14:103 (8) - add 1/1 slider , 01:14:592 (9) - add note move spinner 01:14:755 (1) - here
this rhythm is better imo
01:22:582 (2) - i think this slider's repeat arrow is hidden , try other location

Good luck! :)
thx,
and i don;t want to change Offset :(
Saten
Yo~

[General]
Why did you skip mapping the beginning? (Hard & Easy)

[Hard]
I would prefer that you more constant clap patterns instead. Parts like this sounds really odd imo 01:02:038 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
What I mean is that try sticking to this type mainly 00:34:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - etc :arrow:
00:03:669 - -20% vol
00:14:103 - it feels weird that you skip this important beat. Add a note here with a finish hitsound
00:24:538 (1) - why so many repeats?
00:29:918 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't really think you should put sliders on offbeats (red lines) when you have long chains. Move all of these 1/2 earlier and add a repeat on last slider. You don't have to do this, but it doesn't play bad imo.
00:33:995 - -10% vol
00:33:995 (1,2,3) - remove finish. It doesn't really fit imo
00:53:234 (1) - finish
00:55:842 - -10% vol
00:55:842 (1) - finish on start
01:01:060 (4) - finish
01:09:864 (1) - ^
01:16:712 (1) - claps doesn't fit here
01:19:321 - -10% vol
01:19:321 (1) - finish on start
01:21:929 (1) - ^
01:24:538 (1) - ^
01:27:147 (1) - ^

[Teru]
00:14:103 - 40% vol from here
00:24:538 (1) - Sliders like this are really not recommended on Normal difficulties because you throw the player of the flow
00:33:668 (1) - is the soft finish on purpose?
00:34:973 - back to 50%
00:43:451 (2,1) - You shouldn't do this either D:
00:45:408 (4) - finish on start
00:48:016 (4) - ^
00:54:538 (1) - you messed up the hitsounds on this. Start & Repeat should be soft finish. The end should have no finish.
00:59:755 (2,1) - I find this overlap weird
01:01:060 (1) - finish on start
01:06:277 (1) - ^
01:06:277 (1) - ^
01:06:277 (1,2,1,2) - Don't do this. it's really confusing
01:11:495 (3) - finish on start
01:28:451 (3,4) - odd finale imo

[Easy]
I don't really like that you use different spacing between combos that you use sometimes. It's not really an issue, just a comment.
00:03:669 - 40% volume
00:14:103 (1) - finish
00:34:973 - 50% volume
00:34:973 (1) - finish
00:36:277 (3) - finish on end
00:38:886 (5) - ^
00:44:103 (5) - ^
00:48:016 (1) - finish on start
00:50:625 (4) - ^
00:52:582 (6) - finish on end
00:54:538 (1) - finish
00:55:842 - lower to 50%
00:58:451 (3) - Finish
01:01:060 (6) - finish on start
01:06:277 (2) - ^
01:19:321 - 50%
01:19:321 (1) - finish
01:21:929 (1) - ^
01:24:538 (1) - ^
01:27:147 (1) - ^


Well, I hope this was somewhat helpful to you
Good luck!
Teru21

HelloSCV wrote:

From queue :D

just some suggestions

Teru's Normal
00:12:473 (2,3) - like this? http://puu.sh/1vyy8 nice idea but it'll ruin all the spacing ;-;
00:23:886 (4) - remove slider and 00:24:049 (4) - add note here i dont get it.. ;-; if i do that, it'll ruin the rhythm >_<
00:36:277 (1) - add finish on start added soft-finish XD nice idea XDD
00:38:886 (1) - ^ ^
00:45:408 (4) - ^ ^
00:48:016 (4) - ^ ^
01:06:929 (2) - slider arrow is hidden imo try other location just notice it in game-play, fix
01:08:234 (2) - ^ ^
01:28:125 (2,3) - you may know this lol XD if it at the end, i will change it XD
01:29:429 (4) - delete this and 01:29:267 (4) - add 1/2 slider with 1 repeat here nope >_< it doesn't fit the music

Good luck! :)
thanks XD HelloSCV

Saten wrote:

Yo~

[Teru]
00:14:103 - 40% vol from here okei XD
00:24:538 (1) - Sliders like this are really not recommended on Normal difficulties because you throw the player of the flow OAO;; lets see what the other mod thinks first kay?
00:33:668 (1) - is the soft finish on purpose? yes XD
00:34:973 - back to 50% okei XD
00:43:451 (2,1) - You shouldn't do this either D: OAO;; whats the matter with that.. ;-;
00:45:408 (4) - finish on start fix this on hello's mod
00:48:016 (4) - ^ ^
00:54:538 (1) - you messed up the hitsounds on this. Start & Repeat should be soft finish. The end should have no finish. Okayyyy X3
00:59:755 (2,1) - I find this overlap weird yes, it is overlap but it is a pattern XD
01:01:060 (1) - finish on start fix :D
01:06:277 (1) - ^ ^
01:06:277 (1) - ^ er... maybe u mean 01:11:495 - ? fix XD
01:06:277 (1,2,1,2) - Don't do this. it's really confusing change into something from hello's mod
01:11:495 (3) - finish on start OAO;; ^
01:28:451 (3,4) - odd finale imo ;-;

Well, I hope this was somewhat helpful to you
Good luck!
thats helpful XD thanks Saten

http://puu.sh/1xGju
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
Updated


I Still need GD For Insane
Naryuga
From Taiko Modding Team ~ ♪. Sorry for the big delay.
(To JT123: It seems you haven't update this map for over 10 days. If you going to get this graveyarded don't give me kds or whatever.)

[General]
  1. According to the Ranking Criteria, you should have at least 2 Taiko diffs if you are going to make the mapset with Taiko diffs. This rule applies from August 2012 and you submitted this on October for the first time.

    osu!wiki wrote:

    A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties
  2. Oh well... where the video come from? This video is defenitely not Air Gear's theme but a parody. It's much better to find a correct video for this song.
[mint's Taiko]
  1. 00:15:245 - add k here? It can follow both the vocal and tick-sound
  2. 00:24:538 (1,1,1) - personally I want to change them to a slider.
  3. 00:41:168 (1,1,1) - making them k d d d k sounds more suitable.
Well, since I don't think it's good to get 2 kudos for such a short mod, I'll mod the standard maps. I'm in a good mood at this moment.

[Easy]
  1. Some notes doesn't follow the distance snap, like 00:19:321 (1,2,3) - and 00:29:755 (1,2) - . Beginners may confused and even the placement looks bad because of them, so it's much better to use a sustained spacing like x1.0.
  2. 00:04:973 (3,4) - put the (3) x:324, as 00:03:669 (1) - 's end is just the y-axis. If you accept this, don't forget to adjust spacing with 00:06:277 (4) - .
  3. 00:03:669 (1) - , 00:06:277 (4) - and 00:08:886 (7) - Put New Combo because the combo is too long here.
  4. 00:21:929 (1) - I don't think the whistle fits this part... remove?
  5. 00:19:321 (1) - missing a clap. If you want to add a clap on 00:19:973 - , click the slider once and then click the end on the timeline (like this ) and click the "clap" on the right of the screen or just push R key to put a clap.
  6. 00:28:451 (4) - from this, you lack claps. Let's add ones!
  7. 00:42:147 (3) - clap on the head.


[Teru's]
  1. 00:28:451 (1) - remove the New Combo, I believe it's too short.
  2. 00:31:060 (1) - same ^
  3. 00:33:669 (1) - ^
  4. 01:04:647 (1) - ^
  5. 01:07:582 (1) - ^
  6. 01:13:777 (3) - make it reverse?
    A nice diff. I like this~
[Hard]
  1. Same to Easy, some notes are in weird spacing. You have to make them so the placement will be clearer~
  2. 00:27:147 (5) - add New combo instead of 00:27:962 (1) - .
  3. 00:59:429 - You can add a note here.
  4. 01:22:582 (2) - Do not overlap on 01:21:440 (9) - , since the reverse arrow is hidden by the (9) and that can be unrankable.
Good luck on your mapping. You can improve a lot ;)
Off topic: Oh, you started osu! on Oct. 5th 2010 and so am I. What's the rare opportunity. Nice to meet you.
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Naryuga wrote:

From Taiko Modding Team ~ ♪. Sorry for the big delay.
(To JT123: It seems you haven't update this map for over 10 days. If you going to get this graveyarded don't give me kds or whatever.)

[General]
  1. According to the Ranking Criteria, you should have at least 2 Taiko diffs if you are going to make the mapset with Taiko diffs. This rule applies from August 2012 and you submitted this on October for the first time.

    osu!wiki wrote:

    A mapset cannot have a single Taiko difficulty if you decide to include Taiko in your map, make sure you have at least 2 Taiko mode difficulties
  2. Oh well... where the video come from? This video is defenitely not Air Gear's theme but a parody. It's much better to find a correct video for this song.
[mint's Taiko]
  1. 00:15:245 - add k here? It can follow both the vocal and tick-sound
  2. 00:24:538 (1,1,1) - personally I want to change them to a slider.
  3. 00:41:168 (1,1,1) - making them k d d d k sounds more suitable.
Well, since I don't think it's good to get 2 kudos for such a short mod, I'll mod the standard maps. I'm in a good mood at this moment.

[Easy]
  1. Some notes doesn't follow the distance snap, like 00:19:321 (1,2,3) - and 00:29:755 (1,2) - . Beginners may confused and even the placement looks bad because of them, so it's much better to use a sustained spacing like x1.0.
  2. 00:04:973 (3,4) - put the (3) x:324, as 00:03:669 (1) - 's end is just the y-axis. If you accept this, don't forget to adjust spacing with 00:06:277 (4) - .
  3. 00:03:669 (1) - , 00:06:277 (4) - and 00:08:886 (7) - Put New Combo because the combo is too long here.
  4. 00:21:929 (1) - I don't think the whistle fits this part... remove?
  5. 00:19:321 (1) - missing a clap. If you want to add a clap on 00:19:973 - , click the slider once and then click the end on the timeline (like this ) and click the "clap" on the right of the screen or just push R key to put a clap.
  6. 00:28:451 (4) - from this, you lack claps. Let's add ones!
  7. 00:42:147 (3) - clap on the head.


[Teru's]
  1. 00:28:451 (1) - remove the New Combo, I believe it's too short.
  2. 00:31:060 (1) - same ^
  3. 00:33:669 (1) - ^
  4. 01:04:647 (1) - ^
  5. 01:07:582 (1) - ^
  6. 01:13:777 (3) - make it reverse?
    A nice diff. I like this~
[Hard]
  1. Same to Easy, some notes are in weird spacing. You have to make them so the placement will be clearer~
  2. 00:27:147 (5) - add New combo instead of 00:27:962 (1) - .
  3. 00:59:429 - You can add a note here.
  4. 01:22:582 (2) - Do not overlap on 01:21:440 (9) - , since the reverse arrow is hidden by the (9) and that can be unrankable.
Good luck on your mapping. You can improve a lot ;)
Off topic: Oh, you started osu! on Oct. 5th 2010 and so am I. What's the rare opportunity. Nice to meet you.

Thx for mod LOL
Teru21

Naryuga wrote:

From Taiko Modding Team ~ ♪. Sorry for the big delay.
(To JT123: It seems you haven't update this map for over 10 days. If you going to get this graveyarded don't give me kds or whatever.)

[Teru's]
  1. 00:28:451 (1) - remove the New Combo, I believe it's too short. yep X3 done
  2. 00:31:060 (1) - same ^ err.. its pattern X3 idk if i should change or not, but imo, its good already
  3. 00:33:669 (1) - ^ again.. its a pattern
  4. 01:04:647 (1) - ^ okayy
  5. 01:07:582 (1) - ^ pattern ;A;
  6. 01:13:777 (3) - make it reverse? okayy XD
    A nice diff. I like this~ thank youu X3 i like this one too X9
Thanks :) for mod

http://puu.sh/1EyUq
Teru21
oh yeah i just saw the video.. they got KHR in it and why you still pick it.. ;A; btw, i believe this is the opening =w=;; what a strange opening btw =w=;;
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=klFVxGAacz0

also in the SB.. wtf is this ;A;
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
M,0,9920,,320,240

on .osb file, delete it please X3

no kds ofc X3
Loooctav
I tell you that I had made a very long mod
And closed the page! : (
TMAstraf
Normal:
01:14:429 Here you can make a circle, its a little bit confusing in tact...

Hard:
00:58:288 You can make the slider on the same point from circle

From me thats all =)
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

ThoomyyxD wrote:

I tell you that I had made a very long mod
And closed the page! : (
oh, it's okey

TMAstraf wrote:

Normal:
01:14:429 Here you can make a circle, its a little bit confusing in tact...

Hard:
00:58:288 You can make the slider on the same point from circle

From me thats all =)
i can handel this
thx
Poggo
Hi from my mod Q`


Hard

00:04:647(2,6) - will be looks better if you make this notes symetry http://puu.sh/1Jn5C
00:11:495 - Hm not see reason make break time here~ Music not chage rhythm and not quiet in this place, better mapped this part
00:17:690 - add clap
00:18:342 - ^
00:18:995 - ^
00:19:321 - remove clap e.t.c with claps
00:38:071(3,4) - fix distance between this notes
01:04:321(3,1) - fix terrible stack

You should fix some nc~ Better put nc on every white tick or better follow for music (put nc on each new string the song)~
Plz fix claps on 1 half songs~ Now it sounds terrible
Some streams looks a little ugly~ Example: 00:29:918 - this pattern you can make more beautiful http://puu.sh/1JngQ I mean make stream lines more roundish~

Normal

AR -1

00:11:495(1,2,3) - better fix this overlap http://puu.sh/1Jnjc It's more readable
00:20:625(3) - This slider not sound here, http://puu.sh/1Jnl2 this rhythm sounds better here
00:50:299(2,1) - better make planket here http://puu.sh/1JnmX
01:10:190(1) - stack this slider 2 http://puu.sh/1JnnY

Easy

00:11:495 - the same with break time
00:16:712(1,3) - fix distance between this notes http://puu.sh/1JnqI x184, y312
00:23:886(3,5) - fix this overlap
00:48:016 - remove Nc and add Nc on note 2
00:54:538 - this spin very short for easy diff~ better replace on long slider it will be more playable for begginers
01:29:592 - better end slider here

Hm I suggest put NC on 2 big white ticks bcz now combo very long for easy~

Good luck~
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
Updated

waiting for Teru
Teru21
No change in my diff.. sorry ;A;
for TMAstraf 's mod, Because its kind of pattern owo;; but i'll change if other modder point out that thing X3
for Katty Pie 's mod, sorry but the link isn't working.. so I don't know what you mean by this and that.. ;A;
Arnold0
Not a mod but when playing your Hard diff I find that :
00:30:408 (3) - Missing clap at end of the slider.
I'm still doing the insane GD, I think I am able to do it :3
(I've mapped only 30 sec now, IDK if i'll have the time to finish it tooday, I'm slowly mapping X: )
Arnold0
Insane GD done :3
EDIT
Hope you'll like it :)
EDIT : New link because in my 1st upload the video was not working.
http://puu.sh/1MmPt
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Arnold0 wrote:

Insane GD done :3
EDIT
Hope you'll like it :)
EDIT : New link because in my 1st upload the video was not working.
http://puu.sh/1MmPt
DAfuq,
My hand sliped and klik "give kudosu" D:

I Like your GD :D
Lovelyattack
Queue Soul... Commencing Operation

[Easy]

00:20:625 (1) - remove combo and add combo in 00:21:929
00:54:212 (1) - spinner start on 00:54:538 and end in the first kiai
01:02:364 (1) - remove combo

[Teru]

Too perfect But
00:23:886 (4) - hear it!! and you find its out of beat
01:04:647 (1) - remove combo
01:29:429 (4) - make it only 1/2 on snap divisor... not 1/4

[Hard]
00:16:712 (1) - remove combo
00:20:299 (1) - ^
00:58:125 (7) - new combo

[mintong]
just post my record
im play on laggy on that time .... its good patern soo no mod ^^

[Arnold0]
AR + 1 ^^
HP - 2

thats it ..... Now is the time to retreat.... *SE_Soul Out and stole kudosu XD*
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

SE_Soul wrote:

Queue Soul... Commencing Operation

[Easy]

00:20:625 (1) - remove combo and add combo in 00:21:929
00:54:212 (1) - spinner start on 00:54:538 and end in the first kiai
01:02:364 (1) - remove combo

[Teru]

Too perfect But
00:23:886 (4) - hear it!! and you find its out of beat
01:04:647 (1) - remove combo
01:29:429 (4) - make it only 1/2 on snap divisor... not 1/4

[Hard]
00:16:712 (1) - remove combo
00:20:299 (1) - ^
00:58:125 (7) - new combo

[mintong]
just post my record
im play on laggy on that time .... its good patern soo no mod ^^

[Arnold0]
AR + 1 ^^
HP - 2

thats it ..... Now is the time to retreat.... *SE_Soul Out and stole kudosu XD*
uhmm...
(indonesian)
gimana ya njelasin na ,
Thx for mod
Teru21
thanks but no change in my diff.. XD
00:23:886 (4) - hear it!! and you find its out of beat <------ nope.. its not off beat ;A;
01:04:647 (1) - remove combo <----- I'm following the vocal
01:29:429 (4) - make it only 1/2 on snap divisor... not 1/4 <-------- it does fit the song, also this is a normal.. so don't take it as easy ;A;

thanks X3
Arnold0

SE_Soul wrote:

Queue Soul... Commencing Operation

[Arnold0]
AR + 1 ^^ Okey
HP - 2 -1

thats it ..... Now is the time to retreat.... *SE_Soul Out and stole kudosu XD*
Thanks
Link : http://puu.sh/1MrMe
Arnold0
There is a little problem on normal :
01:06:277 (1,2) - Reverse arrow of 2 is partially hidden by 1 hitburst

01:07:582 (1,2) - Reverse arrow of 2 is partially hidden by 1 hitburst

01:29:429 (4) - Aslo I think thats confusing and don't follow the music nicely, you should make it end at 01:29:592 - but without reverse arrow, it sound better and it's less confusing
Teru21
^ mehhh ;A; okayy http://puu.sh/1NZEF

thankss ;A;
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Teru21 wrote:

As requested xD Done xD

http://puu.sh/1jAaV

don't forget to put in my name on tags in all diff xD

Ganbatte neh..? xD
UPDATED ALL
qoot8123
via M4M request~
[General]
none~
[Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:39:864 - add k
  2. 00:40:027 - ^
  3. 00:49:973 - ^ follow00:46:712 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1) -
  4. 01:00:571 - add k
  5. 01:05:788 - add d
[Kurosanyan's Taiko Inner Oni]
  1. 00:38:641 - remove
  2. 00:44:429 - k
  3. 00:44:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddkkd
  4. 00:52:663 (4,5) - remove
[mint's Taiko]
  1. i think hitsound 80% is better
  2. 00:09:375 (1,2,3,1,1) - ddkkd
  3. 00:10:679 (1,1,1,1,1) - ddkdd
  4. 00:11:984 (1,2,3,1,1) - same as 00:09:375 (1,2,1,2,1) -
  5. 00:13:288 (1,1,1,1,1) - same as 00:10:679 (1,1,1,1,1) -
  6. 01:25:027 (1,2,3,1,1) - same as 00:09:375 (1,2,3,1,1) -
  7. 01:26:331 (1,1,1,1,1) - same as 00:10:679 (1,1,1,1,1) -
  8. 01:27:636 (1,2,3,1,1) - same
  9. 01:28:940 (1,1,1,1,1) - same

Good Luck~ ;)
Kurosanyan

qoot8123 wrote:

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:39:864 - add k Nope, I want to leave a break here.
  2. 00:40:027 - ^ ^
  3. 00:49:973 - ^ follow00:46:712 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1) - You mean add a d right?
  4. 01:00:571 - add k Nope, I'm leaving a break
  5. 01:05:788 - add d ^
[Kurosanyan's Taiko Inner Oni]
  1. 00:38:641 - remove Ok
  2. 00:44:429 - k Nope, not fiting imo
  3. 00:44:918 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddkkd I prefer it this way
  4. 00:52:663 (4,5) - remove Nope
athiota33
Hello JT123,
Random mod /o/~ BACK-ON~<3!

[General]

SPOILER
How about adding "opening" to the tag?

[Easy]

SPOILER
It's easy diff, I suggest you to not playing timing in this diff. 'cause it's hard to play for some beginer player. But it's up to you.
00:11:495 (1) - Add clap in the end of sliderto make it consistent with the other?
00:12:799 (3) - ^
00:20:625 (1) - Why NC here? I suggest to remove NC and add NC at 00:21:929
00:56:495 (1) - Add clap in the begining to make it consistent
01:01:060 (1) - Add clap in the end of slider
01:03:016 (3) - Add clap
01:03:668 (4) - ^ in the end of slider
01:04:973 (1) - NC is not needed here. Remove it. Oh, and add clap in the end of slider
01:06:277 (1) - Add finish in the begining of slider. It feels empty without a hitsound imo ><
01:06:929 (2) - Add clap in the begining of slider. Same reason as above
01:07:582 (3) - ^
01:08:234 (4) - ^
01:09:538 (6) - ^
01:18:016 - Add slider until 01:18:995 ? or copy-pas rhythm from 01:16:712 (1)
01:19:973 (2) - How about adding a clap here?
01:22:582 (2) - ^
01:25:190 (2) - ^
01:21:929 (1) - Add finish here to make consistent
Nice flow, but you still need improvement on hitsound ><

[Teru's Normal]

SPOILER
00:11:495 (1) - It'll be nice if you don't overlap (1)'s body with 00:10:190 (3)
00:11:495 (1,2,3) - Suggestion : http://puu.sh/1VrGV
01:27:147 (1) - Same as 0:11:495 (1)
Nice!

[Hard]

SPOILER
00:16:060 (1) - Why NC?
00:17:690 (2) - Add clap
00:19:321 (2) - Remove clap and add clap at 00:18:995
00:19:647 (1) - Remove clap in the end of slider
00:20:299 (1) - Add clap
00:20:951 (5) - ^
00:23:886 (4) - ^ in the end of slider
00:59:429 - Add circle. Feels really empty imo
01:02:038 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - Claps really random here. Try to listen the song and add a clap in the right place.
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pentagon really weird imo. Suggestion : http://puu.sh/1VrVK
463,130,68560,1,0,0:0:0
491,192,68723,1,0,0:0:0
439,239,68886,1,0,0:0:0
378,205,69049,1,0,0:0:0
392,136,69212,1,0,0:0:0
392,136,69538,1,0,0:0:0
01:20:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is hard diff. It's overmapped imo. Change it to something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/592305
01:23:071 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:679 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:28:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[Arn0ld's Insane]

SPOILER
SV is too slow imo and there's only a little jump >< It's just like playing hard with fast AR.
00:45:408 (5) - You can follow the drums instead of vocal. It'll be more epic imo
00:48:016 (5) - ^
01:00:408 (6) - x: 256 y: 224
01:29:103 (6,7) - This part is really fit to make a jump imo ><
It'll be more good if you add more jumps and increase the SV imo. Oh yeah, and there's a part that the clap is not consistent. Try to listen the song again and add a clap in the right place.

That's it
Good luck :D
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

athiota33 wrote:

Hello JT123,
Random mod /o/~ BACK-ON~<3!

[General]

SPOILER
How about adding "opening" to the tag?

[Easy]

SPOILER
It's easy diff, I suggest you to not playing timing in this diff. 'cause it's hard to play for some beginer player. But it's up to you.
00:11:495 (1) - Add clap in the end of sliderto make it consistent with the other? okay
00:12:799 (3) - ^ okay
00:20:625 (1) - Why NC here? I suggest to remove NC and add NC at 00:21:929 I follow vocal :<
00:56:495 (1) - Add clap in the begining to make it consistent hm... yes
01:01:060 (1) - Add clap in the end of slider okay
01:03:016 (3) - Add clap Okey
01:03:668 (4) - ^ in the end of slider okey
01:04:973 (1) - NC is not needed here. Remove it. Oh, and add clap in the end of slider Nc is need here LUL :D
01:06:277 (1) - Add finish in the begining of slider. It feels empty without a hitsound imo ><
01:06:929 (2) - Add clap in the begining of slider. Same reason as above
01:07:582 (3) - ^
01:08:234 (4) - ^
01:09:538 (6) - ^Okay
01:18:016 - Add slider until 01:18:995 ? or copy-pas rhythm from 01:16:712 (1)nah,aq da pertimbangkan kalo ada slider di situ bakal ngesusahin newbie ,jadi aq kosongin XD Indoan aja
01:19:973 (2) - How about adding a clap here? yes
01:22:582 (2) - ^yes
01:25:190 (2) - ^yay
01:21:929 (1) - Add finish here to make consistentyow
Nice flow, but you still need improvement on hitsound ><
Thaank yooo


[Hard]

SPOILER
00:16:060 (1) - Why NC? I dunno
00:17:690 (2) - Add clap okey
00:19:321 (2) - Remove clap and add clap at 00:18:995 meeeh no
00:19:647 (1) - Remove clap in the end of slider ok
00:20:299 (1) - Add clap ookey
00:20:951 (5) - ^okey
00:23:886 (4) - ^ in the end of sliderokey
00:59:429 - Add circle. Feels really empty imo added
01:02:038 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1) - Claps really random here. Try to listen the song and add a clap in the right place.offcourse
01:08:560 (2,3,4,5,6) - The pentagon really weird imo. Suggestion : http://puu.sh/1VrVK ....
463,130,68560,1,0,0:0:0
491,192,68723,1,0,0:0:0
439,239,68886,1,0,0:0:0
378,205,69049,1,0,0:0:0
392,136,69212,1,0,0:0:0
392,136,69538,1,0,0:0:0
01:20:462 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This is hard diff. It's overmapped imo. Change it to something like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/592305i don't think so
01:23:071 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:25:679 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
01:28:288 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^


That's it
Good luck :D
LUL,THX 4 MOD
kalo mod bahasa indo aja XD
sama2 orang indo naa LOL
Teru21
fix all at my diff except 00:11:495 (1,2,3) one :D

thanks athiota XD

http://puu.sh/1VKWX
athiota33

JT123 wrote:

kalo mod bahasa indo aja XD
sama2 orang indo naa LOL

ok untuk kedepannya :D~ LOL
Btw star for you~
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

athiota33 wrote:

JT123 wrote:

kalo mod bahasa indo aja XD
sama2 orang indo naa LOL

ok untuk kedepannya :D~ LOL
Btw star for you~
Thaank youuuuu :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Arnold0

athiota33 wrote:

Hello JT123,
Random mod /o/~ BACK-ON~<3!

[Arn0ld's Insane]

SV is too slow imo and there's only a little jump >< It's just like playing hard with fast AR. Idk my SV is already 0.4 more than hard so I think it's okey, and I don't realy know how to map fine without Distance Snap so no jumps :(
00:45:408 (5) - You can follow the drums instead of vocal. It'll be more epic imo Okey
00:48:016 (5) - ^ ^
01:00:408 (6) - x: 256 y: 224 Looks better :)
01:29:103 (6,7) - This part is really fit to make a jump imo >< Hum, okey I tryed to do one o:
It'll be more good if you add more jumps and increase the SV imo. Oh yeah, and there's a part that the clap is not consistent. Try to listen the song again and add a clap in the right place.I've found one I guess, maybe it still remains one other idk?

That's it
Good luck :D
http://puu.sh/1Wvf1
Teara
[General]
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks.

Easy: 1
Teru's Normal: 0
Hard: 1
Arnold0's Insane: 1
Kurosanyan's Taiko Inner Oni: 0
Kurosanyan's Taiko Muzukashii: 0
mint's Taiko: 1

Tags

Teru's Normal are missing the following Tags.
"teru21 mintong89 Arnold0 Kurosanyan"

Combo Colours

Please make combo colors the same on Easy/Normal/Hard/Insane (for consistency sake) they all use the same background.

[Hard]

Love the hitsounds on the end good job.

01:26:168 (6,7) - not snapped properly ((move 7 closer to 6 then fix the rest)), please fix it, looks ugly ;)

[Kurosanyan's Taiko]

Check AImod for unsapped objects.

[Kurosanyan's Taiko Inner Oni]

Check AImod for unsapped objects.

[Arnold0's Insane]

OD +1

In my honest opinion, the whistle usage in the start to mid of the song doesn't fit, please revisit your hitsounds.

Rest looks good. (plays more like a hard then Insane thou)
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
Updated
V E
hi again...

easy

ritme clap konsisten di garis putih k2 aja ya... remove clap di bagian downbeat/ garis putih yg paling panjang
00:19:321 (1) - remove clap head
00:21:929 (3) - ^
00:28:451 (4) - ^
00:38:886 (1,2) - swap NC
00:41:495 (1,2) - ^
00:48:016 - NC
00:49:321 - remove NC
00:50:625 - NC
01:04:973 - remove NC
01:12:799 - swap NC
01:18:016 - isi slider dengan panjang yg sama kyk (1)

teru normal

overall oke o.ob
00:24:049 - mending delet slider ganti not aja disini, yg udah ada gk begitu salah sih, tapi mendingan ini, dari pada vocal, 1/2 slider trus vocal lg, agak nanggung sih

hard


00:16:060 - remove NC, gk jelas cuma 2 combo doang
00:17:527 - remove NC
00:19:158 - pindahin (2) kesini, ngikutin vocal
00:19:647 - remove NC
00:20:136 - pindahin (1) kesini, ngikutin vocal.. trus remove NC, nanti yg (2) baru new combo
00:21:440 - add note?
00:21:603 - slidernya pendekin setengah
00:58:451 (9) - ganti kepalanya finnish aja jgn clap, dan juga NC
00:59:755 - finish on head, and remove NC
01:01:060 - remove finnish
01:03:342 - swap NC (6,1)
01:13:451 - NC (6)

Arnold0's

trully it's not really hard, cos locking DS... but insane goes with AR9 hehe

00:27:147 - remove NC
00:28:288 - add NC
00:34:973 - NC
00:36:277 - rem NC
00:37:582 - NC
00:38:886 - rem NC
00:40:190 - NC
00:41:168 - rem NC
00:42:799 - NC
00:44:103 - rem NC
00:45:408 - NC
00:48:016 - NC
00:49:321 - NC
00:49:973 - rem NC
00:50:625 - NC
01:01:060 - swap NC (9,1)
01:11:168 - ^

that's all
thankssssss
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

selova wrote:

hi again... Hello Selooooo XD

easy

ritme clap konsisten di garis putih k2 aja ya... remove clap di bagian downbeat/ garis putih yg paling panjang okay =w=\
00:19:321 (1) - remove clap head done
00:21:929 (3) - ^done
00:28:451 (4) - ^done
00:38:886 (1,2) - swap NC done
00:41:495 (1,2) - ^ ga pass deh rasa na :/
00:48:016 - NC ^
00:49:321 - remove NC^
00:50:625 - NC ^
01:04:973 - remove NC ^
01:12:799 - swap NC ^
01:18:016 - isi slider dengan panjang yg sama kyk (1) To nenot nenot na ga pas XD


hard[/b]

00:16:060 - remove NC, gk jelas cuma 2 combo doang ah iya ya XD
00:17:527 - remove NC done
00:19:158 - pindahin (2) kesini, ngikutin vocal :(/
00:19:647 - remove NC uda pas gini
00:20:136 - pindahin (1) kesini, ngikutin vocal.. trus remove NC, nanti yg (2) baru new combo X
00:21:440 - add note? okay
00:21:603 - slidernya pendekin setengah ya
00:58:451 (9) - ganti kepalanya finnish aja jgn clap, dan juga NC oke
00:59:755 - finish on head, and remove NC bisa bisa
01:01:060 - remove finnish aq rasa pas ada deh
01:03:342 - swap NC (6,1) bole juga
01:13:451 - NC (6) ho-oh



thankssssss
I'm who must say thankss, not you ;)
Teru21

selova wrote:

hi again...

teru normal

overall oke o.ob
00:24:049 - mending delet slider ganti not aja disini, yg udah ada gk begitu salah sih, tapi mendingan ini, dari pada vocal, 1/2 slider trus vocal lg, agak nanggung sih ngga eh.. kalo ku ganti, menghancurkan semuanya... but yeah.. lumayan sih o3o

that's all
thankssssss
Arnold0

Kaneko wrote:

[Arnold0's Insane]

OD +1 Okey

In my honest opinion, the whistle usage in the start to mid of the song doesn't fit, please revisit your hitsounds. I don't know what is not fitting I used wistle for the vocals

Rest looks good. (plays more like a hard then Insane thou)

selova wrote:

hi again...

Arnold0's[/b]
trully it's not really hard, cos locking DS... but insane goes with AR9 hehe

00:27:147 - remove NC Okey
00:28:288 - add NC ^
00:34:973 - NC ^
00:36:277 - rem NC ^
00:37:582 - NC ^
00:38:886 - rem NC ^
00:40:190 - NC ^
00:41:168 - rem NC ^
00:42:799 - NC ^
00:44:103 - rem NC ^
00:45:408 - NC ^
00:48:016 - NC ^
00:49:321 - NC ^
00:49:973 - rem NC ^
00:50:625 - NC ^
01:01:060 - swap NC (9,1) Not sure about what you want, I think fixed :D
01:11:168 - ^^

that's all
thankssssss
Thanks for mods :)
Link : http://puu.sh/2eADC
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl
okay ,
updated all
Hellzero
Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[General]
00:01:060 - Add a spinner from here until 00:03:016.
[Easy]
00:03:669 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
These NC more fit music.
00:20:625 (1) - Remove NC.
00:21:929 (3) - Add NC.
00:48:016 (4) - Add NC.
00:49:321 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:625 (3) - Add NC.
01:12:147 (1) - Remove NC.
01:12:799 (2) - Add NC.
01:15:408 (5) - Add NC.
01:16:712 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:712 (1) - Actually in easy diffs not recommend use SV multiplier because new players hard suddenly change your speed play. So i think will be better make just 1.0x But if you don't change SV then don't remove NC because it need for highlight change speed

[Normal]
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:04:647 (1) - Remove NC.
01:04:973 (2) - Add NC.
01:21:929 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:24:538 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
01:27:147 (1) - Add a finish on the start.

[Hard]
00:03:669 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start.
00:16:060 (1) - Remove NC.
00:18:669 (1) - Remove NC.
00:19:321 (2) - Add NC.
00:19:647 (1) - Remove NC.
00:20:299 (1) - Remove NC.
These NC more fit music. (just my opinion)

[Arnold0's Insane]
~Hit-sounds mod on PM~

Not bad but still need some work >~< Good luck! :3 Hope you rank it.
Arnold0
New update : http://puu.sh/2kLPB

Because :


Kudo him plz :)
Topic Starter
Bernkaztl

Hellzero wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[General] Hiii hellzero
00:01:060 - Add a spinner from here until 00:03:016.
[Easy]
00:03:669 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay,it make the hitsound more good XD
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
These NC more fit music. Nah,there is ....I don't accept the new combo or else ,cuz i make the combo following the vocal
00:20:625 (1) - Remove NC.
00:21:929 (3) - Add NC.
00:48:016 (4) - Add NC.
00:49:321 (1) - Remove NC.
00:50:625 (3) - Add NC.
01:12:147 (1) - Remove NC.
01:12:799 (2) - Add NC.
01:15:408 (5) - Add NC.
01:16:712 (1) - Remove NC.
01:16:712 (1) - Actually in easy diffs not recommend use SV multiplier because new players hard suddenly change your speed play. So i think will be better make just 1.0x But if you don't change SV then don't remove NC because it need for highlight change speed aaaa,you're right


[Hard]
00:03:669 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start. Okay
00:16:060 (1) - Remove NC. Okay
00:18:669 (1) - Remove NC.
00:19:321 (2) - Add NC.
00:19:647 (1) - Remove NC.
00:20:299 (1) - Remove NC.
These NC more fit music. (just my opinion)




Not bad but still need some work >~< Good luck! :3 Hope you rank it.

Okay there's good mod :D
Teru21

Hellzero wrote:

Hi from ♥Moe Moe Russian Modding Room♥
[General]
00:01:060 - Add a spinner from here until 00:03:016. aha.. good, but the offset started on 00:03:669 - , so I won't add any, otherwise JT change the offset :D

[Normal]
00:06:277 (1) - Add a finish on the start. kay :D
00:08:886 (1) - Add a finish on the start. ^
00:11:495 (1) - Add a finish on the start. ^
01:04:647 (1) - Remove NC. nope, I follow vocal XD
01:04:973 (2) - Add NC. ^
01:21:929 (1) - Add a finish on the start. kay XD
01:24:538 (1) - Add a finish on the start. ^
01:27:147 (1) - Add a finish on the start. ^

Not bad but still need some work >~< Good luck! :3 Hope you rank it.
thanks for mod XD

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Back-On - Chain (Tv Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55821
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Chain (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Chain (TV Size)
Artist:BACK-ON
ArtistUnicode:BACK-ON
Creator:JT123
Version:Teru's Normal
Source:Air Gear
Tags:teru21 mintong89 Arnold0 Kurosanyan
BeatmapID:186977
BeatmapSetID:60713

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
Video,0,"VID.avi"
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
3669,326.086956521739,4,1,0,50,1,0
14103,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
34973,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
55842,-100,4,1,0,50,0,1
76712,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
89429,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 224,188,175
Combo2 : 148,237,174
Combo3 : 145,145,255
Combo4 : 51,255,255

[HitObjects]
84,88,3669,2,0,B|124:96|164:88|164:88|144:152|188:204,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,4647,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,200,4973,2,0,B|369:151|349:87|349:87|389:95|429:87,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,6277,6,0,B|380:324|380:324|292:336|292:336|228:372,1,200,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,336,7255,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,264,7582,2,0,B|168:237|168:237|80:225|80:225|36:189,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,128,8886,6,0,B|272:184|364:180|408:124,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,28,9864,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,80,10190,2,0,B|291:143|334:225|403:241,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,364,11495,6,0,B|276:352|300:296|284:224|216:208,1,200,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,116,12473,1,2,0:0:0:0:
176,212,12799,2,0,B|120:224|104:296|128:352|180:364,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,276,14103,6,0,B|436:216|436:216|448:92,1,200,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,40,15082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,136,15408,2,0,B|268:208,2,100,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,64,16386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
180,40,16712,6,0,B|112:40|56:88|48:172,1,200
96,252,17690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,288,18016,2,0,B|265:278|311:220|315:155,1,200
404,108,18995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,196,19321,6,0,B|452:300,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,340,19973,2,0,B|364:240,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,152,20625,2,0,B|12:152,1,300,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,252,21929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,336,22255,5,8,0:0:0:0:
184,368,22582,2,0,B|240:368,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,268,23234,2,0,B|200:188,2,75
188,312,23886,2,0,B|288:296,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,280,24538,6,0,B|392:276|392:276|392:284|392:284|400:276|400:276|400:284|400:284|408:276|408:276|408:284|408:284|416:276|416:276|416:284|416:284|424:276|424:276|424:284|424:284|432:276|432:276|432:284|432:284|440:276|440:276|440:284|440:284|448:276|448:276|448:284|448:284|456:276|456:276|456:284|456:284|464:276|464:276|464:284|464:284|488:276,1,200
504,184,25516,1,8,0:0:0:0:
452,100,25842,2,0,B|392:100|392:100|376:124|344:124,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,36,26495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,108,26821,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,192,27147,6,0,B|280:312,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,340,27799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,340,28125,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,340,28451,6,0,B|132:352|96:312|96:312|136:272|128:224,1,200
88,140,29429,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,88,29755,6,0,B|196:36,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,164,30408,2,0,B|296:152,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,184,31060,6,0,B|80:196,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,260,31712,2,0,B|180:312,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,164,32364,6,0,B|292:184|304:248|304:248|312:216|328:212,2,150
276,72,33669,6,0,B|332:92|384:68,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,168,34321,2,0,B|404:148|456:172,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,256,34973,2,0,B|400:360,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,364,36277,6,0,B|176:344|124:368,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,268,36929,2,0,B|104:288|52:264,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,180,37582,2,0,B|108:76,2,100,4|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,96,38886,6,0,B|292:196,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,156,39538,2,0,B|384:56,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,96,40190,2,0,B|476:160|476:160|476:200|448:256|380:248,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,204,41495,2,0,B|196:141|196:141|196:101|232:48|292:56,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,252,42799,6,0,B|292:148,1,100,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,100,43451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,100,44103,6,0,B|400:164|400:164|400:212,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,44755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,360,45082,1,8,0:0:0:0:
216,360,45408,2,0,B|112:360,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,264,46060,2,0,B|84:264,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,164,46712,6,0,B|188:164|188:164|233:181,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,152,47364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,248,47690,1,8,0:0:0:0:
316,152,48016,2,0,B|353:54,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,115,48668,2,0,B|452:62,2,50,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,212,49321,6,0,B|392:224|360:180,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,180,49973,2,0,B|234:221|174:209,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,132,50625,6,0,B|252:72|312:48|376:76|380:148,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,276,51929,2,0,B|248:336|308:360|372:332|376:260,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,204,53234,2,0,B|492:204,1,300,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,112,54538,6,0,B|296:112,2,150,4|4|0,0:0|2:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55842,12,4,58451,0:0:0:0:
112,104,59103,6,0,B|68:148|88:220,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,176,59755,2,0,B|224:132|212:68|184:36,2,150
148,272,61060,6,0,B|192:192|192:192|204:168|244:120|296:76|368:80,1,300,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,132,62364,2,0,B|464:168|480:184|480:184|472:204|480:224,2,100,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,296,63668,5,0,0:0:0:0:
332,296,63995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,252,64321,1,8,0:0:0:0:
240,252,64647,5,0,0:0:0:0:
324,196,64973,2,0,B|396:60,2,150
264,116,66277,6,0,B|216:204,1,100,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,268,66929,1,0,0:0:0:0:
228,308,67255,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,384,67582,6,0,B|344:296,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,204,68234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,104,68560,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,92,68886,6,0,B|240:52|240:52|188:16,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,120,69538,2,0,B|201:162|201:162|241:190,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,160,70190,6,0,B|376:188|420:172|420:172|452:220|448:280,1,200,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,276,71168,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,376,71495,2,0,B|308:348|264:364|264:364|232:316|235:258,1,200,4|0,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,88,72799,6,0,B|240:88,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,104,73451,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,184,73777,2,0,B|160:184,1,100,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,184,74755,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75408,12,4,76712,2:0:0:0:
428,300,78016,5,0,0:0:0:0:
428,100,78668,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,300,79321,6,0,B|388:292|348:300|348:300|368:236|324:184,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,260,80299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,188,80625,2,0,B|143:237|163:301|163:301|123:293|83:301,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,100,81929,6,0,B|132:64|132:64|220:52|220:52|284:16,1,200,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,82908,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,124,83234,2,0,B|344:151|344:151|432:163|432:163|476:199,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,260,84538,6,0,B|240:204|148:208|104:264,1,200,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,360,85516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,308,85842,2,0,B|221:245|178:163|109:147,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,48,87147,6,0,B|236:60|212:116|228:188|296:204,1,200,4|8,2:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,128,88125,1,0,0:0:0:0:
424,200,88451,2,0,B|480:188|496:116|472:60|420:48,1,200,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,128,89429,2,4,B|300:128,1,50
show more
Please sign in to reply.

New reply