Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

[General]
Makar's Taiko Muzukashii has the offset at 1033 instead of 1034. Change and resnap all notes.

[Makar's Taiko Muzukashii]
Various unsnapped circles. Resnap all notes. (Since you should change the offset you'll do it anyway).

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Sorry for late mod

[General]
Remove Megurine Luka - hypnoSpirA (meiikyuu).osb since it has different artist.
Makar's Taiko Muzukashii has the offset at 1033 instead of 1034. Change and resnap all notes.

[Makar's Taiko Muzukashii]
Various unsnapped circles. Resnap all notes. (Since you should change the offset you'll do it anyway).

[Valkyrie]
00:01:036 (1) -Start of this slider is unsnapped. It should start at 00:01:034 -

Only this.

spboxer3 wrote:

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

Maiden

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. unused green line:
   00:17:574 -
   00:37:034 - [/color] - fixed

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 00:43:844 (1) - C1 finish? ((if meiikyuu add soft-finish fixed
   
   
2. 01:44:817 (3) - & 01:46:763 - lost whistle? no its intentional
   
   
3. 02:23:412 (1) - 02:30:871 - same as 00:43:844 (1) - kk, i put on one note lol

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:10:439 (5) - Minor stuff, why don't you start this in ~x:256 lol'd -orz fixed
   
   
2. 02:15:952 (2) - (optional) move to x128 y296. make 02:15:952 (2,3,4) - have a pretty shape ((spacing fixed
   
   
3. 02:36:709 (6) - ok~ for this rhythm. looks you follow voice (lyrics) for this part. this slider should end at 02:37:196 - ((spinner start 02:37:277 - or 02:37:358 - . It's up to you fixed
   
   
4. 03:04:439 (2,3) - [nazi] It's nazi, but I recommend to stack it. try to make pattern more clear~ fixed

spboxer3 wrote:

Taiko

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 03:26:979 (1,2,3) - about these three: there's nothing different, so i don't think there's any necessity to used a K to (2). More, without a finish the feeling of playing is better. omg thank god you caught that; that wasn't suppose to be there and I guess I accidentally made that a finisher when I was making last minute changes. OTL

• [Rhythm] mostly for consistency and so
  

1. 01:41:250 (3) - Make it end in 01:41:898
2. 01:43:196 (3) - Make it end in 001:43:844
3. 01:46:115 (3) - One less repeat and add a 1/1 slider at 01:48:061 (x) -
   
4. 02:58:115 (1,2) - It do sound strange... repeating at red tick... so
   
   or
   
5. 03:10:439 (3) - the start is in without sounds, and it sound strange. So do this?
   

1. 02:34:115 (3,1,2,3,4) - Make those form a pentagon?
   
   SPOILER

   

• [Rhythm]
  

1. 00:17:574 (x) and 00:18:547 (x) - Add those notes? You did follow 00:16:601 (1) - piano (and even NC'd!) so those are quite expected
2. 00:37:358 (2,1) - It do flow better if mapped in a different way: by following the voice like you done with 00:36:061 (1,2) -
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:55:358 (x) - I do expect a circle here as the other pattern before have it
4. 00:59:088 (3) - Make this a 1/2 slider, to have a similar rhythm to other parts
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:01:196 (x) - Add a circle here? same reason as before
6. 01:06:871 (4) - Transform into a 1/2 slider fpr the same reason
7. 01:08:979 (x) - Add a circle here? same reason as before
8. 01:14:655 (1) - Transform into a 1/2 slider, same reason
9. 01:15:628 (3) - Delete this note and add notes at 01:15:466 (x) and 01:15:790 (x), as both drums and vocals follow this (plus there is nothing significant there)
10. 01:17:574 (2) - Make this start from 01:17:412 (2) to follow vocal, as there's nothing significant there
    
    SPOILER

    
11. 02:43:358 (x) - Add circle for the Same reason I said in the other "add circle"
12. 02:48:223 (x) - ^
13. 02:50:169 (x) - ^
14. 02:56:006 (x) - ^
15. 02:56:979 (x) - ^

1. 00:34:763 (2) -Make this blanket the (3)
   
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:46:763 (2) - Modify the shape so it's less covered by the slider before and to correct the spacing. put 00:47:736 (1) - some pixels higher after
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:20:817 (3) - The overlap is pretty ugly, you can try this?
   
   SPOILER

   
   

   228,20,80817,2,0,B|148:56|128:132|128:132|96:184|32:188|8:164|12:104|64:76|108:88|120:148|120:216|120:216|120:260|136:312,1,550

• 00:47:736 (1) - since you used an higher density in 00:41:898 (2,1,1) and this part is similar, why not use an higher density here too?
  
  (used combo notation)

1. 01:11:250 (3) - It seems crowded... and deleting this have a better flow
2. 01:17:088 (3) - ^
3. Same for the other kiai

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Makar's Taiko Muzukashii]

• 00:47:736 (1) - since you used an higher density in 00:41:898 (2,1,1) and this part is similar, why not use an higher density here too? Because it doesn't follow anything significant (listen to the vocals in the background)

1. 01:11:250 (3) - It seems crowded... and deleting this have a better flow its d d k for consistency in this section
2. 01:17:088 (3) - ^ ^
3. Same for the other kiai ^

spboxer3 wrote:

recheck request (no kd)

※ Notice

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
Black is just suggestion.

general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. Inconsistent Title/ArtistUnicode must be fixed.
2. Taiko video code still should be remove (Makar's Taiko Muzukashii) fixed
3. video offset looks have a bit early. +180 will be better 關於這mp3是用這影片轉出來的 必須解釋一下, 每次的轉檔都會有部份損壞/誤差 包含timing也是一樣 於是會有影片與mp3 timing不同的問題... CPU什麼的關係都會讓每次轉檔的影片有所不同。fixed

Feather

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:57:466 (1,2) - (nazi) for (2): please used copy (1) to "flip horizontal" and "reverse selection" fixed

Light

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 00:45:790 (1,2) - spacing issue (too close) fixed
2. 01:20:817 (3) - pattern shape. (not symmetrical pattern). so I make a code hope it's helpful. fixed , thanks ^^
   
   code

   397,144,80817,2,0,B|421:192|366:231|366:231|358:286|311:294|311:294|311:325|256:349|256:349|200:325|200:294|200:294|153:286|145:231|145:231|90:192|114:144,1,550

Taiko

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 03:26:979 (1,2,3) - about these three: there's nothing different, so i don't think there's any necessity to used a K to (2). More, without a finish the feeling of playing is better.

I will recheck again. so call me back when you fixed.

1. still need add video code.

Edit: bubble >_<~!!!

good luck ^^

MMzz wrote:

[Valkyrie]
00:57:952 (2) - Fix up this slider. Pretty ugly. ok fixed
01:39:304 (1) - This needs a few more repeats. Go down to 25% and you will hear the additional beats. kk hope its fine now
01:42:871 (1) - Move this out from under the stack. Reading stuff like this is a pain to read because the approach circles are clashing with each other. ok fixed
01:50:169 (7) - New combo? Getting pretty lengthy here. sure

[Maiden]
AR8? AR7 feels really slow even though it's a Hard. no b/c: lunar says there are no crazy stacks where the approach circles are cluttered and gap of difficulty between normal diff will be a bit big..
01:20:817 (3) - New combo? This beat really stands out in the music and it's on the down beat. fixed

[Light]
00:28:277 (2,1) - Combo should start on 2 instead. It's on the downbeat. fixed
01:14:655 (1,2) - ^ Combo start on 2. fixed
03:22:115 (6,1) - Swap these combos aswell. fixed

[Feather]
00:57:952 (2) - Move this a bit so the curve looks cleaner? x410 y300 looks nice. fixed

Ok lets get this ranked!