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wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2012-10-13T16:57:51+00:00

here's your ticket

[General]
put -Sekai- into tags

[Easy]
00:58:030 - remove clap here, it sound really strange
01:21:165 - ^
01:36:165 - change whistle to clap? sound better
01:58:284 - try to use clap here and 01:58:538 - ? maybe need to volume down a bit
01:59:047 (1) - volume down the spinner gradually plz, or it sounds too loud when playing

[Normal]
00:07:182 - add finish
00:07:945 - ^
00:20:911 - add clap, or change whistle to clap
00:24:979 - ^
00:43:284 - remove clap
00:48:369 - add clap
01:22:945 - remove clap here, or volume down it a bit
01:58:792 - I suggest add a note here, and start the spinner at 01:59:047 - , sound better. also, better to volume down the spinner to 5% gradually imo

[Hard]
00:35:657 (1) - this shape can be much better
00:39:725 (1,3) - this 2 sliders can blanket each other http://puu.sh/1eqxF
00:46:335 (4,6) - ^
01:36:419 - how about this rhyme, better imo http://puu.sh/1eqAP

[Insane]
00:20:530 - you can add clap here, maybe volume down a bit, sound nice imo
00:24:597 - ^
00:43:284 - remove clap
01:58:284 (3) - the 2 claps are kinda loud imo, volume down a bit?
01:59:047 (1) - same as Easy

[Overall]
map still need more works atm
Insane's hitsound can be better, try to add more claps(I already showed you some example in my mod)
Hard's slider shape can be better(not only the stuffs I point out)
that's all for now

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-14T07:33:48+00:00

Thanks wcx for modding =w=// I fixed everything

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Darksonic 2012-10-14T07:57:39+00:00

wcx19911123 wrote:
[Easy]
00:58:030 - remove clap here, it sound really strange Ok.
01:21:165 - ^ ^
01:36:165 - change whistle to clap? sound better ^
01:58:284 - try to use clap here and 01:58:538 - ? maybe need to volume down a bit ^
01:59:047 (1) - volume down the spinner gradually plz, or it sounds too loud when playing ^

Thanks for modding!

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-14T08:00:25+00:00

Updated Easy diff :3

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-10-23T10:18:02+00:00

Recheck~

[General]
Inconsistency in tags. Remove "Star Stream" from Taiko diff's tags
Why don't you include guest mapper's name in difficulty name? o.o

[Easy]
00:07:945 - Add finish here because of crush cymbal in the song
00:50:657 - Add whistle here for consistency with 00:54:725 -
01:23:962 (4) - I can hear snare drum here, so clap here ;3
01:38:962 - Delete (4) and add 1/2 slider here?
01:47:606 - Try to find a way to add a finish here, this point should be more emphasized. and currently inconsistent with 00:05:148 (1,2) -
01:53:708 - ^ Same here, maybe you can fix this by shortening the slider

[Normal]
00:48:877 (4) - Move this note to 00:48:623 - and adjust placement
00:53:962 - Finish is too loud and there's no sound to support it. better to remove
01:29:047 (1,2,3) - Sounds really overmapped. can you simplify them? ><
01:53:708 - Try to find a way to add a finish here, this point should be more emphasized.
01:58:792 (4) - Finish sounds nice
01:59:047 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:03:114 -

[Hard]
00:35:657 (1) - Can you explain this :/
01:23:580 (3,6) - I would suggest adding claps to them, sounds better to me!
01:37:436 - Try to find a way to add a finish here, this point should be more emphasized.
01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again, Don't make ☆ manually please orz
01:58:284 (2,3) - Clap

[Insane]
00:33:114 (8,9,10,11,12) - Still dont understand why is this stream here
00:38:707 (5) - Whistle?
01:05:275 (8) - Clap
01:07:818 (2) - ^
01:23:580 - ^
01:23:962 - ^
01:24:089 - ^
01:32:225 (9) - ^
01:59:047 (4) - This note is totally unnecessary and overmapped. would be best if it was removed
01:59:301 (1) -
01:59:301 (1) - Add some volume changes here like other diffs?

Mostly about hitsound. Call me back after fixes!

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-23T10:49:09+00:00

Thanks Melo fixed mostly everything :3

waiting for Bruno's replay ></

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Darksonic 2012-10-23T18:10:53+00:00

Melophobia wrote:
[Easy]
00:07:945 - Add finish here because of crush cymbal in the song Ok.
00:50:657 - Add whistle here for consistency with 00:54:725 - ^
01:23:962 (4) - I can hear snare drum here, so clap here ;3 ^
01:38:962 - Delete (4) and add 1/2 slider here? ^
01:47:606 - Try to find a way to add a finish here, this point should be more emphasized. and currently inconsistent with 00:05:148 (1,2) - Probably it would sound better but I don't think it's really necessary to make a change only for that Finish.
01:53:708 - ^ Same here, maybe you can fix this by shortening the slider ^

Thanks :3

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-23T18:13:01+00:00

updated :3

Melophobia

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Melophobia 2012-10-23T18:45:20+00:00

Rechecked and bubbled!

recheck log

03:13 Sekai-nyan: Erophobia
03:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o
03:13 Melophobia: o.o
03:13 Melophobia: not ero >//<
03:13 Sekai-nyan: o3o but you are still looking for them
03:14 Melophobia: would prefer something moe to ero
03:14 Sekai-nyan: owo
03:14 Melophobia: recheck?w
03:14 Sekai-nyan: www
03:15 Melophobia: just saw the thread w
03:15 Sekai-nyan: orz you read my mind xD
03:15 Melophobia: kk
03:23 Melophobia: in Easy
03:23 Melophobia: 01:38:962 - Add finish please
03:23 Melophobia: talked with darksonic and he said ok
03:24 Sekai-nyan: on the start
03:24 Sekai-nyan: or end?
03:24 Melophobia: start
03:24 Sekai-nyan: sure done
03:26 Melophobia: in Normal
03:26 Melophobia: 01:29:047 (6) - newcombo
03:26 Sekai-nyan: sure
03:27 Melophobia: 01:58:284 (2,3) - add clap to these?
03:28 Sekai-nyan: hmm yeah i can hear claps
03:28 Sekai-nyan: so added
03:28 Melophobia: :3
03:28 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:28 Sekai-nyan: and yeah i removed the silly heart on my diff xD
03:29 Melophobia: not sure if it can be even called heart *runs*
03:29 Melophobia: jk ww
03:29 Sekai-nyan: lol
03:29 Sekai-nyan: Melo so baka www
03:30 Melophobia: no i'm not DDDD:
03:30 Sekai-nyan: =A= relax
03:31 Melophobia: ww
03:34 Melophobia: Insane
03:34 Melophobia: 01:59:301 (1) - should start at 01:59:047 - instead
03:34 Sekai-nyan: fixed
03:34 Melophobia: update :3
03:35 Sekai-nyan: done :3
03:36 Melophobia: 01:59:174 (1) - move backward by 1/4 beat
03:36 Melophobia: Insane
03:37 Sekai-nyan: orz what happen
03:37 Sekai-nyan: D:
03:37 Melophobia: ww
03:37 Melophobia: update once again please
03:37 Sekai-nyan: done
03:37 Sekai-nyan: ><
03:38 Melophobia: ok~
03:40 Melophobia: the taiko is still too hard for me lol
03:40 Sekai-nyan: lol
03:40 Sekai-nyan: but so many doubles
03:40 Sekai-nyan: D: that's easy
03:41 Melophobia: ww
03:41 Melophobia: at least for me ><w
03:41 Sekai-nyan: ><

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Darksonic 2012-10-23T18:47:31+00:00

<3

Kawayi Rika

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Kawayi Rika 2012-10-24T01:10:22+00:00

I didn't see miya's reply for melo and wcx's mod ~ i know akemi is afk but not sure miya and fix by yourself is too bad,at least guest mapper agree fix stuff ~

Pls reply for future modder's mods,at least MAT/BATs ~ if you 'just say almost fixed' modder will bad think for that and don't know fix what stuff.

OK ~ I have check this map ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

Change AudioLeadIn to 1500,better with start.

[Miya's Insane]

Pls rename this diff for hard,because of no jump no many stream and follow DS.
00:15:318 (1,1) - Why no make symmetry to here?
00:17:352 (1,2) - Change this rhythm is more better.
00:27:013 (3) - Here should be change clap.
00:39:725 (7) - Add new combo,new vocal start to here and long combo IMO.
00:43:030 (2) - Add whistle.
00:43:284 (3) - Missing clap,same as 00:27:013 (3).
00:51:928 (4) - Change this rhythm is more better.
01:05:148 (7) - Add new combo,long combo IMO.
01:22:436 (5) - ^
01:09:852 (4,5) - Should move rhythm 1/4 later.
01:22:818 - Add a circle,follow with music.
01:36:547 (9,10) - Move 1 grid right,make perfect curved stream.
01:38:199 (4) - Add clap,sound better to me.

[Hard]

00:07:182 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This rhythm sound odd to me,pls change like this.
00:19:894 (6) - This slider should be 1/2 not 1/1.
00:24:216 (1,2,3) - Make 1/4 stream here,really fitting with music.
00:24:979 (4) - Try make more blanket with 00:25:742 (5),like this and code.
```
360,304,24979,2,0,B|326:279|280:285,2,80,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0
```
00:27:013 (3) - Here should be change clap.
00:31:208 (6,7) - Should move rhythm 1/4 later.
00:40:487 (2,3) - Should slider first after circle to rhythm,like this.
(00:32:352 - Add whistle,00:33:114 - Clap).
00:34:131 - Add whistle.
00:35:148 - ^
00:39:725 (1) - Move 1 grid down,make straight with 00:39:470 (5,6).
00:52:691 (4,5) - Again,Same as 00:40:487 (2,3).
01:14:047 (6,7) - ^
01:45:572 (7,8) - ^
00:42:013 (3) - Blanket again.
00:43:284 - Here should be change clap.
00:48:623 - Add finish,really fitting to here.
01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - Correct spacing star pattern.
01:52:945 (6) - Move 1 grid right,symmetry with 01:52:436 (4).

[Homu's Normal]]

00:19:894 (5,6,7) - How about this rhythm? i guess more fitting.
00:26:504 (2,3) - Should move rhythm 1/2 early.
00:48:623 (4) - Add finish,really fitting to here.
01:46:843 (4) - Change a circle on 01:46:843.

[DS's Easy]

00:48:623 - Add finish,really fitting to here.

Insane and Hard need more work really ~ so i popping for now ~

I hope you trying improve ~

Last edited by Kawayi Rika 2012-10-24T07:35:44+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

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Aurele 2012-10-24T01:12:10+00:00

Kawayi Rika wrote:
Insane and Hard need more work really ~ so i popping for now ~

I hope you trying improve ~

By seeing this, I will take a look to this map.

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-24T03:13:06+00:00

Fixed somethings on all diffs thanks for modding ~ and about Miya she's not here anymore, so dont make things that i dont know anything ok?

and yes she give up on this game

Anyways if you wont recheck this i will give up on it.... it's already old

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YTYuyu 2012-10-30T19:10:57+00:00

alright i'll see what i can do :3. mod requested on Byaku-nyan and Elly-nyan's modding queue of cuteness <3.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
i feel that a 500 lead in is too soon. i suggest a 1000 lead in so that players get ready in time IMO.

[Moesonic]
00:19:894 (3) - move this note to the right a bit, slightly below (2) so that the flow increases in this part of the song.
00:25:996 (2) - make you can make this slider look like (4) for a smoother transition in this combo?
00:27:521 (4) - Ctrl+J for a smoother flow in this combo?
01:21:674 (2) - maybe a whistle at the end to go along with the piano for this?

[HOMU COME BACK~]
00:12:013 (4) - make this wave slider smoother for a smoother transition to the next note.
00:19:894 (5) - maybe a NC here because it follows the BGM? the vocals stop when this note is hit during gameplay.
01:01:080 (4) - move this move around so that this note is aligned to (3) making the transition smoother during gameplay.
01:08:199 (3) - NC here to show that the kiai is starting and that the lyrics change in this part of the song.
01:16:080 - add a circle here. the vocals are still going in this part, and it'll show a nice transition to the next combo during gameplay IMO.
01:29:809 (3) - add a finish here. i can hear a small clash in the cymbals in this part.

[Hard]
00:03:877 (2,3) - replace this for a 1/2 slider because there's a hold in the BGM.
00:24:979 (6,7) - either make these notes a NC because the vocals start all over again. (1-5) follows the BGM in this part of the song during gameplay.
01:16:335 (5) - NC here because of new lyrics in the song.
01:20:403 (7) - ^
01:21:419 (1) - remove the NC if you follow the suggestion above since the lyrics are connected from the previous notes.
01:31:208 (6) - remove the note. there are no drums heard when this note is hit.
01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - you can do a better star than this...try to copy the one Rika did on her mod.
01:45:572 (7,8) - remove the clap on (7) at the end and add it at (8). right now the clap at (7) beaks the consistency in this pattern. during gameplay.
01:57:775 (1) - remove the NC here because the guitar is connected from the previous note and that's the slider.
01:58:284 (2) - this one follows a different part in the BGM, so make this a NC if you follow the suggestion above.

[MIYA-CHAN ;___;]
00:17:352 (3) - consider aligning this note to (1) so that the triangle is equal and i think doing this will increase the flow in this part of the song.
00:40:487 (4,5,6,7,8) - add claps at (4,5,7,8) because they give off a nice clap pattern, as well as they play nicely with the drums in this part during gameplay IMO.
01:54:979 (7) - this note follows a new part in the BGM, so make this a NC.

[Kinomi's Taiko]
00:07:182 (30) - i can hear a small clash here, so make this a K to go along with it.
00:07:945 (34) - make this a K if you follow the suggestion above for consistency.
00:09:216 (39) - ^
00:41:250 (173) - make this a k for consistency with patterns like 00:37:182 (154) - since it follows the snare.
00:39:470 (165) - make this a d if you follow the suggestion above. this follows the pitch in the song.
00:45:318 (191) - same as 00:41:250.
00:47:352 (201) - ^
00:47:606 (202) - same as 00:39:470.
01:22:436 (360) - K here. i can hear a small clash in the cymbals in this part of the song. if not a K, then a D for consistency.
01:46:843 (464,465,466,467) - it should be D kd K instead because yes there are cymbals on both, but the K's cymbals is louder then the cymbals on the D. the kd will make the transition smoother while playing IMO.

and that's all. whenever you're ready catch me in-game for a re-check.

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-30T19:59:33+00:00

Thanks Byaku :3 fixed everything.

But not the star pattern because i dont know how to fix it; maybe i'll ask you via irc later if i can ><

KinomiCandy

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KinomiCandy 2012-10-30T20:24:06+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
alright i'll see what i can do :3. mod requested on Byaku-nyan and Elly-nyan's modding queue of cuteness <3.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[Kinomi's Taiko]
00:07:182 (30) - i can hear a small clash here, so make this a K to go along with it. Nope.
00:07:945 (34) - make this a K if you follow the suggestion above for consistency. (Nope.)
00:09:216 (39) - ^ (Nope.)
00:41:250 (173) - make this a k for consistency with patterns like 00:37:182 (154) - since it follows the snare. Nope.
00:39:470 (165) - make this a d if you follow the suggestion above. this follows the pitch in the song. (Nope.)
00:45:318 (191) - same as 00:41:250. Nope.
00:47:352 (201) - ^ Nope.
00:47:606 (202) - same as 00:39:470. (Nope.)
01:22:436 (360) - K here. i can hear a small clash in the cymbals in this part of the song. if not a K, then a D for consistency. Alright, used D.
01:46:843 (464,465,466,467) - it should be D kd K instead because yes there are cymbals on both, but the K's cymbals is louder then the cymbals on the D. the kd will make the transition smoother while playing IMO. Fixed.

and that's all. whenever you're ready catch me in-game for a re-check.

http://puu.sh/1kAYi

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-30T21:24:19+00:00

updated :3 the taiko diff~

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Darksonic 2012-10-31T06:40:37+00:00

Byakugan249 wrote:
[Moesonic]
00:19:894 (3) - move this note to the right a bit, slightly below (2) so that the flow increases in this part of the song. Ok.
00:25:996 (2) - make you can make this slider look like (4) for a smoother transition in this combo? ^
00:27:521 (4) - Ctrl+J for a smoother flow in this combo? Nah.
01:21:674 (2) - maybe a whistle at the end to go along with the piano for this? Sure.

Thanks Nyaku :3

http://puu.sh/1kMJk

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-31T06:44:34+00:00

updated Easy diff :3

KinomiCandy

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KinomiCandy 2012-10-31T09:54:43+00:00

Ignore this post, lol. I was posting on a wrong beatmap.

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-10-31T10:18:49+00:00

KinomiCandy wrote:
Ignore this post, lol. I was posting on a wrong beatmap.

lol Baka Kinomi~~

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YTYuyu 2012-11-04T12:34:55+00:00

the re-check was done through IRC.

SPOILER

03:04 Sekai-nyan: btw do you have time for test play :3
03:04 Byakugan249: no i was thinking of doing that IRC mod D:
03:04 Sekai-nyan: oh sure
03:04 Sekai-nyan: let me go on to my lap
03:04 Sekai-nyan: =3=
03:05 Sekai-nyan: i'm on camp lol
03:05 Byakugan249: ahh alright~ :3
03:05 Sekai-nyan: wait just min :3
03:05 Byakugan249: hai~
03:06 Sekai-nyan: ok then back :3
03:06 Byakugan249: wb~
03:07 Byakugan249: ACTION runs to sekai-nyan and hugs
03:07 Sekai-nyan: >A<
03:07 Sekai-nyan: thank you moeku~~
03:07 Byakugan249: np~~ <3
03:07 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:08 Sekai-nyan: so we should do irc now?
03:08 Byakugan249: yup~ ^^
03:08 Byakugan249: uhh Bruno doesn't mind if you make changes on the easy right?
03:08 Sekai-nyan: let me ask
03:09 Sekai-nyan: ><
03:09 Byakugan249: ACTION holds on to sekai-nyan from behind ><
03:10 Sekai-nyan: ><
03:11 Sekai-nyan: he said it's ok
03:11 Byakugan249: ok~ :D
03:11 Sekai-nyan: it's faster this way
03:11 Byakugan249: right :3
03:13 Byakugan249: 01:08:199 (2) - mm~ maybe a NC to show that the lyrics change and also to know that the kiai starts again?
03:13 Sekai-nyan: umm
03:13 Sekai-nyan: ok since the kiai starts there
03:13 Sekai-nyan: so then i should remove this 01:10:233 (1) -  nc?
03:14 Byakugan249: yea since the combo is too short
03:15 Sekai-nyan: oh ok
03:15 Byakugan249: wait no...
03:15 Byakugan249: ..it'll break consistency with the next combo D:
03:15 Byakugan249: 01:14:301 (1) - 
03:16 Sekai-nyan: oh orz
03:16 Sekai-nyan: changed back
03:16 Sekai-nyan: :/
03:17 Byakugan249: that's all for easy o.o
03:17 Byakugan249: normal~
03:17 Sekai-nyan: ok i'm on normal
03:18 Byakugan249: 00:23:962 (5) - why don't you flip this slider like [http://puu.sh/1m1eo this] so that the flow is smoother?
03:19 Sekai-nyan: oh ok it's much better like that
03:19 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:20 Byakugan249: 00:26:504 (2) - move this back by 1/2 and add a circle at 00:27:013 - because it'll follow the BGM a lot accurate IMO
03:23 Sekai-nyan: ok
03:23 Sekai-nyan: changed some stuff too
03:23 Byakugan249: alright :3
03:23 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:23 Byakugan249: 00:36:166 (5) - same as 00:23:962
03:24 Sekai-nyan: ok done~
03:24 Byakugan249: 00:38:199 (2) - can you space this out a bit? there's a slight overlap and it seems to bother me a bit orz
03:25 Sekai-nyan: ok
03:25 Sekai-nyan: done
03:27 Byakugan249: normal's done
03:27 Byakugan249: hard~
03:28 Sekai-nyan: ok
03:29 Byakugan249: 00:24:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - add clap at every note except at (3) because it plays nicely with the drums in the BGM
03:29 Sekai-nyan: umm you mean my hard right?
03:29 Sekai-nyan: o.o
03:29 Byakugan249: yea not Miya-chan's
03:30 Sekai-nyan: :3 ok then
03:30 Sekai-nyan: oh wow you are right
03:30 Sekai-nyan: o.o
03:30 Byakugan249: hehe :3
03:31 Sekai-nyan: it's sounded cool orz
03:31 Byakugan249: 00:27:394 - add a circle here. you can hear the drums in this part
03:31 Byakugan249: also remove the clap at (5) because it sounds unfitting
03:32 Sekai-nyan: oh ok 
03:34 Byakugan249: 01:39:979 (1,2,3,4,5) - i'll try to help you out with this
03:34 Sekai-nyan: oh yeah ><
03:35 Byakugan249: 1st set it straight
03:35 Sekai-nyan: give me x and y
03:35 Sekai-nyan: lol
03:35 Sekai-nyan: it'll make it easier
03:35 Byakugan249: lol alright if you say so :3
03:35 Byakugan249: ACTION pets sekai-nyan :33
03:36 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:37 Byakugan249: before we start where is your star pattern? at the middle?
03:37 Sekai-nyan: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/482454
03:37 Sekai-nyan: idk maybe o.o
03:38 Byakugan249: i have mine [http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/482455 here] o.o
03:38 Sekai-nyan: lol
03:38 Sekai-nyan: how did it go there?
03:39 Byakugan249: i moved it :P
03:39 Sekai-nyan: oh lol
03:39 Sekai-nyan: i was about to say redl l
03:39 Sekai-nyan: =3=
03:39 Byakugan249: ACTION moves to sekai-nyan's arm :3
03:39 Sekai-nyan: :3
03:39 Sekai-nyan: now now so if i moved it in the middle it'll be easer?
03:40 Byakugan249: for me yea
03:40 Byakugan249: but idk for you
03:41 Sekai-nyan: umm
03:41 Byakugan249: i'll give you the code
03:41 Sekai-nyan: how about this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/482458?
03:41 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/482458 *
03:41 Byakugan249: space it out
03:42 Byakugan249: that's too close
03:42 Byakugan249: i mean a bit
03:42 Byakugan249: wait hold on...
03:42 Byakugan249: that should be fine sorry :<
03:42 Sekai-nyan: lol
03:42 Byakugan249: i thought this was an insane ><
03:42 Byakugan249: but nope it's a hard
03:43 Sekai-nyan: :/
03:43 Byakugan249: ok Miya-chan's diff~
03:43 Byakugan249: did she really give up on this game?
03:44 Sekai-nyan: i think maybe yeah
03:44 Sekai-nyan: :/
03:44 Sekai-nyan: she might found better one lol
03:44 Byakugan249: idk...i think it's her bandwidth
03:44 Byakugan249: anyways~
03:45 Byakugan249: 00:17:352 (3) - you didn't do this. it should be aligned to (1) D:
03:45 Sekai-nyan: oh orz
03:48 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed
03:49 Byakugan249: 00:40:742 (6) - remove the clap here. i don't remember saying that you should add a clap here
03:49 Byakugan249: only on (4,5,7,8)
03:49 Sekai-nyan: oh orz
03:49 Sekai-nyan: i forgat
03:49 Sekai-nyan: ><
03:49 Byakugan249: ACTION pats sekai-nyan :3
03:49 Byakugan249: it's ok :3
03:53 Byakugan249: done~
03:53 Byakugan249: does kinomi mind if you check the taiko?
03:54 Sekai-nyan: umm
03:54 Sekai-nyan: why o.o
03:54 Sekai-nyan: is there something wrong?
03:54 Byakugan249: no no i'm re-checking it
03:54 Sekai-nyan: oh ><
03:59 Byakugan249: 01:47:225 (465,466) - switch this to kd...looks like kinomi didn't apply this D:
04:00 Sekai-nyan: oh sure
04:00 Sekai-nyan: it's fits anyways o3o
04:00 Byakugan249: the dk K?
04:00 Byakugan249: or the kd K?
04:01 Sekai-nyan: no the kd K
04:01 Byakugan249: alright that's all
04:01 Byakugan249: update it please~ :3
04:02 Sekai-nyan: done :3
04:02 Sekai-nyan: btw you should check normal diff
04:02 Sekai-nyan: because i changed some stuff there
04:02 Byakugan249: ahh right
04:03 Byakugan249: that pattern is fine
04:03 Sekai-nyan: oh 
04:03 Sekai-nyan: ok then
04:06 Byakugan249: easy's good :3
04:07 Sekai-nyan: wow that's great ><
04:07 Byakugan249: normal...
04:07 Byakugan249: 00:27:013 (3) - add a whistle here for consistency with the current whistle pattern
04:08 Sekai-nyan: oh sure
04:09 Byakugan249: 00:43:284 (2) - this time at the beginning
04:10 Sekai-nyan: ok added
04:11 00:45:318 (4) - *nazi* can you move this around so that it's stacked perfectly on the beginning of (2)?
04:11 Sekai-nyan: sure
04:13 Byakugan249: 01:36:165 (5) - same as above, but on (3)
04:14 Sekai-nyan: ok then done
04:14 Byakugan249: did you fix the spacing for the next note?
04:14 Sekai-nyan: yes
04:14 Sekai-nyan: :3
04:14 Byakugan249: good :3
04:15 Byakugan249: 01:52:945 (1) - add a clap at the end. you can hear the drums in this part
04:15 Sekai-nyan: ok 
04:15 Sekai-nyan: =w=
04:16 Byakugan249: now it's your hard :3
04:16 Byakugan249: not gonna make the same mistake twice ><
04:16 Sekai-nyan: owo
04:16 Sekai-nyan: dont worry about it 
04:17 Byakugan249: 00:26:250 (3,4) - you should remove (3) and move the slider there to follow the hold accurately
04:17 Byakugan249: i mean move (4) at 00:26:250
04:18 Sekai-nyan: umm
04:18 Sekai-nyan: so swtch them?
04:18 Byakugan249: no remove (3), and then move (4) back 1/2
04:19 Byakugan249: wait...
04:19 Sekai-nyan: but
04:19 Byakugan249: yea switch them
04:19 Byakugan249: the circle follows the drums
04:19 Sekai-nyan: oh ok =3=
04:19 Sekai-nyan: done
04:20 Byakugan249: 00:42:013 (3) - maybe a whistle at the end to show empahsis in the vocals?
04:20 Sekai-nyan: oh
04:21 Sekai-nyan: ok then added
04:21 Byakugan249: 00:43:792 (3) - same as above, but at the beginning for consistency
04:21 Sekai-nyan: ok
04:22 Byakugan249: 00:46:335 (4) - at the end
04:22 Byakugan249: same reason
04:22 Sekai-nyan: ok added that too
04:23 Byakugan249: 00:48:623 (2) - finish here. the BGM sounds similar to the one at 00:47:352 (6) - at the end
04:23 Sekai-nyan: ok
04:25 01:40:996 (5) - *nazi* align this to (2). the pentagon looks crooked IMO
04:26 Sekai-nyan: ok done ><
04:26 Byakugan249: 01:45:699 (7) - make this slider look like (6) and do Gtrl+G for a smoother transition
04:27 Byakugan249: it'll make a nice blanket duringh gameplay IMO
04:27 Byakugan249: during*
04:28 Sekai-nyan: ok
04:28 Sekai-nyan: i think done 
04:29 Byakugan249: Miya's diff
04:30 Sekai-nyan: ok
04:30 Sekai-nyan: i'm on her diff
04:30 Byakugan249: 00:39:979 (2) - can you stack this on (5) for a smoother transition?
04:31 Sekai-nyan: sure
04:31 Sekai-nyan: done
04:31 Byakugan249: 00:40:487 (4,5,6,7,8) - uhh...
04:32 Sekai-nyan: lol
04:32 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed that xD
04:34 Byakugan249: taiko diff is next :43
04:34 Byakugan249: :3*
04:36 Byakugan249: update~
04:36 Sekai-nyan: done
04:37 Byakugan249: easy is fine so i'm going to normal
04:37 Sekai-nyan: sure
04:37 Byakugan249: 00:27:013 (3) - i thought this was stacked o.o
04:38 Sekai-nyan: orz
04:38 Sekai-nyan: it happens always
04:38 Sekai-nyan: ;_; fixed that too
04:38 Byakugan249: ik that feeling
04:38 Byakugan249: it happens to me as well
04:39 Sekai-nyan: :< it happens when i click save
04:39 Byakugan249: ahh i see D:
04:40 Byakugan249: did you dc?
04:41 Sekai-nyan: no
04:41 Sekai-nyan: crashed
04:41 Sekai-nyan: ;_;
04:41 Byakugan249: ohh D:
04:41 Byakugan249: ACTION clings to sekai-nyan ;_;
04:41 Sekai-nyan: ;_;
04:41 Byakugan249: go to your hard diff
04:42 Byakugan249: the normal's fine for now
04:42 Sekai-nyan: sure i'm on it now 
04:44 Byakugan249: 00:19:894 (6) - the whistle should be at the beginning. adding it at the end breaks the consistency in the whistles
04:45 Sekai-nyan: o.o 
04:45 Sekai-nyan: hard diff?
04:45 Byakugan249: your hard
04:45 Sekai-nyan: sure
04:46 Byakugan249: 00:26:250 (3) - same as above
04:47 Sekai-nyan: ok fixed that too
04:47 Byakugan249: 00:30:572 (3,4) - at (3), not (4). same reason as above
04:48 Sekai-nyan: sure 
04:48 Byakugan249: 00:31:080 (5) - well since you followed the suggestion above, add a whistle here. for some reason i always feel that a whistle should be here
04:49 Sekai-nyan: ok added that o.o
04:51 Byakugan249: Miya's diff is next ~.~
04:51 Byakugan249: ACTION lays down on sekai-nyan's lap
04:51 Sekai-nyan: ><
04:51 Sekai-nyan: i'm getting sleepy tho
04:51 Sekai-nyan: are still more ;_;
04:51 Byakugan249: yea why? you wanna stop for today?
04:52 Sekai-nyan: but how much more o.o
04:52 Byakugan249: just this diff and we'll continue the rest tomorrow if that's ok?
04:52 Sekai-nyan: hmm
04:52 Sekai-nyan: sure then :3
04:52 Byakugan249: ACTION pets sekai-nyan :33
04:52 Sekai-nyan: since i have school tomorrow
04:52 Sekai-nyan: ><
04:52 Byakugan249: ahh alright it won't be long
04:53 Sekai-nyan: oh ok then if you say so :3
04:55 Byakugan249: Miya's diff is fine
04:55 Byakugan249: just your diff and Homu's diff is next
04:55 Sekai-nyan: so 
04:55 Sekai-nyan: you can rebubble it after that?
04:55 Sekai-nyan: o.o
04:55 Byakugan249: no i have to check normal and hard
04:55 Byakugan249: again
04:55 Byakugan249: ;_;
04:55 Sekai-nyan: :/
04:56 Byakugan249: i mean we'll continue tomorrow since you have school
04:56 Sekai-nyan: oh 
04:57 Sekai-nyan: fine =w= 
04:57 Sekai-nyan: so that's it for tonight :3
04:57 Byakugan249: yup :3
04:57 Sekai-nyan: :3
04:57 Sekai-nyan: ok then i guess that's good night
04:57 Byakugan249: gn~ <3
04:57 Sekai-nyan: ><
04:57 Byakugan249: ACTION hugs sekai-nyan
04:57 Sekai-nyan: *Sekai-nyan hugs back <3

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06:41 Byakugan249: ACTION glomps sekai-nyan <3
06:51 Sekai-nyan: good evening Byaku :3
06:51 Byakugan249: good evening~ :3
06:52 Byakugan249: i mean good morning ><
06:52 Sekai-nyan: it's moring to you =3=
06:52 Sekai-nyan: but evening to me
06:52 Byakugan249: ahh i see
06:52 Sekai-nyan: owo
06:52 Byakugan249: do you wanna continue that IRC mod?
06:52 Sekai-nyan: sure
06:52 Sekai-nyan: :3
06:52 Byakugan249: go on normal
06:53 Sekai-nyan: ok
06:55 Byakugan249: wow it looks fine
06:55 Byakugan249: your hard is next :3
06:55 Sekai-nyan: :3
06:57 Byakugan249: 00:27:521 (1,2) - add whistles at the beginning of (1) and at (2) so that it'd be consistent with the previous patterns
06:57 Byakugan249: pattern*
06:58 Byakugan249: and remove the whistle at the end because of consitency
06:58 Byakugan249: consistency*
06:58 Sekai-nyan: oh ok 
06:58 Sekai-nyan: done~
07:01 Byakugan249: 01:44:809 (6,7) - i mean make these sliders symmetrical and put (7) on top of (6)
07:01 Sekai-nyan: like?
07:01 Sekai-nyan: o.o
07:03 Byakugan249: http://puu.sh/1miV8
07:03 Sekai-nyan: do you think it'll fit?
07:03 Sekai-nyan: ><
07:04 Byakugan249: yes i think it'll fit with the BGM since the transition is smoother IMO
07:05 Sekai-nyan: ok
07:05 Sekai-nyan: fixed the spacing too
07:05 Byakugan249: did you remove the clap on (7)?
07:06 Sekai-nyan: orz yeah did it now ><
07:06 Byakugan249: update it :3
07:06 Sekai-nyan: wait
07:06 Sekai-nyan: where do you think i should put the 01:46:335 (8) - 
07:06 Sekai-nyan: D:
07:08 Byakugan249: align it to (6) and fix the spacing from there
07:09 Sekai-nyan: ok done and updated
07:09 Byakugan249: meh close enough lol
07:09 Byakugan249: anyways~
07:09 Sekai-nyan: lol
07:12 Byakugan249: it's good~
07:12 Byakugan249: let me go through all the diffs to make sure 
07:12 Sekai-nyan: :3
07:27 Byakugan249: everything is good, just the taiko diff is left
07:27 Sekai-nyan: o.o
07:28 Sekai-nyan: you sure take your time :/
07:30 Byakugan249: it's good~
07:30 Sekai-nyan: great :D