popner wrote:

Chewin wrote:

Still not CTRL + G'd.

You mean 00:15:683 (3) or 00:16:154 (4)? I made change to 00:15:683 (3)

1. Please add 'The Smurfs' into the tag.

1. 00:24:636 (5) - I would say a new combo here would be nice because of the accent here.
2. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want.
3. 01:04:218 (3) - I would like to see another pattern or another shape of slider here because I see that you have used this kind of shape several time in this diff. Thus put more creative wouldn't hurt.

1. 00:07:672 (1) - A suggestion here: Probably start the spinner at 00:07:908 - and stop at 00:09:557 - . After that, put a note at 00:07:672 - to make a star-shape with 00:05:787 (1,2,3,4) - ?
2. 00:39:951 (5) - The rhythm is quite weird here in my opinion. I would remove a reverse of 00:39:244 (4) - and then move (5)- to 00:39:715 - . After that, add a note at 00:40:657 - or you can just extend the slider to 00:40:657 -
3. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want.

1. 00:05:552 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer a square shape here. Well, a suggestion only.
2. 00:25:578 (2,3) - Sorry but I highly suggest to remove the 3/4 rhythm here. I don't see any reason that 3/4 is needed here. They don't fit the music and there are no drum sounds/instruments/vocal to support it.
3. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want.
4. 01:01:392 (5) - Same as 00:25:578-
5. 01:05:632 (1) - ^
6. 01:07:988 (1) - Since this is a hard diff, so the pattern can be more diversified. Hence, I guess you can put some 1/4 pattern here instead of just putting monotone 1/1. Sure, the 1/4 pattern can be a small jump.
7. 01:11:758 (1) - ^

1. 00:26:050 (1,2) - Sorry but I highly suggest to remove the 3/4 rhythm here. I don't see any reason that 3/4 is needed here. They don't fit the music and there are no drum sounds/instruments/vocal to support it.
2. 00:32:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - The spacing of these jumps are inconsistent. In my opinion, some triplet jump would be much better if their jump are consistent, or you can use some 1/4 sliders instead of notes.
3. 00:40:657 (7) - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want.
4. 01:01:392 (5,6) - Same as 00:26:050-
5. 01:05:633 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:09:402 (9,1) - ^
7. 01:19:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The streamline is quite ugly, probably do some refinement on it?

kanpakyin wrote:

Hi!

[General]

1. Please add 'The Smurfs' into the tag. Added

[Easy]

1. 00:24:636 (5) - I would say a new combo here would be nice because of the accent here. added
2. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want. ok
3. 01:04:218 (3) - I would like to see another pattern or another shape of slider here because I see that you have used this kind of shape several time in this diff. Thus put more creative wouldn't hurt. Only 2 times..

[normal]

1. 00:07:672 (1) - A suggestion here: Probably start the spinner at 00:07:908 - and stop at 00:09:557 - . After that, put a note at 00:07:672 - to make a star-shape with 00:05:787 (1,2,3,4) - ? ok, good idea
2. 00:39:951 (5) - The rhythm is quite weird here in my opinion. I would remove a reverse of 00:39:244 (4) - and then move (5)- to 00:39:715 - . After that, add a note at 00:40:657 - or you can just extend the slider to 00:40:657 - Change the pattern now
3. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want. ok

[Hard]

1. 00:05:552 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer a square shape here. Well, a suggestion only. Hmm..I prefer current one
2. 00:25:578 (2,3) - Sorry but I highly suggest to remove the 3/4 rhythm here. I don't see any reason that 3/4 is needed here. They don't fit the music and there are no drum sounds/instruments/vocal to support it. Changed (2). For (3), I can hear 3/4 vocal under 25%, so I'll keep the 3/4.
3. 00:40:657 - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want. ok
4. 01:01:392 (5) - Same as 00:25:578- ^
5. 01:05:632 (1) - ^ ^
6. 01:07:988 (1) - Since this is a hard diff, so the pattern can be more diversified. Hence, I guess you can put some 1/4 pattern here instead of just putting monotone 1/1. Sure, the 1/4 pattern can be a small jump. I use similar pattern as previous section
7. 01:11:758 (1) - ^ ^

[Insane]

1. 00:26:050 (1,2) - Sorry but I highly suggest to remove the 3/4 rhythm here. I don't see any reason that 3/4 is needed here. They don't fit the music and there are no drum sounds/instruments/vocal to support it. same as Hard
2. 00:32:411 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - The spacing of these jumps are inconsistent. In my opinion, some triplet jump would be much better if their jump are consistent, or you can use some 1/4 sliders instead of notes. Since it is a star so I think it doesn't matters
3. 00:40:657 (7) - I guess you can raise the volume to 40% here, 30% is too soft imo. But this is up to you, just change it if you want.
4. 01:01:392 (5,6) - Same as 00:26:050- ^
5. 01:05:633 (1,2) - ^ ^
6. 01:09:402 (9,1) - ^ ^
7. 01:19:534 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The streamline is quite ugly, probably do some refinement on it? Changed the pattern

Andrea wrote:

[Hard]

00:52:909 (1,2) - I really dislike this sudden jump. moved a little

[Insane]

HP Drain -1 is better. done

00:07:436 (5) - New combo. fixed
00:07:790 (1) - Remove new combo. ^
00:47:019 (5) - New combo. ^
00:47:373 (1) - Remove new combo. ^

Jordan wrote:

wo bei ni ma cao

Jordan wrote:

wo bei ni ma cao