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MAK & SAK feat. XANA - Em Poses A 100 (Nightcore Mix) [Taiko

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Topic Starter
XinCrin

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[Storyboarding]
* nyananana.png and NANANANA.png seems useless for me, since they're few lyric are appear..... Remove it?


[Easy]
00:42:322 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner, it can be hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slow to read)


[Normal]
00:53:443 (5) - Move to X:284 and Y:96 for allign the pattern (nazi)
01:30:140 (2) - Small spacing for normal diff are worthless. Perhaps, fix this spacing instead having a small spacing here?
02:00:165 (4) - Little spacing error here
02:22:791 (3) - New combo should be here
02:23:162 (1) - New combo here shouldn't be needed, anyway


[Hard]
00:28:792 (4) - Spacing error here
00:44:546 (3) - ^
01:54:234 (6,7) - Because the circle is stack at tail slider, it feels like this slider have 2 repeating slider.... Perhaps, remove the circle and then add 1 repeating slider for this slider?
02:32:058 (3,4) - ^


[Lissette's Insane]
02:51:889 (1) - This ninja spinner can be bad gameplay, perhaps change it into short slider?


[Kuri's Taiko Oni]
* 2nd kiai time seems doesn't fit to the song, is this intentional?

00:51:404 - Add kat here?
01:04:569 - This should be snap at 01:05:026. Otherwise, the triplets from 01:05:119 (228,229,230) are having a different speed. (228) are slow, but (229,230) are fast
01:05:218 (229,230) - Unsnapped.....
02:28:537 - Same issue as 01:04:569 and it should be snap at 02:28:444


Good luck~
All Done Leorda Thanks :D
Topic Starter
XinCrin
READY FOR MORE MODS PLEASE :)
HakuNoKaemi
[*][Hard]
  1. [Rhythm]
    1. 00:17:487 (5) - Remove this note? it's not a na
    2. 00:22:213 (x) - Add a note here? that na
    3. 00:23:418 (5) - Remove this note? it's not a na
    4. 00:25:178 (x) - Add a note here? that na
    5. 00:26:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - it isn't so consistent... try (at least add the circle)
    6. 00:34:075 (x) - Add a note here? that na
[Graphic]
  1. 00:19:340 (1) - Curve it?
  2. 00:28:978 (5) - Curve it like 00:28:239 (3) - but on the other way
[Combo]
  1. 00:30:460 (1) - Move the NC to 00:29:534 (6) -
should continue the Hard ~
Topic Starter
XinCrin
Thanks for mod HakuNoKaemi :D All Done
Topic Starter
XinCrin
MAT MOD THIS MAP PLEASE :cry:

Continue~
Gamu
hi~ :3

m4m request

[General]

●All diff: Resnap All Notes. http://puu.sh/1f51e
●Would be good to put in the sound of the clap to Slidertick. This will be useful in Easy and Normal diff. http://puu.sh/1f54q
For example,Add the sound of the clap to 00:31:573 and 00:32:314 (Easy diff). I think very good :D

[Easy]

●00:33:055 (2) - Move (x:364 y:148). Will be in the middle of the slider[00:31:202 (1)].
●00:39:357 (2) - Move (x:256 y:284). I like it here.
●00:43:064 (3) - Let's change the shape a little. http://puu.sh/1f58V :)
●01:14:201 (1,2) - "whistle" is heard strange. remove?
●01:24:209 (3) - Move (x:204 y:80). Become symmetrical with 01:23:097 (1).
●01:25:321 (4) - Superimposed on 01:23:838 (2)? Perhaps, would be okay.
●01:33:476 (1,3) - Symmetric slider would be better.

[Normal]

●00:39:727 (6) - Move (x:132 y:60). It will be in the middle of 00:38:986 (5).
●00:52:887 (4) - I feel a little strange. remove slider. 00:53:072 - Add circle?
●01:31:252 (4,5) - 1 grid down. It will be in a straight line to clean.[(3),(4),(5)]
●01:52:381 (1) - Add finish (end)
●02:28:722 (1) - Slider is not symmetrical D: Should fix.02:29:093 - 1grid down.

[Hard]

I felt strange new combo D:
SPOILER
●00:29:719 (7) - Add new combo.
●00:30:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
●00:32:685 (5) - Add new combo.
●00:35:650 (5) - ^
●00:38:615 (5) - ^
●00:43:064 (7) - ^
●01:09:752 (6) - ^
●01:12:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
●01:12:718 (2) - Add new combo.
●01:15:683 (5) - ^
●01:18:649 (7) - ^
●01:21:614 (6) - ^
●01:24:580 (6) - ^
●01:27:545 (5) - ^
●02:06:481 (6) - ^
●02:39:101 (6) - ^
●02:42:066 (6) - ^
●02:45:032 (4) - ^

I think if I do this, will be better :3
ah.."new combo only" sorry

[Lissette's Insane]

●00:18:043 (2) - Move (x:344 y:64).
●00:18:228 (3) - Move (x:256 y:104)
●00:18:413 (4) - Move (x:168 y:64)
●00:18:599 (5) - Move (x:88 y:120)
  Become beautiful!
●00:23:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make it more beautiful D:
●00:46:029 (4) - Add new combo?
●00:51:960 (4) - ^
●01:30:511 (6) - ^
●01:34:959 (4) - ^
●01:39:407 (3) - ^
●02:09:076 (5) - ^
●02:12:412 (5) - ^
●02:15:007 (5) - ^
●02:20:382 (2) - Delete the whistle of the entire
●02:42:808 (6) - Add new combo
●02:45:773 (6) - ^
●02:51:889 (1) - Too short! Remove spinner. 02:52:445 - Add circle (x:256 y:192). Add new combo.



good luck :3
Topic Starter
XinCrin

-Gamu- wrote:

hi~ :3

m4m request

[General]

●All diff: Resnap All Notes. http://puu.sh/1f51e
●Would be good to put in the sound of the clap to Slidertick. This will be useful in Easy and Normal diff. http://puu.sh/1f54q
For example,Add the sound of the clap to 00:31:573 and 00:32:314 (Easy diff). I think very good :D

[Easy]

●00:33:055 (2) - Move (x:364 y:148). Will be in the middle of the slider[00:31:202 (1)].
●00:39:357 (2) - Move (x:256 y:284). I like it here.
●00:43:064 (3) - Let's change the shape a little. http://puu.sh/1f58V :)
●01:14:201 (1,2) - "whistle" is heard strange. remove?
●01:24:209 (3) - Move (x:204 y:80). Become symmetrical with 01:23:097 (1).
●01:25:321 (4) - Superimposed on 01:23:838 (2)? Perhaps, would be okay.
●01:33:476 (1,3) - Symmetric slider would be better.

[Normal]

●00:39:727 (6) - Move (x:132 y:60). It will be in the middle of 00:38:986 (5).
●00:52:887 (4) - I feel a little strange. remove slider. 00:53:072 - Add circle?
●01:31:252 (4,5) - 1 grid down. It will be in a straight line to clean.[(3),(4),(5)]
●01:52:381 (1) - Add finish (end)
●02:28:722 (1) - Slider is not symmetrical D: Should fix.02:29:093 - 1grid down.

[Hard]

I felt strange new combo D:
SPOILER
●00:29:719 (7) - Add new combo.
●00:30:460 (1) - Remove new combo.
●00:32:685 (5) - Add new combo.
●00:35:650 (5) - ^
●00:38:615 (5) - ^
●00:43:064 (7) - ^
●01:09:752 (6) - ^
●01:12:533 (1) - Remove new combo.
●01:12:718 (2) - Add new combo.
●01:15:683 (5) - ^
●01:18:649 (7) - ^
●01:21:614 (6) - ^
●01:24:580 (6) - ^
●01:27:545 (5) - ^
●02:06:481 (6) - ^
●02:39:101 (6) - ^
●02:42:066 (6) - ^
●02:45:032 (4) - ^

I think if I do this, will be better :3
ah.."new combo only" sorry

[Lissette's Insane]

●00:18:043 (2) - Move (x:344 y:64).
●00:18:228 (3) - Move (x:256 y:104)
●00:18:413 (4) - Move (x:168 y:64)
●00:18:599 (5) - Move (x:88 y:120)
  Become beautiful!
●00:23:788 (1,2,3,4,5) - Should make it more beautiful D:
●00:46:029 (4) - Add new combo?
●00:51:960 (4) - ^
●01:30:511 (6) - ^
●01:34:959 (4) - ^
●01:39:407 (3) - ^
●02:09:076 (5) - ^
●02:12:412 (5) - ^
●02:15:007 (5) - ^
●02:20:382 (2) - Delete the whistle of the entire
●02:42:808 (6) - Add new combo
●02:45:773 (6) - ^
●02:51:889 (1) - Too short! Remove spinner. 02:52:445 - Add circle (x:256 y:192). Add new combo.



good luck :3
Thanks for mod All Done :)

EDIT : nEW pAGE :cry:
Snowy Dream
Mod request from PM Req
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[General]
Offset: 1578
BPM:161.800

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oh Good Job!
Wonderful Mapset
I could only find the timing issue.Others are good.
alacat
Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●delete to (Thumbs) file in SB?
There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.
[Easy]
●00:19:361 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.put applause with constant rhythm
●00:41:597 - This green line is unnecessary.
●00:44:191 (4) - Make the spacing equal here.spacing too close (1.05x) it is better to use DS0.98x ~ DS1.02x
●00:44:562 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:53:456 (3) - try to put a Normal sound ?it is better to use it.same as here.00:41:597 - 00:26:773 -
●01:09:763 (1) - remove new combo .
●02:09:078 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. try to make some sliders?
●02:13:896 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ?
●02:24:273 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●02:50:770 (1) - as the synth's phrase should begin here.02:50:956 -

[Normal]
●01:31:999 (6,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●02:17:602 (2) - spacing too close (1.24x) it is better to use DS1.0x
●02:23:161 (2) - try this ?
you should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good :3

[Hard]
●00:16:211 (1) - move to x:288 y:40 and 00:16:304 (2) - move to x:280 y56
Aim for the start of here.00:16:396 (3) -
●00:22:233 - add note ? follow the vocal.and same as here.00:28:163 -
●00:22:326 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:38:447 (4) - remove clap.it follows nothing.
●00:49:750 (5) - 1 grid down.
●01:27:551 (5,6) - more spacing here.
maybe hidden repeat...
●02:45:026 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[Lissette's Insane]
●02:24:087 (5,6) - try this ? follow the vocal.

Hope you fine this helpful :3
Kanari
Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- You seem to have some unsnapped timing points in some sections of each diff ? owo


[Easy]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~
00:36:409 (5) - Line with the previous note.
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:905 (4) - Line with (2)
02:07:225 (5) - Line with (3)
02:37:614 (1) - Make this blanket look better, try 3rd point at x:372 y:268 and 4th point at x:380 y:212
02:38:726 (2) - Fix the spacing if you do this ^
02:50:770 (1) - Move to 02:50:956 and end at the same place.


[Hard]
00:29:738 (1) - Stack properly.
00:49:194 (2,3) - Make a better triangle shape.
01:18:472 (6) - New combo here or at (7)
02:42:061 (6) - New combo.
02:45:397 (5) - Make this mirror the previous slider.


[Lissette's Insane]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~
00:52:900 (6) - New combo.
02:16:119 (9) - ^



Well mapped ~
Good luck! >w<
Topic Starter
XinCrin

alacat wrote:

Hi:3 As requested

[General]
●delete to (Thumbs) file in SB?
There must not be any unused files in the map's folder except for the map's .osb file (since they sometimes get added even if the map doesn't have a storyboard) and storyboard .thumb files (since they are automatically created in image directories). Unused files add extra file size which is unnecessary.
[Easy]
●00:19:361 (1) - add whistle on the slider's reverse.put applause with constant rhythm
●00:41:597 - This green line is unnecessary.
●00:44:191 (4) - Make the spacing equal here.spacing too close (1.05x) it is better to use DS0.98x ~ DS1.02x
●00:44:562 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ? I think the flow is good :3
●00:53:456 (3) - try to put a Normal sound ?it is better to use it.same as here.00:41:597 - 00:26:773 -
●01:09:763 (1) - remove new combo .
●02:09:078 (2,3,4,5) - Rhythm here is hard to take a little. try to make some sliders?
●02:13:896 (1) - bend slider to the opposite direction ?
●02:24:273 (3) - add whistle on the slider's end.
●02:50:770 (1) - as the synth's phrase should begin here.02:50:956 -

[Normal]
●01:31:999 (6,1) - switch these newcombos for your pattern? although i think the current one looks better.
●02:17:602 (2) - spacing too close (1.24x) it is better to use DS1.0x
●02:23:161 (2) - try this ?
you should turn to the right a little more, the flow is good :3

[Hard]
●00:16:211 (1) - move to x:288 y:40 and 00:16:304 (2) - move to x:280 y56
Aim for the start of here.00:16:396 (3) -
●00:22:233 - add note ? follow the vocal.and same as here.00:28:163 -
●00:22:326 (2) - add whistle on the slider's head.
●00:38:447 (4) - remove clap.it follows nothing.
●00:49:750 (5) - 1 grid down.
●01:27:551 (5,6) - more spacing here.
maybe hidden repeat...
●02:45:026 (4,5) - I think it'd look better if it was symmetrical.

[Lissette's Insane]
●02:24:087 (5,6) - try this ? follow the vocal.

Hope you fine this helpful :3
I Done All Thanks :D
Topic Starter
XinCrin

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested via in-game ~


[General]
- You seem to have some unsnapped timing points in some sections of each diff ? owo


[Easy]
- Bookmarks can be removed ~
00:36:409 (5) - Line with the previous note.
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:905 (4) - Line with (2)
02:07:225 (5) - Line with (3)
02:37:614 (1) - Make this blanket look better, try 3rd point at x:372 y:268 and 4th point at x:380 y:212
02:38:726 (2) - Fix the spacing if you do this ^
02:50:770 (1) - Move to 02:50:956 and end at the same place.


[Hard]
00:29:738 (1) - Stack properly.
00:49:194 (2,3) - Make a better triangle shape.
01:18:472 (6) - New combo here or at (7)
02:42:061 (6) - New combo.
02:45:397 (5) - Make this mirror the previous slider.


[Lissette's Insane]
- You can remove the bookmarks ~
00:52:900 (6) - New combo.
02:16:119 (9) - ^



Well mapped ~
Good luck! >w<
I Done all Thanks :D
kosiga
XinCrin~

sorry, for late :?

here my mod~ ( just normal,hard )

[General]
[*]Timing - Inherited Points(green line) - most are not put on a line. Kiai time it is put on the line at least
SPOILER
Easy&Hard&Insane:
1st kiai time start 01:05:304 ⇒ 01:05:316
1st kiai time end 01:17:080 ⇒ 01:17:082
2nd kiai time start 01:17:173 ⇒ 01:17:175
2nd kiai time end 01:29:036 ⇒ 01:29:034
3rd kiai time start 02:28:722 ⇒ 02:28:720
3rd kiai time end 02:40:494 ⇒ 02:40:486
4th kiai time start 02:40:584 ⇒ 02:40:579
4th kiai time end 02:52:450 ⇒ 02:52:438
Normal:
1st kiai time start 01:05:304 ⇒ 01:05:316
1st kiai time end 01:17:080 ⇒ 01:17:082
2nd kiai time start 01:17:173 ⇒ 01:17:175
2nd kiai time end 01:29:028 ⇒ 01:29:034 ←It is different from other diff. Revise it by all means.
3rd kiai time start 02:28:722 ⇒ 02:28:720
3rd kiai time end 02:40:494 ⇒ 02:40:486
4th kiai time start 02:40:584 ⇒ 02:40:579
4th kiai time end 02:52:450 ⇒ 02:52:438
Taiko:
1st kiai time start 00:28:239 ⇒ 02:28:256
1st kiai time end 00:40:102 ⇒ 00:40:115
2nd kiai time start 00:41:585 ⇒ 00:41:597
2nd kiai time end 00:53:447 ⇒ 00:53:456
3rd kiai time start 01:52:762 ⇒ 01:52:752
3rd kiai time end 02:04:624 ⇒ 02:04:611
4th kiai time start 02:40:587 ⇒ 02:40:579
4th kiai time end 02:49:484 ⇒ 02:49:473

[Normal]
  1. 00:30:479 (5,6) - The movement of note is monotonous. i suggest: http://puu.sh/1gH7I
    160,192,30479,1,0,0:0:0
    172,84,30850,1,8,0:0:0
  2. 00:36:779 (6) - add NC and 00:36:965 (1) - remove NC is better. This makes a look better.
  3. 00:44:377 (6) - This note does not make much sense. ( 00:41:597~00:53:456 - During this time, 1/2rhythm is used for only here. I think that you should increase them more if you want to really put it. for ex: 00:45:859 etc ) If you do not want to increase it, I think that this note is unnecessary :P
  4. 00:49:380 (4) - why not clap? You should put clap here~
  5. 00:51:974 (3,4) - I think these are normalsound matches than softsound. so 00:52:706(green line) - move to 00:53:456. and 00:53:086 (4) - add clap instead to whistle. is better imo.
  6. 01:08:280 (1) - do not overlap with 01:07:169 (5) end ? Rotate by -4° ( Origin Selection Centre )
  7. 01:52:382 (1) - slider start is a little noisy. change to sampleset (soft) is better imo
  8. 01:52:752~02:03:870 - finishsound placed randomly. ( 01:56:829 (2) - 02:01:647 (1) - Why not put here o.o? ) if a constant ↓ better to change this
    01:54:235 (4) - finish is unnecessary.
    02:00:164 (4) - ^
    02:01:647 (1) - add finish
  9. 02:13:525 (1,2) - Is there a reason to use the stack just here? I recommend that you do not use the stack here. This is not difficult. but overall balance is bad. You should use it moderately if you use it  :P
  10. 02:41:135 (3) - same as 00:44:377 (6). ex: 02:47:065 etc
  11. 02:50:215 (2) - Form a little boring. try use 02:49:473 (1) - copy form. http://puu.sh/1gHSJ
[Hard]
  1. 00:19:917 (2) - remove whistle and 00:20:102 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider
  2. 00:23:994 (7) - nazi spacing: try http://puu.sh/1gHWF
    392,160,23994,2,0,B|368:196|328:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
    352,280,24364,2,0,B|412:332,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
  3. 00:27:514 (5) - nazi. 1grid left
  4. 00:34:093 (x) - add note. 00:28:163 (2) - Because it is here and the same rhythm.
  5. 02:17:417 (2) - remove note. calm rhythm, I prefer not to put it here~
  6. 02:25:755 (1) - use a whistle like normal diff. finish are little noisy><
  7. 02:50:585 (x)~ - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/1gI72 ( 02:50:215~02:50:956 - As for the blank here, some rhythm are lonely for hard diff )
Your map has been improved so

Good job~ :oops: Star☆

Good luck~ :)
Topic Starter
XinCrin
Done All Thanks
mancuso_JM_
Let me do a recheck on a old mod :P by myself
And this is my first mod as a MAT :D

[Easy:]

• 00:16:396 (1): As you did on the Other difficulties, the Finish on the beginning should be Normal Finish instead of Soft finish. So, replace it for consistency
• 00:25:191 (1): You are missing a Whistle on the Slider end, following your hitsound placing the only note without Whistle it is on the White tick after the downbeat, also fit fine with the Vocal
• 00:28:997 (3): This 1/1 Slider fit with the Instrumental, but it doesn't look very benefit with the Rhythm to an Easy diff to be sincere. You can simplify more doing a 2/1 Slider. So, your Slider should start here and finish on 00:29:738 without the Reverse Arrow.
• 00:30:109 (4): (I know, I'm nazi sometimes xD)- Move this Note x:184 y:180 to put this Note at the same place of (3) on 00:27:514
• 00:35:668 (4,5): To follow better the Rhythm change these Notes on a Slider instead. The Slider Tick in the middle will follow exactly the Vocal. Without it, you can listen a blank space on the Rhythm
• 00:53:456 (3): The Soft Finish sounds a bit loud to me, try to replace it on a Whistle or reduce the Volume on it
• 01:14:210 (1): The Clap sounds bad on the Slider end, since it is not following your Clap pattern. You always added Claps on the 2nd and 4th white tick, and this one it is on the 3rd. So, remove this Clap
• 01:21:251 (3): I would like to see a stop here, like you did it before. I would like to you just follow the Vocal, to do that Remove this Note
• 01:26:069 (1): Well, I didn't want to say anything about Sliders.. I also see another one like this but meh... Anyways, the curve looks forced, it is very big in my opinion. Try to reduce the curve making something like this: (Simple but efficient :P)
SPOILER

328,164,86069,6,0,B|280:164|256:192|256:192|232:164|184:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
• 01:33:481 (1): A whistle on the beginning fit properly with the Vocal
• 01:33:481 (1,2,3,4): You could rearrange a bit this pattern to follow better the Vocal, try to do something like this
• 01:40:893 (T): You could reduce the Volume a bit on this Inherited timing point because it sounds a bit loud to me. Try to reduce the Volume by 10%
• 01:57:199 (2): Hmm.. This Slider can looks better, just this :lol:
• 02:18:714 (3,4,1): I found a better thing to follow the lyrics, try to do something like this:
• 02:21:308 (2): A Whistle on the Slider end sounds unnecesary to me. It is better if you delete it
• 02:25:755 (Spin): Try a Whistle here, it sounds fitting with the effect in the Vocal
• 02:47:991 (1,2): Again, this stop it doesn't look really benefit to the music. As I said before, replace these Notes on a Slider

[Normal:]

• 00:16:396 (1,2,3): Let me fix the hitsounding on these Objects for a better follow to the music. In (1) add a Whistle on the Slider end, Remove the Whistle on (2), and add a Whistle on the Slider end in (3). Sound much better, really
• 00:19:361 (1,2): Same reason as above, add a Whistle on the Slider end in (1), and Remove the Whistle on (2)
• 00:27:514: And add a Whistle here :)
• 00:28:812 (2): The sound here is not really noticable, so this note sounds unnecesary. In my opinion would be better if you delete it
• 00:30:294 (x): But.. In this case a Note sounds preety well following the Vocal :P
• 00:37:521 (4): This is Slider is preety long and it is not covering all the things on the music. In my opinion, it's better if you make this Slider 1/1 shorter (should finish on 00:37:891) and then add a Note on 00:38:262
• 00:38:632 (6): If you did the above suggestion, this combo will be a bit long for this diff. So, add a New combo on this Note
• 00:47:527 (1): Add a Finish on the Slider beginning... Fit well, and you also did that on Easy and Hard
• 00:53:456 (5): Same as Easy in this timing
• 01:05:871 (2): This is note it doesn't sound really benefit to the Rhythm, the 1/2 is not necesary here. I'd suggest you to remove this Note from here
• 01:06:983 (x): Instead of above thing, add a Note here
• 01:08:466 (1,2): This pattern don't remark very well the long Vocal. I prefer something like this, work better imo (I just did ctrl+g selecting both objects)
• 01:29:034 (1): You definitley need a Finish on the Slider beginning, it is on the music and this Slider sounds empty without it
Some things on the Comboing
• 01:54:235 (4): Add a New Combo here, the change in the music is noticable to me and it is higher than...
• 01:56:088 (1): ... This time, so Remove the New Combo here
• 01:57:570 (5): Finally, add a New Combo here
• 01:58:682 (1,2): You can be neater with your Sliders, try to fix them. Simple Sliders with just 3 Sliderway points can make it the life easier :P
• 02:13:155 (6,1): Fit better with the Vocal if you replace these Notes on a Slider instead.
• 02:19:825: Try a Whistle here
• 02:21:308: (^)
• 02:30:573 (4): Flow better and it is more esthetic if you do a Flip Horizontally on this Slider (Ctrl+H) and then, after that move the Slider to x:344 y:284

[Hard:]

• 00:25:198 (x): Keep your 3-plet pattern in this section, to do that add a Note here
• 00:26:959 (x): I really expected a Note here, you have a Nice sound to add a beat in this place. Try it please :3
• 00:37:057 (x): And, another Note here too.
• 00:38:362 (1,2): These Sliders don't sound really fitting here, it sounds a lot of blank spaces to a hard diff. Try to cover these blanks with this pattern
• 00:51:047 (4): This pattern flow better if you move this Note 'out' of the Sliders. To be concrete, move this Note to x:256 y:44
• 01:22:178 (2,3,4,5): To be sincere, I didn't understood this Spacing change, it doesn't fit with the song and flows bad. It is better if you keep the Spacing here
• 01:31:813 (6,7): You are not following the lyrics properly. Delete (6) and move the Slider (7) to this place, after that you will not have any beat (because it doesn't appear anything important on the music) in 01:32:740
• 02:16:675 (6): The usage of 1/4 is unnecesary here, you don't have anything in the music, really (listen the music in 25% of speed). Instead to do that, replace the kick Slider to a Simple 1/2 Slider
• 02:28:627 (x): Add a Note here


- Definetly this is the best difficulty made by yourself, xin. Nice job with it :3

[Lissette's Insane:]

• 00:39:559 (x): Try adding a Note here, the Rhythm will become more exciting xD. Follow the Instrumental well in my opinion
• 00:39:930 (x): (^)
• 00:53:271 (9,10,11): The 3-plet is unnecesary here, it is not following anything in the song. I'd replace this 3-plet on a 1/2 Slider, follow better the song if you listen with a Slow velocity the map (25/50%)
• 01:29:034 (1,2): Sorry, but what is this??, is it a bug? because sounds awful really. The best way to make this pattern comfortable is Removing (2,3) and moving the end of this Slider to 01:29:775
• 02:52:438 (7): A New Combo looks find to finish with the map, try to add it in this Note

- Great Job Liss :3

[Kuri's Taiko Oni:]

• (Spanish): A grandes rasgos se ve bien! :D, pero la chequearemos a fondo mas a futuro...

Listo, me canse del ingles xD
Tenia planeado darle bubble como te dije antes pero Easy y Normal pueden trabajar mejor aun, asi que deberias buscar algun mod mas principalmente para estas dificultades.
Star Icon por Hard, Insane y Taiko :3
Suerte xin (volvere en un futuro :))
Topic Starter
XinCrin

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Let me do a recheck on a old mod :P by myself
And this is my first mod as a MAT :D

[Easy:]

• 00:16:396 (1): As you did on the Other difficulties, the Finish on the beginning should be Normal Finish instead of Soft finish. So, replace it for consistency
• 00:25:191 (1): You are missing a Whistle on the Slider end, following your hitsound placing the only note without Whistle it is on the White tick after the downbeat, also fit fine with the Vocal
• 00:28:997 (3): This 1/1 Slider fit with the Instrumental, but it doesn't look very benefit with the Rhythm to an Easy diff to be sincere. You can simplify more doing a 2/1 Slider. So, your Slider should start here and finish on 00:29:738 without the Reverse Arrow.
• 00:30:109 (4): (I know, I'm nazi sometimes xD)- Move this Note x:184 y:180 to put this Note at the same place of (3) on 00:27:514
• 00:35:668 (4,5): To follow better the Rhythm change these Notes on a Slider instead. The Slider Tick in the middle will follow exactly the Vocal. Without it, you can listen a blank space on the Rhythm
• 00:53:456 (3): The Soft Finish sounds a bit loud to me, try to replace it on a Whistle or reduce the Volume on it
• 01:14:210 (1): The Clap sounds bad on the Slider end, since it is not following your Clap pattern. You always added Claps on the 2nd and 4th white tick, and this one it is on the 3rd. So, remove this Clap
• 01:21:251 (3): I would like to see a stop here, like you did it before. I would like to you just follow the Vocal, to do that Remove this Note
• 01:26:069 (1): Well, I didn't want to say anything about Sliders.. I also see another one like this but meh... Anyways, the curve looks forced, it is very big in my opinion. Try to reduce the curve making something like this: (Simple but efficient :P)
SPOILER

328,164,86069,6,0,B|280:164|256:192|256:192|232:164|184:164,1,160,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0
• 01:33:481 (1): A whistle on the beginning fit properly with the Vocal
• 01:33:481 (1,2,3,4): You could rearrange a bit this pattern to follow better the Vocal, try to do something like this
• 01:40:893 (T): You could reduce the Volume a bit on this Inherited timing point because it sounds a bit loud to me. Try to reduce the Volume by 10%
• 01:57:199 (2): Hmm.. This Slider can looks better, just this :lol:
• 02:18:714 (3,4,1): I found a better thing to follow the lyrics, try to do something like this:
• 02:21:308 (2): A Whistle on the Slider end sounds unnecesary to me. It is better if you delete it
• 02:25:755 (Spin): Try a Whistle here, it sounds fitting with the effect in the Vocal
• 02:47:991 (1,2): Again, this stop it doesn't look really benefit to the music. As I said before, replace these Notes on a Slider
All Fixed
[Normal:]

• 00:16:396 (1,2,3): Let me fix the hitsounding on these Objects for a better follow to the music. In (1) add a Whistle on the Slider end, Remove the Whistle on (2), and add a Whistle on the Slider end in (3). Sound much better, really
• 00:19:361 (1,2): Same reason as above, add a Whistle on the Slider end in (1), and Remove the Whistle on (2)
• 00:27:514: And add a Whistle here :)
• 00:28:812 (2): The sound here is not really noticable, so this note sounds unnecesary. In my opinion would be better if you delete it
• 00:30:294 (x): But.. In this case a Note sounds preety well following the Vocal :P
• 00:37:521 (4): This is Slider is preety long and it is not covering all the things on the music. In my opinion, it's better if you make this Slider 1/1 shorter (should finish on 00:37:891) and then add a Note on 00:38:262
• 00:38:632 (6): If you did the above suggestion, this combo will be a bit long for this diff. So, add a New combo on this Note
• 00:47:527 (1): Add a Finish on the Slider beginning... Fit well, and you also did that on Easy and Hard
• 00:53:456 (5): Same as Easy in this timing
• 01:05:871 (2): This is note it doesn't sound really benefit to the Rhythm, the 1/2 is not necesary here. I'd suggest you to remove this Note from here
• 01:06:983 (x): Instead of above thing, add a Note here
• 01:08:466 (1,2): This pattern don't remark very well the long Vocal. I prefer something like this, work better imo (I just did ctrl+g selecting both objects)
• 01:29:034 (1): You definitley need a Finish on the Slider beginning, it is on the music and this Slider sounds empty without it
Some things on the Comboing
• 01:54:235 (4): Add a New Combo here, the change in the music is noticable to me and it is higher than...
• 01:56:088 (1): ... This time, so Remove the New Combo here
• 01:57:570 (5): Finally, add a New Combo here
• 01:58:682 (1,2): You can be neater with your Sliders, try to fix them. Simple Sliders with just 3 Sliderway points can make it the life easier :P
• 02:13:155 (6,1): Fit better with the Vocal if you replace these Notes on a Slider instead.
• 02:19:825: Try a Whistle here
• 02:21:308: (^)
• 02:30:573 (4): Flow better and it is more esthetic if you do a Flip Horizontally on this Slider (Ctrl+H) and then, after that move the Slider to x:344 y:284
ALL Fixed , I made a few things but otherwise in this diff
[Hard:]

• 00:25:198 (x): Keep your 3-plet pattern in this section, to do that add a Note here
• 00:26:959 (x): I really expected a Note here, you have a Nice sound to add a beat in this place. Try it please :3
• 00:37:057 (x): And, another Note here too.
• 00:38:362 (1,2): These Sliders don't sound really fitting here, it sounds a lot of blank spaces to a hard diff. Try to cover these blanks with this pattern
• 00:51:047 (4): This pattern flow better if you move this Note 'out' of the Sliders. To be concrete, move this Note to x:256 y:44
• 01:22:178 (2,3,4,5): To be sincere, I didn't understood this Spacing change, it doesn't fit with the song and flows bad. It is better if you keep the Spacing here
• 01:31:813 (6,7): You are not following the lyrics properly. Delete (6) and move the Slider (7) to this place, after that you will not have any beat (because it doesn't appear anything important on the music) in 01:32:740
• 02:16:675 (6): The usage of 1/4 is unnecesary here, you don't have anything in the music, really (listen the music in 25% of speed). Instead to do that, replace the kick Slider to a Simple 1/2 Slider
• 02:28:627 (x): Add a Note here
All Fixed

- Definetly this is the best difficulty made by yourself, xin. Nice job with it :3 Thank you :)

[Lissette's Insane:]

• 00:39:559 (x): Try adding a Note here, the Rhythm will become more exciting xD. Follow the Instrumental well in my opinion
• 00:39:930 (x): (^)
• 00:53:271 (9,10,11): The 3-plet is unnecesary here, it is not following anything in the song. I'd replace this 3-plet on a 1/2 Slider, follow better the song if you listen with a Slow velocity the map (25/50%)
• 01:29:034 (1,2): Sorry, but what is this??, is it a bug? because sounds awful really. The best way to make this pattern comfortable is Removing (2,3) and moving the end of this Slider to 01:29:775
• 02:52:438 (7): A New Combo looks find to finish with the map, try to add it in this Note

- Great Job Liss :3

[Kuri's Taiko Oni:]

• (Spanish): A grandes rasgos se ve bien! :D, pero la chequearemos a fondo mas a futuro...

Listo, me canse del ingles xD
Tenia planeado darle bubble como te dije antes pero Easy y Normal pueden trabajar mejor aun, asi que deberias buscar algun mod mas principalmente para estas dificultades.
Star Icon por Hard, Insane y Taiko :3 :)
Suerte xin (volvere en un futuro :)) :P
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Gracias Por Modear :D
LunarSakuya
hi

General
Nice

Easy
00:28:626 (2,3) - Move up like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470756 to blanket (3)
00:37:150 (1) - Try to make more symmetrical =v=
00:51:974 (2) - Ctrl + J, for contrast with previous note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470757
02:38:726 (2,3) - Highlight these and move 2 grids right

Normal
00:36:224 - Add note
00:36:965 (2) - Delete note, doesn't follow rhythm
00:46:044 (3) - Copy & paste (1) maybe to match echo-y feel
01:17:175 (1) - Finish at beginning
01:31:257 (1) - Delete NC, feels useless
01:54:976 (2) - Ctrl + H for some variety
02:05:002 (1,2) - Center these

Hard
00:27:144 (3) - Ctrl + G for cursor flow?
00:34:185 (3) - Curve this like (4)
01:19:584 (3,4,1) - Make even spacing
01:23:846 (4) - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470765
01:31:999 (6) - Start this slider at 01:31:813 instead to follow vocals
02:37:614 (3,4) - Make these identical shape

Lissette's Insane
00:39:374 (1,2,3,4,5) - make symmetrical using y-axis http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/470769
00:46:044 (4,5) - Put these somewhere else so it's not repetitive
01:06:983 - I think you should add something here to keep the flow of the vocals
01:29:034 (1,2) - accidentally used 1/6
02:25:014 (6,7) - Maybe don't stack these so players don't confused of rhythm

Nice map!! :D GL
Topic Starter
XinCrin
:cry: Please MAT mod this map :(
Fenya
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA xDD
Luego de que modee todo el map en ingles, me di cuenta de que podia modear en Español xDDD
Bueno, no importa... Espero que entiendas mi pobre ingles :p

Easy:
01:24:216 (3) - (nazi) 1 grid up?
01:37:558 (2) - Remove this slider, and move the spinner to 01:37:928 (1) Sounds better, imo :p
01:58:682 (1,2,3,4) - Put like this or somethings... You can be a better pattern with this... http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/472334
02:12:043 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid left
02:37:614 (1,3) - I'm not sure if this pattern is good for a Easy... I think than is hard or confused for a Newbie player, also, is overlap...

Normal:
00:34:926 (2) - spacing, lol xD
01:31:628 (2) - (nazi) 1 grid up
02:37:985 (1,3) - The hit of (1) can conver to (3) :p
02:41:320 (3) - (nazi xD) 2 grid down?

Hard:
00:27:144 (3) - move to x:408 y:244 for the symmetry
Me encanto esta diff... Para ser tu primer map, vas muy bien c:

Lissette's Insane:
01:29:034 (1,2) - ... El slider no esta en ningun tick, ademas, suena mal Dx
02:07:966 (2,3,4,5) - Si trataste de hacerlo cuadrado... Pues, en verdad no lo esta, si es asi, deberias arreglarlo... Si no lo quisiste hacer simetrico, pues, ignora esto :p

Eso es todo, es un pequeño mod nazi :c
Pero, espero que te sirva de algo, me gusto mucho el map, buena suerte :3
FoxCat
Ya falta poco, vamos, rank rank rank :)
[Yue]
Hola Xin! aqui vengo a ayudar un poco > < no soy bueno pero espero ayudar en algo ;__;

Easy:
01:55:717 (1) - mueve el punto final a x:440 y:284 para que se vea mas simetrico :3

Normal:
00:33:259 - tal vez debas agregar una nota para que tenga consistencia como en 00:30:109 (3,4,5) - y como en 00:36:779 (1,2,3) -
00:53:086 - nose si tal vez, solo tal vez sea buena idea colocar un slider aca que termine en 00:53:456 - con finish al final * tal vez *

Hard:
00:39:188 (3) - podrias rehacer este slider? esque no veo simetria como en las otras dificultades
01:31:813 - tal vez, solo tal vez agregar una nota aca?
02:18:158 (5) - lo mismo que en 00:39:188 -

Lissette's Insane:
01:29:034 (1) - este slider no termina en ningun tick D: y en 01:29:590 (2) - hay una nota innecesaria
creo que el slider terminaba aca 01:29:590 -

ya falta poco para el rank Xin! vamos compatriota tu puedes ;__;
Topic Starter
XinCrin
Gracias Yue y Fenya :D
Konei
Hey, from my Queue. Sorry for delay ~


Must be fixed

Should be fixed

Could be fixed (Nazi)

Suggestions


[General]

. Just my opinion here, but I really think Combo colour 3 and 4 doesn't fit the BG very well. You may want to change this for a better overall look.



[Easy]

. I feel that the Easy lacks of claps :/ That is because you set Sliders from downbeats, which skip the clap ticks. I would really recommend you to add a Slidertick, because currently claps are sounding weird when they appear
00:23:808 (3) - This should really have the same shape as 1, fits much better with that pattern and has more symmetry
00:35:297 (2,3,4) - This triangle flows a bit bad with 1's angle imo. Try something like this which flows easier for beginners http://puu.sh/1iGmA
00:37:150 (1) - Can be nazi'd a bit better like http://puu.sh/1iGol just move the end point a bit
01:24:216 (3) - Move a bit for a better flow http://puu.sh/1iGDk
01:27:551 (3) - Looks a bit random placed, try http://puu.sh/1iGE4
01:53:864 (3) - This shape doesn't look smooth, I'm sure you can shape it more pleasing
02:04:611 - Unsnapped uninhitired timing point
02:04:982 - Unsnapped inhitired timing point
02:07:225 (5,1) - Make a blanket between them? Looks neater imo
02:16:861 - Same as 02:04:611
02:22:790 (1) - Move mid wave point one grid left for better look
02:30:943 (5) - Allign with 3, looks and flows better for me
. Overall well done Easy. Just this thing about the hitsounds bothers me. Also some patterns could be nazi'd for looking neater


[Normal]

. Some unsnapped timing points, snap them correctly
. CS - 1 Is good imo, the song is a bit long and the SV a bit quick, so it should be better
00:43:080 (3) - This Slider could look better, just bring some symmetry here
00:47:527 (1) - Finish on start sounds needed
01:14:951 (3) - Doesn't look nice with 1, copy pasting 1 looks better imo and the curve has a better flow
01:17:175 (1) - A straight Slider looks and plays odd here. In general you should use such straight Sliders and pattern if you know how to use it. This way looks pretty odd so I recommend you to change the angle
01:21:622 (3) - This curved Slider looks a bit random. I think music fits more with a shape
01:23:104 (1) - You're missing a finish for consistency
01:24:957 (5) - Doesn't look really pleasing imo, try to delete 6 and copy paste 3 instead of 5 so like http://puu.sh/1iHat
01:55:717 (1) - Missing finish on start for consistency
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:164 (3) - ^
02:01:647 (5) - ^
02:03:129 (3) - Try soft whistle on Sliderbody, sounds great to the music imo
02:15:378 (4) - Why don't you use the same angle as for 1? Flows so much better imo
02:17:602 (3) - Could look better with more symmetry
02:19:825 (1,2,3) - Try a perfect triangle like http://puu.sh/1iHiN
02:28:720 (1) - Move end Slider point one grid down
. Also pretty good rhythm, but Sliders and Slider pattern could still look neater :3



Okay, this is all for now :3

Sorry for delay again and good luck for ranking o/
Topic Starter
XinCrin

Konei wrote:

Hey, from my Queue. Sorry for delay ~


Must be fixed

Should be fixed

Could be fixed (Nazi)

Suggestions


[General]

. Just my opinion here, but I really think Combo colour 3 and 4 doesn't fit the BG very well. You may want to change this for a better overall look.



[Easy]

. I feel that the Easy lacks of claps :/ That is because you set Sliders from downbeats, which skip the clap ticks. I would really recommend you to add a Slidertick, because currently claps are sounding weird when they appear
00:23:808 (3) - This should really have the same shape as 1, fits much better with that pattern and has more symmetry
00:35:297 (2,3,4) - This triangle flows a bit bad with 1's angle imo. Try something like this which flows easier for beginners http://puu.sh/1iGmA
00:37:150 (1) - Can be nazi'd a bit better like http://puu.sh/1iGol just move the end point a bit
01:24:216 (3) - Move a bit for a better flow http://puu.sh/1iGDk
01:27:551 (3) - Looks a bit random placed, try http://puu.sh/1iGE4
01:53:864 (3) - This shape doesn't look smooth, I'm sure you can shape it more pleasing
02:04:611 - Unsnapped uninhitired timing point
02:04:982 - Unsnapped inhitired timing point
02:07:225 (5,1) - Make a blanket between them? Looks neater imo
02:16:861 - Same as 02:04:611
02:22:790 (1) - Move mid wave point one grid left for better look
02:30:943 (5) - Allign with 3, looks and flows better for me
. Overall well done Easy. Just this thing about the hitsounds bothers me. Also some patterns could be nazi'd for looking neater


[Normal]

. Some unsnapped timing points, snap them correctly
. CS - 1 Is good imo, the song is a bit long and the SV a bit quick, so it should be better
00:43:080 (3) - This Slider could look better, just bring some symmetry here
00:47:527 (1) - Finish on start sounds needed
01:14:951 (3) - Doesn't look nice with 1, copy pasting 1 looks better imo and the curve has a better flow
01:17:175 (1) - A straight Slider looks and plays odd here. In general you should use such straight Sliders and pattern if you know how to use it. This way looks pretty odd so I recommend you to change the angle
01:21:622 (3) - This curved Slider looks a bit random. I think music fits more with a shape
01:23:104 (1) - You're missing a finish for consistency
01:24:957 (5) - Doesn't look really pleasing imo, try to delete 6 and copy paste 3 instead of 5 so like http://puu.sh/1iHat
01:55:717 (1) - Missing finish on start for consistency
01:58:682 (1) - ^
02:00:164 (3) - ^
02:01:647 (5) - ^
02:03:129 (3) - Try soft whistle on Sliderbody, sounds great to the music imo
02:15:378 (4) - Why don't you use the same angle as for 1? Flows so much better imo
02:17:602 (3) - Could look better with more symmetry
02:19:825 (1,2,3) - Try a perfect triangle like http://puu.sh/1iHiN
02:28:720 (1) - Move end Slider point one grid down
. Also pretty good rhythm, but Sliders and Slider pattern could still look neater :3



Okay, this is all for now :3

Sorry for delay again and good luck for ranking o/
Thanks for mod :) i fixed all
jonathanlfj
modding again upon request :)
still dont know what language this is

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
02:40:579 - 02:52:438: This timing section sounds slightly off, ask someone good at timing to get a new offset (red timing section) here

[Easy]
00:35:297 (2,3,4,5) - make it a square?
01:09:763 (4) - this blanket can look better
01:11:245 (1) - ^ and add finish to slider head
01:26:069 (5) - improve blanket
02:13:896 (1) - add finish to slider head
02:15:378 (3) - this slider kinda look weird compared to the other sliders in this diff...remove the red mode?
02:39:097 (3) - add finish to slider tail

[Normal]
Stack Leniency 7 to keep consistent with other diffs
00:23:067 (2) - whistle on slider tail
00:53:456 (5) - the volume here could be louder, try 40% ~ 60%
01:09:763 (3,4,5,6,1) - this star can look better
01:16:434 (5) - add finish
01:30:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - this can totally look better ;)
02:15:008 (3) - one grid right and adjust other spacings accordingly
02:37:614 (5) - add finish and NC
02:37:985 (1) - take off NC

[Hard]
00:27:514 (4) - add whistle
00:37:150 (3) - add finish to slider head
01:07:539 (3,4,5,1,2) - make it a more symmetrical diamond
01:25:328 (4) - reverse selection and add a repeat (so delete 01:25:699 (5)) plays better imo (and dont forget add clap on the slider end if apply this)
01:59:794 (1) - take off NC
02:05:002 (3) - add finish to slider head
02:32:611 (5) - spacing, adjust to 1.20x with 02:32:055 (4)
02:45:026 (4) - NC

[Lissette's Insane]
Consider OD-1, if you are concerned with score then HP+1
00:17:138 (4) - add whistle to slider head
00:46:044 (4) - NC here since ur doing a complete slider overlap
00:51:974 (4) - ^
01:15:600 - add a note?
01:29:034 (1) - add finish on slider head
01:39:411 (3) - NC
02:03:129 (4) - add finish to last repeat
02:09:078 (5) - NC
02:15:008 (5) - ^
02:35:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust this diamond so its perfectly straight vertically (right now its tilted to the right). Adjust position of 02:36:873 (1,2,3,4,5,1) for symmetry as well

Nice remap you did there, just make your sliders and patterns look more beautiful and your are all set! Good Luck ^_^
Neliel
160601 seems to be the offset for the last kiai start.
I keep checking lol

*edit: yup 160601 sounds good to me hm.
Topic Starter
XinCrin

jonathanlfj wrote:

modding again upon request :)
still dont know what language this is

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
02:40:579 - 02:52:438: This timing section sounds slightly off, ask someone good at timing to get a new offset (red timing section) here

[Easy]
00:35:297 (2,3,4,5) - make it a square?
01:09:763 (4) - this blanket can look better
01:11:245 (1) - ^ and add finish to slider head
01:26:069 (5) - improve blanket
02:13:896 (1) - add finish to slider head
02:15:378 (3) - this slider kinda look weird compared to the other sliders in this diff...remove the red mode?
02:39:097 (3) - add finish to slider tail

[Normal]
Stack Leniency 7 to keep consistent with other diffs
00:23:067 (2) - whistle on slider tail
00:53:456 (5) - the volume here could be louder, try 40% ~ 60%
01:09:763 (3,4,5,6,1) - this star can look better
01:16:434 (5) - add finish
01:30:146 (2,3,4,5,6) - this can totally look better ;)
02:15:008 (3) - one grid right and adjust other spacings accordingly
02:37:614 (5) - add finish and NC
02:37:985 (1) - take off NC

[Hard]
00:27:514 (4) - add whistle
00:37:150 (3) - add finish to slider head
01:07:539 (3,4,5,1,2) - make it a more symmetrical diamond
01:25:328 (4) - reverse selection and add a repeat (so delete 01:25:699 (5)) plays better imo (and dont forget add clap on the slider end if apply this)
01:59:794 (1) - take off NC
02:05:002 (3) - add finish to slider head
02:32:611 (5) - spacing, adjust to 1.20x with 02:32:055 (4)
02:45:026 (4) - NC

[Lissette's Insane]
Consider OD-1, if you are concerned with score then HP+1
00:17:138 (4) - add whistle to slider head
00:46:044 (4) - NC here since ur doing a complete slider overlap
00:51:974 (4) - ^
01:15:600 - add a note?
01:29:034 (1) - add finish on slider head
01:39:411 (3) - NC
02:03:129 (4) - add finish to last repeat
02:09:078 (5) - NC
02:15:008 (5) - ^
02:35:947 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - adjust this diamond so its perfectly straight vertically (right now its tilted to the right). Adjust position of 02:36:873 (1,2,3,4,5,1) for symmetry as well

Nice remap you did there, just make your sliders and patterns look more beautiful and your are all set! Good Luck ^_^
Thanks for mod, apply and fix everything with regard to timing
mikoto2983
Hi XinCrin. :) i try some mod.
please use this to create your map good one. :)

SPOILER
[Insane]
00:36:779 (6,7) -i think this is miss.
00:53:271 (9,10,11) - i think 10 is not need
01:06:705 (7,1,2,3) - here i think next idea is good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474480
01:09:763 (1,2,3) - here is same ☝

as all , i think these are good maps and especially [hard] is nice.
Topic Starter
XinCrin

mikoto2983 wrote:

Hi XinCrin. :) i try some mod.
please use this to create your map good one. :)

SPOILER
[Insane]
00:36:779 (6,7) -i think this is miss.
00:53:271 (9,10,11) - i think 10 is not need
01:06:705 (7,1,2,3) - here i think next idea is good
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/474480
01:09:763 (1,2,3) - here is same ☝

as all , i think these are good maps and especially [hard] is nice.
Thanks for mod , i contacting to Lissette ;)
lkx_Shore
[General]
hi,mod from my queue

[Lissette's insane]
OD8→7
00:36:779 (6,7) - what this...00:36:965 (7) - go to 00:36:965 plz >w<
00:51:974 (4) - NC
01:06:983 - add note

[Hard]
02:37:644 (2) - not beautiful :|

[Normal]
00:33:444 (6) - change to x472 y336
02:12:416 (4) - Plot why not symmetry

good luck
Topic Starter
XinCrin

lkx_shore wrote:

[General]
hi,mod from my queue

[Lissette's insane]
OD8→7
00:36:779 (6,7) - what this...00:36:965 (7) - go to 00:36:965 plz >w<
00:51:974 (4) - NC
01:06:983 - add note

[Hard]
02:37:644 (2) - not beautiful :| Fixed

[Normal]
00:33:444 (6) - change to x472 y336 No
02:12:416 (4) - Plot why not symmetry Fixed

good luck
Thanks for mod :)
V E
hi, mod req from in-game PM :)

sorry my english are bad :)
and i can't mod taiko

[Lissette's Insane]

00:36:779 (6,7) - "what this...00:36:965 (7) - go to 00:37:057 plz >w<"
00:50:492(2,3,4) - i think it's better to make (2) & (4) have the symetric slider by using (3) slider + ctrl+G

[Hard]

wait, check AIMOD, there is unsnapped object... it fit on 1/4
then, maybe make's slider curve more good and symetrical

[Normal]

00:22:326 (1) - bezier slider doesn't fit in this time imo, just normal curve...

[Easy]

fine

===
yeah, because you have some modder, there's not much modding from me...
Leader
Hi, here is my mod as requested

[Lissette's Insane]
02:19:465 (8) - Remove note?

[Hard]
00:30:479 (3,4,5,6) - They are ugly to see D:
00:36:779 (4) - Remove note
00:38:447 (5) - ^
01:09:757 (5) - Add new combo and remove nc here: 01:09:948 (1) -
01:15:507 (4) - Add nc and remove nc here: 01:15:692 (1) -
01:15:692 (1,2) - They aren't nice to play imo
01:52:382 (1,2) - Move them in another way ( like that, for example: http://puu.sh/1jiBO)
02:02:944 (3) - Move to x:256 y:140
02:35:972 (6) - Remove note

[Normal]
00:25:291 (1) - Bad shape, fix it xD
00:36:224 (5,6) - meeeh, move them to x:220 y:104 (5) and x:260 y:112 (6) or something similar

[Easy]
imo it's fine :3

Sorry for noob mod, i hope your map will get ranked soon >w<
Topic Starter
XinCrin

selova wrote:

hi, mod req from in-game PM :)

sorry my english are bad :)
and i can't mod taiko

[Lissette's Insane]

00:36:779 (6,7) - "what this...00:36:965 (7) - go to 00:37:057 plz >w<"
00:50:492(2,3,4) - i think it's better to make (2) & (4) have the symetric slider by using (3) slider + ctrl+G

[Hard]

wait, check AIMOD, there is unsnapped object... it fit on 1/4
then, maybe make's slider curve more good and symetrical

[Normal]

00:22:326 (1) - bezier slider doesn't fit in this time imo, just normal curve...

[Easy]

fine

===
yeah, because you have some modder, there's not much modding from me...
Thank you :D
Topic Starter
XinCrin

Leader wrote:

Hi, here is my mod as requested

[Lissette's Insane]
02:19:465 (8) - Remove note?

[Hard]
00:30:479 (3,4,5,6) - They are ugly to see D:
00:36:779 (4) - Remove note
00:38:447 (5) - ^
01:09:757 (5) - Add new combo and remove nc here: 01:09:948 (1) -
01:15:507 (4) - Add nc and remove nc here: 01:15:692 (1) -
01:15:692 (1,2) - They aren't nice to play imo
01:52:382 (1,2) - Move them in another way ( like that, for example: http://puu.sh/1jiBO)
02:02:944 (3) - Move to x:256 y:140
02:35:972 (6) - Remove note

[Normal]
00:25:291 (1) - Bad shape, fix it xD
00:36:224 (5,6) - meeeh, move them to x:220 y:104 (5) and x:260 y:112 (6) or something similar

[Easy]
imo it's fine :3

Sorry for noob mod, i hope your map will get ranked soon >w<
Thank you Updated~
nanda2009
yay,,

[Easy]
  1. 00:43:080 (3) - what is the intention to make this slider shape? Player can;t see it clearly due to the big circle size.. just make a normal circular slider
  2. 02:22:804 (1) - ^
  3. 00:44:562 (1) - weird shape imho, try to make it like this :
  4. unsnapped inheriting sections :v fix it.
[Lissete's Insane]
  1. 00:36:965 (7) - delete :v
    01:08:095 (6) - ^
  2. 01:09:577 (5) - ^
  3. 01:11:060 (5) - ^
  4. 01:14:025 (7) - ^
  5. 01:16:989 (6) - ^ there's so many notes like this... try to spot it by yourself and fix it.
  6. 00:53:086 (8,10) - delete, it'll follow the vocal
that's it. I think the others diff are quite good. :3 GL
Topic Starter
XinCrin

nanda2009 wrote:

yay,,

[Easy]
  1. 00:43:080 (3) - what is the intention to make this slider shape? Player can;t see it clearly due to the big circle size.. just make a normal circular slider
  2. 02:22:804 (1) - ^
  3. 00:44:562 (1) - weird shape imho, try to make it like this :
  4. unsnapped inheriting sections :v fix it.
[Lissete's Insane]
  1. 00:36:965 (7) - delete :v
    01:08:095 (6) - ^
  2. 01:09:577 (5) - ^
  3. 01:11:060 (5) - ^
  4. 01:14:025 (7) - ^
  5. 01:16:989 (6) - ^ there's so many notes like this... try to spot it by yourself and fix it.
  6. 00:53:086 (8,10) - delete, it'll follow the vocal
that's it. I think the others diff are quite good. :3 GL
Thank yoou :)
Topic Starter
XinCrin
Waiting for more mods ;)
wantuole
hi XinCrin
from my queue
I see you get so mod
maybe you need some mod able looking for,not with rankable
[easy]
00:32:703 (3) - no need red point
01:25:328 (4) - hit 300 go to hp line
01:55:717 (1,2) - groove to 2 start is ugly,fix it
02:07:964 (1,2) - ^
02:43:580 (1) - ^
02:43:580 (1,2,3) - ^
[nor]
00:26:032 (2) -
00:35:668 (4) -
00:35:668 (4,5,6) - :roll: now we get middle
[hard]
ok
02:04:611 (1,2,3) - it's offset 0.004,no use cover
[insane]
02:03:129 (4) - how about use 1/16?
02:04:611 (1,2,3) - ^ no cover,offest 0.004

;) good luck
Topic Starter
XinCrin

wantuole wrote:

hi XinCrin
from my queue
I see you get so mod
maybe you need some mod able looking for,not with rankable
[easy]
00:32:703 (3) - no need red point
01:25:328 (4) - hit 300 go to hp line
01:55:717 (1,2) - groove to 2 start is ugly,fix it
02:07:964 (1,2) - ^
02:43:580 (1) - ^
02:43:580 (1,2,3) - ^
[nor]
00:26:032 (2) -
00:35:668 (4) -
00:35:668 (4,5,6) - :roll: now we get middle
[hard]
ok
02:04:611 (1,2,3) - it's offset 0.004,no use cover
[insane]
02:03:129 (4) - how about use 1/16?
02:04:611 (1,2,3) - ^ no cover,offest 0.004

;) good luck
Thanks :D
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