tieff wrote:

You have good sence of hitsounds.
I enjoyed a lot!

[Simple]
01:14:48 (1) - Nazi. Down a bit.
01:39:31 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi. Fix spacing in this combo. Spacing beetween 01:39:31 (1,2) and 01:39:82 (2,3,4) different.
01:43:44 (1,2,3,4) - Nazi. Fix spacing in this combo.
Fixed.

[Normal]
All cool.
Yay.

[Tough]
01:05:68 (12) - Add note?
Okay.

00:22:75 (10) - New combo.
00:55:86 (7) - ^
02:02:06 (7) - New combo.
The colour of the combos get messed up, if you ask me.

01:05:81 (13) - ^
01:05:94 (14) - ^
01:10:08 (14) - ^
01:10:21 (15) - ^
01:12:80 (9) - This note should be here 01:12:67.
The rest of these, I think you misunderstood. This section follows the melody of the song, not the beat unlike Uber does.

02:10:73 (2,3) - Spacing.
Big jump.

[Umber] Why does everyone spell my difficulties wrong?
00:22:75 (16) - New combo.
Reason above.

I have 1 awesome suggestion for use.

See screenshoot? Try place note like on it and add whisltle:
00:30:77 (1) - On start of slider.
00:31:29 (2) - Whistle.
00:31:55 (3) - On end of slider.
Really, try it. It sound awesome.
For some reason it didn't sound awesome for me :<

Star+kudosu star.

Thank you very much for the kudosu star. Just to let you know, I'm suggesting everyone else to go nazi on me now. I want this map to be perfect! Just make sure that you don't make an impossible suggestion, or make one that was rejected here.

The BG looks like a cute little fish more than a rocket

Try to make the combos at least 4
[Simple]
00:56:63 (5) - Remove Finish

[Normal]
00:56:63 (10) - Remove Finish

[Tough]
Doesn't look so tough

[Uber]
00:23:53 (17) - New Combo
01:10:21 (2) - Spacing looks wrong...
01:55:86 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing...makes this part look evil
02:00:00 (3) - New Combo
02:02:84 (18) - ^

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Yay double posts.

Okay, apparently a couple of you wanted the 'finish' notes at the end of each main/spam section to be a new combo. Well, I made them a different combo. The thing is, now the colours are somewhat messed up. Tell me whether I should change the colour so that they don't mess up, or to just leave them. (If you don't get what I mean, I'm talking about the 00:22:768, 00:55:862, 01:28:965, and the 02:02:068.)

Also, I corrected a couple of errors. Now the difficulties have more features in common, so they go together better.

OVERALL
Your sliders are ugly

SIMPLE
00:41:37 (1,2,3,4) - Too complicated for an Easy
00:45:51 (1,2,3,4) - Ditto
And this goes on for a while
01:47:58 (1,2,3,4) - It's doing it again
02:18:62 (1) - End on the white tick after the current end.

NORMAL (name this Average if you're not gonna use the standard diff names)
00:23:53 (X) - I'm missing beats
00:32:58 (2) - Note partially under slider = Ugly
01:29:74 (X) - I'm missing beats again
02:02:84 (X) - And again

TOUGH
00:55:86 (1,1,1) - Place more symmetrically
02:00:77 (4) - Take away the return to get a very nice effect
02:10:73 (2,3) - Spacing

UBER
01:05:68 (17,1) - Spacing
01:36:20 (6,6) - Place beneath the slider (5) preceding.

Wojjan wrote:

OVERALL
Your sliders are ugly Awww.

SIMPLE
00:41:37 (1,2,3,4) - Too complicated for an Easy
00:45:51 (1,2,3,4) - Ditto
And this goes on for a while
01:47:58 (1,2,3,4) - It's doing it again
It's not that hard...
02:18:62 (1) - End on the white tick after the current end.
This makes it sound ugly, plus right now, it perfectly goes into the results screen right after the song 'ends'.

NORMAL (name this Average if you're not gonna use the standard diff names) I considered this earlier, but thought Normal was more Normal. It seems fine now for some reason so I changed it.
00:23:53 (X) - I'm missing beats
01:29:74 (X) - I'm missing beats again
02:02:84 (X) - And again
Made tiny breaks/warning arrows.
00:32:58 (2) - Note partially under slider = Ugly
Fixed-ish.

TOUGH
00:55:86 (1,1,1) - Place more symmetrically
02:10:73 (2,3) - Spacing
Fixed
02:00:77 (4) - Take away the return to get a very nice effect
I didn't do this to maintain consistency, but I guess it's fine for tough.

UBER
01:05:68 (17,1) - Spacing That doesn't work...
01:36:20 (6,6) - Place beneath the slider (5) preceding. Fixed

Why no star? You don't like the sliders? Well, still, thanks for modding; I hope that fixing these errors will change your view on my stupid map.

[Tough]
02:11:12 (3) - New Combo..?

[Uber]
HP decreases so fast
00:24:82 (1)~00:40:86 (3) - HP eater lol
Please use more notes on this part

Starred

minyeob wrote:

[Tough]
02:11:12 (3) - New Combo..? nnooooooo.....

[Uber]
HP decreases so fast
00:24:82 (1)~00:40:86 (3) - HP eater lol doooood.... I'm rank 3400, and I can do that part perfectly... If somebody misses a note there, they won't survive the rest of the map anyways. I did however, change the last combo, as I forgot to make them individual combos. This should help slightly with recovery.
Please use more notes on this part

Starred

Ummm... I appreciate your effort, but I didn't use anything here... <.< No kudos for you?

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osuplayer111 wrote:

[Simple]

Very much simple but good. -

[Average]

02:04:13 (1,2) - This is like a jump... and isn't ok for a normal. It's not a jump.. it's average spacing...

[Tough]

00:48:87 (1) - Too close from (8).
01:35:17 (1) - Change this slider please? Or maybe adjust it.
Fixed~♪

[Uber]

01:06:20 (1) - Too close from 01:05:94 (17) Okay fixed...
01:54:82 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - This pattern is really hard to read. The next one too. If you watch auto do it though, it's very much like a breakdance-ish move. I'm sure people will be able to catch on if they're doing Uber maps

Anyway really cool map, star.

i Think its not a bad map star

Insane:
INC LIST OF HITSOUND STUFF wooosh
Try these hitsounds, take it or leave it xD
00:58:18 (2) - Whistle
00:58:70 (4) - ^
00:59:22 (6) - ^
00:59:74 (8) - ^
01:00:25 (10) - ^
01:00:77 (12) - ^
01:01:29 (14) - ^

Ok I lied... no long list, basically, every 2,3,6,8,10,12,14 from 00:57:93 (1) - 01:14:35 (14) should have a whistle on it OTHER THAN 01:12:67 (10,11,12,13,14) AND THE TRIPLE (not those 2's) ((was that confusing? I haven't slept yet..))

I think it sounds good @_@

Tough:
Same thing with the hitsounds. If you use it, the you should have the same concept. Although I just noticed you follow the... other sound in the background.. I didn't apply them but maybe you can try and see how it sounds
02:14:48 - Nooo why'd you stop, should keep mapping here!

Average
01:47:58 - This pattern again? :\ Maybe come up with something else?

Simple:
01:06:20 - Maybe map something here rather than having the whole thing in the break.

Overall, good stuff. Nothing technical.. everything looks in order other than I think those hitsounds would sound nice + some added stuff during some of the break. Good luck! Hope I helped.

Star

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Insane:
INC LIST OF HITSOUND STUFF wooosh
Try these hitsounds, take it or leave it xD
00:58:18 (2) - Whistle
00:58:70 (4) - ^
00:59:22 (6) - ^
00:59:74 (8) - ^
01:00:25 (10) - ^
01:00:77 (12) - ^
01:01:29 (14) - ^

Ok I lied... no long list, basically, every 2,3,6,8,10,12,14 from 00:57:93 (1) - 01:14:35 (14) should have a whistle on it OTHER THAN 01:12:67 (10,11,12,13,14) AND THE TRIPLE (not those 2's) ((was that confusing? I haven't slept yet..))

I think it sounds good @_@
I think it sounds good too! I kinda did it slightly different from what you did, but I believe it achieves the same effect

Tough:
Same thing with the hitsounds. If you use it, the you should have the same concept. Although I just noticed you follow the... other sound in the background.. I didn't apply them but maybe you can try and see how it sounds I got it!
02:14:48 - Nooo why'd you stop, should keep mapping here! ....it's a break o.o

Average
01:47:58 - This pattern again? :\ Maybe come up with something else? A pattern has been taken from Uber.

Simple:
01:06:20 - Maybe map something here rather than having the whole thing in the break. I stole another pattern from Uber again. But now that I filled out this hole, I really hope that noone else complains about Average...

Overall, good stuff. Nothing technical.. everything looks in order other than I think those hitsounds would sound nice + some added stuff during some of the break. Good luck! Hope I helped.

Star

Definitely helped! I feel that I almost overkilled the hitsounds, but now that I listen to it, it sounds nice! Thanks for modding!

[Simple]

Respace the beginning. It's not consistent with the rest of the map.

00:22:75 (1) - New combo.
00:23:534 (x) - Add a note with Finish + Whistle here.
00:24:310 (x) - ^
00:55:86 (1) - Add whistle.
00:56:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:63 (1) - Add whistle.
00:57:41 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:41 (1) - Add whistle.
01:13:18 (2,3) - This spacing is not consistent with the rest of the map, example: compare it with 01:06:20 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13).
01:17:58 (4,1,2) - Please hold a consistent spacing -.-
01:28:96 (1) - New combo
01:28:96 (1) - Add whistle.
01:29:741 (x) - Add a note here with whistle + finish.
01:30:517 (x) - ^
02:04:13 (TIMING SECTION) - This Kiai Time doesn't fit, remove it.


[Average]

00:22:75 (9) - New combo.
00:22:75 (9) - Add whistle.
00:23:01 (BREAK) - Remove this break.
00:23:534 (x) - Add note here with whistle + finish.
00:24:310 (x) - ^
00:32:58 (2,1,2,3) - Respace this.
00:55:86 (1) - Add whistle.
00:56:63 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:56:63 (1) - Add whistle.
00:57:41 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:41 (1) - Add whistle.
01:28:96 (3) - New combo.
01:28:96 (3) - Add whistle.
01:29:22 (BREAK) - Remove this break.
01:29:741 (x) - Add a note here with whistle + finish.
02:02:06 (9) - New combo.
02:02:06 (9) - Add whistle.
02:02:32 (BREAK) - Remove break.
02:02:844 (x) - Add note with whistle + finish.
02:03:620 (x) - ^
02:04:13 (TIMING SECTION) - This Kiai Time doesn't fit, remove it.


[Tough]

00:22:75 (1) - Add whistle.
00:23:53 (1) - Remove new combo + add whistle.
00:24:31 (1) - ^
00:39:31 (1) - Add whistle
00:40:08 (1) - Remove new combo + add whistle.
00:40:86 (1) - ^
00:55:86 (1) - Add whistle
00:56:63 (1) - Remove new combo + add whistle.
00:57:41 (1) - ^
01:28:96 (1) - Add whistle.
01:29:74 (1) - Remove new combo + add whistle.
01:30:51 (1) - ^
02:02:06 (1) - Add whistle.
02:02:84 (1) - Remove new combo + add whistle.
02:03:62 (1) - ^
02:04:13 (TIMING SECTION) - This Kiai Time doesn't fit, remove it.


[Uber]

So tiny circles >_> Use 1 Hitcircle Size bigger.

00:22:75 (1) - Add whistle on startpoint.
00:23:53 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle on startpoint.
00:24:31 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle.
00:39:31 (1) - Add whistle on startpoint.
00:40:08 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle on startpoint.
00:40:86 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle.
00:55:86 (1) - Add whistle on startpoint.
00:56:63 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle on startpoint.
00:57:41 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle.
01:00:00 (9) - New combo.
01:04:13 (9) - ^
01:08:27 (9) - ^
01:12:67 (10) - ^
01:28:96 (1) - Add whistle on startpoint.
01:29:74 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle on startpoint.
01:30:51 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle.
01:43:70 (2,3) - Respace.
02:02:06 (1) - Add whistle on startpoint.
02:02:84 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle on startpoint.
02:03:62 (1) - Remove new combo and add whistle.
02:04:13 (TIMING SECTION) - This Kiai Time doesn't fit, remove it.


Fun map
Starred *

Simple~
01:18:10 (1) - Just a suggestion: Remove new combo, then make 01:18:62 (2) a new combo.

Tough~
02:01:16 (5) - Suggestion: This will surely throw some people off. Are you sure you don't want to move this a little farther?
02:14:48 - Suggestion: Is there a reason why the break is almost reaching the spinner? Redo maybe?

Uber~
01:09:05 (12) - I'm sorry but can you move this up 1 tick so it doesn't slightly cut off from the screen?

Nice job~

Mafiamaster wrote:

Simple~
01:18:10 (1) - Just a suggestion: Remove new combo, then make 01:18:62 (2) a new combo. Makes sense.

Tough~
02:01:16 (5) - Suggestion: This will surely throw some people off. Are you sure you don't want to move this a little farther? Fixed.
02:14:48 - Suggestion: Is there a reason why the break is almost reaching the spinner? Redo maybe? I made that like that on purpose because I noticed that there's a pause in between breaks and spinners. I dislike that pause, so this way it is creates a better effect.

Uber~
01:09:05 (12) - I'm sorry but can you move this up 1 tick so it doesn't slightly cut off from the screen? Ah inconsistent spacing. But for this I guess so.

Nice job~

[Simple]
00:33:10 (1) - stack under previous 1
kiai doesnt really fit imo
02:18:62 (1) - extend by one full beat


[Average]
00:33:62 (2) - remove whistle
00:35:68 (2) - ^ etc.
kiai doesnt fit imo


[Tough]
01:02:84 (3) - hidden under 1
01:46:29 (1) - anti-jump is kinda unintuitive
kiai


[Uber]
01:31:03 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove about half of these whistles
kiai


starred

played uber only
very coooooooooooool!
you'll be an awesome mapper!!

Star this map! uber is really good

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Urgh, horrible background image.

[Uber]
01:14:22 (13,14) - Compared to the spacing of the previous notes, this could be irritatingly confusing.

You're getting there.

Very nice

02:04:137 Either Start ki mode here or remove. You can't have 2 ki fountains That close
fountains
Fixed. And here is your bubble.

uber~

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Bleeechh such a small bubble pop, i apologize.

Simple:
01:47:06 (3,1) - IMO, there really shouldn't be jumps in an Easy difficulty.

Lack of breaks is slightly concerning, but its only in Uber, so it feels alright to me.

Re-bubbled.

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No problems except some reaaaaally weird patterns in uber that I had no trouble FCing in my second try

Congratulations, Harris73, for getting your first map ranked. Uber changed alot and it's all good now.

/me is late

Why can't I delete this post

Keeping osu! copyright free!