Chewin wrote:

Recheck to repair the bubble. >w<;

[Normal]

01:00:493 (2) - I see you edited this part, add new combo. done o7

[Hard]

00:35:180 (3) - Reduce this slider by 1/4 removing whistle from the reverse arrow and adding a circle on 00:35:883:

SPOILER

done, also added whistle on 00:35:883- circle owo
01:28:618 (1) - Remove whistle
done o7
01:29:555 (2) - Remove this slider and follow this rhythm, it fits much better. You can use whistle on (3) if you like it:

SPOILER

done, added whistle on 01:30:024- and 01:30:258- , seems fine? oAo;;;a

Chewin wrote:

Nice, rebubbled

Katty Pie wrote:

Go go moe :3 good luck with rank

1. I see you're using a clap on a custom slidertick. You're using a raw hitclap right from the template skin right?
   In osu! hitsounds, a xxx-hitclap, xxx-hitwhistle, and xxx-hitfinish are always combined with xxx-hitnormal. Without hitnormal, those claps, whistles and finishes sounds awkward and rather harsh. And... you're using just a raw hitclap. My opinion is, you should combine the clap with the hitnormal manually from a sound editor (e.g. Audacity) so it fits with the hitsounds and doesn't sounds harsh. ~This is just an opinion, you're free to apply or not to apply this
2. BG 800x600 looks blurry here >< why don't you get a bigger resolution for this? 1024x768 maybe?

1. AR +2? Current AR is too low and doesn't matched up with the SV.
2. 00:09:868 - Add note here?
3. 00:11:743 - ^
4. 00:24:868 (3) - nazi - Rotate this 55 degree with selection centre origin?
5. 00:27:680 (2) - Feels awkward. How about this?
6. 00:32:368 (3) - If you're going to consist the hitsounds from beforesliders, could you please remove the whistle from the slider reverse?
7. 00:33:774 (4) - Yep, to consist hitsounds, could you remove the whistle here?
8. 00:37:055 (4) - Split into two hitcircle?
9. 00:40:805 (5) - awkward flow... how about this? http://puu.sh/18LAW
10. 00:52:993 (2) - Bad flow, ctrl+r please? *Don't forget to readjust the notes after these
11. 01:07:289 - Add note here?
12. 01:11:039 - ^
13. 01:15:493 (1,2,3,4) - please, pleeeease clear these and make this section as a break (01:14:555 - 01:16:899)
14. 01:28:149 (1,2) - Unstack please?
15. 01:32:368 (1) - nazi - move this circle to x:104 y:280 ? This will make a better flow, unblocked note (by spinner hitburst) and unconfusing movement (if you were playing FL here you might confused where's the slider head, left or right, youknowwhatimeanright)
16. 01:35:649 (1,2) - Unstack please?
17. 01:37:055 (3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/18LD2

1. 00:15:493 (1) - Players might get confused to slide here since the shape was same as the before slider but with a different SV, another slider shape maybe?
2. 00:27:211 (2,3) - How about this? http://puu.sh/18LDE
3. 00:38:930 (3) - Remove finish from slider start?
4. 00:39:868 (1) - ^
5. 00:40:805 (2) - Replace this with http://puu.sh/18LEw ? With whistle on those slider ends.
6. 01:11:743 (1,2,3) - Bad polarity (there's a note on blue tick without any switches), how about replacing this into slider with one reverse?
7. 01:15:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Like Normal, could you pleeease clear this section and make it a break?
8. 01:25:571 (3) - bad flow, this note is confusing since there was 01:24:633 (1) - and next after the slider there was 01:25:805 (4) - . I afraid players wil hit 01:25:805 (4) - first instead of this note, especially if they're playing with FL.
9. 01:24:868 (2) - Whistl'd this slider? Just click the slider and click whistle. (you don't need to set the whistle on the start or the end, just allover the slider, youknowwhatimeanhere)
10. 01:28:149 (3,4) - How about these? http://puu.sh/18LGr
11. 01:30:493 (4,5) - Merge these into one slider?
12. 01:34:946 (3) - Remove clap?
13. 01:42:211 (2) - Bad flow, how about this? http://puu.sh/18LGW
14. 01:43:383 (5) - bad flow too, how about this? http://puu.sh/18LHj
15. 01:44:321 (2) - Split into two circle?
16. 01:46:664 (2,4) - ctrl+r? Better flow if like this imo

inverness wrote:

[General]

1. I see you're using a clap on a custom slidertick. You're using a raw hitclap right from the template skin right?
   In osu! hitsounds, a xxx-hitclap, xxx-hitwhistle, and xxx-hitfinish are always combined with xxx-hitnormal. Without hitnormal, those claps, whistles and finishes sounds awkward and rather harsh. And... you're using just a raw hitclap. My opinion is, you should combine the clap with the hitnormal manually from a sound editor (e.g. Audacity) so it fits with the hitsounds and doesn't sounds harsh. ~This is just an opinion, you're free to apply or not to apply this

lolcubes wrote:

I see you gave a kudo to this post. Do you intend to change anything? If yes this needs to be popped.

1. 00:28:852 (4) - k
2. 00:29:203 (2) - d
3. 00:29:555 (1,1,1,1,1) - ddkdk (or ddkkk) - the kats should be better now with these k placement (:
4. 00:43:852 (1) - End spinner 1/4 after? Quoting from NatsumeRin here here
   

   you don't need to finish it at the blue line (because it doesn't matter to a sound), finish it somewhere more "common"

5. 00:52:758 (3,4,5) - Personally I'd change (3) to k, and delete (4)~

1. 00:02:836 (4,5,6) - Why inconsistent spacing here o.o
2. 00:11:743 (x) - Add note with new combo here? Feels quite weird if the rhythm is discontinued...
3. 00:12:211 (1) - If you changed above, you could just simply adjust 00:11:743 and the following slider and by this code:
   

   315,118,11743,5,0,0:0
   221,140,12211,2,0,B|186:188|118:187|118:187|80:243|112:303,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0

   ...the following two notes shouldn't be hard to adjust (:
4. 00:41:743 (1,2,3) - ...it's very visible that you're forcing these three in the center orz, it'll be MUCH better if you put (1) in ~x:204 y:37 and the following (2,3) in ~x:93 y:192 - this way, you can still get (2,3) centered but in much less forcing angle~
5. 00:47:836 (3) - Rotate around ~40-45° selection centre to get a slider fan with previous (2)?
6. 01:15:522 - Drag break manually here

1. 00:00:961 (2,3) - - Uhm, personally I disliked their current placement, the spacing from (3) to (4) could be very deceiving imo... A jump like you did on 00:04:243 (1,2) is MUCH more intuitive, really (:
2. 00:14:086 (7,1) - Although (1) is a slowdown slider, use a normal spacing for these two (just stack it to 00:13:149 (5)'s end) - again, for intuitivity...
3. 00:24:868 (1) - Move the red waypoint to ~x:409 y:59
4. 00:42:680 (2) - ...I wonder why don't you just create a symmetrical jump here? Plays better imo (just CTRL+H and CTRL+J this slider from its current position)
5. 00:50:649 (8) - I highly suggest to CTRL+G this slider, the circular movement here will play MUCH more natural for players~
6. 01:05:649 (4,5,6) - Uhm, spacing issue again here (5,6)... Try this though:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:28:618 (1) - Err, what are you aiming from this slider's shape? It can be made much tidier at least (I played around with this and got this shape, it's much neater though xD)
   

   384,240,88618,6,0,B|421:225|458:239|458:239|421:200|436:134|496:126,1,225,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0

1. 00:28:618 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Once more I recommend to use gradual volume increase here~
2. 00:45:258 (4) - Whistle?

1. 1.Making a 1/4 beats at the begining of the song, that's better for player to catch the rhythm.
2. 2.Making a triple beats at the begining of the red line, and 5 beats from the white line are usually nice tempo.

1. 00:01:196 (1,2,3,4) - I feel better if it's only three beats here like 00:01:196 - d, 00:01:430 - d, 00:01:664 - d
2. 00:03:188 (2) - remove
3. 00:04:594 (4) - ^
4. 00:04:946 (1,2,3,4) - same as the first one
5. 00:10:688 (2) - remove
6. 00:11:625 (1) - remove
7. 00:12:797 (4) - ^
8. 00:13:032 (5) - ^
9. 00:29:321 (3,4,1,1,1,1,1) - ddkdkdk
10. 00:37:407 - k
11. 00:37:641 (1) - remove
12. 00:43:149 (1,2,1) - kkd

inverness wrote:

[SB Optimization]
I have to know whether you want to get my detailed explanations on this or you just want me to optimize the SB by myself.
Detailed explanations might require some little scripting skills though, but if you're curious about SB and want to fix anything by your own I'll explain you thoroughly and completely about this, don't worry

inverness wrote:

inverness wrote:

[SB Optimization]
I have to know whether you want to get my detailed explanations on this or you just want me to optimize the SB by myself.
Detailed explanations might require some little scripting skills though, but if you're curious about SB and want to fix anything by your own I'll explain you thoroughly and completely about this, don't worry

you haven't reply this umm i'm curious .w.

- t e n n y a - wrote:

sorry uhum I was on my mid term exam D: so how when we can discuss it? owo

1. 00:03:657 (1) - delete this and put d on 00:07:407 - , maybe better for difficulty
2. 00:30:727 (1) - the color and sound is odd, this is a k now
3. 00:28:032 - add d? it fits the vocal more
4. 00:41:743 (1) - remove finish?
5. 00:59:907 - add d? the pattern from 00:45:493 - to here is made of mostly triplet, this addition will make change and sound more interesting IMO

- t e n n y a - wrote:

added SB by inverness on 13 Oct 2012 please re download! ^^

Matoryoshika wrote:

- t e n n y a - wrote:

added SB by inverness on 13 Oct 2012 please re download! ^^

truly godlike SB-er

1. The Taiko SB orz... it has parts like this:
   
   Just scale it smaller though, to prevent overlap with pippi's graphic (:
   

    S,0,-3257,-210,0.8,0.8

2. 'laurier.png' and 'tennya.png' has unnecessary transparency, please remove it (There must not be any unnecessary transparency around storyboarded images)
3. ...err, I'll just quote this:
   

   The maximum dimensions for tall or wide scrolling images are 640x1440 and 1920x480 respectively. This is for the sake of gameplay performance, image loading time, and filesize.

   ...just resize BG2,3,5,6 to 640x480 and BG1,4 to 480x640, so you don't need the scale code anymore (:
4. To tennya : Remove the countdown, it's not needed anymore because of the SB code :3

1. 00:27:680 (3) - ...isn't there supposed to be clap on slider's end? o.o
2. 01:29:555 (2) - I see you changed (1)... Don't forget to adjust (2) by placing it in ~x:429 y:47 as well :3

Niva wrote:

...uhm...
(don't kd this)

[Hard]

1. 00:27:680 (3) - ...isn't there supposed to be clap on slider's end? o.o done owob
2. 01:29:555 (2) - I see you changed (1)... Don't forget to adjust (2) by placing it in ~x:429 y:47 as well :3 done owobb

...*stres*

Itu title text-nya udah dipindahin, kalau mau recolor bilang aja nanti diurus (: terima kasih QAQ
...beneran ini bikin stres orz >_<

Niva wrote:

*stress*

Itu 'thank you for playing'-nya masih ada unnecessary transparency (udah dites di Photoshop) orz ._.

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

Garven wrote:

Heya

[General]
That spinner skin is very very bright. Almost blindingly-so. Think you can tone down the white level a little? done o7
Your SB elements that are larger than 800x600 need to be resized. This means BG (1), 2, 4, 5, and 6 are all too large. fixed

[Normal]
OD +1
00:08:461 (2) - This slider is looking kind of squareish. Think you can smooth it out a little bit? done
00:30:493 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Give at least two beats. ah ok, also lowing the volume on the end of the spinner
00:45:493 (1) - ^ ^
01:32:368 (1) - ^ ^

[Hard]
OD +1
00:01:664 (4,5) - Not sure why this spacing is so large omg fixed
00:37:993 (1) - This slider is rather square too. Might be better if you also did a copy/paste of it and did a rotation instead of drawing a new slider at 00:38:930 (3) - . This way it looks more uniform and clean. done~
also made some change at 00:41:743 (1,2)- because the first slider touched the hp bar Orz

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:28:383 (1) - End this at 00:29:555 -

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0

Niva wrote:

(do not kudosu)

In Taiko diff, please change

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0

into

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0

(current code makes the Taiko diff won't end until 244515ms or until the player plays ESCAPE, orz ._.)

inverness wrote:

Niva wrote:

(do not kudosu)

In Taiko diff, please change

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,244265,244515,1,0

into

//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
Sprite,Fail,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider-fail.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
Sprite,Pass,Centre,"SB\taiko-slider.png",260,61
 F,0,-210,310,0,1
 F,0,111226,111476,1,0

(current code makes the Taiko diff won't end until 244515ms or until the player plays ESCAPE, orz ._.)

ouch copypasta mistake

and http://puu.sh/1h4wn - the updated taiko diff

orz i'm sorry nya T.T just poke Niva asap after you've updated this

inverness wrote:

Yay it's finally ranked nyanya \:3/ Congratulations!

my first ranked storyboard yeah \o/