Steph De Chine wrote:

from steph's queue
好音乐，我喜欢~~

Fast mod结果：

Easy
00:22:759 (1) - 还是换成3个note？按照我個人習慣開場第一個note是slider``因為如果開場circle的話非常容易出100對於SS黨來說是不可饒恕的(關我什麽事``我又不是SS黨)同時hard難度已經是3個circle了``所以這裡不再重複
01:05:020 (1,2) - 这个把红点的位置调到中间？让那个红点代表那个音会好些fixed

Normal
01:05:542 (5) - 或许再拉出来一个折返箭头？那個音其實在這裡01:06:325 - 而不是1/3的位置(於是見挺多人這裡不知道停頓多久還是加個circle看看效果怎麼樣好了)


Insane倒是颇具Insane之风……不错

Steph De Chine wrote:

from steph's queue
好音乐，我喜欢~~


Hardy
01:23:803 (1,2), 01:31:379 (3,4), 01:34:391 (4,5), 01:47:718 (1,2) 这里，这里，这里，还有这里……你是认真的么？就算你是个程序员，不在意Warnings，可这里已经成ERROR了啊！我这里看没有啊。。。。。

JoJo wrote:

From ingame PM~ OvO

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff OAQ
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this >_>
3. Black - Just suggestion for reference OvO

[General]

1. 好像没问题呢!

[Hardy]

1. 这难度名是特意的么? =v= 第一眼看到的时候还以为是手抖写错了 >_> 抖>~<
2. 01:23:281 (5) - nazi来了..放到x:348 y:28吧 =v= 嗯
3. 01:42:325 (8,1) - 我觉得这边遮得太厉害了...略丑 嗯这个我再想想
4. 01:54:233 (x) - 加个圈圈? o.o 不了不了

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. 咱堅信著 , 咱會吐槽那個bookmark

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   01:14:412 - 這裡有紅線跟綠線 , 咱看綠線沒調速度為甚麼不乾脆直接在紅線上加kiai time就好 , 咱感覺那個綠線是多餘的
   01:23:803 - 這裡也是..同樣個點有兩個音量?!把紅線改成40%就好 不用在去加個60%綠線~
   01:26:803 -
   01:32:904 -
   01:44:804 -
   01:50:633 -
   01:56:393 -
   
   
2. 00:24:846 (2) - 在x:116 y:184 ?
3. 00:33:194 (1) - 感覺開頭的clap,有些多餘 ;w;
4. 00:35:281 (3) - NC ?! 咱想說跟00:32:151 (1) - 一樣
5. 00:39:977 (1) - 第4個點x:40 y:60
6. 00:46:238 (4) - NC
7. 01:05:020 (1,2) - 在咱的眼裡..這有些不好看
8. 01:11:281 (3) - NC
9. 01:14:412 (2) - ^ (咱是想說kiai time開始 所以NC)
10. 01:53:513 (3) - ^

[Normal]

1. 無用的綠線:
   01:14:412 -
   01:23:803 -
   01:26:803 -
   01:32:904 -
   01:44:804 -
   01:50:633 -
   01:56:393 -
   
   
2. 00:46:238 (7) - ^
3. 01:17:542 (6,1) - 交換NC

[Hardy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   02:02:298 -
   
   
2. 00:27:977 (2) - NC ~ 咱是想說緩速
3. 00:35:542 (4) - ^
4. 01:00:064 (2) - NC ~ 你懂得XD
5. 01:15:194 (2) - ^
6. 01:18:585 (3) - ^
7. 01:21:716 (2) - ^
8. 01:24:053 (2) - ^
9. 01:31:633 (4) - ^

[Insane]

1. 00:23:021 (2,4) - 咱看到這裡直覺直接告訴咱要NC
2. 00:29:542 (3) - NC~
3. 00:55:107 (1,2) - 交換NC
4. 00:59:281 (7) - NC?~

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
M4M.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[Hardy]

1. 無用的綠線:
   02:02:298 -
   这个删掉了
   
2. 00:27:977 (2) - NC ~ 咱是想說緩速
3. 00:35:542 (4) - ^
4. 01:00:064 (2) - NC ~ 你懂得XD
5. 01:15:194 (2) - ^
6. 01:18:585 (3) - ^
7. 01:21:716 (2) - ^
8. 01:24:053 (2) - ^
9. 01:31:633 (4) - ^

l1106188 wrote:

早灣 >w<
M4M.

• 
  "re" 意思是 "remove"
  黑色 只是建議,不喜歡可以略過~OAO
  藍色 是要討論的問題
  紅色 是unrankable

[general]

1. 咱堅信著 , 咱會吐槽那個bookmark

[Easy]

1. 無用的綠線:其實這些線很明顯能看出來是Insane的遺留物的吧`````
   01:14:412 - 這裡有紅線跟綠線 , 咱看綠線沒調速度為甚麼不乾脆直接在紅線上加kiai time就好 , 咱感覺那個綠線是多餘的
   01:23:803 - 這裡也是..同樣個點有兩個音量?!把紅線改成40%就好 不用在去加個60%綠線~
   01:26:803 -
   01:32:904 -
   01:44:804 -
   01:50:633 -
   01:56:393 -
   
   
2. 00:24:846 (2) - 在x:116 y:184 ?fixed
3. 00:33:194 (1) - 感覺開頭的clap,有些多餘 ;w;fixed
4. 00:35:281 (3) - NC ?! 咱想說跟00:32:151 (1) - 一樣fixed
5. 00:39:977 (1) - 第4個點x:40 y:60fixed
6. 00:46:238 (4) - NCkeep
7. 01:05:020 (1,2) - 在咱的眼裡..這有些不好看其實modder在提出某些不好看的地方的時候應該給出一個自己認為好看的方案給mapper``不然我是無法修改的``我自己都不知道該怎麼拉才算好看``你說是吧>.<
8. 01:11:281 (3) - NCkeep
9. 01:14:412 (2) - ^ (咱是想說kiai time開始 所以NC)fixed
10. 01:53:513 (3) - ^fixed

[Normal]

1. 無用的綠線:fixed
   01:14:412 -
   01:23:803 -
   01:26:803 -
   01:32:904 -
   01:44:804 -
   01:50:633 -
   01:56:393 -
   
   
2. 00:46:238 (7) - ^fixed
3. 01:17:542 (6,1) - 交換NCfixed

[Insane]

1. 00:23:021 (2,4) - 咱看到這裡直覺直接告訴咱要NC太短不好看
2. 00:29:542 (3) - NC~keep
3. 00:55:107 (1,2) - 交換NCkeep
4. 00:59:281 (7) - NC?~keep

good song & good SB & good luck ~
這次wing醬的譜面insane可能會有很多NC問題 ... 有點太多NC 感覺NC得有些亂 咱有點眼花了 ;w;怎麼說呢``只能說每個人加NC的習慣都是不同的``
加油:3~

• • 00:29:020 (4) - 要扭是可以.. 但就E來說.. 好像太扭了些..>_>
  • 00:49:368 (1) - finish? 效果挺好的
  • 01:49:176 (4) - 改下形狀吧.. 不然跟 01:47:718 (1) - 感覺好緊._. 大概像這樣w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440981

• • 00:51:977 (3) - 左移一格吧~
  • 00:52:499 (4) - 移到[X:316 Y:228]?
  • 01:20:672 (1) - 移到[X:332 Y:324]~ 改了的話後面間距自己條一下唄o.o

• • 01:46:261 (4) - 嘛... 可以再包好些唄x3 由上數下來第2個白點移到[X:232 Y:160]如何~? (Nazi.. Orz)

• • 02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度差評._. 幫你弄了個>_>.. 我把間距縮小了些.. DS大好難排=A= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441048
  

  250,39,121117,5,0
  280,28,121235,1,0
  311,28,121353,1,8
  341,38,121471,1,0
  364,59,121589,1,0
  379,86,121707,1,0
  382,117,121826,1,0
  373,147,121944,1,0
  349,167,122062,1,12

12BARRY21 wrote:

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Hardy>

• • 01:46:261 (4) - 嘛... 可以再包好些唄x3 由上數下來第2個白點移到[X:232 Y:160]如何~? (Nazi.. Orz)

好~我调整了下
Good~ ww

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Lan wings & -Baby Strawberry-



[Hardy]
这个难度有一个error，但是完全不知道为什么

SPOILER

我也不知道啊OJZ
01:33:399 (2) - 在01:33:317 (x) - 加一个note 其实吧我觉得没什么必要。。。
02:02:062 (7) - NC 好~



总体上感觉hardy真的很精致~Insane手感不错~

12BARRY21 wrote:

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
----------------------

<Easy>

• • 00:29:020 (4) - 要扭是可以.. 但就E來說.. 好像太扭了些..>_> fixed
  • 00:49:368 (1) - finish? 效果挺好的fixed
  • 01:49:176 (4) - 改下形狀吧.. 不然跟 01:47:718 (1) - 感覺好緊._. 大概像這樣w http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/440981fixed

<Normal>

• • 00:51:977 (3) - 左移一格吧~ 00:50:933 (1,2) - 我这两个右移吧
  • 00:52:499 (4) - 移到[X:316 Y:228]?fixed
  • 01:20:672 (1) - 移到[X:332 Y:324]~ 改了的話後面間距自己條一下唄o.o于是后面一堆要我改```

<Insane>

• • 02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧度差評._. 幫你弄了個>_>.. 我把間距縮小了些.. DS大好難排=A= http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/441048 间距不改``最后一段stream我不加大间距都不错了``弧度我重新弄弄好了
  

  250,39,121117,5,0
  280,28,121235,1,0
  311,28,121353,1,8
  341,38,121471,1,0
  364,59,121589,1,0
  379,86,121707,1,0
  382,117,121826,1,0
  373,147,121944,1,0
  349,167,122062,1,12

渣mod... T_T
加油啦~

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, Lan wings & -Baby Strawberry-


[Insane]
超级好！
就是01:37:862 (2) - 01:44:308 (1) - 01:56:393 (1) - 01:59:227 (1) - 这种我打的时候总是移动太快，导致冲出圈圈了特别是01:56:393 (1) - 会断……所以把slider拉直一些吧~明显能看出来slider扭过``自己打图的时候就应该在扭的地方稍微停一停``这属于读图问题``不改

[Easy]
00:52:499 (1,2,3,4) - 整体右上一格fixed
00:58:760 (1) - 这个形状也很诡异，完全可以跟00:57:194 (3,4) - 成三角，又包住01:00:325 (2) - fixed
02:00:644 (4) - 弧度大一些fixed

总体上感觉hardy真的很精致~Insane手感不错~

Selee wrote:

Middleisland绝赞 =w=
做的不错 加油咯

我可不可以不去上课了 233

12:23 *Lan wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165554 MiddleIsland - Vision]
12:23 Lan wings: 打打看``
12:23 Selee: ~
12:23 Lan wings: I难度和N难度
12:23 Selee: 下载中
12:23 Lan wings: N难度算是我这段时间来自认为做的最好的图了
12:24 Selee: 嗯
12:24 Lan wings: 包括音效
12:24 Selee: N难度么
12:25 Lan wings: 嗯
12:26 Selee: 这段
12:26 Selee: 用BIOS里面的定音鼓呗
12:27 Selee: 那个..
12:27 Selee: 等下
12:27 Lan wings: 啥来的
12:27 Selee: Normal-finish换一下试试
12:27 Lan wings: ?
12:27 Selee: 我试试=w=
12:28 Lan wings: bios里的哪个音效
12:28 Selee: =w= 貌似不错
12:28 Lan wings: 哪个0.0
12:29 Selee: soft-finish1
12:29 Selee: 你改成 normal-finish加进你的
12:29 Lan wings: 哦
12:29 Selee: 听了一下 还有个意见
12:29 Lan wings: 那个底鼓会不会太大声`在I里
12:29 Selee: 00:25:629 这段 建议音量再低点 尤其是那个铃铛
12:30 Selee: soft-finish
12:30 Selee: 声音大了点
12:30 Lan wings: soft-finish要调小音量吗?
12:30 Selee: 20%感觉不错
12:30 Selee: 前面这段钢琴感觉还是小点音量比较好
12:31 Selee: 00:25:629 这里的线改20% imo
12:31 Lan wings: 改了
12:31 Selee: 你听鼓了么
12:32 Lan wings: 听了
12:32 Selee: 感觉呢
12:32 Lan wings: 01:38:854 (1) -
12:32 Lan wings: 你这里开始听听看
12:32 Selee: 嗯啊
12:33 Lan wings: 你听有没问题
12:33 Selee: 之后没啥问题的感觉 之前有点
12:33 Lan wings: 换了之后没问题么
12:33 Selee: 嘛 我觉得挺合适的 本来就高潮部分
12:33 Selee: 他也有配鼓
12:34 Lan wings: 不知道是不是我耳机问题
12:34 Selee: 咋了
12:34 Lan wings: 感觉有点太吵0.0
12:34 Selee: ._. 我还觉得很给力呢
12:34 Selee: 无所谓你咯
12:34 Selee: kiai就这感觉
12:34 Lan wings: 应该说那个鼓的回音
12:34 Selee: 假如我是编曲的话我都会加上这个鼓 lol
12:35 Lan wings: 那个鼓很大的杂音
12:35 Selee: 嗯 就是回音啊
12:35 Selee: 感觉很好啊
12:35 Lan wings: 莫非是我耳机问题么0.0
12:35 Selee: 或许我耳机质量太好? xD
12:35 Lan wings: 还是和监听耳机有关
12:37 Lan wings: I难度我感觉那个鼓好像有点太大声?
12:38 Selee: 00:39:977 (3) - 有种该拉长到红线的感觉
12:38 Selee: 或者把尾巴静音掉吧
12:38 Selee: 连着两下有点不舒服
12:38 Selee: 我觉得吧
12:39 Selee: 高潮这段就是给人比较震撼的感觉
12:39 Lan wings: 我已经听不出来有两下了
12:39 Selee: 定音鼓就有这样的效果..于是我还是觉得挺合适的
12:39 Lan wings: 那hitnormal呢
12:39 Selee: 其他感觉都挺合的
12:39 Selee: 嗯 感觉不错
12:41 Selee: hardy无kiai?
12:41 Selee: w/e.
12:41 Lan wings: 咦
12:41 Lan wings: 他又弄不见了
12:41 Selee: ._.
12:41 Selee: 这无所谓
12:42 Lan wings: 没删红线就好
12:43 Lan wings: 刚开始做的时候他删绿线把红线也给删了0.0
12:43 Lan wings: 诶``求post
12:44 Lan wings: 挂个irc什么的=w=
12:44 Lan wings: 骗SP
12:45 Selee: 嗯..
12:45 Selee: 咋save来着的
12:45 Lan wings: 现在给别人kd自己会sp+1
12:45 Lan wings: log
12:45 Lan wings: savelog

wantuole wrote:

路过~
mark and star

1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy

1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点？
3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC，否则的话这个combo有点太长了
4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛？
5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上，比在尾巴上效果要好
6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话，我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏～
7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上

1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistle
2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^
3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^
4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^
6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^
7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^
8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^
9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^
10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^

1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点？
2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^
3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返，起点位置不用动stack就很好
   
4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^

1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44？因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢
2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次（折返3次），然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider，另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider，也是总共4次
   

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住，因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)

[E]
00:32:151 (1) - 稍微超了点边``我转一下吧
00:45:716 (3) - 不出网格就不改了
01:34:391 (2) - 也是转一下

[N]
00:27:455 (1) - 朝右上挪一小格 好看些fixed
00:31:107 (5,6) - 同不是很好看这是为Hardy难度做预防的排法``
00:55:629 (1) - fixed
01:26:303 (4,1) - 不是很好看？keep
01:51:593 (3) - ^keep

[I]
01:28:328 (1) - 只是擦一点网格无视
02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧形排得更好看些这是一个带有一点尖锐的弧形``旋转一下角度后是上下对称的

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]

1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy哭了这kiai怎么少了一截

[Easy]

1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型？好!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点？跟这个对称?01:15:977 (3) -
3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC，否则的话这个combo有点太长了如果这里加我前面这里也得加了01:17:542 (1) -
4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛？不够弯?感觉差不多了啊http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/444536看approach
5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上，比在尾巴上效果要好尾巴的whistle我就不去掉了``那个高音还是要用到的
6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话，我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏～
7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上放后面不好听``我直接删掉吧

[Normal]

1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistlewhistle本来只是想作为一个点缀``加多了不好``你说了就加吧
2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^这个加了后神了01:17:803 - 这条绿线=w=
3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^fixed
5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^这里不放``01:26:303 (4) - 倒是这里可以放一个
7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^不放
8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^不放
9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^不放
10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^这个音量比较难搞``

[Insane]

1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44？因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢可以
2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次（折返3次），然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider，另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider，也是总共4次节奏是摆了``但是排列该怎么摆好呢```
   

差不多就这些了～～star & good luck~~

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住，因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)


[H]
00:26:673 (5) - 这个应该还好吧。。。我这里看好像没有盖到。。。

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]


[Hardy]

1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点？
2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^ 其实我还是觉得这样还可以。。。要不然除了叠就是等距没什么意思，毕竟是hard了嘛~
3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返，起点位置不用动stack就很好
   
4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^ 嗯我觉得这个好听，fixed~！

差不多就这些了～～star & good luck~~

1. fine

1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC. If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern)
2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow more
   

   148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0

3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tight

1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this
2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?
3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line
4. 01:26:675 - ^
5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓
   
   SPOILER

   204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
   488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
   376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
   248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
   284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
   112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
   200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0

6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )
7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?
8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
   
   SPOILER

   154,187,101829,5,12
   214,119,102077,1,0
   295,157,102325,1,0
   285,246,102573,1,8
   196,264,102821,1,0

9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.
10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green line

1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. )
2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity　o.o

1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far )
2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well.
3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green line
4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look

wantuole wrote:

[General]
nothing
[Easy]
01:05:020 (1) - 延续 01:01:890 (1,2) 的旋转梗。fixed
01:24:803 (2,3) - ctrl+h对称01:21:194 (2,3) ,故意向左移了一点 感觉3→1距离有点近fixed
01:41:829 (1) - 太贴近4了 像01:39:350 (2,3) 这样摆设fixed
01:56:393 (1) - 不美观 太长的画条中间的红点转折太容易看清楚. 红点移动到正中间fixed
02:00:644 (4) - 重音 这个要更佳力度点的摆设 旋转-90° 往上升的方向。fixed
[nor]
nothing
[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧，太多东西挤着角落
[Insane]
ar-1？用note和短slider组成的梗显得有些空洞了。不如hady的slider梗好。当然减少ar只是个人看法。AR不减``至于你说的长短slider``低难度当然应该用长slider``高难度用长slider是属于浪费节奏的行为``我的节奏观念是能用上的节奏就一定会用上``抱歉

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Lan wings =v=

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC.fixed If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern)
2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow morefixed
   

   148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0

3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tightfixed

[Normal]

1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this fixed
2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?Normal's hitsound is a new attempt``so different from the other diff
3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line01:20:672 - del here and volume+20%
4. 01:26:675 - ^This is not unnecessary
5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓fixed
   
   SPOILER

   204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
   488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
   376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
   248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
   284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
   112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
   200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0

6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )fixed
7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?Not intentional
8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
   
   SPOILER

   154,187,101829,5,12
   214,119,102077,1,0
   295,157,102325,1,0
   285,246,102573,1,8
   196,264,102821,1,0

9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.fixedhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/445996
10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green lineThis is not unnecessary

[Insane]

1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far )fixed
2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well. fixed
3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green linefixed
4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look ok:<

good :3 star☆~

Good luck~

wantuole wrote:

[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧，太多东西挤着角落 诶。。我没太明白这是怎么个改法。。。

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

[Hardy]

1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. ) i didn't change this, i think i should be fine>~<
2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity　o.o true, changed!~

good :3 star☆~

Good luck~

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

关了letterboxfixed

hardy难度的kiai Starts on 01:14:933 改成 Starts on 01:14:412

既然写了piano和violin那么可以多写点类似的东西方tags 比如orchestra 不知道东西方tags都有啥``等你上了再问问你

[Insane]

这个难度的artist和title是空的 请补上更新后不知道为啥就变这样了皮皮三人日虫虫

00:32:499 (2,3,4) - 间距差有点明显fixed
00:36:846 (2) - 00:46:238 (1) - 这两个slider如果想做blanket那么就还能再调整一下弧度fixed
01:01:107 (6) - 好像听起来没错 但事实上那四个钢琴是1+3个1/8 不是1/6折返 怎么改看你了这里没跟钢琴呀``00:54:586 (3) - 类似这里的
01:20:672 (1) - slider有点歪歪?
01:48:447 (1,2,3) -在kiai期间你的hitnormal音比较不明显但在这里突然又有了 这三个slider还好 01:49:662 (7) - 之后的这个slider的开头的默认hitnormal就显得有点违和这个等你上线再跟你讨论``

[Hardy]

00:37:368 (2) - 感觉结尾那个弧形(红点后的)有点太尖锐了 how about http://puu.sh/1dfQB
01:03:977 (5) - 这个以后说

[normal]

00:47:803 (3) - 反正就是不圆这个我没要圆形啊``只是要个类似马蹄的形状而已0.0
01:54:953 (6) - ^^
01:14:412 (1) - 这个也不太对称 你经常把node最后一个点放的太远 记住把那个node放在sliderend的中心就好做对称了 然后有红点的地方要保证红点和左右两点三点一线唔``这个平时拉slider的时候都没怎么留意到``于是记住了``估计是拉中间的node的时候``后面的又弄的对不齐了
02:00:644 (3) - ^fixed
01:23:020 (4) - 这个就是典型的例子 node放的太远fixed
01:35:879 (1) - 这个也是 调整node 后可以blanket的更好fixed


[Easy]

01:54:953 (3) - 这blanket也有点不舒服 不用四点式吗修了下``

LKs wrote:

recheck:

timing check:

irc

18:57 LKs: hi
18:57 Lan wings: ._.
18:57 LKs: ._.
19:00 LKs: ._.timing
19:00 LKs: ._.有没有人提过
19:00 Lan wings: timing有啥0.0
19:00 Lan wings: 没有``
19:00 LKs: 好我提
19:00 LKs: 等会
19:00 Lan wings: 我开坑直接找的加文测timing
19:01 LKs: 。garven不是timing很准的那一类人
19:01 LKs: timing找charls
19:01 Lan wings: 哦
19:01 Lan wings: 笔记
19:01 Lan wings: 当时问人``就让我找加文和另一个人了
19:01 LKs: 不过他们都比较有耐心
19:02 Lan wings: 话说现在的2kd好像改了啊
19:02 LKs: 怎么
19:02 Lan wings: 你mod的前一天我刚更新过
19:02 Lan wings: 你的是2kd
19:02 LKs: 然后就没了吗
19:02 Lan wings: 不是啊
19:02 Lan wings: 就是给了你2kd
19:02 LKs: 然后呢
19:03 Lan wings: 原来不是7天内不能更新不能有人post么
19:03 LKs: 嗯
19:03 Lan wings: 现在好像只要7天内没有人post就可以了``
19:03 Lan wings: 我在你post的前一天更新过``你一样有2kd拿
19:03 LKs: 好
19:03 LKs: 大快
19:03 *Lan wings is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165554 MiddleIsland - Vision [Insane]]
19:04 LKs: 嗯
19:04 LKs: 等下 我得确认
19:04 LKs: 01:12:325 (2) -
19:04 LKs: 你在这里放个note
19:04 LKs: 听得出早了吧
19:05 Lan wings: 啥难度
19:05 LKs: 随便
19:05 Lan wings: 听到了
19:05 LKs: 所以应该是有问题
19:06 Lan wings: 哦
19:06 Lan wings: 怎么破
19:06 LKs: give me a min
19:07 Lan wings: ok
19:07 Lan wings: 看起来你的timing也可以嘛<.<
19:07 Lan wings: 以后timing req找不到别人就找你了=w=
19:07 LKs: <.<
19:08 Lan wings: 01:26:553 (4) -
19:08 Lan wings: 这里也有的
19:08 LKs: 嗯
19:08 LKs: 这之前需要加一根红线
19:08 LKs: 然后删了那根已经存在的
19:09 LKs: 真心的
19:09 LKs: 等我10分钟
19:09 Lan wings: 哦
19:10 Lan wings: 于是要找Beren改SB了好像
19:10 LKs: 不用改
19:10 LKs: 没那么大的修改
19:23 LKs: 我先说下tags好了
19:23 LKs: tags就是你写了小提琴钢琴
19:24 LKs: 然后可以再写点乐器什么的
19:24 Lan wings: 嗯
19:24 LKs: 不过这个得你自己决定
19:24 LKs: 或者写音乐风格
19:24 Lan wings: 还有啥乐器
19:24 Lan wings: 我表示不知道该填什么
19:24 LKs: 这人的介绍你查过吗
19:25 Lan wings: 只稍微看过主页
19:25 LKs: 有说是什么风格特点么
19:25 Lan wings: 没有
19:25 Lan wings: 日文
19:25 Lan wings: http://www.middleisland.net/
19:25 LKs: gui
19:27 LKs: 你玩吧 等我弄好timing直接给你code
19:28 Lan wings: 我打完了已经0.0
19:28 LKs: 那你等着=A=
19:28 Lan wings: 唔``那我试试vision转成怎么样
19:28 LKs: 转？
19:30 Lan wings: 转成mania
19:32 Lan wings: 看着很卧槽
19:32 LKs: 很卧槽
19:35 LKs: 我怀疑我遇到了SV变化bug
19:35 LKs: 蛋碎
19:35 Lan wings: 0.0
19:35 Lan wings: 好像说退出再进就好了
19:42 LKs: 好搞定
19:42 Lan wings: 噢噢
19:43 LKs: 话说hard里的这个
19:43 LKs: 01:23:803 (1) -
19:43 LKs: 本来就要做1/6?
19:44 Lan wings: 这里1/6啊0.0
19:44 LKs: 哦这里也是1/601:18:325 (2) -
19:44 LKs: 我被sv bug弄得蛋碎
19:44 Lan wings: 01:34:391 (4) -
19:44 Lan wings: 跟这里一样的
19:45 LKs: 01:35:879 (1) -
19:45 LKs: 好 这个slider的弧形
19:45 LKs: 红点之后的
19:45 LKs: 稍微调一下
19:45 Lan wings: 咦``等等
19:45 Lan wings: 你说的哪个难度
19:45 Lan wings: hard?
19:45 LKs: hardy
19:45 Lan wings: 哦
19:46 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459258
19:46 Lan wings: 点放x204 y104可以不
19:46 LKs: ok
19:46 LKs: 好我给你code
19:46 LKs: 。。
19:46 LKs: 不行
19:46 LKs: 我只有红线的doe
19:46 LKs: 绿线被我傻了
19:46 LKs: 删了
19:47 LKs: 我给你截图你一个一个改吧
19:47 Lan wings: 哦
19:47 LKs: http://puu.sh/1dZS8
19:47 LKs: 别改错了
19:47 LKs: 然后可能出现了一些slider过红线的事情
19:48 LKs: 你把出现的时间点保存好告诉我 然后我来recheck然后就搞定了
19:48 Lan wings: slider过红线要改的吧
19:48 LKs: 嗯 你能改就自己改了不然就把那些slider记录下来
19:49 Lan wings: 奇怪了
19:49 Lan wings: 好像我也出BUG了
19:49 LKs: 别删绿线改红线
19:49 Lan wings: 第一条线在00:22:760 - 是吧
19:49 LKs: 反正这事有点麻烦
19:49 LKs: 嗯
19:49 Lan wings: 我线是插在00:22:760没错
19:49 LKs: 我没改第一条线
19:50 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459264
19:50 Lan wings: 但是如果我用鼠标滚轴滚过去是22:759
19:50 Lan wings: 00:22:759 -
19:50 LKs: 哦 这是1msbug
19:50 Lan wings: 这泥马的BUG啊
19:50 LKs: 手动改一下改到760
19:50 LKs: 这个不太重要
19:51 Lan wings: 手动怎么改
19:51 LKs: 额
19:51 Lan wings: 本来就是760
19:51 LKs: 通过某种手段让他不现实759
19:51 Lan wings: 有教程么0.0
19:51 LKs: 没有。跟着感觉走
19:51 LKs: 你先改其他的
19:51 Lan wings: 好的
19:51 Lan wings: 反正有人戳的话会告诉我怎么改的了应该
19:51 LKs: 确保不改出问题最重要
19:54 Lan wings: 尿了
19:55 Lan wings: SV BUG
19:55 LKs: 改好一个难度先退出去
19:55 Lan wings: 原来不是
19:55 Lan wings: 只是移位了
19:55 LKs: 嗯
19:56 LKs: resnap的时候注意beat snap divisor
19:57 Lan wings: 01:21:210 - 在这里?
19:57 LKs: 。
19:57 LKs: 这是啥
19:57 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/1dZS8
19:57 LKs: 我有的红线删了有的是新加的
19:57 LKs: 我不知道怎么改
19:57 LKs: 交给你
19:58 LKs: 反正最后结果和这歌一样
19:58 LKs: 就行了
20:05 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - hardy这slider难搞了
20:06 LKs: 一会我给你改
20:06 Lan wings: 哦
20:06 LKs: 你别漏下这种slider机型
20:06 LKs: 就行
20:06 Lan wings: 我改改0.75
20:21 Lan wings: 莫非可以用代码改slider尾巴停止时间?
20:21 LKs: 嗯
20:26 LKs: .
20:38 LKs: 你还没搞定
20:38 Lan wings: 搞定了0.0
20:39 LKs: 传了？
20:39 Lan wings: 准备传
20:39 Lan wings: 要传么
20:39 Lan wings: 还是QQ传你
20:39 LKs: 上床
20:39 LKs: 传
20:40 Lan wings: 我会说我右键了？
20:40 LKs: 好
20:41 Lan wings: 传不了
20:41 LKs: 233
20:41 Lan wings: Creating package
20:41 Lan wings: 重启osu
20:45 Lan wings: 搞定了
20:45 LKs: 好
20:45 Lan wings: 然后让你搞么?
20:46 LKs: 有问题的slider记录下了么
20:47 Lan wings: 0.0
20:48 Lan wings: easy没有
20:49 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - normal
20:49 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - hard
20:50 Lan wings: 01:32:660 (1) - hard
20:51 Lan wings: insane没有
20:51 Lan wings: 我能见到的就这些了
20:52 LKs: 看到的是什么意思
20:52 LKs: 难道不是aibat
20:52 Lan wings: 0.0
20:52 Lan wings: 不是
20:52 LKs: ok
20:52 Lan wings: 唔｀｀aibat见到点别的东东
20:53 LKs: 啥
20:53 Lan wings: snap问题
20:53 Lan wings: 小事
20:53 LKs: 你先了改传
20:53 Lan wings: 一些1/6的没snap好而已
20:53 Lan wings: 哦
20:54 LKs: 00:29:281 (2) -
20:54 LKs: 顺便改了这个间距
20:54 Lan wings: 啥难度
20:54 LKs: I
20:55 Lan wings: 这里貌似没事啊｀｀
20:55 LKs: ..
20:56 LKs: 为什么我看的是1.49x 和1.69x
20:56 Lan wings: 我没按ｄｓ摆的啊．．．
20:56 LKs: 时间差一样
20:56 LKs: 距离不一样
20:57 LKs: 难道现在流行这么干
20:57 Lan wings: 0.0
20:57 Lan wings: 布吉岛
20:57 Lan wings: 听说你也是这样摆的
20:57 LKs: 0.2x
20:57 LKs: 的差距

qq

LKs 21:00:03
你osu有点悲剧
lanwings 21:01:59
又掉线了
lanwings 21:02:03
我传好的了
lanwings 21:02:11
先去吃饭``15分钟回来
LKs 21:02:27
233
LKs 21:02:29
这么晚吃饭
lanwings 21:02:30
感觉是区域性大姨妈
lanwings 21:02:37
一直搞这图啊
LKs 21:02:45
seeu
lanwings 21:19:21
back
LKs 21:20:56
嗯
LKs 21:21:11

LKs 21:21:16
你这么做的意义何在
lanwings 21:21:26
你没更新么
LKs 21:21:38
你不说一声
lanwings 21:21:41
本来的意义是这里
lanwings 21:21:47

lanwings 21:21:52

LKs 21:22:01

lanwings 21:22:22
哦草还是连不上怎么回事
LKs 21:22:25
bug
lanwings 21:22:46
麻痹的
LKs 21:25:43
01:20:191 (1) -
LKs 21:25:49
这我问问
lanwings 21:25:54
能更新到不
LKs 21:25:57
嗯
lanwings 21:26:18
这里咋了
LKs 21:26:33
变速
lanwings 21:27:00
还要改红线?
LKs 21:27:08
。
LKs 21:27:11
不是
lanwings 21:27:22
0.0我全程1.5啊
LKs 21:27:34
我只是怕这slider unrankable
lanwings 21:27:57
原来是Hardy的
LKs 21:28:06
insane的
lanwings 21:28:21
咦
lanwings 21:28:42
我这可是完全符合音乐的
LKs 21:28:44

LKs 21:29:03
但不一定符合蠢比的要求
lanwings 21:29:26
不管那蠢B
lanwings 21:29:36
他不rank我找别人rank
lanwings 21:29:48
只要别戳了不reb就好
LKs 21:29:58
问题是我给泡
LKs 21:30:10
BAT不找你会搞我
LKs 21:30:58
我再问问
lanwings 21:31:01
这里其实没怎么变速的吧
LKs 21:31:16
用红点变速
lanwings 21:31:22
01:17:582 (1) - 跟这些是差不多长度的
lanwings 21:31:41
跟不用红点变速的区别不大```
lanwings 21:32:00
而且我用红点不是变速``而是要他有那种抖的感觉
LKs 21:32:17
我知道
LKs 21:32:23
我并不是表达我的感觉
LKs 21:32:27
我只是考虑bat的想法
lanwings 21:33:42

LKs 21:33:58
问题是你不是0108
lanwings 21:34:13
也对
LKs 21:39:20
你不想改我就不强迫了 我把这条写出来看别人怎么看好了
LKs 21:39:30
不过至少我觉得这种形状不太好看
lanwings 21:39:30
唔
lanwings 21:39:37
有没有好看点的形状
LKs 21:39:40
。
LKs 21:39:43
你是mapper
lanwings 21:39:52
你是神mapper
lanwings 21:40:08
这种slider我很少拉```你拉的应该比我多
LKs 21:40:31
我不拉这种sldier 跪了
lanwings 21:40:41
额
lanwings 21:41:41
话说那些slider过红线的不用管了?
LKs 21:42:02
。我忘了
lanwings 21:42:19
哦草``我重启过的啊```
LKs 21:20:56
嗯
LKs 21:21:11

LKs 21:21:16
你这么做的意义何在
lanwings 21:21:26
你没更新么
LKs 21:21:38
你不说一声
lanwings 21:21:41
本来的意义是这里
lanwings 21:21:47

lanwings 21:21:52

LKs 21:22:01

lanwings 21:22:22
哦草还是连不上怎么回事
LKs 21:22:25
bug
lanwings 21:22:46
麻痹的
LKs 21:25:43
01:20:191 (1) -
LKs 21:25:49
这我问问
lanwings 21:25:54
能更新到不
LKs 21:25:57
嗯
lanwings 21:26:18
这里咋了
LKs 21:26:33
变速
lanwings 21:27:00
还要改红线?
LKs 21:27:08
。
LKs 21:27:11
不是
lanwings 21:27:22
0.0我全程1.5啊
LKs 21:27:34
我只是怕这slider unrankable
lanwings 21:27:57
原来是Hardy的
LKs 21:28:06
insane的
lanwings 21:28:21
咦
lanwings 21:28:42
我这可是完全符合音乐的
LKs 21:28:44

LKs 21:29:03
但不一定符合蠢比的要求
lanwings 21:29:26
不管那蠢B
lanwings 21:29:36
他不rank我找别人rank
lanwings 21:29:48
只要别戳了不reb就好
LKs 21:29:58
问题是我给泡
LKs 21:30:10
BAT不找你会搞我
LKs 21:30:58
我再问问
lanwings 21:31:01
这里其实没怎么变速的吧
LKs 21:31:16
用红点变速
lanwings 21:31:22
01:17:582 (1) - 跟这些是差不多长度的
lanwings 21:31:41
跟不用红点变速的区别不大```
lanwings 21:32:00
而且我用红点不是变速``而是要他有那种抖的感觉
LKs 21:32:17
我知道
LKs 21:32:23
我并不是表达我的感觉
LKs 21:32:27
我只是考虑bat的想法
lanwings 21:33:42

LKs 21:33:58
问题是你不是0108
lanwings 21:34:13
也对
LKs 21:39:20
你不想改我就不强迫了 我把这条写出来看别人怎么看好了
LKs 21:39:30
不过至少我觉得这种形状不太好看
lanwings 21:39:30
唔
lanwings 21:39:37
有没有好看点的形状
LKs 21:39:40
。
LKs 21:39:43
你是mapper
lanwings 21:39:52
你是神mapper
lanwings 21:40:08
这种slider我很少拉```你拉的应该比我多
LKs 21:40:31
我不拉这种sldier 跪了
lanwings 21:40:41
额
lanwings 21:41:41
话说那些slider过红线的不用管了?
LKs 21:42:02
。我忘了
lanwings 21:42:19
哦草``我重启过的啊```
lanwings 21:42:23
别告诉我没了
LKs 21:42:28
我又
LKs 21:44:47
aibat跟我说红线不一致
lanwings 21:45:35
哪
LKs 21:45:40

LKs 21:45:47

lanwings 21:46:46
看出屎了都没看出哪不对
LKs 21:46:57
normal的最后一跟的offest跟我给你的不一致 其他全一样
LKs 21:47:15
除了hardy
LKs 21:47:22
那三个难度的最后一根线
LKs 21:47:24
的offest不对
lanwings 21:47:29
噢看到了
LKs 21:47:47
改红线真是让人蛋碎
LKs 21:47:57
下次我不看这种图了 我相信你也累成狗了
lanwings 21:48:01
1:56.393才是对的么
LKs 21:48:10

lanwings 21:48:13
这种还好
LKs 21:48:14
387
lanwings 21:48:40
额``就是说只有hard改了
lanwings 21:48:43
其他都没改
LKs 21:48:56
嗯
lanwings 21:49:02
96那图我才改成狗那样
lanwings 21:50:55
话说你知道hard的error是什么情况么
LKs 21:51:04
怎么又error了
lanwings 21:51:11
hardy的``一直都有
LKs 21:51:17
什么error
lanwings 21:51:32

LKs 21:51:48
wtf
LKs 21:52:04
slider太少？
lanwings 21:52:12
不清楚...
lanwings 21:55:11
尿了``选了1/6 snap
LKs 21:55:56
什么
lanwings 21:56:24
选了1/6 resnap
LKs 21:56:56
这有啥关系
lanwings 21:57:13
一堆1/4的连打乱了
LKs 21:57:21
233
lanwings 21:57:48
那个slider你怎么搞啊``
lanwings 21:58:00
slider过红线的
LKs 21:58:01
你想改么
LKs 21:58:05
。
LKs 21:58:11
你先改完了上传
lanwings 21:58:20
莫非可以不改?
LKs 21:58:24
。
LKs 21:58:35
我不让你改
LKs 21:58:37
以后你也得改
lanwings 21:58:41
对啊
LKs 21:58:47
那你就一起改了
lanwings 21:58:48
这个是unrankable的
LKs 21:59:13
哪个
lanwings 21:59:18
slider过红线啊
LKs 21:59:22
我知道。。
LKs 21:59:29
我现在关心的是你那个wiggle slider
lanwings 21:59:32
额
lanwings 22:00:03
我哭了``middleisland还有很多变速的曲子
LKs 22:00:16

lanwings 22:00:31
上传了
LKs 22:00:45
嗯
LKs 22:06:54

LKs 22:06:59
忙成狗
lanwings 22:07:00
0.0
LKs 22:07:30
好的红线没问题了
lanwings 22:07:43
唔``
lanwings 22:07:50
然后是红点么
LKs 22:08:06
红线你自己改一下呗
LKs 22:08:08
反正不难
LKs 22:08:17
牺牲一下跟歌没办法
lanwings 22:08:26
那我0.75呢?
LKs 22:08:48
不确定 你不是说长度没差多少么
lanwings 22:09:00
长度是差不多了
lanwings 22:09:22

LKs 22:09:37
那随你了
lanwings 22:09:54
红色1.5的
LKs 22:10:17
。
LKs 22:10:22
那1.0不就行了
lanwings 22:10:25
嗯
lanwings 22:10:29
1.0吧
lanwings 22:10:42
1.0总不会吐槽了
LKs 22:10:44
卧槽现在full reload没了？
lanwings 22:10:50
?
lanwings 22:10:54
full reload?
LKs 22:11:13
原来file菜单里有full reload项
lanwings 22:12:00
你说上传?
LKs 22:12:05
好的还有
LKs 22:12:06
没事
lanwings 22:12:26
full reload是干嘛的
lanwings 22:12:46

LKs 22:12:58
嗯
LKs 22:14:29
这个slider
LKs 22:14:31
有点蛋碎
LKs 22:14:35
01:32:660 (1) -
LKs 22:14:36
hard
lanwings 22:14:45
过红线那个么
LKs 22:15:03
过红线的repeatslider无解
lanwings 22:15:03
这个是很蛋碎
LKs 22:15:23
要不你换成circle吧
lanwings 22:15:26
不对啊``
lanwings 22:15:30
好像BPM不对
LKs 22:15:31
或者slider+circle
LKs 22:15:39
怎么不对
lanwings 22:15:44
01:32:787感觉中间有点对不上
lanwings 22:16:04
音乐比这里快了那么几毫秒好像
LKs 22:16:09
那有没有鼓
LKs 22:16:17
你指望小提琴能1ms不差怎么可能
lanwings 22:16:32
是鼓的
LKs 22:16:52
那就是鼓也不准233
LKs 22:16:55
你想加红线？
lanwings 22:16:58
不了
lanwings 22:17:00
我怕了
lanwings 22:17:13
老是SV BUG吓不起
lanwings 22:17:30
平时没问题还好``现在各种BUG实在玩不起
LKs 22:17:31
我的建议就是变成这样
LKs 22:17:34
直接解决问题
lanwings 22:17:43
我知道这样好0.0
lanwings 22:17:53
问题是这是GD```
lanwings 22:18:19
在想该怎么摆会跟小草莓的风格相似点``
lanwings 22:19:02
要是我就直接这样上了
LKs 22:19:12
。
LKs 22:19:19
这是hard你这么加jump大丈夫
lanwings 22:19:32
<.<所以得废脑筋
lanwings 22:19:47
这其实不算jump
LKs 22:19:58
那就加

unified red sections

a lot of nazi adjustments

fixed all sliders that pass through red sections

fixed an unrankable wiggle slider

some detailed changes

bubbled

I hope i didn't miss anything

1. 01:22:235 - Add new timing section here (6/4), the metronome resets here actually...
2. 01:23:774 - A new timing section here might also be required (6/4)

1. 00:39:977 (1) - Unsnapped slider end

1. 00:32:933 (8) - Whistle on slider's repeat?

1. 00:32:151 (3) - I'd new combo this because of spacing change, but it's up to you (:
2. 00:32:412 (4) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
3. 00:38:151 (3) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
4. 00:40:238 (2) - The rhythm here is actually circle + repeating 1/8 slider, but 1/4 lands on beat too :3
5. 00:43:368 (2) - Same as above
6. 00:50:673 (4) - Stack above (5) instead? Plays better this way imo...
7. 00:52:760 (1) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
8. 00:57:455 (4) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
9. 01:03:977 (5) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
10. 01:42:573 (1) - Uhm, why no whistle on slider's start here? o.o...

1. 00:48:846 (1) - Uhm, why no hitsound on slider's end? I personally feel a finish is very required here (try default Normal hitfinish with ~30% volume though)
2. 01:01:107 (6) - There is no 1/6 here, the rhythm should be circle + 1/8 repeating slider
3. 01:03:455 (1,2,3,4) - Delete (2,3)? I'm also sure that there's no 1/6 here... (you can then create a jump between (1), (4), and the pink (1) though :3)
4. 01:29:647 (6) - Uhm, this jump feels quite random... Put in ~x:295 y:344 (yellow (1)'s start) instead?
5. 01:37:366 (1) - Try to add a default soft-hitwhistle in 01:37:614, it fits the piano very much (:

Niva wrote:

Uhm, Lan Wings, I take a quick look on your map and found some timing-related issues (I'm not going deep into the mapping though):

1. 01:22:235 - Add new timing section here (6/4), the metronome resets here actually...imo i think my timing should be fine, your timing is right but not that necessary so i decide not to change them
2. 01:23:774 - A new timing section here might also be required (6/4)

[Easy]

1. 00:39:977 (1) - Unsnapped slider endfixed

[Normal]

1. 00:32:933 (8) - Whistle on slider's repeat?fixed

[Insane]

-> I'd rename this to 'Flight' or something more imaginative, sounds better for me :3I think Insane is good=w=

1. 00:48:846 (1) - Uhm, why no hitsound on slider's end? I personally feel a finish is very required here (try default Normal hitfinish with ~30% volume though)fixed
2. 01:01:107 (6) - There is no 1/6 here, the rhythm should be circle + 1/8 repeating slider i didn't choose to follow piano so no change
3. 01:03:455 (1,2,3,4) - Delete (2,3)? I'm also sure that there's no 1/6 here... (you can then create a jump between (1), (4), and the pink (1) though :3)Here is my own rhythm sry no change
4. 01:29:647 (6) - Uhm, this jump feels quite random... Put in ~x:295 y:344 (yellow (1)'s start) instead?fixed
5. 01:37:366 (1) - Try to add a default soft-hitwhistle in 01:37:614, it fits the piano very much (:fixed

Hardy's mapping style is really wonderful :3 - however please take a good look at these timing issues, especially the red line issues...

Also try to add whistle on the last spinner's end if you want, it sounds beautiful~

Niva wrote:

Uhm, about timing, that two timing sections are required because of the metronome change, so in Taiko the downbeat lines are rendered correctly + to make it sound correct on Nightcore mod also, this issue is confirmed with Sallad4Ever (you don't need to resnap/recalculate anything though xD)ok :< fixed it

...also to new 1/6 sliders on Hardy (00:38:151 (3) , 00:52:759 (1) , and 01:03:977 (5)) don't forget to add whistle on slider end as well orz (:fixed

Niva wrote:

About 01:03:455... Somehow for me it works because of the following 1/6 though~ (plus I see no complain about it on previous posts)

(I've seen the usage of a 1/4 repeating slider to simplify the 1/4 + three 1/8 rhythm in this map though)

------------------------------------

Because of timing change, I can't rank... Fixed a wrong 1/3 snapping in Insane via PM (:
(I hope I didn't miss anything, AIBAT is still not compatible with file format v10... Next MAT/BAT/Modder please take a careful look)

Rebubbled ~

Ibuki Suika wrote:

MiddleIsland最喜欢的还是Allard

Garven wrote:

'sup


[Hard]
00:55:629 (1,2,3) - Not seeing why the spacing is so low here. because i did it previously at 00:30:586 (1,2,3) - also imo a lower spacing makes it prettier
01:13:924 (1,1) - Remove new combo well for this, i want it to be good visually... i tried to remove them all but the fact is the combo counts to 8 which is high... i also tired to remove the second one and the result shows it doesn't look that perfect as it is now, at least for me. If it doesn't really make a big difference on playing, i would rather keep them

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ?

As for the hard, the first pattern read a lot better than the second one - I'd adjust it so that it transitions a little smoother.
New combo spam jacks up the HP recovery. Also it looks fine and an 8 combo is -not- high at all.

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ? fixed

Beren wrote:

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ? fixed

http://puu.sh/1fEgp

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ?

As for the hard, the first pattern read a lot better than the second one - I'd adjust it so that it transitions a little smoother.
New combo spam jacks up the HP recovery. Also it looks fine and an 8 combo is -not- high at all.

Sallad4ever wrote:

It's better if you can make a diff. specific credit on Hardy diff cause that one is GD and made by -Baby Strawberry-

Lan wings wrote:

ok

Garven wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

ok

Sun Rainbow wrote:

wow omedeto~~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

瞎了._. 恭喜啦~~

Flask wrote:

耶

AngelHoney wrote:

\0.0/

Selee wrote:

Congratz~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hardy diff is just plain beautiful.
Congratz

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hardy diff is just plain beautiful.
Congratz

thank you

cmn_891127 wrote:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~！恭喜！

ShockBuddy wrote:

I Like ^^

WVS wrote:

Chinese mappers are awesome ! !
很不错！