wantuole wrote:

路过~
mark and star

1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy

1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型？
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点？
3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC，否则的话这个combo有点太长了
4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛？
5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上，比在尾巴上效果要好
6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话，我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏～
7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上

1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistle
2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^
3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^
4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^
5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^
6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^
7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^
8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^
9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^
10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^

1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点？
2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^
3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返，起点位置不用动stack就很好
   
4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^

1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44？因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢
2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次（折返3次），然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider，另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider，也是总共4次
   

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住，因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)

[E]
00:32:151 (1) - 稍微超了点边``我转一下吧
00:45:716 (3) - 不出网格就不改了
01:34:391 (2) - 也是转一下

[N]
00:27:455 (1) - 朝右上挪一小格 好看些fixed
00:31:107 (5,6) - 同不是很好看这是为Hardy难度做预防的排法``
00:55:629 (1) - fixed
01:26:303 (4,1) - 不是很好看？keep
01:51:593 (3) - ^keep

[I]
01:28:328 (1) - 只是擦一点网格无视
02:01:117 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 弧形排得更好看些这是一个带有一点尖锐的弧形``旋转一下角度后是上下对称的

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]

1. 一般来说同一个人的diff最好kiai一致吧……检查下你的Easy哭了这kiai怎么少了一截

[Easy]

1. 00:39:977 (1) - 好像有一点点……奇怪…………要是我的话会顺着音乐把它放在下面……so……试试这个造型？好!
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:14:412 (1) - (nazi)感觉做对称了会好看一点？跟这个对称?01:15:977 (3) -
3. 01:23:803 (6) - 这里可以考虑放个NC，否则的话这个combo有点太长了如果这里加我前面这里也得加了01:17:542 (1) -
4. 01:25:303 (8) - (nazi)依然是形状……要把blanket做好一点嘛？不够弯?感觉差不多了啊http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/444536看approach
5. 01:29:853 (3) - 这里的whistle可以放到slider body上，比在尾巴上效果要好尾巴的whistle我就不去掉了``那个高音还是要用到的
6. 01:44:804 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里的话，我倾向于在每一组的2和3上加上clap来强化圆舞曲的节奏～
7. 01:49:176 (4) - 这里whistle放在尾巴我觉得不如放在下一个slider的head以及body上放后面不好听``我直接删掉吧

[Normal]

1. 01:13:368 (1) - slider body上可以放whistlewhistle本来只是想作为一个点缀``加多了不好``你说了就加吧
2. 01:17:542 (1) - ^这个加了后神了01:17:803 - 这条绿线=w=
3. 01:19:107 (4) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
4. 01:20:672 (1) - ^fixed
5. 01:23:803 (1) - ^这里我想突出定音鼓``所以不改了
6. 01:26:803 (1) - ^这里不放``01:26:303 (4) - 倒是这里可以放一个
7. 01:38:854 (1) - ^不放
8. 01:43:317 (6) - ^不放
9. 01:47:718 (1) - ^不放
10. 01:54:953 (6) - ^这个音量比较难搞``

[Insane]

1. 00:30:064 (4) - 试试放到256:44？因为是个高音所以放在屏幕上方的一个1/1跳似乎也不错呢可以
2. 01:00:846 (5,6) - 这里节奏总听着有点奇怪…………仔细听了一下发现是因为01:01:107 - 有一个重音……所以我建议是可以考虑把(5)总长度做成4次（折返3次），然后从01:01:107 - 这里开始下一个kick slider，另外如果01:01:107 (6) - 放过来的话可以做成一个1/6的kick slider，也是总共4次节奏是摆了``但是排列该怎么摆好呢```
   

差不多就这些了～～star & good luck~~

Flower wrote:

irc req~
(以下未指出原因皆为可能被HP条盖住的情况)
(我的标准是加上EasyMode后不会被盖住，因此解决方法是左上角不要有Note的边缘超出网格)


[H]
00:26:673 (5) - 这个应该还好吧。。。我这里看好像没有盖到。。。

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~~m4m~~

[General]


[Hardy]

1. 00:31:629 (2) - 有点confusing的spacing... >: 我觉得和(1)的尾巴叠一下也许反而会更好一点？
2. 00:56:673 (2) - ^ 其实我还是觉得这样还可以。。。要不然除了叠就是等距没什么意思，毕竟是hard了嘛~
3. 01:31:379 (3) - 这里建议可以做成一个1/6的折返，起点位置不用动stack就很好
   
4. 01:34:391 (4) - ^
5. 01:47:718 (1) - ^ 嗯我觉得这个好听，fixed~！

差不多就这些了～～star & good luck~~

1. fine

1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC. If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern)
2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow more
   

   148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0

3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tight

1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this
2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?
3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line
4. 01:26:675 - ^
5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓
   
   SPOILER

   204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
   488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
   376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
   248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
   284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
   112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
   200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0

6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )
7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?
8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
   
   SPOILER

   154,187,101829,5,12
   214,119,102077,1,0
   295,157,102325,1,0
   285,246,102573,1,8
   196,264,102821,1,0

9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.
10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green line

1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. )
2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity　o.o

1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far )
2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well.
3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green line
4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look

wantuole wrote:

[General]
nothing
[Easy]
01:05:020 (1) - 延续 01:01:890 (1,2) 的旋转梗。fixed
01:24:803 (2,3) - ctrl+h对称01:21:194 (2,3) ,故意向左移了一点 感觉3→1距离有点近fixed
01:41:829 (1) - 太贴近4了 像01:39:350 (2,3) 这样摆设fixed
01:56:393 (1) - 不美观 太长的画条中间的红点转折太容易看清楚. 红点移动到正中间fixed
02:00:644 (4) - 重音 这个要更佳力度点的摆设 旋转-90° 往上升的方向。fixed
[nor]
nothing
[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧，太多东西挤着角落
[Insane]
ar-1？用note和短slider组成的梗显得有些空洞了。不如hady的slider梗好。当然减少ar只是个人看法。AR不减``至于你说的长短slider``低难度当然应该用长slider``高难度用长slider是属于浪费节奏的行为``我的节奏观念是能用上的节奏就一定会用上``抱歉

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ Lan wings =v=

thank you for the request~

here my mod~

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 01:12:846 (4) - I recommend NC pattern: 01:12:846 (4) - add NC and 01:13:368 (1) - remove NC.fixed If do not change, 01:11:281 (3) - I want here NC ( 01:08:151 (1,1) - same NC pattern)
2. 01:39:350 (2) - I suggest that you put a curved slider. for ex: http://puu.sh/194WT i think this improves a flow morefixed
   

   148,280,99350,2,2,B|201:318|262:299,1,120,0|0

3. 01:41:829 (1) - one grid up. It looks slightly tightfixed

[Normal]

1. 01:05:542 (5,6) - 1/3 kick slider and then 1/2 note. I thought this was a little difficult in normal. so i suggest 01:06:325 (6) - remove note. There is not the sense of incongruity even if I do not put this fixed
2. 01:13:368 (1) - Is greater than the sound of your other diff lol. 01:13:107 (green line) - use N:C1 is better ?Normal's hitsound is a new attempt``so different from the other diff
3. 01:20:412 - Unnecessary green line01:20:672 - del here and volume+20%
4. 01:26:675 - ^This is not unnecessary
5. 01:27:819 (2,3,4) - better to align the width. http://puu.sh/19ndE ( need to follow the note after ) i suggest form:↓fixed
   
   SPOILER

   204,336,86803,6,0,B|248:392|324:380|348:328|348:328|432:312,1,225,4|0
   488,304,87819,2,0,B|444:128,1,150
   376,208,88582,2,0,B|332:32,1,150,0|4
   248,56,89345,2,2,B|267:128,1,75,0|0
   284,216,89853,6,0,B|224:220|188:168|188:168|160:204,1,150,4|0
   112,272,90616,2,0,B|32:272,2,75
   200,288,91379,2,2,B|268:312|332:292|332:292|348:296,1,150,4|0

6. 01:37:862 (4) - i prefer suggestion of the form : http://puu.sh/19nh7 ( 01:36:870 (3) - use copy. )fixed
7. 01:39:846 (2,3) - DS is different from other(0.9x). This is intentional o.o?Not intentional
8. 01:41:829 (1,2,3,4,5) - Slightly crooked star form. try like this: http://puu.sh/19nvb
   
   SPOILER

   154,187,101829,5,12
   214,119,102077,1,0
   295,157,102325,1,0
   285,246,102573,1,8
   196,264,102821,1,0

9. 01:44:308 (1) - Unsnapped slider end point. It is because across the Timing Point(redline). It is necessary to change rhythm so i suggest: remove repeat. and add slider to 01:45:046~01:45:289.fixedhttp://osu.ppy.sh/ss/445996
10. 01:56:153 - Unnecessary green lineThis is not unnecessary

[Insane]

1. 00:31:368 (2) - 00:31:629 (3,1) - I prefer a rhythm similar to here. so move to 00:31:499. and 00:31:368 (2,3,1) - use similar DS. ( 00:31:629 (3,1) - Current DS, I feel a little far )fixed
2. 00:36:586 (1,2) - grid move to x264,y288. http://puu.sh/19nYY when played, complete stack here does not have flows so well. fixed
3. 01:14:542 - Unnecessary green linefixed
4. 01:24:803 (6) - add NC and 01:25:053 (1) - remove NC. Probably this will be intentional. but I do not like the look ok:<

good :3 star☆~

Good luck~

wantuole wrote:

[Hardy]
00:51:716 (6) - 放5的另外一侧，太多东西挤着角落 诶。。我没太明白这是怎么个改法。。。

就这些了 祝你好运

kosiga wrote:

[Hardy]

1. 01:26:553 (4) - i prefer move note to 01:26:303 rhythm. If you do not want to change it, add NC and 01:26:803 (1) - remove NC is better. ( It is already the next rhythm. ) i didn't change this, i think i should be fine>~<
2. 01:34:639 (5) - You are always using the SV0.75x in this pattern. So I felt some sense of incongruity　o.o true, changed!~

good :3 star☆~

Good luck~

LKs wrote:

hi

[general]

关了letterboxfixed

hardy难度的kiai Starts on 01:14:933 改成 Starts on 01:14:412

既然写了piano和violin那么可以多写点类似的东西方tags 比如orchestra 不知道东西方tags都有啥``等你上了再问问你

[Insane]

这个难度的artist和title是空的 请补上更新后不知道为啥就变这样了皮皮三人日虫虫

00:32:499 (2,3,4) - 间距差有点明显fixed
00:36:846 (2) - 00:46:238 (1) - 这两个slider如果想做blanket那么就还能再调整一下弧度fixed
01:01:107 (6) - 好像听起来没错 但事实上那四个钢琴是1+3个1/8 不是1/6折返 怎么改看你了这里没跟钢琴呀``00:54:586 (3) - 类似这里的
01:20:672 (1) - slider有点歪歪?
01:48:447 (1,2,3) -在kiai期间你的hitnormal音比较不明显但在这里突然又有了 这三个slider还好 01:49:662 (7) - 之后的这个slider的开头的默认hitnormal就显得有点违和这个等你上线再跟你讨论``

[Hardy]

00:37:368 (2) - 感觉结尾那个弧形(红点后的)有点太尖锐了 how about http://puu.sh/1dfQB
01:03:977 (5) - 这个以后说

[normal]

00:47:803 (3) - 反正就是不圆这个我没要圆形啊``只是要个类似马蹄的形状而已0.0
01:54:953 (6) - ^^
01:14:412 (1) - 这个也不太对称 你经常把node最后一个点放的太远 记住把那个node放在sliderend的中心就好做对称了 然后有红点的地方要保证红点和左右两点三点一线唔``这个平时拉slider的时候都没怎么留意到``于是记住了``估计是拉中间的node的时候``后面的又弄的对不齐了
02:00:644 (3) - ^fixed
01:23:020 (4) - 这个就是典型的例子 node放的太远fixed
01:35:879 (1) - 这个也是 调整node 后可以blanket的更好fixed


[Easy]

01:54:953 (3) - 这blanket也有点不舒服 不用四点式吗修了下``

LKs wrote:

recheck:

timing check:

irc

18:57 LKs: hi
18:57 Lan wings: ._.
18:57 LKs: ._.
19:00 LKs: ._.timing
19:00 LKs: ._.有没有人提过
19:00 Lan wings: timing有啥0.0
19:00 Lan wings: 没有``
19:00 LKs: 好我提
19:00 LKs: 等会
19:00 Lan wings: 我开坑直接找的加文测timing
19:01 LKs: 。garven不是timing很准的那一类人
19:01 LKs: timing找charls
19:01 Lan wings: 哦
19:01 Lan wings: 笔记
19:01 Lan wings: 当时问人``就让我找加文和另一个人了
19:01 LKs: 不过他们都比较有耐心
19:02 Lan wings: 话说现在的2kd好像改了啊
19:02 LKs: 怎么
19:02 Lan wings: 你mod的前一天我刚更新过
19:02 Lan wings: 你的是2kd
19:02 LKs: 然后就没了吗
19:02 Lan wings: 不是啊
19:02 Lan wings: 就是给了你2kd
19:02 LKs: 然后呢
19:03 Lan wings: 原来不是7天内不能更新不能有人post么
19:03 LKs: 嗯
19:03 Lan wings: 现在好像只要7天内没有人post就可以了``
19:03 Lan wings: 我在你post的前一天更新过``你一样有2kd拿
19:03 LKs: 好
19:03 LKs: 大快
19:03 *Lan wings is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/165554 MiddleIsland - Vision [Insane]]
19:04 LKs: 嗯
19:04 LKs: 等下 我得确认
19:04 LKs: 01:12:325 (2) -
19:04 LKs: 你在这里放个note
19:04 LKs: 听得出早了吧
19:05 Lan wings: 啥难度
19:05 LKs: 随便
19:05 Lan wings: 听到了
19:05 LKs: 所以应该是有问题
19:06 Lan wings: 哦
19:06 Lan wings: 怎么破
19:06 LKs: give me a min
19:07 Lan wings: ok
19:07 Lan wings: 看起来你的timing也可以嘛<.<
19:07 Lan wings: 以后timing req找不到别人就找你了=w=
19:07 LKs: <.<
19:08 Lan wings: 01:26:553 (4) -
19:08 Lan wings: 这里也有的
19:08 LKs: 嗯
19:08 LKs: 这之前需要加一根红线
19:08 LKs: 然后删了那根已经存在的
19:09 LKs: 真心的
19:09 LKs: 等我10分钟
19:09 Lan wings: 哦
19:10 Lan wings: 于是要找Beren改SB了好像
19:10 LKs: 不用改
19:10 LKs: 没那么大的修改
19:23 LKs: 我先说下tags好了
19:23 LKs: tags就是你写了小提琴钢琴
19:24 LKs: 然后可以再写点乐器什么的
19:24 Lan wings: 嗯
19:24 LKs: 不过这个得你自己决定
19:24 LKs: 或者写音乐风格
19:24 Lan wings: 还有啥乐器
19:24 Lan wings: 我表示不知道该填什么
19:24 LKs: 这人的介绍你查过吗
19:25 Lan wings: 只稍微看过主页
19:25 LKs: 有说是什么风格特点么
19:25 Lan wings: 没有
19:25 Lan wings: 日文
19:25 Lan wings: http://www.middleisland.net/
19:25 LKs: gui
19:27 LKs: 你玩吧 等我弄好timing直接给你code
19:28 Lan wings: 我打完了已经0.0
19:28 LKs: 那你等着=A=
19:28 Lan wings: 唔``那我试试vision转成怎么样
19:28 LKs: 转？
19:30 Lan wings: 转成mania
19:32 Lan wings: 看着很卧槽
19:32 LKs: 很卧槽
19:35 LKs: 我怀疑我遇到了SV变化bug
19:35 LKs: 蛋碎
19:35 Lan wings: 0.0
19:35 Lan wings: 好像说退出再进就好了
19:42 LKs: 好搞定
19:42 Lan wings: 噢噢
19:43 LKs: 话说hard里的这个
19:43 LKs: 01:23:803 (1) -
19:43 LKs: 本来就要做1/6?
19:44 Lan wings: 这里1/6啊0.0
19:44 LKs: 哦这里也是1/601:18:325 (2) -
19:44 LKs: 我被sv bug弄得蛋碎
19:44 Lan wings: 01:34:391 (4) -
19:44 Lan wings: 跟这里一样的
19:45 LKs: 01:35:879 (1) -
19:45 LKs: 好 这个slider的弧形
19:45 LKs: 红点之后的
19:45 LKs: 稍微调一下
19:45 Lan wings: 咦``等等
19:45 Lan wings: 你说的哪个难度
19:45 Lan wings: hard?
19:45 LKs: hardy
19:45 Lan wings: 哦
19:46 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459258
19:46 Lan wings: 点放x204 y104可以不
19:46 LKs: ok
19:46 LKs: 好我给你code
19:46 LKs: 。。
19:46 LKs: 不行
19:46 LKs: 我只有红线的doe
19:46 LKs: 绿线被我傻了
19:46 LKs: 删了
19:47 LKs: 我给你截图你一个一个改吧
19:47 Lan wings: 哦
19:47 LKs: http://puu.sh/1dZS8
19:47 LKs: 别改错了
19:47 LKs: 然后可能出现了一些slider过红线的事情
19:48 LKs: 你把出现的时间点保存好告诉我 然后我来recheck然后就搞定了
19:48 Lan wings: slider过红线要改的吧
19:48 LKs: 嗯 你能改就自己改了不然就把那些slider记录下来
19:49 Lan wings: 奇怪了
19:49 Lan wings: 好像我也出BUG了
19:49 LKs: 别删绿线改红线
19:49 Lan wings: 第一条线在00:22:760 - 是吧
19:49 LKs: 反正这事有点麻烦
19:49 LKs: 嗯
19:49 Lan wings: 我线是插在00:22:760没错
19:49 LKs: 我没改第一条线
19:50 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/459264
19:50 Lan wings: 但是如果我用鼠标滚轴滚过去是22:759
19:50 Lan wings: 00:22:759 -
19:50 LKs: 哦 这是1msbug
19:50 Lan wings: 这泥马的BUG啊
19:50 LKs: 手动改一下改到760
19:50 LKs: 这个不太重要
19:51 Lan wings: 手动怎么改
19:51 LKs: 额
19:51 Lan wings: 本来就是760
19:51 LKs: 通过某种手段让他不现实759
19:51 Lan wings: 有教程么0.0
19:51 LKs: 没有。跟着感觉走
19:51 LKs: 你先改其他的
19:51 Lan wings: 好的
19:51 Lan wings: 反正有人戳的话会告诉我怎么改的了应该
19:51 LKs: 确保不改出问题最重要
19:54 Lan wings: 尿了
19:55 Lan wings: SV BUG
19:55 LKs: 改好一个难度先退出去
19:55 Lan wings: 原来不是
19:55 Lan wings: 只是移位了
19:55 LKs: 嗯
19:56 LKs: resnap的时候注意beat snap divisor
19:57 Lan wings: 01:21:210 - 在这里?
19:57 LKs: 。
19:57 LKs: 这是啥
19:57 Lan wings: http://puu.sh/1dZS8
19:57 LKs: 我有的红线删了有的是新加的
19:57 LKs: 我不知道怎么改
19:57 LKs: 交给你
19:58 LKs: 反正最后结果和这歌一样
19:58 LKs: 就行了
20:05 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - hardy这slider难搞了
20:06 LKs: 一会我给你改
20:06 Lan wings: 哦
20:06 LKs: 你别漏下这种slider机型
20:06 LKs: 就行
20:06 Lan wings: 我改改0.75
20:21 Lan wings: 莫非可以用代码改slider尾巴停止时间?
20:21 LKs: 嗯
20:26 LKs: .
20:38 LKs: 你还没搞定
20:38 Lan wings: 搞定了0.0
20:39 LKs: 传了？
20:39 Lan wings: 准备传
20:39 Lan wings: 要传么
20:39 Lan wings: 还是QQ传你
20:39 LKs: 上床
20:39 LKs: 传
20:40 Lan wings: 我会说我右键了？
20:40 LKs: 好
20:41 Lan wings: 传不了
20:41 LKs: 233
20:41 Lan wings: Creating package
20:41 Lan wings: 重启osu
20:45 Lan wings: 搞定了
20:45 LKs: 好
20:45 Lan wings: 然后让你搞么?
20:46 LKs: 有问题的slider记录下了么
20:47 Lan wings: 0.0
20:48 Lan wings: easy没有
20:49 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - normal
20:49 Lan wings: 01:20:712 (1) - hard
20:50 Lan wings: 01:32:660 (1) - hard
20:51 Lan wings: insane没有
20:51 Lan wings: 我能见到的就这些了
20:52 LKs: 看到的是什么意思
20:52 LKs: 难道不是aibat
20:52 Lan wings: 0.0
20:52 Lan wings: 不是
20:52 LKs: ok
20:52 Lan wings: 唔｀｀aibat见到点别的东东
20:53 LKs: 啥
20:53 Lan wings: snap问题
20:53 Lan wings: 小事
20:53 LKs: 你先了改传
20:53 Lan wings: 一些1/6的没snap好而已
20:53 Lan wings: 哦
20:54 LKs: 00:29:281 (2) -
20:54 LKs: 顺便改了这个间距
20:54 Lan wings: 啥难度
20:54 LKs: I
20:55 Lan wings: 这里貌似没事啊｀｀
20:55 LKs: ..
20:56 LKs: 为什么我看的是1.49x 和1.69x
20:56 Lan wings: 我没按ｄｓ摆的啊．．．
20:56 LKs: 时间差一样
20:56 LKs: 距离不一样
20:57 LKs: 难道现在流行这么干
20:57 Lan wings: 0.0
20:57 Lan wings: 布吉岛
20:57 Lan wings: 听说你也是这样摆的
20:57 LKs: 0.2x
20:57 LKs: 的差距

qq

LKs 21:00:03
你osu有点悲剧
lanwings 21:01:59
又掉线了
lanwings 21:02:03
我传好的了
lanwings 21:02:11
先去吃饭``15分钟回来
LKs 21:02:27
233
LKs 21:02:29
这么晚吃饭
lanwings 21:02:30
感觉是区域性大姨妈
lanwings 21:02:37
一直搞这图啊
LKs 21:02:45
seeu
lanwings 21:19:21
back
LKs 21:20:56
嗯
LKs 21:21:11

LKs 21:21:16
你这么做的意义何在
lanwings 21:21:26
你没更新么
LKs 21:21:38
你不说一声
lanwings 21:21:41
本来的意义是这里
lanwings 21:21:47

lanwings 21:21:52

LKs 21:22:01

lanwings 21:22:22
哦草还是连不上怎么回事
LKs 21:22:25
bug
lanwings 21:22:46
麻痹的
LKs 21:25:43
01:20:191 (1) -
LKs 21:25:49
这我问问
lanwings 21:25:54
能更新到不
LKs 21:25:57
嗯
lanwings 21:26:18
这里咋了
LKs 21:26:33
变速
lanwings 21:27:00
还要改红线?
LKs 21:27:08
。
LKs 21:27:11
不是
lanwings 21:27:22
0.0我全程1.5啊
LKs 21:27:34
我只是怕这slider unrankable
lanwings 21:27:57
原来是Hardy的
LKs 21:28:06
insane的
lanwings 21:28:21
咦
lanwings 21:28:42
我这可是完全符合音乐的
LKs 21:28:44

LKs 21:29:03
但不一定符合蠢比的要求
lanwings 21:29:26
不管那蠢B
lanwings 21:29:36
他不rank我找别人rank
lanwings 21:29:48
只要别戳了不reb就好
LKs 21:29:58
问题是我给泡
LKs 21:30:10
BAT不找你会搞我
LKs 21:30:58
我再问问
lanwings 21:31:01
这里其实没怎么变速的吧
LKs 21:31:16
用红点变速
lanwings 21:31:22
01:17:582 (1) - 跟这些是差不多长度的
lanwings 21:31:41
跟不用红点变速的区别不大```
lanwings 21:32:00
而且我用红点不是变速``而是要他有那种抖的感觉
LKs 21:32:17
我知道
LKs 21:32:23
我并不是表达我的感觉
LKs 21:32:27
我只是考虑bat的想法
lanwings 21:33:42

LKs 21:33:58
问题是你不是0108
lanwings 21:34:13
也对
LKs 21:39:20
你不想改我就不强迫了 我把这条写出来看别人怎么看好了
LKs 21:39:30
不过至少我觉得这种形状不太好看
lanwings 21:39:30
唔
lanwings 21:39:37
有没有好看点的形状
LKs 21:39:40
。
LKs 21:39:43
你是mapper
lanwings 21:39:52
你是神mapper
lanwings 21:40:08
这种slider我很少拉```你拉的应该比我多
LKs 21:40:31
我不拉这种sldier 跪了
lanwings 21:40:41
额
lanwings 21:41:41
话说那些slider过红线的不用管了?
LKs 21:42:02
。我忘了
lanwings 21:42:19
哦草``我重启过的啊```
LKs 21:20:56
嗯
LKs 21:21:11

LKs 21:21:16
你这么做的意义何在
lanwings 21:21:26
你没更新么
LKs 21:21:38
你不说一声
lanwings 21:21:41
本来的意义是这里
lanwings 21:21:47

lanwings 21:21:52

LKs 21:22:01

lanwings 21:22:22
哦草还是连不上怎么回事
LKs 21:22:25
bug
lanwings 21:22:46
麻痹的
LKs 21:25:43
01:20:191 (1) -
LKs 21:25:49
这我问问
lanwings 21:25:54
能更新到不
LKs 21:25:57
嗯
lanwings 21:26:18
这里咋了
LKs 21:26:33
变速
lanwings 21:27:00
还要改红线?
LKs 21:27:08
。
LKs 21:27:11
不是
lanwings 21:27:22
0.0我全程1.5啊
LKs 21:27:34
我只是怕这slider unrankable
lanwings 21:27:57
原来是Hardy的
LKs 21:28:06
insane的
lanwings 21:28:21
咦
lanwings 21:28:42
我这可是完全符合音乐的
LKs 21:28:44

LKs 21:29:03
但不一定符合蠢比的要求
lanwings 21:29:26
不管那蠢B
lanwings 21:29:36
他不rank我找别人rank
lanwings 21:29:48
只要别戳了不reb就好
LKs 21:29:58
问题是我给泡
LKs 21:30:10
BAT不找你会搞我
LKs 21:30:58
我再问问
lanwings 21:31:01
这里其实没怎么变速的吧
LKs 21:31:16
用红点变速
lanwings 21:31:22
01:17:582 (1) - 跟这些是差不多长度的
lanwings 21:31:41
跟不用红点变速的区别不大```
lanwings 21:32:00
而且我用红点不是变速``而是要他有那种抖的感觉
LKs 21:32:17
我知道
LKs 21:32:23
我并不是表达我的感觉
LKs 21:32:27
我只是考虑bat的想法
lanwings 21:33:42

LKs 21:33:58
问题是你不是0108
lanwings 21:34:13
也对
LKs 21:39:20
你不想改我就不强迫了 我把这条写出来看别人怎么看好了
LKs 21:39:30
不过至少我觉得这种形状不太好看
lanwings 21:39:30
唔
lanwings 21:39:37
有没有好看点的形状
LKs 21:39:40
。
LKs 21:39:43
你是mapper
lanwings 21:39:52
你是神mapper
lanwings 21:40:08
这种slider我很少拉```你拉的应该比我多
LKs 21:40:31
我不拉这种sldier 跪了
lanwings 21:40:41
额
lanwings 21:41:41
话说那些slider过红线的不用管了?
LKs 21:42:02
。我忘了
lanwings 21:42:19
哦草``我重启过的啊```
lanwings 21:42:23
别告诉我没了
LKs 21:42:28
我又
LKs 21:44:47
aibat跟我说红线不一致
lanwings 21:45:35
哪
LKs 21:45:40

LKs 21:45:47

lanwings 21:46:46
看出屎了都没看出哪不对
LKs 21:46:57
normal的最后一跟的offest跟我给你的不一致 其他全一样
LKs 21:47:15
除了hardy
LKs 21:47:22
那三个难度的最后一根线
LKs 21:47:24
的offest不对
lanwings 21:47:29
噢看到了
LKs 21:47:47
改红线真是让人蛋碎
LKs 21:47:57
下次我不看这种图了 我相信你也累成狗了
lanwings 21:48:01
1:56.393才是对的么
LKs 21:48:10

lanwings 21:48:13
这种还好
LKs 21:48:14
387
lanwings 21:48:40
额``就是说只有hard改了
lanwings 21:48:43
其他都没改
LKs 21:48:56
嗯
lanwings 21:49:02
96那图我才改成狗那样
lanwings 21:50:55
话说你知道hard的error是什么情况么
LKs 21:51:04
怎么又error了
lanwings 21:51:11
hardy的``一直都有
LKs 21:51:17
什么error
lanwings 21:51:32

LKs 21:51:48
wtf
LKs 21:52:04
slider太少？
lanwings 21:52:12
不清楚...
lanwings 21:55:11
尿了``选了1/6 snap
LKs 21:55:56
什么
lanwings 21:56:24
选了1/6 resnap
LKs 21:56:56
这有啥关系
lanwings 21:57:13
一堆1/4的连打乱了
LKs 21:57:21
233
lanwings 21:57:48
那个slider你怎么搞啊``
lanwings 21:58:00
slider过红线的
LKs 21:58:01
你想改么
LKs 21:58:05
。
LKs 21:58:11
你先改完了上传
lanwings 21:58:20
莫非可以不改?
LKs 21:58:24
。
LKs 21:58:35
我不让你改
LKs 21:58:37
以后你也得改
lanwings 21:58:41
对啊
LKs 21:58:47
那你就一起改了
lanwings 21:58:48
这个是unrankable的
LKs 21:59:13
哪个
lanwings 21:59:18
slider过红线啊
LKs 21:59:22
我知道。。
LKs 21:59:29
我现在关心的是你那个wiggle slider
lanwings 21:59:32
额
lanwings 22:00:03
我哭了``middleisland还有很多变速的曲子
LKs 22:00:16

lanwings 22:00:31
上传了
LKs 22:00:45
嗯
LKs 22:06:54

LKs 22:06:59
忙成狗
lanwings 22:07:00
0.0
LKs 22:07:30
好的红线没问题了
lanwings 22:07:43
唔``
lanwings 22:07:50
然后是红点么
LKs 22:08:06
红线你自己改一下呗
LKs 22:08:08
反正不难
LKs 22:08:17
牺牲一下跟歌没办法
lanwings 22:08:26
那我0.75呢?
LKs 22:08:48
不确定 你不是说长度没差多少么
lanwings 22:09:00
长度是差不多了
lanwings 22:09:22

LKs 22:09:37
那随你了
lanwings 22:09:54
红色1.5的
LKs 22:10:17
。
LKs 22:10:22
那1.0不就行了
lanwings 22:10:25
嗯
lanwings 22:10:29
1.0吧
lanwings 22:10:42
1.0总不会吐槽了
LKs 22:10:44
卧槽现在full reload没了？
lanwings 22:10:50
?
lanwings 22:10:54
full reload?
LKs 22:11:13
原来file菜单里有full reload项
lanwings 22:12:00
你说上传?
LKs 22:12:05
好的还有
LKs 22:12:06
没事
lanwings 22:12:26
full reload是干嘛的
lanwings 22:12:46

LKs 22:12:58
嗯
LKs 22:14:29
这个slider
LKs 22:14:31
有点蛋碎
LKs 22:14:35
01:32:660 (1) -
LKs 22:14:36
hard
lanwings 22:14:45
过红线那个么
LKs 22:15:03
过红线的repeatslider无解
lanwings 22:15:03
这个是很蛋碎
LKs 22:15:23
要不你换成circle吧
lanwings 22:15:26
不对啊``
lanwings 22:15:30
好像BPM不对
LKs 22:15:31
或者slider+circle
LKs 22:15:39
怎么不对
lanwings 22:15:44
01:32:787感觉中间有点对不上
lanwings 22:16:04
音乐比这里快了那么几毫秒好像
LKs 22:16:09
那有没有鼓
LKs 22:16:17
你指望小提琴能1ms不差怎么可能
lanwings 22:16:32
是鼓的
LKs 22:16:52
那就是鼓也不准233
LKs 22:16:55
你想加红线？
lanwings 22:16:58
不了
lanwings 22:17:00
我怕了
lanwings 22:17:13
老是SV BUG吓不起
lanwings 22:17:30
平时没问题还好``现在各种BUG实在玩不起
LKs 22:17:31
我的建议就是变成这样
LKs 22:17:34
直接解决问题
lanwings 22:17:43
我知道这样好0.0
lanwings 22:17:53
问题是这是GD```
lanwings 22:18:19
在想该怎么摆会跟小草莓的风格相似点``
lanwings 22:19:02
要是我就直接这样上了
LKs 22:19:12
。
LKs 22:19:19
这是hard你这么加jump大丈夫
lanwings 22:19:32
<.<所以得废脑筋
lanwings 22:19:47
这其实不算jump
LKs 22:19:58
那就加

unified red sections

a lot of nazi adjustments

fixed all sliders that pass through red sections

fixed an unrankable wiggle slider

some detailed changes

bubbled

I hope i didn't miss anything

1. 01:22:235 - Add new timing section here (6/4), the metronome resets here actually...
2. 01:23:774 - A new timing section here might also be required (6/4)

1. 00:39:977 (1) - Unsnapped slider end

1. 00:32:933 (8) - Whistle on slider's repeat?

1. 00:32:151 (3) - I'd new combo this because of spacing change, but it's up to you (:
2. 00:32:412 (4) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
3. 00:38:151 (3) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
4. 00:40:238 (2) - The rhythm here is actually circle + repeating 1/8 slider, but 1/4 lands on beat too :3
5. 00:43:368 (2) - Same as above
6. 00:50:673 (4) - Stack above (5) instead? Plays better this way imo...
7. 00:52:760 (1) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
8. 00:57:455 (4) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
9. 01:03:977 (5) - Should be snapped to 1/6 (1/6 slider)
10. 01:42:573 (1) - Uhm, why no whistle on slider's start here? o.o...

1. 00:48:846 (1) - Uhm, why no hitsound on slider's end? I personally feel a finish is very required here (try default Normal hitfinish with ~30% volume though)
2. 01:01:107 (6) - There is no 1/6 here, the rhythm should be circle + 1/8 repeating slider
3. 01:03:455 (1,2,3,4) - Delete (2,3)? I'm also sure that there's no 1/6 here... (you can then create a jump between (1), (4), and the pink (1) though :3)
4. 01:29:647 (6) - Uhm, this jump feels quite random... Put in ~x:295 y:344 (yellow (1)'s start) instead?
5. 01:37:366 (1) - Try to add a default soft-hitwhistle in 01:37:614, it fits the piano very much (:

Niva wrote:

Uhm, Lan Wings, I take a quick look on your map and found some timing-related issues (I'm not going deep into the mapping though):

1. 01:22:235 - Add new timing section here (6/4), the metronome resets here actually...imo i think my timing should be fine, your timing is right but not that necessary so i decide not to change them
2. 01:23:774 - A new timing section here might also be required (6/4)

[Easy]

1. 00:39:977 (1) - Unsnapped slider endfixed

[Normal]

1. 00:32:933 (8) - Whistle on slider's repeat?fixed

[Insane]

-> I'd rename this to 'Flight' or something more imaginative, sounds better for me :3I think Insane is good=w=

1. 00:48:846 (1) - Uhm, why no hitsound on slider's end? I personally feel a finish is very required here (try default Normal hitfinish with ~30% volume though)fixed
2. 01:01:107 (6) - There is no 1/6 here, the rhythm should be circle + 1/8 repeating slider i didn't choose to follow piano so no change
3. 01:03:455 (1,2,3,4) - Delete (2,3)? I'm also sure that there's no 1/6 here... (you can then create a jump between (1), (4), and the pink (1) though :3)Here is my own rhythm sry no change
4. 01:29:647 (6) - Uhm, this jump feels quite random... Put in ~x:295 y:344 (yellow (1)'s start) instead?fixed
5. 01:37:366 (1) - Try to add a default soft-hitwhistle in 01:37:614, it fits the piano very much (:fixed

Hardy's mapping style is really wonderful :3 - however please take a good look at these timing issues, especially the red line issues...

Also try to add whistle on the last spinner's end if you want, it sounds beautiful~

Niva wrote:

Uhm, about timing, that two timing sections are required because of the metronome change, so in Taiko the downbeat lines are rendered correctly + to make it sound correct on Nightcore mod also, this issue is confirmed with Sallad4Ever (you don't need to resnap/recalculate anything though xD)ok :< fixed it

...also to new 1/6 sliders on Hardy (00:38:151 (3) , 00:52:759 (1) , and 01:03:977 (5)) don't forget to add whistle on slider end as well orz (:fixed

Niva wrote:

About 01:03:455... Somehow for me it works because of the following 1/6 though~ (plus I see no complain about it on previous posts)

(I've seen the usage of a 1/4 repeating slider to simplify the 1/4 + three 1/8 rhythm in this map though)

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Because of timing change, I can't rank... Fixed a wrong 1/3 snapping in Insane via PM (:
(I hope I didn't miss anything, AIBAT is still not compatible with file format v10... Next MAT/BAT/Modder please take a careful look)

Rebubbled ~

Ibuki Suika wrote:

MiddleIsland最喜欢的还是Allard

Garven wrote:

'sup


[Hard]
00:55:629 (1,2,3) - Not seeing why the spacing is so low here. because i did it previously at 00:30:586 (1,2,3) - also imo a lower spacing makes it prettier
01:13:924 (1,1) - Remove new combo well for this, i want it to be good visually... i tried to remove them all but the fact is the combo counts to 8 which is high... i also tired to remove the second one and the result shows it doesn't look that perfect as it is now, at least for me. If it doesn't really make a big difference on playing, i would rather keep them

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ?

As for the hard, the first pattern read a lot better than the second one - I'd adjust it so that it transitions a little smoother.
New combo spam jacks up the HP recovery. Also it looks fine and an 8 combo is -not- high at all.

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ? fixed

Beren wrote:

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ? fixed

http://puu.sh/1fEgp

Garven wrote:

[Storyboard]
00:36:846 - Hrm, right now the credits are really unbalanced. Maybe start the "Beatmap by Lan wings" here, then transition to the Storyboard by Beren at 00:43:107 - ?

As for the hard, the first pattern read a lot better than the second one - I'd adjust it so that it transitions a little smoother.
New combo spam jacks up the HP recovery. Also it looks fine and an 8 combo is -not- high at all.

Sallad4ever wrote:

It's better if you can make a diff. specific credit on Hardy diff cause that one is GD and made by -Baby Strawberry-

Lan wings wrote:

ok

Garven wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

ok

Sun Rainbow wrote:

wow omedeto~~~~

12BARRY21 wrote:

瞎了._. 恭喜啦~~

Flask wrote:

耶

AngelHoney wrote:

\0.0/

Selee wrote:

Congratz~

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hardy diff is just plain beautiful.
Congratz

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Sallad4ever wrote:

Hardy diff is just plain beautiful.
Congratz

thank you

cmn_891127 wrote:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~！恭喜！

ShockBuddy wrote:

I Like ^^

WVS wrote:

Chinese mappers are awesome ! !
很不错！