The BPM is doubled - why so? (For the sake of menu and correctness, I recommend halving it)
I find the Offset a little too early, I'd say increase by 3-8.
Hitsound volume is a little to high aswell, might use -10% overall (especcially the whistles at the beginning are too loud).
As for hitsounding on Another: Try accentuation some beats and variate the volume (especcially the whistle-passages), as in your 3-whistle-combos you could use 45% for the first, 30% for the second and 50% for the last (big white beat) one to give let the hitsounding follow the actual beats better, also in volume.
General thing about Another diff: I have to state, I don't like the high spacing - as for me, the song seems calm & such and not made for such spacing and patterning; the map itself looks fine and I can imagine other people liking it but as for me, I'd prefer a lower one on this song so I will just state my general taste on it.
Things that bugged me while going through:
As for the map: 6/10
As for the fittingness of it: No :<
I find the hyper-diff more fitting even though the curves were a bit unbalanced, especcially in the beginning - use the sliderpoints more at about half of the sliders length and create a blanced and well-flowing curve (and as for the opening sliderpatterns, rotate the slider by -35° and put them next to each other, fits quite well imo).
As for there:
Map: 7/10
Fittingness: 7/10, could need more balanced curves and a bit more overall-conjunction; some parts felt too loose (as the pree-kiai); also, still too many 'lines' for my taste.
Hope you see any stuff in this reasoned and I might recheck later (call me back in some time) so I can go through it allbitchy thoroughly.
I find the Offset a little too early, I'd say increase by 3-8.
Hitsound volume is a little to high aswell, might use -10% overall (especcially the whistles at the beginning are too loud).
As for hitsounding on Another: Try accentuation some beats and variate the volume (especcially the whistle-passages), as in your 3-whistle-combos you could use 45% for the first, 30% for the second and 50% for the last (big white beat) one to give let the hitsounding follow the actual beats better, also in volume.
General thing about Another diff: I have to state, I don't like the high spacing - as for me, the song seems calm & such and not made for such spacing and patterning; the map itself looks fine and I can imagine other people liking it but as for me, I'd prefer a lower one on this song so I will just state my general taste on it.
Things that bugged me while going through:
- *I suggest lowering the volume in the SC:2-nonkiai parts by 5-10%
**You use many 90°-angles, I don't feel like the song is calling for squares - I could imagine blanketing sliders and such way better (same for straight lines, I just dislike them here, the song isn't static).
***00:42:971 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - stuff like this feels way too highly spaced and un-based on the music; there is nothing calling for a high spacing increasement here, why do you do it then? (But I guess that belongs to the point 'I find this unfitting because of the difficulty and wideness even though the song is calm and slow'.)
****00:49:093 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this really bugged me because of the consistent 196BPM-1/2 spam which doesn't represent the song at all, at least from my point of view
*****01:17:103 (4,1) - those are way too close to each other
As for the map: 6/10
As for the fittingness of it: No :<
I find the hyper-diff more fitting even though the curves were a bit unbalanced, especcially in the beginning - use the sliderpoints more at about half of the sliders length and create a blanced and well-flowing curve (and as for the opening sliderpatterns, rotate the slider by -35° and put them next to each other, fits quite well imo).
As for there:
Map: 7/10
Fittingness: 7/10, could need more balanced curves and a bit more overall-conjunction; some parts felt too loose (as the pree-kiai); also, still too many 'lines' for my taste.
Hope you see any stuff in this reasoned and I might recheck later (call me back in some time) so I can go through it all