DarkRingSystem wrote:

[Sun Rainbow]

00:31:580 (X) - 补一个note
00:31:964 (1) - del NC
00:32:541 (2) - del 这个note 或者 NC这个 记得要取消下个note的NC
00:40:426 (X) - 补一个note
01:08:599 (3) - 这个节奏 不对 把这个note 放在 01:08:503 或 01:08:695
01:33:503 (6) - 结尾加个note 是不是要好些？ 不……这里没有声音

大概就这么多 这只是在你框架上的 mod 其实有很多节奏上的建议 不过 那就要动大手术了
第一次map 这样其实就不错了 慢慢摸索吧 加油~

arken1015 wrote:

[Sun Rainbow]
00:13:887 (1) - As this note is just end of a part, remove new combo?
00:37:349 (3) - Might be covered by 00:36:579 (9)'s end point.
01:01:387 (1,2) - Swap new combo?
01:02:926 (1,2) - I dunno if these notes are just for bonus HP zone or just for nothing :3...



[Taiko Oni]
00:50:810 - No need of speed changing imo orz
00:55:426 - Spinner here?
01:23:118 (403) - Delete finish


all change thx><

meow

1. Rename the No_Gu diff in "No_Gu's Easy" or "Gu's Easy".
2. Rename the kosiga diff in "kosiga's Normal".
3. Rename the fumis diff in "fumis' Insane".

1. 00:25:041 (3) - I don't like how this finish sounds and I also think it could be pretty confusing to hear during gameplay. What about to remove it? Maybe adding a a clap instead.
2. 00:29:272 (1) - I guess you forgot to add clap on this slider's head
3. 00:29:272 (1) - Still here I can hear a sound similar to a whistle on the slider's tail. So following my suggestion above it'd be better to use clap just on the slider's head removing it from the tail but adding a whistle hitsound instead :3 It fits much better IMO
4. 00:35:810 (1) - The same thing above. Remove clap from the slider's end adding a whistle instead to fit that sound similar to a whistle.
5. 01:29:272 (3) - Finish on the slider's head to fit that clash in the cymbals
6. Pretty nice and solid map, good job here

1. Circle Size -1
2. HP, AR and OD -1
3. 00:19:849 (4) - I'd remove this circle since this is a Normal diff and you don't need to use it also because you are following an 1/1 rhythm, so..
4. 00:36:195 (2) - Following the previous hitsound pattern, I mean 00:29:272 (1,2,3,4), remove whistle from here
5. 00:38:503 (1) - Finish + whistle would sound good here
6. 00:38:887 (2,3) - Add SC:1 claps on each white line of each element
7. 00:41:580 (1,2,3) - Add SC:1 clap on the (1) tail, remove whistle from (2), add SC:1 claps on (3)'s head, reverse arrow and tail
8. 00:44:656 (1,2,3) - You already know about hitsounds
9. 00:48:887 (4) - SC:1 claps on slider's head, repeat and tail :\
10. 00:58:310 (3,4,5,6) - Use the same rhythm you used for 01:04:464 (3,4) and 01:10:618 (3,4) plz. An 1/2 rhythm is more enjoyable to play with sliders instead of circles for a Normal diff
11. 01:30:233 (4,5) - What about to replace the (4) with an 1/2 slider with a repeat so that it fits the vocal? I mean: http://puu.sh/1erDh
12. Just small suggestions about hitsounds

1. 00:05:041 (2) - To keep consistency with the previos pattern use whistle
2. 00:06:003 (4) - ^
3. 00:06:964 (7,8) - Whistles on (7)'s head and tail and on (8)?
4. 00:26:195 (1) - I'd use a soft default finish on this slider's head to emphasize the cymbals
5. 00:46:003 (2) - Remove whistle from the slider's body
6. 00:49:272 (5) - You could add whistle here instead. Add new combo too
7. 00:55:426 (1) - Reduce by 1/2
8. 01:08:406 (2) - Move 1/4 later, making something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460896
9. 01:11:964 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
10. 01:16:195 (1) - ^
11. 01:24:464 (6) - Overlap better with 01:23:695 (3)
12. 01:24:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally I don't like how these whistles sound during this part
13. 01:33:214 (9) - Remove circle

1. Loveling map ~

1. Center all the settings

Chewin wrote:

[No_Gu]

1. 00:25:041 (3) - I don't like how this finish sounds and I also think it could be pretty confusing to hear during gameplay. What about to remove it? Maybe adding a a clap instead.in fact if you remove finish you'll hear the finish sound in musci.anyway turn down to 35%
2. 00:29:272 (1) - I guess you forgot to add clap on this slider's head
3. 00:29:272 (1) - Still here I can hear a sound similar to a whistle on the slider's tail. So following my suggestion above it'd be better to use clap just on the slider's head removing it from the tail but adding a whistle hitsound instead :3 It fits much better IMOadd whistle to head..
4. 00:35:810 (1) - The same thing above. Remove clap from the slider's end adding a whistle instead to fit that sound similar to a whistle.ahhh I don't like
5. 01:29:272 (3) - Finish on the slider's head to fit that clash in the cymbalsK
6. Pretty nice and solid map, good job hereThx

Chewin wrote:

[kosiga]

1. Circle Size -1 Is this map difficult? I think that it is a possible range to use cs4 in this map.
2. HP, AR and OD -1 I adjusted it to see other diff. HD, OD -1
3. 00:19:849 (4) - I'd remove this circle since this is a Normal diff and you don't need to use it also because you are following an 1/1 rhythm, so.. ok. fixed
4. 00:36:195 (2) - Following the previous hitsound pattern, I mean 00:29:272 (1,2,3,4), remove whistle from here fixed
5. 00:38:503 (1) - Finish + whistle would sound good here sorry, did not match me a little x.x
6. 00:38:887 (2,3) - Add SC:1 claps on each white line of each element why o.o? I used N hitnormal(clap) between 00:26:195~00:50:426. Therefore, there is a question about using SC suddenly ==;
7. 00:41:580 (1,2,3) - Add SC:1 clap on the (1) tail, remove whistle from (2), add SC:1 claps on (3)'s head, reverse arrow and tail remove whistle fixed. others ^
8. 00:44:656 (1,2,3) - You already know about hitsounds ^
9. 00:48:887 (4) - SC:1 claps on slider's head, repeat and tail :\ ^
10. 00:58:310 (3,4,5,6) - Use the same rhythm you used for 01:04:464 (3,4) and 01:10:618 (3,4) plz. An 1/2 rhythm is more enjoyable to play with sliders instead of circles for a Normal diff. ok. change rhythm.
11. 01:30:233 (4,5) - What about to replace the (4) with an 1/2 slider with a repeat so that it fits the vocal? I mean: http://puu.sh/1erDh I prefer a circle to a consecutive repeat slider. ( 01:30:233 (4,1,2) - )
12. Just small suggestions about hitsounds

Chewin wrote:

Hi Sun Rainbow, mod request from my modding bubble queue ;3

[General]

1. Rename the No_Gu diff in "No_Gu's Easy" or "Gu's Easy".
2. Rename the kosiga diff in "kosiga's Normal".
3. Rename the fumis diff in "fumis' Insane".

Change.



[Sun Rainbow]

1. 00:05:041 (2) - To keep consistency with the previos pattern use whistle
2. 00:06:003 (4) - ^
3. 00:06:964 (7,8) - Whistles on (7)'s head and tail and on (8)?
4. 00:26:195 (1) - I'd use a soft default finish on this slider's head to emphasize the cymbals
5. 00:46:003 (2) - Remove whistle from the slider's body
6. 00:49:272 (5) - You could add whistle here instead. Add new combo too
7. 00:55:426 (1) - Reduce by 1/2
8. 01:08:406 (2) - Move 1/4 later, making something like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/460896
9. 01:11:964 (1) - Useless new combo, remove it
10. 01:16:195 (1) - ^
11. 01:24:464 (6) - Overlap better with 01:23:695 (3)
12. 01:24:656 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Personally I don't like how these whistles sound during this part
13. 01:33:214 (9) - Remove circle

All Fixed Thanks

[fumis]

1. Loveling map ~

[Taiko Oni]

1. Center all the settings

All object is on center.

I thought to mod less stuff since this is a request for a bubble.
Btw, all right, since it's mostly an hitsounds mod you can call me back after you have fixed

kosiga wrote:

\:3/

go go~

Lan wings wrote:

日彩虹の处女泡

Strawberry wrote:

Lan wings wrote:

日彩虹の处女泡

Lan wings wrote:

日彩虹の处女泡

Lan wings wrote:

日彩虹の处女泡

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best.

SLAP SLAP SLAP SLAP SLAP ==////////////////////////////////////

Garven wrote:

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best I think 1 is best sorry
Hana - i wo Tokinasai (Short Ver.) (Sun Rainbow).osb Delete this please Delete

[Taiko]
00:50:810 - Not really sure why this is at 1.1x Changed
[Hard]
00:15:330 (4) - Why are you adding 1/4 rhythms like this during a relatively calm intro?
00:51:772 (2) - Not aligned with 00:50:233 (2) -
00:53:118 (3) - Not seeing why you need a 1/4 rhythm here
00:54:656 (4) - The rhythm here should be like this:

01:13:887 (1,2) - Uh, were these claps intended?
01:21:772 (1) - Not seeing why you need a 1/4 rhythm here Vocal
01:27:733 (6) - New combo
01:28:310 (1) - Remove new combo
01:29:272 (2) - New combo
All changed except that 1/4 rhythm

Lan wings wrote:

日彩虹の处女泡

fumis wrote:

[Insane]
00:02:253 (3) - Why 1/4 rhythms during a fairly calm intro?
00:05:618 (4,5,6,7) - ^

MomonoHana wrote:

nice map