-Bakari- wrote:

hi
request from pm.

[General]
add op in tags ok~
and maybe add Sunrise in tags too. i think they should be in tags (it's their anime, lol) fine~

[Banana's Day!]
AR 3 or 2 fits with your SV better and more readale for beginners
00:48:132 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst. hard to read for easiest diff

[Normal Day!]
HP drain +1 plays better, imo
00:38:571 (2,1) - nazi: stack?
00:50:768 (1) - spacing! ctrl+r would work fix~
01:21:922 (1) - soft hitsound (5%) it will silince spinner properly

[KDS's Taiko Day!]
nice!

[Star's Day]
clear Hard, as always :3

[My Day!]
00:19:120 (1) - clap here? :3
00:45:494 (1) - kinda unsure about this slider. try to add one more reverse? follows vocals closer, imo

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nice mapset.

Serox wrote:

Nice Beatmap and of course nice song.
Nicely done!

1. Folder: Try to change format for "TaikoBG.png" into .jpg? this way is reduce some file size ouo

1. Difficulty Setting: change the od -1? since ar was high in this diff, try to make more easier with decrease od 0.0
2. 00:05:274 (3) - add finish in the end? I can hear a bit cymbal sounder in there~
3. 00:09:230 (1) - how about make this reflected with slider (3), then change the pattern in the next note like this?
4. 00:11:208 (1,2,3) - and for these pattern is like this? I think this way is moar symmetry instead the current. don't forget to fix spacing if you do this~
5. 00:15:823 (3) - same with 00:05:274 (3) -
6. 00:21:428 (1) - how about move this spinner into next long white tick (00:21:757) and add an note in here? try to start the spinner from cymbal sounder heard is much better imo
7. 00:27:032 (1) - ngg, try to remove circle (2) and make this more longer until 00:27:527 then add a reverse? seems more following the vocal if you do this. for 2nd tick (after reverse) you can turn off that so, the sound is comfortable to hear~ see the picture if you don't understand lol
8. 00:29:669 (1) - from reason above, remove new combo in here for make the previous comboset isn't too short
9. 00:45:164 (1) - hey, this is too near from (3). during gameplay, this circle is appear early and make a trap to player orz. use distance snap is way to fix this~
10. 00:51:757 - add an note in here with clap sound for following the vocal and drum sound. also, this way make this pattern have same comboset with before pattern
11. 00:52:746 (4) - same as 00:05:274 (3) -
12. 00:59:340 (2) - add clap in the end for consistency hitsounding and follow the drum sound~
13. 01:00:659 (4) - this is overlap with slider (1). not good too look when gameplay ;~; try to change into another pattern--
14. 01:03:295 (3) - same as 00:05:274 (3) -
15. 01:14:175 (3) - ^
16. 01:16:812 (3) - ehh,, this slider reverse is forcing fit with the vocal-- I think more be fit with the song if end this slider at 01:17:472 and add an note at 01:17:801 the sound is nice imo ><
17. 01:18:461 (1) - same here, try to remove the reverse then end this slider at 01:19:120 and add an note in 01:19:450 the current rhythm is really kinda forcing fit with vocal or instrument ;A;
18. 01:20:768 (1,2,3) - try to not make 1/2 slider in easy diff. this is may to make the newbie will break their combo. use this rhytm instead. alsoo, see the spinner too in the timeline because that moved into red tick~

1. 00:19:120 (1) - add finish in here
2. 00:23:735 (1) - use distance snap-- don't make trap in here. the player will think this is 1/1 because the spacing is too near just like in 1/1 altough you added new combo. or if you don't want, make this stack at (1)'s end.
3. 00:30:988 (3) - the reverse a bit overlap with (2)'s hitburst. try to make the direction opposite with (2)'s tail? like this
4. 00:34:944 (1) - I think the finish sound much better to follow the hard cymbal sounder instead the whistle
5. 00:35:768 (2,3,1) - hmm a bit overlap in here. try to ctrl + J slider (1)?
6. 00:56:702 (2,3,4) - the slider border was touch the previous slider... try to move this all 1 grid up?
7. 01:06:263 (4) - don't stack this with (3). this is will make the players think this is 1/2. try to use distance snap for more easier.
8. 01:11:208 (4) - add clap in the end? seems fit with vocal and make combination with before notes (1,2,3)
9. 01:13:845 (4) - ^
10. 01:15:329 (2) - add clap in the reverse like you did at 01:10:054 (2) - and 01:12:691 (2) -
11. 01:19:779 (1) - add finish in beginning for cymbal sounder~?
12. 01:21:428 - 01:22:087 - hmm try to following the guitar sound and a cymbal in spinner beginning? add some notes like this picture~ then, add finish (soft) in circle (2) and (3)'s end.. the sound fit with the instrument 8''D
13. 01:25:054 - change into soft for make sure the end of spinner is silent properly~

1. 00:19:779 (2) - add finish too in the end? in there not just drum heard, but the a bit cymbal was hear too
2. 00:22:087 (2,3) - add clap in beginning for following the drum in music?
3. 00:27:527 (2) - sorry nazi-- but move the 2nd point into x:360 y:188 for make this slider blanketing (1) more smoother?
4. 00:41:538 (3,4) - ;A;-- try to move these notes 2 grid down? make the (3) symmetry with slider (1). when gameplay is better if do this~
5. 00:47:637 (1,2,3) - this jump is really make shock orz-- altough i know you try to make this fit with vocal and this pattern would be make effect. but, this is too hard to catch for hard diff-- 4.2x jump orz--
6. 01:20:109 (2,3) - same as 00:22:087 (2,3) -

1. Difficulty Setting: decrease the HP -1 .. you want to kill players ;A;
2. 00:21:428 (1) - add finish in the end for follow the cymbal sounder~
3. 00:22:911 (4) - this part become have lower volume music, try to remove the finish-- not fit altough the vocal seems fit with that orz
4. 00:25:466 (9) - I don't think this part have to triplet-- try to follow the guitar sound properly..so, remove this note.. well, I will mention same think with this-- below:
   
   SPOILER

   1. 00:26:785 (5) -
   2. 00:28:104 (5) -
   3. 00:34:367 (6) -
5. 00:32:472 (1,3) - fix a bit the shape of these slider? seems not good if between right and left not symmetry orz
   

   260,152,32472,6,0,B|212:104|124:104|76:152,1,200
   188,256,33131,2,0,B|232:304|320:304|372:256,1,200

6. 00:33:626 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this pattern more smoother shape like this?
7. 01:00:329 (2) - move this 2 grid right for make symmetry with (1)?
8. 01:19:779 (2) - add finish for follow the cymbal instead the whistle orz--
9. 01:25:054 - change into soft for make sure the end of spinner is silent properly~

• • 00:34:615 - 加個圈?
  • 00:37:582 (1,2,3) - 可以試試排三角形~
  •00:45:164 (1) - 就放正中央吧~ xP
  • 01:16:812 (3) - 節奏怪怪的>_> 這樣好些
  
  • 01:21:922 - 改finish好些

• • 00:37:582 (1) - 不對稱喔... 幫你拉好了~~ :> (間距那些你自己再調一下>.<) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419501
  

  156,100,37582,6,0,B|204:100|216:148|216:148|256:172|296:148|296:148|308:100|360:100,1,250

  • 00:43:516 (1) - 往右一格好些~
  • 00:56:043 (1,2,3,4) - 疊到了不太好看.. 把這些用分開點吧~ 好看些喔~ :3
  • 01:21:922 (1) - 改成圈(加finish) 然後轉排從01:22:005 - 開始吧~

• • 00:08:242 (3) - Move to [X:256 Y:132]?
  • 01:15:329 (4) - To make a good four-side shape.. plz move to [X:312 Y:228] It looks more better~ :>

• • 00:15:164 (1,2,3,4) - 順序可以試試這樣~ 我覺得打起來更順!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419531
  •00:24:395 (3) - finish? 挺配的w
  • 00:29:010 (3) - 往上一格吧~

12BARRY21 wrote:

• Suggestion
• Extremely suggestion
• Unrankable stuff
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<Normal Day!>

• • 00:37:582 (1) - 不對稱喔... 幫你拉好了~~ :> (間距那些你自己再調一下>.<) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419501
  

  156,100,37582,6,0,B|204:100|216:148|216:148|256:172|296:148|296:148|308:100|360:100,1,250

  感覺還好吶~~不過謝謝啦><
  • 00:43:516 (1) - 往右一格好些~ fix~
  • 00:56:043 (1,2,3,4) - 疊到了不太好看.. 把這些用分開點吧~ 好看些喔~ :3 fix~
  • 01:21:922 (1) - 改成圈(加finish) 然後轉排從01:22:005 - 開始吧~ X

<My Day!>

• • 00:15:164 (1,2,3,4) - 順序可以試試這樣~ 我覺得打起來更順!! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/419531 X
  •00:24:395 (3) - finish? 挺配的w X
  • 00:29:010 (3) - 往上一格吧~ fix~

只有找到這些.. 抱歉啦 >_>
小米Go~~~~ :>

Byakugan249 wrote:

you want a MAT request, you got one . i found this on #modreqs. please tell me what you fixed and what you didn't fix, but provide a reason as in to why you didn't any of my suggestions.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice, or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
Remove "op" in the tags. it'll only accept 3 letter words, not 2. fix~

[Normal Day!]
maybe increase the HP and OD by 1 so that the diff spread between easy and normal is even? It's too hard for normal D:
00:02:966 (4) - add a whistle here. it'll start the whistle pattern from the end of (1) and at (2) at the next combo here. fix~
01:01:318 (1,2) - these sliders look completely different. make them the same for a smooth transition during gameplay. fix~
ahh good diff here. i like it Thanks~

[My Day!]
00:09:724 (4) - stack this on the circles in this combo to continue the flow to the next note. Is this the mean I should stack 4 and 6? A little jump is good for playing.
00:23:571 (1) - replace this for a triplet. i feel that by doing this, it'll put a nice challenge for players since this is the last diff. A repeat slider should fit the music IMO.
00:23:900 (2) - the clap is too loud and it might distract other players during gameplay IMO. remove the clap to prevent this. fix~
00:32:060 (7) - this note might catch players off guard, so remove it. i don't hear any drums in this part. To fit the 00:29:340 (4,5,6) I think it's great.
00:34:615 (7) - do Ctrl+R instead. the jump will be perfect as the lyrics change here IMO. ok
00:56:043 (1) - you forgot a whistle at the end. ad it to keep that whistle pattern going. fix~
01:00:329 (2) - *nazi* i think it'd be better if you can align this to (1). it looks odd to see a note out of place during gameplay IMO.
01:06:593 (1) - i feel that this spinner should be moved up by 1/4 and a circle should be added to follow the drums in this part of the song. the reason is that it plays oddly during gameplay for a spinner to appear like this IMO. I think a spinner should fit the vocal.

I guess that's it. i think this needs work before it can go for a bubble. in the meantime get more mods and when you feel that it's ready for a MAT, ask another one. GL Great~

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Banana's Day!]
Decrease the OD and AR by 1. i think the current settings would be too hard for beginners to react to and to hit the notes. ok to me though
00:04:615 (2) - make this slider look like (1) for a smooth transition from the previous slider. smooth is not essential, so i keep what it was
00:07:911 (3) - remove the repeat and add a circle at the 1st downbeat. that circle should be a NC because of the change in the lyrics. sorry again, for nc should go with the notes, but the origin of the notes to me
00:12:527 (3) - same as 00:04:615. it should look like this.
00:14:834 - add a circle here. it'll keep that 1/1 rhythm going from the previous pattern since it's following the vocals.
00:18:461 (3) - same as 00:07:911.
00:45:164 (1) - how about stacking this part to emphasize this part of the song in the vocals?
00:48:132 (1) - you have to make this note fully visible for beginners to see. since this is the easiest diff, beginners might have a tough time finding this note due to the spinner-osu file covering it. i suggest moving it below the middle where it can be fully visible for beginners to see.fixed
00:49:450 (3) - align this to the end of (1) for smoother flow from the last 2 notes in this part.
00:51:757 - same as 00:14:834.
00:56:702 (1) - same as 00:07:911.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[KDS' Taiko Day!]
00:20:933 (2) - d here. no cymbals are heard in this part of the song. just the drums. you can hear the drums' volume decreasing here. ok fixed x3
00:31:977 (3) - hmm try adding a k here? i think the flow would be smoother with this kind of pattern during gameplay IMO. this part(pattern) is based on vocal sounds. yep, "ddkkddk" is not so bad. but "ddkkddd" is much better than that IMO :33
your taiko diffs never fail to impress me .

spboxer3 wrote:

Taiko

• 
  
  mapping
  (These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  

1. 01:17:966 (1,2,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Those pattern are a kinda odd for me (some overmapped) suggest this pattern: ↓
   

   248,192,77142,1,0,0:0
   248,192,77307,1,0,0:0
   248,192,77389,1,0,0:0
   248,192,77472,5,8,0:0
   248,192,77637,5,0,0:0
   248,192,77719,1,0,0:0
   248,192,77801,5,8,0:0
   248,192,77966,5,0,0:0
   248,192,78049,1,0,0:0
   248,192,78131,5,8,0:0
   248,192,78213,5,0,0:0
   248,192,78296,1,0,0:0
   248,192,78378,1,0,0:0
   248,192,78461,5,8,0:0
   248,192,78626,5,0,0:0
   248,192,78708,5,8,0:0
   248,192,78790,1,8,0:0
   248,192,78873,1,8,0:0
   228,176,78955,1,8,0:0
   248,192,79038,1,8,0:0
   248,192,79120,1,8,0:0
   248,192,79450,5,0,0:0
   248,192,79615,5,8,0:0

Andrea wrote:

[Star's Day!]

AR +1 is much better for this difficulty.

Just make that small fix and I'll rank this (:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

It's a trap!
Piko is male XD

Sallad4ever wrote:

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

It's a trap!
Piko is male XD

lol
I wonder how many people knew about this

Alduric wrote:

The most annoying map I have ever played.