Katty Pie wrote:

hi ^^

Insane

00:26:766(1) - so ugly slider ;w; try this http://puu.sh/NXUE oks
00:48:562(7,8) - maybe make so http://puu.sh/NXWP bcz repeat slider 8 hides under note 5. It's not fine oks

Hard

00:17:742 - better add note here, it better follow the music http://puu.sh/NY0V oks
00:32:742 - ^ oks
00:36:141(1,3) - make more symmetric http://puu.sh/NY3Doks
00:53:250 - ugly slider form ;w; http://puu.sh/NY4J oks
01:33:094(3,4,5) - correct spacingok

Normal

OD -1 ok

Good luck~~

DakeDekaane wrote:

Hi, mod time~ :3


[Normal]

00:19:266 (1) - This slider has 1.0x spacing, and the spacing you use is 0.9x, re-arrange or put it closer. done
00:26:766 (1) - Move to x:224 y:244 done
00:32:391 (3) - 1 grid left done
00:39:891 (4) - ^ dine
01:50:672 (7) - ^ done
01:51:141 (1) - Same observation as the 1st for this diff, re-arrange this slider in a way it keeps a consistent spacing done

I think that's all~ Good luck c:

Leorda wrote:

Ahhh, I remember this map


[Skinning]
* It is just me or the approachcircle seems off-centered? done
*default-comma.png, default-dot.png, default-percent.png, and default-x.png are unused. Remove these four done


[Normal]
00:49:266 (5,1) - Swap new combo for your combo pattern done
01:06:141 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern done
01:53:484 (1) - ^ done


[Hard]
00:31:219 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Make a pattern like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398284 done


[sewerty5's Insane]
00:07:547 (7) - Move 1 grid right for allign the pattern (nazi) done


@Gabe : so my bubble popped because of submission error?

oh, once you done, forum PM me for remind me

Leorda wrote:

@Gabe : so my bubble popped because of submission error? Yes. When you bubbled it, some errors happenned after the submition. When we tryed to download it, the mp3 was missing and some difficulties too. So yeah.

oh, once you done, forum PM me for remind me

osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Touhou - Iosys Tewis Mapaku To Endless Wi PV .mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 84881
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.8
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Endless Tewi-ma Park
Artist:IOSYS
Creator:eLtigreXXx
Version:Gabe's Easy
Source:Touhou
Tags:sewerty5 pokedigi Gabe Tewi Inaba usatei

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:2
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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Video,-140,"[IOSYS] Endless Tewi-Ma Park.flv"
//Break Periods
2,68216,79701
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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7547,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0
22078,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
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114891,-100,4,1,1,40,0,0


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Kuroshi wrote:

May I work on a Taiko difficulty?

• 00:08:953 (5,6,7) - it'd be better if you adjusted 5 to 4's approach circle, also, I don't really like how 6 go off from 7, they don't take its flow with them
  00:12:937 (7) - since you have that high sound in the music here, which is quite stronger than the stuff before, I suggest a new combo and moving it further apart, as a jump
  00:14:812 (7) - ^
  00:20:437 (6) - ^
  00:22:312 (6) - ^
  00:27:937 (6) - ^
  00:29:812 (6) - ^
  00:35:203 (3) - ^ also suggesting to split it up into circle-slider instead of reverse-slider
  00:37:078 (3) - ^
  00:42:703 (4,5) - ^ but other way around (swap slider and circle)
  00:44:812 (5) - ^ (well without the splitting up)
  00:48:562 (8) - a tripplet feels more fitting here because of the vocals
  00:50:437 (6,7) - make it a jump
  00:52:312 (6) - ^
  00:55:125 (2,3) - this doesn't fit, the vocals go in 2-1/4 each "packs", you got 3-1/4 ones and thus, the following objects (especcially 3) feel awkward and unfitting to play
  00:57:937 (7) - jump
  00:59:812 (7) - ^
  01:02:976 (4) - starting on a blue tick, this is awkward to play and will likely break combos
  01:05:437 (5) - jump
  01:07:312 (4) - ^
  01:08:016 - why not add a note? (antijump)
  01:33:094 (6) - the following stream is extremely hard to catch because it starts on the blue tick, if you want a stream to start after a kickslider, the kickslider should have 4 repeats and the stream should start on a red or white tick; the current state rarely fits anything
  01:34:851 (7) - again, not-so-neat to play because it starts on a blue tick
  01:42:234 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find this part highly overmapped
  01:45:281 (1,2,3,4) - the sliders having each a repeat arrow, starting on blue ticks and such don't make any sense, adjust it to how the vocals go (the vocals go each in a pair of 2-1/4s)
  01:47:625 (3,6) - so awkward to play 1/4-sliders inside a stream... also, they don't fit because the vocal-pairs aren't set on them
  01:50:906 (1,2) - @01:45:281
  01:52:781 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3) - to be honest, this is ugly.
  01:55:594 (1) - this should not have a repeat arrow, there are 2 similar sounds which make a 2-1/4 slider reasoned, though the reverse arrow ruins it here
  01:58:289 (4) - if you want a slider, remove the reverse arrow, move it 1/4 further and place a circle where it started but don't do it like it currently is
  01:58:992 (4) - there is no reason for that one in the music

• 00:04:969 (3) - this should be 1/4
  00:19:031 (6,1) - these are too close to each other, 6's hitburst will overlap 1's slidertrack in an ugly way; also, I highly dislike 90°-angles (especcially in sliderpoints), adjust the curve aswell, please
  00:23:250 (2,3,4) - as an example for how to "fix" the straight lines, it feels like the 3 here could be moved 1 grid (size 4) down to fit the vocals better since these aren't "consistent on the same level" (since that'd only be possible if they were all monotoneous) - as you can hear, the vocal on 4 goes up again, so 3 would logically be placed lower than that to harmonize better
  00:36:141 (1,3) - ewwww... adjust these so they are symmetric to the Y-axis, the current state looks... ugly, tbh
  00:42:469 (2,3) - i do not like this straight line
  00:45:984 (2,3,4) - ^ you can just place 3 a bit more down on the playfield
  00:50:203 (4) - the 90° sliderpoint-angle here makes the slider feel awkward to me; shape the slider so the reverse-arrow points back towards where 3 was
  00:55:594 (5) - 90° angle...
  01:00:516 (1,3) - these bows are too harsh and thus feel awkward, place the sliderend (where the reverse-arrow is) somewhat further away and balance the curve more out
  01:03:328 (7) - ^
  01:04:969 (4) - starting on a red tick, this one feels awkward to play and hold
  01:06:844 (4) - ^
  01:30:047 (4) - awkward angle
  01:29:812 (3,4) - why is this a 0.9x distance while 01:30:047 (4,1) - is an 1.0x one? More consistency here please.
  01:32:391 (1) - again, sliderangle
  01:35:437 (4,5,1,2) - another example for straight lines you should change/fix
  01:38:484 (3,4,5) - ^
  01:40:594 (3) - angle
  01:43:875 (2,3,4,5) - this square is not really a square and when looked at as a square it looks... ugly... please fix it
  01:49:031 (1) - awkward to play due to starting on red tick
  01:49:031 (1,2,3,4,5) - why does the spacing increase?

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Huh m4m :3

[Poke's Taiko Oni]
OD and HP Drain into 5 ok
Sampleset into default
BG title map need's to move http://puu.sh/100Ju
Fun map, i like it.

[sewerty5's Insane]
00:40:828 (7) - I don't like this slider can you put it like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416959 ok
01:25:359 (3) - Can you do like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416960 ok
01:26:531 (10,11,1) - Slider could be better than this quiero manener esto
01:49:500 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/416962 ok
02:02:391 (1,2,3,4) - More curves ~.~ ok

[Hard]
00:27:000 (2,3,4) - Try to separe it ok
00:58:641 (1) - Bad position on this part try to move it as well ok
01:44:344 (4,5) - ^ ok

[Normal]
01:35:437 (6) - A little more up? ok

[Gabeeeee]
01:34:734 (5,1) - Can you separe this?
02:00:984 (4,1) - ^

1. I download today, Only diff easy have different Preview time " 84891 " another is * 84881 * should be same i konw is guest diff but should same all diff
2. the skin "spinner-metre" is something wrong because when you spin you will look this http://puu.sh/13DQp when CLEAN the rotation is dissapear http://puu.sh/13DQb the rotation should show, something here skin spin is wrong

1. 00:27:234 (1) - Why finish ? is don't sense remove finish like consistency at 00:12:234 (2)
2. 00:29:109 (3) - ^
3. 00:36:609 (2) - add whistle is fit imo

1. 00:10:828 (4,1) - incosistent spacing
2. 00:43:641 (3,4) - grid 1 down to align at 00:41:766 (1,2)
3. 00:53:016 (1) - the 4 point need grid 1 down will be perfect arc slider
4. 00:54:891 (2) - the 4 point need grid 1 up will be perfect arc slider
5. 01:54:891 (1,2) - just 1 grid up because (1) with near 01:53:953 (5) is very very very little uglr overlaps just little clean overlaps

1. 00:07:547 (T) - this timing is useless nothing do, remove
2. 00:21:141 (3) - add finish in begin slider if you keep consistency at 00:13:641 (3) then this should be too so i guess you missing add here also that sense too
3. 00:20:672 (2) - remove clap if you keep it consistency
4. 00:28:172 (2) - ^ same
5. 00:30:047 (4) - remove finish and clap is annowying and don't sense imo
6. 00:35:672 (2) - remove clap is same explained 00:20:672 (2)
7. 00:36:141 (3) - add finish in begin slider is same explained at 00:21:141 (3)
8. 00:37:547 (4) - remove clap is same explained 00:20:672 (2)
9. 00:45:047 (4) - ^ same
10. 00:50:672 (3) - ^ same
11. 00:51:141 (4) - add finish in begin slider
12. 00:52:547 (6) - remove clap
13. 00:56:766 (1) - remove finish in end slider and add whistle like you did patterns before
14. 00:58:172 (2) - remove clap
15. 01:00:047 (4) - ^ same
16. 00:58:641 (3) - add whislte in end slider
17. 01:05:203 (3) - Remove clap in end slider
18. 01:07:547 (6) - remove clap
19. 01:06:141 (4) - add finish in begin slider is same explained at 00:21:141 (3)
20. 01:08:016 (T) - should be increassing volume at 30% that really really good imo if you fix this go to at 01:21:141 add timing volume 15% if you wanna
21. 01:32:391 (1) - add finish in begin slider look you diff hard have it and this should be too if you keep it consistency

1. 00:11:766 (1) - This slider is not same shape at 00:13:641 (3) try copy-past same shape also carefully hitsound and spacing
2. 00:26:766 (1) - not same shape at 00:28:641 (3)

1. 00:13:641 (1) - this not have finish in begin slider but the normal have it then should be add finish if keep it consisteny also is sense because lyrics and drums are strong
2. 00:21:141 (3) - If you fix Normal add finish begin slider if keep consistency because normal and hard is you and same explained in normal
3. 00:28:641 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
4. 00:37:078 (3) - change clap to whislte ?
5. 00:43:641 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
6. 00:51:141 (1) - ^ same
7. 01:01:453 (3) - why finish in begin slider ? that don't sense imo remove it
8. 01:06:141 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
9. 01:30:516 (1) - add finish
10. 01:54:891 (1) - add finish in begin slider that melody and drums are strong like you did in normal
11. 02:02:391 (1) - ^

1. 00:36:141 (1,2,3) - i wanna (1) need clean overlaps little with (3) like this http://puu.sh/14tdN if you fix this be carefully spacing at 00:38:016 (1)
2. 01:07:898 (X) - add note pleasse with finish also increassing timing volume like explained in normal 01:08:016 (T) that really good
3. 01:42:234 (3) - try shape with at 01:41:531 (1) like this http://puu.sh/14tgc
4. 01:49:734 (3) - ^ same
5. 02:05:203 (1) - remove new combo is don't sense because melody or lyrics feel like is continue

1. 00:42:703 (4) - the finish is not start white tick (start slider) is red tick and end white tick (end slider) becayse lyrics is highe like you did after patterns like this 00:44:812 (5)
2. 00:50:437 (6,7) - add finish like before patterns
3. 01:05:437 (5) - remove clap in start slider also add finis start and end
4. 01:08:016 (1) - add finish is really good
5. 01:38:953 (5) - add finish in end slider that the lyrics is high if you keep it consistency at 01:31:453 (6)

1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - try stack with end slider at 00:18:797 (10)
2. 00:23:953 (1) - remove new combo that don't sense, just remove new combo
3. 00:34:031 (10) - weird stack with 00:33:328 (6) try better stack

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~ sorry later

imo -> my opinion
Also when you read " ? " that mean just suggestion you can ignore if you not like but if witouht " ? " that really high suggestion pleasse use you mind is important fix or not but is for you decission

[General] fixed all

1. I download today, Only diff easy have different Preview time " 84891 " another is * 84881 * should be same i konw is guest diff but should same all diff
2. the skin "spinner-metre" is something wrong because when you spin you will look this http://puu.sh/13DQp when CLEAN the rotation is dissapear http://puu.sh/13DQb the rotation should show, something here skin spin is wrong

[Gabe's Easy]

hitsound :

1. 00:27:234 (1) - Why finish ? is don't sense remove finish like consistency at 00:12:234 (2)
2. 00:29:109 (3) - ^
3. 00:36:609 (2) - add whistle is fit imo

Gameplay:

1. 00:10:828 (4,1) - incosistent spacing
2. 00:43:641 (3,4) - grid 1 down to align at 00:41:766 (1,2)
3. 00:53:016 (1) - the 4 point need grid 1 down will be perfect arc slider
4. 00:54:891 (2) - the 4 point need grid 1 up will be perfect arc slider
5. 01:54:891 (1,2) - just 1 grid up because (1) with near 01:53:953 (5) is very very very little uglr overlaps just little clean overlaps

look fine

[Normal] all done

Hitsound:

1. 00:07:547 (T) - this timing is useless nothing do, remove
2. 00:21:141 (3) - add finish in begin slider if you keep consistency at 00:13:641 (3) then this should be too so i guess you missing add here also that sense too
3. 00:20:672 (2) - remove clap if you keep it consistency
4. 00:28:172 (2) - ^ same
5. 00:30:047 (4) - remove finish and clap is annowying and don't sense imo
6. 00:35:672 (2) - remove clap is same explained 00:20:672 (2)
7. 00:36:141 (3) - add finish in begin slider is same explained at 00:21:141 (3)
8. 00:37:547 (4) - remove clap is same explained 00:20:672 (2)
9. 00:45:047 (4) - ^ same
10. 00:50:672 (3) - ^ same
11. 00:51:141 (4) - add finish in begin slider
12. 00:52:547 (6) - remove clap
13. 00:56:766 (1) - remove finish in end slider and add whistle like you did patterns before
14. 00:58:172 (2) - remove clap
15. 01:00:047 (4) - ^ same
16. 00:58:641 (3) - add whislte in end slider
17. 01:05:203 (3) - Remove clap in end slider
18. 01:07:547 (6) - remove clap
19. 01:06:141 (4) - add finish in begin slider is same explained at 00:21:141 (3)
20. 01:08:016 (T) - should be increassing volume at 30% that really really good imo if you fix this go to at 01:21:141 add timing volume 15% if you wanna
21. 01:32:391 (1) - add finish in begin slider look you diff hard have it and this should be too if you keep it consistency

Gameplay:

1. 00:11:766 (1) - This slider is not same shape at 00:13:641 (3) try copy-past same shape also carefully hitsound and spacing
2. 00:26:766 (1) - not same shape at 00:28:641 (3)

look good

[Hard] all done

Hitsound:

1. 00:13:641 (1) - this not have finish in begin slider but the normal have it then should be add finish if keep it consisteny also is sense because lyrics and drums are strong
2. 00:21:141 (3) - If you fix Normal add finish begin slider if keep consistency because normal and hard is you and same explained in normal
3. 00:28:641 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
4. 00:37:078 (3) - change clap to whislte ?
5. 00:43:641 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
6. 00:51:141 (1) - ^ same
7. 01:01:453 (3) - why finish in begin slider ? that don't sense imo remove it
8. 01:06:141 (1) - same explained 00:13:641 (1)
9. 01:30:516 (1) - add finish
10. 01:54:891 (1) - add finish in begin slider that melody and drums are strong like you did in normal
11. 02:02:391 (1) - ^

The hitsound are good but lot missing consistency because Normal and hard is you example in normal 01:54:891 (1) have finish but hard no that should be consistency hitsound. easy and insane no need it because is guest diff so you really be carefully consistency hitsound some lot missing consisntecy if you do this will be much better imo

Gameplay:

1. 00:36:141 (1,2,3) - i wanna (1) need clean overlaps little with (3) like this http://puu.sh/14tdN if you fix this be carefully spacing at 00:38:016 (1)
2. 01:07:898 (X) - add note pleasse with finish also increassing timing volume like explained in normal 01:08:016 (T) that really good
3. 01:42:234 (3) - try shape with at 01:41:531 (1) like this http://puu.sh/14tgc
4. 01:49:734 (3) - ^ same
5. 02:05:203 (1) - remove new combo is don't sense because melody or lyrics feel like is continue

lot slider is not really shape example 01:28:641 (1) the shape is diferent with 01:30:047 (4) should be 100% shape same but is fine just lot slider not really shape with another slider

stuff cool

[sewerty5's Insane]

Hitsound:

1. 00:42:703 (4) - the finish is not start white tick (start slider) is red tick and end white tick (end slider) becayse lyrics is highe like you did after patterns like this 00:44:812 (5)
2. 00:50:437 (6,7) - add finish like before patterns
3. 01:05:437 (5) - remove clap in start slider also add finis start and end
4. 01:08:016 (1) - add finish is really good
5. 01:38:953 (5) - add finish in end slider that the lyrics is high if you keep it consistency at 01:31:453 (6)

Gameplay:

1. 00:19:500 (2,3,4) - try stack with end slider at 00:18:797 (10)
2. 00:23:953 (1) - remove new combo that don't sense, just remove new combo
3. 00:34:031 (10) - weird stack with 00:33:328 (6) try better stack

look good pretty funny
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only hitsound is need more work i guess because is important fix consistency but gameplay look good and sorry my bad eng anyway
that all i think pleasse some mod you can't understand because my eng is suck pleasse ask me in-game i will try explain better
good luck and bye bye

dragonxcz wrote:

[Gabe's Easy]

Fine. This is how easy may look.

Kurisuchianu wrote:

c:

dragonxcz wrote:

Hi from my modding queue
[sewerty5's Insane]

Ok... so first thing is that you make everything linear (I think notes) and it's bad, you may use inteligent patterns.
It's not problem to use them I think.

Next thing is making sliders.
00:08:016 (1) - This is terrible one. But when the 2nd point is on x:264 y:120 and ending point on x:200 y:100 it looks pretty nice.
Please, use this ^ version of slider instead of bad shaped.ok
00:25:242 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - CTRL+J looks better.ok
00:53:016 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is not so good. Try to make them all shaped.o:
01:25:242 (2) - Move on x:304 y:164ok
01:25:359 (3) - Move on x:332 y:208ok
01:26:766 (1,2) - Swap NC for consistency.ok

Only problem of this map is that it's very linear and I recommend to use multiple snaps (but don't do it, if you'd do it nonproperly)

[Hard]

00:34:266 (1,4) - Why they are diffirent. It's symmetrical pattern, but nonsymmetrical slider, so CTRL+C, CTRL+V, CTRL+H and snap. ok

Really better than Insane.

[Normal] all done

00:15:516 (1) - Move 2nd point on x:184 y:236 and use this. It's better.
01:51:141 (1) - Also move 2nd point on x:456 y:244 because it's weird.
You may understand where else fix those.

[Gabe's Easy]

Fine. This is how easy may look.

KonataN wrote:

I'm here for no special reason C; have a star~

1. I think PreviewTime: 38016 is better

1. 01:27:703 (4) - Personally I don't like how this whistle sounds. What about to remove it from the slider's body?
2. 01:53:016 (3) - New combo?

1. Why are you using the same SV of the easy diff? I highly suggest you to increase it till 1.30/1.40
2. 02:09:891 (6) - New combo like you did for the easy diff

1. 01:08:016 (7) - New combo to keep consistency with the previous diffs
2. 02:06:141 (1) - Don't overlap this slider with 02:04:266 (1). It's readable yes but the reverse arrow is covered by 02:04:266 (1)'s hitburst. It's better to avoid this unrankable issue.
3. 02:09:891 (5) - New combo

1. Old map's style xD it's enough fine to me

Chewin wrote:

Hi eLtigreXXx, checking random high SP popped beatmaps so here's my mod for you.

[General]

1. I think PreviewTime: 38016 is better ok

[Easy] ok

1. 01:27:703 (4) - Personally I don't like how this whistle sounds. What about to remove it from the slider's body?
2. 01:53:016 (3) - New combo?

[Normal]

1. Why are you using the same SV of the easy diff? I highly suggest you to increase it till 1.30/1.40 OK
2. 02:09:891 (6) - New combo like you did for the easy diff ok

[Hard]

1. 01:08:016 (7) - New combo to keep consistency with the previous diffs ok
2. 02:06:141 (1) - Don't overlap this slider with 02:04:266 (1). It's readable yes but the reverse arrow is covered by 02:04:266 (1)'s hitburst. It's better to avoid this unrankable issue. ok
3. 02:09:891 (5) - New combo ok

[Insane]

1. Old map's style xD it's enough fine to me

Taiko diff is really nice.
You can call me back after you have fixed

Chewin wrote:

[Easy]

1. 01:27:703 (4) - Personally I don't like how this whistle sounds. What about to remove it from the slider's body? Actually, I will say no for this one. It was a suggestion from Leorda to add some whistle in that part. Also, I'm supposed to have a whistle sound at 01:28:172, but since it's a tick, we're trying to don't add sliderticks' hitsounds too much. If you can see, during this Kiai time, I'm always adding two whistle after some vocal. So I won't delete it :p
2. 01:53:016 (3) - New combo? Sure.

Loctav wrote:

[General]

Inconsistent video offeset
While Easy & Hard uses -140ms, Normal uses -200ms and Insane +-0ms. This is unrankable. Please keep the offset of the video consistent fixed


[Hard] all done

01:26:531 (1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
01:39:891 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:48:094 (3,4) - ^
01:50:906 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

[sewerty5's Insane]

01:58:641 (7,8,9) - a new musical section begins here. Place NC hereok , maybe replace with a reverse slider like in 01:59:109 (1) - to make it a good reverse-slider pattern. Simply streaming over it kills the downbeat.I created another form I feel that goes with the beat

02:07:898 (10) - removing this emphasizes the downbeat on 02:08:016 (1) - more and makes it easier catchable. ok


Popped for now. Call me back when fixed.

Saten wrote:

You'll need to remove Insane, then submit. Re-add Insane again and submit again.
If you're lucky, it'll change to the thumbnail you want. If you're unlucky, it'll change to a different one from you current BGs.
This will take few days for it to change.

Not sure if a BAT can change that.
If they can, you need a thumbnail with the dimensions 160x120.

eLtigreXXx wrote:

I changed by mistake D:
I want this image D;

Saten wrote:

I don't wanna argue anymore xD I mean flood this thread.
Let's just get it fixed :3

eLtigreXXx wrote:

I changed by mistake D:
I want this image D;

Darksonic wrote:

Gratz on first rank ^^

SapphireGhost wrote:

By the ranking rules and guidelines and by popular demand, I now wish to congratulate you on your first ranked map.
Here's a celebratory image that clearly demonstrates the fact that I am running out of fonts to use for these things:

Darksonic wrote:

Gratz on first rank ^^