1. 00:17:637 (2) - Add a clap to the start of slider.
2. 01:12:971 (3) - If you use a whistle on the body of slider, I think it's better to add to the start too.
3. 01:14:304 (4,1,2) - Umm...this inconsistent spacing is kind of confusing...
4. 01:21:304 (1) - Start this spinner from 01:21:637. It fits the music more.

1. 01:12:971 (2) - How about adding a finish?

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  Please OD+1 to make the difficulty reasonable.

1. 00:42:470 (x) - Consider to add a note here.(stack with (1))
2. 00:42:637 (1) - Also remove a new combo?
3. 01:12:971 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:14:137, to follow the music.

1. 00:29:637 (x) - How about adding a note here? I think the gameplay becomes better.
2. 00:34:970 (x) - ^ Same here.
3. 00:40:304 (x) - ^
4. 00:42:470 (x) - ^, and stack with 00:42:637 (1). (if you fix, it's better to add a new combo to this, and remove from 00:42:637 (1))
5. 01:15:470 (1) - Move this to 01:15:304? It fits the music more. (you have to change the note placement too)

1. 00:11:137 (1,2,3,4) - I disagree with using anti-jump here. The reasons I have are two points; [1]This is the first note of the map. [2]This starts on a red timing line.; From these points, reading the timing is a bit too difficult if you use anti-jump here, I think.
2. 00:19:470 (x) - Consider to add a note here. Since there is a hitsound at 00:16:637 (9), this blank is misleading for the timing of next note imo.
3. 00:23:970 (7) - Separate it into a slider and a circle to follow the vocal like below?
   
4. 00:26:471 (7) - ^ Same as above.
5. 00:53:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Good pattern, but each spacing looks a bit too random to me. Please try to reduce the spacing between (2,3), (5,6). Or adjust (6,7)'s one.

Suzully wrote:

Hello.

[Hard]

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  Please OD+1 to make the difficulty reasonable. ~fix

1. 00:42:470 (x) - Consider to add a note here.(stack with (1)) ~fix
2. 00:42:637 (1) - Also remove a new combo? ~fix
3. 01:12:971 (1) - Shorten the spinner to 01:14:137, to follow the music. ~im following the vocals here so no :c

[Singing]

1. 00:29:637 (x) - How about adding a note here? I think the gameplay becomes better.
2. 00:34:970 (x) - ^ Same here.
3. 00:40:304 (x) - ^ ~sorry they are all kinda following the vocals...
4. 00:42:470 (x) - ^, and stack with 00:42:637 (1). (if you fix, it's better to add a new combo to this, and remove from 00:42:637 (1)) ~Okay, added
5. 01:15:470 (1) - Move this to 01:15:304? It fits the music more. (you have to change the note placement too) ~sorry,, same reason as the others

Tell me when done fixes :3 ~kaykay :3

Suzully wrote:

Hello.

[249's Normal]

1. 01:12:971 (2) - How about adding a finish? no it sounds too distracting. i tried this in the past and added the finishes at the 2nd (2) and this (2). it turns out during gameplay, it sounds too distracting which leads to this finish. also the melody in the vocals is still going till 01:17:637. so the hitsound pattern isn't done yet in the vocals.

Tell me when done fixes :3

Suzully wrote:

Hello. へろー！

[Lizsig's Insane]

1. 00:11:137 (1,2,3,4) - I disagree with using anti-jump here. The reasons I have are two points; [1]This is the first note of the map. [2]This starts on a red timing line.; From these points, reading the timing is a bit too difficult if you use anti-jump here, I think.
2. 00:19:470 (x) - Consider to add a note here. Since there is a hitsound at 00:16:637 (9), this blank is misleading for the timing of next note imo.
3. 00:23:970 (7) - Separate it into a slider and a circle to follow the vocal like below?
   
4. 00:26:471 (7) - ^ Same as above.
5. 00:53:970 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Good pattern, but each spacing looks a bit too random to me. Please try to reduce the spacing between (2,3), (5,6). Or adjust (6,7)'s one.

those wrote:

...and there's a reason why it has been pointed out more than once.

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

finally, gratz <3
today is my day of denied kd ;w;

Darksonic wrote:

Gratz on your first ranked map!

Andrea wrote:

Good map, but the mp3 is awful :/

Congrats anyways :3

Alduric wrote:

This maps looks WHOLE BETTER without this illegible and awful skin.

Xierra wrote:

Alduric wrote:

This maps looks WHOLE BETTER without this illegible and awful skin.

Lol? Go ahead and disable skin if you feel it's awful :3
Btw, congrats SkyDevil! Go make another one