MoodyRPG wrote:

100

General

• • Nada encontrado

Easy

• - 00:28:239 (1) - No quiero fijarme mucho en los sliders pero deberias eliminar un punto de ahi ya que se ve muy feo en mi opinion
  - 01:32:372 (4) - Esta nota deberia ir aca 01:32:002, ya que sonaria bien y seguiria la cancion perfectamente
  - 01:33:484 (x) - Tambien añade una nota aqui ya que suena un poco silenciosa esta parte
  - 01:57:210 (3) - Remueve el finish ya que se oye mal
  - 02:50:596 (1) - Me gustaria que este spinner empezara aqui en 02:50:967 y termine en 02:52:450, sigue bien la musica

Normal

• - 01:34:967 (3) - Añade aqui un new combo para seguir tu patron?

Hard

• - 00:50:482 (3,4) - Podrias stackear estos slider algo como asi en mi opinion
  - 01:10:871 (5) - Prefiero que esta note le pusieras un clap y que remuevas los claps de 7 y 8 en 01:11:056
  - 02:13:896 (3) - La misma sugerencia anterior del stack
  - 02:34:285 (5) - Tambien lo mismo de los claps

Lissette's Insane

• -- Bien hecho

El mapeo no esta nada mal en mi opinion, acerca de los sliders para mi esta bien solamente trata de fluirlos mas

Solamente puedo decir buena suerte

jonathanlfj wrote:

Mod requested
Just wondering what language is this?

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
use a silent soft-sliderslide.wav too? sounds very loud during the intro

[Easy]
00:41:585 (1) - add finish to slider head
00:50:482 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - make these look the same?

SPOILER

01:14:207 (1) - center this
01:37:933 (1) - use a normal finish here
02:01:659 (1) - stack this on the position of 01:59:434 (2)
02:21:310 (2) - make this parallel with 02:19:827 (1)
02:30:207 (2,3,4) - make it a better triangle formation

[Normal]
00:23:420 (3) - make it blanket 00:23:049 (2)
00:41:585 (1) - add finish to slider head
01:32:743 (1) - whistle on slider head
01:37:933 (1) - normal finish
01:53:503 (3) - plays better if you curve the slider the other way
02:03:142 (5) - center this
02:23:164 (1) - add whistle to slider tail

[Hard]
00:23:049 (4) - make this more symmetrical
00:38:248 (5) - one grid left
01:05:866 (4) - take off the clap?
01:38:304 (1) - use normal finish
01:54:244 (1) - take finish off slider end
01:58:693 (1) - ^
02:03:142 (4) - finish sounds really bad...either use whistle or just nothing (and a gradual volume increase technique would work great here)
02:25:017 (4) - the emphasis of vocal on the red line may cause players to hit this too early. either add a note at 02:24:832 (4) or make it into a slider
02:39:104 (7) - make this in a straight line with 02:38:363 (5,6)

[Insane]
00:39:731 (2) - place this horizontally with 00:39:731 (2)
01:19:397 (5) - 2 grids left and 1 grid up looks better
02:03:142 (4) - use whistle instead of finish
02:07:964 (2) - lower this by on grid, and the square formation should then be straight up instead of slightly tilted
02:36:880 (1) - this note is touching the hp bar, which in most cases are discouraged by XATs. try to remake this pattern and lower this
02:50:596 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - this star can look better

SPOILER

Very nice mapset! Hope to see this ranked soon ^_^

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Third kiai ends differently in each difficulty. Pick one ending method for all difficulties.
You need an easier taiko difficulty. A single oni is no longer allowed.


Easy

00:38:629 (3) - End with finish?
01:09:757 (4) - Could be in a more interesting place. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/426656 If you choose to keep your pattern consider straightening the repeat slider.
01:18:666 (2,3,4) - Spacing should be equal.
01:55:727 (1,2,3) - Try to make spacing equal. such as using 0.98 snap.
02:04:995 (1,2,3,1) - Make spacing more consistent.
02:21:306 (2) - Add whistle?
02:30:203 (2,3) - 1.0 please.

Normal

00:20:083 (2,3) - Use 1.0?
00:30:463 (4) - Move down 1 unit to center it between the surrounding sliders.
00:39:731 (5) - Add finish to end. (Perhaps more it more to the right too. It doesn't look right in its current position).
01:36:079 (3,4,5) - Make spacing equal?
01:52:391 (1) - Add finish to end.
02:10:930 (1,2,3) - Spacing should be equal
02:12:413 (3,4,5) - ^
02:24:276 (3,4,5) - Going backwards like that is kind of unusual. Consider doing this instead. http://puu.sh/13euY
02:33:173 (3) - Nazi- Center the middle point?

Hard

01:11:056 (6,7,8) - Move to x 100 y 125? I think it's better that way.
01:34:597 (5,1) - Use 1.0?
01:54:059 (5) - Too close to the slider track of 4 IMO.
02:23:905 (3) - Doesn't match all the other sliders.
02:34:470 (1,2,3) - Same as 1:11.
02:39:475 (8,9) - 1.0?

Insane

00:28:610 (4) - Small, but perhaps reducing the curve slightly would be better.
00:33:429 (6) - This curve is a lot more acute than 00:30:463 (6) - , but the pattern should be similar with similar curves.
00:37:877 (3,4) - Reduce the curves?
01:10:871 (4) - Curve in the other direction so you don't have two sliders curving in the same direction?
01:23:846 (4) - It would be better if this was symmetrical.
02:04:995 (3) - Unsnapped slider end
02:26:315 (2,3,1) - Stacking improperly. You can fix by moving 3,1 to x 81 y 162

Taiko

01:04:569 (227) - End is unsnapped.

Lissette wrote:

My fixes, I don't have time now to respond everyone, but thanks for modding!

http://puu.sh/14A0j

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Na-na-nyan-nya-nyaaaa nya-nya-nya-nya-nya-nya :3
Love this song :3

• only in Normal, Kiai Time isn't separated at 01:17:173.

• 
  OD -1. this diff has a lot of circles. so high OD makes us so difficult to get SS.
  01:06:978 - is there a reason not to put note here? I hear the strong sound enough to put note here.
  01:09:944 - ^
  02:51:801 (1) - actually this spinner is rankable, but I don't like it. looking around your diff, we can find easily that it isn't so difficult Insane.
  but only this spinner, it's too short and difficult. this gap of difficulty makes me feeling unnatural.
  then, how about remove 02:51:708 (6) and put the spinner to 02:51:708?

• 00:26:571 (1) - I really feel strange to the timing of this spinner because the strongest sound is at 00:26:756 but you ignored it.
  how about the rhythm like this to follow the song better?
  SPOILER

  
  (remove 00:28:239 (1), move the spinner 1/2 later and adjust the length, then add a circle at 00:26:571.)
  00:29:722 (5,6) - I wonder why you didn't add whistle to (6). consider to add one. also, it's natural for me to remove the whistle from (5) (start and end) and add whistle to the body of the slider.
  if you do this, please consider about the other section like as 00:32:687 (5,6,7), too.
  00:32:687 (5) - you should improve the form of sliders especially like this one. it doesn't look pretty. make them more symmetrical.
  00:32:131 - why you didn't put note here though you put note at 00:29:166? you should add note here.
  00:35:653 (5) - I think this slider doesn't fit to this section because it ignores the sound of 00:35:839 and 00:36:209. I want you to pick up the sounds of those with any notes.
  00:50:482 (3) - you should be more attention to the form of slider or the placement. in this case, approach circle will help you...
  SPOILER

  
  01:38:304 (1) - it's better to start from 01:38:026
  02:16:305 - hmm..why don't you make it same as 00:52:891 (7)?
  02:25:573 (1) - this spinner should be started from 02:25:758.

• 00:44:550 (1,2) - the flow of cursor is not so kind. this is Normal, so you should make it more easier.
  what I want to tell you is that, it becomes more kind flow if you put (2) on the extension of (1) like this.
  SPOILER

  
  consider about this whole of this diff.
  00:49:555 - I mentioned about this in many times in Hard, so you may understand what I want to say.
  01:53:503 (3,4,5) - in Normal, 1/2 rhythm is regarded as a difficult section. so you should make the flow more easier.

• why don't you add clapsound to the slidertick? make the hitsounds more constancy.
  rhythm seems good. but I really want to mention about the form of sliders.
  for example, 00:19:342 (1) should blanket 00:21:195 (2) better, but it doesn't.
  again I recommend you to use approach circle to improve your sliders.

Sonnyc wrote:

Hello~ Random Mod :p

General:
-- Instead of adding a timeline on the first note, what about setting in on the Red line?
-- Just asking : Why haven't you set the preview point at 01:05:310?

Easy:

01:09:759 (1) - Finish here sounds a bit loud. Replace to Whistle
01:11:242 (3) - NC
01:34:597 (2) - Delete whistle, and add it to the end of (1)
02:13:896 (1,2) - Add Clap at the end
02:18:344 (2) - Delete Whistle
02:22:422 (3) - ^
02:36:509 (3) - Clap--Whistle to follow your pattern
02:48:001 (1) - Delete NC
02:49:484 (6) - NC

Normal :
-- For consistency, Drag your break time to 01:04:105 and 01:51:186
-- As h-728 mentioned, check the kiai time


00:41:585 (1) - Delete Finish at the end
00:53:077, 00:53:447 - Add a note to make the break times all the same
01:05:310 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
01:17:173 (1) - ^
01:16:061 (3) - Delete Finish at the end
01:19:953 (5) - Distance check! Maybe 1 Grid left
01:23:104 (1) - Delete Finish
02:16:861 (4) - NC
02:17:603 (1) - Delete NC
02:28:724 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
02:40:587 (1) - ^

Hard:

00:16:747 (4) - Delete Whistle
00:18:971 (5) - ^
00:17:674 (1,2,3,4) - Whistle-None-Whistle-None-Whistle-Whistle will sound good
00:20:083 (2) - Delete Whistle
00:20:639 (3,4,5) - Make here also sound like 00:17:674 (1,2,3,4)
00:34:541 (1) - Delete NC?
00:47:516 (3) - Delete Finish
00:52:891 (8,9,10) - Making a line will look good
01:11:798 (5) - Make a jump also this note. Jumping only (6) looks weird
01:16:432 (10) - Delete Finish
01:17:173 (1) - Add Finish at the Start
01:05:310 (3) - ^
01:21:807 (2,3,4) - Just looks like a weird spacing. Consider a fixed distance
01:22:919 (7) - Delete Finish at the end
02:03:142 (4) - Use Finish only at 02:03:142, 02:03:512, 02:03:883
02:16:305 (9) - Delete this note, it will be hard to expect this part
02:17:417 (2) - 1 Grid up?
02:24:276 (6) - Symmetry
02:39:846 (6) - Delete Finish
02:40:587 (3) - Add Finish at the Start
02:49:855 (4,5,6,7) - Make better star.. idk pulling 02:49:855 (4,6,7) these 1 Grid up might help

Lissette's Insane:

00:23:790 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect symmetry.. Maybe this wasn't a symmetric shape afterall?
00:53:355 (10) - Delete this note, no rythm here
02:37:065 (2,3) - Switch places?

That's all! Good luck

GoldenWolf wrote:

irc mod

01:13 XinCrin: Hi! Golden Wolf you can makeme a IRC mod or recheck IRC?
01:15 GoldenWolf: why not, a quick recheck
01:16 XinCrin: you a redownload my map?
01:16 XinCrin: added a new SB and removed skin and diff AB
01:17 GoldenWolf: yup
01:18 XinCrin:
01:18 GoldenWolf: Nothing to say for this diff :3
01:22 GoldenWolf: 00:21:195 (7,8,9) - I don't know if this overlap is ok in a hard diff
01:22 GoldenWolf: Circles are hidden with hitbursts
01:22 GoldenWolf: Consider moving them ?
01:23 XinCrin: wait me
01:23 XinCrin: ok DONE
01:24 GoldenWolf: 00:43:809 (9) - Same here, this circle is hidden by the hitburst of the previous slider
01:24 XinCrin: Done
01:24 GoldenWolf: it can be confusing for less experienced player
01:24 GoldenWolf:
01:25 GoldenWolf: 00:49:555 (10,11) - same here
01:25 XinCrin: o.o ok
01:25 XinCrin: same done
01:25 GoldenWolf: 01:10:315 (10,11) - again here
01:26 XinCrin: xD sorry for the error
01:27 GoldenWolf: 01:19:768 (10) - I don't know about this one, it's covered by the hitburst of the previous slider but I didn't had problem to read
01:27 GoldenWolf: move it or not, it's your choice
01:28 XinCrin: ok Done
01:31 GoldenWolf: 01:52:391 (1,2) - huge spacing here D: Maybe reduce it a bit ?
01:32 XinCrin: done
01:32 XinCrin:
01:33 GoldenWolf: 02:33:914 (3,4,5) - why the spacing suddenly increase here ?
01:33 XinCrin: yeah
01:33 GoldenWolf: 02:30:948 (5,6,7) - same here
01:33 XinCrin: is a bad the spacing?
01:34 GoldenWolf: Not really, but I don't see why it's 1.2x here, maybe juste keep 1.0x ?
01:35 XinCrin: I put the same spacing, if someone else tells me I'll do
01:35 GoldenWolf: ok
01:35 GoldenWolf: 02:36:046 (7,1) - this scared me D:
01:36 XinCrin: I did not realize
01:36 XinCrin: is a very ugly
01:36 XinCrin: ok i changed
01:37 GoldenWolf: k, that's all for hard diff
01:38 XinCrin: thanks golden
01:38 XinCrin: you can pos this ircmod?
01:38 GoldenWolf: yup :3
01:38 XinCrin:

~

tutuhaha wrote:

[Easy]
00:25:273 (1) - make this slider more straight
00:28:980 (3) - move this to X132 Y248 then move 4 to x176 y180,look more better
01:18:656 (4) - just add whistle at the end
01:36:450 (4) - delete whistle at the begin
02:07:223 (5) - add clap at the end
02:13:896 (1) - add whistle
02:16:861 (3) - NC begin there then cancel this NC 02:17:603 (1) -
02:19:827 (1) - change finish to the whistle, more soft listen better
02:21:310 (2,3) - too close
02:40:402 - Unused green line section, please remove it

[Nroaml]
00:17:859 (3) - remove this finish then add whistle at the end
00:22:307 (1) - change that finish to the whistle
00:39:731 (5) - add finish at the end
00:53:447 (4) - add finish
01:29:036 (1) - change that whistle to the finish
01:52:391 (1) - add finish at the end
02:06:482 (3,4) - too far

[Hard]
00:19:342 (1) - remove finish add whistle
00:21:566 (9) - remove this note
00:26:571 - add note
00:30:463 (9) - add nc
00:39:916 - add note
00:48:999 (7,8,9,10,11) - try to make those note look like a straight line
00:48:999 (7) - add nc
00:51:038 - add note
00:51:965 (7) - add nc
01:10:500 (11) - remove this note
01:10:686 - ^ than add note at there
01:52:391 (1,2) - maybe to far
01:56:283 (2) - remove this clap
02:01:659 (6) - add nc
02:06:296 (6) - remove this note
02:19:827 (8) - add nc and remove finish to change the whistle
02:21:310 (9) - remove finish change whistle
02:28:539 - 02:39:846 I think this part was too hard than first part of this diff, you need regulate to make it more average
02:50:967 (1) - sprinner begin there

[Insane]
00:19:156 (6) - move this note to there and remove whistle will be more better
00:21:751 (5) - ^
00:45:848 - add note?
00:51:779 - ^
00:52:706 (6) - add nc
02:16:120 (9) - ^
02:30:948 (5) - ^
02:42:811 (6) - ^
02:45:777 (6) - ^

<3~

-Pikachu- wrote:

Bueno... Random Mod pedido por IRC, pero no tengo mucho que moddear D:

Mod

Easy:

Todo el map muy divertido, y no hay partes que confundan, muy bueno.

00:27:127 Siento que falta un circle aquí y con Whistle si es posible D:
00:51:594 También añade una con clap
00:53:077 ^
01:12:354 ^
01:21:251 (3) Siento que esta demás pero no digo que la quites
01:32:743 Un Circle mas? Y con Whistle
01:52:762 (1) Clap? No digo que lo añadas, queda bien, pero es que siempre que escucho una canción con Nightcore mix siento que debería tener varios claps xD
01:54:615 (1) ^
01:58:322 (3) ^
01:59:434 (2) Whistle?
02:00:917 (4) ^
02:13:896 (1) Quita el clap?
02:15:008 Añade un Circle con Clap?
02:15:378 (3) Cambia el Clap por Whistle?

Normal:

00:18:971 Añade un Circle con Whistle?
00:30:463 (4) Porque no lo cambias por un Slider que empiece desde este punto y termine en 00:30:834 con un Clap?
00:33:429 (4) ^
00:44:365 (6) Siento que esta demás D:
00:45:848 (3) ^
00:53:077 Añade una con Whistle?
01:11:056 (5) Siento que esta demás D:
01:22:734 Añade un Circle?
01:24:773 (4) Siento que esta demás D:
01:27:182 Añade un Circle? Y con Clap o3o
01:54:059 Siento que falta una aquí :c
01:57:025 ^ (Bueno, se que justo aquí hay un Slider, Porque no mejor lo hace y que tenga un Reverse así:
02:04:624 Añade un Circle aquí?
02:43:367 ^
02:46:148 ^
02:49:113 ^

Hard:

00:26:385 Añade un Circle?
01:14:763 Me parece bien un Circle aquí, aunque con ese Jump no lo creo :X
01:26:626 ^
01:27:368 (6) Ponlo en el medio de los 2 Sliders?
01:56:283 (2) Siento que esta demás xD
02:08:520 (4) No me gusta el Stack de esta D:
02:38:177 Siento que falta un Circle =v=
02:42:997 (9) Siento que esta demás Dx
02:45:962 (7) ^

Insane:

00:42:882 Siento que falta un Circle aquí c:
00:48:813 ^
01:40:899 (1) Porque no lo ponen en el centro?
02:06:296 Siento que falta un Circle aquí
02:12:227 ^
02:16:769 ^
02:50:040 No se si valla bien con un Circle mas aquí, me gusta como esta o3o pero es para que siga el ritmo

No modeo Taiko, lo siento ;_;

Gracias por modear y Bueno juego xD

Bueno, todo esto son solo sugerencias, ya verás que a la final mi Mod es malo xD y también overmapping xDDD como te lo dije en IRC.

Me gusto todo el map set

Si tuviera Kudos te daría ;_;

Ya la veo rankeada dentro de poco

Suerte!

Ah, como extra:

Jugando en Insane xD

eLtigreXXx wrote:

[Easy ]
00:19:342 (1) que este cubriendo bien a esta 00:21:195 (2) algo asi http://puu.sh/1bo0R
00:21:566 (3) x:308 y:236 para que este simetrica con 00:19:342 (1)
00:35:653 (4) 1 grid asia abajo
00:40:102 (1) nose aqui seme ase que estaria bien que sonara un finish
00:47:516 (1) whistle en el reverse
00:47:516 (1) ^whistle
00:50:482 (1,2) finish al principio de esos dos i nose si seria mejor un whistle al final de esos dos

[norma]l
01:32:743 (1) wistle
01:33:855 (2) wistle en el reverse
01:34:967 (1) quitas el wistle de aqui
01:34:967 (1) finis quitar el whistle
01:35:338 (2) whislte al final
01:36:079 (3) remueve el wistle
01:37:192 (5) lo agregas aqui

[hard]
02:19:827 (1) nuevo combo ?

son solo sujerencias

Lizellota wrote:

http://puu.sh/1bSjP Changed a bit ></ Update please~ thanks

-Bakari- wrote:

asdasdasdasdadasdad.

just explain me this

[Lize's Taiko]

01:02:345 (70,72) - this. have you tested it? i bet you didn't because this drumsound is totally off! there's NO drum-slider. And? i'm just hear the voice and put this slider, what's happened? hah?
01:16:339 (1) - 01:17:173 - this beat is totally should be mapped! it's quite weird to see spinner here (end spinner at this beat?) So..And? [2]

no kd, ofc.

this diff needs HUGE number of mods and much more work bla bla bla

much more work

-Bakari- wrote:

I told you some examples. Stop raging at everyone who's trying to help you.

Hey, Xin! Why did you uploaded so.. meh.. so newbie diff from her? She is not even going to improve it! You and this mapset broke my heart. Right here. With this rude guest mapper. :<

right now i'm going away with broken heart. And i guess that you should control guest mappers much more.

Sorry. I didn't expected shitstorm, I wanted to help and to be fair. Once more, I'm sorry. Your mapset broke my heart.

Pagliaccio wrote:

Lize, calm down T_T
Bakari, bro stop trolling her.
Both you makes me crying.