the undead wrote:

Generally: I hate that old background, is too yellow and make me feel jealous without a reason! BG a fost ales pentru ca is obsedat dupa casete si e o inima acolo care merge cu piesa ) Ar trebui editata un pic da.
Try to activate kiai time at all refrains Sunt prea multe apoi )
A si schimba naibii avataru ala cu Ion Dolanescu din tinerete cai mai urat si ca al meu

1. 00:15:977 (1,2,3) - Just a graphical thing: 00:15:977 (1) - and 00:16:977 (3) - could have some better blankets with 00:14:477 (6,5) -. This setting should solve all these blanketing problems:
   
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   336,212,15977,5,2
   256,140,16477,1,8
   176,212,16977,1,2

2. 00:37:227 - To emphatize a bit more the drums here, I would suggest you to add a note here.
3. 00:55:227 (5) - You could add a whistle here,it really works good to emphatize the singer's voice here getting high.
4. 01:11:227 (5) - Same as above,and if you do these changements,do it even for patterns like 01:59:227 (5) -, 02:15:227 (3) - and going on!
5. 01:13:977 (3,4) - To make a more flowing approach here you could use CTRL+R on 01:15:477 (4) - : the flow with the previous slider will get better

1. 00:15:727 (5) - This note is pretty much superfluous in this place: I would recommend you instead to move this at 00:15:977 - to follow the drum in the background. It fits pretty good,and completes the rhythm too!
2. 00:31:727 (3) - The same applies here,maybe you could move this even at the centre of 00:32:227 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - : it's really good to play!
3. 00:39:977 (6) - What do you think on making this wider to properly encircle 00:39:477 (4) - ?
   
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   56,236,39977,2,0,B|36:190|64:148|101:124|152:140,1,170,2|8

4. 01:47:477 (1) - The new combo here is not really necessary,as the jump is perfectly recognizable without any new combos,and this as now is just superfluous,so I just suggest you to remove it.

Static Noise Bird wrote:

congrats you tsundere boy~

Shulin wrote:

Oh nice! Congratz