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The Cab - Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)

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jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
saw this map and chose to mod it....well can only mod one diff until the mapper posts what he has fixed in the others xD

anyway just pointed out "major" flow breaks and stuff what really do not suit atm.... as in my light mod ;p

Bakari's Normal

  1. 00:28:721 (3,4,5) - as the previous mod stated your using 3 1/2 notes in a place what does not suit, i see you say you can hear the music do the 3 1/2 notes but it does not, infact the music does 1 1/1 note then 2 1/2 notes with the 2 1/2 notes starting at 00:28:932 thus if you are truly "wanting to follow the music" then the rhythm you should be using is the one below, i agree that the 3 1/2 notes feels totally odd due to the trip rhythm the song is using at this point in the song

    another way what would suit the above is to use a slider as the previous mod suggests, reason being it would then flow to the style you used at 00:21:987 (3) - where musically it is an identical timing and sound
  2. 01:17:546 (1,2) - totally breaking your own combo pattern and the flow you was creating yourself, take the combo off the (1) and put it on the (2) . that makes it flow with the pattern you used at 01:10:391 and not look totally odd and wrong
  3. 01:28:700 (2) - this feels toootally out of place, needs removing, it does not follow your patterns, you are following a constant rhythm at this point which follows the vocals to an amount, then suddenly put a 1/2 set in where the vocals clearly dont ask for it, felt out of place
  4. 01:29:752 (5) - placement of this 2/1 slider is really not flowing to your rhythm, having the middle of the slider hit onto a main stanza beat goes against the flow you have created upto this point, move the slider to start at 01:30:173 then put a normal hitcircle at 01:29:752 - then you flow will be corrected again
  5. 02:08:897 ok the section from here really plays bad so im gonna give some advise on how to fix it up so it has a flow
  6. 02:13:948 (1,2,3,4) - ok need some advise on this part, it plays....wrong...feels sooooo wrong.
    hitcircle here 02:15:210 - and then a 1/1 slider here with a new combo on 02:15:631 - which creates this timing pattern

  7. 02:17:315 (1,2) - delete both then make a 2/1 size repeating silder starting at 02:17:315 - like you did at 02:10:580 so that your flow continues and it feels good to play, then new combo 02:20:682 (6) - that will make this section all fine ^^
  8. 02:30:784 (1) - this really does not suit as 1/2 slider, i advise to replace it with either a 1/1 slider or 2 hitcircles, so that it follows the vocals and gives it power to lead into the kiai and to also make it flow with your pattern style at 02:37:518
  9. 03:01:089 (1) - again this 1/2 slider does not suit at all....dont ever use a 1/2 pattern just to try and make it look harder or more fun, because the effect is the reverse, it just makes it look odd and breaks your flow
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis
Some fix~!
Thanks BounceBabe and jericho2442 :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
yay~ jericho2442 thank you for mod
all fixed. so.. no need to quote your post (i think :3)

now when i see reasons and way how to fix problems i'm glad to update m diff :3

code
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Angel With A Shotgun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 149292
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12948
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:The Cab
Creator:Piscis
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:techno trance rave remix -bakari- foreverends giffen

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Shotgun.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,115628,127697
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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[Colours]
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Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,128,128

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Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

BounceBabe wrote:

[Insane]

Have to say.. even though i like stream, there are too many in here Yeah?

Overall

AR and OD - 1 because insane, I'll keep it :D

00:24:407 (8) - Dont stack.. hard to play mm.. i dont think so
00:29:247 (4) - ^ ^
00:30:931 (2) - ^ ^
00:33:983 (1) - Either way closer together or make something else oh, i like this pattern I'll keep it :D
00:36:718 (5) - Do not overlapp why?
00:37:771 (4) - Too far away from the circle before.. change this pattern I think jump is fitted here. and it is insane :P
00:37:981 (5) - A warning maybe? Its so sudden or changing but it is fitted :P
00:39:665 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - orz Or2
00:44:295 (3) - remove this stream really? i like this :)
00:55:659 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - doesnt fit at all ._. wow, Fixed
01:11:548 (6) - Dont stack I'll keep it cuz i like this
01:13:127 - Make this mm.. i think it is not fit
SPOILER
01:18:072 (2) - Doesnt fit at all again Yeah?
01:20:282 (1) - why the hell new combo? yeah, I fit vocal, and it looks so awkward combo No.10.
01:21:124 (1) - Either way closer together or make something else oh, i like this pattern I'll keep it :D
01:24:281 (1,2,3,4) - Too far away from the circle before.. change this pattern I think jump is fitted here. and it is insane :P
01:26:806 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Too confusing while playing Oh, yeah?
01:29:542 (3) - Dont overlapp why?
01:35:224 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - So many new combo @.@ oh, right. remove combo~
01:42:801 (3,4) - Dont make it so straight opposite maybe like this Sure, didn't do exactly as in the picture, but Fixd
SPOILER
01:43:642 (1) - - no, I'll keep it~
01:44:695 (1) - + ^
01:49:325 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this just doesnt fit... :s i think this is fitted..xD
02:22:366 (1) - No.. No no no ^^.. dont do this and remove combo mm.. i fit vocal . I'll keep it
02:25:312 (2) - Plays not right.. move it a bit further away yeah, fix it
02:26:575 (7) - Delete this.. you cant map sounds which are not in the song but i think this is fitted :D
02:30:784 (1) - - yeah but remove combo at 02:31:626 (3)
02:36:887 (7) - Move this somewhere else not under the tripple keep it
02:38:360 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Doesnt fit yeah, i fixd it
02:41:517 (7,8,9) - Distance I think jumping is fitted :D
02:43:411 (6) - Move this somewhere else not under the slider i like this pattern I'll keep it ~
02:45:516 (6,7,8) - Delete this tripple and make something else I'll keep it~
02:50:987 (1) - - no
02:51:829 (1) - - yeah
02:53:513 (1) - - no
02:54:565 (4,5) - Remove these and 02:55:196 (1,2,3) - these too why?
02:56:880 (5,6,7,8) - - Distance I think jumping is fitted :D
02:58:563 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Dont map sounds which arent in the song... orz.. change it yeah change it ~
03:04:456 (1) - Remove this finish I'll keep it
02:57:722 - From here to the end.. change it all... its just... not fitable to the song atm.. there should be a vocal mapping part + add whistles... if you want to add finish then volume down I'll keep it now but i think back if I receive like it.
03:10:349 (1) - Whislte or lower volume fully no, keep it ~
Thank you for great modding~

upload plz ~ :idea:
http://puu.sh/LRI3
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis
Update!
sqeeks
1 post
Joined May 2011
sqeeks
this is an awesome bit map I don't know why it isn't rated the hard difficulty wasn't much of a challenge but the speed was what made it fun! thank you for posting this great map!!
B2IN
B2IN
Hi ~ Piscis

from #modreq

[General]
fine :3
[Easy]
00:30:826 - add note ?
02:08:897 (1) - try this

02:12:264 (1) - ^ same
[Normal]
02:15:210 (2) - move down a bit
02:27:416 (4,5) - i think overmapping.. I hope to replace the spinner or long slider
02:29:100 (1) - remove finish sound. unfit
[Hard]
00:48:083 (4) - New combo for kiai time . ( remove 00:48:925 (1) )
01:31:857 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - try this 'w'
256,264,92488,1,0
216,196,92699,2,0,B|216:108,1,80
296,120,93120,2,0,B|296:208,1,80,8|0
328,292,93541,2,0,B|356:348|424:348|456:292,1,160,0|8
388,248,94172,5,0
348,180,94382,1,0
272,152,94593,1,2
208,104,94803,2,0,B|160:116|140:156,1,80,2|2
76,192,95224,5,4
180,308,95645,1,12
01:35:224 (4) - New combo for kiai time .( remove 01:36:066 (1))
02:22:787 (6) - remove finish sound . it is too loud
02:27:416 (1) - end the spinner till 02:28:679 .because that's where the vocals end
02:29:942 (1,2) - remove ? (suggestion)
[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:36:718 (5) - This end of slider is slightly hidden
00:52:397 (7) - remove ?
01:12:916 - i recommend you to add the note
01:18:388 (5) - try this :3

01:28:489 (1,3) - umm..this overlap is not pretty .. I hope to move a little bit.



good luck for rank 'w'
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

B2IN wrote:

[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:36:718 (5) - This end of slider is slightly hidden　Fixed
00:52:397 (7) - remove ?　none
01:12:916 - i recommend you to add the note none
01:18:388 (5) - try this :3 I didn't do exactly as in the pic, but fixed

01:28:489 (1,3) - umm..this overlap is not pretty .. I hope to move a little bit. you right. fixed~

Thank you for modding~ :D
http://puu.sh/10gv8
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis

B2IN wrote:

Hi ~ Piscis

from #modreq

[General]
fine :3
[Easy]
00:30:826 - add note ? no change...
02:08:897 (1) - try this Fixed

02:12:264 (1) - ^ same Fixed
[Hard]
00:48:083 (4) - New combo for kiai time . ( remove 00:48:925 (1) ) Fixed
01:31:857 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - try this 'w' little fix
256,264,92488,1,0
216,196,92699,2,0,B|216:108,1,80
296,120,93120,2,0,B|296:208,1,80,8|0
328,292,93541,2,0,B|356:348|424:348|456:292,1,160,0|8
388,248,94172,5,0
348,180,94382,1,0
272,152,94593,1,2
208,104,94803,2,0,B|160:116|140:156,1,80,2|2
76,192,95224,5,4
180,308,95645,1,12
01:35:224 (4) - New combo for kiai time .( remove 01:36:066 (1)) Fixed
02:22:787 (6) - remove finish sound . it is too loud Fixed
02:27:416 (1) - end the spinner till 02:28:679 .because that's where the vocals end hmm... no change
02:29:942 (1,2) - remove ? (suggestion) no, remains




good luck for rank 'w'
Thank for modding :D
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen
[Giffen's Shotgun]

update done :D

http://puu.sh/11UoO
kajiyatta
1,421 posts
Joined April 2011
kajiyatta
Hi from #modreq
General
カスタムsoft-hitsoundは入っていないようなので、S:C:1のものは全部Sで良いと思います
残りはほぼ提案です
Easy
Placement
00:38:82382) 3,4 grid 左の方が打ちやすいと思います
01:28:490(1,3) 見栄えの問題ですが、全て同じ方向なら角度をずらしてみるのは？ e.g) それぞれ30°傾
SPOILER
SPOILER
02:15:631(1,2) 中途半端なので包むようにしてみるのは？
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
02:45:094(1) 全体にwhistle追加

Bakari's Normal
nice diff :3
Placement
00:54:817(1) Ctrl+H?
01:51:640(5,1,2) like this symmetrically?
SPOILER

Hard
Placement
00:43:874(2,3,4,5) やや窮屈なのでもう少し膨らませてみては
SPOILER
01:04:709(1) これも包むようにしてみては
SPOILER
01:29:963(1) (3)のスライダーを左右上下反転したものに変えてみては？
SPOILER
Hit Sonud
02:22:366(5) finish→whistle
02:24:049(3) whistle追加？

Giffen's Shotgun
Placement
00:34:193(2) Ctrl+R?
01:21:334(2)^
Rythem
01:12:916 ボーカルもはっきりしているので、noteを追加？ e:g)
SPOILER
01:18:599 ここもnoteが欲しいです。次の(1)スライダーにスタックさせても良いと思います
02:37:413 note追加？
SPOILER

good luck with star~
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

kajiyatta wrote:

Giffen's Shotgun
Placement
00:34:193(2) Ctrl+R? None おしゃれですがAimがとてもやり難く感じてしまうためこのままにすることにしました
01:21:334(2)^　^
Rythem
01:12:916 ボーカルもはっきりしているので、noteを追加？ e:g)　Fixed　確かにそうですね　追加しました
SPOILER
01:18:599 ここもnoteが欲しいです。次の(1)スライダーにスタックさせても良いと思います　スタックはさせていませんが　Fixed　
02:37:413 note追加？　Fixed　追加しました
SPOILER

good luck with star~
Thank you for good modding~ :D
とても参考になりました :)
Last edited by Giffen , edited 1 time in total.
giO-
giO-
Hello, from #modreqs for Mod for Mod with Renard - Smoke Tower http://osu.ppy.sh/s/38149

Easy

00:50:187 - add note here, sound better

Normal

00:28:932 (3,4) - don't fit well, just delete and replace with slider http://puu.sh/14PAK then fix hitsounds
01:29:752 (4) - add clap
01:30:173 (5) - remove clap
02:15:210 (2) - add clap
03:01:510 - add clap

Hard

00:40:507 (4,5) - consider to delete both note and add slider instead http://puu.sh/14PKJ sound better
01:27:648 (4,5) - ^ http://puu.sh/14PMK
02:47:409 (1,5) - overlap http://puu.sh/14POS

Giffen's Shotgun

00:19:461 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:19:882 (2) -
00:32:089 (3) - make this slider longer 00:32:509 -
00:44:716 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:45:557 (3) -
00:45:557 (3) - add clap?
01:18:809 (1) - add clap
01:34:803 (5) - ^
01:35:224 (1) - ^
02:38:360 (3,6) - ^

Good luck! ;)
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

giO- wrote:

Giffen's Shotgun

00:19:461 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:19:882 (2) - Fixed
00:32:089 (3) - make this slider longer 00:32:509 - None
00:44:716 (1) - remove new combo and add on 00:45:557 (3) - None
00:45:557 (3) - add clap? None
01:18:809 (1) - add clap Fixed
01:34:803 (5) - ^ None
01:35:224 (1) - ^ Fixed
02:38:360 (3,6) - ^ Fixed

Good luck! ;)
Thanks!
Good idea you gave me was helpful for me :)

http://puu.sh/14Qtd
GoOoM
98 posts
Joined May 2010
GoOoM
Diff. Giffen's Shotgun

02:15:631 (1) - over the screen... move!
02:22:366 (1) - ugly.. move up to this 02:21:945 (5) -
02:39:833 (2,3) - does not respect the song
02:41:938 (1,2) - same
03:09:928 (7,8,9) - wrong
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

GoOoM wrote:

Diff. Giffen's Shotgun

02:15:631 (1) - over the screen... move! omg :o okey I move this a little further to the up
02:22:366 (1) - ugly.. move up to this 02:21:945 (5) - I think this respect the song. I'll keep it
02:39:833 (2,3) - does not respect the song I don't think so :P
02:41:938 (1,2) - same yeah you right. I changed it.
03:09:928 (7,8,9) - wrong yeah. I changed it to respect the song.
Thanks for modding ! :)

http://puu.sh/16sZF
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
fixed nazi and inconsistent hitsounds
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Nightcore - Angel With A Shotgun.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 149292
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 12948
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Angel With A Shotgun (Nightcore Mix)
Artist:The Cab
Creator:Piscis
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:techno trance rave remix -bakari- foreverends giffen

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"Shotgun.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,115628,127697
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
14411,420.904945633111,4,1,0,20,1,0
16094,-100,4,1,0,30,0,0
17778,-100,4,1,0,40,0,0
19461,-100,4,1,0,50,0,0
21145,-100,4,1,0,31,0,0
48083,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
54396,-100,4,1,0,44,0,0
54817,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
61131,-100,4,1,0,44,0,0
61552,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
68286,-100,4,1,0,44,0,0
95224,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
101538,-100,4,1,0,44,0,0
101959,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
108272,-100,4,1,0,44,0,0
108693,-100,4,1,0,44,0,1
115428,-100,4,1,0,35,0,0
142366,-100,4,2,0,60,0,0
149100,-100,4,1,0,43,0,0
150784,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
157097,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
157518,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
163832,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
164253,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
170566,-100,4,1,0,45,0,0
170987,-100,4,1,0,45,0,1
177722,-100,4,2,0,48,0,0
191191,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 0,64,128
Combo2 : 128,0,128
Combo3 : 0,128,128

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216,84,164253,6,0,B|148:92|92:44,1,120,4|8
92,172,165094,2,0,B|76:312,1,120,0|8
200,300,165936,1,4
232,184,166357,1,8
316,272,166778,1,0
364,160,167199,1,8
440,68,167620,6,0,B|492:112|480:184,1,120,4|8
408,268,168462,2,0,B|432:344|504:356,2,120,0|8|4
292,300,169724,1,8
180,340,170145,2,0,B|148:276|88:264,1,120,0|8
256,192,170987,12,0,173513
256,316,174354,5,4
256,316,175196,1,0
256,316,176038,1,4
164,236,176459,1,8
140,120,176880,2,0,B|212:120|236:40,1,120,0|8
328,128,177722,6,0,B|460:164,2,120,4|8|0
376,240,178984,1,8
304,336,179405,2,0,B|244:308|180:304,1,120,4|8
100,220,180247,1,0
204,160,180668,1,8
316,112,181089,6,0,B|364:64|448:88,1,120,0|8
396,196,181931,2,0,B|356:248|372:328,1,120,0|8
248,316,182772,2,0,B|200:280|128:284,1,120,4|8
116,228,183404,1,0
156,180,183614,2,0,B|272:144,1,120,0|8
208,44,184456,5,4
100,96,184877,1,8
64,212,185298,2,0,B|80:288|156:300,1,120,0|8
252,340,186140,2,0,B|312:200,1,120,4|8
388,312,186982,1,0
480,232,187402,1,8
256,192,187823,12,0,191611
Sanik
24 posts
Joined May 2012
Sanik
TBH, this is the best beatmap I've ever played.
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

SonicX246831 wrote:

TBH, this is the best beatmap I've ever played.
Thank you~ :D
seanhappy8520
40 posts
Joined July 2011
seanhappy8520
BPM is wrong?.....
(making taiko diff too....
Switch OFF
22 posts
Joined February 2012
Switch OFF
Hi~ from #modresq

[Timing]
Bpm 142.6
101538 → 101928
[Easy]
00:32:503 - Add note
00:37:552 - ^
01:02:798 - ^
01:14:579 - ^
01:19:628 - ^
01:49:922 - ^
01:19:628 - clap
01:27:648 (4) - ^
00:21:987 (2,2) - ^
01:39:433 (3) - finish , clap

[Hard]
01:11:443 (8) - finish , clap
02:19:630 (2) - ^
deathward
3 posts
Joined January 2012
deathward
I'd just like to add that the Taiko map for this is a blast to play. :>
jamxx
501 posts
Joined November 2010
jamxx
from modreqs

Easy
・00:29:563 (3) - パターンから外れますが、終点にclapを入れると音にメリハリがついていいと思います。同じようにclapが付けられる場所を書いておきます。
SPOILER
00:36:298 (3) - 終点
00:44:716 (1) - 終点
00:58:185 (1) - 終点
01:04:919 (3) - 終点
01:16:704 (3) - 終点
01:23:439 (3) - 終点
01:52:060 (1) - 終点
02:47:620 (1,2) - それぞれ終点
・01:08:286 (1) - ここから01:13:337 (2) - ここまでbreaktimeにしてみては？（初心者向けの難易度にしては休憩が少ないと思ったので）
・02:11:422 (2) - 曲にwhistleのような音が聴こえるのでwhistle追加

Hard
好みの問題ですが、もう少しニューコンボ挟んでもいいかもしれないです
・01:04:077 (9) - 上じゃなくて下に膨らませたほうが流れがいいかも
・01:15:442 (2,3) - 譜面全体を通して綺麗なので、ここが01:14:600 (6) - に被っているのが気になりました。
　提案としては01:14:389 (5) - をこんな感じの折り返しスライダーにしてみてはどうですか？（折り返しにclapで）
SPOILER
・01:44:905 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2),(3)と(4),(5)のスタックの間隔が違うのでミスしやすいと思いました。
　01:45:326 (4) - を折り返しスライダーにして真上にあげると、ボーカルの音程とスライダーの動きが一致するのでどうでしょうか？
SPOILER
・02:27:416 (1) - 02:28:679で曲に小さなﾀﾝｯという音が入るのでそこで終わらせてみては？そこに20%くらいでNormalのヒットサウンドの緑線引くといい感じです。
・03:04:456 (6) - このfinishは浮いてる気がします。音量を絞るか削除で。

綺麗かつ面白い譜面でした
SBも素敵です！
star~
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis

jamxx wrote:

from modreqs

Easy
・00:29:563 (3) - パターンから外れますが、終点にclapを入れると音にメリハリがついていいと思います。同じようにclapが付けられる場所を書いておきます。変更はしない方向で～
SPOILER
00:36:298 (3) - 終点
00:44:716 (1) - 終点
00:58:185 (1) - 終点
01:04:919 (3) - 終点
01:16:704 (3) - 終点
01:23:439 (3) - 終点
01:52:060 (1) - 終点
02:47:620 (1,2) - それぞれ終点
・01:08:286 (1) - ここから01:13:337 (2) - ここまでbreaktimeにしてみては？（初心者向けの難易度にしては休憩が少ないと思ったので）　変更しました！
・02:11:422 (2) - 曲にwhistleのような音が聴こえるのでwhistle追加　私は合わないと思うので無変更で

Hard
好みの問題ですが、もう少しニューコンボ挟んでもいいかもしれないです　NCたくさん入れました！
・01:04:077 (9) - 上じゃなくて下に膨らませたほうが流れがいいかも　変更しました
・01:15:442 (2,3) - 譜面全体を通して綺麗なので、ここが01:14:600 (6) - に被っているのが気になりました。
　提案としては01:14:389 (5) - をこんな感じの折り返しスライダーにしてみてはどうですか？（折り返しにclapで）　提案とは全く違いますが変更しました
SPOILER
・01:44:905 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - (2),(3)と(4),(5)のスタックの間隔が違うのでミスしやすいと思いました。
　01:45:326 (4) - を折り返しスライダーにして真上にあげると、ボーカルの音程とスライダーの動きが一致するのでどうでしょうか？　同じように変更しました
SPOILER
・02:27:416 (1) - 02:28:679で曲に小さなﾀﾝｯという音が入るのでそこで終わらせてみては？そこに20%くらいでNormalのヒットサウンドの緑線引くといい感じです。　変更はしない方向で
・03:04:456 (6) - このfinishは浮いてる気がします。音量を絞るか削除で。　30%ほど絞りました

綺麗かつ面白い譜面でした
SBも素敵です！
star~
星ともっどありがとうございました！
Foreverends
992 posts
Joined July 2011
Foreverends
please update me taiko gd :D
fix offset and some problem :D
Thank You!!! :)
http://puu.sh/1gDKm
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
this makes me sad.. :(
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis
Why makes sad... :?:
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

Piscis wrote:

Why makes sad... :?:
he was moved by lyrics
this makes me sad too :(
dkun
osu! Alumni
4,486 posts
Joined August 2009
dkun
I was moved by the lyrics? More like I mapped the original and got it ranked plus had two different people ask me to map the nightcore. (which I said no to)

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/50133
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

dkun wrote:

I mapped the original
:!: 　I didnt know that
I apologize for my mistake :?
wantuole
528 posts
Joined December 2010
wantuole
from my queue
for M4M
my friends purist was shit, I can't find he,so I'm help he do the mod, you will get KD in his map later
[General]
ok
vol a little down,NOR is ok
Giffen's Shotgun, same end spinner with otherdiff
[Easy]
00:48:925 this where empty feel strange,if you want some place empty，00:48:504 (1) si butter
00:53:134 (4) - ugly slider,this is one of shape, make it’s more good,less red point in middle
SPOILER
01:21:755 (1,3) - this 2 be same shape is butter
01:35:645 (1,2) - ^ 01:36:066 empty feel strange
02:31:205 (1,2) - ^
end feel no follow music，seem all move next white line is butter
[Bakari's Normal]
good job
nice hit sound
02:29:100 (1) - remove whistle
[Hard]
01:00:920 (2,3) - no need in middle
01:03:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - change direction so straight,use other idea
SPOILER
02:10:580 (5,1) - long white line NC seem butter in this where
[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:33:983 (1,2,3) - :? feel hard for play 00:32:930 (5,1) - be a little nearly
00:37:981 (1) - no need slow, long slider is ok
01:04:288 (6,7,8,1) - be same DS
01:10:180 (6) - like this？
SPOILER

01:13:127 (1) - ^,we don't need slow this
01:24:281 (1,2,3,4) - ?jump is ok , but not put 1 2 4 in one line
01:48:061 (4) - cover of hp line
02:17:315 (1) - ..ugly, red point in middle
02:22:366 (1) - no need so nearly, if you need,must be full cover
02:57:721 (1) - ctrl+g?
03:04:456 (1) - remove finish

that all
good luck and star
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis

wantuole wrote:

from my queue
for M4M
my friends purist was shit, I can't find he,so I'm help he do the mod, you will get KD in his map later
[General]
[Easy]
00:48:925 this where empty feel strange,if you want some place empty，00:48:504 (1) si butter Fixed
00:53:134 (4) - ugly slider,this is one of shape, make it’s more good,less red point in middle Fixed
SPOILER
01:21:755 (1,3) - this 2 be same shape is butter No change~
01:35:645 (1,2) - ^ 01:36:066 empty feel strange Fixed
02:31:205 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
end feel no follow music，seem all move next white line is butter
[Hard]
01:00:920 (2,3) - no need in middle Fixed
01:03:025 (1,2,3,4,5) - change direction so straight,use other idea Nice idea!
SPOILER
02:10:580 (5,1) - long white line NC seem butter in this where Fixed

that all
good luck and star
thank for mod and star!
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

wantuole wrote:

[General]
ok
vol a little down,NOR is ok
Giffen's Shotgun, same end spinner with otherdiff yep that's better

[Giffen's Shotgun]
00:33:983 (1,2,3) - :? feel hard for play 00:32:930 (5,1) - be a little nearly None
00:37:981 (1) - no need slow, long slider is ok Done
01:04:288 (6,7,8,1) - be same DS None
01:10:180 (6) - like this？ Done
SPOILER

01:13:127 (1) - ^,we don't need slow this Done
01:24:281 (1,2,3,4) - ?jump is ok , but not put 1 2 4 in one line Done
01:48:061 (4) - cover of hp line Done
02:17:315 (1) - ..ugly, red point in middle Done
02:22:366 (1) - no need so nearly, if you need,must be full cover Done
02:57:721 (1) - ctrl+g? None
03:04:456 (1) - remove finish Done

that all
good luck and star
thaks for modding and star! :)

http://puu.sh/1hOfQ
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana


  1. 02:33:309 (1) - Move 8 grids down, looks better :D

Giffen's Shotgun

  1. 01:25:123 (5) - You have to set new Combo for Slowdowns, because you can't see them. It's better to remove the slowdown, a new Comco wouldn't fit here...
  2. 02:26:575 (7) - This sliderstream fits not with this part of the song. Why not set a long slider from 02:26:575 - 02:26:996?
  3. 02:57:722 - I think this last part is overmapped :( The streams doesn't fit and there aren't any beats in the song, so this 1/2 mapping doesn't fit... My opinion.

Good mapset :3 Checked all diffs and couldn't find a lot ^^
Good luck with rank ^^
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

kurohana wrote:

Giffen's Shotgun

  1. 01:25:123 (5) - You have to set new Combo for Slowdowns, because you can't see them. It's better to remove the slowdown, a new Comco wouldn't fit here... Done
  2. 02:26:575 (7) - This sliderstream fits not with this part of the song. Why not set a long slider from 02:26:575 - 02:26:996? none
  3. 02:57:722 - I think this last part is overmapped :( The streams doesn't fit and there aren't any beats in the song, so this 1/2 mapping doesn't fit... My opinion. Done
Good mapset :3 Checked all diffs and couldn't find a lot ^^
Good luck with rank ^^
thank you for modding! :lol:

http://puu.sh/1imGe
KuronumaSawako
471 posts
Joined March 2011
KuronumaSawako
M4M requested in my my queue.

Well, i checked your map and can't find nothing wrong here...sorry ><

Have a star~

Good Luck :)
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
[Giffen's Shotgun]
Various unsnapped notes. "Resnap all notes" to fix.

[TaikoEnds]
As above.

Only this :?
Piscis
261 posts
Joined October 2010
Topic Starter
Piscis
OK Fixed~
congaan
163 posts
Joined July 2011
congaan
hi :) #modreqs
easy
nothing to say

normal
nothing

hard
01:26:806 (1) - NC削除
01:27:438 (1) - ここからも普通に埋めた方がいい気が
02:22:366 (5) - NC
/02:23:207 (1) - NC削除　すこしパターン崩してでもこっちの方がしっくり
02:59:616 (5) - リピート+1　後ろのサークル削除
03:06:771 (1,2) - リズム入れ変え

giffen's
00:15:358 - note追加かスタック回避
00:19:461 (8,1) - nc入れ変え
00:29:563 (6) - nc追加
/00:30:405 (1) - nc削除パターン的に
00:36:087 (4) - ctrlGでx軸とnextDSとか参考にしながら対称に
00:39:454 (4,1,2,3) - ワンテンポずれてる気が。ジャンプと重ねるサークルはこっちのが合う気がした http://puu.sh/1sRNK
00:44:400 (4) - note削除でジャンプに http://puu.sh/1sRQD
/00:45:557 (3) - サークル2つでジャンプに
00:46:610 (3) - note削除
00:52:081 (4,5,6,7,8) - 全部単発に変更でジャンプ. サークル2つをセットでジャンプ繰り返せば面白いかも http://puu.sh/1sRYu
00:53:134-00:53:555 上のスクショみたいな音取りに
00:56:501 (9) - ここからスライダー http://puu.sh/1sS2X
01:21:755 (4) - 00:34:614とNC統一
01:43:853 (2,3,4) - kiaiの中でこの配置は退屈かも。空けるという提案 http://puu.sh/1sSi5
03:00:037 (1) - http://puu.sh/1wH1V ?
03:03:193 スライダー削除でここにサークル
03:05:719- nnnnnmmeoshi
丁寧語と後半出重複部分は省略。ほとんど重要度が低く個人的な感覚です。指摘したところの5連打は合わないと思った部分なのでそこだけ再確認してもらえればデス

byebye
Giffen
144 posts
Joined June 2011
Giffen

congaan wrote:

giffen's
00:15:358 - note追加かスタック回避 none
00:19:461 (8,1) - nc入れ変え done
00:29:563 (6) - nc追加done
/00:30:405 (1) - nc削除パターン的にdone
00:36:087 (4) - ctrlGでx軸とnextDSとか参考にしながら対称にdone
00:39:454 (4,1,2,3) - ワンテンポずれてる気が。ジャンプと重ねるサークルはこっちのが合う気がした http://puu.sh/1sRNKdone URLリンク切れのため意向にそぐわない配置かもしれませんが
00:44:400 (4) - note削除でジャンプに http://puu.sh/1sRQD　done　^
/00:45:557 (3) - サークル2つでジャンプに none パターンを重点においているので
00:46:610 (3) - note削除 none5連打2回によるパターン化＆易化を狙っているため
00:52:081 (4,5,6,7,8) - 全部単発に変更でジャンプ. サークル2つをセットでジャンプ繰り返せば面白いかも http://puu.sh/1sRYu none
00:53:134-00:53:555 上のスクショみたいな音取りに none
00:56:501 (9) - ここからスライダー http://puu.sh/1sS2X　done
01:21:755 (4) - 00:34:614とNC統一done
01:43:853 (2,3,4) - kiaiの中でこの配置は退屈かも。空けるという提案 http://puu.sh/1sSi5done　大変参考になりました
03:00:037 (1) - http://puu.sh/1wH1V ?　none　リンク切れのため
03:03:193 スライダー削除でここにサークルdone　長いスライダーにしますた
03:05:719- nnnnnmmeoshi　done　確かににににに
丁寧語と後半出重複部分は省略。ほとんど重要度が低く個人的な感覚です。指摘したところの5連打は合わないと思った部分なのでそこだけ再確認してもらえればデス
Thank you for modding :)

http://puu.sh/1zspd

大幅な配置変えをしました
http://puu.sh/1AQoC
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