Kayy xD I love to check my friends map xD lets start xD (though i don't really like renard, this one isn't that bad xD)
[General]
- Eh..? doesn't have any source?
- my..... the slidertick sound doesn't really fit with the music and make beats more awkward.. =w= lets see what to use... Hooowww bout
this..? xD
- I think... here is the Kiai point
O=> 00:48:029 ~ 01:04:029
O=> 01:20:029 ~ 01:36:029
O=> 02:10:029 ~ 02:26:029 (its just my imo) x3
- use grid size tiny to make your placement and slider looks good xD
- your hitsound volume is so low.. I cant hear any hitsound clearly.. >< 70 or 65 please.. xD
[STBlack's Easy]
- yer Spacing isn't nice at all.. >< why u don't use Distance snap... OAO;;;
- add clap at the 2nd and 4th white line.. to make it sounded good xD
00:16:029 (1,2,3,4) - doesn't looks really good.. >< (3,4) should be distanced like (1,2) to make it looks good
, so, (3,4) copy paste from (1,2) and move it. it'll looked like
this 00:20:029 (1) - move the middle point 2 grid down and 1 grid right. it looks better that way xD
00:26:779 (3) - remove slider tick sound if u do change the soft sound into the custom hitsound 1
00:28:029 (1,2,3) - change into 1 slider with reverse?
00:41:654 (3,3) - this looks really bad on easy..
- especially 00:41:654 (3) . its started on blue line and it'll make the newbies got 100 instead of 300
so, move 00:41:529 and add 1 reverse.
- or, reduce 2 reverse, and end the slider 00:43:904(without reverse), which means, after being reversed, the slider will end 00:44:279
- or, reduce 2 reverse, and end the slider 00:43:779 (without reverse), which means, after being reversed, the slider will end 00:44:029
00:46:029 (4) - nice slider (>.<)b
00:48:029 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure U can place this better.. >< u can make a circle shape, or flower?
00:50:904 (7) - please please please don't ever make sliders or circles start at blue ticks on easy.. >< dont and DON'T.. It'll make the newbies got 100 or 50 instead of 300 ><, kay, so, move the (7) 00:51:029 , and end it 00:52:029
00:50:029 (5,6) - not fit with the music ><, remove (6) and make (5) into a slider and end it 00:50:779
00:53:154 (2,3) - this too.. >< remove both, and add slider from 00:53:029 to 00:53:779
00:58:904 (4) - I think u know what i'll say here
01:01:154 (2) - ^
01:14:029 (2) -
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02:00:029 (1,2,3,4) - I'm sure u can make the sliders look nice than this... ><
02:12:904 (4) - move the middle point 2 grid up
02:10:529 (2) - ^ 1 grid up
02:12:904 (4) - move to 02:13:029
[Normal]
Yer diff sir.. xD
I wonder why, u likes to use S slider X3
00:14:529 - whistle?
00:15:529 (3) - remove clap , add whistle and finish and please make it sound louder
00:16:779 (2) - x:280 y:176
00:17:029 (3) - x:208 y:136 and move the middle point 1 grid left xD
00:17:779 (4) - x:156 y:200
00:18:029 (1,2,3) - arrange it by yourself to make it no jumps xD if you change ^
00:21:529 (4) - x:40 y:128
00:22:279 (1) - x:92 y:268
00:24:279 (1,2,3,4) - just linear O.O ? Boring neh? so....
- 00:24:529 (2) - x:196 y:316
- 00:24:779 (3) - x:156 y:248
00:29:029 (4) - this slider will fit better with the music if u use V slider instead of S slider
00:59:529 (5) - make the slider's head aline with the slider's tail :3
01:01:529 (4) - just curve the slider.. will looks fit with the music xD
01:14:779 (3) - x:140 y:56
01:20:279 (2) - change the snap divisor into 1/3 and move it to 01:20:362
01:21:029 (2) - change the snap divisor into 1/4 and remove 01:21:779 (1), end the (2) 01:21:404 , and reverse it xD
~SETERUSNYA~ xD
01:28:529 (2) - NAISSUUUUUU XD KAKKOI DESUYO X3
01:44:029 (1) - HOW THE HELL CAN U DO THIS?! =w= TEACHH MEEEEE XD btw, 01:48:404 - till 01:49:029, not same shape with 01:44:029 - till 01:44:779
02:51:029 (1) - this aren't at the center of 02:50:029 (1,2) . sengaja?
02:54:029 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:16:529 (3,4,5) - err.... da shape... just make it linear..
(only 3,4 btw)
00:26:529 (3) - x:464 y:264
00:29:279 (4) - Jangan tanggung2 =w= naikin aja
misalnya di x:300 y:120 gituu xD
01:04:279 (2) - idk why, i prefer the (2) stacked with (1)
01:05:279 (5) - ^
02:10:904 (5) - x:104 y:72 to make the (6) clearer and has a good flow
02:13:529 (6) - V slider please xD
02:34:029 - delete
02:35:029 (1,2,3) - move to 02:34:029
02:41:029 - add notes here
02:43:654 (7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) -
u know what u see.
U ONLY PLAYED ON THE CENTER xD
02:43:654 (7,8,1,2,7,8,2,3,7) - about something like this, u can make many variation with this
sliders, Jumps, anti jumps. its kinda boring u know, to have many circles like that -,-
Nothing wrong with Futsuu xD
[Oni]
01:39:779 - add k?
01:40:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - why k when u use d at 01:36:029 (1,2,3,4,5) -
KK~ Give u 1 star because u are my friend, 1 star for motivate u and another 1 star for awsome TAIKO ONI diff xD
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Imo, this map needs more mod especially for the Hard.. there is still ugly slider that i don't want to mention.. find it by yourself.. xD