Hi karen, mod request from my modding queue :3
[General]
Clear :3
[249's Easy]
00:44:241 (1) - You can make it more curved blanketting it with 00:43:332 (4) in such a way you can overlap the 00:45:605 (2) with 00:43:332 (4).
I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400508 It's more flowing and enjoyable to play :3
01:06:059 (5) - To keep consistency with 00:51:514 (1) you have to use New combo on this circle removing it from 01:06:514 (1) instead, it fits much better
01:09:695 (1) - What an ugly slider we have here. Use this code, it's more flowing and the blankets with 01:08:332 (3) and 01:11:514 (2) are much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400512
[Sekai's Normal]
00:20:832 (4) - What about to use New combo here? I think it flows better because you can keep a single combo with 00:18:105 (1,2,3) that are 3 1/2 sliders
00:40:605 (5) - New combo and remove from 00:41:968 (1)
01:02:423 (1) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add it on the slider's start? Maybe with a lower volume if you think that it sounds too loud :3
01:16:968 (5) - ^ and use New combo here
[Hard]
01:20:605 (1) - I would move this spinner 1/4 later adding a circle here instead, because it seems that there is a missed sound here:
01:27:082 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 plz, the sound is really much better.
[JoJo]
00:06:741 (6) - 1 grid down to avoid the overlap with 00:05:832 (4) that in my opinion breaks the flow
00:09:468 (6) - New combo?
00:13:105 (6) - ^
00:16:741 (6) - ^
00:20:377 (7) - ^
00:24:014 (6) - ^
00:26:059 (1) - I would use a finish here, it's much better imho
00:27:650 (6) - New combo
00:31:286 (6) - ^
00:50:150 (6) - This circle touched the hp bar. Consider to fix this
01:05:832 (8,9,1) - I think it's enough confusing after a jump.
01:15:377 (7) - CTRL + R flows better
Good map, just small suggestion especially about comboing
[Insane]
00:14:241 (8) - To follow the whistle sound, maybe add new combo?
I really liked this map nice :3
That' all!
Good luck with rank >w</
[General]
Clear :3
[249's Easy]
00:44:241 (1) - You can make it more curved blanketting it with 00:43:332 (4) in such a way you can overlap the 00:45:605 (2) with 00:43:332 (4).
I mean: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400508 It's more flowing and enjoyable to play :3
216,148,44241,6,0,B|212:88|268:40|328:60,1,160,4|800:47:877 (1) - I can hear a finish 00:48:786 from the music. I highly suggest you to use a finish on this slider's end, it sounds perfectly :3
320,156,45605,1,0
416,164,46059,2,0,B|419:224|364:272|304:252,1,160,4|8
236,196,47423,1,0
01:06:059 (5) - To keep consistency with 00:51:514 (1) you have to use New combo on this circle removing it from 01:06:514 (1) instead, it fits much better
01:09:695 (1) - What an ugly slider we have here. Use this code, it's more flowing and the blankets with 01:08:332 (3) and 01:11:514 (2) are much better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/400512
340,68,69695,6,0,B|404:136|376:176|328:216|392:276|432:296,1,240,2|801:18:559 (3) - I really don't like how this whistle sounds on this slider's tail. Finish is really much better instead
[Sekai's Normal]
00:20:832 (4) - What about to use New combo here? I think it flows better because you can keep a single combo with 00:18:105 (1,2,3) that are 3 1/2 sliders
00:40:605 (5) - New combo and remove from 00:41:968 (1)
01:02:423 (1) - I can hear a finish here from the music. What about to add it on the slider's start? Maybe with a lower volume if you think that it sounds too loud :3
01:16:968 (5) - ^ and use New combo here
[Hard]
01:20:605 (1) - I would move this spinner 1/4 later adding a circle here instead, because it seems that there is a missed sound here:
01:27:082 (1) - Reduce by 1/2 plz, the sound is really much better.
[JoJo]
00:06:741 (6) - 1 grid down to avoid the overlap with 00:05:832 (4) that in my opinion breaks the flow
00:09:468 (6) - New combo?
00:13:105 (6) - ^
00:16:741 (6) - ^
00:20:377 (7) - ^
00:24:014 (6) - ^
00:26:059 (1) - I would use a finish here, it's much better imho
00:27:650 (6) - New combo
00:31:286 (6) - ^
00:50:150 (6) - This circle touched the hp bar. Consider to fix this
01:05:832 (8,9,1) - I think it's enough confusing after a jump.
01:15:377 (7) - CTRL + R flows better
Good map, just small suggestion especially about comboing
[Insane]
00:14:241 (8) - To follow the whistle sound, maybe add new combo?
I really liked this map nice :3
That' all!
Good luck with rank >w</