kajiyatta wrote:

kosiga's Normal
Placement
00:43:590(5,1) ここは一拍空いていて、リズムが変わるので初心者にはスタックさせるのは少しわかりづらい感じがします。以下の様な配置はどうですか？ 他にも同様のstackを置いているので、ここを変えるとなると他のとこも考ないといけないと思うので保留にします。><

SPOILER

Hit Sonud
01:21:256(7) 終点にfinish追加？ sorry, no change ><!
01:22:256(1)始点のfinish削除？ ^
good diff =3

Kuria wrote:

when this map got ranked? Q_Q

ojisannyu wrote:

nice map
star

Zazalng wrote:

Inssane
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00:57:256 at Combo 9 Create new Combo 9-12 fixed　　
00:59:923 at Combo 8 Create new Combo 8-11 fixed　　

Insane Check 94%
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Overall Result Pass!
Congratulation You Map Nearly to be Ranked

+Star

104,240,45423,2,0,B|136:264|144:308|136:352|104:376,1,150,0|0

188,172,209590,6,0,B|272:140|340:232,1,150,0|8
312,292,210090,1,0
236,260,210257,2,0,B|232:160|332:124,1,150,0|8
384,152,210757,1,0
340,224,210924,2,0,B|256:208|220:132,1,150,0|8
176,72,211423,1,0

-Gamu- wrote:

ﾟ*｡(ｏ'∀')b｡*ﾟこんにちは♪ こんばんはー


[Insane]

SPOILER

●00:28:256 (4) - 前の(8,9,10)と(1)の間くらいに矢印が付くくらいに向きを少し変えてみたらどうですか？　http://puu.sh/10isQ　　fixed　　　
●00:28:756 (5) - 上のやつを変えた場合　これも、コピーしてね。　fixed　　
●01:43:423 (1) - 座標(x:264 y:232)に移動してみてはどうですか？　するとこうなります　http://puu.sh/10iuS　　fixed　　
●03:00:923 (3) - リズムがとりやすくするためにnew combo?　　fixed　　
●03:08:090 (4) - 上と同じ　　fixed　　
insaneの３番目はほかの難易度と揃えてみました
動画の件は保留で・・・

-Gamu- wrote:

ﾟ
●01:10:923 (1,2) - bend a little. It's almost straight sliders lol

Mythol wrote:

>donpen stop finding mods and get MAT =3=

-Gamu- wrote:

[kosiga's Normal]

●00:35:256 (5) - このように、曲げてみると　見た目も良くなると思います。　http://puu.sh/10i4L　　fixed~
●00:54:756 (2) - ここにnew combo? ^
●01:51:590 (1) - Add whistle? すいません。no change ><!
●02:00:090 (2) - ここにnew combo? fixed
●02:05:090 (1) - 急にこういうのきたら困ると思いますｗ　一つのスライダーとかにしませんか？ 検討します。とりあえず保留
●02:11:590 (3) - 02:13:590 (1)のように曲げると・・流れがよりよくなると思います。 ok. fixed
●02:20:590 (4) - 00:35:256(5)の提案と同じ。02:19:256 (2,3,4) - 真っ直ぐで揃えておきたいのでこのままで!
●02:57:590 (2) - 02:56:256 (1)をコピーして、こういう風にするのはどうですか？　http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/417438 no change ><
●03:06:923 (3) - 流れ的にここはnew comboのはず！ fixed~
●03:16:256 (2) - ここにnew combo? ここからkiai time開始なので ここにNC置くと見た目が私的によろしくないのでno change
●03:32:256 (5) - Add finish? 01:21:256 (7) - ここと同じなのでno change ><

<コメント>
●音付けも配置も全然問題なかったです。すべて提案なので　"All no change"でもかまいません。

spboxer3 wrote:

kosiga's Normal

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  

1. 02:32:256 - kiai time should end at here.

　　done↓ with the following

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 02:31:090 (1) - To discuss with BATs. you should let kiai time and at 02:32:256 - so perhaps you can used rhythm like this↓ hmm...ok.. but I used my rhythm
   
   
   
   
2. 02:43:590 (1,1) - used 2 spinner it's kinda boring for player. so maybe used note at 02:46:256 - and start spinner at 02:46:923 - ?

ok. remove the first spinner and put note instead ( also my pattern )

spboxer3 wrote:

general

• 
  Settings
  (For the setting/general issue.)
  

1. source should be blank and add Nico Nico Douga in tags. 　　　　fixed?
2. Normal (3.02)-> Hard(4.98) lol'd

Insane

• 
  
  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 02:54:756 (2,3) -

no change　I don't know what to do......

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)

1. 03:37:256 - add clap ?

　　　 no change. i don't think little fit it...

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:52:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - awkward stream pattern~ make it more smooth it's more pretty imo. fixed
   
   
2. 01:03:590 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - ^ fixed
   
   
3. 01:37:590 (4) - [rhythm suggestion] move to 01:37:423 - follow the electric Guitar sound it's more interesting and fitter then original one imo. fixed
   
   
4. 01:57:840 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - same as 00:52:423 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - (mirrored)

fixed

03:15:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - yay it's my idea, don't care about this xD if you want to check this: ↓ no change. I think this pattern is hard for me...

352,40,195090,5,2
296,192,195257,1,0
296,128,195423,1,2
264,208,195590,1,0
324,116,195757,1,2
208,48,195923,1,2
148,140,196090,1,0

OK~ cell me back when you fix my mod~ but please reply my mod post and used 2 color to reply it
Blue: you accept my mod item
Red: you deny my mod item and please reply the reason.

Let's Go~

mochi wrote:

ド―――(ﾟдﾟ)―――ン!ぺん

donpen wrote:

mochi wrote:

ド―――(ﾟдﾟ)―――ン!ぺん

絶対に流行らない

1. 02:08:090 (4) - Finish on slider's start (previously you have a finish on 01:02:757)
2. 02:58:423 (6,7,8) - Please move it to around ~x:138 y:227, due to stacking's nature currently it overlaps with (9) and it looks VERY weird in play mode orz ._.

Niva wrote:

[Insane]

1. 02:08:090 (4) - Finish on slider's start (previously you have a finish on 01:02:757) fixed
2. 02:58:423 (6,7,8) - Please move it to around ~x:138 y:227, due to stacking's nature currently it overlaps with (9) and it looks VERY weird in play mode orz ._.　　　　　　　fixed?

...plus for me Insane plays better in AR8 (up to you though, it's not a must to change this)　　　　　Sorry.... I don't want to change AR
Call me back after the fixes~