Leorda wrote:

Hi there!!


[Moon]
* Please full mapped this diff. It's boring to map it half

00:06:350 (8) - Stack under slider is confusing for beginners
00:18:350 (4) - ^
00:23:600 (1) - ^
00:47:600 (1) - Beginners is unable to read this object, since it overlapped by hitbursts
00:53:225 (3) - Stack under slider is confusing for beginners
01:01:850 (2,3) - ^


[Full Moon]
* Please full mapped this diff. It's boring to map it half

00:17:225 (4) - Shorten to red tick, if you don't change it, this slider has a bad rhythm
00:50:037 (3) - Add clap
00:52:662 (4) - Add clap at tail slider
00:55:662 (2) - ^
00:57:162 (6) - ^
00:59:037 (4) - Add clap
01:03:537 (8) - Add clap at head slider
01:04:662 (2) - Add clap at tail slider
01:09:537 (5) - Add clap
01:16:475 (2) - Remove one repeating slider, so players are able to click the next note with perfect timed


[Crazy Remix]
* Please add the clap where the snare are hit at music. Add clap between 00:49:100 ~ 01:13:100 and 02:01:100 ~ 02:25:100. I say this because there is a missing clap here....

00:11:975 (1) - This small spacing makes breaking the flow, maybe move further away?
00:42:162 (3,4,5,6,7) - These pattern doesn't looks like curve pattern...
01:16:100 (1) - Add finish at head slider
01:15:350 (6) - Move 1 grid down for making a curve pattern (Nazi)
01:24:350 (5) - 0,5x slider after short jump is makes breaking the flow
01:37:100 (6,1) - Swap new combo
01:39:912 (6) - New combo


Good luck~

1. 00:18:350 (4) - (nazi) not perfectly stacked with the end of 3, remove grid snap to adjust
2. 00:23:600 (1) - same situation here, not perfect stack with 4
3. 00:20:975 (1) - remove NC
4. 00:22:100 (3) - and then NC here, it will fit vocals better
5. 00:53:225 (3) - one grid up to line up with 2? o.o
6. 01:23:600 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note . you should start a new combo whenever the main part of the song begins
7. 02:16:850 (3) - make this the same shape as 02:16:100 (2) - ? optional thing xD
8. 02:37:100 (1) - add finish at beginning

1. 00:11:600 (1) - not perfect stack with 9
2. 00:24:162 - try adding a note here
3. 00:40:100 (9) - NC here and remove NC on next note
4. 01:03:912 (1) - remove NC, and NC on next note
5. 01:49:100 (9) - add finish
6. 02:18:912 (6) - ctrl+r might flow better
7. 03:01:100 (10) - how about deleting this note and extending 9 to the next white tick instead? more visible to me

1. 00:04:475 (5,6) - it would flow better if you replace these with a 1/2 slider like u did at 3 and 4 ><
   - If you followed the above suggestion then remove 00:04:756 (7) -
2. 00:09:725 (1) - remove NC here, and NC on 00:10:100 (4) -
3. 00:16:662 (2) - not perfect stack with 1
4. 00:19:006 (11) - NC here, and remove NC on next note
5. 00:37:100 (4) - add finish
6. 02:43:006 (8) - move this note on 02:42:912 - (the red tick) instead

meiikyuu wrote:

hi

please make sure kiai times are the same~ fixed

Moon

1. 00:18:350 (4) - (nazi) not perfectly stacked with the end of 3, remove grid snap to adjust fixed
2. 00:23:600 (1) - same situation here, not perfect stack with 4 fixed
3. 00:20:975 (1) - remove NC fixed
4. 00:22:100 (3) - and then NC here, it will fit vocals better fixed
5. 00:53:225 (3) - one grid up to line up with 2? o.o fixed
6. 01:23:600 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note . you should start a new combo whenever the main part of the song begins fixed
7. 02:16:850 (3) - make this the same shape as 02:16:100 (2) - ? optional thing xD NO~
8. 02:37:100 (1) - add finish at beginning

sounds good

Full Moon

1. 00:11:600 (1) - not perfect stack with 9 fixed
2. 00:24:162 - try adding a note here looks good
3. 00:40:100 (9) - NC here and remove NC on next note no
4. 01:03:912 (1) - remove NC, and NC on next note no
5. 01:49:100 (9) - add finish fixed
6. 02:18:912 (6) - ctrl+r might flow better no
7. 03:01:100 (10) - how about deleting this note and extending 9 to the next white tick instead? more visible to me

what you mean?

Crazy Remix

1. 00:04:475 (5,6) - it would flow better if you replace these with a 1/2 slider like u did at 3 and 4 ><
   - If you followed the above suggestion then remove 00:04:756 (7) - no
2. 00:09:725 (1) - remove NC here, and NC on 00:10:100 (4) - no
3. 00:16:662 (2) - not perfect stack with 1 fixed
4. 00:19:006 (11) - NC here, and remove NC on next note no
5. 00:37:100 (4) - add finish Nice
6. 02:43:006 (8) - move this note on 02:42:912 - (the red tick) instead

no

touhou <3 good luck

Origami_Munchkin wrote:

This is a M4M. I posted my map on your queue already.

Moon:
00:45:162 : Don't make this note a new combo. The new combo feels right to start at 00:45:725.
02:08:412 : Either move beat 2 to this position or change beat 3 into a slider that starts at this time and ends when the current beat 3 is. There is a pause in the music at this time and it is easier for a beginner if they pause when there is a break in the music.

Full Moon:
02:41:225 - 02:42:725 : Feels crowded like you ran out of room. If you could spread out the sliders a little bit it would be much better.

Crazy Remix:
Um... Wow... I can't even get close to playing this one and it makes it hard for me to mod it because I would end up making it easier...

I'm sorry this mod wasn't very long. It has be very refined and is very excellent already. There is not much I can say but WOW! GREAT JOB!

LKs wrote:

hi, my suggestions:


[General]

full moon got a different green line that lets the kiai ends on 02:37:381. move the line backwards to 02:37:193 to unify kiai-times among 3 diffs fixed

delete Thumbs file in SB folder i don't see the Thumbs..

[Crazy Remix]

personally prefer AR9 looks good

00:03:725 (3) - no whistle it's not whistle~!
00:45:350 (1) - maybe remove clap here and 00:45:912 (4) - here. four closely set claps sound not that good i think the hitsound very good for me
01:06:350 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - why not make them more neat to see? fixed http://puu.sh/Ze6C
01:15:350 (6) - 1 grid down fixed
01:19:006 (14) - it feels like a note is missing here, add one? fixed
02:41:600 (1,2,3,4,5) - pentagons like this could have more even spacing. use the create polygon tool to remap those pentagons　fixed
02:43:662 (2) - 1 grid left　fixed

you could try to make it harder during the crazy time, it fine now though

[Moon]

00:07:100 (2) - looks bad. try this way ok　 http://puu.sh/ZeaV
00:13:100 (2,3,4,5) - slider constructions like these will always encumber your map being outstanding. keep in mind that when making a slider you'd always have the end node placed at the centre of slider end, in which way it can assure your sliders potentially symmetrical ok http://puu.sh/ZecO
00:37:850 (1,2) - ^needs adjustment. won't spot more same issues in this post ok

in the end the diff spread. I don't see big issue but still recommend you to add a diff under 3 stars or between moon and full moon.