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このBGは曲との気配が似合ってますね!いい曲だー
General
- Offset: -2~3ms?
- Vocaloid2 for tags too?
Normal
00:57:123 - Unused timing section
00:57:295 - ^
00:58:330 - Not using claps for chorus? (02:07:295 - too)
01:08:674 - Feel like lacking of kiai fountains, try disable kiai here? (02:17:640 - too)
01:20:399 - Increase volume to 50%, it's sounds too powerless now.
02:06:088 - Unused timing section
02:06:261 - ^
00:55:571 (1) - How about adding a finish at slider's head?
00:57:123 - Unused timing section
00:57:295 - ^
00:58:330 - Not using claps for chorus? (02:07:295 - too)
01:08:674 - Feel like lacking of kiai fountains, try disable kiai here? (02:17:640 - too)
01:20:399 - Increase volume to 50%, it's sounds too powerless now.
02:06:088 - Unused timing section
02:06:261 - ^
00:55:571 (1) - How about adding a finish at slider's head?
wring's Hard
00:21:088 (4) - Clap for slider's hard?
00:28:502 (2,3,4,1) - Arrange these pattern with a better angle.
00:33:157 (1) - Missing a clap.
00:40:916 (6,7) - Keep 3/4 a definitude hitsounds on purpose (01:49:882 (6,7) - too)
00:43:674 (3,4) - Weird senses with crowded notes. Larger spacing for these two?
00:44:192 - Use 1/4 triples? (01:53:158 (1) - too)
01:07:985 (5) - Clap for slider's head.
01:19:709 (4) - ^
01:39:364 (6) - Better use soft hitsoud set with whistle?
01:40:830 (1) - Should at least start this on 1/4 beat forward
02:16:951 (5) - Clap for slider's head.
02:21:433 (2,3) - Nazi, Not symmetrical with 02:21:089 (1,4) -
- Pattern flows are meh, but overall it's a nice diff!
00:21:088 (4) - Clap for slider's hard?
00:28:502 (2,3,4,1) - Arrange these pattern with a better angle.
00:33:157 (1) - Missing a clap.
00:40:916 (6,7) - Keep 3/4 a definitude hitsounds on purpose (01:49:882 (6,7) - too)
00:43:674 (3,4) - Weird senses with crowded notes. Larger spacing for these two?
00:44:192 - Use 1/4 triples? (01:53:158 (1) - too)
SPOILER
01:03:157 (4,5,6) - Definitely off-beat'd, these triples should be started 01:02:985 - [/img]http://puu.sh/Dl4r[/img]
01:07:985 (5) - Clap for slider's head.
01:19:709 (4) - ^
01:39:364 (6) - Better use soft hitsoud set with whistle?
01:40:830 (1) - Should at least start this on 1/4 beat forward
02:16:951 (5) - Clap for slider's head.
02:21:433 (2,3) - Nazi, Not symmetrical with 02:21:089 (1,4) -
Insane
01:20:399 - Same spinner volume issue as Easy. Increase volume to 50%, it's sounds too powerless now.
01:31:778 - Move this section to 01:31:433 -
00:18:157 - Shouldn't it be whistle here?
00:54:192 (3) - Move this clap to 00:53:847 (1) -
00:55:226 (3) - Clap
00:55:916 (2) - Clap on slider's head
01:52:467 (1) - Clap
01:58:674 (1) - Clap on slider's head
02:01:433 (3) - Clap
02:02:813 (2) - ^
02:05:916 (1,1,1) - Rearranger to a triangle pattern
02:17:985 - Huh...actually drums starts here, it's enough obvious. Remove those streams on 02:16:950 - and place them right here.
- Random...hitsounds? At least keep your chorus part with clearly hitsoundings. It's now weird D:
01:20:399 - Same spinner volume issue as Easy. Increase volume to 50%, it's sounds too powerless now.
01:31:778 - Move this section to 01:31:433 -
00:18:157 - Shouldn't it be whistle here?
00:54:192 (3) - Move this clap to 00:53:847 (1) -
00:55:226 (3) - Clap
00:55:916 (2) - Clap on slider's head
01:52:467 (1) - Clap
01:58:674 (1) - Clap on slider's head
02:01:433 (3) - Clap
02:02:813 (2) - ^
02:05:916 (1,1,1) - Rearranger to a triangle pattern
02:17:985 - Huh...actually drums starts here, it's enough obvious. Remove those streams on 02:16:950 - and place them right here.
(;`・ω・´)ノ☆
このBGは曲との気配が似合ってますね!いい曲だー