Updated!
http://puu.sh/Pa6H

im a newb to modding, so if its not helpfull, sorry in advance ^^


thats what i noticed so far, mb it helped somehow =)
nice song anyway, gl with that ^^

I don't fix it. But thank you for mod, Nathien

Wait editing the guest diff. I will give kd, if they fixed it.

Random mod


[General]
* Please full submit, because I have 3 diff when I download this map


[Konei's Easy]
* The first kiai should end at 01:37:379

00:50:713 (1) - Move further away from previous slider for preventing of overlapping (Nazi)
01:38:713 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu. It makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)


[BeatofIke's Normal]
* There are 138 unsnapped note, please snap it


[Insane]
00:45:157 (2,3) - Add clap?
01:14:157 (4) - Move 1 grid up for fix the curve pattern



Good luck~

Fixed all...

Thank you for mod, Leorda

Snapping fixed! Thanks Leo!
http://puu.sh/PM4R
Updated!

Thank you for request \(^^)/

General

BeatofIke's Normal

Good song, i love nao's voice <33
Good luck ^^

=w= hey nich~


General:
Clear~


Konei's Easy:
OD +1 makes better play for this diff~

1. 00:06:259 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 1 grid to the right and 2 grids up~ o.o
2. 00:11:592 (1) - i dont really like this slider so maybe make it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:14:259 (2) - ^
4. 00:25:824 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the (1) .
5. 00:30:268 (3) - add a finish on the head of this slider~
6. 00:40:046 (3) - i think this straight slider is so boring :< maybe make it like this so it'll be more enjoyable to play~ btw dont forget to fix the spacing after that
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:45:824 (3) - this slider is not curved well so make it like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:48:046 (2) - fix the spacing on this slider, it's too close from the other one~
9. 00:50:713 (1) - remove this NC it's useless to me~
10. 00:59:157 (4,1) - make those slider curved :< it looks bad orz
11. 01:03:157 (3) - just like this 00:11:592 (1) -
12. 01:11:157 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 3 grids up o.o it looks much better now~

BeatofIke's Normal:
Maybe make the CS on 4 it'll be better for normal diff~

1. 00:18:259 (3,4,5) - I think a slider here feels better because the vocal voice went too high for notes orz~
2. 01:08:491 (3,4,5) - I think you like blanket sliders \:D/ so how about this?
   
   SPOILER

   

kajiyatta's Hard:
Nice diff~ OAO


Insane:
Nothing here too



Nice song and mapset star and good luck with ranking :3

http://puu.sh/QoPM

Thanks for mods~

Thank you for mod, kurohana

And thank you Sekai to mod and gave a star, too.

Updated the Easy diff~

UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/Qrc6

P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.

Updated my map~

BeatofIke wrote:

P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.

I think same that perhaps might ready to check by MAT ^^

So, I will try to MAT for mod.

hello, i picked this from #modreqs

[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - whistle on sliderbody isnt that great imo, can you remove them?
00:35:602 (1) - finish at the end
00:37:379 (3) - finish at the beginning
00:49:379 (5) - hmm for consistency with others add finish to the repeat of this slider?
00:56:713 (1) - since percussion is coming every white tick, you should follow it. add a repeat to this and move back by 1/2 beat.
00:57:602 (2) - ^
01:16:491 (2) - soft hitsound doesnt fit here, normal one is better
01:18:268 (1) - placing this note here doesnt make any sense imo, try to place it somewhere else to make good flow
01:20:046 (3) - i know you tried to follow clap on the whitetick.
but the clap isnt that strong to be followed and sounds odd to me, try to extend this slider by 1/2 beat and remove clap from the end
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the end


[BeatofIke's Normal]
00:19:592 (5) - i think this note needs different effect from others imo, finish would be great
00:37:824 (2) - clap doesnt fit very well here imo (as you can hear it's not in the music and sounds different) but i think this is ok for consistency
01:36:046 (3) - finish at the beginning sounds nice to me
01:43:157 (4) - since you didnt2 more repeating slider everywhere else, you shouldnt use it here imo
01:37:824 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kinda dislike these notes, they are too hard compared with the rest, but rhythm itself is boring
i'd suggest to remove (2) for better rhythm. remove 01:39:824 (2) - as well
01:44:935 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:50:268 (1) - finish doesnt fit the music imo, it's better to remove it

good diff, but kinda boring imo you can try to use more 1/2 rhythm in the middle of the song not only in the last of the song.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:27:379 (2) - clap at the end sounds nice imo
01:05:379 (2,2) - they can be stacked better i think :3
01:26:491 (5) - clap at the end
01:33:379 (3) - clap at the beginning because 01:26:379 (4) - has it
01:34:268 (1) - finish at the beginning
01:36:046 (1) - hmm maybe soft finish here?
01:40:491 (3) - same reason as the previous one, clap here
01:44:157 - feels empty here. maybe some hitsound arrangement would be great i guess (like what you did at 01:40:491 - )
01:52:379 (1,2) - this jump is too huge for hard diff imo


[Insane]
00:05:592 (5,6,1) - looks better if they are in a straight line like this
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/402478
00:24:935 (1) - hmm i think spacing is kinda close compared with others (0.8x) and doesnt looks that great. maybe you can place them like this so that they make nice blanket
http://puu.sh/Veyh
00:25:713 (2,3) - this jump is too big imo, and i dont think it fits the music very well. can you reduce it a bit?
00:26:046 (5) - add clap at the beginning? as you can see it's included in music.
00:27:157 (2) - sorry for nazi mod but looks better if you move this note to 1grid right to make spacing flat
http://puu.sh/VeC8
00:30:046 (7,1) - switch these newcombo for better looking?
00:33:157 (5) - sane as 00:26:046 (5) - , add clap at the beginning
00:39:046 (10,1) - wrong spacing in a stream, you can check the correct spacing by removing green line on 00:39:157 - once
00:41:824 (6) - add whistle at the beginning and remove it from the end for consistency with 00:45:379 (4) -
00:48:935 (3) - add whistle at the beginning
01:13:824 (1,2,4) - feels empty here, so it would be great to add some hitsound arrangement here, add claps for these notes?
01:21:379 (1) - first, reduce SV into 0.75x for better readability of the next slider
second, it's better to mute or reduce the volume of the end. if you listen to music carefully you'll know why :3
01:22:268 - the slider tick sound bothered me when i was modding this, i think you should mute it
01:26:379 (6) - clap sounds nice here
01:40:602 (6) - ^
01:47:713 (7) - ^

i think this map still needs some more works, but it has potential for bubble/rank i guess :3 good luck!

Fixed some...

Thank you for mod, Melophobia

Thanks for the mod.
I might need to re-map some parts since my patterns just keeps getting uglier due to excessive "change/add/remove pattern A to pattern B" type of mods or it's "too boring" If you suggesting me to make normal harder and trickier, I will do so. Let's just hope I just don't get too carried away and you guys complain that my normal is too hard for beginners.
I'll probably do that later. UPDATED!
http://puu.sh/VhIB

some fixed.
thanks for moddings~
updated http://puu.sh/VoQE

http://puu.sh/WdKb

Thank you Melo~

[General]

1. find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal

[Insane]

1. 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602?
2. 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1?

[Hard]

1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good
2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^
3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^
4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean.

[Normal]

1. lovely

[Easy]

1. 01:14:713 (1,2) - bad shape
2. 01:48:491 (1) - touched 01:46:713 (1), move out a bit plz

contact with me after the fixes.

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good fixed
2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^ ^
4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean. remaped

thanks for moddigs~
updated http://puu.sh/X4pX

http://puu.sh/X5Aa

Thank you very much Colin >.<~

Easy diff not included in newest .osz

I forgot it. Updated Easy diff...

Maybe nich didn't upload my diff correctly?

Updated by full submit...

Hope that may not have problems with my map ><

Don't worry, the download should work fine now >.<~

bubbled

Yay *-*

Thank you very much, Colin Hou

Congrats on your first bubble. I'll see if I can find a BAT for you.

GOGOGO, nich!!
I think that you should revive this http://osu.ppy.sh/s/43114 then. I can mod it if you do that , but first rank this!!!

Go Go rank !! ต้นสู้ๆ >.< first rank เลยทีเดียวถ้า rank w

[Insane]
-- Definitely raise the OD to 7. OD6 is too low for the actual difficulty of the map.
01:05:824 (5,1) - It'd make more sense to the music if you removed the new combo at one and put it on (5) instead because (5) is when the music transitions
01:21:824 (1) - This speedup totally fits the music; however, consider changing the SV to 0.75 instead to make the slowdown less dramatic. There are going to be players who slider break because of the unexpected SV change.

[kajiyatta's Hard]
00:38:046 (2) - Consider reducing the spacing between (1) and (2) -- it's a pretty harsh jump considering that this is a hard.
01:51:157 (3,1,2) - This part is pretty hard to read because of the 3/4ths spacing between notes. To make it more readable, remove the repeat from (3) and add a 3/4ths beat slider starting at 01:52:046. If you want, you can also add a hit circle at 01:51:824 once you've made the changes to keep the beat/movement going.

[BeatofIke's Normal]
-- AR5 seems a little fast considering the pace of this map. I'd go with AR4 but that's up to you.
00:56:046 (1,2) - Add the new combo on (2) instead to follow the music

[Konei's Easy]
00:11:592 (1,2) - The paths of these sliders aren't exactly smooth/straight forward. It's not a real problem because of the slow slider velocity, but maybe you should consider cleaning them up a bit.
01:20:046 (3) - Extend this slider to where the spinner begins instead -- it follows the music better. After that, move the spinner to 01:21:379 and don't forget to shorten it.

call me back for a recheck and tell me if you made any extra changes unrelated to the mod whenever you're done~

http://puu.sh/YWRc

Let's get this ranked, nich~

Fixed all...

Wait for editing of BeatofIke and kajiyatta. Then I will call you to recheck.

Updated Easy diff and Insane diff.

thanks for modding~
all fixed. http://puu.sh/YYtx

เตรียมตัวรอเลยต้น !

UPDATED! Go for rank!
http://puu.sh/ZjTA

GO GO GO!!!

Okay, updated Normal diff

I'm ready to call for recheck.

Looks good now. Ranked!

Posting in a Ranked Map on Pending Subforum

Gratz.

Thank you very much

lol I accidentally ranked it twice

gratz

Gratz :3!

yay for first x)

Congrats for the first map !!

Congrats ~ >w<

well~ congratz on your 1st ranked map

Thank you everyone ^^

Congrats on your first rank.

congratz!

KYAA KYAAA GRATSSS .w<

congratz on first rank.

Finally , Congratz on first ranked !
ในที่สุดก็ทำได้เเล้วนะคู่หู >w<

Gratz nich on your first rank >w<

congrats ~

congratz!

Thank you everyone

ยินดีด้วย แมพแรก !!!

Late grats on first rank!

this song brings back memories