1. 00:06:259 (1,2) - make these 2 sliders the same shape? they look kind of random right now because the combos around them seem to be same shapes to each other but its up to u xD
2. 00:25:380 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view for a sec and move this note to x:172 y:172 (so it is in the middle of 1 and 3)
3. 00:36:935 (2) - switch to 4-grid level view again and move one grid to the left for even spacing between 1 and 3
4. 00:48:046 (2) - its on the verge of touching 1 so..move down a bit? while keeping distance snap
5. 00:50:713 (1) - same situation as above, move away a little to avoid touching 3?
6. 01:14:713 (1) - add finish at the beginning like u did for 2
7. 01:14:713 (1) - add note
8. 01:50:268 (1) - pls extend the slider to 01:52:713 - , it'll make more sense

1. 00:56:066 (1) - remove NC here and NC on the next note pls, because new vocal line starts on that next note
2. 01:14:733 (1) - add finish at beginning
3. 01:49:844 (4) - make 1/2 slider instead? xD

1. 00:11:592 (2) - blanket around 1 is not perfect, so i tried to fix the slider for u ^^ heres code if u want
   

   32,224,11592,2,0,B|48:256|92:288|144:256|164:224,1,160,4|10

2. 00:39:379 - i think a note should be here because u can obviously hear the voice start here.. xD
3. 01:01:844 (5,6) - highlight these 2 notes and move 1 grid down, then adjust 01:02:288 (1) - a little to fix spacing
4. 01:05:399 (2) - the end of this is not stacking perfectly with the end of 01:06:288 (2) - , not too big of a deal though

1. 00:01:926 (2,3,4) - i feel like these triplets should be a little more spaced out? ><
2. 00:39:157 (1,3,4,6) - i think it would also sound nice if you add a whistle to the end of these 4 sliders ^^
   edit: 00:42:713 (1,3) - same here xD whistles at end
   If you follow the whistle suggestions above, you can probably add some more to the rest of the soft part up to 00:51:602 - to keep hitsounds consistent~
3. 01:02:491 - add note
4. 01:27:046 (2) - move to x:408 y: 316?

General

BeatofIke's Normal

00:08:259 (2) - move down

1. 00:06:259 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 1 grid to the right and 2 grids up~ o.o
2. 00:11:592 (1) - i dont really like this slider so maybe make it like this?
   
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3. 00:14:259 (2) - ^
4. 00:25:824 (3) - move this 1 grid up so it'll lined with the (1) .
5. 00:30:268 (3) - add a finish on the head of this slider~
6. 00:40:046 (3) - i think this straight slider is so boring :< maybe make it like this so it'll be more enjoyable to play~ btw dont forget to fix the spacing after that
   
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7. 00:45:824 (3) - this slider is not curved well so make it like this?
   
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8. 00:48:046 (2) - fix the spacing on this slider, it's too close from the other one~
9. 00:50:713 (1) - remove this NC it's useless to me~
10. 00:59:157 (4,1) - make those slider curved :< it looks bad orz
11. 01:03:157 (3) - just like this 00:11:592 (1) -
12. 01:11:157 (1) - move the 3rd slider point 3 grids up o.o it looks much better now~

1. 00:18:259 (3,4,5) - I think a slider here feels better because the vocal voice went too high for notes orz~
2. 01:08:491 (3,4,5) - I think you like blanket sliders \:D/ so how about this?
   
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BeatofIke wrote:

P.S: I think this map looks ready for MAT now. Try asking a few MATs for a mod.

1. find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal

1. 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602?
2. 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1?

1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good
2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^
3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^
4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean.

1. lovely

1. 01:14:713 (1,2) - bad shape
2. 01:48:491 (1) - touched 01:46:713 (1), move out a bit plz

Colin Hou wrote:

[Hard]

1. 00:11:592 (2) - shape not good fixed
2. 00:58:713 (1) - ^ ^
3. 00:59:602 (3) - ^ ^
4. overlaps happened in the 135 slow sections looks bad, increase the distance snapping might help. 00:39:602 ~ 00:53:379 i mean. remaped

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]

1. find a consistent ending point for spinners like 01:50:268 (1) in easy? don't forget the KIAI ending section for normal Fixed spinner in Easy diff, and Move KIAI ending in Normal diff.

[Insane]

1. 01:03:157 (4) - 1/4 shorter and 1 note at 01:03:602? Okay, fixed.
2. 01:49:379 (4,5,6,7) - make the spacing increasing 1 by 1? Fixed as well.

contact with me after the fixes.