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MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)

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Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
LS三個約好的?
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
bakabaka

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via PM
可能mod慢一點所以有些被提過了o.o☆

[Normal]

  1. fine其實是懶得看

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:06:739 (3) - 建議節奏
    SPOILER
  2. 00:11:614 (1) - 開頭+whistle
  3. 00:17:989 (6) - NC
  4. 00:29:801 (1,1,1) - 試著排成這樣?
    SPOILER
  5. 00:31:676 (5) - NC
  6. 00:35:614 (2) - 變速不NC嗎?o.o
  7. 00:39:551 (3) - 1 grid down(level 4
  8. 00:47:239 (1) - remove clap
  9. 00:47:614 (1) - +clap
  10. 00:48:551 (4) - NC
  11. 00:51:739 (6) - NC
All fixed ;D


bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ 我來惹~ wtf!
　　
[ General]
　
  1. 強烈建議加一個Normal 現在的Normal太難了
  2. 感覺唱歌的人不只一個 可以把唱歌的人的名字都加到tags裡 不然現在好少 而且加了也可以增加這歌曲貝搜尋到的機會
  3. 其實difficulty的's不要用'S比較好 是因為動畫有什麼跟"S"有關的嗎? 沒有的話建議改成小寫s
tags之後加,其他想維持原狀呢 :<
　
[ Normal]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:10:864 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to consistent with other patterns , although there is little break here 00:10:864 ~ 00:11:614
    2. 00:16:864 (1,2,3) - I prefer to move these notes like this move (3) to slider 00:15:739 (3) - 's end , then make them to a triangle , Better flow in my option
      Picture
    3. 00:18:739 (5,1) - If I was the mapper , I would prefer to make them to a repeat-slider :3
    4. 00:28:864 (5) - Hmm... Maybe a New Combo here? sense this combo pattern is a little long for now
    5. 00:44:989 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a circle with New Combo 00:46:489 - ? The rhythm will become this :
      Picture
    6. 00:50:614 (1) - I really really don't like kiai time start during slider moving , I think you can remove a repeat and move forward 1/1 beat , then Ctrl+R to fix the spacing problem , oh , if you don't like it , try to add a circle 00:50:614 - , same rhythm but different arrangement
    7. 00:56:614 (5) - New Combo here? Previous pattern set New Combo to Follow the vocal , I think it is the best way to follow vocal like previous pattern
    8. 00:58:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combos to make patterns have the same length
    9. 01:08:614 (5) - New Combo , Same reason as above
    10. 01:10:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combo again
    11. 01:14:989 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders looks very novel , This arrangement is very ok , but I prefer to get a nice flow , I would to change them to some submissive sliders , but it's up to you :3
    12. 01:18:364 - Add a circle here? , music became louder but rhythm become easier , so add a circle here is better than a short break
    13. 01:19:114 - Same as above , music still loud here
    14. 01:24:364 - Same ~
    15. 01:25:114 - Same too :3
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:27:739 (4) - Clap on the arrow isn't fits the music well , I prefer to remove it
    2. 01:06:364 (2) - Whistle on this slider's head sounds strange for me ... Hmm... Maybe just for me though :3
    3. 01:26:614 (8) - Whistle sounds not loud enough , try to add a clap too? clap fits the music well actually
　All fixed :3

[ Lunatic]
　
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
    　
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:06:739 (3) - I really don't like this shape , looks so messy to me try this ? better in my eyes :3
      Picture
      320,348,6739,2,0,B|252:360|184:292|216:208|288:192|336:236|300:300,1,260
      換了節奏跟形狀了 :P
    2. 00:17:989 (6) - A huge jump here , so add a awesome New Combo is needed IMO
      OK~
    3. 00:59:051 (5,1) - This jump is too huge , plz reduce it a bit
      大丈夫的 lol....
    4. 01:26:239 (1,2) - Move to center....
      OK~
    5. I really can't mod Amazing in fact... sorry about that Q_Q
    很好了/w\
    　
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. Amazing!!!
　
　　--------------------------------------------------------
我一不注意就全部用英文惹... 希望別介意...
這歌真的好聽 加油了!!!~
Good Luck :3


spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. lead-in好像有點太短了 全部調成750ms吧
  2. 影片的offset需要check一下 因為有些地方看起來準 但是過場的地方看起來又好像不太準 所以需要check
把影片關掉了沒注意到...

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  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:53:989
    00:54:176
    00:54:739
    00:54:926
    01:10:114

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:989 (1,2) - move to x296 y216? 讓這個note在slider內緣中心
  2. 00:35:989 (3,4,5,6) - 何不放個正方形呢? 目前這樣是歪的 ((由spacing可以知道這個確實是歪的
  3. 00:51:739 (2,3) - 你可以讓這個pattern的弧度對整齊 這樣會好看些
    ((圖形那些之前IRC講過了
All fixed :3


Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:23:989
    01:01:489
    01:03:176
    01:18:551
    01:19:489
    01:23:989
All fixed :3

我想吐嘈這星數根本不科學 Insane比Lunatic星數高
哼哼~我善良吧 ;3

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感覺聲音應該漸小會比較好~
其實感覺還好耶~

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 一開始這樣下說實話真的有些難辨認 如果一開始是有reverse的話會好read些...
    先暫時不改
  2. 00:05:989 - 建議用x0.5速度會比較有音樂的氣氛 那個yo~~~的聲音
    OK~
  3. 00:06:739 (3) - 如果上面改了這個就用x1.0吧
    原本就是1.0 lol ~改了形狀
  4. 00:08:989 (6,2) - stack?
    OK~
  5. 00:11:145 - 加個音 感覺會讓音樂更流暢些
    保持原狀好排版:3
  6. 00:53:239 (1,2,3,4) - 這個節奏2連說實話感覺不出適合音樂~感覺比較像單純想放這個節奏的感覺
    確實是 lol...
  7. 00:56:239 (6) - NC? 這個地方slider返回數有變化 但是slider長度太短所以難以分辨 加個NC會讓人了解這地方是有變化的
    OK~
  8. 01:16:864 (4,2) - stack 如果改了01:18:364 (2,2) - 別忘了這也要對齊
    這邊對齊有點麻煩~保持原狀;D


Done~GL

謝謝 膜姐 , 剝思思 , 盒子 的MOD \:DD/
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
bakabaka :3

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00:18:739(2,1)- =.=我觉得2的朝向是往右的 所以(1)放在右边会比较顺 不过这是normal就无所谓了 不过我觉得2向左弯会更好
00:19:489(1,2)-(1)可以换成和(2)一样的slider (2)的话我觉得可以不要加折返 因为歌词正好结束咯
00:20:989(3)-加个像(2)一样的slider


其他2个gd不错 luna太鬼畜不会mod X<

:)
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry
>< 基本都改了 谢谢mod~
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 750
PreviewTime: 50520
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2239,44989
DistanceSpacing: 0.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Creator:bakabaka
Version:Straw's Hard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:strawberry rucker momoiro clover z momoclo takagi reni momota kanako ariyasu momoka kamai shiori sasaki ayaka

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//Break Periods
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bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
bakabaka

BakaHuang wrote:

bakabaka :3

Normal

00:18:739(2,1)- =.=我觉得2的朝向是往右的 所以(1)放在右边会比较顺 不过这是normal就无所谓了 不过我觉得2向左弯会更好
00:19:489(1,2)-(1)可以换成和(2)一样的slider (2)的话我觉得可以不要加折返 因为歌词正好结束咯
00:20:989(3)-加个像(2)一样的slider


其他2个gd不错 luna太鬼畜不会mod X<

:)
謝謝阿黃 \:3/
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


Rucker's Insane

  1. 00:17:989 (3) - 这里加个绿线, 音量25%-30%, 然后结尾的地方加绿线100%, 不然有点吵 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410881
  2. 00:19:114 (4) - 75%速度 3/4? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410883
  3. 00:32:239 (3) - 这个感觉3/4好点o.o
  4. 00:32:989 (5,6) - hao dan teng...
  5. 00:36:364 (1) - 删new combo吧没这个必要..
  6. 00:59:801 (2) - 这个放在滑条头比较科学吧o.o ...
  7. 00:59:989 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么能这样, 前面都那么overmap了这里kiai还不放满么233
  8. 01:09:176 - 可以加两个 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410890
  9. 01:18:739 (1,2,3,4) - 不给力啊 x1.5倍间距比较好
  10. 另外还有就是像01:25:114 (1,2) 这种样子的滑条, 柔和一点比较好看, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410898
  11. 话说路克好善良 我都能FC了233
Straw's Hard

  1. 00:02:239 (3) - 60% volume?
  2. 00:03:739 (5) - 尾上的whistle换clap
  3. 00:12:364 (2) - blanket wwwwww
  4. 00:15:364 (2) - 往上两格
  5. 00:57:364 (1,2,3,4) - ._.这个.. 不太好吧 要不然叠到(4)上
  6. 01:26:520 (8) - ._.放circle 总断尾啊
  7. 01:24:364 (2) - 这样放 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410902
Lunatic

  1. 怎么这么鬼畜..
  2. 00:09:966 - 这一段new combo太多感觉有点乱啊o.o suigemazu一句4个note一个combo就行吧 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410908
  3. 00:27:270 - 可以加个note啊.. 叠(2)上面
  4. 00:54:739 - 这样。。? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410932
  5. 00:56:239 (1) - 隔一个放一个clap o.o吧
  6. 01:02:426 (1,2) - o.o感觉好诡异的梗
  7. 01:06:364 (2) - 加reverse
  8. 01:08:426 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - zhe ge hao
Normal

  1. 感觉变速有点.. normal难度可以这么放么o.o ...
  2. 00:02:614 (2) - 可以去掉的..
  3. 00:09:364 (2) - x:456 y:260 blanket
  4. 00:10:864 (1) - (84,300) ..或者空的地方可以1/1 slider+reverse +circle补上
  5. 00:46:864 (3) - 也可以去掉..
  6. 01:07:489 (4) - blanket o.o
  7. 略乱.. 最低难度的话, 间距可以小一点... 然后绿线是怎么回事..
话说为什么叫lunatic, 这不科学啊又不是th, 改成extra吧 或者another ReMiX也行啊 也比较适合这个难度...

Good luck~
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
bakabaka

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Lunatic

  1. 怎么这么鬼畜..
  2. 00:09:966 - 这一段new combo太多感觉有点乱啊o.o suigemazu一句4个note一个combo就行吧 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410908
    OK :3
  3. 00:27:270 - 可以加个note啊.. 叠(2)上面
  4. 00:54:739 - 这样。。? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410932
  5. 00:56:239 (1) - 隔一个放一个clap o.o吧
    改成1/2放一個 :P
  6. 01:02:426 (1,2) - o.o感觉好诡异的梗
    O.O
  7. 01:06:364 (2) - 加reverse
  8. 01:08:426 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - zhe ge hao
Normal

  1. 感觉变速有点.. normal难度可以这么放么o.o ...
  2. 00:02:614 (2) - 可以去掉的..
  3. 00:09:364 (2) - x:456 y:260 blanket
  4. 00:10:864 (1) - (84,300) ..或者空的地方可以1/1 slider+reverse +circle补上
  5. 00:46:864 (3) - 也可以去掉..
  6. 01:07:489 (4) - blanket o.o
  7. 略乱.. 最低难度的话, 间距可以小一点... 然后绿线是怎么回事..
有調一下形狀跟排版了~綠線是為了tick /.\

话说为什么叫lunatic, 这不科学啊又不是th, 改成extra吧 或者another ReMiX也行啊 也比较适合这个难度...


Good luck~
謝謝 CSGA 的MOD ;3
fanzhen0019
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,723 posts
Joined July 2010
fanzhen0019
好鬼畜
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Straw's Hard

  1. 00:02:239 (3) - 60% volume? done
  2. 00:03:739 (5) - 尾上的whistle换clap done
  3. 00:12:364 (2) - blanket wwwwww done
  4. 00:15:364 (2) - 往上两格 done
  5. 00:57:364 (1,2,3,4) - ._.这个.. 不太好吧 要不然叠到(4)上 因为想燃一点。。虽然是hard但是觉得这个还是在范围之内。。
  6. 01:26:520 (8) - ._.放circle 总断尾啊 done
  7. 01:24:364 (2) - 这样放 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410902 done
thanks
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NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
Consider add an Easy plz... current Normal is a bit too hard to be the easiest diff.
offset:+6
Try to use 4 combo colors? I think it may be useful in some situations (like Rucker's Insane 00:23:989 (1,1,1,1) - )
Rename Rucker's Insane to Hard+ and Lunatic to Insane...? see Lunatic in a non-Touhou beatmap is really weird.

[Normal]
01:02:239 (4) - Consider this beat..? http://puu.sh/Ykno (I think you probably need an Easy so don't take difficulty into account)
01:07:489 (4) - I prefer 3 notes here... the lyric is not that fast/consistent as 00:55:489 (4) -

[Straw's Hard]
00:03:364 (3) - remove?
00:13:957 (4) - start 1/4 later. the current one just sounds not right...
00:16:489 (5) - 我有点为难，你懂。
00:25:582 (1,1) - a bit waste of those beats..
00:31:582 (1,1) - ^
00:35:801 (6) - prefer to remove this... or make 5 a 1/2 slider would also be better imo.
00:43:114 (1,2) - you use a single combo 00:40:114 (1) - here to stress the lyric, but nothing special here...? (expect for a small jump myself, if the combo is too hard, maybe make 2 a 1/2 slider would help)
00:57:364 (1) - In fact, i think 2 sliders here may fit better than this jump. I can know this idea, but the way to do it seems split the lyric into a "back-forth", not two words.
01:17:989 (1) - spacing is too close...

[Rucker's Insane]
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - add whistle to reverse+end? also i think the volume could be made lower...
00:08:989 (1) - such 1/4s kinda breaks the song imo... the song is more jumpy, not 1/4s moving in a low pace... This kind happens a lot in this diff and i don't really like... (hope it's just me)
00:40:301 (2) - remove
00:57:457 (2,2) - remove. I think as the lyric is very clear 1/2 here (and strong enough), the 1/4 seems too extra.
01:02:614 (8) - stack with next (1), also switch new combo.

[Lunatic]
00:04:114 (6) - flow..?
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - it's a series of 1/3s... using such sliders makes the clicks on the irregular place, i prefer you to put it in a more common way...
00:49:207 (2,3) - ..emm what's this for...?
Honestly i think this is made too hard... which isn't really needed.
Strawberry
osu! Alumni
1,536 posts
Joined October 2010
Strawberry

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Straw's Hard]
00:03:364 (3) - remove? done.
00:13:957 (4) - start 1/4 later. the current one just sounds not right... 恩 换梗;_;
00:16:489 (5) - 我有点为难，你懂。换了个形状TAT 这回没有叠到了 后面的那个同样形状的也改了
00:25:582 (1,1) - a bit waste of those beats.. 这里我感觉spin的话还蛮好
00:31:582 (1,1) - ^
00:35:801 (6) - prefer to remove this... or make 5 a 1/2 slider would also be better imo. 恩 换成一个1/2 slider:3
00:43:114 (1,2) - you use a single combo 00:40:114 (1) - here to stress the lyric, but nothing special here...? (expect for a small jump myself, if the combo is too hard, maybe make 2 a 1/2 slider would help) NC了
00:57:364 (1) - In fact, i think 2 sliders here may fit better than this jump. I can know this idea, but the way to do it seems split the lyric into a "back-forth", not two words. 恩 改了:3
01:17:989 (1) - spacing is too close... 改了~
:) 基本都改惹>< 谢mod!!
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bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
bakabaka

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Consider add an Easy plz... current Normal is a bit too hard to be the easiest diff.
OK finished!
offset:+6
all fix
Try to use 4 combo colors? I think it may be useful in some situations (like Rucker's Insane 00:23:989 (1,1,1,1) - )
added :P
Rename Rucker's Insane to Hard+ and Lunatic to Insane...? see Lunatic in a non-Touhou beatmap is really weird.
ok

[Normal]
01:02:239 (4) - Consider this beat..? http://puu.sh/Ykno (I think you probably need an Easy so don't take difficulty into account)
還是保持原狀好了..
01:07:489 (4) - I prefer 3 notes here... the lyric is not that fast/consistent as 00:55:489 (4) -
OK~

[Lunatic]
00:04:114 (6) - flow..?
fix ;3
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - it's a series of 1/3s... using such sliders makes the clicks on the irregular place, i prefer you to put it in a more common way...
換了個排法
00:49:207 (2,3) - ..emm what's this for...?
Honestly i think this is made too hard... which isn't really needed.
OK~fix
謝謝NTR的mod ';DD
等待小路的diff :3
bakabaka
517 posts
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Topic Starter
bakabaka
OK~All fixed ;3
Uploaded :)
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Bubbled.
bossandy
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bossandy
7天... 跪惹
bakabaka
517 posts
Joined March 2010
Topic Starter
bakabaka

NatsumeRin wrote:

Bubbled.
感謝Rin君 :)
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
好鬼畜的I难度 ~ ;w;

祝rank ~
bakabaka
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bakabaka
\>~</
qoot8123
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qoot8123
請問有需要太鼓GD嗎><?
bakabaka
517 posts
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bakabaka

qoot8123 wrote:

請問有需要太鼓GD嗎><?
已經不需要了唷,抱歉捏 > <"
Garven
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5,857 posts
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Garven
Just a couple things I noticed from a quick test play

Tick rate 2 fits the song best

[Insane]
00:04:870 (2) - hidden repeat
01:02:057 (4) - hidden repeat
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
As Garven said i'm free to repair this bubble... Here it is.
bakabaka
517 posts
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bakabaka
Garven、NTR. Thanks ；w；
Komeiji Yuki
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Komeiji Yuki
wocao 神速泡:3

精神上支持（？
bakabaka
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:3
Verdisphena
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Verdisphena
NIOHOHO
ccbp
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ccbp
tamai instead of kamai in tags
SapphireGhost
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SapphireGhost
Modding time!

[General]
- On Straw's Hard, I'd end the last kiai at 01:26:713 for consistency, even though it's a small change.
- "+" difficulty names aren't used much anymore, so I'd rename Rucker's Hard+ to Rucker's Insane and then change Insane to Extra or something else.
- Make sure to check this:

ccbp wrote:

tamai instead of kamai in tags
[Insane]
- HP Drain -1 or 2, please, it's very hard to play for HP Drain 8.

[Straw's Hard]
00:25:495 (3) - A bit more readable to do it like this.

[Normal]
00:50:995 (2) - New combo for the start of the new measure.

[Easy]
00:35:245 (1) - This note is missing a new combo, and it makes sense to add one. I'd also add a new combo to the note after it for the new measure.
00:50:620 (1) - ^
01:14:620 (4) - Much better to line it up with the end of the previous (4).

Most of it is fine! Just let me know after fixes.
Strawberry
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Strawberry
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 750
PreviewTime: 50520
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2239,44989
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Creator:bakabaka
Version:Straw's Hard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:strawberry rucker momoiro clover z momoclo takagi reni momota kanako ariyasu momoka kamai shiori sasaki ayaka

[Difficulty]
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OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
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464,380,23995,5,0
400,312,24182,1,8
424,224,24370,2,0,B|456:188|448:124,1,90,0|8
328,80,24745,6,0,B|252:80|192:32,1,135,0|8
188,32,25120,2,0,B|123:97,1,90,8|8
60,160,25495,1,4
256,192,25588,12,12,26995
256,192,27088,12,2,28120
192,116,28495,6,0,B|104:116,1,90
56,196,28870,2,0,B|144:196,1,90,2|0
236,196,29245,1,0
192,116,29432,2,0,B|164:72|192:28,1,90,0|10
268,76,29807,2,0,B|292:32|352:36,1,90,0|8
472,64,30182,2,0,B|448:108|388:104,1,90,0|2
504,184,30557,2,0,B|448:224|372:220,1,135
364,220,30932,2,0,B|351:171|311:143,1,90,2|8
276,224,31307,2,0,B|200:276,1,90,8|12
256,192,31588,12,12,32995
256,192,33088,12,2,34120
168,192,34495,5,8
344,192,34870,1,8
252,348,35245,1,8
300,272,35432,1,8
256,196,35620,2,0,B|216:224|212:272,1,90,8|2
300,272,35995,5,2
344,192,36182,1,0
256,196,36370,1,2
168,192,36557,1,0
212,272,36745,2,0,B|268:228|256:152,1,135,10|0
248,140,37120,2,0,B|285:73|365:85,1,135,12|0
360,84,37495,1,4
308,296,37870,6,0,B|264:288|216:309,1,90,2|0
132,312,38245,2,0,B|80:256|88:180,1,135,0|0
88,176,38620,2,0,B|65:136|13:124,1,90,2|0
184,68,39182,1,0
256,124,39370,1,2
340,92,39557,1,0
412,148,39745,1,0
412,148,40120,5,4
268,256,40495,6,0,B|232:288|180:292,1,90
192,200,40870,2,0,B|144:209|97:187,1,90,2|0
160,120,41245,1,0
248,96,41432,2,0,B|316:128|308:208,1,135,0|8
308,220,41807,2,0,B|356:242|408:230,1,90
480,188,42182,1,0
412,128,42370,1,2
488,80,42557,1,0
416,28,42745,1,2
352,192,43120,5,2
352,192,43307,1,4
416,252,43495,5,0
332,284,43682,1,0
404,344,43870,1,0
332,284,44057,2,0,B|256:260|196:296,1,135
188,300,44432,2,0,B|147:275|135:223,2,90,0|2|0
228,224,44995,5,0
172,152,45182,1,0
80,156,45370,1,0
172,152,45557,2,0,B|240:124|272:56,1,135
276,52,45932,2,0,B|328:54|360:86,2,90,0|2|0
284,152,46495,5,2
356,204,46682,1,0
328,288,46870,1,0
240,288,47057,1,0
212,204,47245,2,0,B|172:140|96:140,1,135,0|0
92,128,47620,2,0,B|69:172|21:188,1,90
100,260,47995,2,0,B|144:284|156:328,1,90,0|0
244,340,48370,1,0
332,348,48557,1,0
256,192,48651,12,0,49495
256,192,50620,5,0
256,192,50807,1,0
180,144,50995,2,0,B|156:192|180:240,1,90,4|2
256,192,51370,1,0
256,192,51557,1,10
332,240,51745,2,0,B|356:192|332:144,1,90,0|2
256,192,52120,2,0,B|256:96,1,90,0|10
256,192,52495,6,0,B|188:224|172:296,1,135,0|2
164,304,52870,2,0,B|124:328|80:304,1,90,2|2
124,216,53245,2,0,B|124:124,1,90,8|10
56,68,53620,2,0,B|120:144|216:152,1,180,2|0
390,148,54182,6,0,B|300:148,1,90,2|2
344,228,54557,1,2
390,148,54745,2,0,B|416:80|390:16,1,135,0|8
380,24,55120,2,2,B|350:56|294:68,1,90,8|2
212,60,55495,6,0,B|168:56|120:64,1,90,4|0
172,144,55870,2,0,B|131:162|94:193,1,90,6|0
172,240,56245,2,0,B|260:212|352:204,1,180,4|2
440,196,56807,1,2
480,116,56995,1,0
400,284,57370,6,0,B|488:324,1,90,4|8
388,120,57745,2,0,B|300:80,1,90,4|8
348,204,58120,2,0,B|296:216|252:184,1,90,2|8
200,124,58495,2,0,B|124:140|88:196,1,135,6|8
80,204,58870,2,0,B|103:250|95:298,1,90,8|10
96,380,59245,1,8
96,380,59620,5,8
164,316,59807,1,2
252,292,59995,2,0,B|296:276|336:240,1,90,4|2
256,192,60370,2,0,B|286:156|299:113,1,90,0|2
208,112,60745,2,0,B|144:144|64:140,1,135,4|2
64,144,61120,2,0,B|35:180|15:224,1,90,8|2
12,312,61495,5,0
132,268,61682,1,2
252,292,61870,1,0
352,368,62057,1,2
352,368,62151,1,2
352,368,62245,2,0,B|404:368|436:332,1,90,0|2
344,248,62620,1,0
439,194,62807,1,2
348,132,62995,6,0,B|360:88|348:40,1,90,4|2
272,88,63370,2,0,B|260:43|226:8,1,90,0|2
176,84,63745,2,0,B|180:160|152:224,1,135,0|8
144,224,64120,2,0,B|97:232|61:276,1,90,8|2
148,312,64495,6,0,B|220:316|276:372,1,135,0|8
284,368,64870,2,0,B|331:360|367:316,1,90,8|2
412,248,65245,1,0
360,176,65432,1,2
156,64,65620,5,2
212,136,65807,1,0
296,100,65995,2,0,B|340:72|388:76|424:112,1,135,0|8
432,116,66370,2,0,B|476:116|512:72,1,90,8|2
432,28,66745,2,0,B|484:100|504:196,1,180,0|8
492,280,67307,1,2
412,240,67495,2,0,B|388:180|324:184|324:184|364:88,2,180,8|4|8
328,268,68432,5,0
244,236,68620,2,0,B|212:196|220:148,1,90
140,108,68995,2,0,B|116:200|164:284,1,180,4|2
224,364,69557,1,0
316,368,69745,1,4
68,264,70120,5,0
162,282,70307,1,2
252,248,70495,2,0,B|312:208|328:136,1,135,8|8
332,128,70870,2,0,B|373:101|429:109,1,90,8|2
392,196,71245,2,0,B|412:288,1,90,0|2
352,352,71620,2,0,B|332:264,1,90,2|0
304,180,71995,5,0
240,244,72182,1,2
332,264,72370,2,0,B|404:232|412:160,1,135,8|8
404,152,72745,2,0,B|349:81,1,90,8|2
304,180,73120,2,0,B|244:104,1,90,0|2
196,36,73495,1,0
256,192,73588,12,4,74620
56,140,74995,5,4
96,240,75182,1,4
192,292,75370,1,4
332,128,75745,2,0,B|376:116|412:80,2,90,0|2|2
456,140,76495,5,4
416,240,76682,1,4
320,292,76870,1,4
180,128,77245,2,0,B|136:116|100:80,2,90,0|2|2
332,28,77995,6,0,B|272:64|196:32,1,135,12|8
196,48,78370,2,0,B|148:44|118:83,1,90,8|2
32,108,78745,1,0
56,196,78932,1,2
128,252,79120,1,0
148,340,79307,1,2
60,324,79495,2,0,B|144:288|244:284,2,180,4|4|4
148,340,80432,1,2
128,252,80620,1,2
288,168,80995,5,4
344,260,81182,1,4
452,260,81370,1,4
440,92,81745,2,0,B|396:172,1,90,0|2
344,260,82120,1,4
180,148,82495,5,4
77,181,82682,1,4
53,287,82870,1,4
231,299,83245,2,0,B|157:245,1,90,0|2
77,181,83620,1,4
180,148,83995,6,0,B|236:96|312:116,1,135,12|8
308,124,84370,2,0,B|308:192|360:240|440:256,1,180,8|2
404,144,84932,2,0,B|340:236,1,90,2|0
289,289,85307,1,2
212,336,85495,2,0,B|192:288|212:248,1,90,4|8
292,200,85870,2,0,B|288:300,1,90,12|0
368,336,86245,2,0,B|388:296|368:248,1,90,4|0
388,236,86526,1,8
412,232,86620,1,4
all fixed. thank you SG~~
bakabaka
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bakabaka

ccbp wrote:

tamai instead of kamai in tags
sorry,i didn't notice that > <
fixed ~thank you :3/

SapphireGhost wrote:

Modding time!

[General]
- On Straw's Hard, I'd end the last kiai at 01:26:713 for consistency, even though it's a small change.
- "+" difficulty names aren't used much anymore, so I'd rename Rucker's Hard+ to Rucker's Insane and then change Insane to Extra or something else.
- Make sure to check this:

ccbp wrote:

tamai instead of kamai in tags
[Insane]
- HP Drain -1 or 2, please, it's very hard to play for HP Drain 8.

[Straw's Hard]
00:25:495 (3) - A bit more readable to do it like this.

[Normal]
00:50:995 (2) - New combo for the start of the new measure.

[Easy]
00:35:245 (1) - This note is missing a new combo, and it makes sense to add one. I'd also add a new combo to the note after it for the new measure.
00:50:620 (1) - ^
01:14:620 (4) - Much better to line it up with the end of the previous (4).

Most of it is fine! Just let me know after fixes.
all fixed & updated > <
thank you~SG :)
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Everything looks good. Nice map and song! (if you click the image, it might lead to another image)
bakabaka
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Thank you very much! SapphireGhost !!
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Gratz bakax2 >w</
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yeah ~ :)
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":3
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No_Gu wrote:

yeah~~
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哇congrats!
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Gratz! awesome map!
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thx \:3/
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