let's have a mod

[Easy]
quite ingenious use of claps
01:06:230 - why delay the break?
01:18:830 (1) - i think a finish is better than whistle?
01:28:430 (1,2) - finish at start of sliders?
01:41:630 (2) - remove whistle?

Pretty nice diff!

[Normal]
AR5 please!!!
01:18:830 (1) - finish at start
01:18:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - reusing rhythm, a bit lazy perhaps? and the rhythm doesn't particular work for this section either
01:31:630 (1) - finish at start
01:57:230 (1) - i suggest placing a note here followed by the spinner

[Another]
too hard for me to really find anything lol
00:40:730 (2) - curve it so that it doesn't touch (1), aesthetic purpose
01:18:430 (4,5,1) - spacing
02:02:030 - place a note here and delay the spinner a tiny bit?

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And a small update to my diff, flow fix http://puu.sh/Pbwu

done~ update :3

thank you !

Work AHO, song and map are <3

<33

- you may need a longer lead-in time.

[Another]
01:31:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the smaller spacing in the first (4,5,6) looks odd: while the music is becoming softer it's reasonable to reduce the spacing, but you didn't do so in 01:34:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - so you can consider this one:

416,64,91930,1,2
416,64,92030,1,2
256,352,92430,1,0
320,96,92730,1,2
320,96,92830,1,2
112,336,93230,5,0
224,96,93530,1,2
224,96,93630,1,2
0,256,94030,1,0
128,48,94330,1,2
128,48,94430,1,2

which the jump gradually reduces, with a relatively less-random shape.
02:02:030 (1) - consider to make this spinner gradually softer?

[Hyper]
- there isn't S:C1 custom hitsound in the song file, make sure this is what you intended.
01:15:430 (6) - clap here as a reguar beating
01:16:830 (3) - ^
01:17:630 (2) - ^

[Easy]
00:40:430 (3,4,1) - to make stuffs more clear, I'll suggest you to change the shape of (3) so that it does not cover the beginning of (1). One of the approach is to reflect (1,3) so that the slider point outwards instead of pointing inwards like now.
00:56:830 - maybe you'll need slidertick clapping?
00:58:030 (1) - ^
01:04:030 (1) - this is an easy...so avoid that tilting if possible.

[Taiko]
00:25:430 - the spinner should only last 1/2 beat referring to the music... but such short spinner plays badly.
00:41:030 - the higher piano note starts at the 3rd tick so dkk... doesn't sound right. try ddkdddkkddk
00:47:430 - ^
00:53:230 - no thanks, there isn't 1/6 in the music
01:02:830 - try not to use pattern that is 3 in a group in a 1/4 based music
01:05:730 - delete referring to the music
01:10:630 - same as 01:02
01:17:830 - same as 00:53
01:30:030 - same as 01:02
01:31:630 - to contrast with coming kk use d here

The phrasing is somehow free-styled but it's still controlled under the frame of the music. Some pattern fit the music somehow, but more of them has a over-complicated pattern, and the oxxoxxoxxoxx really don't fit the music at all.

毀滅世界 不堪入目

wmfchris wrote:

[Hyper]
- there isn't S:C1 custom hitsound in the song file, make sure this is what you intended. no it's not lol, changed all to S default
01:15:430 (6) - clap here as a reguar beating sure, and fixed other places
01:16:830 (3) - ^
01:17:630 (2) - ^ except these two: it's like a transition

Updated: http://puu.sh/Q5fe

Thanks for modding!

wmfchris wrote:

- you may need a longer lead-in time.

[Another]
01:31:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the smaller spacing in the first (4,5,6) looks odd: while the music is becoming softer it's reasonable to reduce the spacing, but you didn't do so in 01:34:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - so you can consider this one:

416,64,91930,1,2
416,64,92030,1,2
256,352,92430,1,0
320,96,92730,1,2
320,96,92830,1,2
112,336,93230,5,0
224,96,93530,1,2
224,96,93630,1,2
0,256,94030,1,0
128,48,94330,1,2
128,48,94430,1,2

which the jump gradually reduces, with a relatively less-random shape.嗯 这里的间距按照你给的用了w
02:02:030 (1) - consider to make this spinner gradually softer? 是渐轻的意思么? 改了w

[Hyper]
- there isn't S:C1 custom hitsound in the song file, make sure this is what you intended.
01:15:430 (6) - clap here as a reguar beating
01:16:830 (3) - ^
01:17:630 (2) - ^

[Easy]
00:40:430 (3,4,1) - to make stuffs more clear, I'll suggest you to change the shape of (3) so that it does not cover the beginning of (1). One of the approach is to reflect (1,3) so that the slider point outwards instead of pointing inwards like now. 这个...感觉还好吧..而且很美观 不是很想改 抱歉T T
00:56:830 - maybe you'll need slidertick clapping? 嗯嗯 改好了
00:58:030 (1) - ^ 嗯 这里也改了
01:04:030 (1) - this is an easy...so avoid that tilting if possible. 这....这个完全玩不出会误导新手呀..Orz 而且很合曲子

[Taiko]
00:25:430 - the spinner should only last 1/2 beat referring to the music... but such short spinner plays badly.
00:41:030 - the higher piano note starts at the 3rd tick so dkk... doesn't sound right. try ddkdddkkddk
00:47:430 - ^
00:53:230 - no thanks, there isn't 1/6 in the music
01:02:830 - try not to use pattern that is 3 in a group in a 1/4 based music
01:05:730 - delete referring to the music
01:10:630 - same as 01:02
01:17:830 - same as 00:53
01:30:030 - same as 01:02
01:31:630 - to contrast with coming kk use d here

The phrasing is somehow free-styled but it's still controlled under the frame of the music. Some pattern fit the music somehow, but more of them has a over-complicated pattern, and the oxxoxxoxxoxx really don't fit the music at all.

毀滅世界 不堪入目 哼哼

超感谢!mod! 坐等太鼓回复>~<b

wmfchris wrote:

- you may need a longer lead-in time.

[Another]
01:31:630 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the smaller spacing in the first (4,5,6) looks odd: while the music is becoming softer it's reasonable to reduce the spacing, but you didn't do so in 01:34:830 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - so you can consider this one:

416,64,91930,1,2
416,64,92030,1,2
256,352,92430,1,0
320,96,92730,1,2
320,96,92830,1,2
112,336,93230,5,0
224,96,93530,1,2
224,96,93630,1,2
0,256,94030,1,0
128,48,94330,1,2
128,48,94430,1,2

which the jump gradually reduces, with a relatively less-random shape.
02:02:030 (1) - consider to make this spinner gradually softer?

[Hyper]
- there isn't S:C1 custom hitsound in the song file, make sure this is what you intended.
01:15:430 (6) - clap here as a reguar beating
01:16:830 (3) - ^
01:17:630 (2) - ^

[Easy]
00:40:430 (3,4,1) - to make stuffs more clear, I'll suggest you to change the shape of (3) so that it does not cover the beginning of (1). One of the approach is to reflect (1,3) so that the slider point outwards instead of pointing inwards like now.
00:56:830 - maybe you'll need slidertick clapping?
00:58:030 (1) - ^
01:04:030 (1) - this is an easy...so avoid that tilting if possible.

[Taiko]
00:25:430 - the spinner should only last 1/2 beat referring to the music... but such short spinner plays badly.
00:41:030 - the higher piano note starts at the 3rd tick so dkk... doesn't sound right. try ddkdddkkddk
00:47:430 - ^
00:53:230 - no thanks, there isn't 1/6 in the music
01:02:830 - try not to use pattern that is 3 in a group in a 1/4 based music
01:05:730 - delete referring to the music
01:10:630 - same as 01:02
01:17:830 - same as 00:53
01:30:030 - same as 01:02
01:31:630 - to contrast with coming kk use d here

The phrasing is somehow free-styled but it's still controlled under the frame of the music. Some pattern fit the music somehow, but more of them has a over-complicated pattern, and the oxxoxxoxxoxx really don't fit the music at all.

毀滅世界 不堪入目

於是我又來毀滅世界了
世界を救うのはヒーローじゃない――オタクだ。
坐等阿宅（shen chu）出現
Waiting for our first hero（otaku）

[Another]
02:02:030 - Also add a note here like the duplet done in 02:00:730 - 02:01:130 - etc?

[Hyper]
01:16:830 - The transition starts 01:17:230 - while the drums are regular throughout the section just clap here at least?

wmfchris wrote:

[Hyper]
01:16:830 - The transition starts 01:17:230 - while the drums are regular throughout the section just clap here at least? allright

AHO~ can you please add a clap here 01:16:830 (3) ? since this is just a small fix i won't be uploading then

Thanks!

All done!

thx again , wmf~ <3

Go :3

alright, looks fine now.

rebubble ._...................

Cuvelia... o.o

[General]

-> Set preview time on all diffs to PreviewTime: 38730, currently the synth you're trying to use as preview time comes out a bit late...
-> Hmm, Hyper doesn't use kiai time? (I guess this is intentional though, leaving as is)

[Easy]

-> Why the difficulty name isn't set to "Beginner"? Fits the IIDX naming more this way imo (:

1. 00:58:030 (1) - Move the endpoint to ~x:256 y:37, currently the slider's second half really looks uneven...
2. 01:26:830 (3) - Why whistle here? I can clearly hear a cymbal from the song (you can try using whistle + finish here though)
3. 01:31:630 (1) - Normal hitfinish definitely fits more here imo... Especially with the song's splashing sound (:
4. 01:44:030 (4) - Again, use whistle + finish here? (listen to the piano carefully)
5. 01:57:230 (1,3) - It's not stacked perfectly... Usually it doesn't really matter but this one is still visible in play mode (yes, when it's on 01:57:360 the imperfect stack is very visible)
6. 02:01:630 (6,1) - I'd place these two in ~x:391 y:362 to avoid clustering, but it's your call though~

[Normal]

1. 00:50:630 (5) - Missing whistle on slider's start here?
2. 01:02:830 (5) - orz, I personally disliked this slider's shape... You could use something much tidier imo:
   

   383,229,62830,2,0,B|322:261|260:218|260:218|193:176|135:206,1,260

3. 01:25:830 (2) - Again here, where's the whistle on slider's start and end...
4. 02:02:030 (1) - The music continues here, add circle here and start spinner 1/4 after? (as in Easy)

[Hyper]

1. 00:20:430 (3) - Put whistle in (4) instead? Follows the synth's progression better imo...
2. 00:21:430 (1) - Same here, whistle on slider's end (to support the previous rhythm) won't hurt imo (:
3. 01:05:530 (1) - I prefer clap on both slider's start and end here, delivers more power I think :3
4. 01:23:830 (1) - Maybe put in ~x:46 y:113 and CTRL+R? (yep, if you CTRL+R you need to put this a bit higher because (4,5,6)'s stack)

[Another]

1. 00:39:630 (3,4,5,6) - Try to make their spacing gradually increase? Like this:
   

   336,272,39630,2,0,B|320:336,1,47.5
   418,236,39830,2,0,B|474:289,1,47.5,2|0
   413,140,40030,2,0,B|477:92,1,47.5,0|0
   328,72,40230,2,0,B|328:8,1,47.5,2|0

2. 00:58:030 (1,2,3) - Move downward a bit to avoid overlap with your red (3)?
3. 01:48:030 (2) - Hmm, I prefer if this is CTRL+R'ed, having this pointing at a same direction with (4) doesn't look really fancy imo...
4. 02:02:230 (1) - Why don't you start this 1/4 after last note, as other diffs did? Fits the music much more this way~

Taiko sounds fine~

Niva wrote:

Cuvelia... o.o 0.0?

[General]

-> Set preview time on all diffs to PreviewTime: 38730, currently the synth you're trying to use as preview time comes out a bit late... okay ._.
-> Hmm, Hyper doesn't use kiai time? (I guess this is intentional though, leaving as is) but this guest diff mapper said he didnt want to add in before

[Easy]

-> Why the difficulty name isn't set to "Beginner"? Fits the IIDX naming more this way imo (: oh yes , done~

1. 00:58:030 (1) - Move the endpoint to ~x:256 y:37, currently the slider's second half really looks uneven... okay ._.
2. 01:26:830 (3) - Why whistle here? I can clearly hear a cymbal from the song (you can try using whistle + finish here though) done
3. 01:31:630 (1) - Normal hitfinish definitely fits more here imo... Especially with the song's splashing sound (: hm , no sorry , normal is a bit noisy on there imo
4. 01:44:030 (4) - Again, use whistle + finish here? (listen to the piano carefully) k
5. 01:57:230 (1,3) - It's not stacked perfectly... Usually it doesn't really matter but this one is still visible in play mode (yes, when it's on 01:57:360 the imperfect stack is very visible) ._.; okay
6. 02:01:630 (6,1) - I'd place these two in ~x:391 y:362 to avoid clustering, but it's your call though~

no sorry

[Normal]

1. 00:50:630 (5) - Missing whistle on slider's start here? added
2. 01:02:830 (5) - orz, I personally disliked this slider's shape... You could use something much tidier imo: okay ._.
   

   383,229,62830,2,0,B|322:261|260:218|260:218|193:176|135:206,1,260

3. 01:25:830 (2) - Again here, where's the whistle on slider's start and end... ^
4. 02:02:030 (1) - The music continues here, add circle here and start spinner 1/4 after? (as in Easy) done

[Hyper]

1. 00:20:430 (3) - Put whistle in (4) instead? Follows the synth's progression better imo...
2. 00:21:430 (1) - Same here, whistle on slider's end (to support the previous rhythm) won't hurt imo (:
3. 01:05:530 (1) - I prefer clap on both slider's start and end here, delivers more power I think :3
4. 01:23:830 (1) - Maybe put in ~x:46 y:113 and CTRL+R? (yep, if you CTRL+R you need to put this a bit higher because (4,5,6)'s stack)

[Another]

1. 00:39:630 (3,4,5,6) - Try to make their spacing gradually increase? Like this: okay..
   

   336,272,39630,2,0,B|320:336,1,47.5
   418,236,39830,2,0,B|474:289,1,47.5,2|0
   413,140,40030,2,0,B|477:92,1,47.5,0|0
   328,72,40230,2,0,B|328:8,1,47.5,2|0

2. 00:58:030 (1,2,3) - Move downward a bit to avoid overlap with your red (3)? k
3. 01:48:030 (2) - Hmm, I prefer if this is CTRL+R'ed, having this pointing at a same direction with (4) doesn't look really fancy imo... no sorry , its fine for me w
4. 02:02:230 (1) - Why don't you start this 1/4 after last note, as other diffs did? Fits the music much more this way~ done~

Taiko sounds fine~ :3

thx for check , waittng yong's reply~

Niva wrote:

[Hyper]

1. 00:20:430 (3) - Put whistle in (4) instead? Follows the synth's progression better imo... ok
2. 00:21:430 (1) - Same here, whistle on slider's end (to support the previous rhythm) won't hurt imo (: ok
3. 01:05:530 (1) - I prefer clap on both slider's start and end here, delivers more power I think :3 hmm, it's bit too loud to my liking, so nope
4. 01:23:830 (1) - Maybe put in ~x:46 y:113 and CTRL+R? (yep, if you CTRL+R you need to put this a bit higher because (4,5,6)'s stack) i see, but i'm trying to be consistent with spacing so no stacking here~

http://puu.sh/YdQk
Thanks for modding!

All is fine now, but because my previous mod post is big enough I'm not really confident to instantly rank it... Sorry AngelHoney >_<

Rebubbled ~

...actually I want to rank it though, we already have Ashemu + Rche + Levaslater ranked >_<

Orz....okay thankyou again Niva T T

plz add Saisei in the tags
Saisei is this song's alias

(mapper self-pop to update tags)

Rebubbled ~

Attack
RANKED

At last someone mapped this.

wow

gratz~~

\: D/

\:D/

congrats!

nice

good

omg dem uber fast streams. Gratz!

gratz!

.......Oh?

I recall this a couple of months back..congratulations on the ranking.

AngelHoney wrote:

<33

Awesome as always w

Congrats !!

瞎了 AHO你怎麼也用這頭像了
anyway~congratz~

Really nice streams you got here.
Not really a fan of the 1/6 though, as it was overkill and very unexpected.

9/10, since that was my only problem with the map. Good jumps!

Tenkuu<3